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For Dee<3 with shiny, white teeth,
who forced wanted me to write a fic on Draco,
and who chose its title.
♥ SixteenthFFthreadonSS<3.
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Chapter #1 The Beginning
“There is a cosmic dance of creation”
Things had not been so bad, lately. Fred and George had agreed to let her help them in their shop over the summer, and she had definitely grown a few inches. She was a little over the height of five feet six inches now and, as far as Ginny Weasley was concerned, it was more than fine.
She met the twins on her way upstairs, and noticed that they were carrying armfuls of what looked like mashed, sticky lumps of wet paper. “Mum’s in the kitchen,” she said, before they could open their mouths to ask. “Better Apparate, she’s not too happy.”
Molly Weasley would not be, of course – not when she knew half a dozen members of the Order were coming to dinner, and she had a bare half hour to cook a scrumptious meal, not only for them, but also her brood of seven kids. Not to count Harry and Hermione – both of whom had come over for the summer – and a tired Mr. Weasley.
Fred and George had other things on their mind, though. “I’m not sure if we can Apparate with all this in our arms,” Fred said, looking slightly worried. “Is she really that angry?” Ever since their shop had proved itself such a massive success, Molly Weasley had stopped trying to convince them to give up their ideas of a joke shop, and return to Hogwarts; but a spell of Molly-Weasley-bad-mood still meant that caution was required.
“More than you know,” Ginny replied, her eyes glinting as she surveyed the supplies in the twins’ arms. “What are those anyway?”
“That’s classified,” George said, looking smug. “We shall see you... later.” He turned to Fred, and there was a certain sparkle of mischief in his eyes that Ginny did not fail to notice. “Shall we give it a try then, George?”
Fred nodded. “Indeed, brother.”
There was a crack, and the two of them disappeared into thin air. Ginny shook her head, using one of the gloves in the pocket of her jeans to pick up a portion of the paper-lump that had fallen out of Fred and George’s laden arms, when they had taken to Apparition. On closer inspection, it looked like snow frozen in place, and it shimmered when she held it up to the light. A sudden urge to re-examine it later, overwhelmed her and, wrapping it in her glove, Ginny stowed it into a back pocket of her faded jeans.
It was late in the afternoon, and she was looking forward to a nap, now. Today had been her last day helping the twins with their joke shop, for tomorrow would see the Hogwarts Engine whisking her away to her second home. Her mind still on the shop, she made her way into her bedroom – it was small, made to seem smaller by a massive poster of her favourite quidditch team adorning an entire wall – and was surprised to see a tawny owl perched at the window-sill, looking slightly dazed as if it had collided with the transparent window-pane, in an effort to hop into the room.
“You poor thing!”
The owl hooted rather faintly in response. If it had been a person, Ginny thought as she crossed the floor and opened the window, I would have thought they were drunk. The bird hopped in, tried to rub its head against her hand as she stroked it, and then held out a leg. Ginny quickly untied the envelope attached to it, and was surprised to see that it bore the Hogwarts crest. Did this mean that she was in trouble? Sure, the last thing she had done before returning home for the summer was to turn Millicent Bulstrode's hair a flaming pink but, surely, Dumbledore would not write to her parents now, now that the holidays had pretty much come to an end.
“You won’t find out if you don’t open it, you know.”
Ginny turned; the speaker was the oval-shaped mirror mounted on the wall opposite. “Thanks for the info of the century, mirror man,” she said, shaking red locks out of her eyes as, with a sparkle in them, she tore open the envelope and plunged a hand outside. Something golden and scarlet fell to the floor, something golden and scarlet and rather metallic. What followed next was an exclamation filled with clear surprise.
*sniffles*
Gosh, it's sooo sad...the FF's over now.
But that was an amaaaaaaaazing last chapter. *squeals* It could have only been better if they had taken Bowman along.
Especially the cute kissing scene under the tree was just soooo adorable!
But now...it's over...
Although, I would very much like to see the Malfoy's reaction when Draco first introduces Ginny as his girlfriend.
