 Stuart Craig, Harry Potter & Fantastic Beasts films' production designer, dies at 83 Malfoys, Dursleys, Hogwarts students, more cast in HBO 'Harry Potter TV series Tom Felton to reprise Draco Malfoy role in NYC 'Harry Potter and the Cursed Child' "Harry Potter" HBO MAX TV series casts Harry, Ron, and Hermione Harry Potter HBO/MAX TV series casts Dumbledore, Snape, McGonagall, Hagrid, more 'Harry Potter and the Cursed Child' announces 10 cities, part of North American tour Universal Orlando launching U.S. portal tour for Epic Unvierse attraction opening PUMA to release new Harry Potter and Hogwarts-House themed sportswear this month Students: 9876
Classes: 15
Professors: 10
| |
If this is your first visit, be sure to check out the FAQ by clicking the link above.
You may have to register before you can post: click the register link above to proceed.
To start viewing messages, select the forum that you want to visit from the selection below.
| | Dusty Cellar The cellar holds unfinished confections of storytelling, giving readers a glimpse into creative ideas that may one day be dusted off. | |
12-18-2006, 11:44 PM
| | |  Love is Just a Four-Letter Word for a Death Eater - Sa13+
Hello there, and welcome to LiJaF-LWfaDE [the abbreviation is almost as long as the title itself], my third Fan Fiction on SnitchSeeker. Constructive criticism is appreciated, but please don’t flame me. Also, if you have a problem with one of my readers, please PM them about it. Don’t yell at them on my thread.
I like to have a really friendly thread, so chatting about the fic is okay, but I don’t want spam. :] This became a problem in my last FF, so I'm I'm implementing a rule I'd like y'all to please be super kind and follow. Feel absolutely free to leave a comment after I post, but if you have anything extra you'd like to add, please edit your post, PM me, or leave me a UN. I don't want the mods to have to come and clean out my FF thread again.
Most of all - please have fun! I love writing for active readers who leave me great things to reply to. You're my inspiration to write, so be my guest and get a little goofy!
Normally, I leave a summary of the story ... but I figured that the title explains itself pretty well. So without further ado ... Love is Just a Four-Letter Word for a Death Eater.
To some people, love is something taken for granted. It is pushed aside when it becomes inconvenient, yet, when desired, people expect to receive it, no questions asked. After all, love is supposed to be unconditional. But to people like me … love is a hindrance. It is not needed, it is not accepted, and it is not wanted. For a Death Eater, love is just a four-letter word.
“Did you see his face?” Malfoy sneers as we walk into our Common Room. “I thought the kid was going to puke all over himself!”
I watch him as he imitates the boy, puffing out his cheeks and crossing his eyes. I can’t help but to laugh stupidly. It’s my job.
“I’m bored,” Crabbe sighs just moments after Draco stops his game of charades. Draco looks at him angrily. He doesn’t like it when it is basically implied that he is boring. I don’t say anything. Sometimes I think Malfoy is more stupid than Crabbe.
“What’re you looking at?” Malfoy glares at me, looking for somewhere to vent his newfound anger.
“Nothing,” I hastily reply. “I think I’ll go to bed, now. I don’t feel well.”
Malfoy laughs, and Crabbe joins in, though I’m sure he doesn’t understand what is funny. I look at the two and finally ask, “What?”
“We know what you’re up to,” Malfoy says first. Crabbe doesn’t talk much.
“What?” I ask again, more innocently this time.
Draco shakes his head. “You’re pathetic. You’re writing to her again, aren’t you?”
“Who?” I question, wishing that my appearance of stupidity would finally be convincing when I need it.
“That girl – the one we met – well, you know when. On our way to work. What’s her name? Janie? What a boring name.”
I don’t say anything. He already knows what‘s going through my head; I’m sure of it.
“You need to move on, Goyle. It’s not good for business to be tied down at such an early age. She wouldn’t understand you and the things that you do.”
I nod my head, agreeing. He’s probably right, but I don’t like to think of it. I manage to get away though, and I sit down to write a note anyway. Dear Janie,
I got your last letter. Draco doesn’t like you sending them. You know how he is. I hope I can see you soon. Meet me in the Entrance Hall tomorrow at our usual time. Write me back quickly, okay?
- Goyle
P.S. I don’t know if I’ve ever told you, but I really like your first name.
