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10-24-2009, 02:59 AM
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|  Urdu Mod SS Featured Author Lethifold
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Fyodor Balouch Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Marina Effron Department of Mysteries | Chocolate Kisses - Sa13+ Pwn'ed by James Steampunk Sultan  For Dee<3 with shiny, white teeth,
who forced wanted me to write a fic on Draco,
and who chose its title. ♥ SixteenthFFthreadonSS<3.
* Chapter #1 The Beginning
“There is a cosmic dance of creation”
Things had not been so bad, lately. Fred and George had agreed to let her help them in their shop over the summer, and she had definitely grown a few inches. She was a little over the height of five feet six inches now and, as far as Ginny Weasley was concerned, it was more than fine.
She met the twins on her way upstairs, and noticed that they were carrying armfuls of what looked like mashed, sticky lumps of wet paper. “Mum’s in the kitchen,” she said, before they could open their mouths to ask. “Better Apparate, she’s not too happy.”
Molly Weasley would not be, of course – not when she knew half a dozen members of the Order were coming to dinner, and she had a bare half hour to cook a scrumptious meal, not only for them, but also her brood of seven kids. Not to count Harry and Hermione – both of whom had come over for the summer – and a tired Mr. Weasley.
Fred and George had other things on their mind, though. “I’m not sure if we can Apparate with all this in our arms,” Fred said, looking slightly worried. “Is she really that angry?” Ever since their shop had proved itself such a massive success, Molly Weasley had stopped trying to convince them to give up their ideas of a joke shop, and return to Hogwarts; but a spell of Molly-Weasley-bad-mood still meant that caution was required.
“More than you know,” Ginny replied, her eyes glinting as she surveyed the supplies in the twins’ arms. “What are those anyway?”
“That’s classified,” George said, looking smug. “We shall see you... later.” He turned to Fred, and there was a certain sparkle of mischief in his eyes that Ginny did not fail to notice. “Shall we give it a try then, George?”
Fred nodded. “Indeed, brother.”
There was a crack, and the two of them disappeared into thin air. Ginny shook her head, using one of the gloves in the pocket of her jeans to pick up a portion of the paper-lump that had fallen out of Fred and George’s laden arms, when they had taken to Apparition. On closer inspection, it looked like snow frozen in place, and it shimmered when she held it up to the light. A sudden urge to re-examine it later, overwhelmed her and, wrapping it in her glove, Ginny stowed it into a back pocket of her faded jeans.
It was late in the afternoon, and she was looking forward to a nap, now. Today had been her last day helping the twins with their joke shop, for tomorrow would see the Hogwarts Engine whisking her away to her second home. Her mind still on the shop, she made her way into her bedroom – it was small, made to seem smaller by a massive poster of her favourite quidditch team adorning an entire wall – and was surprised to see a tawny owl perched at the window-sill, looking slightly dazed as if it had collided with the transparent window-pane, in an effort to hop into the room.
“You poor thing!”
The owl hooted rather faintly in response. I f it had been a person, Ginny thought as she crossed the floor and opened the window, I would have thought they were drunk. The bird hopped in, tried to rub its head against her hand as she stroked it, and then held out a leg. Ginny quickly untied the envelope attached to it, and was surprised to see that it bore the Hogwarts crest. Did this mean that she was in trouble? Sure, the last thing she had done before returning home for the summer was to turn Millicent Bulstrode's hair a flaming pink but, surely, Dumbledore would not write to her parents now, now that the holidays had pretty much come to an end.
“You won’t find out if you don’t open it, you know.”
Ginny turned; the speaker was the oval-shaped mirror mounted on the wall opposite. “Thanks for the info of the century, mirror man,” she said, shaking red locks out of her eyes as, with a sparkle in them, she tore open the envelope and plunged a hand outside. Something golden and scarlet fell to the floor, something golden and scarlet and rather metallic. What followed next was an exclamation filled with clear surprise.
