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10-24-2009, 01:59 AM
| | | Chocolate Kisses - Sa13+   The 2nd Golden Goblin Awards  For Dee<3 with shiny, white teeth,
who forced wanted me to write a fic on Draco,
and who chose its title. ♥ SixteenthFFthreadonSS<3.
* Chapter #1 The Beginning
“There is a cosmic dance of creation”
Things had not been so bad, lately. Fred and George had agreed to let her help them in their shop over the summer, and she had definitely grown a few inches. She was a little over the height of five feet six inches now and, as far as Ginny Weasley was concerned, it was more than fine.
She met the twins on her way upstairs, and noticed that they were carrying armfuls of what looked like mashed, sticky lumps of wet paper. “Mum’s in the kitchen,” she said, before they could open their mouths to ask. “Better Apparate, she’s not too happy.”
Molly Weasley would not be, of course – not when she knew half a dozen members of the Order were coming to dinner, and she had a bare half hour to cook a scrumptious meal, not only for them, but also her brood of seven kids. Not to count Harry and Hermione – both of whom had come over for the summer – and a tired Mr. Weasley.
Fred and George had other things on their mind, though. “I’m not sure if we can Apparate with all this in our arms,” Fred said, looking slightly worried. “Is she really that angry?” Ever since their shop had proved itself such a massive success, Molly Weasley had stopped trying to convince them to give up their ideas of a joke shop, and return to Hogwarts; but a spell of Molly-Weasley-bad-mood still meant that caution was required.
“More than you know,” Ginny replied, her eyes glinting as she surveyed the supplies in the twins’ arms. “What are those anyway?”
“That’s classified,” George said, looking smug. “We shall see you... later.” He turned to Fred, and there was a certain sparkle of mischief in his eyes that Ginny did not fail to notice. “Shall we give it a try then, George?”
Fred nodded. “Indeed, brother.”
There was a crack, and the two of them disappeared into thin air. Ginny shook her head, using one of the gloves in the pocket of her jeans to pick up a portion of the paper-lump that had fallen out of Fred and George’s laden arms, when they had taken to Apparition. On closer inspection, it looked like snow frozen in place, and it shimmered when she held it up to the light. A sudden urge to re-examine it later, overwhelmed her and, wrapping it in her glove, Ginny stowed it into a back pocket of her faded jeans.
It was late in the afternoon, and she was looking forward to a nap, now. Today had been her last day helping the twins with their joke shop, for tomorrow would see the Hogwarts Engine whisking her away to her second home. Her mind still on the shop, she made her way into her bedroom – it was small, made to seem smaller by a massive poster of her favourite quidditch team adorning an entire wall – and was surprised to see a tawny owl perched at the window-sill, looking slightly dazed as if it had collided with the transparent window-pane, in an effort to hop into the room.
“You poor thing!”
The owl hooted rather faintly in response. I f it had been a person, Ginny thought as she crossed the floor and opened the window, I would have thought they were drunk. The bird hopped in, tried to rub its head against her hand as she stroked it, and then held out a leg. Ginny quickly untied the envelope attached to it, and was surprised to see that it bore the Hogwarts crest. Did this mean that she was in trouble? Sure, the last thing she had done before returning home for the summer was to turn Millicent Bulstrode's hair a flaming pink but, surely, Dumbledore would not write to her parents now, now that the holidays had pretty much come to an end.
“You won’t find out if you don’t open it, you know.”
Ginny turned; the speaker was the oval-shaped mirror mounted on the wall opposite. “Thanks for the info of the century, mirror man,” she said, shaking red locks out of her eyes as, with a sparkle in them, she tore open the envelope and plunged a hand outside. Something golden and scarlet fell to the floor, something golden and scarlet and rather metallic. What followed next was an exclamation filled with clear surprise.
“My God, I’m a Prefect!” * { Index } [] Chapter #01 :: The Beginning [] Chapter #02 :: Head Boy [] Chapter #03 :: The Coming of Destiny [] Chapter #04 :: The Prologue to no Escape [] Chapter #05 :: Companionship [] Chapter #06 :: A Brief History of Time [] Chapter #07 :: Blanket [] Chapter #08 :: Leonti [] Chapter #09 :: Ambush [] Chapter #10 :: The Entrance to Pre-Death [] Chapter #11 :: The Eye of Fate [] Chapter #12 :: The Fire of Regelia [] Chapter #13 :: Better than Chocolate [] Chapter #14 :: Our Iron Bridges [] Chapter #15 :: The Final Separation [] Chapter #16 :: Love Cancels Love [] Chapter #17 :: The Tree of Solutions [] Chapter #18 :: The Proof of Humanity [] Chapter #19 :: The End of the Beginning [] Endnotes {and disclaimers} |
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Update, update?
