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Chapter #1
The Beginning

“There is a cosmic dance of creation”


Things had not been so bad, lately. Fred and George had agreed to let her help them in their shop over the summer, and she had definitely grown a few inches. She was a little over the height of five feet six inches now and, as far as Ginny Weasley was concerned, it was more than fine.

She met the twins on her way upstairs, and noticed that they were carrying armfuls of what looked like mashed, sticky lumps of wet paper. “Mum’s in the kitchen,” she said, before they could open their mouths to ask. “Better Apparate, she’s not too happy.”

Molly Weasley would not be, of course – not when she knew half a dozen members of the Order were coming to dinner, and she had a bare half hour to cook a scrumptious meal, not only for them, but also her brood of seven kids. Not to count Harry and Hermione – both of whom had come over for the summer – and a tired Mr. Weasley.

Fred and George had other things on their mind, though. “I’m not sure if we can Apparate with all this in our arms,” Fred said, looking slightly worried. “Is she really that angry?” Ever since their shop had proved itself such a massive success, Molly Weasley had stopped trying to convince them to give up their ideas of a joke shop, and return to Hogwarts; but a spell of Molly-Weasley-bad-mood still meant that caution was required.

“More than you know,” Ginny replied, her eyes glinting as she surveyed the supplies in the twins’ arms. “What are those anyway?”

“That’s classified,” George said, looking smug. “We shall see you... later.” He turned to Fred, and there was a certain sparkle of mischief in his eyes that Ginny did not fail to notice. “Shall we give it a try then, George?”

Fred nodded. “Indeed, brother.”

There was a crack, and the two of them disappeared into thin air. Ginny shook her head, using one of the gloves in the pocket of her jeans to pick up a portion of the paper-lump that had fallen out of Fred and George’s laden arms, when they had taken to Apparition. On closer inspection, it looked like snow frozen in place, and it shimmered when she held it up to the light. A sudden urge to re-examine it later, overwhelmed her and, wrapping it in her glove, Ginny stowed it into a back pocket of her faded jeans.

It was late in the afternoon, and she was looking forward to a nap, now. Today had been her last day helping the twins with their joke shop, for tomorrow would see the Hogwarts Engine whisking her away to her second home. Her mind still on the shop, she made her way into her bedroom – it was small, made to seem smaller by a massive poster of her favourite quidditch team adorning an entire wall – and was surprised to see a tawny owl perched at the window-sill, looking slightly dazed as if it had collided with the transparent window-pane, in an effort to hop into the room.

“You poor thing!”

The owl hooted rather faintly in response. If it had been a person, Ginny thought as she crossed the floor and opened the window, I would have thought they were drunk. The bird hopped in, tried to rub its head against her hand as she stroked it, and then held out a leg. Ginny quickly untied the envelope attached to it, and was surprised to see that it bore the Hogwarts crest. Did this mean that she was in trouble? Sure, the last thing she had done before returning home for the summer was to turn Millicent Bulstrode's hair a flaming pink but, surely, Dumbledore would not write to her parents now, now that the holidays had pretty much come to an end.

“You won’t find out if you don’t open it, you know.”

Ginny turned; the speaker was the oval-shaped mirror mounted on the wall opposite. “Thanks for the info of the century, mirror man,” she said, shaking red locks out of her eyes as, with a sparkle in them, she tore open the envelope and plunged a hand outside. Something golden and scarlet fell to the floor, something golden and scarlet and rather metallic. What followed next was an exclamation filled with clear surprise.

“My God, I’m a Prefect!”


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{ Index }

[] Chapter #01 :: The Beginning
[] Chapter #02 :: Head Boy
[] Chapter #03 :: The Coming of Destiny
[] Chapter #04 :: The Prologue to no Escape
[] Chapter #05 :: Companionship
[] Chapter #06 :: A Brief History of Time
[] Chapter #07 :: Blanket
[] Chapter #08 :: Leonti
[] Chapter #09 :: Ambush
[] Chapter #10 :: The Entrance to Pre-Death
[] Chapter #11 :: The Eye of Fate
[] Chapter #12 :: The Fire of Regelia
[] Chapter #13 :: Better than Chocolate
[] Chapter #14 :: Our Iron Bridges
[] Chapter #15 :: The Final Separation
[] Chapter #16 :: Love Cancels Love
[] Chapter #17 :: The Tree of Solutions
[] Chapter #18 :: The Proof of Humanity
[] Chapter #19 :: The End of the Beginning
[] Endnotes {and disclaimers}

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Chapter #13
Better Than Chocolate
"How does it happen that birds sing, that snow melts, that the rose unfolds, that the dawn whitens behind the stark shapes of trees on the quivering summit of the hill?"


