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MarcyMoo 06-18-2009 03:20 AM

Love Is Dangerous - Sa13+
 
I couldn't help but submit another story! I just got another idea and knew I had to submit it, so here it is. It's kind of like A Cinderella Story, but with a few tweaks here and there. Hope you enjoy it.

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CHARACTER OWNAGE: (In order of appearance)
Rose Weasley ; Albus Severus Potter ; The Fat Lady, Scorpius Malfoy ; Lily Luna Potter ; Hugo Weasley ; George Weasley ; Ron Weasley ; Hermione Weasley (Granger) ; Harry Potter ; Ginny Potter (Weasley) ; Molly Weasley
- J.K. Rowling

Professor Quinn ; Elizabeth Carter ; Jen, Derek Turner ; Kelly Zambini ; Lloyd Goyle ; Herald Crabbe ; Poppy Parkinson ; Caretaker Xander ; Professor Linden ; Andrew ; Catalin ; Jenn ; Cameron Spinalie
- ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫

PLOT - ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫

STORY BANNER: Anna Banana - You did an awesome job Anna!
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I know some people hate having to look through tons of comments for new chapters (i know i do) so here are the links to each chapter!
Chapter 1--Chapter 2--Chapter 3--Chapter 4--Chapter 5--Chapter 6--Chapter 7--Chapter 8
Chapter 9--Chapter 10--Chapter 11--Chapter 12--Chapter 13--Chapter 14--Chapter 15--Chapter 16
Chapter 17--Chapter 18--Chapter 19--Chapter 20--Chapter 21--Chapter 22--Chapter 23--Chapter 24
Chapter 25--

Love Is Dangerous

Chapter 1:
Young Love Stinks


Rose Weasley sat in Transfiguration doodling in her notebook, completely oblivious to what the professor was saying. The lined paper was covered in hearts, a few with writing in it. Some said D.T + R.W, or Mrs. Derek Turner.

Rose and Derek had been dating since their fifth year, and Rose really thought she had found the one, the one for her. “Ms. Weasley? Ms. Weasley! Kindly pay attention to the class. You can doodle how much you love Mr. Turner later.” Professor Quinn said turning back to the chalkboard. Rose blushed, her cheeks matching the color of her hair. “Sorry professor.” She replied closing her notebook. She was glad that Derek wasn’t in the same class as her. He was seven floors below her in Potions.

The bell rang ending the day of classes. Rose grabbed her things, putting them away in her bag. She slung the bag onto her shoulder and left the room for the Gryffindor Common Room. As she walked down the corridor her cousin Albus came out of an empty classroom. Rose smiled at him and asked, “Hey Al. Had a good day?” Albus returned the smile. “Yeah, it was pretty good. Glad the weekend is starting.” He replied sighing. His day hadn’t been that great. He had just finished making a fool of himself in front of Elizabeth Carter.

Rose nodded. “Yeah me too. Finally get to spend time with Derek.”

“Must be hard to find time together. Since he’s in Ravenclaw and all. What’s worse is that it’s N.E.W.T year.”

Rose nodded again, but smiled. “We made time in our busy study schedule for a date tonight.” They arrived outside the Fat Lady’s portrait and Al gave the password before replying. “Oh that’s nice.” Rose and Albus walked through the portrait hole into the cheery common room. They said goodbye and went off towards their own dormitory.

Rose set her bag down next to her bed and flung her wardrobe open. She sorted through her closet, looking for a dress to wear. She pulled a green one out and put it on with black capri tights that went up to her knees. She found matching heels and pinned her hair up.

She looked herself over in the mirror and grabbed her purse, leaving the dorm just as one of her roommates came in. “Going somewhere Rose?” She asked smiling. “Hey Jen, got a date with Derek.” Rose replied. “Well have fun then.”

Rose closed the dorm door and went down to the entrance hall to wait for Derek. He arrived a few minutes later, a small smile on his face. He looked at Rose and said, “You look nice.” Rose smiled back and twirled around, showing her dress off. “Why thank you. Shall we get going? My treat tonight.” She asked holding her purse up. Derek nodded simply and took Rose’s hand.

They walked to Hogsmeade, talking about how their day had been and how they hated having so much homework. Finally they arrived at the little village, making their way over to the new restaurant, Madam Florres’s Kitchen.

The little house elf seated them, giving them their menus. Through the entire evening Rose felt that Derek was a little distant from her, not his normal talkative self. She decided to let it pass, he would probably tell her later, she thought smiling at Derek.


•••


“I had a good time Derek.” Rose said as the two arrived outside the portrait hole. Derek nodded and turned ready to leave, but Rose grabbed his wrist, forcing him to look at her. “Derek what’s going on with you?” She searched his hazel with her brown ones. They were the only trait that she had inherited from her mother.

Derek sighed taking Roses hands in his. “Rose, I…I don’t know this – uh – relationship.” He began, unsure on how to say what he was trying to say. “Rose I love you, but I can't…we can’t go out anymore.” Derek finished, letting go of Roses hands.

Her brown eyes were swimming with tears that Rose couldn’t keep them from sliding down her face. Derek was breaking up her? She looked at him, furious and yelled, “Derek you don’t tell a girl you love her and then dump her!” Derek shrugged and walked off to his own common room.

Rose stood there in the empty corridor, tears streaming down her face. The Fat Lady looked down at the young, crying, red head. She clicked her tongue and hiccupped. “Young love,” Hiccup. “So…sp dangerous.” Another hiccup. Rose turned to face the painting. “Oh shut up you drunk old hag!” She then began running, where? She didn’t know, just as long as she was far from that horrid spot.

She ended up outside, by the lake. Rose sat down by the edge of the water, taking her shoes off. New tear formed and fell down her cheeks. ‘This can’t get any worse!’ She thought sobbing.


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Well there you go! What do you think? I need FIVE people to comment for the next chapter! Five DIFFERENT people!

Thanks,
Marcy

JeshieRAWR 06-22-2009 02:58 AM

Yeah! Another story by the amazing Marcy! :woot:
That was an amazing chapter!
That was so mean of Derek!
Waiting for next chapter!
~Jess

PotterGirl714 06-22-2009 04:04 AM

That is awesome!! Waiting for next chapter.

Alice Granger 06-22-2009 06:29 PM

New Reader.
This is great can't wait for more PAMS
Ally :D

MarcyMoo 06-23-2009 03:43 AM

Replies To Comment!
 
Thanks to all of you who like my story so far. I wish it would have been up sooner though, I might have gotten a chance to be in the Golden Goblins. :lmao: Oh and I've decided to forget the comment thing. And if you would like me to PM you when I put up a new chapter please tell me. By the way, I started the whole PM thing when I was writing The Unknown Writer!
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Hermione<3Ron
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Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron (Post 8327067)
Yeah! Another story by the amazing Marcy! :woot:
That was an amazing chapter!
That was so mean of Derek!
Waiting for next chapter!
~Jess

Jess! Thanks so much. It was mean of Derek, but you'll understand why he did it later on. Next chapter will be up soon!

~Marcy Moo

PotterGirl714
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Originally Posted by PotterGirl714 (Post 8327337)
That is awesome!! Waiting for next chapter.

A short, yet, sweet comment. Thank you. And the next chapter will be up soon, promise!

~Marcy Moo

Alice Granger
Quote:

Originally Posted by Alice Granger (Post 8329274)
New Reader.
This is great can't wait for more PAMS
Ally :D

Welcome Ally! To my FF and to SS. Hope you continue reading my story.

~Marcy Moo
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Thank you to all the sweet comments, and I am about to post the next chapter after I submit this.

MarcyMoo 06-23-2009 03:49 AM

New Chapter!
 
Ok here's the next chapter! Hope you like it! And.....

ONLY 22 DAYS TILL HBP COMES OUT IN T HEATHERS! (In the US)

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Chapter 2
The Astronomy Tower


Scorpius left the Transfiguration classroom, chuckling at what Professor Quinn had said the Rose. She was such a teenage girl, doodling hearts in her notebook, thinking about her boyfriend 24/7, so like a girl. He arrived in the Slytherin Common Room and sat down on a coach, relaxing at the thought of a weekend. It was only two weeks into the term and they had already been loaded with homework from every class!

As Scorpius relaxed on the couch by the fire, his best friend Kelly Zambini came down from the girl’s dormitory. Unlike most of the girls in school, Kelly was totally different. She was more of a tom boy, growing up with three older brothers. Kelly noticed her friend sitting on the coach and walked over to him. “If I see one more shade of pink eye shadow, I’m going to puke my eye lids off.” Kelly said sitting down next to the bleach blond.

“Poppy and her friends trying to give you a make over again?” Scorpius asked referring to Poppy Parkinson. Yup, Pansy Parkinson’s daughter. Poppy’s father had died a ‘mysterious’ death when she was only three, so she went under her mothers maiden name.

“Yeah, and I was so close to hexing her. So CLOSE!” Kelly said whining. “I hate having to share a room with those ego sized freaks.” She added glaring at in the direction of her dorm. “So how was your day?” Kelly asked after a period of silence. “Fine, Weasley was yelled at for being all lovey dovey about Turner in Transfiguration.” Scorpius replied laughing.

The two friends joked about all the couples in their year for a while, before Scorpius looked at the clock. “How about we go down to eat dinner? I have to go the Astronomy Tower after.” He said getting up and picking his bag up. Kelly agreed and they headed upstairs to the Great Hall. They sat down at the Slytherin Table and were soon joined by Lloyd Goyle and Herald Crabbe.

“Where have you two been?” Kelly asked taking a bite from her burger. “Just gave Weasley’s younger brother a swirly.” Lloyd replied chuckling. Herald simply nodded his head, stuffing chicken wing after chicken wing into his mouth. ‘It’s amazing that he doesn’t choke with all that food in his big mouth.’ Kelly thought staring at Herald, a disgusted look on her face.

They all talked about their day, but were interrupted when Poppy arrived and sat down next to Scorpius, staring lovingly at him. “Hey Scorpius.” She said all giggly. Scorpius rolled his steel gray eyes and replied. “Hey Poppy.” This caused even more giggled to erupt from Poppy. “So I was wondering if you wanted to go for a walk around the lake with me.” She said pouting her pug-like face. Scorpius looked at an imaginary watch on his wrist and grabbed his bag. “Uh look at the time! I need to go to-uh-the place I need to go to. Maybe some other time Poppy.” Scorpius said rushing out the Great Hall.