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Although I would like the post....soon. 
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Although I would like the post....soon. 
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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie Wow, you guys are demanding! 
Gimme some minutes, luff! *tackleglomp* It's your fault for being such a darned awesome writer!
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| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Chapter # 19 The End of the Beginning “Relativity unifies space with time.”
Her success lay, clearly, in the fact that she had caught him off guard – in his surprise, he could not push her away in time, and her lips had forced themselves on his before he could so much as attempt to gather his wits.
It felt hasty only for a moment – than it was silent and sweet and delicious, like a cool drink of water after days of thirst, or like she had come home after walking ten thousand miles without food or drink. She buried herself deeper into him and, slowly but surely, Draco’s arms wrapped themselves around her.
He had felt shock course through his frame, when her lips had touched hers, shock because this was the last thing he had expected from Ginevra Weasley - he had known he had hurt her, more than once, but he had known, too, how impossible a relationship between the two of them would be -- and that in mind, he had somehow managed to persuade himself the spark had been momentary, that no love existed, only a burning sort of flame that return to Hogwarts would extinguish with ease. But his arms rose to hold her now, and he realized how steel-like the walls of love were, how stubborn because they refused to give way... because they were.
Love, no matter how strong, is built - often! - with walls of sand. The winds of time, or perhaps of difficulty, can tear them apart, and leave them in ruins. What he felt for her, too, was like those walls, but he realized now hard it was to let her go, and that it only seemed easy now, because he was with her, because he knew that, in a way, she needed him, his presence. If they managed to return to Hogwarts, he would no longer have her - and he realized now that he would want her then, more badly than ever -- yes, there was no way he would be able to forget her. Not now.
He pushed his thoughts to the back of his mind, and pulled her closer to him, his entire, inadvertent focus the feel of her arms round his neck - the sweet scent of her hair - her. Gently at first, demandingly within a few seconds of it, he kissed her back, and Ginny let him, let him until she could feel nothing, nothing but Draco, nothing but the touch of his body against hers, the pressure of his lips, his rich scent, his strong arms, and –
– and then the barrier, the support against which they had been leaning, disappeared into nothingness and the two of them fell, Ginny first, Draco on top of her, both of them below the Tree. She did not let go of her hold on him, but gripped him tighter, pulled him closer, and Draco kissed her deeply, kissed her until she suddenly pushed him off and sat up.
“We were supposed to take a leaf,” she said quietly, her voice breathless.
“We will,” he replied and pushed her back on the ground where, placing his hands behind her head, he kissed her again, kissed her again in a way that was wild with joy and happiness and passion. Ginny kissed him back, kissed him back for what seemed like ages of sunlight and warmth and butterbeer, and then she somehow pushed him off again.
“Don’t do it when you don’t love me,” she said, very casually, brushing mud off her jeans as she stood up, reached overhead and easily plucked a leaf from the tree. “I only did that because there was no other way to get past the plate.”
He grabbed her and pushed her against the trunk of the tree. “No, you didn’t,” he said. “You did it because you love me, because you know I love you, too. You’re such a witch, Ginny Weasley, you’re such a witch.”
Hands on hips, she glared at him. “Why did you refuse to kiss me in Bowman's house?” she demanded almost savagely.
His eyes flickered. “Ginny –”
“Ginny, what? Do you realize how much you've hurt me, how little concern you have shown for what I go through?"
"Ginny -"
"Tell me or I’ll hit you, Malfoy.”
He took a deep breath, not sure how to word his thoughts, but aware that she would not let him go – not now – without an answer. “We’re different in a lot of ways, Ginny,” he said finally. “I tried to convince myself I never felt anything for you because I knew things between us wouldn’t work out. I tried, but I couldn’t –” THE STRAY DONKEY! her mind hollered. “Get out of the way, Malfoy,” she cut through rudely. His answer stung more than she had thought any answer could, twisted in her chest like a knife with a very sharp point. What was he, a coward? A coward scared of, perhaps, his parents’ displeasure? She glared daggers at him, her mouth still burning from, still tasting of, the kiss – why wouldn’t the feeling go away? – and, to her surprise, he grinned in response.
“Kiss me and I will.”
She looked up at him and glared angrily once more. Then something in her broke, perhaps control, perhaps a weight of mistrust, and she stood on tiptoe, kissed him on the chin. Draco grinned, wrapped his arms around her and pulled her closer, and she rested her head against his chest.