Ginny Weasley woke up in a state of warmth like she had not felt for days. She sat up, realized her head no longer hurt and, looking to her right, saw an enormous fire – the source of the heat she was experiencing – nearby. On her left stretched a stream of water, water that shone in the silver of a half-moon.

“Head alright, blood-traitor?”

The cold drawl was Malfoy’s and, as he sat down next to her, he looked anything but pleased to see her. Ginny’s face immediately scrunched up into dislike. “It’s fine, no thanks to you, Malfoy,” she replied hotly.

“No thanks to me?” Malfoy asked, raising an eyebrow. “I’m the one who fixed it, you dimwit, it was broken when I apparated you here from that fire you caused,” he said scathingly. “Would have applied a size-reducing charm too – that head is too big for the rest of your body – but I was pretty sure it wouldn’t work on a thing that stupid.”

“Shut up,” she snapped, stung by the remarks. “I didn’t start that fire, Malfoy, and I could have fixed my head myself. Where are we anyway? The Land of the Stray Donkeys?”

“Forest. Same as before.” He had not been sure where to take her, but this had seemed the safest place from the little places he did know, around here. Besides, now that he had his wand again, they were safe, with nothing to fear from any wizard- or witch-hunter.

“The same?” Ginny asked incredulously. “Malfoy, you hag, we’re in danger here. Or hasn’t that penetrated your thick skull yet?” She added something that sounded rather like “son of an idiot” and, when he smirked in response, glared at him. It was then that she noticed the blood matted around his fist, and the care with which he moved it.

It must hurt, she realized, on slightly closer inspection. Malfoy watched her with a smirk on his face, and by that alone she could tell that he was inwardly furious that she had seen the injury. When her eyes did not wander, he tried to whip the fist out of sight – only to wince terribly.

Ginny raised an eyebrow at this display of stupidity. “I can tell it’s broken,” she snapped. “You needn’t be afraid that I’ll take any advantage of that.”

“Me? Afraid?” The fury magnified the sarcasm in his voice. “Just get out my face, blood-traitor, my body isn’t your problem.” The hurt in her face must have showed for once because, suddenly, he looked away.

For a moment, both of them sat in silence, then Ginny reached forward, as if to touch his hand. “Don’t touch me, blood-traitor,” he spat angrily, but she only rolled her eyes in response. He was, she had realized by now, immune to sympathy. It angered him, if anything, made him feel like he had to defend himself -- In the environment he had been brought up in, to feel humanely was to commit a crime.

Stupid guy, thinks it makes him weak.

“Don’t be an idiot, Malfoy, you can’t go around with that,” she said angrily, her tones making clear that she would not let him boss her around on this matter. “Give me your wand, I can fix it.”

“Aren’t you happy I’m physically disabled, melon-head?”

She sighed, realized any argument with him was, as usual, plain useless, and reached for the wand sticking out of the back pocket of his jeans – only to realize there were two, not one, wands there. Her eyes narrowed, and Malfoy grabbed one and threw it at her. “No need to be suspicious, Weasley – it’s yours, I summoned it after we apparated here. Seems like those idiotic muggles had your pea-brain – never destroyed our wands.”

Her reply was brief and very curt:

“Give me your hand, Malfoy.”

Under normal circumstances, he would not have. He would, in fact, have retorted with a fancy sentence or two, the kind that would be sure to set her tongue on fire. But these, the ones they were in, were not normal circumstances. His hand was badly injured, and the cold made it worse, made the pain more unbearable. It took, indeed, all of his half-broken strength not to show how awfully the thing ached. Grudgingly, he held it out and, without a word, Ginny tapped it thrice with the end of her wand. For a brief moment, it stung – then it healed as if it had never been damaged.