Originally, I had written ‘Love, Goyle,’ at the end, but if it was intercepted, I’d be in trouble. No love is allowed. Like Draco says – it’s bad for business. | |
12-23-2006, 02:48 AM
|
#51 (permalink)
|  Music addicted Sirius fanSnitch Guy’s GirlRamora
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Team Edward
Posts: 5,692
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lizzie Rose
|
Caitlin, this FF is Awesome!! I love how it's from Goyle... I never expected to ever read an FF based on him or from his perspective and I love it  Malfoy's as annoying as ever....  but I love that too.... and I can't wait to find out more 
PAMS!!!
| 
| | |
12-23-2006, 02:56 AM
|
#52 (permalink)
| Fictionally Crushing Puffskein
Join Date: May 2005 Location: If I don't know, how I can tell you?
Posts: 1,317
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Maureen Carmel Garmes
First |
New reader! I just started reading, and I must say, this is really good!!
peppy  | |
| | |
12-23-2006, 10:27 PM
|
#53 (permalink)
|  Admires Ginny's Sanity DA Galleon KeeperSS Featured AuthorSnidget
Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Limerick =)
Posts: 2,554
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mione Borthwick
Sixth Year |
Awesome post! PAMS! | |
| | |
12-24-2006, 01:28 AM
|
#54 (permalink)
| | Shrake
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: (EST)
Posts: 12,975
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jacoby Rivers
Hufflepuff Sixth Year
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Callista Rivers
Gryffindor Second Year | Stealthy Ninja Queen | Snake For Life | waddling baker | binge royalty ♚
Caitlin i finaly caught up and i'm so amazed at what you've writen i love it to death and hope you post more soon.
-sarah
__________________  | |
| | |
12-24-2006, 03:44 AM
|
#55 (permalink)
|  SoTS Royalty
Norwegian Ridgeback
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: ♥ TP ♥
Posts: 45,053
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Klaudette Genevra Oddkoule
Sixth Year | Rupert = *swoon* "You know I'm right..."
Awesome sorty Caitlin so far can't wait for more
Pickles
__________________ Against the grain should be a way of life
;Klaudette Genevra Oddkoule: Slytherin's oddball is back;
RGFC;Tigger lovers her Pickles;PICKLEPIE <33 THE WAL'R'US;TFFC
♥ Siggy by the totally SPANKERS Lissy! ♥
| |
| | |
12-24-2006, 04:38 AM
|
#56 (permalink)
| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: Apr 2006
Posts: 15,691
|
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WW thats cute.
*pokes Draco* dude, in many fantasy worlds of many people you love Hermione!!! *pokes again*
so, the million dollar question: Where have I been? I blame school I'm sorry sweetie! But I'm here now! And i really like this FF no suprise there 
cant wait for ur next post hun!!! <33333
much luv
~Dog 
__________________
I love you, Niky.
I love you, I love you, I love you. I could say it so many times, it wouldn't be enough. I love you. | |
| | |
12-24-2006, 05:30 PM
|
#57 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Roma Galda
Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
 Hi everyone! Wow, I've finally been able to get back on! I've been so busy finishing the MoMFC's day of Potter - it took me FIVE hours total! Well, I'm writing now, and hopefully I can post tonight as an early Christmas gift! However, if I do post, it will be pretty late ... like 12 PM EST or later, I think ... so yeah! Merry Christmas everyone, and thank you for reading!
EDIT: POSTINGGGGG!
Just so you guys know - the action is gonna pick up pretty soon!
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps*  Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33
Last edited by the.time.is.now; 12-25-2006 at 06:07 AM.
| |
| | |
12-25-2006, 06:12 AM
|
#58 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Roma Galda
Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
The next morning, I get up at five a.m., unhappy that my Saturday is not used to it’s full potential: sleeping. We eat a hurried breakfast and sneak out the front doors before anyone really notices us. On our way down to the Entrance Gate, I turn to Draco. “So tell me more about this mission.”
“We have eight hours,” he begins. “Our basic mission is to take out Kaklahov and his family.”
My eyes grow big. “The ex-Death Eater?”
“Yep,” Draco smiles smugly.
“How’d you land us a job like that?” I ask, and with good reason. Ridding the world of traitor filth like Kaklahov is normally a job given to the older, longer-term members like our fathers and the Lestranges.
Draco smirked. “I’m good. Therefore, we’re going to do this well and it will be a clean job. Most of all - it can’t look like a job to the Muggle eye.”
“Why not?” Crabbe questions. Normally we’re allowed to get as messy as we want - it creates a clear message to the deceased's friends and family.
“I don’t know,” Malfoy snaps. “I don’t make the rules. Let’s just keep it simple - Avada Kedavra all the way. Get it?”
