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Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: O.H.I.O. xDDD
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Vanessa Campbell
Sixth Year |  Mission Pureblood - Sa13+
Hey, my name's Jess. This is my second fan fiction and the characters, as well as the Harry Potter universe, belong to J.K. Rowling. Please read, review, and tell me what you think of it!
Other stories by Jess: Love is in the Air, Desperate, Wizard POV's, Jess & Marcy's Fabtabulous Shop of Graphics, Diary of the Desperate Vanessa Campbell and S.O.S. [Jessica's Request Thread]
Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 Chapter 8 Chapter 9 Chapter 10 Chapter 11 Chapter 12 Chapter 13 Chapter 1
I woke up that morning with a smell of flowers roaming through my nose and a hint of my favorite breakfast. I got up out of my bed and glided down the
stairs. It was the summer after 6th year. There were only two more weeks of summer left and today was my birthday.
I sat in my seat at the kitchen counter and began munching on the toast. I looked up at my parents, who held concern in their eyes. I smiled up at them and I could see they nervously smiled back.
"What's wrong?" I asked.
"Oh nothing dear, we would just like to ....erm...talk to you after breakfast. Meet us in the living room sweetie." Mum said.
"Okay Mum, I'll be there in a bit!" I said finishing my toast wondering if it's presents they are going to give me.
I stepped into the living room and sat down on a couch facing my parents on the other couch opposite from me. They looked very worried and I was feeling a bit concerned for them.
Did I do something wrong? I hope I didn't. Especially since it's my birthday I don't want to be punished. It seems as though something else is troubling them though.
"Mum, Dad, is everything okay?" I asked.
Dad spoke first. "'Mione, we are not your parents. You are not a muggleborn or whatever they call it. You are a pureblood. I don't see why this blood status matters but let me continue before you start yelling."
I closed my mouth which was agape as I was trying to get over the fact I was a pureblood witch.
"There are other things too." Mum said.
"Like what?" I mumbled.
"Well you would probably like to meet your parents, well we got a letter from your Headmaster..erm...oh yes!.. Professor Dumbledore!, Dad said while I winced thinking about how Dumbledore was already dead because of Snape, " yes well he said not to tell you until your final year at Hogwarts and to top it off your father is one of the professors!" Dad said.
"I am also very sorry to tell you this Hermione but your mother died because of...erm..that Voldemort thing they call." Mum said.
My mouth was wide open with every word they said piercing at my insides. I couldn't believe this.
"But there is more. We were told that in the letter your father wanted you to marry a pureblood only. You get to pick the pureblood boy out and both of you will agree on it. So Professor Dumbledore said in the letter that you might want to find a pureblood boy now so you can fall in love with him and then marry him. Instead of a last minute choice." Dad said.
"Headmistress McGonagall will be here any moment planning on taking you to Hogwarts early to meet your father. So hurry and pack!" Mum said.
I ran up to my room with tears falling out of my eyes! How could they have lied to me all of these years! I also have a father who's one of the professors! I lost my mother to Voldemort! I'm a pureblood not a muggleborn! Now I have to have a pureblood boy fall in love with me to marry him! This life is going to be crazy! I thought.
I did a charm on my suitcase which was already packed to go down to the living room. I checked myself in the mirror and my eyes were red. I tried to put some makeup on them but it didn't work. I sighed and walked down the stairs. Professor McGonagall was already there talking to my so - called parents.
"Hello Professor McGonagall!" I said.
"Hello Hermione. Grab my arm while we apparate there and you can see your father. Any last words?" Professor said raising her eyebrow.
I nodded and hugged both of my muggle parents. "Thank you for taking care of me. I will love you no matter what. You will always be in my heart no matter what. I will miss the memories since I was little to now. Thank you." I said pulling apart from them.
I then grabbed Professor McGonagall's arm and we apparated into the Great Hall. I could only think of who my father could be. He was a professor at Hogwarts, but who could it be? McGonagall let go of my arm and left me in the middle of the Great Hall. I closed my eyes fearing the worst.
I finally opened my eyes and my mouth wouldn't close. My father was Professor Snape! I then collapsed and blacked out. The only thing I could remember was Professor Snape - should I call him father? no! he was the one who killed Dumbledore! - repeating something which sounded like my new name or the one I was supposed to have. I would love tons of reviews! Please and Thank You!  Jess
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I love it Pams keep writing it is fantastic... and Snape hermiones dad!!! WOW didnt see that coming thought it would be professor vector or somthing!! amazing!
First to post?? Awesome!!
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Omgshhh. nooooo. her daddeee cannot be greasy slimeball horrible beaty-up-harry-and-ron-with-books SNAPE!
but jess love. i wubbed it
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| | Niffler
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This is great!
It can't be what will her friends say?
Will she fall inlove with Ronniekins? *giggles*
-Lily!  
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Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: O.H.I.O. xDDD
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Thanks!
Oh but it is, she definetly is a pureblood witch.
I don't know what will her friends say...
Will she fall in love with him?? hmm.....
Thanks Lily!
Jess 
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Wow Mione a pure blood cool. Her dad is Professor Snape!!! OMG!
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wow this is crazy!!! hermione a pureblood and her dad is none another than SNAPE!! too much too handle!! its great.PLs post the next chappie soon
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Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: O.H.I.O. xDDD
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Originally Posted by JackW092  Wow Mione a pure blood cool. Her dad is Professor Snape!!! OMG!
Post next chapter soon please! hahaha yeahh 'Mione's definetly a pureblood and her dad is soo Professor Snape
I will try to post it soon!