He rushed upstairs to the Astronomy Tower, looking back to make sure Poppy and her group of girl friends weren’t following him. He arrived in the high tower and breathed in and out heavily. He set his things down and began doing his star chart. After and hour or so of boring work, Scorpius turned the head of the telescope down towards the lake. He saw a figure sitting at the edge. It was a girl, her hair tied up and she was wearing a lovely outfit.

Scorpius looked around him and grabbed some parchment he wrote down a message and folded it up into a air plane. He set a charm and sent of towards the girl.

JeshieRAWR 06-23-2009 03:57 AM

hahahaha! That was funny!:rotfl:
I loved how Poppy is like Pansy!
She's all over Scorpius! :xd:
Great Job! I loved it!:woot:
I bet it was Rose who Scorpius saw.
Maybe.... hmmm.
I wonder what he wrote to whoever it was....
Can't wait for the next chapter!
PAMS!!!
~Jess


Please :read!: this story and REVIEW!

PotterGirl714 06-23-2009 04:12 AM

That is awesome!!! Poppy is like pansy haha! WOnder what he wrote. Love it cant wait for next chapter!!

Alice Granger 06-23-2009 03:05 PM

poppy and pansy are so a like. Oh i want to know what he wrote in that note, I hope you post soon.
PAMS
Ally :D

Winter Dreams 06-24-2009 10:10 AM

Hey Marcy Moo! xD I'm here, like I said I would be. Well I said so in Confusion, anyways. :D And I love this story, like, so much! :) Can't wait for more. :glomp:

MarcyMoo 06-25-2009 08:38 PM

Comments!
 
Hey everyone! OMG! My story is going so well and I love all of you who are commenting! :loved: So here are my replies to your lovely comments.

Marcy Moo
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Hermione<3Ron (Love Is In The Air)
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Originally Posted by Jess (Post 8331226)

hahahaha! That was funny!:rotfl:
I loved how Poppy is like Pansy!
She's all over Scorpius! :xd:
Great Job! I loved it!:woot:
I bet it was Rose who Scorpius saw.
Maybe.... hmmm.
I wonder what he wrote to whoever it was....
Can't wait for the next chapter!
PAMS!!!
~Jess


Please :read!: this story andREVIEW!

I choose the name Poppy because it's a type of flower just like Pansy! And I choose Poppy because all the other flower names were to weird for a girl like Poppy. Thanks a lot Jess, you are my official number one fan! :loved:

Marcy Moo
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PotterGirl714
Quote:

Originally Posted by PotterGirl714 (Post 8331259)
That is awesome!!! Poppy is like pansy haha! WOnder what he wrote. Love it cant wait for next chapter!!

Thank you PotterGirl. I planned on having a Poppy in my original story but I never got the chance to add her in.

Marcy Moo
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Alice Granger
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Originally Posted by Ally (Post 8332515)
poppy and pansy are so a like. Oh i want to know what he wrote in that note, I hope you post soon.
PAMS
Ally :D

Hey Ally, hows it going? You'll find out out what Scorpius said in the next chapter. I'm sure all of you guys will think it's amusing. :shifty:

Marcy Moo
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Lily Lupin (Confusion & The Adventures of the Marauders)
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Originally Posted by Ana (Post 8335560)
Hey Marcy Moo! xD I'm here, like I said I would be. Well I said so in Confusion, anyways. :D And I love this story, like, so much! :) Can't wait for more. :glomp:

ANA!!! :glomp: Your here like you said you would! So.....

WELCOME TO LOVE IS DANGEROUS!
I am Marcy (hermione9495), the author of this wonderful story! Enjoy, comment, and keep reading!


Thank you so much Ana, you are a wonderful writer too.

Marcy Moo
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Well there are the comments! I will post the next chapter after I reply to the comments in LWH.

19 DAYS TILL HBP COMES OUT! :woot:


Marcy Moo

MarcyMoo 06-25-2009 09:19 PM

New Chapter!
 
Here's the next chapter! Oh and like my banner! Anna Banana made it! She is a wonderful graphic maker!

[CENTER]Made By: Anna Banana

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Chapter 3:
Smarty Girl & Mr. PB


Rose sat near the lake, tears no longer spilling down her face. No the tears had been replaced with anger. How could he do that to me, she thought, how can he tell me his loves me and then just dump me?! Rose was ready to go back to the common room when she felt something poke her back. “OW!” She yelled snatching the plane. She opened it up and read it.

Hi.

Ok, this is weird, Rose thought looking around to see if she could find the sender. No one else but Rose was outside. She folded the piece of paper up and rushed upstairs to the common room. She barged into the girl’s dormitory and ran over to her bed. She took out a quill and began writing.

Ok, who are you and why are you writing to me?!

Rose took out her wand and tapped the paper. It folded itself into the air plane and flew out the window just as Lily entered the room. Rose looked at her and hid her wand. “Rose is something wrong?” Lily asked noticing her cousins red eyes and wet cheeks. “Uh no. Nothings wrong.” Rose said sitting down on her bed. Lily frowned and sat down on the bed next to Rose’s. “Really, because I heard the Derek dumped you.”

“Who told you that?!” Rose demanded. “The Fat Drunk Lady.” Lily replied simply. “So is it true.” She asked looking at Rose. Rose leaned onto her pillow and nodded, a new set of tears flooding her brown eyes. “He…told he loved me and just….” But before she could finish she started bawling her eyes out. Lily got up from her seat and moved over to Rose, putting an arm around her and comforting her, saying things like:

“It’s ok Rosie. It’ll be ok”

“Derek’s a scum bag, he has clue what he’s missing out on.”

“Want me to hex him?”

Rose laughed at the last remark and stood up, walking over to the bathroom. “Thanks Lil.” She said washing her face. She changed into her pajamas and sat back down on her bed next to Lily. “I’ll see you tomorrow; I need to study for a huge Transfiguration test.” She said standing up. “You got any butter beer? I’ll need it to stay up.” Rose nodded. “In my wardrobe; under my extra robes.” Lily walked over to the wardrobe and took two butter beers, thanked Rose, and left for her own dorm room.

•••

Scorpius waited in the Astronomy Tower, passing back and forth, back and forth, waiting for the mystery girl to reply. Sure his greeting had been rather short, but she had rushed off, maybe to get a quill so she could reply. He heard a swoosh from outside the window and turned to look at it, hoping to see a paper air plane.

Scorpius turned and saw what he was hoping to see. He took the air plane and opened it. He laughed slightly, expecting the reply. ‘Of course.’ He thought picking up his quill, his Astronomy homework long forgotten. He wrote a reply and tapped the paper, sending it off.

•••

Rose looked at the window as the plane flew in and landed on her drawer. She picked it up soundlessly and unfolded it.

I’ll go by Mr. PB so we don’t give our identities away. And I saw you by the lake. You looked like you were crying. Why?

Mr. PB


Rose:

Ok, I guess I’ll be Smarty Girl.
I was crying because, well, my boyfriend broke up with me.
But I don’t think you would understand that.

Smarty Girl


Scorpius:

Oh, I’m sorry to hear that.
And I’ve had my heart broken by girls before. Though I except it’s different when a guy breaks up with you.

Mr. PB


The conversation went on for hours until Scorpius was caught upstairs by the care taker. He didn’t get a chance to send Smarty Girl and reply, so Rose sat in her bed waiting till four in the morning for Mr. PB to reply.

JeshieRAWR 06-26-2009 02:13 AM

Yes! I'm so happy I get to be your #1 fan! :woot:
Anyways,:xd: I thought it was great!
I see you used the same names like in your last story.
At least I won't get confused!
By the way how'd you get the name Mr. P.B?
It reminds me of a peanut butter sandwich.:rotfl:
I just can't believe she waits until 4 in the morning, for a reply from him. haha :xd:
It was amazing!
PAMS! PLEASE!
~Jess

Winter Dreams 06-26-2009 05:46 AM

:lol: P.B and Smarty Girl? xD Fantastic chapter, Marcy. I luff your writing, and I'm glad you like reading my Fics. :loved:

Shanners 06-26-2009 06:39 PM

Marcyyyyyy!
hayyarr.
i ish a new reader.
and i luffs it :)


smarty girl and mr pb. sounds like spys. :)

MarcyMoo 06-27-2009 10:23 PM

Comments!
 
Where are all my readers? Have you.....abandoned me again! :hairpull: *gasp* Anyways.....here are my replies to those of you who actually comment. :loved: :woot:
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Hermione<3Ron
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Originally Posted by Jess (Post 8341199)
Yes! I'm so happy I get to be your #1 fan! :woot:
Anyways,:xd: I thought it was great!
I see you used the same names like in your last story.
At least I won't get confused!
By the way how'd you get the name Mr. P.B?
It reminds me of a peanut butter sandwich.:rotfl:
I just can't believe she waits until 4 in the morning, for a reply from him. haha :xd:
It was amazing!
PAMS! PLEASE!
~Jess

Yup your my offical number one fan! And no one is going to take that position! I swear! :lol: Glad your not confused, I thought it would be nice to have a few things from The Unknown Writer here and there. P.B stands for Pureblood even thought its one word. I love PBJ! My favorite! :loved: I just picked a random time really.

Marcy Moo
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Lily Lupin
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Originally Posted by Ana (Post 8341896)
:lol: P.B and Smarty Girl? xD Fantastic chapter, Marcy. I luff your writing, and I'm glad you like reading my Fics. :loved:

You got a problem with P.B and Smarty Girl? :lmao: Thanks so much Ana, I luff your writing too, it's much better than mine! I don't like reading your FF's I LOVE reading them! :lol:

Marcy Moo
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midget ♥
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Originally Posted by Shannon (Post 8343383)
Marcyyyyyy!
hayyarr.
i ish a new reader.
and i luffs it :)


smarty girl and mr pb. sounds like spys. :)

Shannonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!
Hey!! You need the official welcome!

WELCOME TO LOVE IS DANGEROUS!
I am Marcy (hermione9495), the author of this wonderful stories!


Now that that's done, thank you. I love reading your FF too, it's so interesting :loved:. Any idea when your going to post that FF on Coped Separation?

