*blinded* I'm blind!!! I'm blind!!! *walks around and falls on top of you* Now look what you did. *gasps* I knew it. . . McDonalds!!!!

It was a very good post. You know that is a very Voldemort type of thing too. He would do that. And I kind of pictured a duel happening between Wormtail and him. . . crazy! :lol: Its a good post. . . keep it up. Oh wait! Is the story really almost over??? *curious* NO! It's good. :lol: *sighs* Well I must go. . . Can not wait for more. . . Chao!

*Pettrigew falls to ground* now you've just wrecked the only chance of Harry staying alive. No one to save him now :P
He'd be able to, but Mrs.Lupin kicked him. Now he's sat in the corner crying.
*runs around you and is fallen on* Thanks Lottie, but I'm sowwy to tell you it is almost over. All I need to do now is write the next posts, probably less than 10 to go. The nextest duel'll be interesting...

I'll be posting in an hour or so, sometime on the 18th as a birthday post. Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee e
*starts spinning and is out of control*

Is amused by icons, woohoo. I'm fifty...or fifteen, not sure.
 

*is still spinning, falls over and nearly puts a hole in the floor*
:*ops:
it wasn't me :P
As I said, it's turned to the 18th. I bring you...
A potato :potato:
and
A post because :stupid: .

But then he jumped back up, sending three more death spells at Wormtail. They had just missed by a centimetre and Wormtail fell to the ground sobbing.

“The only reason you brought me back to life is because you knew you had nowhere to turn. You couldn’t stand your animal form, although I admit a rat is a good symbol for you. Small, weak, traitorous.” With this, two stunners flew just above Wormtail’s head.

Wormtail jumped back up, know this was his only chance.
“Flagrate!” he shouted, sending a line of flames at Lord Voldemort’s robes. Voldemort had no time to react and was caught by the flames, which caught onto his robes and made them roar a blue flame colour.

Voldemort screamed, knowing that if the flames didn’t kill him, the pain would. He threw his robes to the ground and his face turned into a shade of pale red.

He stood up, eyes wide open, and raised his hand. He began to talk, unlike his usual self, but in a soft weak voice.
“Dear, dear. Oh Peter, what have you done? I was not going to kill you and then you did this to me. If only you have ever shown those talents that you have just performed in front of me, you would be my most loyal servant. Lucius and Bellatrix are only good because they have the combat skills. And you, hiding away, with skills of which I have never seen. If only you didn’t break me, then I would let you survive.”

“Master, I’m sorry, but you were going to kill me. I beg you, please leave me be.” Wormtail said on his knees.

“I cannot change the past, good bye Wormtail.” He said as a green burst of light flew from his wand and hit Peter in the chest. Pettigrew didn’t even try to avoid that, he just looked straight ahead until it hit him. He slowly fell back wards off his knees and hit the floor, eyes wide open.

Lord Voldemort watched him fall and walked towards him. When he reached the body, he looking into Wormtail’s eyes and shed a tear. He then turned to see Harry and Ron, stood on the side, unable to move.

“What’s done must be done.” He said, letting Harry and Ron loose. They almost fell to the floor when the force which was holding them stopped, and just looked at Voldemort. Harry’s leg got stuck between one of the broken benches from the battle and as he tried to pull it out, he noticed something solid hidden in his sock. He knew what had to be done, and hoped the Order and the DA were having more luck in Hogwarts.

Homer, Homer Simpson, is the greatest man in history.
From the, town of Springfield, he's about to hit a chestnut tree, ARGHH.
Y'all have to sing it!

FIRST THINGS FIRST:
It's your birthday right?

:music:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ALI
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU
:music:

:cake:

:party6:

:gifts:

:bday2:

:gift2:

:bday1:

:bday2:

Hope you have a great day!

This post was awesome. I am glad he died but surprised that voldy shed a tear. And you have a cliffie again <_<
PAMS

Roshni

Leaving me on a cliff??? *Hangs off cliff* Hurry with the next post! *kicks Voldy* meanie.

*rubs eyes and can see* I can see *looks at you below me* Aww, really? I don't want it to end though. *does puppy eyes* Can't you make it last a tad bit longer.

It was good, and who would have thunk that Wormtail had it in him. :lol: I actually pictured the duel as that to some extent. Crazy! Keep it up. . . how sad it ends. Oh, and Happy Birthday. *gives you kiss on cheek* There's your present. . . :lol: Chao papi.

new reader plz post more soon

Oh dear! So much action! *gulp* Post more soon! :)

Ali, the greatest fic writer on SS ... *nods* Well, I'm good too *shares title*
 

I love when I get all inspired like that too :yes: doesn't happen often enough though LOL I wish I could just ... but ... :cry:

Now Wormtails just being rude, is that any way to say Hello? I tell you. *fires the cannons at Wormtail*

That's my Ron ... :ron: Now go kick Scabbers ratty achoo!

Now that, was a surprise. *floored*

I like Wormtails reasoning but ... *fires the cannons and turns the ship hard to starboard* Don't mind us we're fending off pirates ... but yeah, Wormtail's got a point, and it's funny how ironic it is the traitor feels betrayed when he's being betrayed by the person who asked him to be a traitor in the first place. :dizzy: I hope I got that right.

You're going to give us all chocolate? LOL Will catch up laters Ali, but I just thought you should know I'm still here ... school starts this week though and I've got chores ... but I won't abandon your fic. :gryff:

This is going to be long, unlike the post.
 

Thank you, really. That did mean a lot, especially when I woke up to see it. And the tear, that surprised me when I wrote it but it sort of worked so I kept it.

Cliffs are fun to climb. They really are, coz if you fall, :faint: Thats better, kick Voldie, not Harry or Ron.

I've been adding random bits to the plot ever since I realised it was going to end. I don't want it to :( Like the Wormtail bit, the speech thingy, and the end of the next post. But that way, I can write a sequel. Or prequel.

Thanks for the pressie, lol. The duel was amusing, then again. I'm weird. :lol:

Hia, welcome to this fic. Hope you enjoy it until it ends

Lets say it this way, it'll only get worse, or better. Depending on if you like action.

You got it. And the pirates, lol. They rock. How many cannons do you have, lol. You got an unlimited canon cheat on? [/random] Anyway, yup. You got it spot on, however confusing it is. :lol: You confused me, and I wrote it. You're superman!

Okay then, you can have some chocolate. Just to make it fair, *gives everyone else some chocolate, coz it's nice* Don't worry about catching up, I know that school can be annoying. And chores.

...


“Harry, I assume you have heard the prophecy. Then you will know that for me to survive, I will have to kill you. But I shall not kill you as I would a child. After all, you’re a man in so many ways. I ask you, no. I challenge you, will you duel the most powerful wizard ever?”

Harry’s eyes widened, had Voldemort been humanized? Harry stood up straight and pulled his wand out of his pocket.

“I would never duel with the most powerful wizard ever, Dumbledore. You are not powerful, you’re just evil. Dumbledore was the most powerful wizard ever, and you had to get a child to kill him. You COWARD!”

“Dear Harry, that is not something to say to someone who is going to kill you.” Lord Voldemort said, his voice steady.

“If you kill Harry, you kill me. We’re going to beat you, then beat your Death Eaters.” Ron said, plucking up his courage.

“Lucius was right when he told me about you Weasleys. You are the pathetic ones. Not even worth being called a wizard.” Voldemort said.

Ron’s face turned from a pale white colour to a violent shade of red. He raised his wand and took a breath. “Expelliarmus!”

Voldemort moved his wand to the side and laughed, sending the spell into a bench. “So you plan you kill me, weasel? I doubt you could kill a fly.”

“Ron,” Harry said, trying to calm him down. All Voldemort was trying to do was make Ron do something foolish. Once that happened, Ron would be dealt with and Harry would be on his own. Harry looked at the evil man and knew that there was no time like the present.

“No, he doesn’t plan to kill you alone. But we will destroy you, and you won’t come back. No horcruxes to save you this time.”

Voldemort’s face began turning paler than it was, and his mouth dropped. He had obviously thought that no-one knew about his horcrux-business. He stretched his long fingers and clenched his wand.
“Two teen boys, thinking they can defeat the most powerful wizard ever. Yes, Dumbledore was weak, he earned his respect by feeding people lies.”

“And you kill your friends. You earned your respect by killing people. That isn’t respect, it’s fear. Your followers are plotting against you, and then you’ll be all alone. Just like you were as a child,” Harry spat. He really wanted to break Voldemort down into a little shell, and then kick him repetitively until he fell over.

Harry had obviously hit a nerve, because Voldemort began to turn red.
“Fear is respect, you foolish brat. And Wormtail was not a friend, he was a rat. And I didn’t want to kill him, but he had to show his nose.” Lord Voldemort took a breath and looked at Harry, eyes flaming. “You dare talk about my past? How dare you say such a thing? I was never alone, My mentor, who Dumbledore was said to have killed was with me all along.

My patience with you two brats has reached a limit, so let’s fight. Whilst the day is young.



I spy a Mrs.Lupin!

*kicks Voldy in the forbidden zone* Ha! Awesome post!

Thanks, but ouch. I sorta feel sorry for Voldie, :lol: Especially if it's the zone that hurts.

I'm all caught up now ... just in time to go to school tomorrow *crying*
 

For starters comic book continuity sucks major as. :cry: Now I know why no one reads comic books ...

Now to your story Ali.

