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Hi, I'm Stephanie or Steph. This is my first ff. I hope you guys like it. Enjoy!

Chapter 1:The Dream

It's Harry's first day back at Hogwarts and he's tired from the trip. After Harry gets settled in, he quickly falls asleep. Soon after falling asleep Harry awakens from a dream very confused. In his dream he and Hermione had gone out on a date and were very into one another. At the end of the date, they kissed. I'm not talkin just a regular kiss, I'm talkin' knocked outta the ball park type kiss. There was pure magic. Electricity even.

"Whoa, what was that about?" Harry whispered over Ron's snores. People say that we dream about our deepest desires and secrets. Can Harry be secretly in love with Hermione and not know it?

The next day...
"Hey Ron, you ever had a really weird dream that freaked you out?" Asked Harry trying to be casual.

"Um, no. Not really. Why are you asking Harry?" replied Ron curiously.

"Oh no reason. Just curious I guess," said Harry nervously.

"Hey guys," said Hermione.

"Hey Hermione," Harry and Ron said together.

"Harry, you're blushing. Are you ok?" asked Hermione.

"Ah yeah. Just a little hot I guess," said Harry continuing to blush.

"Ok. I'll see you guys later. I have to meet someone." said Hermione excitedly.

"Who?" Ron demanded.

"It's none of you're concern. Bye." Hermione rushed out to meet whoever she was meeting.

"I wonder who she's meeting," Ron said curiously.

"Me too," replied Harry.

Later that evening Hermione returned to the common room with a glow about her. Harry had never noticed how beautiful she was.

"You look different, what happened?" Harry asked.

"Oh, I was just hanging out with this guy I met." Hermione said smiling.

"For seven hours?" asked Harry with a puzzled expression on his face.

"Oh, was it that long? I guess it's true what they say, time flies when you're having fun. Well good night," Hermione said continuing to smile about her wonderful day.

"Good night."

While everyone had gone off to bed, Harry remained in the common room thinking.

In Harry's Mind
What could that dream have possibily meant? Why would I dream about Hermione? Who's this guy she saw today? Man, if Hermione kisses in real life like she kissed in my dream, I wouldn't mind dreaming about her more often. Whoa, what are you thinking? It's Hermione you idiot. Remember your friend, who happens to be really attractive. It's not that weird that I find Hermione attractive is it? She is, and smart, passionate. I love the way she studies. Snap out of it you fool. It's Hermione. I wonder if she finds me attractive. After Harry thought to himself for hours, he finally dozed off still in the common room.
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Chapter 18:The Important Talk

