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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kasey Ann Parker Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
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I couldn't help but submit another story! I just got another idea and knew I had to submit it, so here it is. It's kind of like A Cinderella Story, but with a few tweaks here and there. Hope you enjoy it. 
______________________________________________ CHARACTER OWNAGE: (In order of appearance)
Rose Weasley ; Albus Severus Potter ; The Fat Lady, Scorpius Malfoy ; Lily Luna Potter ; Hugo Weasley ; George Weasley ; Ron Weasley ; Hermione Weasley (Granger) ; Harry Potter ; Ginny Potter (Weasley) ; Molly Weasley
- J.K. Rowling
Professor Quinn ; Elizabeth Carter ; Jen, Derek Turner ; Kelly Zambini ; Lloyd Goyle ; Herald Crabbe ; Poppy Parkinson ; Caretaker Xander ; Professor Linden ; Andrew ; Catalin ; Jenn ; Cameron Spinalie
- ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫ PLOT - ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫ STORY BANNER: Anna Banana - You did an awesome job Anna!
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I know some people hate having to look through tons of comments for new chapters (i know i do) so here are the links to each chapter! Chapter 1--Chapter 2--Chapter 3--Chapter 4--Chapter 5--Chapter 6--Chapter 7--Chapter 8 Chapter 9--Chapter 10--Chapter 11--Chapter 12--Chapter 13--Chapter 14--Chapter 15--Chapter 16 Chapter 17--Chapter 18--Chapter 19--Chapter 20--Chapter 21--Chapter 22--Chapter 23--Chapter 24 Chapter 25-- Love Is Dangerous Chapter 1: Young Love Stinks Rose Weasley sat in Transfiguration doodling in her notebook, completely oblivious to what the professor was saying. The lined paper was covered in hearts, a few with writing in it. Some said D.T + R.W, or Mrs. Derek Turner.
Rose and Derek had been dating since their fifth year, and Rose really thought she had found the one, the one for her. “Ms. Weasley? Ms. Weasley! Kindly pay attention to the class. You can doodle how much you love Mr. Turner later.” Professor Quinn said turning back to the chalkboard. Rose blushed, her cheeks matching the color of her hair. “Sorry professor.” She replied closing her notebook. She was glad that Derek wasn’t in the same class as her. He was seven floors below her in Potions.
The bell rang ending the day of classes. Rose grabbed her things, putting them away in her bag. She slung the bag onto her shoulder and left the room for the Gryffindor Common Room. As she walked down the corridor her cousin Albus came out of an empty classroom. Rose smiled at him and asked, “Hey Al. Had a good day?” Albus returned the smile. “Yeah, it was pretty good. Glad the weekend is starting.” He replied sighing. His day hadn’t been that great. He had just finished making a fool of himself in front of Elizabeth Carter.
Rose nodded. “Yeah me too. Finally get to spend time with Derek.”
“Must be hard to find time together. Since he’s in Ravenclaw and all. What’s worse is that it’s N.E.W.T year.”
Rose nodded again, but smiled. “We made time in our busy study schedule for a date tonight.” They arrived outside the Fat Lady’s portrait and Al gave the password before replying. “Oh that’s nice.” Rose and Albus walked through the portrait hole into the cheery common room. They said goodbye and went off towards their own dormitory.
Rose set her bag down next to her bed and flung her wardrobe open. She sorted through her closet, looking for a dress to wear. She pulled a green one out and put it on with black capri tights that went up to her knees. She found matching heels and pinned her hair up.
She looked herself over in the mirror and grabbed her purse, leaving the dorm just as one of her roommates came in. “Going somewhere Rose?” She asked smiling. “Hey Jen, got a date with Derek.” Rose replied. “Well have fun then.”
Rose closed the dorm door and went down to the entrance hall to wait for Derek. He arrived a few minutes later, a small smile on his face. He looked at Rose and said, “You look nice.” Rose smiled back and twirled around, showing her dress off. “Why thank you. Shall we get going? My treat tonight.” She asked holding her purse up. Derek nodded simply and took Rose’s hand.
They walked to Hogsmeade, talking about how their day had been and how they hated having so much homework. Finally they arrived at the little village, making their way over to the new restaurant, Madam Florres’s Kitchen.
The little house elf seated them, giving them their menus. Through the entire evening Rose felt that Derek was a little distant from her, not his normal talkative self. She decided to let it pass, he would probably tell her later, she thought smiling at Derek. ••• “I had a good time Derek.” Rose said as the two arrived outside the portrait hole. Derek nodded and turned ready to leave, but Rose grabbed his wrist, forcing him to look at her. “Derek what’s going on with you?” She searched his hazel with her brown ones. They were the only trait that she had inherited from her mother.
Derek sighed taking Roses hands in his. “Rose, I…I don’t know this – uh – relationship.” He began, unsure on how to say what he was trying to say. “Rose I love you, but I can't…we can’t go out anymore.” Derek finished, letting go of Roses hands.
Her brown eyes were swimming with tears that Rose couldn’t keep them from sliding down her face. Derek was breaking up her? She looked at him, furious and yelled, “Derek you don’t tell a girl you love her and then dump her!” Derek shrugged and walked off to his own common room.
Rose stood there in the empty corridor, tears streaming down her face. The Fat Lady looked down at the young, crying, red head. She clicked her tongue and hiccupped. “Young love,” Hiccup. “So…sp dangerous.” Another hiccup. Rose turned to face the painting. “Oh shut up you drunk old hag!” She then began running, where? She didn’t know, just as long as she was far from that horrid spot.
She ended up outside, by the lake. Rose sat down by the edge of the water, taking her shoes off. New tear formed and fell down her cheeks. ‘This can’t get any worse!’ She thought sobbing. ________________________________________
Well there you go! What do you think? I need FIVE people to comment for the next chapter! Five DIFFERENT people!
Thanks,
Marcy
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Last edited by ♫♪MarcyMoo♪♫; 01-13-2010 at 10:38 PM.
Reason: Adding Chapters!
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