Wow. I like the way you write Voldemort, Ali, he sounds really vicious, but at the same time he sounds ... well imperious ... a total jerk too and a bit pompous ... *T: You're describing yourself again*

Now that's my Ronniekins ... :yes: *glomps Ron* :ron:

Uhm, Ali, :worried: if you were trying to scare me about Ron ... yeah that last line did it. Don't hurt my Ronniekins ... *sniffles*

I don't know if you intended to rhyme there but you did and I thought that was so cute LOL evil Voldy, who knew he had the heart of a poet.

That's my favorite line.

And the previous post, this line here Ali ... :worried: could you clear something up?

Was Voldemort crying? :cry:

Mrs.Lupin, no fair kicking there ... *ouch*

omg!!! you posted
*hugs ali*
that was really good. yay to ron for being a true friend :woot: *hugs ron*
PAMS

Roshni

Finally caught up...and WOW!
 

Hey Ali! Okay, so I've been invisibly reading your fic now for a few weeks, and I've got to tell you that you are so talented! Seriously, you should be very proud because you have a great style of writing.



Personally, I love reading fics by boys because they focus more on the action and the prophecy and all of that rather than the romance and teen stuff. Not that I don't love that as well, but you bring masculinity to the fics that JKR would bring from Harry's point of view. As much as we try, us girls can only bring so much testosterone in! ;) So, this is over 20 pages long, and my hand is still recovering, and as much as I want to quote everything, I can't...so I'll do the latest and AMAZING post!



:eek: Seriously, I love how you portray everyone in this fic, but Harry, a man, and Voldemort, human; it's just all so perfect.

:eek: :eek: :bow: May I just say right now how much I am in love with Ronald Weasley right now? I love how you really dig into Ron's character...especially his loyalty.

Brilliant! I love how he thinks he's so clever and brilliant and that he assumes Dumbledore was a senile old man. It just shows how human he is! You're seriously fantastic!

*nervous for Harry* shutupshutupshutupshutup...And I kind of agree with the whole fear is respect thing.

*waiting* This is genius, Ali. I'm sorry I haven't had time to comment sooner! I love the fic, and I encourage you to keep writing this fic and consider writing another fic...or another original work...because you have a talent for writing!

So, PAMS! I really love this story! Oh, and please don't kill Ron!

Shannon :hello:

P.S. - How was Armageddon? ;)

Yes, I like action. ^_^ Good post. You can really see the terrible side in Lord Voldemort. Post more soon!

And Now, A stream of replies.
 

Uhm, yeah. Ron'll be safe, I assure you. *nervous laughter*

Not crying fully, but he did shed a tear. It's like when you watch something like Lion King and see Mufasa fall. You shed a couple of tears, but don't go into a stream of tears.

Yay, I posted. Thanks Roshni, Ron is one of the most loyal friends.
Thanks for the reply Shannon. The whole idea of fear is respect sorta makes sense, and I thought that Voldie, of all people would believe that.
*plans to flee after the next few posts end.* I won't kill Ron, but he might not stay alive. *whoops, that's the same thing.* There's a lotta Ron fans here, I think I should run.
Lol, It was great. I saw it from the bit when they landed on the astroid, missed all the slow stuff. But the guy died :cry: I'll probably watch it again today for the fun of it.
Yeah, I can show the terrible side in Harry if I want to. Get him to kill Ron. *Looks at Shannon and Ottery, Flees*

So, something really weird happened last night. After watching Armageddon I had loads of ideas for this, and was writing from midnight till 2.30. And now, I'm sorta upset because I finished writing all the action stuff. All that's left is going to destroy the astroid. So, A post ist here, or will be in a minute.

I have a post, but I'm not sure if I want to let it out yet. I dunno when I'll be writing next coz I've just got a new 24 Novel for my birthday. I'll try to keep up the posts. Anyways, seeing as you're all so great. I give ya, chocolate.


It had all started 16 years ago when a prophecy had been made. It stated that a child born would have the power to vanquish the dark lord. A few weeks later, two children were born. One of them had the power and was doomed since his birth. After a year of being alive, his parents were killed. With nowhere to turn, he was dumped at the house of his mother’s sister. As he grew, he wasn’t treated well, even though every wizarding household knew of his name. When he came of age, he realised the true cause of his parents death, the reason his life had been tampered with. He fought, trying to defeat the evilness which had given him so much pain. He had succeeded a few times, but Lord Voldemort would always get back up. This was the final stand, where only one would live.

Harry stared into the cold eyes of Lord Voldemort as he gripped his wand with both fingers. He pointed it down and felt his scar burn. His fingers became warm, and he knew what he had to do. He let go of the wand with his left hand and raised it to his shoulder. He was ready for this.

“A grown man, compared to how I first saw you. I crying baby. The older you grow, the bigger the fall will be when you lose. Av-...”

“Petrificus Totalus!” Ron shouted sending a body-bind curse at Voldemort. Voldemort moved to the side and the spell hit the corpse of Wormtail. The body flew to the side and a red beam of light narrowly avoided Ron.

“Protego,” Harry said, creating a shield around himself and Ron.

Voldemort sent out three spells, never before seen by Harry. They had a violet beam and bounced off the shield, flying through the veil.
The ground began to shake, the benches began to move. Something was definitely wrong. The light in the room began to go out, until the only source of light was the spotlight situated directly above the damaged veil.

“Reducto!” Voldemort shouted, hoping to break the shield which was surrounding Harry and Ron. At first, he thought he had failed, but realised he was successful when both Harry and Ron flew backwards. The dark lord’s eyes widened as he raised his wand, believing this was it.
“Avada Kedavra!” He roared, sending a green beam of light at Ron.

“Ron!” Harry shouted, noticing what had happened. Thinking quick he looked at the bench on the floor between Ron and the incoming spell and said “Wingardium Leviosa.” The bench rose, and was smashed into pieces, saving Ron’s life.

“Bloody hell, that was close,” Ron said, looking at the remains of the bench on the floor.

“It’s not over Ron, stay focused.” Harry said noticing that Ron had paused. But he did have a good reason; his life was just saved by a bench.

“Acting like you are the leader, all because of a stupid prophecy. I bet you didn’t know that this has something to do with an aunt of yours, Harry.”
Voldemort said, wiping his forehead with his bony arm.

Harry froze, almost petrified at what was said. What could Aunt Petunia have to do with any of this? She was a muggle who had nothing to do with magic. Or was she? She always seemed to know about the goings-on in the wizarding world. She even communicated with the late Hogwarts headmaster, Professor Albus Dumbledore.

Caught off guard, Ron raised his wand, took a deep breath and shouted “Expelliarmus.” As the spell flew through the air, it made a whistling sound and connected at the other end with Voldemort. He flew backwards, crashing into the now closed door. He lay for a moment, appearing unconscious, and then raised his hand up. A low murmur began, and noise could be heard from out of the room. Voldemort began to speak in a strange language, one which unlike parseltongue, had no hisses and focused on sounds like a cough. The light above the room began to flicker and things were getting cold.


Can ye guess who, or what? :P Again, I repeat.
Nothing is quite how it seems.

Now to go watch the Tuxedo, then Armageddon.

Speak for yourself...;)

No problem. I've been reading when I can, and I never had time to post. But, I'm all caught up now...and it's very astute of you to make that connection...with the fear thing. Again, you're very good on character development.

:eek: :eek: Ali, I love you, I do, but if you kill Ron, I'm going to have to cry...then hurt you. Nothing personal.

Thank goodness someone else thinks it's sad! I watch that last part all the time and cry, and everyone always makes fun of me because they claim it was his job. But saying goodbye to his daughter and sacraficing himself and...and...*sobs* Now, you got me in the mood to watch Armageddon!

:eek: :eek: :eek: *grabbing torches and pitchforks, smilling sweetly* What?:eek: :eek: :eek:

Yay! Well, then I will be editing this post then...Does that mean it's over? :unsure: Sad.

A man who puts Jack Baur before others...I knew I liked you! lol. ;)

EDIT: The review...
I love that opening...a little history...a little drama...very nice.

Holy [censored for the young ones] OMG! :eek:!!! RON! I swear, he's a total hero!

You're a master at this! omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg!

*stop breathing* RON!

:eek: *silence*:faint: *cry* You're killing me here, Ali!

And here's where you've completely won me over! Ali, seriously, you are a fantastic writer!

Which means....? Too much suspense! Now I know why my readers hate cliffhangers! That was fantastic!

Okay, so I hope that you enjoy your 24 book and your movies, but don't forget about us completely, okay? This is so great, and you are so talented! PAMS soon!

Shannon :hello:

Me thinks it Dementors!! Awesome post *kicks Voldy* I love doing that! So much fun!

O_O This is awesome! Hope to see what happens next...:)

Take your time Ali, I'll be here ... somewheres ...
 

So I've lost you to the evils of novelizations ... <_<

I like the irony there Ali, subtle but ... wow. He tried to kill a baby, and now it's the man who comes to kill him ... *fires the cannons* I tell you Harry's going to survive and that's canon.

*Ottery's :rip: *

*smoochies Ron* :ron: My Ron pwns, and he kicks as too.

Haven't the foggies-- Sirius! *dies of shock again* :rip:

omg!!! for a second I thought ron was dead :(
good thinkin by harry tho
i really wanna know what's goin on... maybe dementors? :S
PAMS

Roshni

Oy!
 

If only my posts were this long, then y'all would have something to read.
 