“I love you,” he said, and his voice was husky, almost quivering from joy. “I’m sor –”
She placed a finger on his mouth, did not let him complete the word, let alone the sentence. “Don’t apologize,” she said quietly. “This isn’t the place to snog each other, anyway. We need to figure out what do with the leaf.”
“Let’s crush it and eat it – I’m hungry.”
“Draco Malfoy!”
“Alright, alright, let me see it.” They sat down, beneath the thick branches of the tree, and in the shade she handed over the little leaf. It was as small as the tree was enormous, sweet-smelling in its hue of deep green, and very moist from dew. Draco ran a hand over it, then unfastened his chain from round his neck. Clicking open the oval pendant, he took out the time-turner and, to Ginny's surprise, wrapped it in the leaf.
Silly, she thought to herself with an inward chuckle, but she did not say so out loud - what if that was how the time-turned was supposed to be repaired? For a few seconds, they waited. -- Nothing happened.
Ginny stuck her tongue out at him. “Better luck next time.”
Draco only smiled in response – he had a brilliant smile, and she managed to count seven even, white teeth before it disappeared – and placed the leaf on the ground. “What I want, right now,” he began luxuriously. “Is this.” He reached forward to kiss her, she laughed and playfully pushed him off and, in all the confusion, the time-turner in his hand fell to the ground, rolled off.
Draco made a grab for it, but missed, and the time-turner , on its way away from its owner, bumped into the little leaf lying on the ground. There was a flash of fire, the scent of mint, and the time-turner had come to a halt – its knob no longer broken, its sheen magnified twofold. Draco’s eyes widened, Ginny’s eyes nearly popped out, and their exclamations came out as one:
“It’s mended!”
For a second, they dared not speak. The present seemed so unreal, too beautiful to be true, and perhaps they both felt words would mar its loveliness, or perhaps wake them up from what seemed a dream of sweetness. Then, very quietly, Ginny reached forward, as if to pick the time-turner, but Draco grabbed her arm, his manner very urgent.
“What?” she asked, alarmed.
“Pinch me,” he replied, his lips twitching into a smile.
Time-turner forgotten, she literally threw herself at him. Draco fell backwards, laughing mirthfully, and Ginny leaned down and kissed his lips. Once, twice, thrice. “You idiot,” she told him, shaking him by the collar. “You pretty-faced, handsome idiot.”
“You gorgeous, redheaded witch,” he responded, gently pushing her away. His left hand holding her right, Draco sat up and reached out to pick the time-turner. His fingers came in contact with the little, now-mended thing – and then the world was a storm of colours, and they were raging through dazzling hues and winds and noise and – ThwwACCCKK.
They landed, both of them, on their backs. Ginny sat up, rubbed her head, and looked around at the familiar walls of the Hogwarts Express.
“But the time-turner –” she began breathlessly.
“It was set,” Draco replied before she could finish her question. “The Leaf of Solution, wasn’t it? It didn’t just mend the turner – it set it to the right period, too.” His tones were less breathless than her, far more collected. Then a voice – two voices, two very familiar voices, in fact – floated their way. “You’re supposed to be patrolling the corridor, Weasley.”
“Get out of my face, Malfoy.”
Ginny raised an eyebrow, looked over at Draco, and he grinned in response. “Seems like we haven’t gone back in time, yet,” he said, leaning forward to catch a better look at the source of noise. There, not far off, stood another Draco and another Ginny, bickering rather noisily with each other. “Oooh, you sound fiery. What did you have for breakfast, crow soup?”
“Do NOT make fun of me,” Ginny said, playful warning in her tones. But she had dropped her voice by way of cautions, and it took all her effort not to cry out “No!” as the clone Ginny grabbed at the clone Draco’s neck and the two of them had, within moments, disappeared from her stunned sight. The train’s open door continued to fly in the wind, and Ginny’s voice seemed stuck in her throat, too coarse for language.
“That,” she said finally. “Was weird.”
Draco nodded, and she followed him towards the door. They stood at a safe distance, the deafening roar of the engine loud in their eardrums, until he took a careful step forwards and slammed the door shut. The sudden silence was almost unnerving, and, when she could no longer bear it, Ginny decided to break it herself.
“Draco?”
He seemed lost in thought, and he only raised his chin in response, making no attempt to string words together. It unnerved him, what he had seen – a copy of himself, a copy of her, both ready to bite each other’s head off.
“Draco –” she scooted closer to him, laid a hand on his shoulder, and he inclined his chin to kiss it. The act calmed him, for some reason, so he repeated it, and then Ginny had thrown herself in his arms. He kissed her forehead, her lips, her chin, then kissed her forehead again.