Teehee...or Harry, Ron and Hermione and all of Ginny's other friends go all
But that was an amaaaaaaaazing last chapter. *squeals* It could have only been better if they had taken Bowman along.
Thank you!
Bowman: THEY LEFT ME HERE! *wails*
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Especially the cute kissing scene under the tree was just soooo adorable!
Aww, me is happy that you liked eeet, luff. ^______^
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Although, I would very much like to see the Malfoy's reaction when Draco first introduces Ginny as his girlfriend.
Teehee...or Harry, Ron and Hermione and all of Ginny's other friends go all
LOLOL! That would be the day! "Harry, Ron, Hermione - please meet my soon-to-be-husband, Draco Malfoy." -- Or, better yet, "Hey father! Did I tell you I marry Ginny Weasley, tonight? See you at the reception!"
Meanies! Although, if they had taken you along you could never have invented the Golden Snitch. *pets*
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LOLOL! That would be the day! "Harry, Ron, Hermione - please meet my soon-to-be-husband, Draco Malfoy." -- Or, better yet, "Hey father! Did I tell you I marry Ginny Weasley, tonight? See you at the reception!"
Or Ginny could be all: *clears throat* Uhm...Mr. Malfoy, would it be possible to give me a way at mine and your son's wedding tonight. My Dad died of shock when I told him."
Meanies! Although, if they had taken you along you could never have invented the Golden Snitch. *pets*
Bowman: But I wanted to go! *wails*
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Or Ginny could be all: *clears throat* Uhm...Mr. Malfoy, would it be possible to give me a way at mine and your son's wedding tonight. My Dad died of shock when I told him."
Gosh, sequel to "The Thing that Made the Stray Donkey Curious" = "The Thing that Made Lucius Malfoy VERY Curious."
Canon Niffler || Neville's Yorkshire Pudding | | Teddy's Biographer || P + R = ♥
How long did it take me to catch up? About 15000 comments!
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Agreed. I could never have put it that way... but then, YOU broke her. It's evil, the things writers do.. and yet, it's necessary for the steam and momentum in a story. =/
You're right of course I did break Hermia, but I wouldn't want to write a story about a good girl who follows all the rules and stays at home wearing a frilly apron. I wouldn't want to read that story either, come to think of it.
I have put photo's of all the characters in Tempestuous in a folder on my User CP and I'll be adding to it, should more characters come up. I'm now graphic artist, or artist come to that, so they are the closest representation of the images I have in my head
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Endnotes:
Okay… *takes a deep breath* Thank you, thank you ALL of you, for the privilege of your readership and the music of your presence. Without readers, a story is like a flower without scent, and it is you who blow life into each new event. I can’t put into words how glad I am to have had wonderful readers like you guys. Thank you SO much!
This fanfiction is set in Ginny Weasley’s sixth year, and Draco Malfoy’s seventh. All characters, with the exception Haudrey Humphey and Mr. Donkey, belong to J. K Rowling. The quotations used at the beginning of each chapter have been taken from the amazing book, Fabric of the Universe, a mind-blowing and highly recommended read on Physics by Denis Postle. The exception is the quote at the start of Chapter thirteen, where credit is due to the amazing poet and novelist, Victor Hugo.
I have a fanfiction set in the first generation’s time in progress, and the next fan-fiction I am working on is the first volume in a three-part series called The Trilogy of Hell. See you there! ;-)
It was just amazing! Brilliantness! I can take non-cannon when it's that good! You're fabulous!
I missed so much!!!!!
That was amazing Maxie!
It can't be over!
NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's alright luff, and thank you! ^^
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Ginny and I can share him....
You ish the most awesomest FF author I know.
I don't think Ginny would agree to that. =p
Thankoooooo, luffff. <3
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How long did it take me to catch up? About 15000 comments!
Exaggeration!
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You're right of course I did break Hermia, but I wouldn't want to write a story about a good girl who follows all the rules and stays at home wearing a frilly apron. I wouldn't want to read that story either, come to think of it.