*begins to tie shoe-laces. * I wouldn't do anything like that. *hands you a tissue*
How can it not be sad, he was an driller. Then he got picked. Or am I missing something? It's sorta like what happens in season two with Jack when he phones Kim from the plane. But it doesn't end that way.
I have a tendecy to do that. I killed Ottery, now you. I really need to fix that. *CPR*
Do you know what. I think you're right...Handed. :P Kicking Voldy is mean, *goes to comfort him*
Are you sure. *stretches and gets ready to run*
I really need to stop killing you,
He's super, let's hope he lives. *nervous laugh*
You really think I'd be able to kill Ron. I'd have a mob after me. Dementors, that could be right. Or maybe left, coz lefty's rule!

Aww, never mind Ottery. *Kicks Teddy*
Good luck in your homework, I know what you mean. I have some coursework to "look through" *cough finish cough* and it doesn't feel right doing it. Have fun in volley ball, last time I played that I nearly broke my hand.

Okay, so this is what's happening. In the next post, I think something is going to happen which will make me a dead man. So, I hopefully, you will be nice...

Okay, I'll say this again. Be nice. :)

The door blasted open and four dementors glided into the room. They flew to the area where Voldemort was, and then dashed at Harry and Ron.

“Expecto Patronum!” Both Harry and Ron shouted in unison. Thinking of when he first learned that he was a wizard, a stag leapt from his wand. A tiny Jack Russell terrier ran behind it, getting anything which the stag missed.

The force of the dementors was unbearable, but Harry and Ron knew that they had to keep themselves alive to defeat Voldemort. With this in their mind, they put all their effort into the patronus charm and watched three dementors glide out of the door. As soon as the charm was lifted, Ron fell to the floor, tired and cold.

“C’mon Ron,” Harry said running over to him and tapping his cheek. “You can do this, I can’t do it without you.” Harry looked into Ron’s eyes and saw them roll over.

:worried: :run:

“Noo,” Harry cried, believing Ron was dead. This time, Harry rose with anger, wand clenched in his hand so hard that his fingers were digging into his palm.
“You killed him, you evil. You killed him!” Harry said, raising his wand.
“Crucio!” Harry shouted, launching a torture curse at Voldemort. This did hit.

Voldemort screamed in pain, feeling what he had done to those before. Harry released the spell after a few seconds because he had no energy left.

“Imperio!” Voldemort said, making Harry his rag doll.
Dance around, little brat. Show me your last dance.

No, I will not. The pressure on Harry was too much. If he would dance, then all the pain would go away. It didn’t sound like a bad idea, but a little voice inside his head was telling him something.
Always trust your instinct, Harry.

Come on, you small child. Dance and all this pain will stop. You will be able to see your filthy family again. All you need to do is dance.

No, I will not. No I Will Not," NO, I WILL NOT!” This time, Harry did not just say this in his head. His whole voice roared as his echo bounced off the walls of the amphitheatre. He had defeated the Imperious curse, and was still sane.

Lord Voldemort had had his energy drained from casting that spell, and stood up, in front of the veil and raised his hand.

Managing to stand up, Harry shouted, “Avada Kedavra,” successfully managing to launch the killing curse at the now standing Voldemort.

As his laughter went silent, Voldemort sensed that his end was near. “Avada Kedavra!” He said, blasting the spell at Harry.

The two beams of green light met in the middle, just in front of where Voldemort was standing. He saw that he was an inch away from death when something marvellous happened.

Both spells met in mid-air and joined, creating a dark emerald orb. The same colour as Harry’s eyes.

A thousand miles away, a small man sat by a hut stood up. He walked towards a telephone and dialled a number. The man had a beard and bright emerald green eyes. The dial tone lasted only a second, when a second man’s voice was heard in the speaker.
“Yes?”
“My descendant, he is needing help. Send the bird, it will find its way.”
“Yes, Godric. The bird will take flight in a moment.”
“Thank you, Palmer, you have done well.”
One of the men hung up, and as that happened a boy was clinging on to his vibrating wand for dear life.


Nothing is quite how it seems.

*flees*

*sniff* You just watch yourself...;)

OMG, I KNOW! I sobbed when he was saying goodbye to her and then when she was looking at the explosion..even when you knew he wasn't going to die...*cries for George*

:rotfl: I'd rather you kill me than Ron! :glomp: *holds onto Ron for dear life while Ali does CPR!* :lol:

:rotfl: I think that is my new favorite quote!

I knew it! ... Oh, right...:eek:

*tear* Ron...dog...loyalty...so fitting, Ali!

:blink: :no: :gasp: :( :eek::cry: :bye: :violin: :whip: :faint: :rip: RON!!! ...wait, it says that Harry believed he was dead! Does that mean there's hope? :cry:

:glomp: Harry! I love him. But not as much as...RON! *wails*

A different version of Priori Incantatem?

:eek: Oh...my...gosh. Ali...I...you...uh...:bow: WOW!

Excuse me while I go mourn the loss of Ronald Bilias Weasley who was good and kind and wonderful and brave and loyal, and never did anything to anyone, particularly to Ali, to deserve a death...*sobs*

:glomp: Amazing post, Ali! But, I'm afraid I'm going to have to hunt you down. PAMS so you can bring Ron back to life! ;)

Shannon :hello:

I don't think Ronnikins is dead...he just passed out from the fight with the dementors.

Runs in to reply...

Did you say that you have the Dvd of series two? Because there is a behind the scenes on filming the last day, where they say something funny about having a clip after Palmer falls where you see George parachuting out of the desert with the radiation and stuff, gone.

It does, but what is hope? When one cannot defeat the dark lord? ;)
Something like that. I wasn't too sure about introducing something new, so I dunno how you guys [and gals] will like it. All I can tell you about it is one may take what they give.
To tell the truth, all that wasn't planned. It sort of wrote itself, and wouldn't delete.
Okay, feel free. If you see Fred say hi! And who said Ron died? *reads post* I think I'll be quiet, before I get a close up of the pitchfork that you're hiding.

I see that Mrs.Lupin is clever, but how clever? He may have just passed out, or he may have died. Who knows, only you decide?. :P

*Flees before everyone teams up and kills me*

omg!!! this was so amazing Ali.
he's not dead. i won't believe it. he's just passed out from being tired. once harry kills voldy, i am sure he will be okay.
PAMS

Roshni

Oh, great drama! :D Ron can't be dead!! :cry: It just looks like he is...post more soon!

Thanks Roshni! I see that you're a Ron fan too. Yeah, it was guessed, and yurp, you're right. Just don't tell anyone :P
And you're suggesting that Harry will beat Voldemort. Haven't I said that I like Voldy more than Harry. If people want canon stories, they should shoot Harry with one. *realises what he has just said.* But Voldie isn't going to do that...Honest.
Dead? Well, yeah. Maybe. Do ya remember the Dragons which I introduced in the middle of the book, they'll be making an appearance and kill harry.

I should be posting now, shouldn't I? Well its funny, school hasn't started and I'm already tied up with coursework. I won't keep you guys waiting, I'll have a post sometime.

Aw, Otts. I'm sowwy for tricking you :evil: *watches you die again* I really need to keep a record of how many times I kill you, you're like a cat with nine lives.
I thought Ron was dead? :P

Okay, something took up my time yesterday. So I have this to post now...


The vibrations were electrifying, a constant rumble igniting what was happening in the middle of the spells. The green light had gone and now there was a fine gold beam. Finer than any thread, this began to rise, taking the two wands with it. Harry looked across at Voldemort and saw him holding on to his vibrating wand.
They both rose, until they were at the height of the third row of benches, where a single note lay on one of the seats.

Suddenly a phoenix flew into the theatre, and hovered above the beam. An orb began to appear, and this, was scarlet. These two colours combined made the colour of a house which Harry belonged to. The phoenix seemed familiar and had a gleam in its eye. It lowered itself down to the scarlet orb, and didn’t stop until it was a part of it.

It then rose again, and flew towards Voldemort’s wand. You could see in his eyes that he was scared, not knowing what this bird would do. The bird did not attack him, or even touch him. It lowered itself and appeared to sit on Voldemort’s wand. After a few seconds it rose, with something underneath it.

It was the size of a quill, but was rather bendy. It seemed to be on fire, just like a phoenix. As it rose from Voldemort’s wand, the vibrations stopped, but the gold and scarlet orbs were still remaining, floating in the middle of the room as a force field. Harry tried to move his wand, but it was stuck in the air.

Harry saw Fawkes fly over to the body of Ron, and it began to cry. Harry suddenly had a plan. He slowly let go of his wand, making sure that it would not drop and put his hand in his sock. He fiddled around and pulled something out, something wooden.

Raising this wand in the air, he looked at Voldemort, and then at the now wet body of Ron, back to Voldemort and took a deep breath. “Stupefy!” Harry said, sending a red beam of light towards Voldemort. It flew underneath the scarlet orb and over the gold orb, not stopping. As it hit Voldemort, his eyes widened and he knew this was over. He flew backwards, into the veil and didn’t come out of the other end.

However, things weren’t over yet. The veil began to glow red, and the room started shaking. Everything was moving, almost like an earthquake. The only thing that seemed unaffected by this was the veil, which was fluttering in its red glow. Harry tried to stay stood up, but his knees gave up and he fell to the ground. As he looked up he saw a crack in the ceiling. Raising his hands above his head, he hoped that the roof would not collapse on him.

But when Harry was around, things never went according to plan.

With the ground shaking, things were falling from the upper level of the room. Benches landed next to Harry’s head. As one fell, a small note floated, until it touched down on Harry’s arm. Harry pushed his left arm over his right and picked up note. He finally understood what he had done, he had defeated Voldemort.