“Draco.” Tenderly, she pushed him away, made him look down at her. If she was to speak she should, Ginny knew, do it now, before she lost herself and her breath in his kisses. “You realize what we’ve stepped into, don’t you?”
“Ginny,” and he sounded urgent, almost as if she would not like what he had to say, and sudden fear – fear of losing him again – made her tighten her grip on him. He took both of her hands in his and, when he spoke, his tones were calm. “You understand I won’t have much left if I tell everyone we’re seeing each other, don’t you? My family will disown me.”
It tore her to know she had to make a response to that statement. It was fact, and she hated at the knowledge that she wanted him so badly, she could drive him to a decision that might estrange him from his blood-relations. But how could she let him go, now that all was well once more, when her heart had clung to him when there had been little, almost no, hope?
She stayed silent, eyes fixed on her feet. It was not her words, but his, that finally broke the haunting silence.
“Give me time.” He placed a hand beneath her chin, and forced her to look up at him, into his eyes. “I need to stand on my own feet, build something of a career. I can’t survive without my family, not right now, because I know your family hates me, too – no, don’t wince like that, Ginny, you know its true –”
“Draco –” she tried to cut across.
“Listen. Give me time, only a year of it. This is my last term at Hogwarts, I can build a foundation for us if you give me a year’s time.”
“We can at least tell –”
“We can’t tell anyone.”
Her chest seemed to heave with the weights of years of problems, but Ginny Weasley had never been the type to give in to difficulties. Her answer now, she knew, depended on how much she trusted him. He was willing to give up so much for her – did she believe enough in him to give him what he was asking for? There were not many things she was not sure of, right then, but of one thing, there was no doubt: she loved him, could not survive without him now. For a long time, she was silent and he waited – a wait that seemed to him, unbearable, more painful than anything he had ever experienced in his entire lifetime. What if she said no? – and then, at long last, she nodded.
“You’ll wait?” he half-whispered.
She nodded again, and lowered his face towards hers own. “I will,” she said against his lips. “But you have to meet my friends, get to know them. Your parents might get angry at that, but they wouldn’t disown you for it. You have to show my family you don’t hate muggles, or don’t think we’re blood-tr –”
He pressed his lips against hers so hard, she could not complete the word. “Don’t ever say it again,” he said firmly.
“Will you do it?”
“I can’t, Ginny, my parents’ displeasure –”
“They won’t disown you, can’t you do as much for me? I need to see I can trust you, Draco, I need to know I’m not making a mistake.”
He pulled away, as if burned by her words. “You still consider that possibility?” he asked, almost coldly. “After all we’ve been through –”
“Draco, don’t you understand?” She let go of his hands, and turned away from him. When she spoke, her voice almost quivered. “When I tell my parents that I’ve been dating you in secret for twelve whole months, they would probably want to skin me alive, if not something worse. I need proof that you love me, not for myself, but to show them. They know of your fondness for the Dark Arts, I don’t even know myself if you’re going to –”
“You think I’m not going to give them up, don’t you?” There was something very, very bitter about his tones. “Do you know how badly someone who turns away from the Dark Arts, when the Dark Lord expects them to take up his service, pays? But I’m willing, Ginny. I’m willing to let go of it for your sake and you –”
She spun around. “We’re both making sacrifices!” she said angrily. “It’s not the end of the world, we can make this work, Draco!”
He sighed, and looked away. When he finally looked at her, he seemed to have come to a decision, and the determination his eyes carried almost frightened her. What if he had decided to leave her? What if –
“I’ll get to know your friends,” he said quietly. “Your family. But don’t expect me to just walk up to them and say “Oh hello, season’s greetings from the handsome, death-eater dude!” It’s not funny,” he added sharply, as the corners of her mouth twitched. “It will take time, Ginny, or they might suspect something. The change has to be slow – it will be slow, in fact.”
Ginny nodded, and he looked away again. Then she went up to, stood next to him, and he slipped an arm around her waist. “I love you, Angel.”
“Fancy,” she replied, sticking her tongue out at him. “Real fancy, Dragon.”
“Angel is still fancier,” he replied and then, grabbing her shoulders, he kissed her mouth wonderfully shut. She kissed him back, kissed him truly and madly and deeply, and then they broke the kiss to grin, warm in each other’s embrace, merry in each other’s sudden laughter.
The sound of their laughter rose in volume, touched the roof of the Express, and wafted through the corridor Ginny Weasley was supposed to patrol, its essence jovial, its tinkle too charming for words.
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| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ]  Endnotes:
Okay… *takes a deep breath* Thank you, thank you ALL of you, for the privilege of your readership and the music of your presence. Without readers, a story is like a flower without scent, and it is you who blow life into each new event. I can’t put into words how glad I am to have had wonderful readers like you guys. Thank you SO much!