Harry headed for his first class. He was alittle early. He saw Hermione there. He didn't want to seem like he was worried about anything. "Hey Hermione." Said Harry casually. "Hi sweetie. Come here." She said as she pulled Harry in for a kiss. They had a sweet and tender kiss. It was very enjoyable for both of them. "What was that for?" Harry asked her. "There has to be a reason to want to kiss my boyfriend?" She asked back. "No, it was just unexpected. So, did you do the homework?" He asked her. "Of Course. You?" She replied. "Yeah, I just hope it's good. Looks like class is starting." Harry said. He and Hermione went in for Defense Against The Dark Arts. It was a very long class. All Harry could think about was what he and Dumbledore had discussed. He thought about how he didn't want any secrets between him and Hermione. "I am going to tell her about my dream, even though it's going to scare her. It's better that she knows." Harry thought in between the class lecture. When the class was over, they had a free period. Harry decided to take Hermione out to the gardens. It was a brillant day. He and Hermione were holding hands. They enjoyed a wonderful lunch. "You know I love you with all my heart. I would do anything for you." Harry said with a nervous expression on his face. "You're starting to scare me. What's wrong?" Hermione asked concerned. "I have to tell you something, something that's going to be hard for you to hear." Harry said seriously. "Ok. Just tell me." Hermione demanded. "When I was screaming in pain and yelling no, it was because I was having a terrifying dream. I was battling Voldemort and he was winning. Then out of nowhere, you, Ron, Ginny, Ms. Weasley, and Dumbledore showed up. Voldemort killed all of you in front of me. That's when I was screaming no. Then I ended up in a cementary. I was surrounded with all the graves of the people I love and care about. Voldemort killed all of you. I'm so terrified that he will kill all you guys for real. I couldn't stand it if I lost you. I love you all so much. I would die if I lost you, not to mention everyone else." Harry finished afraid of how Hermione would react. Hermione had a scared look on her face. She wasn't even blinking. "Oh my God. That's horrible. Harry, I'm so sorry you had to see all of that. I could only imagine how you must feel everytime you look at me. You must think that it could be the last time you're going to see my face. Even though it was only a dream, I know you're dreams sometimes come true. I know how much courage it must have took to tell me how I may or may not die. I didn't think it was possible, but by you being honest with me about something so difficult, I've fallen even more in love with you." Hermione said as a single tear fell from her beautiful brown eyes. "I love you even more each and everyday." Harry replied. He and Hermione shared some passionate kisses before heading back to the castle. By the end of the day, Harry had told Ron and Ginny about what he saw. They were scared, but still supportive of Harry. Harry found that he was a bit more at ease because he told his friends' about his dream. He and Hermione became more closer and their relationship just kept getting stronger. Harry knew that with everyone he loved by his side, it would give him the strength he needed to defeat Voldemort.
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Chapter 19Draco's Weirdness

