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HP and the Return Of The Past - Sa9+ Howdie, Everyone! Thsi is my first time at this type of stuff, and it'd be great if you'd post your comments, even criticism is good... Just don't be mean. :P I'll probably post on a regular basis [twice a week, unless school gets in the way] and my fic takes place AFTER HBP so if you haven't read HBP I advise you to GO READ IT NOW! :lol: Whatcha waiting for? Here Goes... Okie Doke, seeing as a chapter list [or what you call it] would be helpful I'mma going to try and build one up below... I'll try and get it done as soon as I can, right now it's a working progress. ;) SPOILER!!: Chapter One - The Letter of Surprises SPOILER!!: Chapter Two - Friends Reunited SPOILER!!: Chapter Three - Wedding Disasters SPOILER!!: Chapter Four - Hide and Seek SPOILER!!: Chapter Five - An Eventful Alley SPOILER!!: Chapter Six - The Perfect Guard SPOILER!!: Chapter Seven - The Revival of the Giant SPOILER!!: Chapter Eight = Halloween Horrors SPOILER!!: Chapter Nine - An Unexpected Visit SPOILER!!: Chapter Ten - The Real Fake SPOILER!!: Chapter Eleven - The Betrayal SPOILER!!: Chapter Twelve - Memories Healed, The Past Unforgotten SPOILER!!: Chapter Thirteen - The Container of History SPOILER!!: Chapter Fourteen - The Start of the End SPOILER!!: Chapter Ali's Confused (15/16) - Friend or Foe? SPOILER!!: Chapter Seventeen - The End of the Shadows Epilogue Alternate Epilogue, here @ my LJ. Whoa, I think I got that all done... If there's any mistakes, you have my sincerest apologies...:P And I'm not joking. :P Lmao, anyhoo, enjoy the fic, guys! And thanks for reading! And now after all that kafuffle, the fic Chapter One- The Letter Of Surprises The rain was lashing down on the square houses of Privet Drive. The gardens that were kept so neat were a mess, as the rain fell all day and night. Summer seemed like winter as darkness covered the Privet Drive. Houses would be pitch black if electricity didn’t exist, but the Dursleys nephew had to put up with this, because his uncle Vernon had cut the supply of electricity to Harry’s room so Harry lived in darkness. Harry’s aunt tried to treat Harry fair, but Vernon disagreed. Harry was an orphan, forced to live with his last remaining relatives, the Dursleys. But this would be his last year with them, and then he would move to his parents’ old house, Godrics Hollow. For ten years Harry believed that his parents died in a car crash but on his eleventh birthday the truth about their death was out. when Harry was a baby an evil wizard by the name of Lord Voldemort visited Godrics hollow hoping to kill the three potters to fulfil a prophecy that was made about him. He killed the parents easily but when he went to kill Harry, a one year old baby, his spell backfired, leaving a connection between him and Harry. The only visible connection was a lightning shaped scar on Harry’s forehead. After this attack, Harry had lived with his mothers sister ever since. In ten minutes Harry would be turning seventeen, he would be able to move into a house by himself and use magic outside school. Harry had been in no contact with the wizarding world since his headmaster had been killed almost a month ago, but whilst staring into the darkness of the night he saw four birds flying in his direction. He quickly opened his window as the birds flew into the room. Harry recognised one of the birds; it was his best friend’s owl. He untied the note as the owl landed, and then it flew to the other side of the room and started drinking water from Hedwig’s water bowl. Happy Birthday Harry How are the muggles treating you? Everyone here is fine, and Bill is not going to be a werewolf. Fleur and Bill are getting married in two days; we all hope you can make it. Seeya really soon, Ron, Hermione and Ginny. Harry read the letter twice through, he must be leaving soon if he could make it to Fleur and Bills wedding. I will post more soon... |
Harry pulled the note from the barn owl, which flew out of the window as soon as the letter was off. It was water logged but Harry could make out the words. Harry, I hope you have a great birthday Life is so hard now…well, you know. How are you coping with the muggles? Hogwarts is empty apart from that squib who keeps sneaking up on me. If I didn’t know better I’d think he wanted a friend, or protection, seeing as he hasn’t got any. Lupin keeps visiting me though. Grawp has learnt a lot of things and he enjoys being with the Order. I’ll see you soon Hagrid You’ll be in for a surprise when you come to school. Next was the turn of Harry’s school letter. This owl also departed the moment the letter left its leg. Dear Mr Potter, Please note that the new school year will begin on September the first. The Hogwarts express will leave platform 9 ¾ at 11.00am. Because of the unfortunate events that happened at the end of the last term, school is optional but Hogwarts will be safer. A list of books for next year are enclosed. Yours sincerely, Professor M. McGonagall, Deputy Headmistress of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Deputy? That meant that there was a new headmaster. Now there was only one more letter left and it was of an eagle, with red eyes. Harry untied it as the eagle flew off to drink some water. The last piece of parchment was in writing Harry had seen before. He stuck his hand in his pocket and pulled out a locket. He opened the locket and took the note out of it. The handwriting was exactly the same. You have recently searched an area I am fond of I failed to do what I wrote You must carry the burden of finishing what I started I apologise for the past, but you have seen what you are looking for. R.A.B ’Harry its great to see you’, said a hoarse voice. =O |
ARGH!! This fic is sooo good. That RAB thing and then the 'Harry it's great 2 see u' really freaked me out but I hope it's who I think it is ... PAMS!! *goes off screaming* |
yay, my first poster, if everything goes well i should have a post coming by Wednesday |
wednesday, i lied :P well, i got more than i thought done Harry jumped, pulling his wand, aiming at head height, but lowered his wand when he saw who it was. Remus lupin was standing in Harry's room looking tired, but happy. ’Harry, I haven’t got time to explain, but we are going to grimmauld place,’ he said, scooping Harry’s magical books which were on the floor into a trunk with a flick of his wand. ’I forgot to tell you, Happy Birthday,’ he added. ’Thanks,’ Harry said, stuffing the letter from R.A.B into his pocket. He didn’t want anyone to see it, so as lupin turned around, Harry hastily stuffed the note into the locket. ’How are we going?’ Harry asked. ’We will apparate, but lets wait for Tonks to bring Ron first.’ ’Ron’s coming? I haven’t got an apparation licence, and neither has Ron.’ ’Well Harry, I decided that for your birthday present you will have an apparation test, and Ron will too.’ ’Thanks Remus,’ Harry said, feeling exited. ’POP’ Two people appeared into Harry’s bedroom. One was a tall boy with flaming red hair, wearing a pair of jeans and a black t-shirt, the other was a witch with bright pink hair. Tonks had attempted to look like a muggle, by wearing a pink t-shirt and a pair of pink jeans. ’Hello Harry, Remus, we can’t stay long,’ Tonks said. ’Very well, Harry, hold on to my arm, Ron, you do the same with Tonks. We are going to go to the ministry.’ ’One, Two, Three.’ Harry felt his legs sweep of the ground. He opened his eyes and saw alot of blurs. His head started spinning, and then he hit the cold floor. They had arrived in a well lit corridor, with only one door which read “apparation tests”. As soon as they arrived a woman appeared. ’Mr Ronald Weasly, your examination is ready.’ ’Good luck,’ Harry and Lupin said. ’Thanks’ Ron answered and walked into the room behind the door. ’How do people get in?’ Harry asked, not spotting any other doors. ’They apparate, side-along of course,’ answered Tonks. The woman appeared again, but without Ron. ’Harry James Potter, please follow me for your test,’ she said walking into the open door. |
