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JeshieRAWR · 04-26-2009, 09:19 PM

Made by: Mwa xDD

Hey, my name's Jess. This is my first fan fiction ever and the characters, as well as the Harry Potter universe, belong to J.K. Rowling. This story has violence, drama, and jealousy packed into tons of chapters. Please read, review, and tell me what you think of it!

Other Stories by Jess: Mission Pureblood, Desperate, Wizard POV's, Mourning and S.O.S. [Jessica's Request Thread]

Chapter 2 //Chapter 3 // Chapter 4 //Chapter 5 // Chapter 6 // Chapter 7 // Chapter 8 // Chapter 9 // Chapter 10 // Chapter 11 // Chapter 12 // Chapter 13 // Chapter 14 // Chapter 15 //Chapter 16 //Chapter 17 //Chapter 18 // Chapter 19 // Chapter 20 // Chapter 21 // Chapter 22 // Chapter 23 // Chapter 24 // Chapter 25 //Chapter 26 //Chapter 27 //Chapter 28 //Chapter 29 //Chapter 30 //Chapter 31 //Chapter 32 //Chapter 33 //Chapter 34 //Chapter 35//Chapter 36

*Beep* *Beep* *Beep* I looked over to my alarm clock. "Oh no! It’s 7:00 P.M! I need to hurry!" I said panicked. I slipped on my fuzzy blue slippers and went to get my suitcase. I looked over my dresses to see if I should bring one for the ball this upcoming winter. If only Ron could take me this year.

I picked up the picture frame that Harry gave me for my birthday this year - it showed Harry, Ron and I standing in front of the Hogwarts train ready to leave. I have tears in my eyes and Ron keeps wiping them off. Oh, and of course Harry is just laughing at us. I skimmed over my dresser and saw the diamond necklace Ron gave me for my birthday. Oh, how I wish he would kiss me.

*Meow* *Meow* *Meow* "Oh! Crookshanks, I’m so sorry!" I said sounding suprised. I put Crookshanks into his bag, gave him a kitty treat and headed out my bedroom door. I said goodbye to my family and headed off to the train station.

Wow! It was so crowded this year. How am I ever going to find Ron and Harry? "Hermione!" said Ron. Oh, look there’s Ron. "Hello Ronald!" I said. "How was your Christmas with your family and Harry?" I asked.

"Oh good, how was yours Hermione?" Ron asked sighing. "Swell! I got a photo of you, me and Harry in front of the Hogwarts train. Of course a diamond necklace from someone special." I said curiously. He turned the darkest shade of scarlet I’ve ever seen in my life.

"I knew you would like it." Ron said blushing furiously. "Yes I absolutely do!" I sounded excited. I gave him a big hug and kissed him on the cheek. "Am I interrupting something?" said Harry interrupting. I blushed.

"Hello Harry, Ron here was just saying that he had a bruise on his cheek so I kissed it to make it better." I said pointing to his cheek. "Oh well that makes perfect sense Hermione, now that’s weird I don’t see the bruise anymore." Harry said but not suprised. Ron and I blushed pink. We all then went to sit in our compartment.

As we walked into the compartment we saw Cho and Ginny walking past our compartment. They were arguing about something I'll probably get to hear the whole story when I get into the common room. Then I started giggling. "What are you laughing about?" Asked a confused Harry. "Oh, nothing just thinking about something," I said with some difficulty.

"I've always wondered what's going on in that head of your's, Hermione," said Ron who was kind of blushing. "Why would you like to know Ron?" I asked kind of confused. He blushed but shook his head. I hope that meant that he liked me.

But I doubt it he seemed to have his eye on Lavender Brown. The girl from last year. Ugh, how much I hate her. My hands tightened into fists. The train started to slowed down to a stop. We must be at Hogwarts.