Marcy Moo
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Don't know when the next chapter is going to be posted, but hopefully this week. I'm typing it up, but its not done yet.

Winter Dreams 06-27-2009 10:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hermione9495 (Post 8347254)
Lily Lupin


You got a problem with P.B and Smarty Girl? :lmao: Thanks so much Ana, I luff your writing too, it's much better than mine! I don't like reading your FF's I LOVE reading them! :lol:

Marcy Moo
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Don't know when the next chapter is going to be posted, but hopefully this week. I'm typing it up, but its not done yet.

No... :lol: Aw, thanks! But I don't think it's better than yours, just different. ^_^ :loved: I love reading yours, too. :glomp:

MarcyMoo 06-27-2009 10:46 PM

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Originally Posted by Lily Lupin (Post 8347303)
No... :lol: Aw, thanks! But I don't think it's better than yours, just different. ^_^ :loved: I love reading yours, too. :glomp:

Aww....thanks! :glomp: :loved:

JeshieRAWR 06-27-2009 11:43 PM

Hermione<3Ron


Yup your my offical number one fan! And no one is going to take that position! I swear! :lol: Glad your not confused, I thought it would be nice to have a few things from The Unknown Writer here and there. P.B stands for Pureblood even thought its one word. I love PBJ! My favorite! :loved: I just picked a random time really.

Marcy Moo

Yeah!!
Ohh so that's what it means! haha ohhh lol:rotfl:
I know me too! I love PB&J!
:) Jess

MarcyMoo 06-28-2009 04:53 AM

:lol: That's ok Jess, we all have our blond moments. I know I have mine almost everyday....maybe its because of my new blonde highlights......<_<

Shanners 06-28-2009 01:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hermione9495 (Post 8347254)
midget ♥


Shannonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!
Hey!! You need the official welcome!

WELCOME TO LOVE IS DANGEROUS!
I am Marcy (hermione9495), the author of this wonderful stories!


Now that that's done, thank you. I love reading your FF too, it's so interesting :loved:. Any idea when your going to post that FF on Coped Separation?

Marcy Moo
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Don't know when the next chapter is going to be posted, but hopefully this week. I'm typing it up, but its not done yet.

official welcome? awwww :)
thanks :)
me and raagavi are trying to get a couple of chapters done each first. and we both have exams and stuff...

Alice Granger 06-28-2009 04:04 PM

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Originally Posted by hermione9495 (Post 8340406)

Hey Ally, hows it going?

Hey !!!!, I'm fine and you ?
Great Post, i loved it, i really can't wait for more, Great post. Write more and i'll give this nice Browny i made :flowers: and flower :lol:

PAMS
Ally :D

MarcyMoo 06-28-2009 05:29 PM

Shannon
Quote:

Originally Posted by midget ♥ (Post 8349141)
official welcome? awwww :)
thanks :)
me and raagavi are trying to get a couple of chapters done each first. and we both have exams and stuff...

Thanks! I can't wait till you post the first chapter, it's going to be awesome, after all its an awesome RP! :woot:

Marcy Moo
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Ally
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Originally Posted by Alice Granger (Post 8349336)
Hey !!!!, I'm fine and you ?
Great Post, i loved it, i really can't wait for more, Great post. Write more and i'll give this nice Browny i made :flowers: and flower :lol:

PAMS
Ally :D

I'm great! Glad you posted. Don't worry he next post will be up sometime this week, maybe Wednesday or sooner. *gasp* I get a brownie? And a flower! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! !

Marcy Moo:loved:

MarcyMoo 06-29-2009 01:53 AM

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Chapter 4:
Payback Time


Scorpius woke the next morning, his arm sore from having to scrub the owlery walls, floors, runway, everything that the owls pooped on, which was……EVERYTHING! What was worse was that he had been forced to use a toothbrush. He groaned as he sat up in his bed, rubbing his arm.

As he brushed his teeth (close to gagging) he remembered that he had not sent a reply to Smarty Girl. He closed his eyes, groaning at how stupid he was. He really wanted to meet the girl yet he was to dumb not to send her a reply, even after he returned from detention.

Spitting into the sink, Scorpius decided to write the girl a reply after breakfast. She would understand, right? He took his shower and headed upstairs to the Great Hall, sitting down at the Slytherin Table next to Kelly, Lloyd, and Herald. “Morning guys.” He said placing some sausages on his plate. “Where were you? We stayed up till one waiting for you to come back from the tower.” Herald said stuffing scrambled eggs into his already full mouth.

Scorpius cut a piece of his sausage out and chewed it slowly before responding. “I….fell asleep.” He lied. He didn’t want Lloyd and Herald to know that he had met a girl, those two couldn’t keep a secret if their pointless lives depended on it. Scorpius also didn’t feel comfortable telling Kelly yet either. True she was his best friend and he would eventually tell her either way, but right now just wasn’t the best time.

His three friends went on eating, not noticing the lie. “Heard Xander gave you detention.” Kelly said buttering some toast. Scorpius nodded, placing another piece of sausage in his mouth. He looked around the table and noticed Poppy looking at him, no not looking, staring! She noticed Scorpius watching her and blushed, returning to her empty plate.

“You should have seen her last night. She kept coming over to my bed asking where you were and when you were coming back. I was so close to strangling her toothpick neck.” Kelly said demonstrating on the piece of toast she was holding. Scorpius chuckled and set his fork down, getting up, and as he reached the twin oak doors, she came running up.

“Scorpy! Wait!” Poppy yelled waving her arms frantically. Scorpius sighed and waited for Poppy to catch up. She stopped next to him, pouting her face, making her look exactly like her pug faced mother. “Where were you last night? I waited and waited and you never showed up.” She said. “None of your business Poppy.” Scorpius replied. “Oh well, there’s a Hogsmeade trip today. Everyone’s leaving in 10 minutes, wanna come with me?” Poppy asked rocking back and forth20on her heels. Scorpius rolled his eyes. ‘I might as well. Maybe she’ll leave me alone if I go’ Scorpius thought. “Sure Poppy, I’d love to go with you. Meet in the entrance hall.” He said winking at her. Poppy squealed, running back to her friends to tell them the good news.

Scorpius rolled his eyes again, making his way back to his dorms. ‘What did I just do?!’ He thought.

♥~♥


Rose sat at the Gryffindor Table, dark circles under her brown eyes. Hugo took a break from demolishing his food and looked at his older sister. “Swomtwing wong Wose? You wook weepy?” He said. Rose shook her head and poured herself a goblet of pumpkin juice. “I was just up really, really late.” She said taking a sip. She heard a squeal, almost like a pig squeal and looked around to see if she could find the owner of the sound. She saw Poppy Parkinson running to her friends, an excited expression on her pug like face. Her vision moved to the oak doors where Scorpius Malfoy stood, rolling his eyes and looking disgusted, before leaving the hall.

Rose continued sipping her juice, which miraculously woke her up quite a bit, until it was time to go to Hogsmeade. Rose had agreed early that day to go the little wizard village with Lily, Hugo, and Albus. She followed her cousins and sibling out of the Great Hall and into the Entrance Hall. She waited while the kooky old caretaker checked their permission slips.

Then finally she was on her way to her favorite thing about Hogwarts. Th[/FONT]ey arrived, stepping onto the main street of the town. “Well where to first guys?” Lily asked looking around anxiously at the stores. “How ‘bouts we go see if Uncle George is at the shop?” Rose asked heading for Weasley’s Wizard Wheezes.

A few years before even James Potter had begun Hogwarts, George had went ahead and bought Zonkos out, for the memory of his twin brother. The four walked up to the store and peered in through the glass. The store was already packed full of students, you could barely see anything. “There! I think I see him!” Albus said spotting some bright red hair deep in the store. They all rushed into the store, pushing and shoving their way to the counter. George stood behind the wooden aisle, placing some Wonderwitch Products on the shelf behind him. “Hey Uncle George.” Lily said looking at the produ cts. George turned around to face his nieces and nephews. “Oh, hey! Nice to see all of you here.” He said smiling.

“Great to see you too. You’re normal never here when we have trips.” Rose said smiling. “So got anything new?” They all asked after a while. George laughed and began showing them the new products. Rose left the shop with five Patented Daydream Charms, Lily with Patented Daydream Charms, Albus with a month supply of Skiving Snackbox, and Hugo with Shielding Hats and Peruvian Instant Darkness Powder. As they exited the shop an owl flew down near them and landed on Rose’s shoulder. “What the heck?” She mumbled taking the note from the bird. She looked at the front of the folded up paper and smiled to herself, slipping it into her pocket.

“What was that Rosie?” Albus asked raising an eyebrow. “Nothing, just a note from a professor.” Rose said. She didn’t want to tell her cousins and brother that she was talking to a guy she didn’t even know. They would probably yell at her for being dumb and maybe even tell her overprotective father and mother (though Hermione wasn’t overprotective). The other three shrugged and began walking down the street again, looking for their next stop.

They stopped outside a store to look at the window display, when Rose felt a tap on her shoulder. She turned around to face Derek. He smiled at her, causing her to blush slightly. “Hey. Great day, huh?” He said cheerfully, as if nothing had happened the night before. Rose pushed her thoughts on how cute he w as to the side and looked him up and down, a puzzled look on her face. “You look familiar; did I see you in the zoo parade?” She asked walking away. Albus, Hugo, and Lily tried to hold their laughter in. This was so unlike Rose. When they could no longer hold it in, they burst out laughing, clutching their stomachs from laughing so hard. Derek still stood there looked shocked. They looked up at him. “Next time you mess with her, she won’t be so nice.” Hugo said. “Believe me I should know.” And with that, they walked off to look for Rose.

TKS<3 06-29-2009 02:06 AM

Ooh Marcy I love it!! Keep going :)

GrapehSarah 06-29-2009 02:50 AM

I just started reading...this is awesome! I will definately keep coming back for updates!!!!

Winter Dreams 06-29-2009 06:22 AM

Yay! That was awesome, Marcy. Annnnnnnd, George Weasley!! :loved:

Shanners 06-29-2009 10:27 AM

marcyyyy

it was uber aweeesoome
aww. the letter on a bird :)

JeshieRAWR 06-29-2009 12:17 PM

MARCY!!!