wow...this fic is going real good..like that RAB thing.....post sooooooonnnn |
WOW! Very good cant wait to read more! |
~~new reader~~ woww, good story. PAMS Roshni |
yay, readers, this means so much, well im typin my story to my pc, its on my notepad now. depending on how much time i have, i should have a post sometime soon, fingers crossed. --Ali |
yea! A new story to subscribe to! Lovin' it so far! PAMS! :wizard: |
thnks mugglemom. i got another post but its not that long, it will do for now though chapter 1 cont... As Harry walked in he couldn’t spot Ron. Wondering if Ron had passed, Harry took a seat. ’Mr Potter, do you remember what you need to do, walk into that circle there,’ with a wave of her wand a red circle appeared. Harry walked into the circle trying to remember the thing he had learned in the apparation lessons in Hogwarts. ’Now, it’s your turn to try to go into the yellow circle there, as a circle appeared. Remember, Destination, Deliberation, and Determination’ Destination, Deliberation, and Determination, Harry kept saying these words in his head. Now he had to do it. Focusing hard on the yellow circle, he kept trying to move until… he did, not knowing how, he had just apparated. ’Well Mr Potter, you have passsed, as did Mr Weasly. You are free to leave’ Harry walked back out of the door, seeing Ron, lupin and Tonks. ’I passed,’ he said ’Well done, that’s one thing done, now we all will go different ways.’ Lupin Said. ‘Tonks, you take Ron to the Burrow. Me and Harry will be there shortly, we just need to sort something out.’ And with a ‘pop’, Tonks and Ron dissapeared. ’Harry, we are going to go to Grimmauld Plc. As dumbledore died last term, the house is visible, the longer it can be seen the worse, we need to sort something out. Now, its better for you to apparate with me for now, can you do that?’ Lupin said. ’Yes but-’ ’Not now, on three, one, two, three’ Then room started spinning, everything was blurred, and then they landed. Hehe, what dya think There is one more post for chapter 1, it should be on soon |
just great like ever!!!!! and Harry had to pass.....how could he not....he's good at everthing(i know i know, he needs Hermy's help to pass sometimes...but he's good....now, isn't he?) love it....post the other part sooon!! |
Ohhh I really like your story. Post more soon! |
I really like your story . Post more soon please. ~Sarah~ |
good post. but post more pleaseee. Roshni |
good story! it's great! can't wait for more |
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sure, thanks for the advise on the first paragraph, as i said, its my first FF and all advice is helpful -ali EDIT: Next post will be the last post in chapter 1 and should be on by Friday |
End Of Chapter 1 Well, Here it is, the last part of chapter 1. Harry opened his eyes and was standing in the kitchen of No.12 Grimmauld Place. Then, sickness came over him. He still felt guilty for the death of Sirius, but he knew that he should concentrate on the job at hand. The room was crowded with people, who Harry expected, were Order members. One of them had noticed that Harry and Lupin had arrived, so he drew them two chairs in mid air and they fell to the ground. ’C’mon Harry, sit down. The quicker we do this the quicker we can go out’ Lupin said, not looking pleased with all the people who were in the room. ’Well, we all know Dumbledore died last term, and as he was secret keeper, he was magically connected to this house. So when he died, two portraits belonging to Albus Dumbledore appeared. One, in the headmasters office in Hogwarts, and one, strangely enough, here.’ ’Where?’ a tall blond women asked. ’Look behind you’ Lupin answered. And there, behind the woman was a portrait with a sleeping man with a silver beard. ’But what are we actually here for?’ Harry said ’Oh yes, well, in the past, if a secret keeper dies, but a portrait of him is left in more than one place, he can continue being secret keeper as long as he has permission from the house owner.’ ’Do you mean, do I want to keep Dumbledore’ ’Yes, but I warn you that it might not all be good-’ ’I want Dumbledore’. ’If you are sure then I should tell you that your friends have been waiting for you at the burrow and might lose their patience.’ Its Short but now i can start posting on chapter 2 |
I'm still here...sorry I'm late...always seem to be. I'm all caught up Allucha. I'm sorry I haven't been posting more...busy with stuffs. But I'm all caught up and I plan to stay that way, I'll give you reviews from here on in, if you'd like. For now, all I can say is. Interesting, *crying* I still can't believe Dumbledore's gone. I really loved him, but I didn't realize it until the end of book 6 *crying some more* I only didn't like how when Ron and Tonks appeared you really didn't give Harry and Ron time to say hi, or even mention that they looked at each other, I mean they are best mates and all. I guess it all just happened too quickly...LOL Also you didn't have to actually write them taking the test, but that's okay. Just give Ron some lines LOL *tackle glomps Ron* He's my favorite character so...*shrugs* back laters Allucha and thanks for posting. |
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kool post. i'll check back tomorrow. Roshni |
NEW READER HERE!!!!!!!!! :sorcerer: hey luv ur story ! it's awesome!!!! Please Post S'Mores! lol c ya |
hmmm nice post.....Ofcourse, harry wants dumbledore....how can he not....???? post soon |
Chapter 2- Friends Reunited Thnks Ottery,Danismine and Raazia and Hey Draco's Gurl, All new readers are welcome. As i Said,Heres the Post Chapter 2- Friends Reunited ’And I think we should go to the Burrow by floo powder instead of apparating, I daresay that I enjoy it, but its useful. Here, take this’, Lupin said handing Harry some floo powder as they walked next to the fire. ’You first,’ Lupin said pushing Harry closer to the fire. Harry threw the powder into the fire which turned an emerald green and said clearly “The Burrow”. The smell of dust from Grimmauld Plc never left him as a new smell of food spread the room. Harry was stood in the kitchen of the Weasleys Home as Mrs Weasley turned around noticing Harry. ’Harry, How are you? We are so sorry about what happened on the station.’ Harry was going to ask what happened on the station but then the memory flooded back into him. The train had just stopped and Ron and Hermione said that they would stay with Harry. When Harry went to ask Uncle Vernon if his friend could stay with him Vernon didn’t say anything. He walked up to Ron and Hermione and stared at them, looking as if checking if it was a joke. Harry thought, for once in his life, uncle Vernon would let Harry have proper friends. Maybe he would say something like ‘yeah, sure, the car is over there’ but instead, he said ‘Isn’t one of your type enough?’ Harry was sure that if he had asked Aunt Petunia she would say yes. As a result of ‘cheek’ and Uncle Vernon called it, Harry had to survive the summer without any electricity, Only 2 meals of tinned food and a slice of lemon. Surprisingly, when Vernon wasn’t in the house, Petunia would give Harry extra food. ’POP’ Remus Lupin had just apparated into the room. ’I thought you were using floo’, Harry asked. ’I had an errand to do, but now I am finished, Hello Molly, is Tonks here?’ There was no need for Mrs Weasley to answer this though because Tonks had just appeared at the door. Mrs Weasley told Harry to leave them because they had something special to arrange. ’Well Harry, how are you?’ Mrs Weasley asked again. ’I am fine, thanks, how is everyone?’ ’To tell you the truth, the only one that’s changed is Bill, but he’s not going to be a proper werewolf’. ’Yeah, Ron mentioned that, in a letter’ Harry added as Mrs Weasley’s eyes narrowed. ’Well, everyone is upstairs, preparing for the wedding; they will all be in Ron’s room.’ She said walking back into the kitchen. What dya think, i might post sum more by wednesday depending on school, :cry: ali |