“Got it,” Crabbe and I say in unison.
“Good.”
We Disapparate as soon as we’re off of the grounds. When my feet hit the ground, we are outside a store on Knockturn Alley. Draco leads the way in and as soon as the chime rings, announcing arriving costumers, a tall man eagerly jumps out from behind his counter.
“Ahh, Misters Malfoy, Crabbe, and Goyle. It is nice to see you again. What can I help you with?” he hisses. His stale breath of cigarettes and water rushes into my face, and I take a step back. He grins toothlessly and I glare at him.
“We need the usual,” Malfoy answers, ignoring my severe dislike for the man.
The man bows his way out of the room and returns shortly with three backpacks, filled with excessive amounts of Marl’s Disappearing Powder, bleach, and the Mrs. Scower’s Magical Mess Remover.
“By the way, Smith, we’re working extra hard today,” Malfoy winks, looking through the man’s long list of potions. “So throw us in some Wit-Sharpening Potion ... Draught of Peace ... and some bottles of firewhisky.”
When Malfoy pays the money to Smith, we quickly leave and Apparate in a small, tree-populated Muggle town.
“What’s his address?”
Malfoy pulls out a piece of parchment and reads, “493 ... he should be on the right side of the road.”
We walk down the street. Every house on the right is odd numbered, so we continue on, hoping to get there soon. 489 ... 491 ... 493.
We stop outside the driveway and Draco turns to us. “You ready to get your killing on?”
I laugh. “Always.”
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 | |
| | |
12-25-2006, 06:42 AM
|
#59 (permalink)
|  Potterdom Mod
Charing Cross Rd. Mod
WWW Mod     Wrackspurt
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: SHIELD's Helicarrier
Posts: 216,662
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Dhruv Vihaan Khanna
Graduated
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sarika Aarohi Curious
Graduated
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Idris Ace Grunt
Gryffindor Seventh Year
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Levi Nayan Singh-Phora
Hufflepuff Third Year
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Harvey Thunder Forsfelle
Ravenclaw Second Year
  x12  x12
| ~ Mrs. Steve Harrington ~ Claimed by Bits ❤️ ~ Queen of Typos ❄ Magical Mosh Pit ❄
they're going to kill? if Janie finds out what Crabbe's doing...
nice post Catlin!
PAMS!
~Alicia~
| |
| | |
12-25-2006, 07:11 PM
|
#60 (permalink)
| | Forest Troll
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: oh, canada...
Posts: 27,667
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Blake Rouyn
Second Year | you live your life just once, so don't forget about a thing called love.
ooooo
crazy post
looking forward to reading more.
keep it up!!!!
(Merry Christmas by the way!)
__________________
Guess who just got back today. Them wild-eyed boys that had been away.
Haven't changed that much to say. But man, I still think them cats are crazy.
They were askin' if you were around. How you was, where you could be found....
Tailz is back in town, Tailz is back in town. =) | |
| | |
12-25-2006, 10:07 PM
|
#61 (permalink)
| | Murtlap
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Why would you wanna know are you an ax-murderer?
Posts: 56
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Slytherin
First |
I am here !! This is soooo cooool!!! I never heard of a story in Goyle's point of view! I wonder what Janie will do! PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!
p.s sorry I did'nt come earlier been sick  and very very busy But this story is AWESOME MERRY CHRISTMAS TO EVERYONE !! gtg today is my lil sister's birthday party  PAMS !
__________________  {DRACO &HERMIONE} | |
| | |
12-25-2006, 10:18 PM
|
#62 (permalink)
| Bonnie Devotee
Keeper of Ginny's Red Hair Doxy
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 6,406
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Amparo Montez
|
Whoot!
Cat, that post was gooood! 
I likeeddd it! I wnat to keep on reading!
__________________ Bonnie rocks ° have fun in the BWFC* and the GWFC* Bonnie or Wright ? Ginny or Weasley? Just dare. | |
| | |
12-25-2006, 10:55 PM
|
#63 (permalink)
| Fictionally Crushing Puffskein
Join Date: May 2005 Location: If I don't know, how I can tell you?
Posts: 1,317
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Maureen Carmel Garmes
First |
No matter how shaming it'll be for Goyle, he better get cold feet, man. I mean, think of Janie!! PAMS so I can find out what happens. BTW, Merry Christmas!!
peppy
Last edited by dannylover; 12-26-2006 at 05:18 AM.
| |
| | |
12-26-2006, 12:35 AM
|
#64 (permalink)
| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: Apr 2006
Posts: 15,691
|
Awwww the poor boy has to kill  I bet Janie finds out maybe shs related to him somehow UuUuUuUh!!!! thats awesome drama
MERRY CHRISTMAS CAT! and everyone here!!!!