All the shaking stopped, and sheer coldness began. Remembering that four dementors entered, and only three escaped, his eyes widened. Right hand still on his wand, he pushed it up and shouted, “Expecto Patronum.” But nothing happened. He tried again, but he failed to produce a patronus. He was too weak, too tired. Believing that he was going to die, he dropped his wand and thought of Sirius. How he had first appeared as a dog, 4 years ago. Harry was almost about to start crying and he saw something. A tiny dog glided past Harry, pushing the dementors away. Was Harry seeing things or was this real?

He tried to lift his head, to see what was happening. As soon as he lifted his head, he felt something hit his head. Knocked out before and on the ground.

The boy who lived had saved the wizarding world.


It ain't the end yet, though.

oooo...awesome post!!!

*cheers* Yay! I knew he would do it! :D Post more soon...

Your story pwns Ali, *sniffles* I'll miss it.
 

*is eviler* Don't worry Ali :evil: I don't mind dying ... *has loads of horcruxes* You only know about my shorts ... but I have sock horcruxes too :mwaha:

Ain't it the truth brother ... :whistle: Poor Harry my life's the same way.


I don't know which is sadder, the memory of Sirius or *sniffles* or that Harry's out of the game *crying* He better live Ali, don't make me cry that's almost worst than dying. I love how it's :ron: Ron who saves Harry ... that's what best mates are for.

Better not be, I need resolution. LOL Your story r0x0rs Ali. Keep it up.

:woot:
i knew he would defeat voldemort
and ron is not dead :D
great post
PAMS

Roshni

I'm not going to try any stupid excuses, a post will arrive shortly...
 

Thanks. Thats probably the last, now. Or maybe it ain't. :shifty:
*mumbles something about Harry* Yeah, although I want Voldy to win. :evil:
Weren't the socks in the chamber of secrets? I thought Horcruxes were evil. *eyes you* You're not evil...are you? :O


Aww, well. At least Ron's alive, better than 'em both being dead. :rip: :harry3:
Yay, Harry's been defeated. I forgot to mention, Voldie and Harry switched bodies so now Voldie will be undercover with the DA and The Order. Harry died, but let's celebrate!


*Sniggers at the idea of not finishing this*

Anyone watched Cellular or The Pacifier?
 

:P

It felt like ages since he had been standing. Everything was dark, surely someone realised what had happened. Someone working in the ministry should have noticed that the ceiling of one of the highest security rooms had collapsed. But nothing. Was it night time, or was the rubble blocking Ron’s eyes. All he could think of was sending the patronus. But even that failed and the dementor had kissed Harry. Ron had heard Harry make a choking noise, and then he shut up. He understood what had happened as the tears began rolling down his pale face.

Just before he stood up, he heard a faint voice in the distance. A deep voice, a familiar voice.

“I think I see Ron,” A hoarse voice said. “Yeah, that’s him unless there was a red-headed death…” He stopped talking for a moment and looked at the body on the floor. Laid in front of him, a child hood friend was dead. He was not a friend anymore though, ever since he had betrayed his friends and killed one of them.

Remus kept walking, wand in the air illuminating the path in front of him. He thought that he had spotted Ron and rushed over to him when another four people walked into the chamber.

One was a woman with short dark green hair. She was accompanied by 2 Agents of the Order and Sirius Black. As he came in, he froze for a second, looking at the thing which had almost killed him. He then looked around, expecting to see Harry standing up, maybe even joking around with Remus. Instead of this however, all he could see was a pile of debris. He looked everywhere, and just saw piles of ceiling on the floor. He pulled his wand out even quicker and lit it. He waved it around, hoping to see Harry sat on the floor. Maybe Harry was hiding; maybe he took after James and was waiting for the right moment to jump out.

“Harry, I saw you.” He lied. “The game is up, come on out, maybe next time you could have a better hiding place.” He looked around; hoping he would see his godson stand up, grin on his face. Nothing.

“Padfoot, come here. Help me pull Ron out!” Lupin shouted from the side. Sirius ran towards him, and noticed that Ron’s leg was stuck underneath a large piece of cement which was one of the main foundations of the theatre. Sirius tried to pick it up, but couldn’t hold it. He finally went towards Remus and listened to the instructions.

“Look, we need to get his foot out before it gets suffocated or crushed. I’m going to pull his leg to the left and I need you to go to the other side and rub his skin which is underneath the pillar.” Remus paused, taking a bottle out of his pocket. “Take this, it should help you.”

Sirius ran over to the right hand side of Ron, and poured the liquid over his trapped leg. He then began to move the skin left and right, just so that he could move. He did this for a few seconds and then felt Remus’ tug on Ron’s body. The liquid had worked and Ron was slowly sliding through the wood.
Sirius then jumped over to where Lupin was and helped him pull, helping Ron escape quicker. A small smile broke out on Sirius’ face as Ron slid out fully and was free. The small vanished as he looked for Harry. Thinking that Harry would be nearby, he began to pick up loose bits of rubble and threw it to the side where the path was clear.

He couldn’t find anything, and then his eyes fell left. He could see something, but wasn’t sure what it was. It was reflecting the sunlight which was entering the room. The sun had just rose and the room had was glowing in the red rising sunlight so all four turned out the light from their wands.

Sirius moved closer to this piece of reflective material, wondering what it was.

When he made contact with it, his finger began stinging. He looked at it and noticed he had been cut by the glass. This glass was out of its frame, and a bit more to the left was some more glass. Next to these was a body. There was a strange look on the boy’s face, like he had seen a horrifying image and a beautiful image at the same time. His face was pale and he was cold. He had a faint blood red scar on his forehead which was glowing crazily. It appeared and disappeared, within a few seconds.

Sirius fell to his knees, tears falling down his face. He couldn’t look at the body, not even check for a pulse. He had broken his promise to James. He said that he would protect Harry, but in the end Harry ended up dying.

NO! Not Harry!!!

I can't believe it's almost over ...
 

Sorry, no Ali. Don't like but drama ... not so much action flicks ...

I read the post Ali, and it's really sad. I hope ... I mean ... I'm glad Ron didn't buy it but ... you can't expect me to jump for joy Harry's gone, now can you? But I think you wrote it really sadly and very well. *sniffles* My allergies I'm sure ... *hides*

I notice it doesn't say, The End, so I expect more ... :yes: brilliant story Ali, I'm liking it loads, it's just the endings ... a bit sad. Maybe? :cry:

Back when I can, keep up the brilliant story. *runs out crying*

Yes, I've seen the Pacifier...can't really remember it, though.

Oh my gosh...Harry...O_O :cry:

noooooooooooooooo :cry:
Harry can't die :cry:
how could u do that ali? or are you just messin with us?
PAMS

Roshni

If I don't make sense it's because I'm asleep. Zzz...
 

Before you read these, I'll just let you know that the stuff I say will be contradicted... A few times.

Neither can live whilst the other survives, but neither can live if the other one dies?

Thank you Ottery, but do ya know what?...What. *sniggers* Erm, yeah, Ron shouldn't die, but Harry? *Gives you an allergy tablet*

Quote:

Originally Posted by OtterySt.Catchpole I notice it doesn't say, The End, so I expect more ... :yes: brilliant story Ali, I'm liking it loads, it's just the endings ... a bit sad. Maybe? :cry:

Just a teeny bit more, plus more. I don't want to drag it on for ages, but I keep thinking of new things to put in. *stores the ideas for the next fic* Sad endings, well it'll be the end so. Hmmm...
:P Aww, you think he died? :erm:
Lol, how could I do that? Is it that I'm evil, or am I just messing with y'all? [Even though that would be more evil.] You could be right, y'ell never know.

Weeell, ye seem to upset by what has happened. A sentence will change your emotions, if only you find it. It won't point out the truth, but. I'll leave ye to find it.
*[Hint, it starts with a word.]*

Gimme more story ... more, more, more ...
 

What's the allergy tablet for? *Teddy smacks Ottery* Oh yeah, cuz I wasn't crying yeah *sniffles* :cry: Harry ... Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo :cry:

I love ♥ dragging things on forever ... LOL like running gags LOL but :cry: all endings are sad. So yeah, I wanna read your next fic when you start, 'kay? *sniffles*

<_< You're evil you know that? LOL *claps Ali on the back* LOL we should have been in Slytherin with Teddy LOL

All are sad, but sorta good at the same time. HBP was sad, :cry: I dunno about a next fic now, I'm writing a mini book called Conspiracy [or something along those lines] and that'll probably last me till the end of my exams. Then I'll be free, for a while.

:evil: Why Thank You, :P We should have, is Teddy around 100 aswell?

Okay, so here's the deal. I have a tad bit to post, and I wasn't sure about posting it now but I decided that I will. It's a new chapter [the last one :cry:] and I might be able to add on some more tommorow. No promises though.


Chapter Seventeen - The End of the Shadows. “Remus,” he said holding back the tears. “I’ve found Harry, but he’s…he’s de…” His voice cut off, he couldn’t say the words.

Lupins eyes widened, he didn’t need Sirius to finish the sentence. He understood what he meant but couldn’t believe it. “No,” he mumbled. “He can’t be.”

Sirius shook his head, keeping his eyes closed. He could feel the tears building up behind his eye lids, but didn’t want to release them. He hadn’t even checked for a pulse, for all he knew Harry could be just knocked out. That was the first thing he did as he opened his eyes. He felt his face moisten as the tears spread around his skin.