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Originally Posted by driveunit1 wow this is crazy!!! hermione a pureblood and her dad is none another than SNAPE!! too much too handle!! its great.PLs post the next chappie soon Like I've said before my stories have tons of drama in them.
But that gives the story more to think about and more suspense - well I think it does.
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I will try to!
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Oh....wow.....her dad's.....Snape.
That must suck!
Not that I hate Snape or anything, just he's so gloomy.
Great first chapter,
Marcy Moo 
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Originally Posted by hermione9495 Oh....wow.....her dad's.....Snape.
That must suck!
Not that I hate Snape or anything, just he's so gloomy.
Great first chapter,
Marcy Moo Well you'll have to see how they react...
Thanks!
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New reader! OMG! Hermione's pureblood! Wow! And Snape's her father! Double Wow! Feel it for her! No offence to anyone who likes Snape. Great start! Can't wait for the next post! | |
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Awesome! I love it. I normaly don't like fanfics like this, but this one is so good! I'm going to subscribe! PAMS!! 
I wonder who her mother is.... I have and idea, but I could be wrong.
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Ron is pureblood to they should be togethor! haha but you are the writer and a good one at that!
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WOW i wasnt expecting that......but this is rele good 
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Thanks so much!
Who do you think it is?
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I wont say, just incase I'm completley wrong..
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But it might give me an idea...
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Hey everyone! Thanks for all the wonderful comments! If you would like me to PM you when there is an update on this story please PM me. Here is Chapter 2! Jess Chapter 2 "Hannah! Hannah!" Professor Snape yelled.
I woke up to the sound of Hannah being called. I looked around at my surroundings and found myself in the hospital wing.
"Merlin's Beard!" Professor Snape said sighing and walked over to sit in a chair.
I looked at him confused and then I remembered. Professor Snape was my father! How do I start a conversation? Okay here I go...
"Erm...Professor Snape, no I mean father?, erm.." I said.
He sighed once more and said, "Let me explain and you can talk all you want at the end." I nodded my head and he continued.
"I didn't know you were my daughter right until Professor Dumbledore told me when I was about to kill him. Professor Dumbledore and I had made a plan that if he should die because of a person he'd rather it be me instead of Draco Malfoy.
There is also another point to be told. My name is not really Severus Snape, well not my last name, my last name is Zabini. Yes that means I am the father of Blaise Zabini and you. Blaise is your brother. I used the name Severus Snape to hide my identity from Lord Voldemort. Your mother was killed by Lord Voldemort because she did not follow his orders.
Blaise also did not know that you were his sister, but he did know that I was his father. Also you are supposed to have an arranged marriage picked by your father and mother. Well since your mother is dead I have decided to let you and the boy pick. When we are in class you are to call me Professor Snape, don't ever use the name Zabini to me.
You can let everyone know that you are pureblood and your brother is Zabini but you will have to say that your father died because we can not let you or Blaise get into trouble with Lord Voldemort. I think that is all. Any questions?" Professor Snape asked.
"What is my real name?" I asked feeling nervous after everything he just told me.
"Ahh, your real name is Hannah Katie Zabini. You must be called that in your classes, you will still be a Gryffindor and your grades will still be there from the previous years they will just be moved onto your new record of your new name or old I guess. Also you are Head Girl and Blaise is Head Boy, congratulations and make your way up there." Professor Snape said.
"Wait!" I called out.
Professor Snape turned around and said, "What is it my dear?"
I winced but said, "Why don't I look anything like you?"
"Ahh, it is a glamour charm your mother and I put on you when you were a baby. Would you like for it to come off now?" Professor Snape asked.
I nodded my head and he mumbled a spell under his breath. The sight was shocking. I grew 6 inches taller to a 5'9". My hair then changed from light brown to black with brown highlights, it then changed into a wavy preference instead of the frizz I used to have.
"You may leave to see your brother in the Head's tower." Professor Snape said.
I nodded my head taking all of the information in, pausing once while walking out, and stopping in front of the portrait. The portrait had a knight with a sword pointing to the stars above Hogwarts castle. Oh no! I didn't ask, father? Professor Snape? I'll just call him Professor Snape because that is so much easier, Professor Snape what the password was.
"Excuse Me." I said to the portrait.
The knight looked at me and said, "Welcome to the Head Girl and Boy's tower. What is your name?"
"My name is..erm..oh..Hannah Zabini." I said.
The knight nodded his head and said, "Welcome Miss Zabini, the password is Pumpkin Juice. I will announce to you the change each and every month. You may proceed."
I smiled at the knight and walked through the portrait whole. I gasped in awe. The ceiling was draped with gold and silver banners. The walls were red and silver. There were green chairs and gold sofas. There was a huge fireplace with hourglasses on top of it. Each hourglass were filled with sand and were labeled according to each house.
I walked into my room and examined it. I had a King - size bed with gold and red sheets. A bathroom with a huge bathtub which could mistakingly be a pool, a shower, and a toilet. I put all my things away into the drawers and headed down into the Head's common room.
I sat down on one of the golden sofas and began to read a book. I didn't notice Blaise was sitting right next to me, staring at me.
"Hello Sister." Blaise said. Did you like it? I would love tons of comments! Please and Thank You! Also if you want me to PM you when there are updates about this story PM me about it! Thanks! Jess
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1st to comment YAY!!!!!
but this is great....anyway plz pm me about the new posts.
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Jess, im not a new reader.....ive been reading your story for a while..
If you look at your other fanfiction I left a comment explaining everything..
Ok?
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