This fanfiction is set in Ginny Weasley’s sixth year, and Draco Malfoy’s seventh. All characters, with the exception Haudrey Humphey and Mr. Donkey, belong to J. K Rowling. The quotations used at the beginning of each chapter have been taken from the amazing book, Fabric of the Universe, a mind-blowing and highly recommended read on Physics by Denis Postle. The exception is the quote at the start of Chapter thirteen, where credit is due to the amazing poet and novelist, Victor Hugo.
I have a fanfiction set in the first generation’s time in progress, and the next fan-fiction I am working on is the first volume in a three-part series called The Trilogy of Hell. See you there! ;-) |
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It's such a super long chapter too.. I dun wanna read it, I dun want CK to end! But I haveto read it...
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Aww, luff, all good things have to come to an end. I LOVED writing CK, but I had to wrap it up some day. ={ There's always another ficcie to read. I hope you continue to enjoy Us, and TSRTD. *shnuggles you* <3 |
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OMG. OMG. OMG. You rock, Maxie!!!!!!!!!!!! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W
AT A LOSS FOR WORDS...
LET'S JUST SAY, YOU GAVE ME WHAT I WANTED. 
I LOVE YOU MAH MAXIE! 
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Originally Posted by Nimmi OMG. OMG. OMG. You rock, Maxie!!!!!!!!!!!! Thankyouthankyou, luff.
You stretttttched the page! =O Quote:
AT A LOSS FOR WORDS...
LET'S JUST SAY, YOU GAVE ME WHAT I WANTED. I gave you Draco? Wait, didn't I give him to Ginny? Bwaha. xP Quote:
I LOVE YOU MAH MAXIE! 
It was soo romantic!!! Aww. Draco is sooo sweet! And hot. I want him now.
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OMG! OMG! OMG! it was awesome Maxie...loved it alot...stray donkey...hilarious character hun....i will be checking your new fiction too...keep up the good work...
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla Reeser Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥ CHOCOLATE KISSES! 10 Comments...in 1! -gaspeth-; #1. Draco and Ginny did a lot of smooching! xDD #2. I want a timeturner, so I can go and tell Miss J.K. Rowling to put me in the story. xD #3. It's so sad that Draco can't tell. Although I wouldn't care if my family was so mean and disowned me. JK!  #4. I am soo glad they are together..finally! #5. MaxieluffYAY's stories are THE best! #6. Maxerzz will become the new Miss J.K. Rowling! #7. I can not wait for Maxiella's new story!!!! #8. I wonder what would've happened next..... #9. This was an amazing/awesome/intriguing/interesting/fantabulous story! #10. Draco is scrumptious. Doesn't everyone know? xDD <3 youu!!! Jess(:
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|  SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Quote:
Originally Posted by Harita OMG! OMG! OMG! it was awesome Maxie...loved it alot...stray donkey...hilarious character hun....i will be checking your new fiction too...keep up the good work... Thanks a heap, sweetie!
Good to know you enjoyed the ficcie, and liked this chapter, too. -hug- Quote:
Originally Posted by JesshLuffYAY 10 Comments...in 1! -gaspeth-; I love your colourful posts! Quote: #3. It's so sad that Draco can't tell. Although I wouldn't care if my family was so mean and disowned me. JK! But he's used to the luxury! Draco is a rather shades-of-grey person, and he knows he can't survive without the riches he is accustomed to - he was being completely honest with her. Quote: #5. MaxieluffYAY's stories are THE best! *blushblush* Thank you LOADS, luff. Iwubyou. <3 Quote: #6. Maxerzz will become the new Miss J.K. Rowling! Teehee. I adore Tolstoy or Dostoevsky more, though -- aim high and you might not reach the stars, but... get the gist? -- their writing styles impress me too much for words. Those two were... absolutely made of SUPER!win. <3 Quote: #9. This was an amazing/awesome/intriguing/interesting/fantabulous story! Super thankkkkkk you, luff. <3 Quote: #10. Draco is scrumptious. Doesn't everyone know? xDD YUSH! He so is. =DD |
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11-16-2009, 05:31 AM
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Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla Reeser Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie I love your colourful posts! tehe. xDD
I love all the colors, they make me smile! Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie *blushblush* Thank you LOADS, luff. Iwubyou. <3 -clingsforlife- 
No problemo!!
Iwubyoumoreee'rerrrrrrr!!!!!!! <3<3<3 Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie Teehee. I adore Tolstoy or Dostoevsky more, though -- aim high and you might not reach the stars, but... get the gist? -- their writing styles impress me too much for words. <3 Hmm never heard of those authors.... 