kool, I'm the first to post. Yay!!! :) kool post, can't wait till u post on wednesday. pleaseeee have a long post. Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee. cheers Roshni |
I'm always late to the party... Hey Ali, Sorry I'm late, I suck as a friend I know. :worried: Good post...but where's Ron? I thought he was with Tonks...you don't like my Ronniekins... *Ottery runs off crying* I do hope you write the wedding though...and make it extra romantic, and I ship R/Hr and H/G so...just so you keep it canon okay... :lol: Great post...even if you keep putting my Ron in the background, and don't think I missed the part where Lupin had an errand to run...is that a clue to a later mystery? Don't answer that. :lol: Well...back laters post when you can Ali, I like your story. |
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Harry climbed the stairs and opened Ron’s door. Either Ron’s room had been shrunken or there were too many things in the room. There were two sleeping bags on the floor and a lot of boxes spread out on the floor. Harry walked over to the sleeping bags where Fred and George were and sat down. ’Harry, its great to see you, we have been waiting for ages’ Hermione exclaimed ’Yeah, whatever she said’, yawned Fred with a grin. Hermione gave Fred a look that if she gave Harry it he would run the opposite direction, but George just said ’Lighten up Hermione’. ’Hey Harry, how are you’ asked the youngest Weasley boy. ’I’ve been better, what about you Ron?’ ’The sooner Phlegm gets out of here the better, she’s really annoying me.’ ’Harry, where were you the night it happen?’ Asked the smallest person in the room. It was Ginny. ’Hi Ginny, what do you mean?’ Harry asked ’The night Dumbledore died?’ ’Oh…well… me and Dumbledore went to a cave to look for something to help kill Voldemort. It’s called a horcrux, when he kills he splits his soul. Well, Voldemort did this seven times, according to Dumbledore. He supposedly hid a part of his soul in a Slytherin locket. Well, after everything that happened in the cave, all we got was this,’ he said, throwing the locket on the bed, but as it fell, it swung open as the new note from the mysterious R.A.B came out. Harry tried to grab the letter but Ginny pulled it back. There was silence for a couple of minutes as they all read the note. ’Well, then you have to do it don’t you?’ Hermione said breaking the silence. This was what Harry had been thinking of for the past two hours. I've got some more to post and i should post it tonight hopefully if i dont get carried away with something else, Ali |
new reader Hello,New Reader here,This is a cool fic,Post more as soon as possile. -Helen. :flowers: |
welcome Milkshake342, and like i said, i would post some more tonight, so here it is Then, all of a sudden, Ginny jumped up. ’I’ve seen it, and I know who R.A.B is! Think Harry, think…two years ago, whilst cleaning we picked it up. But what if… Harry, R.A.B is Sirius’s brother, Regulus. He was a death eater wasn’t he?’ Everyone stared at Ginny for moment and then Harry had an idea. He ran out of the room to find Lupin, and ask him if they could go to Grimmauld Plc to look for the locket. Lupin decided that they would make a portkey, as it would be easier for all of them to go along with him instead of side along apparation. When they arrived at Grimmauld Plc it was empty. It seemed that the Order had left it overnight. But then Harry heard a noise upstairs. ’Ok, everyone, we haven’t got long as Molly wants us home in a bit.’ Lupin said. Walking through the house, they couldn’t spot what was making the noise, but Lupin was laughing. Stepping into the attic, Ron pointed out three pairs of eyes glowing behind a box. The lights shone onto the three bodies but it was only Winky, Dobby and Kreacher. Seeing Kreacher gave Harry an idea. ’Kreacher, do you remember two summers ago, when we were cleaning, you took some valuables. Where did you hide them?’ ’Nasty Filth wants help from me, snap his wand they should,’ the elf replied. ’KREACHER, I FORBID you to insult any of us and I ORDER you to tell us where the items you took are,’ Harry bellowed with anger pumping through his veins. For ten seconds everyone stared at Harry and then kreacher starting crying loudly. __________________________________________________ _______________ i couldnt get much typed up because i was watching Lost, Anyway i got a day off school tommorrow so i'll try to type some stuff up. Ali |
Great post..and Lost is the best show ever! hehe anyways.... can't wait for more! :) |
thats all you are agreat writter but you only posting every once in a while is KILLING me |
If you're wondering...yes I'm on SS Chat right now too...LOL sorry... Hey Ali don't watch Lost and give us more posts. :lol: But seriously, finally some Ron. :lol: I love Ron *glomps Ron* But it's nice to see that you're following the storyline from out of book 6, that's so cool, I can't wait to see what you're going to do with it. I just have to say...OMG...you're going so fast with everything. LOL You might want to slwo things down a little and maybe have more character interaction. Your cliffies are good though...and I love your Ginny, I always hate when people make her meek and you're obviously not doing that. Kreacher crying...hmm...that can't be good. :lol: Anyways, I'm sorry I haven't posted earlier, seriously, I got into SS Chat and it seems almost like I live there I haven't visited any of my friends fics and I haven't even bothered with mine but you've seen that I'm sure... :blush: I'll try to come back more often...sorry. :lol: But you're story is going great, keep up the great work. I'll be around. |
hey guys, n' gals, this is a small post but its the end of the chapter. Harry stared at Kreacher and then realised what he had done. He had treated Kreacher as the Malfoys treated Dobby. ’I’m sorry Kreacher, but I really need the items you collected.’ ’I shall search for my master as he now has qualities of a pure-blood.’ ’Dobby, Winky, can you help Kreacher?’ Lupin asked. ‘As that is the reason I brought you here from Hogwarts.’ ’Yes Mr.Lupin Sir, Dobby will not sleep until he finds the special things Mr.Potter is looking for.’ Dobby answered. ’Dobby, I’m sure you are allowed to sleep,’ Hermione said giving a stern look to Harry. ’When did you go to Hogwarts?’ Ron asked ignoring Hermione. ’Just after I picked Harry up. I knew that you would want to come here. Now look at the time, its 3:45 am; we really need to go back Harry. I’m sure that if Dobby, Winky or Kreacher find the locket they will inform you. In the meantime, if you really want to come, then I promise you that I will bring you back here, but what am I saying, you own this house,’ Lupin chuckled. ‘Now, I’m going to change this to a portkey,’ he said waving a large piece of wood in the air. Three, two, one.’ Everything started spinning again as they landed in Rons bedroom. ’Hermione, you’re sleeping in Ginny’s room, Harry, you’re in here with me, Fred and George.’ Ron said, walking to his bed. As Hermione walked out of the room with Ginny, Ron looked Harry in the eyes and said, ’we meant what we said, we’ll stay with you till the end. If that means finding all the Horuxes,’ ’-Horcruxes,’ ’Whatever,’ Ron said grinning. ‘Well, anyway, me and Hermione will stay with you till the end.’ ’Yeah, thanks, but I really think we should get to bed,’ Harry said checking his watch. He had been 17 for nearly four hours. im typing up quite alot now so i should have a post soon (hopefully). @1i |
It's late I should so be in bed right now... LOL...I'm off then... Ali, you've posted more and I'm here first...for a change. w00t. :lol: So anyways...I'm going to bed soon...it's three a.m. here...I loved the update. I also loved how Hermione was all...you can sleep Dobby...and then glaring at Harry. :lol: but best of all I loved Ron ignoring it...and the horuxes part too. *glomps Ron* You write him well, so you know you've got me here for a while. Gimme more Ron...and cool beans...hadn't thought of the house elves helping Harry with the search, that makes sense...post more when you can...but slow it down a notch. :lol: usually I'm telling people to pick up the pace... :lol: You need more character interaction. Loving your story, back when I can @1i . 00++$ :lol: Me too see? |