“My God, I’m a Prefect!” * { Index } [] Chapter #01 :: The Beginning [] Chapter #02 :: Head Boy [] Chapter #03 :: The Coming of Destiny [] Chapter #04 :: The Prologue to no Escape [] Chapter #05 :: Companionship [] Chapter #06 :: A Brief History of Time [] Chapter #07 :: Blanket [] Chapter #08 :: Leonti [] Chapter #09 :: Ambush [] Chapter #10 :: The Entrance to Pre-Death [] Chapter #11 :: The Eye of Fate [] Chapter #12 :: The Fire of Regelia [] Chapter #13 :: Better than Chocolate [] Chapter #14 :: Our Iron Bridges [] Chapter #15 :: The Final Separation [] Chapter #16 :: Love Cancels Love [] Chapter #17 :: The Tree of Solutions [] Chapter #18 :: The Proof of Humanity [] Chapter #19 :: The End of the Beginning [] Endnotes {and disclaimers}
Last edited by SenoritaMaxie; 11-16-2009 at 05:13 AM.
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10-27-2009, 09:46 AM
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|  Urdu Mod SS Featured Author Lethifold
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| Formerly: xshannonx LPFC Activity Officer Vampire
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MAXSHIEEE has a new FF?!?
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its sooo purtttyyyy.
thread name ♥
writer ♥
YUMMEH.
I has to catch up on Us. I know, family stuff.
loveyou.
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|  Urdu Mod SS Featured Author Lethifold
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Originally Posted by Shanooonneyy ♥ MAXSHIEEE has a new FF?!?
♥ Iwubyou. <3 Quote:
its sooo purtttyyyy.
thread name ♥
writer ♥
Aww, it's good to know that you like it, luff. <3 I have to say, though - that name's there for a reason. Quote:
I has to catch up on Us. I know, family stuff.
loveyou.
It's alright, bebeh, take your time, no worries AT ALL. <3
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Maxieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
I love it! Pahahahaha gred and forge crack me up.
More please, im intregued!!
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10-27-2009, 11:40 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Vanessa Campbell Sixth Year | MaxieluffYAY has a new story?????
-gaspeth-
I love it!!!!!!!!!
Thanks to Dee, we'll have tons more Draco..right?!? xDD
PAMS!
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10-27-2009, 03:12 PM
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|  Urdu Mod SS Featured Author Lethifold
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Originally Posted by Firengine Maxieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
I love it! Pahahahaha gred and forge crack me up.
More please, im intregued!! Firengine! *tackles*
Gred and Forge? Teehee. Quote:
Originally Posted by JeshhLuffYAY MaxieluffYAY has a new story????? I think so. =P Quote: Thanks to Dee, we'll have tons more Draco..right?!? xDD Hehe, yes, LOADS of him. <3 Why am I so excited at the prospect of Dracoliciousness?
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10-27-2009, 03:29 PM
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| | Basilisk
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Vianna Vincenzi Sixth Year | Graphics Star! Victim of the Pokerface NOOOOOOO!! 
-Gets on the floor and starts kicking and screaming-
I wanted to be the first one to post!!   
UWAAAAAAAAAA.
Fine.
I guess I'll have to settle with the 82734827348th spot. =[
Anyway, on to the good stuff. Quote:
For Dee<3 with shiny, white teeth

My teeth appreciate that comment. <333 Quote:
who forced wanted me to write a fic on Draco
 !!! Quote:
and who chose its title.
LMFAO!!  
That was the most evil thing you've ever done to me! You can't make an indecisive person make decisions!
Okay, now I'm going to read. 
-Sits up on the floor and starts reading-
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WOOOOTT!! Congrats, Ginny!!  
Hehehehehehe, I want to know what Fred and George are up to...  Those mischievous two. <3
BUT MOST IMPORTANTLY, I can't wait for my Dracolicious shower scene boy (HEYYYY!! SPEAKING OF WHICH!!! Are you going to bring this beautiful image to life in this fic, Maxie?!?!?  If you do, I will build a golden statue in your honor and praise you every single day of my life like WHOA. <3333) to make his grand entrance... 