I'll search their writings! xDD Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie Super thankkkkkk you, luff. <3  <3 Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie YUSH! He so is. =DD Nobody can deny it!
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11-16-2009, 05:35 AM
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| | Moke
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Oliver Dominic Evans Fifth Year | I'm.defying.gravity | true north strong and free | thumpity-thump-thump
OMG!!!! It's over
I was kinda almost wishing you'd write an epiloge, to see what happened in a years time. But you ended it sooooooooo well!!!
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11-16-2009, 05:42 AM
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|  Scheming Marauder Ghost
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Whoa, steamy beginning of the chapter there! 
I likey. Quote:
– and then the barrier, the support against which they had been leaning, disappeared into nothingness and the two of them fell, Ginny first, Draco on top of her, both of them below the Tree.
-Snort-
Way to end a good snog! Quote:
She did not let go of her hold on him, but gripped him tighter, pulled him closer, and Draco kissed her deeply, kissed her until she suddenly pushed him off and sat up.
“We were supposed to take a leaf,” she said quietly, her voice breathless.
HAHAHAHAHA!
First she doesn't let him go and then she just randomly shoves him off.  I LOVE THESE TWO! Quote:
“We will,” he replied and pushed her back on the ground where, placing his hands behind her head, he kissed her again, kissed her again in a way that was wild with joy and happiness and passion. Ginny kissed him back, kissed him back for what seemed like ages of sunlight and warmth and butterbeer, and then she somehow pushed him off again.
   
Make up your minds, guys! Are you gonna snog, or are you gonna do what you came to do?! Quote:
"Tell me or I’ll hit you, Malfoy.”
OH GOD, HOW I LOVE THEM.
SRSLY.
They're perfect for each other!  Simply PERFECT! -Giggle- Quote:
THE STRAY DONKEY! her mind hollered.
I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!!! AAHAHAHAHAHA   : "Hey hey hey, now wait a minute! I don't like the way my persona is being referred to in this chapter! It almost makes me sound like… like… AN INSULT! For heaven's sake - ME, an insult?! Why, I'm offended! That's it! I quit!! Forget about me, Hollywood, you won't see me around any time soon! -Starts munching on some book pages angrily- Quote:
“This isn’t the place to snog each other, anyway. We need to figure out what do with the leaf.”
“Let’s crush it and eat it – I’m hungry.”
“Draco Malfoy!”
LMFAO! I love how they go from lovey dovey to silly in like a second!  Quote:
“What I want, right now,” he began luxuriously. “Is this.” He reached forward to kiss her, she laughed and playfully pushed him off
They're so cute!!  Quote:
“Pinch me,” he replied, his lips twitching into a smile.
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The sound of their laughter rose in volume, touched the roof of the Express, and wafted through the corridor Ginny Weasley was supposed to patrol, its essence jovial, its tinkle too charming for words.
[The End]
-Sniff- -sniff-
O_O
-Watery eyes-
Ma--Ma--MAXERSSSSS. The FF… It's over!! It's done!!   
Whaaa…what a beautiful piece of art! Really, though! My God, that was the absolute best FF I have ever read! BEAUTIFULLLLL. AHHHHH. & I feel so special to have it dedicated to me!! Eeep!     I loved every single chapter, every single paragraph, every sentence! It was amazing, YOU are amazing!
-Bursts into tears and sobs-
UWAAAAAAA!!!
I feel like half happy and half sad right now. 
Happy 'cause I love happy endings but sad 'cause there won't be any more CK updates to look forward to. Quote:
Without readers, a story is like a flower without scent, and it is you who blow life into each new event. I can’t put into words how glad I am to have had wonderful readers like you guys. Thank you!
STOP TRYNNA MAKE ME CRY!!   
It already worked! D: Quote:
All characters, with the exception Haudrey Humphey and Mr. Donkey
 
Even AFTER the FF's over, you STILL make me laugh and Mr. Donkey STILL gets recognition!   Quote:
and the next fan-fiction I am working on is the first volume in a three-part series called The Trilogy of Hell. See you there! ;-)
Ooooh-la-la!!!
Is it gonna be on SS?!
-Already dying to read-
IWANNASEEIWANNASEEIWANNASEEE!!!!
GUH.
This was the most amazing and epic fic EVER, MAXERS. EVER!