GREAT STORY PLZ check out mine, it's called Longing of the Shy, Hope I didn't offend Allucha, and sorry if I did |
o yeaa, u posted. i loved it. i hope they find the locket soon. PAMS Roshni |
thanks for your replies, i saw you reminder post Ottery, in another FF well, you people wanted some more, here it is: ________________________________ Chapter 3- Wedding Disasters The days when the Burrow was a quiet house were gone. People kept coming into the house making sure that the wedding would be safe. Bill and Fleur were not the only ones affected looking forward to a wedding though. Tonks had kept asking Lupin when they would have a wedding but he didn’t seem to want to stay on the subject for long. The last day before the wedding, an unexpected visitor arrived but the only one who saw him was Harry. He had heard about his brothers’ death and had decided to help the Order. When Harry first saw the man he recognised him. He looked slightly like his brother, but slightly younger. Inside the Weasley house, there were many adults ,so Harry, Ron, Ginny, Hermione and the Weasley twins were playing quidditch in the paddock outside the house. They kept switching teams as they only had five broomsticks. At the moment, Harry and Ron were playing against Ginny and Fred. Halfway through the game ,a well built, blond haired man came into the garden. His nose seemed to have been broken a couple of times. He was carrying a bag of long items. It was Ludovic Bagman. ’Fred, George, I have got something for you.’ The man said, calling the twins. He handed them the bag and then stared at them. As Fred nodded, Bagman disaparated. Sensing something strange about the way Bagman was acting Ron walked upto Fred. ’Fred, what was that about?’ Ron asked ’Nothing ickle brother, but look what Bagman brought for us.’ George said emptying the bag. Out of the bag, four broomsticks fell out. They were streamlined with superfine handles of ash. It shone in the suns rays and glowing in gold were the words “Firebolt.” ’Whoa, that amazing, why did he give you it,’ Ron asked curiously. ’We give him some things from our shop and he gives us some stuff,’ Fred said winking at George, but Harry had seen this. ’Fred, come here,’ Harry said as Fred was staring at the Firebolt. ’If I must,’ he said walking to Harry as George followed. ’So, are you going to tell the truth? Why did he give you the Firebolts?’ Harry said, hoping that Ron didn’t hear him. ’Well, you were going to find out anyway. During the end of term last year whilst we were all at Hogwarts,’ Fred started,’ a number of Wildfire Whizbangs just disappeared. But it was the new version of the Whizbangs which made a shape as a lion.’ George continued.’ And guess who came near us and used them.’ ’He wouldn’t be that stupid,’ Harry said. ’He didn’t know that no one had ever bought them before.’ ’So, what happened?’ Harry asked. ’Well, I don’t know about how they deal about it with the muggles, but if a wizard steals something, he is put in Azkaban for six months. But we couldn’t turn him in, it would be mean…’ ’So instead you-‘ ’Blackmailed him’ Fred said finishing Harry’s sentence. ‘Oh boy, you’re attracting a crowd,’ he added pointing at Ron and Ginny who were walking up to the twins. ‘Ok, lets all go inside, I think its going to start raining,’ George yelled at everyone outside. ’It’s the middle of summer,’ Ginny said. ’Shut up and get in’. hope ya liked it, i might not be able to post for a while, i'v got to do some History and Materials coursework :cry: but if i have chance i'll put a post in. @1i |
Always late to the party...but it seems this time I'm early... Hey Ali, just so you know I read this well before I just forgot that you had updated. :lol: And I'm only now coming back to post a reply. :lol: I'm glad you're still reading my story, I'm still reading yours just so's you know. I'm just reading too many and I chat alot so I'm always late. :bouncep: I'm also chipper sometimes...but not right now. :cry: Anyways, this whole blackmailing Ludo Bagman...hmm...I can't help but wonder if it's something important later, or just characterization? Don't worry you don't have to answer that :lol: I liked that line with Tonks bothering Lupin about a wedding and his ferreting out of it... :lol: very cute. The title's got me worried though...disasters don't usually bode well...but then it could be something funny right? *crosses fingers and hopes nobody dies* Anyways, I'm loving your stuff, and I'm madly curious what show your siggie is for? Sorry to go all :topic: :lol: Just curiosity... *meeeeeeeeeeowwwwww* 00++$ |
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hi allucha...sorry for not checking up ur fic for sooo long....i just kinda forget that "Other Stories" exist.....and i m trying to cut off my net time.... so well...i had a lot to catch up on....and its great...... Kreacher's a menace......but it's a good thing he has to follow orders.... keep up the good work..... |
Awesome story so far! :) Keep posting more soon. |
OMG!!! They got firebolts. Yay!!! Now Malfoy won't be able to make fun of them when they get to skool. O wait, Malfoy's a death eater now. never mind. lol. But PAMS Roshni |
Ottery is checking up on his fics... Uhm...the twins also don't go to school after book 5 Roshni... ^_^ We don't have that show here in the states I don't think...but I do know 24...but I don't watch that one either. I only ever watch Smallville cuz it's sooooooo cool and Lex is a hottie. Oh, yeah...uhm PAMS okay, love your story. |
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hey dudes sorry bout the lateness, i got caught up in a lot of things, this post will just set the mood for the wedding, the rest is to come, On the last day before the wedding, Lupin arrived at the Burrow with bad news. The building which was being organised to host the wedding had been blown up. But the thing that scared most people is that it was found with the dark mark above it. When the residents of the Burrow heard, they were all in shock, but Fleur was terrified. ’Are zey after us? Vat as my Bill done? Now ve can’t get married.’ Fleur sobbed. ’I’m sure we will find a way,’ Lupin said comforting Fleur,’ what about an outdoor wedding?’ ’Zat would be ze best option.’ hehe, i love writing fleur, its funny, anyway, more to come, including deaths (kay,mabye not but that got your attention didnt it :)) |
Short but sweet. I'm loving it...Eeeeeeeeeeeeeek more action coming up... Don't kill Ron please *On his knees begging* I've read too many stories were they always kill Ron what is it with these sick people. Please. *does Ottery eyes* You're so bad Ali. You were just kidding... :blush: Anyways...blowing up the wedding hall...okay, now that's action. :lol: I'm loving it. Keep up the excitement. PAMS. :lol: Just...let them get married first before the fight starts okay? ;) Post when you can :blush: I'm sorry I'm chasing you and asking you to post...I like your story that's why. :blush: |
that was quick, im workin on the post now, have any of you spotted anything about the first post of the chapter, anything at all :hmm: |