Just thinking about it makes me all giddy like a little schoolgirl in love...
DRACOOOOO.
<3
I heart Maxers, and you're absolutely awesome and amazing for making a Draco fic!  
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10-27-2009, 03:29 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nataly Silverlock Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Isabella LaMourette Magical Maintenance | early riser *yawns* Maxie has a new story!!
Oooh, Draco/Ginny, my second favourite ship
And with the twins it's going to be even better. =]
Dee? The banner is awesome! =D
PAMS!
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10-27-2009, 04:08 PM
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|  Urdu Mod SS Featured Author Lethifold
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Originally Posted by DeeLeeLuffee Fine.
I guess I'll have to settle with the 82734827348th spot. =[ Umm... fourth? Quote:
That was the most evil thing you've ever done to me! You can't make an indecisive person make decisions! But you DIIIID! You chose from three titles I could never have chosen from! *eats you to show how grateful I am* Quote:
-Sits up on the floor and starts reading-
*hands over sofa* ^^ I sorta wrote this fic BEFORE you came up with Shower!Draco. *hides again* Butt... well... you'll get enough Draco, maybe? xDD Quote:
I heart Maxers, and you're absolutely awesome and amazing for making a Draco fic!
Aww, thank you, luff. <3 Quote:
Originally Posted by Natalirina Maxie has a new story!! Natalirina! *tackleglomp* Welcome to CK, luff. Quote:
Oooh, Draco/Ginny, my second favourite ship
I've been a D/G shipper since a gazillion years, I LOVE Draco&&Ginny together. <3 So... Which HP ship is your VERY favourite? =DD Quote:
And with the twins it's going to be even better. =]
Awww, me no sure if they're going to make another appearance ...
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10-27-2009, 04:37 PM
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| Yearbook Graphicer Crup
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nataly Silverlock Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie Natalirina! *tackleglomp* Welcome to CK, luff. I've been a D/G shipper since a gazillion years, I LOVE Draco&&Ginny together. <3 So... Which HP ship is your VERY favourite? =DD Awww, me no sure if they're going to make another appearance ...
*zips mouth* As you see from my banner, it's Dramione =]
Actually, only because of that I became interested in HP again and became a crazy fan!
But they're still in the fic ^___^
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10-27-2009, 04:45 PM
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|  Urdu Mod SS Featured Author Lethifold
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Originally Posted by Nataly As you see from my banner, it's Dramione =] I love Dramione, too! But D/G has always seemed to have more chemistry. She's fiery, he's acidic - perfect, the stuff dreams are made of! Quote:
Actually, only because of that I became interested in HP again and became a crazy fan! Sounds nice, sounds nice. =DD |
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10-28-2009, 12:05 AM
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| Go Ginny....prefect!!
Great great great start. I can't wait to read more!! Shell |
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10-28-2009, 06:08 AM
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I love the fan fic name and the banner just made me
lolol.
nice Maxie <33
- WENZ!
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Originally Posted by Shellerz Great great great start. I can't wait to read more!! Thanks, luff! && welcome to CK. =DD Quote:
Originally Posted by Wenzter I love the fan fic name and the banner just made me  WENZTER! *madtackleglompslykmad* You're HERRRE! |
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10-29-2009, 12:03 AM
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| | Basilisk
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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie Umm... fourth? Not good enough. D= Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie But you DIIIID! You chose from three titles I could never have chosen from! *eats you to show how grateful I am* =[
But it was haaaaard. 
And now I'm imprisoned in your tummy! Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie *hands over sofa* ^^ You're so considerate, my Maxers. Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie I sorta wrote this fic BEFORE you came up with Shower!Draco. *hides again* Butt... well... you'll get enough Draco, maybe? xDD Drats, that's true. 