At first, Draco and Ginny were so close. Now for reasons unknown to Ginny, Draco became very distant. Everyone now knew about Draco and Ginny's relationship. Of course there were people who disapproved, and hated the idea of a Slytherin and a Gryffindor going out. The kids in Slytherin were treating Draco horribly. They turned their backs on him and treated him like if he were the enemy. Ginny tried to comfort Draco as best she could. She could tell that their relationship was causing Draco a lot of problems. Ginny was so use to seeing Draco in the halls of Hogwarts, and embracing in a sweet kiss before heading to their next class. Now everytime she saw him, he looked unhappy and just nodded his head when she said hi. "Hey Draco." said Ginny casually. "Hi Gin." Draco said sadly. "We need to talk." Ginny said seriously. "I know what you're trying to say. You want to break up with me." Draco replied. "No Draco. I love you with all my heart. I'm just really worried about you." Ginny said with a concerned look on her face. "Why? I'm fine." Draco said dishonestly. "No you're not. You look miserable and even sick. You're starting to scare me." Ginny confessed. "Well, there's nothing to be scared about. I'm fine. Now if you don't mind, I have to get to class." Draco said coldly. Ginny wasn't fooled. She knew something was seriously wrong with Draco. After classes were over, Ginny went to head off Draco near the Slytherin common room. "Draco, come with me so we can talk." Ginny said. "We can talk here." Draco replied. "If you don't come with me right now, I'll force you." Said Ginny dead seriously. "Fine. Let's go." Said Draco coldly. They headed outside, near Hagrid's hut. "Please Draco. Talk to me." Ginny pleaded. "What do you want me to say? Everything's fine." Draco lied once again. "Why have you been so distant lately?" Ginny asked. "I haven't been distant." Draco replied. Then he gave her an unpassionate kiss. "See. No distance." Draco said. Ginny felt bad because she knew that Draco was lying right to her face. "Draco, I know you better than anyone else. Why are you lying to me? Please, tell me what's wrong." Ginny pleaded. "I... can't." Draco whispered. Ginny didn't hear what he had said. "What? Sorry, didn't hear you." Replied Ginny. "Nothing. Look, I'm sorry. I think we should break up." Draco said uneasiley. "Why?" Ginny asked while tears streamed down her face. "I don't love you anymore. I've met someone else." Draco said as he ran back to the castle. Ginny just sat there, continuing to cry. When she pulled herself together, she slowly went back to the castle. When she reached Gryffindor tower, she wiped away all of her tears, and tried to look as though she had not been crying. "Password." The Fat Lady demanded. "Villa." Ginny said sadly. When she entered the common room, she only found Ron there. She was afraid that he would notice that something was wrong. “Hi Ginny.” Said Ron not noticing anything. “Hi.” Ginny said sadly. “What’s wrong?” Ron asked finally noticing Ginny’s expression. “Nothing.” Ginny lied. “I’m going to bed.” Said Ginny tiredly. “Wait. Something’s wrong. What is it?” Ron asked concerned. “Nothing.” Ginny lied again. “It’s Malfoy, isn’t it? What the bloody h*** did he do?!” Ron asked angrily. “It’s ok. I’m fine.” Ginny sobbed out. “Tell me what happened.” Ron demanded with fury in his voice. “Well… lately Draco’s been distant. Just now Draco said he didn’t love me anymore and that he had met someone else. He…broke up with me.” Ginny struggled to say. “I’ll kill him!” Ron yelled in outrage. “No Ron! Don’t!” Ginny pleaded, but Ron had already stormed out of Gryffindor tower. Ron was so pissed that he would have killed anyone who got in his path. Ron went to the dungeons to find Malfoy. When Ron turned the corner, he found Draco looking miserable. “You bloody *******. I’ll kill you!” Ron yelled. Ron punched Draco hard in the face. Draco fell to the floor. Ron kicked him repeatedly. Then Ron continued to punch Malfoy in the face. Malfoy was a mess. He had a very bloody nose, lips, and bruises all over his face. Then Ron’s rage got the better of him, as he started choking Malfoy. Draco was turning red. He couldn’t breathe.