here it is...Finally i said i would post, and surprisingly, i have. :lol: anyway, here is the post, it might not be that good, im too tired to make it better :sleepy: anyway, here it is ’Wake up, you’ve only got an hour to get ready,’A voice screamed from downstairs. Harry lifted his head up and looked out of the window. The sun was shining brightly and birds were flying, visiting each others nests. It was the perfect day, nothing could go wrong… ’WAKE UP NOW,’ the voice shouted again,’ unless you want me to get you out of bed.’ Harry looked around and was surprised to see that Ron had slept through the screams. ’Oi, Ron, wake up’ Harry said prodding Ron. ’Smicholate,’ he said suddenly,’ oh, it’s only you Harry.' ’Who did you expect, the tooth fairy?’ Harry asked with a grin. ’C’mon, we should be down by now, the wedding starts in fifty minutes.’ ‘Mornin’ Harry,’ Ron yawned until he realised what Harry had just said. ’What? Fifty minutes, Mum will kill me.’ He added running out of the room. After Ron and Harry had a slice of toast each they had to get a couple of boxes to take to the wedding and then get changed. Ron had to wear some navy blue dress robes whereas Harry wore jet black robes. The celebration was going to take place on a big plot of land outside the village of OtterySt.Catchpole. When everyone was ready, they took a portkey to Stoatshead hill, where they would be meeting with the rest of the people. Ready to leave from the Weasleys house were Harry, Hermione, Ron, Ginny and Lupin. Hermione had said that her parents had been invited and would be getting there with Mr and Mrs Weasley. When they arrived at the venue everything looked in order, seats were neatly placed on the mown grass. A number of people were already sat down waiting for the wedding to start. Harry recognised Gabrielle, Fleur’s sister dressed in a silver dress. All that was needed now was the Bride and Groom, who appeared after ten minutes. Bill was wearing dress robes which were a dark shade of red. Fleur, on the other hand was wearing a stunning silver dress, like her sister. Seeing the couple arrive, Charlie pulled out a muggle camera and started taking photographs whilst the sun was high in the sky. Just after the last photograph had been taken, a scream filled the ears of everyone. ’Wands out, we don’t know who this is yet,’ Lupin said but it was soon answered. The dark mark was shining in the sun. ‘Ok, we need to get the Grangers to the burrow, Molly can you do that?’ ’Yes Remus, but what about the kids?’ ’Yes, they should go with you as well.’ ’No, we are staying’ they all said in unison. Mrs Weasley disaparated with Fleur’s parents, Gabrielle and Mr and Mrs Granger. ’You don’t think they have killed anyone yet,’ Ron asked looking pale. ’No, everyone is here.’ ’POP’ There in front of everyone appeared…(im not gunna tell you, :P) even though im tired i couldnt help it :evil: if ya look at the post above you might be able to work out who it is, now i reely got to got to bed, its 1AM and i got a 7AM start.:sleepy: cyas @1i |
hehehe....yah i guess writing fleur should be fun...but i wouldn't try that...it would be too hard for me..... ahaaaan...and outdoor wedding.....do love them.....:) |
Oh NOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Wedding Crashers... *Ottery falls off his rocker* :evillaugh It's Sirius isn't it? :evillaugh Anyways...you're soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beyond sweet, and really nice Ali to post for us so late at night having to wake up so early the next day :yes: *turns to the readers* Everyone say "Thank you Ali" *everyone says thank you* You're too sweet really you are. Not only that I'm really loving your story. :lol: I liked that you actually gave us descriptions of the clothes, a lot of people just skip over that...I'm sure Ron looked dashing and Harry looked smart in their suits. And an outdoor wedding, and Fleur's silver dress *Ottery's daydreaming* Sorry where were we? :lol: Oh yeah... :lol: Quote:
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hey people, heres the next post: There in front of everyone appeared Alberforth Dumbledore. He stood in front of Lupin and nodded, and then turned to Harry and handed him a package. Harry took the long box and opened it. Inside it was the wand of Alberforth’s brother. The wand belonged to Albus Dumbledore. ‘Harry, I want you to keep this, Albus would want you to,’ he said as Harry saw what was inside the package. ’Thanks,’ Harry said with a tear in his eye. The meeting was stopped as another scream filled everyone’s ears. Looking in the distance many Death Eaters were hiding in the dark. ’Everyone, listen, use stunners on them, but, in extreme situations, use stronger spells,’ Lupin said, looking at everyone in turn. Harry stuffed the box and wand in his pocket and pulled his own wand out. Many death eaters were running into the crowd where the wedding was taking place. ’Stupefy,’ Lupin shouted, sending a flash of red light into the death eaters. Everyone did the same Lupin and sent stunners into the distance, but the death eaters were not dumb, as a cold voice shouted, ’Stupefy’, hitting Ginny in the face. Splat! Ginny had just fallen face first onto the floor, but Harry noticed she was bleeding and unconscious. ’Ginny, wake up,’ Harry said, ’Remus, do something.’ ‘Episkey,’ Lupin muttered, wand pointing at her nose, and the bleeding stopped. ‘This way, she won’t be in much pain, Enervate’. Harry understood what he meant; better to heal her while she was unconscious. Too busy with things to do, i'll try to get some done laters. just dont kill me, |
hahaha.....i wont' kill u...promise awww ginny's hurt......tht's too bad...... post whenever you feel like it.... |
wowww, i hadn't read fics all week coz of my tournie. cool posts. please let ginny b okay. that cold voice, is it voldie? PAMS Roshni |
Of course I'm still reading, I'd be crazy not too. *ducks from stunners* Eeeeek As always I'm late Ali. Sorry. Can't keep up with all the fics I'm reading and trying to write. But I'm always here. I like your story a lot, I don't mind romance so much, but I think I'm sick of it, partially. There's no action in romance stories, other than the weepy, emotional kind and very few people can pull that off very well, so you can't begin to imagine how glad I am you're story is not like that. But you should still throw out some love or something...LOL You're so mean to ruin the wedding... :lol: *glomps Ron* Speaking of which...where is he? :worried: Post when you can Ali, and you really surprised me there...I wasn't expecting Aberforth, considering we were busy talking about someone else earlier... ;) You're a sly one Ali. Back laters. Still loving your story and I'm definately loving the action. |
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Ottery, things will get better, i think. ----------------------------------- Anyway, heres the last bit of this chapter. She opened her eyes and sat upright. ‘Wha…what happened?’ ’You were hit by a stunner, but you’re ok now,’ Harry said reassuring her. ’Ginny, you have to go back to the Burrow, if Molly knew…’ Lupin told her. ’But, why can’t I stay?’ ’Safety, It should only be the Order fighting the Death Eaters. Charlie,’ Lupin said, calling Charlie, ‘can you take Ginny home.’ ’Sure Remus,’ Charlie said, taking Ginny by the hand. They dissapeared from view but then another stunner barely missed Ron. ’Crucio,’ shrieked the cold voice. A scream was heard in the distance again. ’Look, this is not safe for anyone, we need to get to the Burrow as quickly as possible,’ Lupin said looking alarmed. He pointed his wand at where the fight was taking place and sent a silver shadow in the direction. A man in a hood appeared near Hermione’s head and put his hand over her mouth, but Hermione, being very good at nonverbal spells, just stunned the man. When his hood was taken off Lupin stumbled. Fenrir Greyback had just tried to bite Hermione. ’Stupefy,’ the cold voice said, but this time it was more clear, louder and maybe even closer. Harry stretched his arms trying to reach it but he collapsed on the floor. ’But what can we do, where can we search; he’s bound to have hidden him somewhere special, maybe even unplotable ,’ said a stern voice. ’But we can’t leave him; we don’t know what they’ll do to him. We need to find him.’ ’We have no choice. We need to think of all the possible places where he could be. Maybe Spinners End, Severus’s house.’ ’Why would Snape want the kid? I think that we need to check the Riddle house; I heard that you-know-who uses it as a hideout.’ ’What about the Malfoys, they have a mansion large enough to hide a student.’ The door opened and a red haired person entered the room. ’Any news?’ ’We are going to search three houses, hopefully, we will find him in one of them. We will be searching the Malfoy manor, Snape’s home and Voldemort’s hideout. But we need to have teams, and an easy way of communication.’ ’But you can find him cant you? Mums really upset.’ ’We will try our best; this is a difficult time for your mother.’ The Sun, no, a reflection, Harry tried to lift his arms but a weight was pressing them down. Blinking, the room came into view. Harry noticed that the kitchen of the Burrow was full of Ministry workers, who were all stood still looking upset. ‘What happened?’ Harry said noticing that everyone looked upset about something. ’Harry, we can’t tell you now,’ Lupin said looking pale. ‘Go join Ginny and Hermione in Ron’s room.’ Harry stood up and walked out of the room. Walking up the stairs he tried to remember what had happened. He opened the door and the first thing he saw was two teary eyed girls. When Ginny saw Harry she turned around and went bright red but Hermione looked at him. ’Have they told you?’ She asked him. ’No,’ he answered, ‘but you two know, don’t you, tell me.’ ’Ron has gone. They took him, the death eaters.’ ‘Wha… why’ Harry managed to say as he ran out of the room back to the kitchen. He jumped down the stairs two stairs a time. ’Why didn’t you tell me? What are you going to do about it?’ He said landing into the kitchen. ’We were going to tell you, and we are going to search to find him. We will be searching the Malfoys home, Riddles home and Snapes’ home.’ ’Snape,’ Harry spat. ‘What’s he got to do with it?’ ’We don’t know yet.’ Mr.Weasley said. ’But we need to go to 12 Grimmauld Plc to get a mirror that lets us talk to each other whilst we’re searching for him.’ ’I’ve got it,’ Harry said. He ran upstairs and came back down with a shiny board. ’Ah, Harry, that’s perfect. You see, James and Sirius had them to talk whilst in detention and I had one to see what they were doing. Now I think we are ready to go and search.’ Lupin said smiling. ’POP’ Rufus Scrimgeour had just apparated into the Weasleys home. He looked tired but gave a weak smile as everyone looked at him. ’Harry, can I have a word with you,’ Rufus said. ’Yeah.’ ‘In private,’ he said walking out of the room with Harry. ‘Harry, are you going to be free tomorrow because I have a daily prophet interview for you. Just to say that you support the ministry because many people are very scared after Dumbledore died. What do you think?’ ’My friend has just been kidnapped and all you can say is if I want to do an interview with some dumb old newspaper about something which I don’t believe in. You work that out yourself.’ Harry roared. Enjoy! @1i ps-Things will get better, they have to,:evillaugh |
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I'm really loving this Keane CD...but OMG! Rooooooooooooonniekins... *faints* They've kidnapped my poor Ronniekins... Noooooooooooooooooooooo *Ottery faints* :faint: Okay...we've got to save him... *Ottery rounds up the DA* OMG! I know they didn't... Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr I love your story Ali it was interesting before but its only getting more so. Wow, I loved the action, even if I think maybe you should have kept it up a little longer, maybe a few casualties... :blush: yes I know I'm a bloodthirsty reader... :lol: Seriously I'm loving your story. Go Harry *glomps* You're my hero. Now go save Ron. My money's on Malfoy Manor... |
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Very good! I didn't get to post this a while back, but I wanted to say that I love how you portray Fleur's accent! Very good! *applause* :) write more soon! |
Chapter four on its way, welcome cocogodessmegrly1, its nice you decided to read this Thanks for all your comments Im sorry i havn't update in like a week but all going well, i'll be able to post some more in around 20 minutes @1i |
Chapter 4- Hide and Seek Chapter 4- Hide and Seek ‘So when are we going?’ Harry asked walking back into the Burrows kitchen. ‘What happened with Scrimgeour, Harry?’ Lupin asked. ‘Nothing, now are we going or not?’ ‘Yes, everything’s ready. But first we need to organise who’s going where. ‘Well, we need to contact Hagrid to get him to come and help us. Dawlish, Shacklebolt can you find Mad-Eye,’ Lupin asked. ’Yeah sure,’ they said and then disaparated. ‘What can we do to help?’ Bill asked. ‘Get as many people, try and get Charlie, your Father.’ Fred, George, Hermione and Ginny walked in wanting to find out what was going on. ‘When are you going to get him?’ Ginny asked. ’Now, we are just getting everyone ready.’ ’We will all come,’ said all four of them at once. ’If you really want to, then it can be arranged. Now, where’s Aberforth?’ ’Here I am, Remus,’ Aberforth said walking into the kitchen drinking some water. ‘Now who else do you need?’ ’No one, we are ready to go, let me get Tonks,’ Lupin said and then walked out of the room to find her. Whilst he was gone, Hagrid, Mad Eye Moody and Mr.Weasley had entered the kitchen. Lupin re-entered the room two minutes later with Tonks ready to go. ’Ok, here’s how it will work. Bill, George, Hagrid, Alastor and Shacklebolt, you are going to go to Spinners End. Harry, Tonks, Me, Ginny and Hermione will search The Riddle House. And Dawlish, Arthur, Fred, Aberforth and Charlie will go to Malfoy Manner. Any questions?’ Remus asked. No one said anything so Lupin pulled out of his pocket two mirrors. Harry, seeing Lupin do this pulled out his own mirror. ’We are going to go by portkey, to the Riddle House use this newspaper, to Spinners End, use this tea cosy supplied by Dobby, and for the Malfoys Home, use this box.’ Harry and Ginny let out a small laugh when they heard that Dobby had given them a tea cosy, but turned it into a cough as all of the Order looked at them angrily. ’Three…Two…One.’ They all grabbed their own portkey and were transported. Harry’s head was spinning and then he landed on some cold earth. ’Ah, just as I expected,’ Lupin said pointing at the house because lights were shining brightly inside.’ ’We need to contact the others, tell them about this, Harry, give me your mirror please.’ Harry handed the mirror over to Lupin and he looked into it and said clearly Alastor Moody. Then, Moody’s face just appeared in the mirror. ’Alastor, there are some lights turned on in the house, we will go in and inspect.’ ’Fine, contact me if anything else happens, I will tell Dawlish about this matter,’ the face of Moody said and then disappeared. ’Lets go in,’ Tonks said, ‘we are just wasting time standing outside.’ Not really a lively post, but it fills you in. @1i |
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hey.... u r going real nice...... oh and ottery...i love ronniekins...so dun loose heart....i think allucha loves it too...dun u?? *innocent face here* oh and allucha: i luuuuuurrrrved ur halloween story..... |
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OMG!!!!!!! Ronnnnnnn, he has to be saved. He can't die. :( PAMS so we can know what's goin on. Roshni |
*Ottery is dying to know his poor Ronniekins fate and zapping Martians* Still paitiently waiting. I mean if you were wondering, Ali. :) |