He held it up, examined it in the light of the fire. “Congratulations, Weaselhead,” he said finally, his tones anything but grateful. “You managed to fix it without making my finger sprout extra hands.”

“You’re welcome,” Ginny said sarcastically, but the words stung. He could have said thank you, he could have –

Not wanting to think about it, she stood up and moved away from him, taking a seat by the other side of the fire, the edge where the sand softened into wetness, and the gushing river – not the one she had seen the lion by, she realized upon a little examination – began. For several moments, she sat at its edge, shoes placed besides her and feet dipped into the cool water, and then she looked his way, a lump suddenly forming at the back of her throat.

Why was he so rude to her? Granted, she was rude to him too, but he ... He didn’t care if she was rude, while she wanted him not to be rude to her. He was a Malfoy, someone she had hated all her life, but the past few days had shown her a new side of him, one that astounded her. He would, she could almost swear, not leave her in danger, if he knew of it - he would let himself get hurt, but he would do, she seemed to realize now, all in his power to save her - no, not her, but any girl.

Why did that thought sting?

Does he care? she thought quietly. No, he didn’t or perhaps, just perhaps, she thought he couldn’t. But then why was he taking care of her – in, of course, his own, cold way – making sure no harm came to her? Did he just need her for company?

Was he a good kisser?

Oh God... What was she thinking? Ginny slapped herself mentally, but she could not help looking at him. Sitting against the trunk of a tree, he looked graceful, too handsome, the white-blonde hair falling into steel-grey eyes as was its wont. He had always been graceful, had always possessed the kind of etiquette no one else that she knew had. But maybe that was because he came from a rich family, the kind where such etiquette was a way of life.

She didn’t want to think of him.



Was she watching him? Draco looked up, saw her glance away - her fiery red hair like shining silk in the firelight - and the words the man in her cell had uttered came back to him.

You’re a beautiful thing, aren’t you? It’s a shame, they’re going to burn you.

Beautiful. She was certainly beautiful – that, she had grown slowly over the past three years. But there was a change in her, this time round. Perhaps she had – no, not perhaps, definitely she had – grown more womanly, much more womanly, over the summer. She was no longer just a pretty girl – she could attract men, seduce them if she wanted, and she knew that. But that was not all -- there was a kind of dignity in her, a kind of fire that very few of the women he knew, possessed. She liked a good fight, was not the kind to give up - yes, she really was not some silly, chocolate-and-flower teenager. She would not weep over little things, would not back out of a challenge -- she could hold her own and, at the end of the day, she did not need him to protect her.

Why did that thought sting?



Overhead, the clouds gathered in rich grey-black, threatening to burst into downpour any moment. The wind was colder now, and he looked at her again, wondering if she was cold from the weather. Their eyes met briefly, and then – he could not stop himself – he had walked over to her.

“Your feet are in the water, Weasley. You’ll catch a cold.”

She did not respond, but stood up. Her thoughts were a mess, and she wanted to get away from him for the time-being. “I’m going to find myself something to eat, Malfoy, I can’t live on sweets,” she informed him roughly, making to push past him. He did not know what made him do it, but he caught her by the shoulders before she could leave, and stepped into the water.

It was cold and it wet his shoes – reached his knees – but he did not care. She was soft to the touch, almost like rose petals, and she smelled good, a soft, rich scent that was so woman. Ginny felt breathless, like frozen panic or ice or something indescribable, did nothing to resist as he pulled her towards him, pulled her into the water, and leaned down to kiss her on the lips.

He was an amazing kisser, by far the best she had ever known, and Ginny felt dizzy, too dizzy by his touch. She grabbed the front of his robes to stay upright, kissed him back as his lips pressed against her, and her response made him pull her deeper into the water, pull her till the water ripped a little way below his, and a little way above her, waist.

They were demanding, his lips, and they grew more demanding when she did not oppose his actions. Chilled, Ginny pulled closer to him for warmth, her soft body moulding perfectly into his strong one. He smelled like citric acid or lemon juice or – What am I doing?