He placed his two fingers on Harry’s neck and tried getting a pulse. Nothing.
He moved his fingers around the neck, trying to find a better place. He could feel something, but wasn’t sure if it was from his own finger. It was a slow beat, slow but steady. A smile broke out on Sirius’ face as he had found a pulse.

“He’s not… He’s, alive!” He shouted with joy. He tried to pick Harry up in his arms. He pushed a few bricks out of the way and picked Harry up fully. This was quite hard for him as Harry had become a grown man. Lifted in the air, Harry was carried onto the side. He was out cold, but alive.

:P I was this close to leaving Harry dead, but good always defeats bad.

OMG! You killed Ginny TOO!!!!!!!!! *tries to scare the kiddies* LOL
 

Aww well. If you post it up somewhere lemme know I'd like to read it. Is it about 24? :shifty:

Well I got Teddy when I was six so ... that would make him about ... *counts on fingers and Teddy smacks him* T: I'm 95 years old.

Whenever you can Ali's fine by me ... *sniffles* but I am gonna miss it. I guess I should start reading Shan-Shan's again ... maybe ... *wonders*

:cry: So of course I was crying ... I mean ... the dust from the debris, yeah ... *sniffles* OMG! Harry! *runningmadglompsHarry&Alifornotkillinghim*

Good story Ali. *sniffles* I'm glad you're finishing it. I don't know how many stories I've started ... *sighs* It'll be sad but you can have them put it away and then we can go back and reread it anytime we want to ... *sniffles*

Lol, for once it isn't. It's sort of made up, so you could say it's an original piece of work :D

Whoa, he'd like really old. And so are you :P

Thanks Ottery. Yeah, I might just re-read it for the replies. They've been awesome in the past year. They make me :)

Oh yeah, I'm really liking your siggie. It made me :lol:


Wow, for once I've actually kept up to my deadline. I've got a post now so wheeee. :doof:

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It had been almost a month since Harry Potter had saved the wizarding world. He had managed to defeat the Darkest Wizard alive but was in trouble. In the past month Harry had not made a move, he could not talk. He appeared asleep, but this was all to change soon.

He had been getting visits from his friends, for he was lying in the hospital wing. Sirius and Remus had appeared regularly, filling Harry in on what had happened. Ron and Hermione were talking to Harry on this warm summer’s day.

“Lessons were funny, but they aren’t the same without you, mate.” Ron said looking at him.
“Yeah, I’m sure that you’ll be up soon to join Ron, though.” Hermione said slipping her hand onto Rons.
“Just don’t take too long,” Ron chuckled.

Something was shining over head. It wasn’t the sun, but it was just as bright. He could hear the sound of some people in the background, but he didn’t know who. They were laughing, they seemed familiar. As soon as he tried to open his eyes he felt something. His head was light, with a strange cooling on his forehead.

Harry automatically moved his arm to the side, reaching for his glasses. He found them further back then they would normally be, and placed them on his face. He opened his eyes, and then closed them feeling the strain on them. After waiting a couple of seconds, he slowly opened his eyes and took in all the room. He saw Ron and Hermione, talking about something which had happened in the grounds. Smiling, he let out a small cough to catch their attention.

“Harry!” Hermione said, looking at his open eyes. “You’re okay!”
“Hey mate, how are ya doing?” Ron said looking at Harry with a grin.

“Yeah, thanks. I’m doing well, just a bit sore.” Harry croaked. He hadn’t talked in a while and could feel it going at his throat. “What time is it?”

“Erm, I think it’s around 4. Lunch is in a bit.” Ron said, “You wanna go to the hall?”

“Wait Ron, we were supposed to tell Orios when Harry woke up. I’ll go get him now.” Hermione said disappearing from view.

“Okay then,” Ron said watching her go. “You want a drink?” He asked pouring himself some water.

“Yeah, sure,” Harry said taking hold of a glass of water. Ron poured it for him and Harry felt the weight go on his arms. His right arm almost dropped, but he threw his left in to the way to stop the fall. A bit had split onto his arm and he felt the cold water spread.

“You okay,” Ron said helping Harry raise his hand. He looked behind him and saw someone walk towards them. He had dark hair and a smile on his face.

“Harry!” Sirius said throwing his arms around Harry. “It’s great to see you’re up, everything ok?”

“Yeah,” Harry said catching his godfather. He winced as his upper torso was up, and tried to lean back on to the cushions.

“Good, look. We’ll let you rest, but we expect you to come to the hall in a bit. Are you okay with that?” Sirius said staring at Harry’s forehead.

“Yeah, sure. Am I okay to just get up, or do I have to wait for something?” Harry said yawning. One month of sleeping and he still was tired.

“Yes, as soon as you feel ready to go you can get up. If you want to you can ask the nurse to check you out, but you don’t have to.” He said. “If you don’t come I’ll be back to check on you.”

“Okay, I’ll go in a bit. I just need to get some clothes; I can’t go in wearing this.” He pointed to his gown.

“Okay, I’ll go get some for you,” Ron said getting ready. “I’ll put them here when I bring them,” Ron said pointing to the side. “Cya Harry.”


The EndOkay, maybe not. Not long to go though.

Livin' ain't easy lovin's twice as tough ...
 

*Reserved for Ottery* :lol: I'm so evil.

I was here first but I have to go to class so I only got to read half. I'll be back to edit this though ... *sniffles*

Love your fic Ali ♥

EDIT:

First off, how lame I can't see the other posts when I'm editing <_<

The End You truly are evil Ali :lol: *sniffles* I don't want this story to end. It's probably one of the only one's I've finished, most of the time people abandon their fics ... I'll be sorry to see it go. :cry: I swear it's my allergies *Teddy smacks Ottery*

And Harry's alright ... after a month long coma, ZOMG! A lot can happen in a month you know ... and why in the hall *worries for Harry* Nooooooooooo LOL

Yay! :woot: Harry's alive!

*does a victory dance* Wootness! He's okay and safe! :P I'm glad you didn't make him die. ;)

Yeah, it's like the most irritating thing ever. Apart from posting a really long post and then SS crashes out on you.

You're evil, I'm evil. We're all evil. *pokes Teddy*

Yay, for now I mean, yeah. He's alive and well.
:erm: Yeah, so am I. If I killed him I think that you'd all kill me, :P

I have a post coming up soon, but typing is quite hard with a broken finger so it might take me time. I managed to type this up, so I should be able to do the post.

Owie, sore fingers.


The great hall had been decorated for the end of year feast; banners were hung above each house table. Students were celebrating as another year of studies had ended. The staff table was full, and so was a table which was placed on the side. On that were a couple of people Harry recognised, and a few he didn’t. One man who Harry saw was Severus Snape, another was Sirius Black. Both men were giving each other death looks but Harry knew that nothing could destroy the men’s bond. Remus Lupin was sat at the table with Tonks and they were chatting whilst Tonks kept bursting into laughter.

As Harry walked into the hall he felt pain on his ankles. He wasn’t surprised though, he had been lying down for almost a month and now he was trying to walk. He managed to get to the Gryffindor table without falling and took a seat near Hermione, Ron and Ginny. They all stopped talking when they saw Harry arrive, and got up hugging him.

They took it in turns and were done in a few seconds when the headmaster coughed rather loudly.

He had appeared behind Harry and shook his hand. He was smiling, something which hadn’t been seen before.
“Harry, it’s great to see you back on your feet.” He said, looking at the boy.

“Thanks Professor.” Harry looked towards the table where Snape was sat. “Why is he here?” He pointed at Snape.

“He is here because he helped defeat the Death Eaters, and I would prefer it if you called him Severus.” Orios looked up to the table and saw Professor McGonagall eying him. “Excuse me Harry, I must go and deliver the end of year speech.” He took off and went into the middle of the staff table, where his seat was.

“Ladies and Gentlemen, I am pleased to tell you that this year of Hogwarts has ended.” A bunch of first years cheered. “Over the year, there have been some, occurrences. But these have been dealt with and Hogwarts is now as safe as it ever was.”

“However, just because some odd events have been happening, doesn’t mean that the usual school celebrations will not go on. So I present the house cup, to,” He clapped his hands and red and gold banners fell from the high ceiling, “Gryffindor!”

The hall erupted into cheers as the Gryffindors clapped and whistled, shouting things like, “Go, Go, Gryffindor.” Orios moved his hand and they all fell to silence. “Congratulations, congratulations. Although this was very close, Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw. You were joint second at 429 points.” He didn’t say anything about Slytherin, as barely any had started this term.

“And now, as my words come to a close. I would like to say good bye to you all. It has been a marvellous year, where I have learnt so much from you,” at this he looked at Harry and winked. “But I joined for a year, and I will hold that. So may I please introduce the new Headmistress of Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry, Professor McGonagall.”

The students in the hall rose, clapping hard as Minerva McGonagall moved into the central position and Orios had joined the team from the Order.

“Thank you, thank you. All I have to say is tuck in!” She said as a thousand different meals appeared on plates. The seventh year students began their final Hogwarts meal.

The meal was great, as Harry and Ron tried a bit of everything and Hermione began talking about the house elves. After a minute of being convinced by Harry and Ron she began to eat the marvellous food.

It felt like a year as they sat at the table talking about their Hogwarts memories.
“And the troll, which I beat up,” Ron said, “Bit like Crabbe and Goyle.”
“Troll Bogeys,” both Harry and Ron began laughing.

The night fell as memories of the castle were told to Ginny, Luna and a few others which had joined the Gryffindor table. Most people had returned to their common rooms, but Harry and the rest sat there talking.