Well, add it in there anyway! >=O  !
It'll pump up the ratings. Quote:
Originally Posted by Vampire_BaD_GiRl Dee? The banner is awesome! =D Thaaanks, Nat, glad you liked it!
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|  Urdu Mod SS Featured Author Lethifold
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Originally Posted by DeeLeeLuffeee Not good enough. D= Does it help that this ficcie is dedicated to YOUUU? <3 Quote:
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But it was haaaaard. 
And now I'm imprisoned in your tummy! But you did it! Not to mention that my tummy is a good place. Don't you agree? xDD Quote:
It'll pump up the ratings. Shower!Draco is MINE. Mine, I tell you, only MIIINE. *eats him*
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yeesssss! I'm heerrrreee.. *hugglesyoulikewhoa!*
I love Dramione tandem but I'm a big Ron/Hermione supporter
but I think this FF would make me a huge Dramione fan..
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|  Urdu Mod SS Featured Author Lethifold
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Originally Posted by Wenzter yeesssss! I'm heerrrreee.. *hugglesyoulikewhoa!* *hugback* Quote:
I love Dramione tandem but I'm a big Ron/Hermione supporter Hehe, they're cute in cannon, methinks. I like those two together! =DD Quote:
but I think this FF would make me a huge Dramione fan..
Eeep, I hope not! It's Draco/ Ginny.  |
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| Tom's Shnuggle Colour Crazy Prongs' Left Hoof Bonnie's Curls-ez Hippogriff
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| Urdulicious Duckie Maxie!
You started your new FF, didn't you? Well, I'm here now, and you had better give me VIP treatment because I DESERVE it for being here. Lol.. love the banner, it's really pretty. Good job Dee!
Love the little quote too. Cosmic dance of creation. Very nice.
Must read the rest. : )
Love,
~~Jay~~
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|  Urdu Mod SS Featured Author Lethifold
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Originally Posted by Jay You started your new FF, didn't you? Well, I'm here now, and you had better give me VIP treatment because I DESERVE it for being here. Teehee! Welcome to CK, luffie. =] Quote: Love the little quote too. Cosmic dance of creation. Very nice.
Must read the rest. : ) Thank you! It's not my own, though - that's Denis Postle for you!
Take your time. ^^ |
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Molly Weasley would not be, of course – not when she knew half a dozen members of the Order were coming to dinner, and she had a bare half hour to cook a scrumptious meal, not only for them, but also her brood of seven kids. Not to count Harry and Hermione – both of whom had come over for the summer – and a tired Mr. Weasley.
Aww. *pets her* Quote:
Sure, the last thing she had done before returning home for the summer was to turn Millicent Bulstrode's hair a flaming pink but, surely, Dumbledore would not write to her parents now, now that the holidays had pretty much come to an end.
Hehe.. Quite the devil, I lyk that! Quote:
“My God, I’m a Prefect!”
Congratulations, Ginny!
Good first chapter, Maxo. So this is going to be done in chapters?
Love,
~~Jay~~
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|  Urdu Mod SS Featured Author Lethifold
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Originally Posted by Jay Good first chapter, Maxo. Thanks a bunch, hunny. =] Quote:
So this is going to be done in chapters?
Yes, it is. They'll get longer as the story progresses, might I add.  |
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| Urdulicious Duckie Oooh, that's fine! More reading material!
But I wanted to ask... what year is Ginny in? Prefects are made in fifth, sixth and seventh years, so which year is she?
Love,
~~Jay~~
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|  Urdu Mod SS Featured Author Lethifold
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Originally Posted by Jay But I wanted to ask... what year is Ginny in? Prefects are made in fifth, sixth and seventh years, so which year is she? Sixth! =] I have this little back-story in mind, where one of the prefects from the year before transfer to another school, so there's a position open, and Dumbledore decides she's the best person to fill it. But I really couldn't embed that into the story. |
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