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Hello again!!! This is Jess(Jessica) and Cae(Caley)! This is Jess's 3rd Fanfiction and Cae's 1st! Please read and review! Oh and check out Jess's other stories too!


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Chapter 1



He wanted her. He, Draco Malfoy wanted Hermione Granger. He clenched his fists as he watched Weasley press his lips against hers. She was with Weasley and he could do nothing about it. What did Weasley have that he didn't have?

"A poor family." he mumbled under his breath.

Savannah looked up from her plate of chicken.

"What did you say Draco?" she asked. Draco glared at her.

"Oh, Granger isn't it?" Savannah asked and Draco sighed but nodded. Savannah rolled her aqua eyes.

"She is with Weasel-bee, get over it Draco!" she said sternly. Draco let out a grunt.

"He doesn't deserve her! I do! I mean ever since that night in the corridor I can't stop thinking about her.


4 Months Before...


I was walking down the corridor after the battle had taken place. Voldemort was dead. Killed by the famous Potter. What was I supposed to do now? Most of the Slytherins were dead. Pansy, Crabbe, Goyle, and Blaise were dead. My parents are dead. Who else? I stopped by the wall and slid down it. I put my head into my hands as I thought of what to do.

*trip*

"Ouch!"

"Who's there?"

"Ohh hello Granger fancy seeing you here. Aren't you supposed to be helping Potter and Weasle-bee to clean up the deatheaters?" I said smirking.

"Shut up Malfoy! Why don't you go and help them!?! I mean what are you supposed to do now? Everybody hates you even the Slytherins since they think you betrayed them, when you came onto the light side." Hermione said.

I clenched my fists and shot up. I grabbed onto her cloak and pushed her into the wall. Before I could say anything I saw her face. It had scratches and bruises everywhere. I saw a glimmer coming from her neck that the light shone. I moved her hair away and there was a long scar with dried blood on it. I hated that night. I had watched her get tortured by Bellatrix and yet Bellatrix is still alive.

Hermione moved away and whimpered. She looked one last time at me with tears in her eyes and ran the opposite way.

End of Flashback...

I was about to say Hermione's name again when Savannah took me out of the daydream.

*snap*

"Come on! Stop thinking about Granger and walk with me to potions!" Savannah said.

I sighed but got up looking at the Gryffindor table one last time. She wasn't there.

As we were walking down the corridor I saw Neville coming up to Savannah. He probably likes her. I snickered and left the two alone.

While walking on his way to the dungeons, he could already see Ron walking to potions, with Harry by his side.

"You are with Hermione, Ron!" Harry said and Ron shrugged his shoulders.

"Doesn't mean I can't think other girls are hot." Ron said, Draco could feel his hand shaking, who could be any better looking than Hermione?

"But it's Savannah Hensel, Ron, a bloody Slytherin!" Harry mumbled. Draco's eyes grew large. He knew not to say anything.


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Chapter 10

The common room was empty at this time of night. Everyone must be asleep. Ron headed up to the seventh years boys dorm. He walked in carefully trying not to wake anyone up. However all the boys were still awake.

"You're back late." Harry snapped which made Ron blush with anger.

Ron cleared his throat and stood up tall, trying to regain his confidence.

"Thank you mother." Ron muttered. "I was with Savannah." Ron said, recieving some eye rolls from Harry and Seamus.

"Big suprise there." Harry mumbled and Ron glared at him, while Dean and Seamus exchanged looks.

"I also talked to Hermione." Ron added.

-- This statement had recieved looks of shock as well as Neville's fake snores to recede.

Harry broke the silence, "What did she say?"

"Malfoy. Malfoy and Hermione are now together." Ron said with clenched teeth.

Silence.

"Bloody hell, I lost my chance." Seamus muttered.

"You've got to be kidding me!" Neville yelled and Ron shook his head.

Harry clenched his teeth. "You know what, Ron? Hermione would probably never be with that ferret if it wasn't for you!" He yelled.

Ron thought about Harry's words for a moment and his voice cracked, while trying to find something that Hermione did want to be with Malfoy for. He shook his head and climbed into the bunk.

"I'm through with Hermione anyways." Ron said.

Laughter could be heard throughout the entire boy's dormitory.

"Whatever you say, Ron." Neville said chucking a pillow at Ron's head.

After a while silence was all you could hear throughout the entire 7th year Gryffindor Common Room.

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Chapter 11

Harry woke up to a big clash in the bathroom that sounded like glass had hit the floor and shattered. He looked over and saw that it had to be Neville. It was the weekend and Harry knew Neville, of course, would be up early. He put his glasses on and raised his eyebrows at Ron, who he hadn't noticed before.

"Ron?!?" Harry asked looking at his friend who was nearly ready.

Ron nodded. "Savannah and I are going out to the lake." Ron said throwing a sweater on over his t-shirt. " Don't act all suprised, Harry."

Harry rolled his eyes. "Aren't you getting tired of her?" He muttered.

Ron glared at his best friend. "I could never get tired of Savannah. I love her, she's practically this whole universe..of love." He said sighing and day-dreaming.

Harry shook his head in disbelief and snapped his fingers.

"Don't you think you are moving a little too fast?" Harry asked.

This statement caused Ron to laugh, sarcastically.

"No." Ron snapped walking out of the dorm.

Neville walked out of the bathroom, flustered.

"Uhh....something broke, accidentally.......but I fixed it! Oh, hey where did Ron go?" Neville asked.

"With Savannah." Harry muttered and Neville sighed.

"Of course." Neville said sighing.

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Hermione was in the Head's Dorm and saw Draco getting out of his bedroom. Before he could see her she dodged his gaze and ran out of the portrait. She slowed her pace and walked dow to the Great Hall, not really sure what to do today. She usually spent these days with Ron and Harry. Of course Ron was with Savannah and a smart person like Hermione could figure that out in seconds once she reached the Great Hall and only saw Harry talking to Ginny. She hesitated to sit down next to them, but decided that she might as well.

"Hey Gu-" Hermione said.

"I didn't know you were dating the ferret." Harry said cutting her off.

This earned a slap on the shoulder from Ginny.

"Harry, stop it." Ginny said shaking her head at Harry. She looked over at Hermione. "Ron told him and he told me."

Hermione sighed and nodded. "Things changed between Draco and I." Hermione stated and Harry rolled his eyes, which got another slap from Ginny.

Ginny nodded in understandment. "I know how it is, I mean I remember when I dated Blaise Zabini, he changed then he got....killed." She said frowning.

Harry looked up at Ginny in anger. He never had knew this little detail with her and Blaise.

"You hate him one day and then love him the next! It makes no sense 'Mione, no sense at all!" Harry yelled.

"Sorry Harry, but doesn't this remind you of someone? For example..you and Ginny?!?" Hermione snapped.

Harry's face was shocked at Hermione's words which made him begin to stutter.

Ginny's eyebrows furrowed. "Will you two just stop it right now!" She said. "If you need me I'll be in the common room." Ginny walked away.

Harry sighed. "Do whatever you want Hermione, it's your life, not mine." Harry said looking over at the entrance to the Great Hall and saw Draco walking over.

Hermione was about to give Harry a good comeback but followed his gaze over to that sizzling dragon, that's what Lavender called him, and Hermione cursed herself for ever listening to Lavender's conversations with Parvati.

-- This was going to be a interesting conversation.
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