I have put photo's of all the characters in Tempestuous in a folder on my User CP and I'll be adding to it, should more characters come up. I'm now graphic artist, or artist come to that, so they are the closest representation of the images I have in my head
Hehe, that is GOOOD. Grey!Girls are GOOOD, in fact. xDD
I need to check out those photos! =DD
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It was just amazing! Brilliantness! I can take non-cannon when it's that good! You're fabulous!
*cling* Thank you, Joolsh. <3
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*dies from happiness*
Melellell! Wake up! *splashes water on ya*
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Thanks for an amazing story, Maxaxax!
It's the readers who made it come alive, my Melellell. <3
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And hey, while little Gin-Gin waits for Draco, I can make my move.
Awwwww.
By the time I actually, finally finish the story, it's overrrrr.
I'm so sad, why must this happen?
But that last chapter, so made me close to crying. And if iI thought before reading this that Draco couldn't get any better, I was wrong. :O
I am really glad that I got to read a finished Maxers story, though.
It's so cute. I LOVE DRACO MALFOY THE STRAY DONKEY!!! This is the most funniest, amazingest thing I've read in a looooooooong time.
And you've inspired me, Maxie, to write more. It's just so hard, I can never start stories.
And I misssssssssssed you. This cheers me up aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalll the time.
]You're a very good writer yourself, my Annavannnnaaaa, and I hope I get to read a finished ficcie by YOUUU! *HintMoreMaraudersHint* =DD
Thank you, Maxie. I'd love to write a whole fic, because I've never, ever, ever done one before. I'm sort of deciding between a Draco Malfoy, Fred/George Weasley or Marauder fic. I don't know which one, though.
I don't know. Maybe, I'm not sure. I think if I just did one and I wrote at least quite a bit o it first before I put it on SS it would be easier. I don't feel much inspiration for the old ones.
I don't know. Maybe, I'm not sure. I think if I just did one and I wrote at least quite a bit o it first before I put it on SS it would be easier. I don't feel much inspiration for the old ones.
B-buu-but... I missed you MORER THE MOST. <3
Aww. I would have loved to see The Avdentures of the Marauders wrap up. But if you start another, I will definitely read.
ImissedyouMOSTESTMOSTEST. xP
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Oh no! It's over :'( That was a very nice way to end this FANTABULOUS fanfiction!
Well I shall miss Mr Donkey and I will definetly be reading your other fics Señorita!♥
Im catching up! Blimey this has had a lot since i last came
So, yeh, im catching up. But i LOVE what ive read so far Maxieluffie
You are a genius
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♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place. I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
I'll be home in a day. I fear that's a month too late. ♥♥♥
Well, I have started another story. And it might possibly be a Marauder story.
-is in wait of it-
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SORRY AGAIN!!
Im catching up! Blimey this has had a lot since i last came
So, yeh, im catching up. But i LOVE what ive read so far Maxieluffie
You are a genius
It's totally alright, luff.
Glad to know you eesh enjoying the read.
It's awesome to see you here, again. <3
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For the past two weeks I've been trying to catch up to you! And when I finally do, it's OVER!
Awww. *shnuggles you*
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Well I just want to say that that was AMAZING! And you better make a sequal!
I was never a ginny/draco fan, but now I'm totally converted.
Ooooh, I converted someone! This is fantaaaaastic! =DD Did I mention... I love the way you write Ginny/ Draco? Her name in red, and his in green. So pwetty! *is in love with that text* Hehe.
I shall think about the sequel, hun. ^^
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You're AMAZING!
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Dude. This is my 1,234 post! That's gotta mean something xD
So are YOUUUUUU! <333
Congratulations on the 1, 234th post.
Really, what a unique number! =DD
Chapter # 19 The End of the Beginning “Relativity unifies space with time.”
Love the name of the chapter!
The first was 'the beginning' right? Lovely linkage!
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- and he realized now that he would want her then, more badly than ever -- yes, there was no way he would be able to forget her. Not now.