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Chapter 20:The Secret


“Ron stop!! You’re killing him!” Ginny yelled coming out of nowhere. Ron stopped because Draco stopped breathing and was unconscious. “I couldn’t stop myself. If you hadn’t shown up when you did, I would have killed him.” Ron said not believing what he had done. “What the h*** were you thinking?!” Asked Ginny hysterically. “When I saw how much he had hurt you, I just lost it.” Ron explained. “Oh my God! Look at Draco. He’s not breathing. Draco? Draco? Can you hear me?” Ginny asked worriedly. “Ron, he looks really bad. We have to take him to the hospital wing.” Ginny said scared. “Ok.” Ron performed the spell for levitating. Draco’s limp body floated in the air. When they were going to the hospital wing, Ron looked back at his sister and saw the horror and worry in her face. Ron was feeling really guilty about what he had done. That’s the bad thing about betrayal, it make make people do some crazy things. When they finally got to the hospital wing, Madam Pomfrey was able to fix Malfoy up good. He did have to stay the night. Ginny stayed by his side. Ron left and let Ginny stay with draco. “Draco, show me those beautiful blue eyes of yours.” Ginny demanded. Draco opened his eyes ever so slowly. “Ginny…I’m so...sorry. I didn’t want to hurt you. I don’t blame Ron for what he did to me. He had every right.” Draco said weakly. “Are you ok?” Ginny asked. “I’ll be fine. The question is, are you?” Draco replied. “No, I’m not. I just saw my brother going crazy. Plus, you just finished breaking my heart.” Ginny said as a single tear fell down her cheek. “I know how much I hurt you. You’ll never know how much I regret lying to you.” Draco confessed. “What do you mean? You lied to me?” Ginny asked. “I haven’t met anyone else. I still love you. I just broke up with you to protect you.” Draco said still alittle weak. “To protect me from who?” Ginny asked. “My father. He said that if I didn’t break up with you, he would kill you in your sleep. My father always keeps his word, so I knew he would kill you if I didn’t do what he wanted.” Draco said uncomfortabley. “Your father wanted to kill me? But why?” Ginny asked confused. “My father said you were poison to me. He said you were a disease that needed to be killed. He hates your family. I’m talking pure and utter hatred. He hates you most of all. He said that you corrupted me. That you turned me into a weak, pathetic excuse for a pureblood.” When Draco finished, Ginny had terror and anger in her eyes. “I can’t believe your father can hate me that much. I’m so sorry Draco.” Ginny said. “Why? Why would you be sorry?” Draco asked. “I’m sorry because Ron beat you up because of me. You were just trying to protect me. And I'm sorry because for the little time that passed when you broke up with me, I hated you.” Ginny confessed. “Don’t be sorry. I should have told you the truth. Can you ever forgive me?” Draco asked. “Of course. I forgive you. Please from now on, let’s be completely honest with eachother.” Ginny replied. “Ok. There’s something else you should know then.” Draco said uneasily. “What is it?” Asked Ginny. “My father…he...he beats me. He beats the living daylight out of me. Not just me, my mother too. Sometimes he’ll beat me for no reason at all. Most of the time, he would beat me because of you.” Draco said uneasily. “Oh my God. I’m so sorry Draco. I should have known. How could I not have known? All the signs were there. You didn’t like to be touched. I’m so sorry Draco.” Ginny said as tears filled her eyes. She went to give Draco a hug, but he stopped her. “Look.” Said Draco as he lifted up his shirt to reveal a nasty, huge black and blue. “Your father did that? Does it still hurt?” Asked Ginny. “Yeah. Well, now you know my secret. Does this change anything?” Draco asked. “Of course it does. I still love you, but knowing you were getting hurt because of me is to hard to think about.” Ginny said as tears continued to fall down her face. “It was worth getting beaten up to be able to kiss those sweet lips of yours. If I had to do it all over again, I would do the same thing as before only I would have been honest with you. I love you so much. I’ve never cared so much about someone before. I had a wall around my heart to protect me, but you tore it down. I will always be grateful for that.” Draco said with a smile on his once bruised face. "I'm not going to let you're father win. I won't let him tear us apart." Said Ginny bravely. "Then I won't either." Said Draco. Then they shared a real, passionate kiss that was filled with so much love. Ginny stayed with Draco for the rest of the night.