I was just about to get up and take the cage Crookshanks was in, but as I went down to get it, my hand brushed against Ron's. For a second, which felt like hours, we stared into each others eyes. Until he finally said, "Is it okay if I carry Crookshanks, Hermione?" "Oh sure Ron, thank you." I probably looked really red in the face but I didn't care. It seemed so romantic even though Ron probably didn't mean to touch my hand it still seemed like it.

We arrived at Hogwarts, set down our luggage, and went into the common room. The first person I saw was Ginny. She had tons of tears in her eyes. She came and hugged me really hard. Ron and Harry followed behind me.

Ginny stared into my eyes and I could tell she just wanted to have some privacy with me. I bet it was about Harry. "Harry, Ron could you please give me and Ginny a little privacy?" I asked pleadingly. Harry left but Ron didn't. He just kept staring at me.

"Ron please." I said. "Why can't I know Hermione?" Ron said. "I'll make it up to you later Ron okay?" I said. He blushed but nodded and left. That's when this whole story about Ginny and Cho started. Ginny started out saying,"I was walking down to my compartment when Cho came up to me and said,"Ginny just forget about it you'll never get Harry, yeah I've seen you've got your eye on him but you'll never have him, he's mine!"

Ginny started to cry, I held her tightly. Then I started," Ginny don't worry the Yule Ball is in a month, I bet Harry will ask you, you just have to let him know you like him, try flirting I think that works, well it doesn't when I want Ron to like me but he's always around Lavender. Ughhh." "Oh Hermione thank you! I have so much confidence now, and you should know Ron loves you." "Well then why is he Lavender's boyfriend?" I said with agony.

"It's probably cause he wants to make you jealous, Hermione." said Ginny confidently. "Then I will make him just as jealous." "At least he hasn't kissed Lavender yet," I said hopefully. "Yeah don't worry Hermione, you'll have him now or then." said Ginny. "Thanks" I said weary. I then hugged her and headed off to the Great Hall for dinner. Well two can play at that game.

I was walking down the halls when I saw Draco alone. I bet he just finished eating. I walked by and had a plan. I ran back to him. Then it started. "Hey Draco, would you be my boyfriend?" I asked faintly.

JeshieRAWR · 06-07-2009, 11:31 PM

*UPDATE* CHAPTER 13 IS GOING TO BE UP ON WEDNESDAY JUNE 10, 2009 OR FRIDAY JUNE 12, 2009! *UPDATE*

~Jess

P.S. Please give me ideas for Chapter 13! I need more ideas about Harry/Ginny/and Cho, also how to go on with Ron and Hermione and Draco.

Queen.Infinity · 06-10-2009, 04:40 PM

WowwwwwwwThis is by far my fave story. I'm not kidding.....i really like the cliff hangers in the story and the plot is just great.
Keep on writing.

~Sienna

:read!:

Lollipop! · 06-10-2009, 07:10 PM

Please Post soon!

JeshieRAWR · 06-10-2009, 09:50 PM

I felt like I needed to give my readers a sneak preview of Chapter 13. BTW I might not post it on Friday since this is all I have because of exams. But I'm thinking it will be posted soon after Friday since Friday is my last day of school! Also for my new readers; PotterGirl714 and Queen.Infinity I would like to know if you want me to message you about every post of this story that comes up. If not that's fine, I just won't message you. I will also like to know what is your favorite ships. Ex. Harry/Ginny, Hermione/Draco, Hermione/Ron, Draco/Pansy, Blaise/Pansy, Neville/Luna, Hermione/Neville etc. Hope everyone enjoys!

~Jess

Chapter 13 Preview

I walked over to Ron nervously and felt a sudden rush of a blush coming on my cheeks. He smiled at me and took my hand. "Erm...Hello Hermione." Ron said. "Hello Ronald." I said. He smiled and blushed scarlet. "Erm... I was wondering if you erm.... wanted to be....ummm my girl..erm...friend?" He asked looking down. They turned a little in a circle until the door was right behind Ron about 10 feet away. Hermione looked into his eyes and before she could say something she gasped. Draco was standing right behind Ron looking furious. Ron finally saw and heard Hermione gasp and turned around.