It was the last night at Hogwarts, they would make it special.



T Minus 2 Posts.

Lovely! I love how everything is so happy; just what nearing of the ending should be like. :) Great job.

Great post! *sniffs* I don't want it to end!

*Ottery & Teddy are mischievous evil* C'mon Ali, join the dark side lol
 

You broke your finger Ali ... wait didn't you already tell me this? I swear school is sucking up all my abilities to think ... :dizzy: ZOMG! You poor thing :console: wait 'till you're better Ali ... we'll wait. *sniffles* Besides we don't want the story to end so soon ...

I swear ... boys *smacks Severus and Sirius* Oh well *shrugs*

I like that Gryffindor won the cup LOL but then again ... that is my house LOL, and Professor McGonagall as the new Headmistress pwns!!!!!!!!

It is sad to think that's their last year at school. *sighs* But I always imagined the end of term is sad. It was for me back when I was in school ... now in Uni it's not so much because I don't have school friends there ... Hmm. Anyways, yeah, I thought you captured that rather prettily there. Jo just seems to say it about Harry and only in passing at the end of the books but I mean ... he should be really sad by the end of the book because he won't see his friends over the summer but this being the end of school as we know it for them ... :cry: ZOMG!!! Talk about total sadness :sad:

Anyways, you're story is still going good Ali, I'm just really gonna miss it. So ... take it slow okay? LOL seriously, wait until your fingers better, and SS crashing in the middle of a long post ... DUDE! Do I know about that ... *would start cursing here but ... the kiddies are watching LOL* Seriously Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaargh.

:cry: I know , I know already ... stop you're making me cry ... :cry:

omg!!!
harry is alive :woot:
this is like almost over :cry:
are you goin to write another story Ali?
PAMS

Roshni

Ali *glomps*
 

EEEEeeek, It posted before it was ready. Well, something'll be up in a min.

A few hours later...

Aw, thanks Ottery. I'm all better now, being sick smells, 'specially when water is rolling from your eyes, 24/7. The OotP pictures are interesting, but I really don't like the Harry ones. Maybe I need time to get used to his short hair, but hmm. The DA pics are awesome, Nevilles hair is amusing. Maybe Seamus will be in the film, You know what the film-makers are like.

Okay, so I've said above. I'm all better now, and have a post in the making. I'm trying to cut down the deaths which won't be happening, but some big deaths will have to not take place. Now lets let the replies roll on. Happy? I mean, yes. Happy, the perfect end to any story but this one :evil: Am I bluffing, you'll never know...until I finish. Neither do I, I say that we go on strike. Against the writers, so they keep writing forever. *notices I'm the writer* Urm, well, everything that starts has to end. Aww, I really don't want to end this year at school because it's my last with some of my friends. Then I'll be all alone, *starts to sing the song Donkey sang in Shrek* Um, yar. But then again, Jo mainly focuses on his school activities. I've been a bit weird with that, switching the PoV, sometimes writing stuff without Harry. *pokes self* A coincidence or what...I was just replying to your fic, and it was a rather long post so I decided I'd copy it just in case, and guess what. SS crashed. It's just so , *ahem* back to the fic now. :blush: It is, the end is near, I can see it with my eyes... Nope, that's the space bar. I may be writing another HP fic, depends on which prologue I chose. I have an evil one planned, and a good one. It all depends, because the evil one would make sense with the stuff that I've been dropping in the fic for me to do a sequel. But it'd probably be non-fictionnon-canon.


Yurp, and double yurp. If I remember correctly I said I had 2 posts left. These don't include the epilogue, so I have to make a go of it. Post will hopefully be up tonight, now I have to catch up on some History work.

Okay, maybe two more because I did something in this which I was not supposed to. You'll notice at the end.


The sun of July shone through the windows as birds were chirping cheerfully. The warm four poster beds seemed to be ever so comfortable as the Gryffindor boys slowly woke up one by one.
Harry, the first to wake up had sat upright for a few seconds, and then melted back into the bed. He was soon awakened by Ron who woke up a few minutes later. After a long 20 minutes, all the boys were up and talking about their last day.
“I really want to play quidditch,” Neville said. Harry and Ron hid a laugh as they remembered the last time they saw Neville Longbottom on a broomstick.

Getting out of bed and dressed took another few minutes, and they were all on their way down to the common room where many students of all years were sat chattering. Some were happy, and some were sad. A few first years were running round the place, as usual and Hermione and Ginny were sat near the windows leading to the magnificent grounds of the Hogwarts castle.

“Morning, Ginny, Hermione.” Harry said joining the two girls. He sat on the window ledge and placed his hand on the glass. The warm glass heated his fingers and he felt like he was in bed all over again.

“Morning Harry, Ron,” both girls said. Hermione looked at Ron, then at Harry, then the common room. Seven years, she had spent here. Working, laughing, crying, this place truly was a home away from home.

“Do you guys want to go to the hall?” She asked, looking back at the guys and Ginny.

“Yeah, I think we should.” Harry said jumping off the ledge and onto his feet. Ron let out a yawn and all four of them exited the portrait of the fat lady.

They arrived at the common room to see it full of joy, as plates of food were scattered everywhere, being emptied every so often by students feasting on the morning delights.

Harry and Ron served themselves a healthy portion of everything, including pancakes, toast and jam whilst the girls had a slice of bread each.

“’ermione,” Ron said whilst swallowing a pancake. “You need to try some of this stuff before we go.” He now poured himself some pumpkin juice. “It’s bloody brilliant.”

Hermione looked at him for a moment, and then at the plate which was full. She bit her tongue, and then gave in, under one condition. “Only if Ginny eats some as well.”

Five minutes later all four of them were munching of the breakfast delights of Hogwarts when Neville and Luna joined them.

After twenty minutes of eating, they all walked outside and decided to visit Hagrid one last time. The cabin was darker than its usual colour, but it was as homely as ever. Harry knocked three times and waited for Hagrid to answer.

yay! great post! plz post more soon!

OMG i cryed it was so sad but i really loved the story !!

Katie

No fair posting when I'm not here ... *grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr*

EDIT: I'm quoting the whole post ... LOL

That was a lovely description of how I'm going to feel tomorrow morning not wanting to get out of bed ... *is dreading morning already* I think it was lovely, but I don't get chirping birds, just this annoying woodpecker ... My house is not a tree ...

Too cute, Neville wanting to become a quidditch player. *ruffles Neville's hair* Oh well weirder things have happened, no?

Leaving school really is bittersweet. Well I mean back then ... it means growing up, and leaving old familiar things behind, and *is getting all philosophical* it's painful, because Uni isn't ever the same way, the same thing, you'll never have those days back, of innocence and laughter ... *Teddy smacks Ottery because he's putting Ali and everyone else to sleep* Sorry :blush: I miss being a kid. *sniffles* I wanna be ten again.

That was a really sweet moment. I don't know why but ... it's like you struck a chord ... it rang a note in my heart ♥ :blush: *Teddy smacks Ottery again* Sorry ... I'm getting all sad cuz you can feel the end coming. :cry:

*sniffles* I am a sentimental sap. It's disgusting really ... sorry. *Ottery cries up the whole thread and all the readers have to open the windows and dry out the place for weeks*

I like your descriptiveness Ali. Ron yawning harry jumping ... things happen, I like that. I miss doing that ... I think drabbles have made me all dialogue happy LOL

As always you get Ron perfectly. :ron: *madglomps the Ron* He's too cute. Seriously, and you write him so well ... *sighs* most people don't get Ron they just think he's there for comic relief, but he's Harry's best mate, his wingman, who you'd turn too if the whole world were after you. We should all have someone like that ... *sniffles* Instead Teddy tries to kill me everytime we disagree ... <_<

N/L is the loves ♥. I really like Luna too ... I mean film Luna, I think they got the perfect actress Evana is so cute and perfect, she just looks Luna. *Sighs* but why did they have to get rid of the Quidditch? *whines* Anyways, *fires the cannons for the D.A.*

It's sad but *sniffles* I was getting ready for school and I realized, then, the next book IS the last one ... no new Harry Potter adventures. How sad ... :cry: and it's the same way with your story Ali. *sniffles* I hope you write another HP story someday. But yeah, winding things down I see ... I think I'd miss Hagrid too ... well don't mind my earlier outburst LOL I was just surprised you'd posted story. I like being the first one here when I can ... To show my loyalty. *growls* Back when I can Ali, post when you can.

:gryff: Grrrrrrrr.

something is wrong with Hagrid????????????
:cry:
isn't it? I am sure it is. :cry:
PAMS

Roshni

Replies and something else.
 

Thanks, only a few posts to go.
Aww, I'm sowwy for making you cry. I promise you, it'll only get worse
Ten again, thats like. 91 years ago. Wow, but then you'd have Teddy trying to kill you. Or was he nice and friendly and not murderous to begin with?
LOL, *brings in loads of sponges.* The thread's only got a couple of days of life left, and now it's wet. Oh well, the mods'll have to deal with that. ;)
Thanks Ottery. Ron's the best person, character wise, because his personality is good to relate to. And I'm sure Teddy likes you, he just hides it behind the weapons he tries to kill you with
:shifty: What makes you think that. Have you been looking at my notes. Then you'd know. *dials hitman on phone* there's only one was this can end. :P


Umm, I'll be posting something in a minute, and it'd be great if you guys can let me know what ya think. So, yeah. Post next.