That was amazing!
I think this was your best chapter so far.. :)
George was in it!!!! AHHHHH!!! George<3
Then Rose got the letter on the bird double ahhhhhhhhhhhh hahaha:rotfl:
Then Dereck comes up to her woahh mann!!!
I loved it!!!!
PAMS!!!
:) Jess

MarcyMoo 06-29-2009 08:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TKS<3 (Post 8350834)
Ooh Marcy I love it!! Keep going :)

Taylor! Glad to see you here! And thanks! Check out my other story to. It's Love Will Hurt.

Marcy Moo
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Originally Posted by iluvfob13 (Post 8350945)
I just started reading...this is awesome! I will definately keep coming back for updates!!!!

Thank you! Glad that your going to come back and keep reading!

Marcy Moo

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lily Lupin (Post 8351496)
Yay! That was awesome, Marcy. Annnnnnnd, George Weasley!! :loved:

Thanks Ana. I thought I would have Georgie make a special guest appearance.

Marcy Moo

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Originally Posted by midget ♥ (Post 8351775)
marcyyyy

it was uber aweeesoome
aww. the letter on a bird :)

Hey Shannon! Thank you so much!

Marcy Moo

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron (Post 8351915)
MARCY!!!

That was amazing!
I think this was your best chapter so far.. :)
George was in it!!!! AHHHHH!!! George<3
Then Rose got the letter on the bird double ahhhhhhhhhhhh hahaha:rotfl:
Then Dereck comes up to her woahh mann!!!
I loved it!!!!
PAMS!!!
:) Jess

JESS!!! Thanks! That is so sweet. :lol: Yup, Georgie was in this chapter.
I also thought that Derek should come and act like everything was ok with him and Rose.
Thanks again.

Marcy Moo

Alice Granger 07-03-2009 08:32 PM

great post can't wait for more
PAMS
Ally

MarcyMoo 07-04-2009 02:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alice Granger (Post 8367351)
great post can't wait for more
PAMS
Ally

Thanks Alley!

Marcy

MarcyMoo 07-04-2009 02:10 AM

New Chapter!
 
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Chapter 5:
Poppy Parkinson


Albus, Lily, and Hugo found Rose sitting on a bench near a store, a few tear stains on her cheeks. She looked and noticed the three watching her and quickly stood up and sighing. “I think I’m going back to the castle. I’m just not up to shopping right now.” She said. “It’s ok. We understand.” Albus said putting a hand on her shoulder. “Yeah, want someone to go with you?” Hugo asked. Rose shook her head no and said goodbye to her cousins and brother, making them promise to bring her a butterbeer and sweets from Honeydukes.

♥~♥


Scorpius waited in the Entrance Hall for Poppy, lecturing himself for actually agreeing to go with Poppy to Hogsmeade. He looked around for her and sighed. What was taking her so long! He leaned against the wall and waited, growing more and more impatient as ten minutes passed on. Scorpius was about to go back to the common room when he heard the sound ok clicking. He looked towards where he thought the noise was coming from and saw Poppy wearing heels that she could barely walk in. Every few steps she would trip or stumble.

Scorpius rolled his grey eyes and walked up to Poppy, catching her as stumbled for the ten millionth time. She giggled girlishly and wrapped her arms around Scorpius. “Thanks Scorpy!” She said. Scorpius helped her up and unwrapped her arms. “Come on.” He said. “Let’s get this nightmare over with.” He mumbled. “What was that?” Poppy asked looking at him. “Nothing.” Scorpius said.

The whole walk to Hogsmeade was torture for both Scorpius and Poppy. Poppy because she was wearing heels that were killing her feet, she couldn’t even feel her feet anymore! Every few steps she would trip or stumble or slipping! It was torture for Scorpius because he had to go out with Poppy, how much torturing could anything else be?

Just as they were about to enter the village, Poppy grabbed Scorpius’s hand so tightly that he could feel her nails dig into his flesh. And then there they were, standing in the village. Poppy clinging to Scorpius like gum on the bottom of someone’s shoe. Poppy kept flashing smiles, doing poses, and waving at people then pointing at Scorpius making kissy faces. ‘She’s probably trying to get her picture in The Quill.’ Scorpius thought referring to the school’s newspaper. “So how about we go to Puddifoot’s? Heard that’s where all the lovey dovey couples go.” Poppy said. “Uh I don’t know Popp-” Scorpius began, but before he could finish Poppy had pulled him into the little tea shop.

Poppy forced Scorpius down onto a cushion and sat down across from him, looking around a little. “So Scorpius I love getting to hang out with you. People are already saying that were a cute couple!” She said squealing. “Ok for our one month anniversary I want to go-”

“Wait what!” Scorpius asked looking at Poppy, his eyes wide with horror. One month anniversary! What was she talking about! They weren’t even a couple. “You heard me silly.” Poppy said in a ‘duh’ tone. “Our one month anniversary!” She said. “Hold on Poppy, were not dating. I only agreed to go out with you so you would leave me alone, not cling to me. I’m out of here.” He said getting up and strutting out the shop as quick as he could.

Scorpius was going back to the castle, he didn’t want Poppy catching him somewhere else in the village and handcuffing them or something. As he passed by Scrivenshaft's Quill Shop he stopped to hear Rose Weasley say something to Turner. He roared with laughter along with everyone else. ‘Wow the girl goes through things quickly. Yesterday she was obsessed with him. And today she’s calling him a zoo animal!’ He continued laughing as he walked back to the school.

JeshieRAWR 07-04-2009 02:26 AM

Marcy that was great!
Poor Scorpius! I would hate to go with Poppy and have her clinging to me for dear life so she doesn't fall. haha
Loved it Marcyluff!
:) Jess

Winter Dreams 07-04-2009 03:18 AM

That was great, Marcy. I loooooved it. ^_^ And Poppy is soooooo funny. :lol:

Shanners 07-04-2009 05:35 PM

MARCY.
that was uber uber aweesome.
poppy is so like her mother.

Quote:

‘Wow the girl goes through things quickly. Yesterday she was obsessed with him. And today she’s calling him a zoo animal!’
best line ever!!!

MarcyMoo 07-04-2009 06:53 PM

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Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron (Post 8368200)
Marcy that was great!
Poor Scorpius! I would hate to go with Poppy and have her clinging to me for dear life so she doesn't fall. haha
Loved it Marcyluff!
:) Jess

She wasn't holding onto him so wouldn't fall, it was so they looked like a couple. :lol:
Thanks!

Marcy Moo

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lily Lupin (Post 8368336)
That was great, Marcy. I loooooved it. ^_^ And Poppy is soooooo funny. :lol:

Thanks Ana!
I always have a great time when im writing Poppy scenes!

Marcy Moo

Quote:

Originally Posted by midget ♥ (Post 8370017)
MARCY.
that was uber uber aweesome.
poppy is so like her mother.

best line ever!!!

Shannon! Thanks so much!
I love that line too, but I like the one that Rose actually says to Scorpius more. :lmao:

Marcy Moo

JeshieRAWR 07-04-2009 06:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hermione9495 (Post 8370243)
She wasn't holding onto him so wouldn't fall, it was so they looked like a couple. :lol:
Thanks!

Marcy Moo

OHHHHHHHhhhhh haha another blonde moment in Marcyluff's story. :xd:

MarcyMoo 07-04-2009 07:02 PM

Fourth of July Double Feature!
 
Hey guys! Happy Fourth of July for those who live here in America! I thought I would do something special for y'all so I am doing a....*drum roll* LOVE IS DANGEROUS DOUBLE FEATURE! That means I'm posting two chapters today! YAY!

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Chapter 6:
A Long Talk


Rose arrived back at the castle and made her way up to the girls dormitory in Gryffindor Tower. As she sat down on her bed she remembered the note she had received earlier at Hogsmeade. Carefully she unfolded it and read the words that had been written.

Sorry I didn’t reply. The old coot Xander caught me being out late. Made me clean the owlery. Uck! So how’s your day been so far?

Mr. P.B


Rose laughed as she read the message. She searched for a quill in her trunk and wrote her reply.

♥~♥


Scorpius sat on a window sill on the second floor corridor, staring out at the grounds. He didn’t want to go back to the common room. He’d have to face questions from Kelly and the two other nincompoops he called friends. From the corner of his eye he saw something flying towards him and cautiously lend over to see what it was. It was a paper airplane and that meant Smarty Girl. He grabbed the plane and quickly unfolded the note.

That’s alright, but I do hate you for making me wait till four in the morning for a reply.
My day was ok I guess. I saw my ex-boyfriend at Hogsmeade. That just kind of ruined my day. How was your day?

Smarty Girl


Scorpius looked around for quill. He got off the window sill and grabbed a quill from a passing second year.

My day wasn’t that great either. I went to Hogsmeade with a psycho. Not kidding. But on my way back I saw a hilarious thing.

Mr. P.B


Lol. She sounds like a really pain in the butt. What she try to do to you?

Smarty Girl


She started talking about what she wanted for out one month anniversary. I only went out with her so she’d leave me alone! Not to find a girlfriend.

Mr. P.B


Wow….she is a psycho. So do you have a girlfriend?

Smarty Girl


No, not now anyway. I guess I’m just to busy with N.E.W.Ts to worry about having a girlfriend. My dad would kill me if I failed.


My mom would kill me. My dads doesn’t really care about my grades as long as I try my best.


There concersation went on and on and on. They finally stopped talking around dinner time, promising to talk again soon.

MarcyMoo 07-04-2009 07:04 PM

Fourth of July Double Feature!
 
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Chapter 7:
He’s Cute


Rose woke up the next morning, more happy than the day before. She had had a great time talking, or rather writing, to Mr. P.B. Fortunately they hadn’t spent to long talking cause the next day they were having classes again. She crawled out of bed and got ready before heading down to the Great Hall. She sat down next to Hugo and smiled up at her friends. “Good morning guys.” Rose said grabbing a roll. “Morning Rose. Feeling better today?” Albus asked biting into his toast. Rose nodded and began to butter the roll. “Much better thanks.” She replied.