“No,” she said, shoving him off with all the strength she could muster. There was alarm in her voice, a breathless sort of panic. “No, Malfoy, we can’t –”

He grabbed her by the shoulders, pushed her against the bank and pressed his lips down on hers, until she was forced to fall silent, until she could no longer find a voice to protest or even speak. She wrapped her arms around his neck, pushed herself passionately into the kiss. It felt wrong no longer, for how could anything so warm, so delicious not be right, be against any rules? What were rules anyway? This – this was better than chocolate, than anything she had ever tasted, and she wanted it to continue, wanted it to last forever –

He pulled away, letting go of her so suddenly, Ginny lost balance and nearly fell over. The wind, picking speed, whipped fiery red hair in her eyes, sprayed her with foaming, frothing water. The tide was growing wild and her heart, thumping like a wild thing against her chest, seemed to ready to jump out of her throat.

“Malfoy,” she said, but he pushed her away, walked over to the fire and, conjuring a sleeping bag, began to prepare a bed.

She had hated him all her life, and now she wanted him, suddenly wanted him so badly. He wasn't - not really - what she had always thought him to be, was he? Ginny swallowed the lump that rose in her throat, climbed out of the water and went over to him. “Malfoy,” she began.

“Go to sleep.” He sounded almost savage, did not look at her as he spoke. “Go to sleep, or I’ll hurt you, Weasley.”

For a moment, she wondered whether to speak again, whether to say anything – anything! – and then, tired, weary, confused – a bundle of emotions she could make no attempt to understand – she walked away, conjured a sleeping bag, and fell into a deep, dreamless sleep of super exhaustion.

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woaw...cool...that was so,so Dracoish...hehehe...awesome...now i can see alot of promising romance coming up...hehehehe...waiting for more Maxie...
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I loved writing this chapter, you know. It's the one this ficcie is named after, actually - but I guess you could already tell that. =DD



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Dracoish? Is that a good thing? xDD



I loved writing this chapter, you know. It's the one this ficcie is named after, actually - but I guess you could already tell that. =DD



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well Dracoish is really...well...what...it is Dracoish...lol...something very much like Draco and his personality...the guy full of attitude...guy with real strong feelings whether good or bad in his own unique way...just like how he cared for Ginny in his cold way...he felt so passionately about her and kiss her so passionately and then just leave her like that saying he 'might hurt her'...now that is what i call something like Dracoish...something that Draco is capable of doing...
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well Dracoish is really...well...what...it is Dracoish...lol...something very much like Draco and his personality...the guy full of attitude...guy with real strong feelings whether good or bad in his own unique way...just like how he cared for Ginny in his cold way...he felt so passionately about her and kiss her so passionately and then just leave her like that saying he 'might hurt her'...now that is what i call something like Dracoish...something that Draco is capable of doing...
I have to say, that was VERY well-explained, and I absolutely get what you mean. You make Draco sound... ten times better! Hehe.


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I have to say, that was VERY well-explained, and I absolutely get what you mean. You make Draco sound... ten times better! Hehe.

Thanks Maxie...and i am waiting for your next post soon...what will happen to Ginny and Draco in the forest or in Ginny's favorite words 'in the land of stray donkeys'...lol...
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Thanks Maxie...and i am waiting for your next post soon...what will happen to Ginny and Draco in the forest or in Ginny's favorite words 'in the land of stray donkeys'...lol...
You're most welcome, sweetie. Maybe Draco and Ginny will fall into a rabbit-hole, and find themselves in the world of Alice in Wonderland?

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LORD Malfoy?! Lord?!
LMAO!
I love how highly Draco thinks of himself… as he should, for being such a perfect yummy mini-veela.

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What is he, a descendant of the family of stray donkeys? she thought furiously
LMAOOO!
HAHA!

Awww, how could you relate such a foul man to our precious Mr. Donkey, Maxers?!

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DRACO TO THE RESCUE!!

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The man whose fault the situation was screamed at the top of his lungs as he tried to flee, tripped over Malfoy’s outstretched leg -- and fell headfirst into the fire.
OMG.
That cracked me up. Did Draco seriously just trip him on purpose?!
LMFAOO.
I just find it so funny how they're like in this super serious, dangerous situation and the way Draco solves it is tripping the bad guy…
This is almost as funny as imagining a stray donkey on that chapter back then.

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I CAN'T BELIEVE I'M BLACKING OUT AGAIN!
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Uh-oh, this isn't a good time to black out, though, Ginny! How's Draco gonna get you out of here now?!
Oh, carry you?