Nice post! ^_^

Heh heh...the ending doesn't really matter to me, as long as it's good. ;) Happy ending sounds nice, though!

Teddy put that down you'll destroy us all ... Eeeeeeeeeek
 

I have to admit, I'd rather the happy ending ... unless picking the sad ending means you'll write a sequel *hopes* but I know you're busy with school so ... <_< maybe the happy ending and then you can just start another fic with disaster LOL

I'm so lost.

Give us the happy ending Ali, but ... write us a sequel :lol: *Ottery's greedy and he wants everything* :lol:

I'm sure you're right Ali, I mean I'm just paranoid what with all the supervillains after me *laughs while behind him Teddy points the Doomsday device at Ottery*

Great post! I am dreading the end...but I'll have time to do other things in the place of reading this ff.

Long and good, well. Long, sorta. Good as in quality, I dunno. But a good guys ending, sure. Thats one vote for them.
Hehe, Sure. Another vote for happy it is. I could pull out a sequel with the good ending aswell, I'd just put the evil at the start of the next. :P Business with school, yeah. That sucks. But I'll probably start one after Christmas time because its the end of my first exams/ start of holidays. And I really don't think I can stay sane without writing, it'll pull me back.

Ah, you feel something back will happen? Only 2 posts of this left officially, plus the one epilogue, then you'll be free from this fic forever. *cue evil laugh*.

You don't need to apologise, I know how busy you are. Just being here means lots.
Good you say, and both? I'll probably paste the evil one on the side, maybe. Well, thats 3 for goodl. *laughs at the fact that people aren't evil* Thankies Lottie!

Lets see how y'ell react to this.
 

Don't cha just think mysterious-ness rocks!
:mwaha: :mwaha: :mwaha:


The howling of Fang was the first sound to come out, and then the sound of Hagrid calming down his hound came. “Calm down, yer mutt. Step back, dunno who it might be.”

The doors bolts were pulled back, then the large man appeared in the door.
“Hullo Harry, Ron, ‘ermione, Neville, Luna.” He said letting them into his small hut. With everyone in, there was almost no room to move.

“I’ll get some tea ready,” Hermione said going towards the side where the water and kettle was. A minute later, they all were drinking tea, with the exception of Luna who said that tea made mirdo grow quicker. What mirdo’s were, no one asked. But instead, she drank something else which Hagrid had.

They all talked, until leaving was mentioned. Hagrid stayed quiet for a second, and Harry drank some tea.

“Well, yer not leavin’ me, any of yer, I won’t let yeh.” Hagrid said hiding his emotions behind his big woolly beard.

“No, we wont,” Harry said. “I want you to come to Grimmauld Place, when you get some time.”

“I’d love to,” Hagrid beamed. “I really would.” He placed his mug down gently. “I’m going to be going there later on today anyway, when you arrive at Kings Cross.”
He looked at a watch which was stretching on his wrist. “Oh boy, yer late. Go for the train now, else y’ell miss it.”

They ran back to the castle to get their final things, where they split with Luna and Neville. Ten minutes later Harry, Ron, Ginny and Hermione walked out of the grounds for the last time, along with a couple more students. It was over; life was going to be normal again. Or that’s what they thought.

Walking through Hogsmeade brought back some memories, of the time when he had a thing with Cho Chang. He didn’t even know where she was now; all he knew was that he had Ginny, Ron and Hermione.

As they got nearer to the station, they saw the crowd of students there; a few were even doing some last minute shopping.

He slowly arrived at the station, and checked his pockets making sure that his wand was there. He tried to find a bit of muggle money, but instead felt something even smaller.

As he reached further into his pocket he felt a small ball in the bottom. He pulled it out, it was a crumpled up paper note. He didn’t know who had put it there, but he recognised it. It was the note he saw from the department of mysteries. Upon it were three small paragraphs, two written in blue, and one written in green. They were in different handwritings and were probably passed on, as a child would pass notes in class.

Work’s being different again. Tried getting in touch with Remus, couldn’t find him, must be the time of the month. What did you say about your nephew at home?

Why don’t you check, the moon’s only outside. My nephew, yes Dudley. It seems that he’s got some magical blood, but Dursley won’t have any of it. Says that we’re trying to split up their “normal” family. Waste of the blood if you ask me.

Well, that’s a shocker. A little play mate for Harry, that’s if Dudley begins with the magical world.

:mwaha: :mwaha: :mwaha:
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So you know I love this story right?
 

Only when I'm writing it :lol: What do you mean mysteriousness? And you're going to write again after the holidays ... w00t, make sure you drop me a link so I know ...

Mirdo :one_brow: Ah, yes our beloved Luna and her odd ideas :lol: I really like her ... I can't wait for Ootp, for her and Bellatrix *squeeeeeeeeeeeeee* and the Rupertness but that really should go without saying ... :lol: I mean ... who doesn't know this already, right?

That's sooooooooooooooo sad, I really never thought of it like that. If Harry leaves he wont see Hagrid anymore, nor as much, or his professors or other friends ... *sniffles* being a grown up sucks ... *runs out crying*

When he had a thing for Cho *pets Harry* You were so young :lol: It's so sad walking away from ... things you've known for so long ... but sometimes you have to move on ... *sighs*

:eek: WTF???!!!!!!!!!!! :eek:

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Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo :cry: I'm gonna miss this fic and I have to wait for the sequel *sniffles* at least you'll write again Ali *sniffles*

I'll get it to you if a HP fic comes up, I'm thinking of writing shorts focused on one character, or maybe a comic relief one.

That's the only thing left in the film, stupid film people. Less Rupert than there should be as theres the no quidditch thing.


:mwaha: I knew someone would react like that :mwaha: So it's a bit of a shock to you?

huh whats happening next what did you do lol post soon! Em

Whaddya mean what's happening next? The end is coming, to tell you the truth :P Post will be on Wednesday.

Ahh! That's such a surprise! I don't want to imagine Dudley with a wand...O_O

I know, imagine what he'd do. He's already bad enough without one, but then again. He'd just probably use it as a beating stick.

:evil: Well don't I have to, seeing as this is going to finish on Friday :P I'm sowwy Otts, really am. And for that, I shall post...after teasing you s'morein a few minutes.

The funny thing is, this ending is considered a happy one. Too bad I think happy= evil

:mwaha: :mwaha: :mwaha:

Enjoy

Taking a deep breath Harry read the note for the second time round. What it said was pretty clear, and looked like it was written by his parents. Dudley, he was a wizard?

Keeping the news to himself for now, he boarded the Hogwarts express. Finding a compartment with his friends they sat down and waited for the train to leave. They waved at Hagrid, who was outside of the train, tears rolling from his face. But this would not be the last time Hagrid would see them, he’d be arriving at the platform to accompany Harry to his new house.

The train began to get louder, and smoke began to emerge from the top, the Hogwarts Express was ready to go. Harry looked at the castle for one last time as it drifted away and was replaced by countryside.

They ordered many different foods when the lunch lady came, making sure to collect the chocolate frog cards. Harry unwrapped one, and felt his heart drop. He had just got a card with Lord Voldemort. He was sure this wasn’t supposed to happen, Voldemort wasn’t a good wizard. Something was wrong.

Slowly turning the card round to show Hermione and Ron, they both gasped. Hermione even let out a little scream as she saw the evil Lord Voldemort dance about standing on the spot, long fingers moving. He raised his hand, and pointed straight ahead. As Hermione dropped the card and let out a shriek Harry felt something slash his head. He clapped his hand on it, but it was nothing. He , Ron and Hermione didn’t speak until the train neared London as all they could do was think about what happened.

After a few minutes the Hogwarts express was reaching the city-like features of London, as large buildings could be seen as a blur. Harry pocketed the card, and then pulled out the note. He contemplated showing them the note, but he decided against it. He would show them when the time was right.

People began to stand up, the train began to slow down, and the engines sounded like they were getting louder. They had arrived at Kings Cross.

Making sure that everything was ready and packed up, Harry stood up and wiped his forehead.

Boarding off the train, Harry looked around to see if Sirius was there. And in the corner, sat on the wall eating an ice cream, Sirius black was sat with his school friend Remus Lupin. Nymphadora Tonks was on patrol in the station just in case any Death Eaters decided to make a mess of things.

The trains emptied and Harry and Ron walked towards Sirius, whilst Hermione went to talk to her parents. They joined a minute later, and as Harry had asked, were ready to go to Grimmauld Place. Sirius told them that Mrs Weasley was waiting for them there, and it all seemed so perfect.

Just as they began to walk away, Sirius stopped and his eyes widened as he looked at Harry’s forehead. He placed his finger on it and got it covered in blood. “Harry, it’s bleeding.” He said worriedly, calling Remus over.

“What’s bleeding?” Harry said looking more scared than ever. If it scared Sirius, then it had to be bad.

“It’s glowing and bleeding, what’s wrong?” Lupin said running over, wand out.

“What’s happened?” Harry said feeling more agitated.

Ron and Hermione turned around and looked at their friend, both of them let out a shriek. For something on Harry’s head was glowing a green colour. And around the glow, there was a line of scarlet blood dripping down.

“What is it??” Harry said, this time losing his patience. “Tell me.”

“It’s bleeding and shining a green colour.” Sirius pointed with a tremble in his voice. “Your scar.”

[T- 0]
[POOF]
[Termination completed. Systems rebooting, report online in E minus three days.]


Now I would say the end, but it's not. Well, not properly, still got the epilogue to post. And it looks like it's gunna be the good one, not the evil.