♥~♥


Scorpius sat at the Slytherin table eating Pixie Puffs when Kelly appeared out of no where , sitting down across from her friend. “So how’d Hogsmeade go?” She asked, a smirk on her lips. Scorpius glared up at her and said, “Horrible ok, horrible! Poppy thinks were a…a couple! She’s already talking about what we should do for our one month anniversary! The girl is crazy, Kelly, crazy!” Scorpius said.

“Calm down Scorpius. You should hear what Poppy thinks of the date.” Kelly said putting some waffles on her plate. “What?” Scorpius asked lifting an eyebrow. “She thinks that your scared of a commitment. She thinks that you’ll get used to it and a whole bunch of other crap.” Kelly said waving her fork around. “Again, she’s crazy.” Scorpius said pushing his bowl of cereal away. “Anyways, I’ll see you later Kelly. I need to get to potions.” He said getting up and picking his bag up.

He walked down to the dungeon classroom and looked up at the chalkboard. It had a seating chart on it and he was sitting next to Rose Weasley. Scorpius looked around a spotted the red head talking to girl behind her. He walked over to the seat next to her. “Hey Rose.” He said setting his bag down on the table. “Guess were working together.”

Rose nodded her head and smiled. “Yup. I wonder which potion we have to make.” She said flipping through her textbook. “Let’s hope it’s something interesting.” Scorpius said turning to the front of the room as Professor Linden walked in. “Good morning class. I thought we’d start this year out with a little project.” He said, causing the students to groan loudly. “Oh come on. Suck it up. Now you will work with the person next to you and I’ll let you decided as partners on which potion you’ll make. The potion must be at least half way done by the end of class. You may begin.” Linden said sitting down at his desk.

Rose and Scorpius got to work flipping through their textbook, trying to decide which potion they should make. “How about the Confusing Concoction?” Scorpius said showing Rose the page. Rose examined the page and nodded her head. “Sure. It’s a concoction so all the potion is a mixture of ingredients.” She said. They began working, chopping up ingredients and stirring them in the cauldron. As they worked they made conversation. “Nice job dissing Turner yesterday. That was hilarious. ‘You look familiar; did I see you in the zoo parade?’ Hilarious!” Scorpius said chuckling. Rose smiled. “Thanks.” She looked at Scorpius, smiling at how charming his grey eyes looked. Scorpius looked over at her and smiled, “What?” He asked. “Nothing.” Rose said turning back to the potion. ‘His really cute. And he’s really sweet too….’


HAPPY FOURTH OF JULY!!!!

Shanners 07-04-2009 07:37 PM

MARCY!

i lubbed the two updates.
as much as living in england sucks for not having a 4th of july.
-well it does. but we dont celbrate it ;)-

they were aweesome.
oooh my.
what would happen if rose began to like scorpius but still liked mr p.b :S
not knowing it was him :D

PotterGirl714 07-04-2009 07:38 PM

PAMS I love it!!! Bravo... you have done it again!

JeshieRAWR 07-04-2009 07:43 PM

That was amazazing Marcyluffeh!!!
Thanks for the 2 posts!
Happy 4th of July!
:) Jess

Winter Dreams 07-04-2009 08:13 PM

Awww, that's cute. :loved: And yay for 4th of July even though, like Shannon, we don't celebrate it in New Zealand. xDD
Fantastic, and you really do love Scorpius and Rose, don't you? :whistle:

MarcyMoo 07-06-2009 05:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by midget ♥ (Post 8370364)
MARCY!

i lubbed the two updates.
as much as living in england sucks for not having a 4th of july.
-well it does. but we dont celbrate it ;)-

they were aweesome.
oooh my.
what would happen if rose began to like scorpius but still liked mr p.b :S
not knowing it was him :D

Thanks Shannon! Fourth of July is really awesome! Their are fireworks and everything! In the small town that I live in, we have this huge fair come over and set up rides and entertainment in the soccer feilds by the community center. Then around 9:30 the fireworks show begins! It's amazing!

And you'll just have to wait and see what happens....:whistle:

Marcy Moo

Quote:

Originally Posted by PotterGirl714 (Post 8370370)
PAMS I love it!!! Bravo... you have done it again!


Thanks PotterGirl714, your sweet!

Marcy Moo

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron (Post 8370385)
That was amazazing Marcyluffeh!!!
Thanks for the 2 posts!
Happy 4th of July!
:) Jess

Thanks Jess!
Happy Fourth of July (even though it was two days ago)

Marcy Moo

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lily Lupin (Post 8370448)
Awww, that's cute. :loved: And yay for 4th of July even though, like Shannon, we don't celebrate it in New Zealand. xDD
Fantastic, and you really do love Scorpius and Rose, don't you? :whistle:

Thanks Ana! :loved: If you read my reply to Shannon's comment you'll see how fun it is! But I'm sure New Zealand has a really fun holiday! And I love Rose and Scorpius! :loved:

Marcy Moo

Alice Granger 07-07-2009 12:42 PM

Marcy great posts i loved them, Rose and Scorpius are cute match.
Luffed it !! Oh please post soon i really want to know what happens next !
PAMS
Ally :D

GrapehSarah 07-10-2009 11:45 PM

Awesome! I just got a chance to read the updates!

~Sarah

LauraMaisie 07-11-2009 09:49 AM

New Reader!! :D
 
New Reader!! :happy:


I LOVE your story so far!! Oh, I hope Rose and Scorpius get together eventually.. They'd be such a cute couple - what with the notes and everything... I want them to both find out!! Ahhhhh!!

LOVE IT ! :D :twins2:

Laura... :hermy2:

MarcyMoo 07-12-2009 07:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alice Granger (Post 8377589)
Marcy great posts i loved them, Rose and Scorpius are cute match.
Luffed it !! Oh please post soon i really want to know what happens next !
PAMS
Ally :D

Thanks Alley! Glad you enjoyed the chapter so much.
And I'm sorry to say, but I won't be posting for a while , maybe a week or so. I need a break.

Marcy Moo
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Originally Posted by iluvfob13 (Post 8388888)
Awesome! I just got a chance to read the updates!

~Sarah

Thanks Sarah, glad your updated and ready to read more.

Marcy Moo
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Quote:

Originally Posted by LauraMaisie (Post 8390060)
New Reader!! :happy:


I LOVE your story so far!! Oh, I hope Rose and Scorpius get together eventually.. They'd be such a cute couple - what with the notes and everything... I want them to both find out!! Ahhhhh!!

LOVE IT ! :D :twins2:

Laura... :hermy2:

Welcome LauraMaisie! To my wonderful FF and to SS! I am the author of this marvelous story, Marcy.

I'm glad you like the story so much. Well just have to see what happens between Scorpius and Rose. But I agree with you, they do make a cute couple. :lol: Keep reading.

Marcy Moo
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Like I said to Alice Granger, I won't be posting a new chaper for Love Is Dangerous for quite a while. Since I spent so much time making a lovely chapter for all my great fans, I have decided to have week break. But don't worry, I'll have a new chapter up by next Sunday.

JeshieRAWR 07-12-2009 08:52 PM

That was amazazing!!!
I luffed it!!
Great Job!
:) Jess

MarcyMoo 07-12-2009 08:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron (Post 8392070)
That was amazazing!!!
I luffed it!!
Great Job!
:) Jess

Thanks!

Marcy Moo

TKS<3 07-13-2009 12:14 AM

Marcy I love it. I just want to scream at Rose and Scorpius, YOUR IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER!!! but seeing as they are fictional characters, I can't do that. :lmao:

MarcyMoo 07-13-2009 12:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TKS<3 (Post 8392466)
Marcy I love it. I just want to scream at Rose and Scorpius, YOUR IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER!!! but seeing as they are fictional characters, I can't do that. :lmao:

:lol: :lmao: Everyone wants to yell that out to them, not just you.
Thanks for the great comment.

Marcy Moo

Alice Granger 07-13-2009 09:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hermione9495 (Post 8391886)
And I'm sorry to say, but I won't be posting for a while , maybe a week or so. I need a break.

Thats ok i understand, enjoy your break :) anyway your story is great, so take your time, relax and enjoy the break.
Ally

MarcyMoo 07-19-2009 11:57 PM

New Chapter!
 
Ok, so all during my week long break I was thinking. I have a little over a month till school starts again. During seventh grade, I spent most of my time here on Snitchseeker and didn't do my best on homework or study for test. I made the AB Honer Roll, but I want to make the A Honer Roll in eighth grade, so I've made a decision. I will be updating every week on Sunday and Thursday, during the summer. When school starts I will update every other week on the same days. Thanks, and I hope you undestand.

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Chapter 8:
Just A Kiss….Right?


Rose and Scorpius sat in one the empty dungeons, working on their Confusing Concoction. As they added ingredients to their cauldron, they chatted, talking about school, friends, and other things. “So what’s it like being the niece of the famous Harry Potter?” Scorpius asked while adding flubberworm mucous to the red colored potion. Rose sighed. “It’s a little strange I suppose, but I bet its weirder for Lily, Albus, and James. You know, being his kids.” She said shrugging her shoulders. Scorpius nodded his head. “My dad told me about the time they were fighting in the girls bathroom. I was a little creped out.” He said chuckling.

“Yeah, dads told me tons of things about your dad. I remember on our very first day at Hogwarts he said that I shouldn’t be nice to you or grandpa would disinherit me.” Rose said bursting out into laughter. Scorpius grinned. “That’s exactly what me dad said, except he said that my grandpa would kill me, not disinherit.” They continued chatting and making their potion. Around dinner time, they decided to stop for the day and meet up tomorrow and finish up.

Walking up to the Great Hall together, they went their separate ways for their own house tables. Rose watched as Scorpius walked to the Slytherin Table. How could a guy so sweet be in a house that’s so…..mean? She shrugged the question off and sat down next to Albus. “Hey. Where were you?” Lily asked looking up from her qudditch book. “I was in down in the dungeons with Scorpius.” Rose replied putting some of the Chinese noodles on her plate. “Wou were with Mawfoy?” Hugo asked, his mouth stuffed with chicken. “They were probably working on their potion for tomorrow.” Albus said.

“We were.” Rose said placing the noodles on her fork in her mouth. “He’s not that bad.” She said chewing slowly. “Nothing like his dad anyway.”

“How would you know?”

