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Old 06-05-2006, 11:32 PM
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Hi, I'm Stephanie or Steph. This is my first ff. I hope you guys like it. Enjoy!

Chapter 1:The Dream

It's Harry's first day back at Hogwarts and he's tired from the trip. After Harry gets settled in, he quickly falls asleep. Soon after falling asleep Harry awakens from a dream very confused. In his dream he and Hermione had gone out on a date and were very into one another. At the end of the date, they kissed. I'm not talkin just a regular kiss, I'm talkin' knocked outta the ball park type kiss. There was pure magic. Electricity even.

"Whoa, what was that about?" Harry whispered over Ron's snores. People say that we dream about our deepest desires and secrets. Can Harry be secretly in love with Hermione and not know it?

The next day...
"Hey Ron, you ever had a really weird dream that freaked you out?" Asked Harry trying to be casual.

"Um, no. Not really. Why are you asking Harry?" replied Ron curiously.

"Oh no reason. Just curious I guess," said Harry nervously.

"Hey guys," said Hermione.

"Hey Hermione," Harry and Ron said together.

"Harry, you're blushing. Are you ok?" asked Hermione.

"Ah yeah. Just a little hot I guess," said Harry continuing to blush.

"Ok. I'll see you guys later. I have to meet someone." said Hermione excitedly.

"Who?" Ron demanded.

"It's none of you're concern. Bye." Hermione rushed out to meet whoever she was meeting.

"I wonder who she's meeting," Ron said curiously.

"Me too," replied Harry.

Later that evening Hermione returned to the common room with a glow about her. Harry had never noticed how beautiful she was.

"You look different, what happened?" Harry asked.

"Oh, I was just hanging out with this guy I met." Hermione said smiling.

"For seven hours?" asked Harry with a puzzled expression on his face.

"Oh, was it that long? I guess it's true what they say, time flies when you're having fun. Well good night," Hermione said continuing to smile about her wonderful day.

"Good night."

While everyone had gone off to bed, Harry remained in the common room thinking.

In Harry's Mind
What could that dream have possibily meant? Why would I dream about Hermione? Who's this guy she saw today? Man, if Hermione kisses in real life like she kissed in my dream, I wouldn't mind dreaming about her more often. Whoa, what are you thinking? It's Hermione you idiot. Remember your friend, who happens to be really attractive. It's not that weird that I find Hermione attractive is it? She is, and smart, passionate. I love the way she studies. Snap out of it you fool. It's Hermione. I wonder if she finds me attractive. After Harry thought to himself for hours, he finally dozed off still in the common room.
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lol, Of course Voldemort has issues. Thx for commenting. It's weird, The Smartest Witch use to be my #1 fan, but it seems to be DanIsMyMan. Going to Upstate 2moro. Have a good weekend everyone!!

Haha, you kno ur my friend! Keep up w/ the good posts Steph!
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Ok. So sry that I haven't been here lately to read any new posts, I have been really busy this week and I'm 100% nackered (that means tired). So here I am saying sory for my lateness. I loved ur last post, you nailed Voldemorts character!!!! So evil and cold. I also liked the newspaper report you wrote, very professional!!! I enjoyed it!!!


Once again so sorry for such a late post and have fun upstate with ur family this weekend and I hope the heatwave disappears soon!!!!
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Chapter 28:The Moment

Harry, Hermione, Ron, and Ginny were having lunch in the Great hall. Ginny looked over to the empty seat next to her, where Draco would have been sitting. "How's he doing?" Hermione asked sensing she was thinking about Draco. "He's doing fine. I'm going to visit him after lunch." Ginny replied. "Give our regards to him." Hermione said sincerely. Harry said "Yeah." Ron just shook his head in agreement as he stuffed his face with some ice cream. Ron had some ice cream on the side of his cheek. "You have chocolate on your face." Hermione said as she wiped the ice cream off his face. Then they all laughed together. It was good to laugh after everything they had been through this year. Harry's scar was burning alittle. Harry scratched it. Ron looked over at him curiously. "You ok mate?" Ron asked concerned. "Yeah, my scar is just hurting a bit. It's nothing." Harry replied dismissively. Hermione played with his hair, and made it even more untidy than it already was. Harry gave her a sweet kiss. Then they both enjoyed the kiss so much, that they started to make out. "Guys, please. We're trying to eat here." Ginny said sarcastically. They broke apart. "Sorry Gin. But his lips are just too hard to resist." Hermione replied. Harry smirked. They all cracked up again from that comment. The bell rang around the castle, telling everyone that lunch was over. "Yes, free period here I come." Ron said excitedly. "I'll see you guys later, I'm off to see Draco." Ginny said as she stood up from the table. Just then owls started to fly in from the opening in the ceiling. "Could these owls be any later?" Ron asked. "Better late than never, I suppose." Hermione replied as an owl dropped a letter into her lap. Ginny received a Daily Prophet newspaper. She looked at that heading in disbelief. "What is it Gin?" Harry asked her. Ginny turned over the newspaper so they could all see. Hermione read the front page article outload for them all to hear. This is what it said:

Draco Malfoy Is A Hero!! By:Miriam Slack

Our sources report that Draco Malfoy saved his mother from his own father. Aparently, the deceased Lucius Malfoy was abusing both his wife and son. Mrs. Malfoy's friends were very concerned about her when they stopped hearing from her. One friend said that she hadn't seen her for several days. Allegedly, Mrs. Malfoy was being held against her will in her own house. She was also being tortured and straved. She was unable to make any contact with the outside world. We found out from our sources that Draco Malfoy rescued his mother. Then had a duel with his father, where in Self-Defense he killed him. Someone who didn't want to be mentioned had this comment. "I think Draco Malfoy is a hero. The Wizarding community is in debt to him. He has ridden this world of a monster. He has also helped the Ministry Of Magic, by getting rid of one of He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named's followers. In my eyes, Draco Malfoy is and will always be a hero." Many people have mixed feelings about Lucius Malfoy's death, and his son's involvement in it. We were able to speak to the Minister Of Magic earlier today and he had this to say. "I personally got the truth out of Mr. Malfoy. He admitted to me what he had done. The Ministry will not be charging him at this time." All we know for now is that Mrs. Malfoy and her son are recovering.
The Daily Prophet is your number 1 source for information around the Wizarding World.

Nobody spoke for a minute. Then Harry broke the ice. "That damn Fudge is such a liar! He's taking the credit for something Dumbledore did." Harry said outraged. Hermione gently touched his leg, and he calmed down. "I can't believe they are calling Draco a hero." Ginny said as she took the newspaper back and tucked it under her arm. "Well he really is if you think about it Gin." Ron said. Ginny smiled faintly. "I better go see Draco. Don't want to be late." Ginny said as she started leaving. Hermione waved goodbye to her. Ginny jogged to the Hospital Wing. When she made it to the door, she stopped to catch her breathe. "Oh shoot. I almost forgot. ACCIO FLOWERS!" Ginny said with a flick of her wand. Beautiful tulips appeared in her hand. She walked into the same old white painted hospital. She passed Madam Pomfrey, who was at her desk and said a quick hello. Madam Pomfrey just smiled back. First she visited Mrs. Malfoy who was sleeping. She placed the flowers on the table near her bed. Then she did something she knew she probably couldn't do if Mrs. Malfoy was awake. She bent down and gave her a kiss on the cheek. "Get better for Draco. He needs you." She whispered. Then she turned to leave, when someone grabbed her arm. Ginny turned around and looked down. Mrs. Malfoy was smiling weakly at her. "No, my son needs you." She said softly. Ginny almost cried. She held back her tears, for she wanted to look strong in front of Mrs. Malfoy. "Thank you." Ginny replied as she held Mrs. Malfoy's hand for a moment. "Go see Draco now. I know he'll want to see you." Mrs. Malfoy said. Ginny nodded and went to see Draco.


The next chapter will be really, really good. I think. I hope u guys will continue to read my ff.
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aww thats sooo sweet,dracos mum is actually quite nice
but that fudge, thats another story lol
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Omg Omg Omg That Was So Good!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pams!!!!!!!!!!!! Pamsoid!!!!!!!!!!!
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hiya Steph, I'm going to read your new chapter tonight!! I promise I will. I can't wait to read it I lvoe this ff so much!!
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i might be going to australia for a cople of days tomorrow, so i probably wont be here to annoy you and tell wicked stories about fudge unfourtunately.
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Ok!! i have to say.........THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!! TOP NOTCH STEPH!!!! Draco mother is recovering which is good, and again I love how you write the newspaper articles sooooooooo professional!!!!!! Harry and Hermione's moment was sweet but funny comments to add into it!! Your story has everything - I can laugh, cry, be angry and be happy all at the same. I love a story that does that!!! 110% for effort and achievement - lol.

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P.S. Sry I took sooooooooo long to read it and I hope you can understand why.
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hey Steph!! plez post soon!!! I luff ur story!!! Can't live w/out it!! PAMSOID!!!!!!!
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Sry, not here to post. Will try and post 2moro. Enjoy ur trip loz315. Thx everyone for the great comments. *heart jumps for joy* I understand Michelle. Don't worry. Will post soon.
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ok the flight isnt till tonight so yeah..
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