Hey, so, mabye i was taking my time. To tell the truth i have had to hand in 5 pieces of coursework this week, plus learn the lines for a play which goes for my GCSE's. So that will be the reason that i havnt been posting anything recently. And Spooks finished, and one of my fav person got shot, snipered actually. But he's not dead. Anyway, before i start talking about something entirely different i'm better of posting this. They walked slowly up to the house, looking in every direction for Death Eaters. The grass was bushy which made walking quietly hard. The rustle of grass didn’t seem to attract the Death Eaters’ attention. Tonks arrived at the door first and noticed that it was slightly open. She pushed it gently and crept in the house. The others followed. The hallways had burning torches hanging; life size portraits were on the wall. Harry took lead and walked into a room. He had seen a program that Dudley watched on the television where Secret Agents had to sneak into houses, this felt the same. In the first room that Harry walked in he saw a roaring fire, and a humongous chair. It would even fit for a giant. Harry beckoned Remus as he walked into the room. They quietly surrounded the chair, and then jumped in front expecting to see someone. It was empty. “Help.” “Did you hear that?” Hermione said “It came from up there,” Ginny said pointing upwards. ”Be quiet, they might hear us. Yes it did come from upstairs,” Lupin whispered, “Harry.” “Yes?” he replied. “I know this might be hard for you but have you ever got into Voldemort’s mind, on purpose?” ”No, do you mean Leglimency?” ”Well, it’s like Leglimency. Seeing as you have a strange connection with Voldemort in your head, maybe it would be easier for you to do it. Its not easy but it would help you a lot.” ”How, can I do it now, will it help us find Ron?” ”For the moment, let’s stick to the basics.” The walked out of the room and arrived at the stairs. Just abit but i wanted to keep the fic alive. Im getting the GoF video game today, :woot: :woot: |
Better a dangling carrot than a dangling participle????? WTF???!!!!! You're too cool Ali. Sorry about all that school work...bleah, can't be any fun. You poor soul. I guess those GCSE's are pretty important. Good luck then. As for your post...OMG! Harry and the gang as secret agent spies... :evil: you've been in my head haven't you? :lol: I always wanted to write a fic like that, pity nothing ever came of it really. :erm: Haven't the time anymore, or the energy really. I loved your post just the same, even if you're still dangling the carrot...I want to know that my Ronniekins is allright...want me to write the post in which they rescue him? I could you know. :lol: I'm just kidding Ali, this is your fic. I'm loving it, post when you can, and good luck with school. |
yessss, u posted. skool sucks doesnt it. i hate it too. some of these courses are just impossible to do. they make it so hard and pointless. :angry: neways, great post even tho it was short. i hope u post a long one sooon. PAMS Roshni |
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They slowly walked up the stairs, checking that no one saw them. If they were seen then Ron might be killed. As Ginny was looking up, she saw a small rope moving. She pointed it out to Lupin. ”Clerano,” he said pointing at the rope. The area above their heads changed colour, from a pale brown, to bright green and red. A red square was marked out above their heads. ”Reducto,” Harry said automatically. ”Harry, what were you thinking, they will definitely know we are here.” Tonks whispered. ”Oops…I forgot,” Harry said feeling guilty. Sure enough, three cloaked figures appeared at the foot of the stairs. They didn’t see anyone but they seemed to want to search downstairs. ”This is our chance, everyone hold onto me.” Lupin whispered, holding everyone, “Leviatus.” They all began rising, until they reached the hole where Harry broke through. But they kept rising, until they were in the attic. It was dark and full of boxes big enough to fit a human. Even with the darkness, some red hair was standing out behind the boxes. ”Ron!” Ginny exclaimed. ”I thought you would be coming here.” They all turned around and saw Lucius Malfoy and two large Death Eaters blocking the exit. |
Wow, an update yay! *Ottery's dancing* *Ottery is thinking that school was an invention of the devil* Uhm, well don't let them work you too hard Ali. You need a break every now and then, okay? Go out and party. ^_^ I loved the post. Even if you did leave us with another cliffhanger. <_< And yes, I still don't know how my Ronniekins is. *sighs* That's it...I'll save you Ron. *Ottery jumps into a phone booth and out comes* SuperOtter. :superman: I'm off to save my Ron. :lol: But seriously, I liked how Harry made a mistake, I mean he is just a kid, it's not like he's an auror like Tonks or an ex-DADA professor like Lupin. They'd be experts at fighting evil. So that was cool. I like that you're going for realism. Post more when you can, Ali, but have fun first. Love your story, I'm always here. |
Whos there? Thankies Ottery. Cliffies are evil, hehe, Well heres abit more Just to refresh minds- ”I thought you would be coming here.” They all turned around and saw Lucius Malfoy and two large Death Eaters blocking the exit. ”So this is the end of the famous potter, with a Wolf, Freak, Mudblood and a…well, Weasley.” This seemed to annoy Lupin, as he shouted, “Stupefy,” at one of the large Death Eaters. Remus suddenly collapsed on the floor unconscious. Tonks was in charge. ”Luminite,” she screamed as everything began shining a strong white colour. Then she performed an amazing spell. Waving her wand a gold light came out of her wand and split in two, hitting Lucius and the death eater. Harry remembered why they were in the Riddle house in the first place, but the path to the red hair was blocked. “Accio Ron,” Harry said. Nothing happened. “Help, Ginny, Hermione.” Tonks smiled and told them to try as she revived Lupin. ”Accio Ron,” they shouted together. The red hair stayed where it was. It wasn’t Ron. ”Where is he?” ”Here,” a bruised Ron said getting out of a box behind them, “Missed me?” He added with a grin. Lupin sprang alive and jumped with his wand aiming at Ron. “Ron, what does your father collect?” ”Dad? Muggle stuff, like plugs.” Ron said looking at Lupin’s wand. ”Just security, I’m sorry I had to do that Ron.” ”It’s ok, now can we get out of here, there’s more spiders here than there was with Aragog,” he said scanning the floors. ”Who?” Tonks asked. ”Never mind,” Harry said, not wanting to talk about his rule-breaking habit. ”Alastor Moody,” Lupin said into the mirror. ”Remus.” “We have found Ronald, I did the safety check, and it’s him. Call the search off, I’ll see you at the Burrow.” Mad-Eye once again dissapeared from view. Remus pulled out a newspaper and tapped it with his wand, it glowed blue. “Everyone, you know how to use these, three, two, one,” they all began spinning and landed in the kitchen again. ”Ronald,” his mother screamed as he grabbed hold of him. “You’re safe,” she added hugging him. “Harry, Hermione, Remus, Tonks, thank you so much, you don’t know how much I…Well, its good to have you back Ron!” ”It’s good to be back,” he said wiping his mucky face. ’POP’ All the rest of the order arrived into the kitchen, looking at Ron. ”You’re back,” the twins said walking up to him. ”Yeah, I am,” Ron muttered with a grin. ”All, Bed. We have to get your supplies tomorrow for school. Bed, Now!" Not one of my strongest posts, but, its all there is. |
Just like clockwork...that isn't broke...Ottery's here, so never fear. Hmm. I think it could have used more action, but all in a ll it wasn't a bad post Ali, you did good. You had me worried when Harry kept spelling Ron and he wouldn't appear...I thought for sure *crying* You're soooooo bad. :lol: I thought it was cool though how Tonks was the one who held off everyone. Harry though should have gotten more action, I mean he is the hero of the story Ali... :poke: Oh, and if you'd have made it so that--I don't know, Ginny tripped and fell in Harry's lap and they had a cute moment of love, as they fight off the death eaters... :lol: Sorry :blush: I think I'm coming down with Lovesickness... LOL It was a good post Ali, and we know you're busy with school so don't worry, take your time we're still here. *looks around* Well I am. The others'll be by in a bit I'm sure. |