“Hello, I’ve heard the stories our parents tell us about his dad. Scorpius is nothing like him.” Rose said putting more noodles in her mouth. “So what are planning to do tonight?” Lily asked cutting some of her steak. “Just planning on hanging out in my dorm really. You can join me if you want.” Rose replied swallowing. “Sure, it’ll be fun.” Lily said placing some food in her mouth. After dinner the two girls went up to the Gryffindor Common Room while the boys went off to play qudditch.

Walking up to Rose’s dorm they sat down on the ground next to her bed and took out sweets, pigging out. They talked about different things, and eventually got to the subject of dating. “Lily, do you think I’ll ever find the one for me?” Rose asked sighing. “Of course you will.” Her cousin responded, shocked that Rose would even ask such a thing. “I wish I was like you. Your like sticky paper.” Rose said chuckling. Lily could get boys left and right, she had a certain charm to her.

♥~♥


Rose waited outside the dungeon that she and Scorpius were using, looking at her watch occasionally. Where was he? Scorpius came rounding the corner, running for his life. He grabbed Roses wrist and quickly pulled her inside the dungeon room. “What was that?” Rose asked. “Poppy….following….me.” Scorpius replied, taking in deep breaths between each word. “That girl is a nightmare.” He said finally catching his breath. “Yeah she is. Let’s get to work.” Rose said pulling the phial with the unfinished potion in it.

Suddenly the door flew up, a angry looking Poppy Parkinson standing in the doorway. She looked at Scorpius, not noticing Rose at first. But when she did notice, she looked at Scorpius. “What is she doing here!” Poppy asked pointing at a pale Rose. “Poppy, we’re working on our potions homework.” Scorpius said rolling his eyes. Poppy ignored Scorpius’s answer and spoke again. “Your cheating on me aren’t you.” She said. “How could you Scorpie?!”

Scorpius groaned and looked at Rose with an apologetic look before turning back to Poppy. “Look Poppy,” He began. “We were never going out. So I’m not cheating on you at all.” He said. “Now leave us alone.” Poppy stared at Scorpius and crossed her arms. “Why should I?” She asked glaring at Rose. Scorpius groaned again, but suddenly perked up as an idea came to him. “So I can do this.” He said grabbing Roses wrist again and pulling her in, planting his lips on her.

Roses eyes were wide open, shocked at what was going on. As Scorpius pulled away, she looked at Poppy and then at Scorpius, and then at the wall, unsure what to do. Poppy on the other hand, exploded. “HOW COULD YOU! I HATE YOU!” And stormed out the room, slamming the door behind her. Scorpius sighed of sigh of relief and turned to Rose. “Sorry bout that. Had to do something to get her off my back.” He said. Rose looked at Scorpius and nodded her head. “No, it was fine. I understand.” She said quietly. “Let’s get this over with.” She said sitting down and pouring the potion into the cauldron. Scorpius looked at her, a little concerned she might be upset with him, and sat down next to her, beginning to work. While they work, Rose’s mind couldn’t help but travel back to the kiss. She hadn’t seen it coming, but then who would. It just felt so…..strange to her.

When they finished the potion, Rose quickly put it into their phial and left the dungeon as quick as she could. She ran into her dorm and sat down on her bed. She needed to talk to someone, but who? Not Lily, she wouldn’t really understand, neither would Albus or Hugo. That’s it! Mr. P.B! She searched through her drawers, looking for parchment and a quill. She scribbled a note done and sent it off, waiting for the reply.

GrapehSarah 07-20-2009 12:03 AM

Poppy: "You're cheating on me aren't you?!"
So awesome! Can't wait to read more!

~Sarah

JeshieRAWR 07-20-2009 02:57 PM

MARCYYY!!!
Ahhhhh I loved it sooo muchhh!!!!
I can't believe Scorpius kissed Rose right when Poppy was there!!!
Woahhh!!!
&& I understand about the posts...
:) Jess

TKS<3 07-21-2009 03:54 PM

Aaahhh Marcy I love it. Scorpius and Rose kissed!! Even though it was just to get Poppy to go away it was so aahh!! :D And I understand about the posts. Even though I joined SS over the summer I won't be able to get on a lot during the school year because I have basketball, I have to ride my horse, and I will have tons of homework.

MarcyMoo 07-22-2009 01:22 AM

First I would like to thank you all for being so nice about the posting days. I love you all, and I love writing this story, I really do. But as you all understand, school is much more important to me right now, even though it hasn't begun yet. Still got over a month til it does.
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Originally Posted by Taylor (Post 8416783)
Aaahhh Marcy I love it. Scorpius and Rose kissed!! Even though it was just to get Poppy to go away it was so aahh!! :D And I understand about the posts. Even though I joined SS over the summer I won't be able to get on a lot during the school year because I have basketball, I have to ride my horse, and I will have tons of homework.

Thanks Taylor!
Still they kissed, even if it was so Poppy would leave!
I joined over the summer last year too, even though the next week school started. :lol:
Thanks for commenting

Marcy Moo

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Originally Posted by Jess (Post 8413625)
MARCYYY!!!
Ahhhhh I loved it sooo muchhh!!!!
I can't believe Scorpius kissed Rose right when Poppy was there!!!
Woahhh!!!
&& I understand about the posts...
:) Jess

Thanks Jess!
I just couldn't think of anything for the two to do and then I was like 'why dont they kiss!' and it worked out fine!
Hope your having fun it Germany,

Marcy Moo
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Originally Posted by Sarah3 (Post 8412036)
Poppy: "You're cheating on me aren't you?!"
So awesome! Can't wait to read more!

~Sarah

Thanks Sarah!
Glad you loved my little quote!
Come back on Thursday,

Marcy Moo
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PotterGirl714 07-22-2009 04:42 AM

PAMS! I love it!

JeshieRAWR 07-22-2009 03:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hermione9495 (Post 8418844)
[SIZE="4"]
Thanks Jess!
I just couldn't think of anything for the two to do and then I was like 'why dont they kiss!' and it worked out fine!
Hope your having fun it Germany,

Marcy Moo
B]

Hahaha yeah kissing always brings out the best in readers! :rotfl:
Germany is great! Hope you are having fun!

:) Jess

Slytherin Princess 07-23-2009 10:30 AM

New Reader


Omg i am always reading Scorpius/Rose ships but i love yours :yes: i can't wait to read chapter 9

Jo :D

Alice Granger 07-24-2009 05:11 PM

GREAT POST, I LUFFED IT !!!! ohhhh i can't wait to find out what she writes in the note, and what happens next, great story, can't wait to read more,
PAMS
Ally :D

shortbottom 07-24-2009 05:26 PM

Very talented and engrossing:eleph:

MarcyMoo 07-25-2009 01:07 AM

NO NEW CHAPTER TODAY! REALLY SORRY!
[SIZE="3"]I was at a sleepover last night so I couldn't post a chapter. And I'm too lazy to post right now, so I'll have two chapters on Sunday.

TKS<3 07-26-2009 04:02 AM

Ooh, Marcy, I can't wait until tomorrow. :)

Taylor

MarcyMoo 07-27-2009 04:49 AM

New Chapter!
 
Ok well here are two chapters so I can catch up with Love Will Hurt. And I'd like to welcome deviljo8586 & shortbottom to our little LID family. :D

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Chapter 9:
A Talk


Scorpius watched as Rose walked away quickly, a confused expression on his hurt face. Did Rose hate him? He just wanted Poppy off his back, he thought she would understand that being the understanding person she was. He sighed and walked back into the dungeon to clean up. While he scrubbed the cauldron clean, Scorpius’s mind traveled to the kiss. He had felt something when he had kissed Rose. What it was he had felt, he had no clue.

Then it dawned on him. Could he possibly like Rose Weasley? Uh being 16 was so confusing, he hated it. When Scorpius finished up he left to go back to the common room, and as he entered the dimly light room, a paper air plane came flying towards him. He immediately knew who it was, his dour mood gone and long forgotten. He snatched the air plane out the air and unfolded it.

Can we talk? You’re the only person I could think of going too. My friends wouldn’t understand.
~Smarty Girl


Scorpius moved to one of the study tables and grabbed an abandoned quill, jotting his reply done.

Sure. What’s up?
~Mr. P.B

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Well something just happened a few minutes to me.
You see I was hanging out with this guy and he….kissed me.
I’m not exactly sure what to do now. I really, really, really like him, but I doubt he likes me.
~Smarty Girl

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Same thing like that happened to me. Except with a girl =).
But if I were you, I’d tell him how you feel.
Maybe he likes you just like you like him.
~Mr. P.B

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I don’t know, I’ll think it about.
So what about your problem, maybe I can help.
~Smarty Girl

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We’ll me and this girl were hanging out just you were and I kissed her.
I didn’t mean to, it just happened. And after I did, she kinda of got mad. I think.
She just walked away as quick as she could.
Any clue what I should do?
~Mr. P.B

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Wow, um. Maybe you should just apologize?
Tell her you didn’t mean to kiss or something like that. Maybe she’ll understand.
Do you like her?
~Smarty Girl

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I already tried that and she still seemed upset.
I’ll think of something. Thanks though.
As for if I like her. I have no clue. When I kissed her it felt….strange, but great.
~Mr. P.B


As Rose read that last line, she sighed. That was kind of how she had felt when Malfoy had kissed her. When he had kissed her it had felt so strange, but wonderful at the same time. She had felt all tingly and warm. Oh what was with me, Scorpius would never go out with a girl like me. He probably wants a more sophisticated girl that his parents would like, she thought frowning. She picked her quill up and scribbled a reply down, saying that she was tired and that they would talk again later.

♥~♥


The next day was the most awkward day ever. Rose and Scorpius had almost every class together. Potions was the worst though. Rose sat in her seat, trying to keep her focus on the board in front of her, but it was so darn hard with Scorpius looking over at her every few minutes. She had decided not to take Mr. P.B’s advice and tell Scorpius that she liked him, it was to risky in her opinion. Scorpius looked at Rose again. Sighing a little. She still seemed mad at him. He decided to apologize again after class, hopefully he would be able to catch her this time. After every class Scorpius had tried to apologize to her, but Rose would always leave the classroom before everyone else and run off to her next class. Sighing, he pushed the rest of his thoughts aside, turning his attention to the professor instead.