-Faints-
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11-16-2009, 05:57 AM
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|  SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
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Originally Posted by JesshLuffYAY Hmm never heard of those authors... Really? =O
Well, Tolstoy wrote my super!favourite War and Peace, while Dostoevsky is the author of some WONDERFUL books, like The Idiot and Crime and Punishment. Quote:
Originally Posted by Jennnn I was kinda almost wishing you'd write an epiloge, to see what happened in a years time. But you ended it sooooooooo well!!! Thank you! I wanted to write an epilogue myself. I was sorely tempted to but, in the end, I decided not to. Maybe a sequel? I don't know for sure, just don't tempt me to write the epilogue, again! xDD Quote:
Originally Posted by DeeLeeLuffee First she doesn't let him go and then she just randomly shoves him off.  I LOVE THESE TWO! They're unique, you know. =p Quote:
Make up your minds, guys! Are you gonna snog, or are you gonna do what you came to do?! Draco: Snog, I think. -casual shrug- Quote:
OH GOD, HOW I LOVE THEM.
SRSLY.
They're perfect for each other!  Simply PERFECT! -Giggle-
Yes, I can totally imagine their married life. "DRACO MALFOY! I told you to wash the dishes before I return!" Quote:  : "Hey hey hey, now wait a minute! I don't like the way my persona is being referred to in this chapter! It almost makes me sound like… like… AN INSULT! For heaven's sake - ME, an insult?! Why, I'm offended! That's it! I quit!! Forget about me, Hollywood, you won't see me around any time soon! -Starts munching on some book pages angrily-

He... quit? -dead'ed'ed'- *blush* Iwubyou, and thank you for the pretty words. They make my day. YOU make my day. Every, single time. -hugs- Quote:
UWAAAAAAA!!!
I feel like half happy and half sad right now. 
Happy 'cause I love happy endings but sad 'cause there won't be any more CK updates to look forward to. It's not exactly a happy ending. IwubmyDeeLeerina. *shnuggles and splashes some water at cha* No more tears, pwease! But I didn't try. ={ You LAUGHEDDDDDDD! Yay! I thought you were going to be shaad.
-is happy that the DeeLee laughed'ed- Quote:
Is it gonna be on SS?!
-Already dying to read-
IWANNASEEIWANNASEEIWANNASEEE!!!!
I think so, luff. But I'm going to finish Us, first. =}
[Finish Us? LOL.. finish 'us'.] Quote:
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11-16-2009, 06:15 AM
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|  Scheming Marauder Ghost
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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie They're unique, you know. =p Very. Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie Draco: Snog, I think. -casual shrug- Oh, well, if that's really what you want... 
-Tackles Draco- Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie Yes, I can totally imagine their married life. "DRACO MALFOY! I told you to wash the dishes before I return!" I LOVE IT!
ILOVEITILOVEITILOVEIT! Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie 
He... quit? -dead'ed'ed'- I think he's just being grumpy. 
Hehe. Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie *blush* Iwubyou, and thank you for the pretty words. They make my day. YOU make my day. Every, single time. -hugs- 
Well, thank YOU for the purrtiER words! Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie It's not exactly a happy ending. IwubmyDeeLeerina. *shnuggles and splashes some water at cha* No more tears, pwease! Well, you're right about that crossed out bit. I think you should tell us how things turn out in the future.  I never did imagine Maxers as a happy-ending-type of writer.
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OH NO! Us! That means Us isn't gonna have a happy ending!  And neither will TSRTD or any other Maxers FF! Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie But I didn't try. ={ =[ Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie You LAUGHEDDDDDDD! Yay! I thought you were going to be shaad.
-is happy that the DeeLee laughed'ed- -Giggles- Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie I think so, luff. But I'm going to finish Us, first. =}
[Finish Us? LOL.. finish 'us'.] 
LMFAO.
You--you--you're breaking up with me, Maxers?! Is that it?! 
First you break Hermy off Viktor, now this! Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie You are MINE! *claims for life* Teeheeeee. Yay! 
& I just realized that post I left is THE longest post I've ever made on my 6 years on SS.
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|  SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
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Originally Posted by DeeLeeLuffeee Oh, well, if that's really what you want... 
-Tackles Draco-  Ginny: What do YOU think you're doing, missy? Quote:
I think he's just being grumpy. 
Hehe.
That's alright, then. =p *pets Mr. Donkey and gives him more grass* Quote:
Well, you're right about that crossed out bit. I think you should tell us how things turn out in the future.  I never did imagine Maxers as a happy-ending-type of writer.
Well, super happy endings seem so... unreal, sometimes. Not always, though. I mean, I almost made Draco say he couldn't put up with the problems that a relationship with Ginny would bring, and walk away. But I couldn't! Because I love those two together! But they just can't have smooth sailing all the way... that wouldn't be realistic. My first ficcie on SS had a SUPER happy ending, though. Quote:
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OH NO! Us! That means Us isn't gonna have a happy ending!  And neither will TSRTD or any other Maxers FF! =O
Says whooo? Well, you never know... but I have to say, CK is one of the happier ends I've written. But you never know about Us or TSRTD. x 1238543 Quote:
LMFAO.