"So Granger, I'm guessing your going to pick him, eh?" Draco asked glaring at me. "Erm... I'm not sure." I said. "Well you need to make up your decision Granger because I can't wait so long for you." Draco said smirking at her. Oh how I hated that smirk of his. Then there was a crash outside of the door.
Death Eaters she thought. "Attack" She heard. Ron and Draco grabbed her and they huddled together in a broom closet that the Astronomy Tower had. Ron on her right and Draco on her left closet to the door. They had heard another crash, right outside of the broom closet. They furthered into the broom closet and looked for an exit. The door bursted open to find... Lucius Malfoy.

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Please tell me what you think of it! Also I need some ideas for the shipping of Harry/Ginny/and Cho. Also give me some ideas from how to go on from that. Thanks! ~Jess

scarlet5890 · 06-11-2009, 12:19 AM

new reader. I love your story!! i really like Dramione. i never would have wanted them together in the books, but for some reason i have always loved dramione fan fics!! anyway, whether she ends up with Ron or Draco its a great story!!

Maxilocks · 06-11-2009, 02:23 AM

Whoa, LOTS of action, there.

The Draco vs Ronald saga rages on.

Lollipop! · 06-11-2009, 06:18 AM

I can't believe whats going on here!

AMAZING!

I will send you some ideas for Harry/Ginny/Cho.

I am loving this chapter so far!

harita · 06-11-2009, 04:55 PM

wow Lucius Malfoy...couldnt have got worse for draco...what is Malfoy Sr planning to do? abduct Mione or torcher Malfoy Jr. for sort of falling for the so called mudblood they so hate...waiting for more...MIOne say yes to ROn plz.....plz....

Lollipop! · 06-11-2009, 05:50 PM

Draco called her GRANGER!

POTTER128 · 06-11-2009, 07:31 PM

ok that was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!

ill give you my ideas as soon as possible

PotterGirl714 · 06-12-2009, 02:22 AM

I would love updates to tell me when you update haha. I am a huge harry/ginny shipper and ron/hermione.

driveunit1 · 06-12-2009, 07:19 AM

this getting intresting!!!!
why is malfoy there?? maybe he knows abt draco and hermione or he has asked draco to join the dark side!!!
i am shipper of Hr/R .with all my heart i hope hermione says yes to RON!!!
waiting for ur next post!!!!!
PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!

Lollipop! · 06-13-2009, 01:41 PM

Please POST soon!
I Can't wait!

Lollipop! · 06-14-2009, 07:43 AM

Please Post soon!:hermy2:
I'm dying!

JackW092 · 06-14-2009, 08:24 PM

Ooooooohh! It's getting exciting!!! I am a huge Harry/Ginny shipper so I want to know what happens to them aswell!!! Post next chapter soon please!!!

JeshieRAWR · 06-14-2009, 11:14 PM

Hey everyone! Thank you all for the wonderful comments! Thanks for reading my story and reviewing on it! I love you all! ~Jess

P.S. I hope you enjoy Chapter 13!!! Yes I finally got it finished! Also thanks for the wonderful ideas from my reviewers! They helped a lot! Also thanks to the new readers/reviewers! I love to have new reviewers/readers! So please review after you read! Oh and if you have any ideas for Chapter 14 please PM me! It helps me out so much! Thanks!

JeshieRAWR · 06-14-2009, 11:24 PM

Chapter 13

I walked over to Ron nervously and felt a sudden rush of a blush coming on my cheeks. He smiled at me and took my hand. "Erm...Hello Hermione." Ron said. "Hello Ronald." I said. He smiled and blushed scarlet. "Erm... I was wondering if you erm.... wanted to be....ummm my girl..erm...friend?He asked looking down.

They turned a little in a circle until the door was right behind Ron about 10 feet away. Hermione looked into his eyes and before she could say something she gasped. Draco was standing right behind Ron looking furious. Ron finally saw and heard Hermione gasp and turned around.

"So Granger, I'm guessing your going to pick him, eh?" Draco asked glaring at me. "Erm... I'm not sure." I said. "Well you need to make up your decision Granger because I can't wait so long for you." Draco said smirking at her. Oh how I hated that smirk of his. Then there was a crash outside of the door.

Death Eaters she thought. "Attack" She heard. Ron and Draco grabbed her and they huddled together in a broom closet that the Astronomy Tower had. Ron on her right and Draco on her left closet to the door. They had heard another crash, right outside of the broom closet. They furthered into the brrom closet and looked for an exit. The door bursted open to find... Lucius Malfoy.

Lucius's eyes were beaming at Draco in a horrible way. Ron and Draco tightened their grip on Hermione as they knew what was coming. Lucius grabbed Draco's arm and dragged them out of the broom closet. Lucius muttered a spell and they were all tied up with invisible ropes. "Looky here, I found the poor blood traitor, the filthy mudblood, and my ex son." Lucius said looking at each one of them. "Let us go father!" Draco said. "Ahh, Hello Draco, I'm sorry but I can not do that for I have to kill the mudblood." Lucius said.

Hermione was frightened and squeezed Draco's hand. Draco winced and said, "Why?" He said growling angrily. "I have information from a reliable source saying that you have been with the mudblood for a while." Lucius said. "Pansy told you didn't she?" Draco said still having the growl coming out of his mouth. His mouth was twitching.

"Correct. Now Draco for the fun part. I will get one of the newest deatheaters to come out and torcher the mudblood in front of you lot." Lucius said smiling evily. Draco's and Ron's eyes widened while Hermione started to wimper and cry. Out of the shadows came a figure with a mask and black cloak on. "Mr. Krum no need to have the cloak on, Miss Granger should see who she is getting torchered by." Lucius said.

Hermione lifted her head to face Viktor Krum. Viktor then said, "Kneel now mudblood!" He said angrily. She started to cry with tears like hail tumbling down her cheek. She took long glances at Ron and Draco before she knew what was coming.....

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In the Gryffindor Common Room......

Ginny's POV

I wonder where Hermione/Ron/and Draco are. Probably just arguing about something. Oh well. I stared at the fireplace for a while until I decided to read my book upstairs. I was reading when I heard something downstairs. I started slowly and quietly down the stairs. There was Cho and Harry arguing about something.

Harry's POV

I couldn't believe Cho had the nerve to ask me out! How dare she! Everyone knows that me and Ginny are together!

Ginny's POV

Oh no! I think that Cho just asked Harry to go to the ball with her! She can't! I know it's not good to cry but I can't help it! I don't want Harry to go with Cho and Harry still hasn't even asked me yet! It's not fair!

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Ginny walked up to Harry grabbed the collar of his shirt and kissed him full on the mouth. She parted with him quickly and said, " Harry, are you ever going
to ask your girlfriend to the ball? Or am I just going to have to ask myself?" Cho glared daggers at Ginny and said, "No Harry pick me! You know you want
to!" Harry was in a confused state. He didn't know what to do. All what he could think of was going with his girlfriend which would be the proper choice or go with his ex which wouldn't but he still likes her. Harry ruffled his hair and walked out of the common room leaving the two enemies there.

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In the Astronomy Tower...........

"Crucio!" Viktor said raising his wand at Hermione. Hermione screamed in pain of the cruiciatis curse. Ron and Draco were yelling and fumbling trying to get
out of the ropes to help their loved one. Viktor and Lucius laughed at all of them. "Just wait until the Dark Lord comes" Lucius said smily evily again.
"You will never get away with this!" Ron said.

"Oh is that so? hahahahahaha!" Viktor said. "I thought you loved her! How could you do that to her Viktor?" Ron said. "Oh the mudblood your referring to? Oh well it's quite obvious I went out with her to get some information out of her from you two, it didn't seem to help because my emotions got the best of me so I ended up snogging her most of them time." Viktor said.

Draco and Ron winced thinking about Viktor and Hermione together. They both looked down at Hermione who seemed to be unconcious. Lucius muttered a spell which apparated Draco, Hermione, and Ron into the Malfoy Manor basement. "How did you apparate out of Hogwarts? There are no ways of doing it!" Ron yelled. "You foolish boy! Do you not know who I am? I am the Dark Lord's assistant as you could say." Lucius yelled.

Draco winced but kept staring at Hermione next to him unconcious. "Now be quiet! I will check on you tomorrow evening for the Dark Lord's presence." Lucius said while Viktor and him went up the stairs. They all went to sleep thinking of the terrible things to happen.

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The Next Day (Morning)............

Harry's POV

I can't help thinking of those bloody girls! Ughhh! They are messing with my brain! I already have Voldemort messing with it I don't need these foolish girls! Even though I like them both. This is so confusing! Oh no! Here comes Cho! "Hello Harry!" Cho said sitting by me rubbing my arm. "Hello Cho, is Ginny up yet?" I asked.

She shook her head and said, " I need to tell you something can you lean closer? I don't want anybody to hear." She said looking back behind her smiling and leaned in. She then started snogging me! I pushed her away and I heard a gasp and a sob. "So you picked her? I see, well we are over Harry!" Ginny said picking up a piece of bread and ran out the door.

I followed Ginny into the empty classrooom and kneeled by her. "Ginny I do not choose her! I choose you! I want you to be mine! Please be! I also want you to come to the ball with me not her! Please do come! If not with me, please come though.

I can't live without your presence, I....erm.......I ....love you." I said staring into her eyes. She smiled triumphately and kissed me full on the mouth, parted with me and said, "Harry I would love to go with you to the ball! I also love you too!" My heart seemed to stop for a minute but I smiled and took her hand and we walked out of the classroom.

While we were walking down the halls to our next class, Potions Ginny asked me something, "Harry did you get the letter about Voldemort being back?" Ginny asked. I nodded my head. "Well I was thinking that maybe the disappearance with Hermione, Ron, and Draco has to do something with it." Ginny said quickly.

I hadn't even thought about Ron not even being there neither Hermione. Oh no! "What? They're gone? For how long!?!" I asked her. "Since yesterday night." She said quickly. "Oh Ginny, don't worry about it! They are all heads and they are probably just getting a early start on robes for the ball this Saturday. I mean it's still only Tuesday." I said not worried as much now. She nodded her head in agreement.

I hope everyone liked Chapter 13! Please PM me if you have any ideas for Chapter 14 because the more ideas I get from reviewers the faster the post is until it comes up!

Review please! Thanks! ~Jess

PotterGirl714 · 06-14-2009, 11:43 PM

I love it that is amazing!!! PAMS!

JeshieRAWR · 06-14-2009, 11:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PotterGirl714

I love it that is amazing!!! PAMS!

Thank You!
I hope everyone liked the Harry/Ginny parts.
I tried my best!
I will also try and reply soon but I still haven't got any ideas.

Thanks for commenting!

<3 Jess

POTTER128 · 06-15-2009, 05:11 AM

wow didnt really expect krum, but interesting, AWESOME. that one just gave me an idea the next chapter should be even more interesting i cant wait!!!!!!!!!

LOVE YOUR FF!!!!! <3

JeshieRAWR · 06-15-2009, 05:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by POTTER128

wow didnt really expect krum, but interesting, AWESOME. that one just gave me an idea the next chapter should be even more interesting i cant wait!!!!!!!!!

LOVE YOUR FF!!!!! <3

Thanks so much!
I also got the message and I think I might use that idea!

Thanks!
~Jess