C'mon now! Where's the next chapter, eh?!!?
You can't leave us hanging like this, Maxers! D: This is getting soooo good, seriously. I'm just sad we never got to see Draco in tights or Ginny in pretty dresses. But I guess getting to see him trip some evil muggle into a fire should be enough.

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Oh wow am I like late, or what?
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You know, I actually find that the title FITS him.
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Awww, how could you relate such a foul man to our precious Mr. Donkey, Maxers?!
I didn't, DeeLee, I really didn't! It's Ginny who did.

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That cracked me up. Did Draco seriously just trip him on purpose?!
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I just find it so funny how they're like in this super serious, dangerous situation and the way Draco solves it is tripping the bad guy…
Draco: I have style, lady, I have style. -eyes you-
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Oh, carry you?

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Awww. I'm sorry, bebeh. =[ At least you get loads of Mr. Donkey, and he's a COOL talking donkey, yes he is.
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HAHAHAHA!
Draco has the best insults ever!


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Where are we anyway? The Land of the Stray Donkeys?
LMFAO! I've JUST started reading the chappie and already there's so much making me laugh?! Gee, Maxers, you really want my lung ruptured!

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That line alone...
OMG...
I'm gonna cry.


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Was he a good kisser?

-Falls off chair-
Whoa, whoa, whoa, WHOA! Where did THIS come from, Weaselhead?!
I-- I mean, Ginny. I can't help it Draco's insults are so hilarious I want to copy them.
Looks like somebody crushing on a certain mini-veela…

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she did not need him to protect her.

Why did that thought sting?
Awwwwww!
That made me sad. =[
-Pets Draco-
She needs you, silly!

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x 29487293472984279834728374!!

WHY COULDN'T THAT HAVE BEEN ME?!


OMGGG.
-Faints again-
-Hyperventilates-
-Dies-

DUDEEEEEE.
Okay, let me stop freaking out and continue reading now. (Yeah I answer as I read, not after I'm done ).

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Oooh, a little bossy aren't we?
That's a good Draco!

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“Malfoy,” she said, but he pushed her away, walked over to the fire and, conjuring a sleeping bag, began to prepare a bed.
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTT?!?!?!
DRACO!
WHAT--WHAT--WHAT--!!
!?!?!?!??!

LMFAO!


I'm awestruck right now.
















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POST MORE, MAXERS!!!
Like, right this very second, please!

DUDEEEEEEEE.
This has gotten so good! You can't leave me hanging like this!! YOU CAN'T YOU JUST CAN'T!! -Sobs dramatically-

I must know what happens next!! What're they thinking!? What're they gonna do the following day?! Are they even gonna be able to sleep?! Is Draco gonna cheat on me and kiss Ginny again?!
I MUST KNOW I MUST KNOW I MUST KNOW I MUST KNOWWWWWWW!!!
















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Such a unique compliment. =p
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I do not! *cuts out all funny lines from stowee* =[
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OMGGG.
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Because if you give me a cookie that tastes like him...how do I know?
I mean I don't want to eat it, because he will go bye-bye.
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I am your biggest fan though!
You just hurt his super HUUUGE! ego. =p

But you love Tedddyyy, don't you? *loves on Teddeh too* So that's all good, hehe.

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Second of all, little Gin-Gin can't keep her eyes off of His Hotness.
She's caught on to the fact that "It Feels Good to Be Bad."

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Oh wait a minute, if it's not Draco that i'm eating just a Draco tasting cookie I guess it's okay too eat it....
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Teehee. We can all daydream, can't we? *daydreams Draco*
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Are you kidding? I ADORE my Teddy Bear!
But that's what makes him... him.


Hehe, I adore OUR Teddy Bear, too. =p He's so cute, and I would LOVE to write him, sometime. It would be so adorable! SQUEE!

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Oh wait a minute, if it's not Draco that i'm eating just a Draco tasting cookie I guess it's okay too eat it....
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Thank you Maxerzz!!!! <3333
Teehee. But maybe he tastes like... I dunno, something spicy, or absolutely exotic? That would be more... "Draco-ish," I guess.

Buuttt... you're welcome, luff!

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