~Dog
__________________
I love you, Niky.
I love you, I love you, I love you. I could say it so many times, it wouldn't be enough. I love you. | |
| | |
12-26-2006, 03:20 AM
|
#65 (permalink)
| | Ramora
Join Date: May 2006 Location: Avvie by... Well, ac
Posts: 5,366
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lia Taylor
| Draco's Director Dramione=OTP
Excellent post!!!
Wonder how their "job" is going to go....
I'll bet the guy is somehow related to Janie
Merry Christmas!! | |
| | |
12-26-2006, 06:00 AM
|
#66 (permalink)
| | Knarl
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Dharmaville™
Posts: 9,334
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jack Fletcher
Fourth Year | Dumbledore's Licorice Snaps Chipotle!
Ohh!!! I can't wait! Getting interesting... PAMSOID!
__________________ Have at thee!
But who's that ghost who keeps walking by my door?
Tell me, how long could you hang on to a word?
Who do you carry the torch for, my young man? | |
| | |
12-26-2006, 02:58 PM
|
#67 (permalink)
| | Shrake
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: (EST)
Posts: 12,975
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jacoby Rivers
Hufflepuff Sixth Year
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Callista Rivers
Gryffindor Second Year | Stealthy Ninja Queen | Snake For Life | waddling baker | binge royalty ♚
Nice post... well i feel bad for the person who's going to die..... shame.
-sarah
__________________ | |
| | |
12-26-2006, 02:59 PM
|
#68 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Roma Galda
Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Well, I've gotta let y'all simmer in the anticipitation for a couple of days - I'm going to my real dad's today and they don't have internet over there. *dies* Yeah, I know. But when I get bacl, I'll be posting, so look out for me!
Happy Holidays everyone!
-- Caitlin
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 | |
| | |
12-26-2006, 03:06 PM
|
#69 (permalink)
| | Jobberknoll
Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A rainy, rainy place
Posts: 4,425
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Xylina Samuels
Third Year |
Bother your dad. Tell them get an internet! We're gonna die here without a post! I loved that last post. PAMS as soon as you get back please!
Happy Holidays to you too!
__________________ listen and you can hear the distant sounds
of someone humming a familiar song
the sounds of raindrops echo across the horizon
and shoot your wish up to the sky | |
| | |
12-26-2006, 04:40 PM
|
#70 (permalink)
| DA Secret Keeper
RWFC B'day Blast officer
SS100 Triumphant Snidget
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Thanks so much Mich for the Avvie and the Siggy!! You Rock my Socks!!
Posts: 2,545
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Athena Evans (A twin)
Third |
Great Post! But what is Janie going to do when she finds out what he did? No good, no good
| |
| | |
12-27-2006, 07:23 PM
|
#71 (permalink)
| Admires Ginny's Sanity DA Galleon KeeperSS Featured Author Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Limerick =)
Posts: 2,554
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mione Borthwick
Sixth Year |
Amazing post! Oh dear...whats Janie going to do when she finds out. That is if she finds out. PAMS PAMS PAMS | |
| | |
12-28-2006, 02:27 AM
|
#72 (permalink)
| Vair StalkerishMissing Sirius Mooncalf
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In a mental ward wit
Posts: 7,987
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Emma McKingley
Graduated |
Wow.....how sad to be a death eater...
Great post Caitlin!
PAMS! | |
| | |
12-28-2006, 11:24 PM
|
#73 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 2,439
|
Good job Caitlin! I loved it! | |
| | |
12-29-2006, 04:33 PM
|
#74 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Roma Galda
Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
You guys know what? I don't think that I tell you that I love you NEARLY enough. My old readers, back from Fate and The Flavor of the Week ... you guys are the best. I couldn't have gotten anywhere without you, and only now do I realize just how much you promoted those FF's! Thank you!
And to my new readers - y'all are great too. I hope to stay with you all on of my many FF's to come! 
I am writingggg like crazy!
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 | |
| | |
12-31-2006, 12:06 AM
|
#75 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Guelph, Ontario
Posts: 1,310
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sylvan Weatherskein
First Year | Crafty
Booo. I want more! Hurry up with your awesome story!
__________________  | |
| | 
Posting Rules
| You may not post new threads You may not post replies You may not post attachments You may not edit your posts
HTML code is Off
| | | All times are GMT. The time now is 06:43 AM. |
|