When the bell rang, Rose quickly grabbed her things and made her run for the door. She walked out into the hallway and sighed, beginning to walk towards the stairs, but she was quickly stopped as someone grabbed her wrist. She closed her eyes and groaned, knowing exactly who it would be. She turned around to face the person. Scorpius was looking at her, his eyes pleading for Rose not to run away. “Can I help you?” She asked. “Rose, look I’m really sorry about….you know…kissing you yesterday.” He said.

Rose looked at Scorpius and just melted away as her brown eyes scanned his grey ones. She smiled and nodded her head. “That’s ok. I understand. Isn’t your fault that Poppy’s such a dim witted ninny.” Rose said laughing. Scorpius grinned, glad that Rose had forgiven him. “How about I buy you a drink at Three Broomsticks? My way of apologizing even more.” He said, putting a charming smile on. Rose looked at him, and melted even more. Oh, I hate him for being so adorable. “Sure. But your paying.” Rose said smirking. Scorpius grinned wider and they set off for Hogsmeade.

MarcyMoo 07-27-2009 04:51 AM

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Chapter 10:
The Flyers


Rose woke up the next morning as sun streamed in through the window, hitting her smiled face. She sat up and rubbed her eyes, stretching. She had had a great time with Scorpius at the Three Broomsticks the pervious night. They had talked about the usually things, eventually telling stories from when they were little. Rose tied her hair up and walked down to the Great Hall, still wearing night shirt and shorts. It was the weekend, almost everyone came down in their PJs.

She walked over to the Gryffindor Table and sat down across from Lily, placing some waffles on her plate. As she poured syrup onto her plate, she looked around and noticed that Albus and Hugo were no where to be seen. “Where are Al and Huey?” She asked setting the syrup pitcher down. “They were up late playing Exploding Snap.” Lily replied not looking up from her book. “Speaking of late, one of your roommates told me that you didn’t get in till two in the morning.” Lily said raising her left eyebrow. “Where were you?”

Rose looked at her. “What are you my dad?”

“Don’t you mean mom?”

“No I mean dad.”

The two laughed and continued eating. “So where were you? Please tell me?” Lily said pouring herself another bowl of Pixie Puffs. “I was out with…Malfoy.” Rose said hesitantly. Lily looked at her, the cereal on her spoon dropping back into her bowl. “What? You were out with….with Malfoy!” She yelled. A few people turned to look at the two girls, but they shrugged it off and turned back to whatever it was they had been doing. “Shut up Lily.” Rose said glaring at her. “He took me to the Three Broomsticks to apologize for kissing me.” She said.

“He kissed you!” Lily yelled again. And again, heads turned to look. Lily looked at them. “What do looking at! You’ve never hear a girl yell?!” She asked. “He kissed me because Poppy was bothering him, no big deal.” Rose said. But it was a big deal. To Rose that kiss had been amazing, but a still a little strange. All the pervious night she and Scorpius had avoided talking about potions and Poppy. Lily and Rose continued eating silently, both unsure what to say next. That is until their brothers arrived. Both sat down next his sister. “Did you see the posters?” Hugo asked pouring himself a goblet of juice. “Posters? For what?” Lily asked. “There’s going to be a Halloween dance.” Albus said. “Here, we picked up a flyer.” Hugo said placing a brightly colored piece of paper between the two girls.

“It says we have to dress up.” Lily said. “And it also says we cant dress up like witches or wizards.” Rose said pointing to some tiny print towards the bottom. They all laughed and talked about the dance.

♥~♥

Scorpius walked into the Great Hall and looked around. He noticed Rose Weasley walking towards her house table and smiled. She looked cute in her pajamas and her hair all messy. He walked over to the Slytherin Table and sat down next to Kelly. “Hey Kel.” He said putting pancakes on his plate. “What’s up?” Kelly swallowed and took of sip of her juice before replying. “Nothing much. Just tired.” She cut some of her sausage. “What about you?” Scorpius finished pouring syrup of pancakes and began cutting. “Just thinking about that dance.” He said. “You going?” Kelly shrugged. “I don’t know. It all seems over rated.”

Scorpius looked at her confused. “What? You don’t want to go to a party? What is wrong with you?” He asked putting a hand on Kelly’s forehead. Kelly slapped his hand away and laughed. “Nothings wrong.” She said putting more food In her mouth. Scorpius laughed, but suddenly stopped when he heard a girlish squeal come from near by. He slowly turned towards his right. Poppy was sitting next to him, her smiled face right next to his. “Can I help you Poppy?” He asked. “Scorpie. I forgive you. Now want to go to the dance with me?” She asked getting to the point right away. Scorpius looked at Kelly. She shrugged and picked her plate up, moving a few seat down, she didn’t want to be near Poppy.

Scorpius turned back towards Poppy. “Uh. No Poppy, I don’t want to go with you. Now if you’ll excuse me.” He said getting up and running out of the hall. Poppy frowned and turned back towards her friends. “Well I guess your going alone.” One friend said. “No. He’s just joking. You’ll see.” Poppy said. “He’ll come running into my beautiful arms.”

Slytherin Princess 07-27-2009 08:59 AM

Awsome :D
i love it :D

Jo

GrapehSarah 07-27-2009 05:02 PM

So awesome! I absolutely love the last paragraph! Poppy needs some sense knocked into her head! Can't wait for more!

~Sarah

Alice Granger 07-27-2009 07:22 PM

great post !!! i luffed them, :loved: oh i hope Rose and Scorpius go to the dance together,:loved: i luff reading the letters by Mr. P.B and Smarty Girl. :loved: Poppy needs to see someone about her head when a boy says no it means no not that he'll run into your arms ! but sounds to me poppy is up to something :hmm: like a love potion or something not sure but can't wait for more,
PAMS
Ally :D

MarcyMoo 07-28-2009 11:41 PM

Comments
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by deviljo8586 (Post 8435424)
Awsome :D
i love it :D

Jo

Thank you Jo!

Marcy Moo
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Quote:

Originally Posted by iluvfob13 (Post 8436112)
So awesome! I absolutely love the last paragraph! Poppy needs some sense knocked into her head! Can't wait for more!

~Sarah

Thanks Sarah!
ThI loved writing this whole chapter. It was pretty fun.
Poppy reminds me of some soap opera person, all dramatic and stuff.

Marcy Moo
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Quote:

Originally Posted by Alice Granger (Post 8436701)
great post !!! i luffed them, :loved: oh i hope Rose and Scorpius go to the dance together,:loved: i luff reading the letters by Mr. P.B and Smarty Girl. :loved: Poppy needs to see someone about her head when a boy says no it means no not that he'll run into your arms ! but sounds to me poppy is up to something :hmm: like a love potion or something not sure but can't wait for more,
PAMS
Ally :D

Thank you Ally.
Who knows maybe they will, maybe they won't...:shifty:
Poppy needs to be put in St. Mungo permanently.

Marcy Moo
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Where are all my commenters? Do I really need to start doing the PMing thing again?

PotterGirl714 07-29-2009 01:40 AM

PAMS! I love it! you didnt email me so i didnt know there was more posts!

harita 07-29-2009 06:10 PM

hey new reader here...liked this fanfic...poppy is really mad...honestly...i have not read more than few pages about the next generation of potters and weasleys and this one is really nice...waiting for more...

MarcyMoo 07-29-2009 09:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PotterGirl714 (Post 8442116)
PAMS! I love it! you didnt email me so i didnt know there was more posts!

We'll I'm only posting on Sundays and Thrusdays. That should help, but I'll start PMing too.

Marcy

Quote:

Originally Posted by harita (Post 8444812)
hey new reader here...liked this fanfic...poppy is really mad...honestly...i have not read more than few pages about the next generation of potters and weasleys and this one is really nice...waiting for more...

Welcome harita. I know, Poppy really needs to check into St. Mungos. Thank you again.

Marcy

JeshieRAWR 07-30-2009 10:12 PM

bahahahahahaha those posts made me laugh and feel all warm inside xD
PAMS!!!!
:) Jess

TKS<3 08-01-2009 07:36 PM

Marcy! I luffed it. I hope Scorpius and Rose go to the dance together! Sorry I havn't commented unitl now, I havn't been able to get on a lot

~Taylor~

MarcyMoo 08-02-2009 07:31 AM

UPDATE!


The worst possible thing has happened. I'm sorry to say this but...Marcy Moo has WRITERS BLOCK! This happened for both my stories! It sucks! So I won't be posting chapters for a while. I'm super sorry. :cry: I'll try to have a chapter up as soon as I can.

Marcy Moo

MarcyMoo 08-03-2009 05:13 AM

UPDATE!


I have started my own graphic shop! :woot: It's called Marcys Mega Marvelous Graphic Shop! Go check it out and maybe....request????? :eyebrows: I'm still trying to think of chapter, but my mind is still a little cloudy.

Marcy Moo

TKS<3 08-03-2009 01:40 PM

Oh no Marcy! I write stories too (not on here) and it does suck cause when it starts getting really good I always get writers block. But I'm sure you'll get over the writers block soon. And yay you started a graphic shop!! :woot:

~Taylor~

PotterGirl714 08-03-2009 03:42 PM

I tottaly understand i have writers block for the book i am writing now not on here though! It's ok!

##Hermione&Draco## 08-04-2009 11:07 PM

Yep...Everyone has Writers Block...
i hate it..
Anyways...
Post anytime you can...
PAMS!!!!
-Xavier:)-

MarcyMoo 08-15-2009 05:45 AM

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Chapter 11:
Should We?


Scorpius ran into the Slytherin Common Room, jumped over the couch and climbed up the stairs to his dorm, locking the door. “Poppy is a mad, mad, mad, girl.” He mumbled sitting down on his bed. How could she think that I would go to the dance with her?! I told her I hate her….well actually I showed her. Scorpius thought. His mind drifted away from mental Poppy to the dance.

But who should he go with? Poppy? Defiantly not! She was out of the question. Kelly? No, they were just best friends, nothing more. Rose? Scorpius wanted to ask her, but he decided against it. Kissing her was awkward enough for both of them that just asking her to the ball would be…well who knows. Scorpius couldn’t think of anyone else to ask to the ball….SMARTY GIRL! That’s it! But they hadn’t talked about meeting each other. Maybe now was the right time. Scorpius pulled some parchment and a quill out of his drawer and began writing.