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Chapter 5- .................. Thanks everyone, just abit more. New chapter though, no idea for a name. Suggestions? Chapter 5- the chapter without a name (not the real name) The next day they woke early to go to diagon alley. Harry and Ron were sat in their beds wandering who the new Head Master would be. ”Do you think it will be someone from the ministry?” Ron asked. ”Could be, but I doubt they would fit in,” Harry said, “Especially if they are like Umbridge.” He added looking at the back of his hand. ”I think it will be a guy though.” Ron said. “What about Defence Against the Dark Arts now that Snape is gone?” ”It will be some weird fake who doesn’t know the difference between a boggart and a -.” ”Ronald,” screamed a voice from downstairs. ”Oops, we were supposed to go to Diagon Alley to get our books today,” Ron said jumping out of his bed. They both ran down the stairs, skipping two steps at a time, which unfortunately lead to Ron tumbling down. Harry couldn’t stop himself and followed Ron to the ground. Just then, a tall figure with red hair approached them. ”I heard some noises and came to investigate,” Fred said. “Someone fall over?” He asked sarcastically. Harry and Ron looked at each other and burst out laughing until Mrs Weasley shouted. They both got to their feet and quickly walked into the kitchen. ”So, what was all the noise about,” the other twin asked. ”They fell down the stairs,” Fred answered. ”Well, I didn’t think that head boys fell down stairs.” George said. “Who’s a head boy?” Ron said curiously. ”No one,” Fred said, “yet but-.” ”Get some food to eat, we are leaving in a minute!” Rang the voice of Mrs Weasley. ”How are we going to Diagon Alley, Mrs Weasley?” Harry asked the woman who just entered the room. ”We’re not sure, probably by floo unless we make another unauthorised portkey.” ”We’ve been doing that for ages mum.” ”EAT.” Harry took a piece of toast and began putting jam on it. As he ate, be began thinking seriously about the Horcrux situation. A voice in his head kept telling him that he didn’t have to do it, but he heard the prophecy. Unless it was Neville, then Harry had to do it. Ginny and Hermione walked into the room giggling and ready to go. They looked around and saw Harry and Ron eating. They tried to cover up the giggles. ”What’s wrong with you?” Harry asked Hermione. ”Nothing…Nothing at all,” Hermione said trying to keep a straight face. “I see you two are not ready yet.” ”We are now,” Ron said finishing his breakfast. So, useless convo but o'well. Might be useful later on -@1i |
*zapping Martians with Teddy* Look out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Zap, Zap, Zap Hello Ali. :hello: I'm so glad you updated, and before I leave too...I'll be gone for a few days. Uhm, not a lot happens...LOL but I still liked it. It's nice to have Ron back safe and sound...and you've got me wondering who the new DADA teacher is going to be and the Headmaster too...I thought McGonagall for sure...but you've got other plans maybe? o_O So, throw in some action in Diagon Alley if you do write that...LOL maybe a DE ambush or something fun like that...but no more kidnappings...LOL Post when you can...can't hardly wait. 0%%$ |
Good post! Now I have a lot of meandering thoughts in my head about what's going to happen next... |
well, not a lot happened. but i still liked it. pams. Roshni |
Thanks Guys. I know the last post was slow, but the next post will hopefully be good! I've been watching Street Fighter so i have some ideas :evil: but its hard putting it to paper. I'll do my best. Cya laters @1i |
hey that was gr8. totally rad.pams. hey, is ron head boy? and is hagrid head master? cant wait to read more. post soon......... p.s. is ali uor real name?( just curious) :) |
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And yeh my name is Ali. POST COMING UP |
Like i said, here it is. From a post with no action to, well, a post leading upto a bit of action. Enjoy! ”Nothing…Nothing at all,” Hermione said trying to keep a straight face. “I see you two are not ready yet.” ”We are now,” Ron said finishing his breakfast. ”Well, let’s get going.” Mrs Weasley said. “We decided to make a portkey, a lot easier. And, if anything happens whilst we are in Diagon Alley, get Ginny and apparate back here.” ”Nothing’s going to happen Molly, After all, the Aurors and patrolling Diagon Alley 24 hours a day,” Arthur said as he walked into the room. ”They are just safety precautions, Arthur.” They all got up and walked out of the kitchen. Harry and Ron went upstairs to get a coat, and by the time they arrived all the Weasleys, along with Tonks and Lupin were stood around something that looked like a fence gate. ”What’s with the gate?” Harry asked. ”Hello Harry, it’s the portkey,” Lupin said. “Now gather around, we will be going in 5, 4, 3, 2, and 1.” Everything began spinning, but Harry was used to this. As they all let go they landed in Diagon alley, and it was raining. ”Everyone, you have an hour to use. Get all your things for school and meet me in the Leaky Cauldron when you have finished,” Mr Weasley said. Harry, Ron, Hermione and had decided to walk together. First they needed to go get their money. As they walked into Gringotts around 5 goblins were stood at the door. ”They’ve tightened security,” Ron whispered as one of the goblins stared at him. After ten minutes, they came out of Gringotts carrying enough money to get their school supplies. They went to Flourish and Blott’s for their new books first. The man had bundles ready for each student, and gave each of them their own book sets. Harry gave the man the money as they walked out carrying a few books. ”Where next?” Harry asked. ”I need some parchment and ink.” Hermione said. ”Lets go to the stationary shop,” Harry said walking to the shop next door to Flourish and Blott's. It was crowded inside with many Hogwarts students. Harry saw Neville and his Grandma purchasing some different coloured quills. As he saw Harry he waved. Harry returned the wave and walked nearer to him and began talking. 30 minutes later, the finally came out of the shop after talking to Luna and a small boy who appeared to be lost. When they came out of the shop they heard shouting. Many people were crowded around something outside the entrance to Knockturn Alley. Harry began to run in that direction but Ron stopped him. ”What if it’s a trap?” ”I doubt it, a trap for what anyway.” Harry said. Ron and Hermione looked at each other but did not say anything. Harry decided that they wouldn’t answer but he knew what the answer was. It was outside Knockturn Alley, a great place for the Death Eater’s to ambush. He ran to the crowd and pushed until he got into the centre of the crowd. In the middle was Mr Borgin, lying on the floor. ”Well done Potter, we knew you like a crowd,” said a voice Harry had heard before. Nott was standing behind him, for once, not wearing his death eater robes. Harry turned around, and noticed that he, Hermione, and Ron were surrounded by Death Eaters. What dya think? I should be able to post once in a few days @1i |
yay first to post after uor post.that was pretty nice.write more soon.write long posts ....plzzz.:;) (soo....uor actually a guy? i thought u were a girl by uor nic-allucha. r u a muslim?) |
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yay! i totally forgot about this fic! although i have no idea since it is the best ever! i haven't checked since the first page! oooh! please post some more soon! even though you posted today! :lmao: ignore me. well i can't wait for an update anyways! much love and hugs sara! |
If anybody cares *sniffles* I'm Mexican, and Aries...and I love chocolate *sniffles* :sorcerer: Ali, *madtackleglomps* You posted and I wasn't here :cry: I'm sorry...stupid American holidays *fires all the cannons* had to go be with my family *Ottery and Teddy duck knives, guns and bombs as they pass the cranberry sauce at the dinner table* but I managed to survive. LOL Okay, so yeah...LOL...a lead up to action, also known as...A Cliffhanger! *points accussatorily* You're evil...LOL but in the good way...LOL I'm glad I'm back and I'm glad you posted...love your story Ali, keep it up. Back when I can, so post when you can ;) 0##$ |
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Ok, so heres a post coming up. Good job i didnt post it with the other one because i "accidentaly" put something important in it. Anyway, post in a min. |
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