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Chapter 21Draco's Surprise

The next day Draco was released from the Hospital Wing. He went back to the Slytherin common room, to find a gang of Slytherins waiting for him. "Hey Draco, nice to see you all better. That poor, pathetic Weasley must have really given you a beating." Said one Slytherin. All the other Slytherins hollered with laughter. "Whatever." Said Draco as he tried to move past them to make his way to the dormitory. They all stopped him, by surrounding him and blocking his path. "Where do you think your going?" Said a seventh year Slytherin. He had apparently become the new "leader" of the Slytherins', taking over Draco's spot. "I'm going to get my stuff for school. Now move." Draco demanded. "Whoa, Who the h*** do you think your talking to? Maybe if you didn't become a traitor, you would know what's been going on. I'm in charge now. What I say goes. I've replaced you in every single way. I'm the Slytherin seeker, I'm Snape's favorite, and I even have your ex-girlfriend." Draco glanced over to Pansy Parkinson. She had a huge grin on her face. She knew what was going to happen next. "You betrayed all of us when you hooked up with that poor, Gryffindor B****." The new leader Tom said. "Hey! Don't talk about her like that! I don't want to ever hear those words come out your mouth again. Do you understand me?" Draco said furiously. "Yeah, I understand." Said Tom with a smirk on his face. He surprised Draco with a hard punch across the face. Draco fell to the floor. "Hold him down! Grab his wand." Ordered Tom. The Slytherins', including the girls held Draco down. Goyle took Draco's wand from inside his Slytherin robes, and handed it over to Tom. "I'm going to enjoy this. I'm going to use your own wand against you." Said Tom while laughing a evil laugh. Draco was helpless. He couldn't do anything while all those Slytherin's were holding him down. "Crucio! (The torture curse)" Tom yelled. Draco was in excruciating pain. The Slytherins were no longer holding him down, because he was moving all over the place as if he were having a fit. Draco couldn't think of anything but the pain. All that was heard in the Slytherin common room was Draco's screams, and the Slytherin's laughter. When the spell wore off, the Slytherins weren't done. "Pick him up. I want him to see this coming." Tom said. Crabbe and Goyle picked up Draco and held him tight, so he couldn't escape. "How dare you too. How could you do this to me?" Draco managed to say to Crabbe and Goyle. "Sorry Draco, but we have our orders. We don't follow you anymore." Said Goyle. Crabbe nodded stupidly. "This is for the Slytherins." Said Tom. He punched Draco hard in the gut. "This one is for the lord you betrayed. Lord Voldemort." Tom said smirking. He punched Draco hard across the face. Draco started bleeding from his nose and lip. "And these are just because you shacked up with that Weasley, and became friends with Harry Potter." Tom said in disgust. He punched Draco continuously in the face and gut. Draco was so hurt that his body got limp and Tom ordered Crabbe and Goyle to let him go. Draco staggered to the ground. "Let's go. I want Lord Voldemort to have the pleasure of killing Malfoy himself." Tom said and the Slytherins left. The Ministry Of Magic knew at once that someone had performed an Unforgiveable Curse at Hogwarts. They arrived at once to the Slytherin common room, along with Dumbledore. They looked around the room, expecting to see Death-Eaters. All they saw was someone's body on the floor. They ran up to the limp body, and discovered that it was Draco Malfoy. He was not breathing, and had severe bruises. He was bleeding alot. "We must find out who did this at once. Lupin, check and see if the secruity was breached in any way." Dumbledore ordered. Lupin nodded and disappeared. Dumbledore personally took Draco to the hospital wing. When Madam Pomfrey saw Draco all she said was "Oh dear. Not again." "Is he going to be alright?" Dumbledore asked concerned for Draco's well being. "He has two broken ribs, a concussion, and a broken nose. Whoever did this to him, it doesn't look like they were alone." Said Madam Pomfrey. "Well, you can fix him, right?" Dumbledore asked. "Of course. I just need some time. It takes awhile for bones to mend and heal. I would also like you to contact any family and friends Mr. Malfoy may have." Madam Pomfrey said as she got to work. Dumbledore left as requested and got two of The Order members to get Harry, Hermione, Ron, and Ginny. He also had two Order members to guard the hospital wing, so whoever did this to Malfoy couldn't finish the job. The gang and Ginny were in their common room studying for an upcoming exam. They were startled to see Tonks and a new Order member entering their common room. "Tonks, what are you doing here?" Harry asked surprised to see her and her pink hair. "I'm afraid that your friend Mr. Malfoy has been attacked by someone unknown by use of the Unforgiveable Curse. Madam Pomfrey is working on him as we speek." Tonks said nervously. Ginny shrieked in horror. Hermione had a terrified look on her face. "Let's go. Draco needs us. Were all he has." Ginny said as she fled from the common room. She ran all the way to the hospital wing. Everyone was having some trouble keeping up with her. Nobody wanted to reach Draco more than Ginny. When Ginny reached the hospital wing, she swept past Dumbledore and the Order and went right to Madam Pomfrey. "Is Draco ok? Can I see him?" Ginny asked deeply concerned. "Mr. Malfoy sustained many serious injuries. I didn't expect to see him again so soon. Mr. Malfoy is very strong and he will recover. He does need much rest. You can go in and see him now." Madam Pomfrey said seriously. Ginny said thank you quickly and went over to Draco. He was sleeping peacefully. Ginny didn't want to wake him so she just sat there, staring at his beautiful features. He had the most wonderfully blonde hair. Ginny started to stroke his hair. After 3 mintues, Harry, Hermione, and Ron finally arrived. Dumbledore told him all he knew. Ginny decided to let Draco continue to sleep.
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