victors a traitor!! wow!! great chapter!!

Okay Good!
haha I was a little worried
but i'm glad it was awesome

thanks
~Jess

Thanks a whole lot!
I love to hear what you think of it!

~Jess

I know!
I just thought we needed him back in the story too!
Thanks a lot!

~Jess

Woah!!! Jess this chapter was the best! I never expected Krum there and if he did come I never thought he would torture Hermione! Hey, you are really going on great ... ~!

I did like the H/G parts, and there's a fact that am not a H/G Shipper still they were touching, And I really loved the D/Hr!! Mesmerizing!!! The look on Draco's look and silent feelings!!

Just continue your writing Jess! Waiting to see more of D/Hr!!

Lolz, you know what? You are slowly turning me from H/Hr to D/Hr

Thanks! I thought I should bring in some old characters back!
Yes well I'm glad you liked those parts, I just had to put more in this chapter because I have some readers who love that shipping.
Thank you!
haha wow I didn't know I could do such a thing!

~Jess

hey nice chapter Hermione<3Ron...waiting for more...Vicky is back...couldnt even guess it for a sec that he will be back...

Thanks!
Yeah I thought that he should come back in the story!
Also call me Jess, because Hermione<3Ron is my username!
Glad you liked it!

~Jess

NOTICE!!!
I would really really really like 2 more new readers before I put the next chapter up! That would be awesome! Also when I do have some new readers, please message me to tell me if you would like to have me message you when I put a new post up on this story! Thanks! ~Jess
NOTICE!!!

One word: DRACO!!!!!!!! *hyperventilates*

*Ahem*

*New Reader to the rescue* YAY! Luffed your story, Jess! Thanks for telling me about it, I enjoyed reading it, it's a really good story. xD Your writing is good so far, keep up the good work.

And I'm telling my wonderful readers they should check this out, because it's wonderful.

WHOAAA!

A LOT sure happened in that last chapter. I can't believe Viktor's a death eater - I like him! And he didn't seem bad at all. =[ But that's what makes fan fiction so great - totally unexpected twists!

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Originally Posted by Jess

NOTICE!!!
I would really really really like 2 more new readers before I put the next chapter up! That would be awesome! Also when I do have some new readers, please message me to tell me if you would like to have me message you when I put a new post up on this story! Thanks! ~Jess
NOTICE!!!

Take this easy, love. Keep posting - you'll pick up readers as you go along. I started with two readers on my first story, and ended it with over thirty of them. People will come, don't worry.

Anndd... POST MORE SOON! =]

I hope you do find me some new readers!
I will post when I get started on my next chapter.
That's cause I'm a little lazy. hahaha
I also might not be able to post until this Sunday because on Saturday I have this huge dance recital to go to.

~Jess

Thanks so much!
I will put a notice up about your story on my next chapter!

~Jess

Of course! Viktor has to come back into this story!
Oh yeah I know, I also have my huge dance recital this Saturday so I will be busy. So that's why I want 2 new readers so I will not be lazy because of all the practicing for this Saturday. So If I do get 2 new readers I will finally start writing Chapter 14. haha

Thanks!

~Jess

Thanks, again! And good luck with you dance recitals.

Thanks so much!

~Jess

Hello Everybody! Thanks for the amazing comments! I would just like to say that this chapter is a filler chapter. I wanted to get this chapter done so I can move on with the Masquerade/Talent Show ball scene and more in Chapter 15. I hope you like it! ~Jess

Also I want my wonderful readers to go and check out some of my favorite fan fics! Some are recently new so go and comment on them!

One is by my beloved reader who comments on my chapters like every single day LilyLunaGinnyPotter! But of course call her Lily! This is the link to her story called ; My Story
http://www.snitchseeker.com/romance-...ry-sa13-64998/

:read!:

The other fan fic stories that I want you to read are by Lily Lupin! But you can call her Ana! This is the link to her story called; Confusion http://www.snitchseeker.com/romance-...on-sa13-65018/

Ana also has another fan fiction out called; The Adventures of the Marauders Here is the link ; http://www.snitchseeker.com/romance-...rs-sa13-64964/

:read!:

Now onto Chapter 14!!!