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– and then the barrier, the support against which they had been leaning, disappeared into nothingness and the two of them fell, Ginny first, Draco on top of her, both of them below the Tree.
Awesome way to break the kiss!
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“Don’t do it when you don’t love me,” she said, very casually, brushing mud off her jeans as she stood up, reached overhead and easily plucked a leaf from the tree. “I only did that because there was no other way to get past the plate.”
Bwaha! I love this girl. First she grabs him and kisses him like there's no end, and then she tells him oh so casually to get away. Awesome!
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"Ginny -"
"Tell me or I’ll hit you, Malfoy.”
She so holds her own! I love her fire!
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THE STRAY DONKEY! her mind hollered.
Mr. Donkey returns!
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“Let’s crush it and eat it – I’m hungry.”
“Draco Malfoy!”
From loving to awesomely funny.... love how smooth the flow of the story is! Balance of lots of elements!
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“You idiot,” she told him, shaking him by the collar. “You pretty-faced, handsome idiot.”
“You gorgeous, redheaded witch,” he responded, gently pushing her away.
The Idiot and the Witch. Nice story.
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“Oooh, you sound fiery. What did you have for breakfast, crow soup?”
Bwaha! They can't help their banter even now!
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“You’ll wait?” he half-whispered.
She nodded again, and lowered his face towards hers own. “I will,” she said against his lips.
Such intensity of feelings. BEAUTIFUL!
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He pressed his lips against hers so hard, she could not complete the word. “Don’t ever say it again,” he said firmly.
Awww. That was so adorable of him! The good Draco is just as hot as the bad one! I love these two!
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But don’t expect me to just walk up to them and say “Oh hello, season’s greetings from the handsome, death-eater dude!”
BWAHA! Awesomeee!
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The sound of their laughter rose in volume, touched the roof of the Express, and wafted through the corridor Ginny Weasley was supposed to patrol, its essence jovial, its tinkle too charming for words.
That was SUCH a beautiful end. I love how you wrap it up and I can just imagine the scene. Too good, Maxo! TOOOOO good.
This was, I have to say, the best ficcie you've ever written. I haven't enjoyed an FF read this much since Ecstasy, and you know that was DA BOMB. I loved this journey! Too many funny moments to recount, and beautiful writing. GREAT ending, too. It's not all happy, and it has its not-so-bright side, but it's totally balanced 'n' realistic.
Gorgeous work!
I will miss this ficcie.
Love,
~~Jay~~
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The first was 'the beginning' right? Lovely linkage!
Awesome way to break the kiss!
Bwaha! I love this girl. First she grabs him and kisses him like there's no end, and then she tells him oh so casually to get away. Awesome!
She so holds her own! I love her fire!
Mr. Donkey returns!
From loving to awesomely funny.... love how smooth the flow of the story is! Balance of lots of elements!
The Idiot and the Witch. Nice story.
Bwaha! They can't help their banter even now!
Such intensity of feelings. BEAUTIFUL!
Awww. That was so adorable of him! The good Draco is just as hot as the bad one! I love these two!
BWAHA! Awesomeee!
That was SUCH a beautiful end. I love how you wrap it up and I can just imagine the scene. Too good, Maxo! TOOOOO good.
This was, I have to say, the best ficcie you've ever written. I haven't enjoyed an FF read this much since Ecstasy, and you know that was DA BOMB. I loved this journey! Too many funny moments to recount, and beautiful writing. GREAT ending, too. It's not all happy, and it has its not-so-bright side, but it's totally balanced 'n' realistic.
Gorgeous work!
I will miss this ficcie.
Love,
~~Jay~~
Thank you for the pretty compliments, bebeh. I'm SHO happy you enjoyed the ficcie. Thank you for being such a good reader.
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Chocolate Kisses - Sa13+ 
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*pets*
You're fabulous!
Teisha
I'm sort of deciding between a Draco Malfoy, Fred/George Weasley or Marauder fic. I don't know which one, though. 