♥~♥


Rose was still seated at the Gryffindor Table with her cousins when a pink paper airplane came soaring towards her, poking her in the arm. “Whose’s that from?” Lily asked raising an eyebrow and smirking. Rose stuck her tongue out at Lily and unfolded the note.

So I’m guessing by now you’ve heard about the Halloween ball by now.
Well I was thinking…when are we gonna meet? We’ve been talking to each other since the beginning of term.

Mr. P.B


“Who’s Mr. P.B?” Lily asked looking over Roses shoulder. “Lily!” Rose yelled. “He’s no one. Just this guy I’ve been talking too.” She said looking around the table for a quill. “Any of you have a quill?” She asked looking at Albus and Hugo. “Tell us who Mr. P.B is first.” Albus said holding up a quill he had snatched from a first year. “It’s none of your business.” Rose replied reaching for the quill. “Tell us first.” Hugo said. “You know what. I’ll just summon a quill.” Rose said. Wait, she’d had forgotten her wand in her dorm. “Tell us!” All three of them said. “Fine. He’s this guy I’ve been writing to since last month.” Rose said pulling the quill out of Albus’s hand.

“Well have you met him?” Hugo asked. “No. That’s what he’s asking me.” Rose said as she began to write a reply.

I have no clue. When do you think would be the right time?
The dance? Maybe that’s why you mentioned it. *raises eyebrow*

Smarty Girl


“Smarty Girl? Why’d you pick that?” Hugo asked. “Cause unlike you, I have a brain.” Rose said folding the paper up and talking her brothers wand. She tapped it and it rose into the air and flew out of the doors.

♥~♥


Scorpius sighed. The only parchment he had been able to find was pink. Smarty Girl was probably laughing at him for being so girly. And when the airplane returned, flying through the closed door he was a little nervous to open it. Not because of the pink parchment, but of her reply. He slowly unfolded the parchment and began to read, picking his quill up.

That’s exactly what I was thinking.
I’ll meet you in the middle of the Great Hall at 8:00.
Alright?


“So are you gonna go?” Lily asked looking at Rose. Rose looked down at the pink parchment, shrugging her shoulders. “I don’t know.” She replied. “I’ll have to think about it.” She folded the parchment up and put it into her pocket. “I’m gonna go on a walk around the Lake.” Rose said gulping her pumpkin juice down and getting up from her chair.

♥~♥


Still no reply. What was taking her so long? Was she ignoring him?! WHERE WAS HER REPLY?! Scorpius couldn’t taking the waiting anymore, he got up from his bed and opened the door, looking around before entering the common room. It was completely empty, everyone was probably in the Great Hall. Scorpius sat down on one of the couches and sighed, looking around the place. And then he noticed it. The airplane. He snatched it out of the air and unfolded it. He had never been so anxious about going to a dance.

Alright

GrapehSarah 08-15-2009 03:03 PM

Yay!!! No more writer's block! :woot: I loved it!

~Sarah

TKS<3 08-15-2009 03:10 PM

Aaahhhh!!! No more writers block!!! Yay!! :banaboogie: :woot:

~Taylor~

JeshieRAWR 08-15-2009 04:01 PM

Awesome chapter Marcy Moo!!!
I can't wait until they meet!
I'm glad your back with no writer's block!
PAMS!!
:) Jess

harita 08-15-2009 07:12 PM

really good...lets see...what will their reactions be when they will realize that they had been writing to each other...waiting for more...

Slytherin Princess 08-16-2009 11:37 AM

Loved it :D:woot:

Alice Granger 08-16-2009 06:53 PM

she said yes !!!!!!!!!!! yay !!! i can't wait till the next post, i luffed it, so no more writiers block....great !!
PAMS
Ally :flowers:

##Hermione&Draco## 08-17-2009 05:44 PM

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!
PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!
-Xavier:)-

MarcyMoo 08-20-2009 01:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by iluvfob13 (Post 8503571)
Yay!!! No more writer's block! :woot: I loved it!

~Sarah

I still kind of have writers block, so I'll try and have another chapter out soon!

Quote:

Originally Posted by TKS<3 (Post 8503583)
Aaahhhh!!! No more writers block!!! Yay!! :banaboogie: :woot:

~Taylor~

Again, it's not completely gone, but thank you!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron (Post 8503673)
Awesome chapter Marcy Moo!!!
I can't wait until they meet!
I'm glad your back with no writer's block!
PAMS!!
:) Jess

For the thrid time, still have writers block, but yeah, I can't wait to think up their reactions!

Quote:

Originally Posted by harita (Post 8504033)
really good...lets see...what will their reactions be when they will realize that they had been writing to each other...waiting for more...

Who knows, I still need to think it up....hehe.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Slytherin Princess (Post 8505700)
Loved it :D:woot:

Thanks!

Quote:

Originally Posted by ##Hermione&Draco## (Post 8509241)
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!
PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!
-Xavier:)-

Thanks!

TKS<3 08-21-2009 12:33 AM

Aww poo. :( Well thats ok Marcy you thought of a new chapter before, Im sure you can think of another!!

~Taylor~

PotterGirl714 08-21-2009 02:15 AM

PAMS I love it you are doing so well... take your time!

Maxilocks 08-21-2009 03:56 AM

-drops in-

New reader alert!
I haven't read the whole story yet, but I'm definitely reading.
Love what I see, too. Good job, Marceeeee!

*runs off to catch up*


MarcyMoo 08-22-2009 05:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TKS<3 (Post 8520993)
Aww poo. :( Well thats ok Marcy you thought of a new chapter before, Im sure you can think of another!!

~Taylor~

I already have....:shifty:

Quote:

Originally Posted by PotterGirl714 (Post 8521266)
PAMS I love it you are doing so well... take your time!

I will, thank you.

Quote:

Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie (Post 8521548)
-drops in-

New reader alert!
I haven't read the whole story yet, but I'm definitely reading.
Love what I see, too. Good job, Marceeeee!

*runs off to catch up*


Maxie!!! Welcome to our even more growing family her at LID!
Glad that you like it so far! Hope you catch up soon!

MarcyMoo 08-23-2009 02:35 AM

Ok so I have a few things to say.
First the posting chapters Thursdays and Sunday thing aren't working, so I'll just post whenever I have time.
Second, school for me will be starting on Wednesday, August 26. That's only four days, so I'll be a bit busy getting back to my normal schedule and all.
And Third, my birthdays in 16 days (September 4th) and I'll be busy around then to planning my party. I won't have to share one with my brothers! :woot: So I won't be on a lot around then either. Ok thats about it.

I'd like to welcome SenoritaMaxie to our fan family!


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Chapter 12:
You Shouldn’t Go


Rose set her wand down and sighed. Well, their was her answer. She was gonna go with Mr. P.B and find out who he was. She stood up from her seat on the bed and walked down to the common room. Hugo, Albus, and Lily sat on the couches and armchairs, talking about the dance. “Hey Rose.” Hugo said as his sister joined the three of them. “I sent my reply.” Rose said sitting down at the end of the couch. “What did you say?” Lily asked eagerly. “I said yes.”

“You what?!” Hugo and Albus asked looking at her. “Why’d you do that? You don’t even know this guy!” They said, still talking at the same time. Rose and Lily looked at each other and rolled their eyes. “And why not?” Rose asked crossing her arms. “Because! You don’t know him.” Albus replied looking sternly at Rose. “Oh please. You sound like my dad.”

“I’ll tell dad.” Hugo said smirking. Rose chuckled and shook her head. “I’ll tell dad about how you crashed the car into the broom shed, smushing the brooms along with it.” Rose said. Hugo’s smirk quickly vanished. “Just let her go.” He said looking at Albus. “No. She has nothing against me.”

“But I do.” Lily said.

Albus turned his head slowly at Lily. “You wouldn’t.”

“Try me.” Lily said. “Fine. We give up.” Albus said caving in. Rose and Lily high-fived triumphantly and stood up. “Perks of having totally idiots for brothers.” They said walking up to the girls dormitory. “They’ll never be able to beat us.” Lily said chuckling and collapsing on Roses bed. “Never.” Agreed Rose sitting down on the ground and looking up at Lily. “But maybe they have a point.” She said frowning a little. “I’ve barely know about this guy.” Lily lifted her head and looked at Rose. “Who knows, maybe it’ll actually work out between you too.”

Rose sighed and shrugged. “If he likes me.” She mumbled twirling a strand of hair. “What do you mean?” Lily asked. “Derek broke up with me. Something must be wrong with me.” Rose replied shrugging again. “I’m either way to smart for a guy or I’m just not pretty.” She said. Lily sat up and frowned at Rose. “What are you talking about? Rosie you’re the best girl I know.” Lily said. “Your funny, smart, beautiful! Nothings wrong with you.” Rose looked at Lily and smiled. “Thanks Lil. You always know how to make a person smile.

“It’s my job.” Lily replied hugging Rose. “Well we better go to Hogsmeade to pick out costumes.” Rose nodded her head in agreement and both girls changed into comfortable clothes before heading back down to the Great Hall. They sat down at the Gryffindor Table, waiting for the caretaker to come in tell the students they could go to the Hogsmeade. “So you know who your going with?” Rose asked looking at Lily. “Yeah, Blake Thomas asked me yesterday.” Lily replied smiling.

Rose and Lily continued talking about the dance until Xander entered the Great Hall, announcing that the student could leave before sulking out of the place. “Let’s go Rosie.” Lily remarked getting up and practically running out of the hall. “She is so excited.” Rose said smiling and rolling her eyes.

Maxilocks 08-23-2009 02:40 AM

Oooh, update!

Great chapter, hunny, it was fun reading it.
Have fun at school, and post more when you can.

I'll be waiting, of course. ;)


JeshieRAWR 08-23-2009 06:09 AM

Great chapter Marcyluff!!
I can't wait to see what happens when Scorpius and Rose meet each other!
P.S. I totally understand about the whole school thing and everything else. Can't wait to wish you a happy birthday!
:) Jess

harita 08-23-2009 07:18 AM

good chapter...happy birthday in advance...i am prone to forget things especially dates...have a nice day...:-)

Slytherin Princess 08-23-2009 02:15 PM

:woot:

i absoulutly enjoyed it :D


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