Chapter 14

Where was I? What happened? Why does my body hurt so much? Why does it feel like I have ropes around me? Oh no! Now I remember! Ouch! Someone just kicked me!

"Hermione! Hermione wake up!" Draco called. I finally opened my eyes to see Draco and Ron staring at me. "What? Why did you kick me?" I asked.

"Sorry 'Mione I can't move my hands so I kind of had too." Ron said.I nodded to him symphathetically to him. "Do you feel any better Granger?" Draco asked.

He called me Granger again! So he is still going to think about what happened ughh! "I feel splendid!" I said in a sarcastic tone. Draco smirked and Ron of course asked, "Why Hermione? We are locked up here with invisible ropes tied around us and we can't get out!" "I was being sarcastic Ronald." I said. "Oh" was all Ron could say.

"So how are we going to get out of here?" I asked them. Ron shook his head while Draco whispered, "Dobby!" There was a *crack* and Dobby appeared. "Yes master?" Dobby said bowing. "Can you apparate all of us back into Hogwarts?" Draco asked. "Yes Master but only one at a time." Dobby said.

"Take Granger first." Draco said. I went to Dobby and felt the pull of my navel and opened my eyes to find I was in the Headmistress's office. I waited until Draco and Ron were back. Dobby did muttered a spell which had the ropes untied. I could finally move again!

Professor McGonagall walked into the room. "Oh my! What happened?" She asked. We told her everything about last night skipping the part about why we were up there of course. All what she had to say was, " Well we will seal the charms on the school securely and you must not tell anyone about this, do you understand?" She asked.

We all nodded our heads and she said, "I will excuse you from your classes by giving all the Professors an excuse of some sort." We nodded and left the room.We headed to our dormitory and went to our bedrooms.

I fell asleep right when I hit the bed, I failed to notice that a person was in my room lurking in the shadows. I also failed to notice him calling out my name,
"Her - minn - y."






Was it okay? Now remember It was only a filler chapter! So don't kill me for it! haha! Please review and :read!:
~Jess

Yesh! Another chapter. xD

Eveen though it was a filler, still good, Jessluffeh.

And thanks for asking people to read my story.

AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT HAPPENED???WHO'S THERE???THIS IS JUST TOOO GOOD!!!!!wait is it dobby? like from wat happened in the 7th book? Continue writing....i still can't believe Viktor is a traitor....oh well...CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!

It's Brilliant!
Thanks for the ad!
Your the best!

Ooohhhhh Exciting!!!!!!!!!! Post next chapter soon!!!! I want to know what happens!!!!!

neww readerrr

i really like the way in the later chapters you have put different POV's in it. It sort of gives you an insight to each character and it works well with your style of writing.

PAMS.
shannon x

That's a brilliant idea!

whos in the corner?? post more soon!!

Thanks a whole lot!
No problem! I love helping my reviewers out!

~Jess

Thanks!
No comment! You'll just have to find out in Chapter 15!

~Jess

Thank You!
No problem! I love to help my reviewers out!

~Jess

I will!
Thanks!
~Jess

OOOh Yeahhh!!!!
Thanks for being one of my new readers!
Thanks a whole lot!
~Jess

Thanks so much!
~Jess

Can't say yet.....
~Jess

that was excellent im SO excited!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks so much!

Oh and Guess what! I'm actually writing Chapter 15 this very second!

So I might get it finished right now or tomorrow.

Well here in Ohio it's around 11:00 P.M. so if you don't live here that's what I mean by tomorrow. haha

I know I'm so excited too!

I have tons of plans for Chapter 15!

Thanks!

~Jess

wow ur story is exciting!!
whoz at the corner?????
OMG!!! pls post soon....