You--you--you're breaking up with me, Maxers?! Is that it?! 
First you break Hermy off Viktor, now this!
LOL! You're so evil DeeLee, I don't even have the courage to break up with you. Thou art MIIIIINE! xDD Quote:
& I just realized that post I left is THE longest post I've ever made on my 6 years on SS. =O
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11-16-2009, 01:19 PM
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| | Lobalug
Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Out of my mind
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jenny Malfoy Sixth Year |
hey... *cuddles this story*
i've not posted in ages soweeee! I'M SUCH A BAD READER... i PROMISE I'LL CATCH UP SOON MAXIELUFF! I wuv you!!! wots and wots
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Awesomeville
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Louis Aberly Fifth Year | Obsessed over Draco ♥ // Jamse's cheergirl / Photoshop addict // Team JACOB!
OH.My.God!!
The fic is over!!!!
Happy edning??? YAAAYYYYY!!
I didn't expect it because Draco was a jerk-
but it's WAY better now!
And....... They are so sweet together!!!!
Just as I promised earlier =P
What ship is the Trilogy of Hell??
Because if it's not a R/Hr, I'm a fan of it already Love yeh, Maxie! You're the the best author! <33333333
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11-16-2009, 03:09 PM
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|  Scheming Marauder Ghost
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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie Ginny: What do YOU think you're doing, missy? O_O Uhhh... nothing...
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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie That's alright, then. =p *pets Mr. Donkey and gives him more grass*  : "Yeah, that's what I'm talkin' 'bout!" -Chews on grass- Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie Well, super happy endings seem so... unreal, sometimes. Not always, though. I mean, I almost made Draco say he couldn't put up with the problems that a relationship with Ginny would bring, and walk away. But I couldn't! Because I love those two together! But they just can't have smooth sailing all the way... that wouldn't be realistic. Yeah, I know what you mean. Tee hee, & of course they couldn't have a smooth sailing... not with a Dee around trynna steal Draco away from Ginny. 
Hehehehehehe. Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie My first ficcie on SS had a SUPER happy ending, though. 
What was that one about? Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie =O
Says whooo? Well, you never know... but I have to say, CK is one of the happier ends I've written. But you never know about Us or TSRTD. x 1238543 Oh God! This is one of the happier endings?!
-Gets ready to see Ron, Harry, and Draco road-killed on Us- 
My vote's still on Hermione not ending up with any of them. Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie LOL! You're so evil DeeLee, I don't even have the courage to break up with you. Thou art MIIIIINE! xDD Eviiiilll, meeee? 
Maybe just a teensy weeny bit. 
But you're minerrrr! o_O YAH.
Bwaha. -Glomp- Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie =O
Hey, I feel privileged! =DD As you should. 
Hehe.
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11-16-2009, 04:09 PM
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|  SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Quote:
Originally Posted by JennyWenny8827057 hey... *cuddles this story*
i've not posted in ages soweeee! I'M SUCH A BAD READER... i PROMISE I'LL CATCH UP SOON MAXIELUFF! I wuv you!!! wots and wots That's totally alright, luff.
Take your time, no worries. Quote:
Originally Posted by My Nehtehleh Happy edning??? YAAAYYYYY!!
I didn't expect it because Draco was a jerk- Draco: Did you just call me a jerk? *narrows eyes at you* Quote:
What ship is the Trilogy of Hell??
Because if it's not a R/Hr, I'm a fan of it already
It's R/ Hr, in a way, but that's something of a necessity. It might not... continue to be what seems in the beginning. Quote: Love yeh, Maxie! You're the the best author! <33333333 Awww. I love you, My Nehtehleh! <3 Quote:
Originally Posted by DeeLeeLuffeee -Goes back to snogging Draco- Um, DeeLee? I can see you. Quote:
What was that one about?
It was a romance set in the Marauders' time at Hogwarts. The focus was of course Sirius. Because I LOVE him. I love Prongs and Moony, too. But Sirius = Quote:
-Gets ready to see Ron, Harry, and Draco road-killed on Us- 
My vote's still on Hermione not ending up with any of them. Road-killed? =O
I ... like your vote. Quote:
Eviiiilll, meeee? 
Maybe just a teensy weeny bit. 
But you're minerrrr! o_O YAH.
Bwaha. -Glomp-
Miner? As in... a miner? *eyes coal mines* Me no like. -shakes head-
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