That was good LOL ZOMG! Now I'm all wondering what's happening ...
 

It's...glowing?? and bleeding?? why?? Did it have something to with the Voldy card????

Y'all make me :D so much!!!
 

Thank you Ottery, I'm glad that I got the scary bit in.*kicks spoiler police, calls hitman* I tried, and didn't think I'd pull it off :D Whee. *has a big smile*

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Sirius eating ice cream is toooooooooooooo cute ... seriously, and Remus there ... *sniffles* I wish it could be like that in canon *sniffles*

The thing is, has Jo ever admitted that Sirius is dead? She has for Dumbledore, but with Sirius she just answered, "I don't bring people back from the dead." What if he wasn't dead...*unveils conspiracy*

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You're bad to tease LOL but that's half the fun. I can't wait for the epilogue. Sorry this is so short but ... there's a thunderstorm and I need to get off the computer ... :mad: and I can't go see DL so I'm angry ... :mad: and today has just been a bad day ... *sighs* tomorrow must be better, please? :cry:

Don't worry about it, thunderstorms are a pain in the butt if they get the PC. Just replying means loads to me.
Hope your days get better!
:mwaha: It had everything to do with the card. The pointingness, evillness. Garr...

Yeah, but I don't think it's that serious, the Docs at St.Mungo's said it'd be okay in a few years.

Oh my goodness! :gasp: You must post more, Ali! :)

Lol, thanks Cookie. I'll post more tonight, or tommorow depending on what time I go to sleep tonight.

Anyways, this is what's going to happen. As Happy won Evil I'm going to post the "official" ending here, but am going to post a link to my LJ where I'm going to post the evil ending...

*waits eagerly* No wait I have to do homework Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo *shakes Ali* Don't fall asleep ... I'll check in laters ... :sleepy:

I'm watching Batman Begins now, so I think I'll post this. I was planning on posting after I finished, but I saw your LJ and felt mean, so I think I'll post it now.

This ain't as strong as my other one, in my opinion, but you guys voted for it.

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Seven years had passed since Lord Voldemort had fallen. His group, the Death Eaters, had fallen with their master and were rarely seen. Most of them had been rounded up by Auror’s after the Dark Lord was defeated. The world became a safe place again, and Hogwarts was one of the most secure areas ever. The dragons had been removed as there was no need for them to stay. All the security of the castle was in the eyes of a tiny bird.

Harry had taken a job in the ministry after finishing Hogwarts. He had stuck with his career and was in training to become an Auror. His friends, Ron and Hermione had joined the ministry as well. Six summers after the death of the Dark Lord, Harry and Ginny had got married. She had taken a job of coaching the women’s quidditch team at Chudley Cannons, supplying Ron with a chain of free Chudley Cannons merchandise and tickets. At the moment, she was taking part in a training session at Hogwarts.

At the moment, Harry had volunteered to teach Defence Against Dark Arts at Hogwarts, whilst the current teacher, Severus Snape, had gone to visit his mother. He had been teaching an interesting subject with the 4th year Gryffindors and Slytherins. Unforgivable Curses.

As the students were walking out of the class, a pretty woman walked in. She had red hair and freckles and had a wedding ring on her finger.

”Hey Harry, how was the class?” She asked, walking into the room. She threw a boot bag down onto the table and looked at Harry.

“Interesting. You wouldn’t believe how many Slytherins wanted to try the unforgivables.” Harry said, looking at her, with a grin on his face.

”How many,” she said as her eyes widened. She had always hoped that the Slytherins would become good, but there would always be one.

“None. It’s weird, isn’t it?” He said his grin becoming bigger.

She stared at him for a second, smiled and said, “I guess it’s a sign that things are better. What did Snape do when he found out you were covering his class?”

”He’s-.”

In the distance, they both heard a loud thud.

“What was that?” Harry said looking out of the window.

“Maybe Peeves got bored in his old age. We need to bring Fred and Ge-.” She stopped halfway through her sentence as she saw what happened.

The grounds near the lake were engulfed in flames.

”Aguamenti,” they both shouted firing a spell from the window of the classroom.

“We need to get closer,” Harry said opening the door and running out. He was soon followed by Ginny.

Just as they had appeared on the lawns of the castle, Hermione and Ron had appeared.

They ran towards the flames and slowly managed to put some of them out, but others still roared. As the fire caught on to the lake, you could see the giant squid move his tentacles frantically, trying to do something.

With the combined power of four, they managed to put the fire out. As soon as the fire was put out, a searing paint hit Harry’s forehead, where his scar had previously been. He quickly clapped his hand on his head.

“We saw flames, what happened?” Hermione said catching her breath.

A bird had been put in place directly above the castle to monitor everything that happened. A live feed of this was sent to the headquarters of the Ministry of Magic in London.

Before Harry could answer this, Ginny let out a small scream as she saw something in the sky.

A green skull was forming above the forest, with a snake slowly slithering out of the jaw.

“What the hell?” Ron said staring at the mark in the sky. He looked disgusted at the image in the air.

“This is a really sick joke.” Hermione said trying to work out why someone would do this.

Instead of talking, Harry looked at the surroundings. He could see an odd shaped rock, which never used to be there. He crept up to it, an aimed as he destroyed it. Behind it hid a man in dark robes.

“Wahey,” Harry said kicking the man down. “Looks like we’ve found the last Death Eater,” Harry shouted to his friends.

“You’ll be sorry Potter, the dark lord shall return, and he shall dominate the world.”

“Course he will,” Ron said. “And I’m a millionaire.” Ron sent another stunner at the man, sending him unconscious.

“Well, that’s that.” Hermione said looking at the body. “We’ll see you for lunch tomorrow, okay?” She said to Harry and Ginny.

“Yeah, sure.” Ginny said. “We’ll be there at six.”


Le End

*blinks reads again blinks* Im confused maybe i need to get my brain checked or something cause I thought we left with Harry's scar bleeding and glowing and now this guy shows up saying Voldy is gonna come back? plz make since! Em

If I could rate this story again I'd give it another five stars so you could have ten
 

:blush: Sorry Ali, I didn't mean anything by it ... :blush: I just got impatient. You could never be mean ... :glomp:

Now I have to go read the other one ... ZOMG!


<_< I still think keeping the dragons would have been cooler ... :lol:

Excuse me Ali for going all shippery on you but ... H/G Forever!!!!!!!!!!!! *Fires the cannons*

:erm: That is both funny and horrible. Snape is the DADA teacher, NOooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo :cry: but he's gone to see his Mum, :lol: too cute. *sniffles*

Now where ever would Harry get an idea like that? :whistle:

Poor Peeves, who knew Poltergeists could get old ... LOL *pets* that was funny lol, actually the bit with Ginny supplying Ron with Chudley Cannons merchandise was :lmao: too LOL Ron's too cute.

*sighs* :harry: :hermy: :ron: The trio back together again. I thought this bit was nice Ali. Fighting evil again.

Silly squid, you can't turn off magic fire like that ... Thought that was funny too LOL

Now that there ... is just too cool. LOL Wish I'd thought of something like that ...

Ron's still funny, Harry's still a hero, the death eaters just never give up and ... *sniffles* God's in his heaven and all's right with the world ... as the old saying goes ... I think you did a remarkable job Ali. Seriously.

I think that's ... wow. I like how you just end it like an episode. Tomorrow at six ... it gives you the feeling that everythings going to go on without us but it's still going on ... Harry and Ginny and Ron and Hermione ... *sniffles* but you forgot to marry Ron and Hermione. :cry: Write another Epilogue ... throw in Dobby since he's not going to be in Ootp ... :cry: don't finish your story Ali ... :poke:

But seriously Ali, your story was good. I liked the action bits, and I'm glad you never gave up on it. Loads of people wouldn't have bothered to finish it. I think you got Ron spot on. I hate how some people always make him stupid, he has the best lines in the books ... and you gave us dragons at Hogwarts and bleeding scars ... which I still don't get ... and what the devil happened to Dudley? See? You have to write us a sequel LOL if you do lemme know. :yes:

Loved it, just as it is! *Fires the cannons*

Yeah, there has been seven years between the posts. So after that many years, some things can happen.

You don't need to apologise, I know you didn't mean anything by it. And I was prolonging the post, so it was only right that it came out sooner.


Yeah, but after a few first years getting the shock of their life, it was decided that dragons were not safe to be around kids. Especially those dragons.
I thought I'd try to humanize him, going to see his mum. Eating ice cream, that sort of thing.

No more Peeves :cry: Tickets for the game. Woohoo. She gave me a couple too. *gives them to you guys* Ron will be there.
A sign of things to come, maybe?

Thank you Ottery :D

I wanted it to be like that, I'm so :D that you got it. Marry Ron and Hermione, that's happening next year. And I just saw the Dobby news, it's like grr. Filmwriters jump to anything, and will cut anything. I wonder if Sirius will still die.

And thank you for the help you gave me. I don't think I'd have even been close if you and my other readers didn't help me. And for that, I thank you all.

And for the fact that it wasn't that clear, I think I might clear it up. even though this won't be that clear Remember when the card pointed at Harry, he felt he had a weird feeling in his forehead. Well, it all links up to an interview JK did when someone asked how the Order communicated. The interviewee asked chocolate frogs, so that stuck with me. *ten thousand years later, after I've bored you to sleep* Anyway, that card had something special about it, and the Lunch Lady isn't all who she says she is.

Wow, very cool ending, Ali! I've really enjoyed reading this story! :D :glomp: