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12-18-2006, 11:44 PM
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Hello there, and welcome to LiJaF-LWfaDE [the abbreviation is almost as long as the title itself], my third Fan Fiction on SnitchSeeker. Constructive criticism is appreciated, but please don’t flame me. Also, if you have a problem with one of my readers, please PM them about it. Don’t yell at them on my thread.
I like to have a really friendly thread, so chatting about the fic is okay, but I don’t want spam. :] This became a problem in my last FF, so I'm I'm implementing a rule I'd like y'all to please be super kind and follow. Feel absolutely free to leave a comment after I post, but if you have anything extra you'd like to add, please edit your post, PM me, or leave me a UN. I don't want the mods to have to come and clean out my FF thread again.
Most of all - please have fun! I love writing for active readers who leave me great things to reply to. You're my inspiration to write, so be my guest and get a little goofy!
Normally, I leave a summary of the story ... but I figured that the title explains itself pretty well. So without further ado ... Love is Just a Four-Letter Word for a Death Eater.
To some people, love is something taken for granted. It is pushed aside when it becomes inconvenient, yet, when desired, people expect to receive it, no questions asked. After all, love is supposed to be unconditional. But to people like me … love is a hindrance. It is not needed, it is not accepted, and it is not wanted. For a Death Eater, love is just a four-letter word.
“Did you see his face?” Malfoy sneers as we walk into our Common Room. “I thought the kid was going to puke all over himself!”
I watch him as he imitates the boy, puffing out his cheeks and crossing his eyes. I can’t help but to laugh stupidly. It’s my job.
“I’m bored,” Crabbe sighs just moments after Draco stops his game of charades. Draco looks at him angrily. He doesn’t like it when it is basically implied that he is boring. I don’t say anything. Sometimes I think Malfoy is more stupid than Crabbe.
“What’re you looking at?” Malfoy glares at me, looking for somewhere to vent his newfound anger.
“Nothing,” I hastily reply. “I think I’ll go to bed, now. I don’t feel well.”
Malfoy laughs, and Crabbe joins in, though I’m sure he doesn’t understand what is funny. I look at the two and finally ask, “What?”
“We know what you’re up to,” Malfoy says first. Crabbe doesn’t talk much.
“What?” I ask again, more innocently this time.
Draco shakes his head. “You’re pathetic. You’re writing to her again, aren’t you?”
“Who?” I question, wishing that my appearance of stupidity would finally be convincing when I need it.
“That girl – the one we met – well, you know when. On our way to work. What’s her name? Janie? What a boring name.”
I don’t say anything. He already knows what‘s going through my head; I’m sure of it.
“You need to move on, Goyle. It’s not good for business to be tied down at such an early age. She wouldn’t understand you and the things that you do.”
I nod my head, agreeing. He’s probably right, but I don’t like to think of it. I manage to get away though, and I sit down to write a note anyway. Dear Janie,
I got your last letter. Draco doesn’t like you sending them. You know how he is. I hope I can see you soon. Meet me in the Entrance Hall tomorrow at our usual time. Write me back quickly, okay?
- Goyle
P.S. I don’t know if I’ve ever told you, but I really like your first name.
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02-05-2007, 02:50 AM
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02-06-2007, 01:41 AM
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Hey! Great post! I loved the ending. I wonder waht their new task is going to be... i have a snaky feeling it's going to be something bad. And just becuase they are Death Eaters so of course it will be bad. I mean bad for Goyle. PAMS!
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02-06-2007, 04:47 PM
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I have a very bad feeling about their newest job.....
Great post!
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02-07-2007, 09:37 PM
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It's been a while but I'm back!!! I love this ff, it is so very very good! Post more very soon pease!
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02-07-2007, 11:20 PM
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| Formerly: Asrai  Mooncalf
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Woo ... six days since I last posted ... wanted to let y'all know that I should be posting tomorrow night if both my parents work - that means that I get the computer - so be expecting one! If I don't follow through, I'm sorry, but I should be able to post!
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02-07-2007, 11:57 PM
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|  Keeper of Ginny's AttitudeBatty BellaKnarl
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okay i can't wait caitlin, adn don't worry hopefully not many of us will die from withdrawl!! but i loved your last post and i will love this one too!!
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02-11-2007, 01:45 PM
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Okay, guys, here's what going on: we got a new computer, but my mom won't let me touch it except this once because she thinks SS is what gave the virius to my other one. Until it's fixed, I can continue to write, but I can't get onto SS to post. I do the podcast news, and I cant even go to the news section without my computer spazzing. Just hope that it gets fixed soon, y'all ...
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02-11-2007, 08:01 PM
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I know how that can be, computers problems are horrible. Hope you get your computer fixed soon!
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02-11-2007, 08:29 PM
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Originally Posted by Cat Okay, guys, here's what going on: we got a new computer, but my mom won't let me touch it except this once because she thinks SS is what gave the virius to my other one. Until it's fixed, I can continue to write, but I can't get onto SS to post. I do the podcast news, and I cant even go to the news section without my computer spazzing. Just hope that it gets fixed soon, y'all ... Aww, it’s okay, hunny.  We’ll wait. Get everything fixed when you can.  All the best. =)
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Reason: One little word :shifty: =D
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02-17-2007, 12:04 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
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Okay, I'm reformatting it over the weekend, so as soon as that's done expect a load of posts! I've written a good bit!
I miss y'all! 
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02-17-2007, 12:06 AM
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We miss you too. Come back to us!
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02-17-2007, 04:53 AM
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| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
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Awww. *pets* 
 We all miss you, too, Cat.
Come back soon. Maxie will be waiting.
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02-18-2007, 12:54 AM
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Here I am! I haven't had a chance to read this until now, and I just wanted to say that this is great! Your such a good writer -there isn't many other fanfics I read on here besides yours. Keep up the good work!
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02-20-2007, 12:37 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
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HEY GUYS! Guess what? *pokes* I'm posting in like ... two seconds!
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 | |
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02-20-2007, 12:43 AM
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| Keeper of Ginny's AttitudeBatty Bella Knarl
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Yeah!!!
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02-20-2007, 12:51 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
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I slip on my gloves, grab my travel bag, and follow Draco to our room. We’re somewhere in Scotland, by the sounds of everyone’s accent, and we’ll be staying here for three days - until our job is done.
After plopping our stuff down onto the floor, Crabbe turns to Malfoy. “All right ... so what’s the first thing we need to do?”
Draco pulls a folded up piece of parchment out of his robe pocket. From where I’m standing, I can see a silver serpent embroidered into the top, right hand corner. he studies the page quizzically, and nods. “Get on your boots. We’re going hiking.”
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And hiking we went - up the straight, sloped side of the mountain. When I’d asked Malfoy why we couldn’t just levitate ourselves up, his only answer was - “We were intended to go this way.” What ever that means.
We finally reach the top - an hour and a half later - and Draco peers about, scrunching his nose up un thought. He spins in slow circles, taking in the flat plateau of land around us. (Though I’d always thought that mountains were supposed to end in a peak). There are a few sullen trees bending over and drying out, probably from the intense cold that had become stronger the higher we climbed.
“We have no cover here,” Draco sighs.
I don’t know whether or not to ask him what in the world he’s talking about. Luckily, my hesitance gives the answer. He continues to talk.
“We were sent here to scope out an area for us to hide - tonight, there will be a meeting here of two former Death Eaters. It is our job to come back and listen.”
I hold in a groan. My calf muscles are burning from the steep incline and every part of me is becoming more sore by the second. I don’t know if I can manage to climb it once more. “Do all three of us need to be here?”
“Those were his instructions,” snaps Malfoy. “And we will follow them. Come on, I know where we can find some Invisibility Cloaks.”
And back down the mountain we go.
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“Eet is the best ones we ‘ave,” a young boy behind the counter says, his accent so thick it is hard to understand him. “They also come wif a bit of a breaf silencer, so you can sneak around that much easier.”
“Excellent,” Draco grins. “We’ll take them, and put them to good use tonight.”
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33
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02-20-2007, 01:01 AM
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| Keeper of Ginny's AttitudeBatty Bella Knarl
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oh i love it i can't wiat to find out what they hear!!
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02-20-2007, 01:45 AM
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| Vair StalkerishMissing Sirius Mooncalf
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Ooooh interesting  I can't wait to see who the DE are.... Snape?  PAMS! <3 | |
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02-21-2007, 03:29 AM
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hey cat! 
great post!! cant wait 4 more!!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara
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02-22-2007, 04:02 PM
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OMG Caitlin this FF is awesome....
I can't wait to read the rest.... right now I'm on part 6 I believe and it is amazing....
PAMS!!!
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02-22-2007, 04:11 PM
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Great post, Cat.
I don’t like the sound of this meeting much, though. 
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oh i love it i can't wiat to find out what they hear!!
Don't you all? lol. Well it's a secret, and I won't tell you ... bwahahaha. Just kidding. 
Quote: Ooooh interesting I can't wait to see who the DE are.... Snape? PAMS! <3 Shh, don't give away the whole plot.  Hehe.
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hey cat! :hi:
great post!! cant wait 4 more!!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara
Aww, thank you!
Quote: OMG Caitlin this FF is awesome....
I can't wait to read the rest.... right now I'm on part 6 I believe and it is amazing....
PAMS!!!
~Sama Sama! It's been forever! Believe it or not, I've been thinking of you - where've you been?
Hehe, thank you. && Don't worry - I don't like the sound of it, either.
Y'all are amazing! I've never been more proud to have such amazing friends.
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02-23-2007, 06:27 AM
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Great Post! What is Draco up to? I don't trust him at all, can't wait to see what happens next!
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Sama! It's been forever! Believe it or not, I've been thinking of you - where've you been?
I feel horrible for not coming on hardly at all, but I've really busy.... but I'm always busy. But now I will be reading all the time hopefully.
I finished your posts and I thought that this has been a very good FF.... I can't wait for more!!!
PAMS!!!
PAMS!!!
AND A LTTLE MOEW PAMS!!!
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02-24-2007, 05:26 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
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Y'all are great! Wow, this Mod stuff is crazy. I'm trying to learn & pick up on everything - but I promise I'm going to try my hardest to post this weekend. Hopefully, I'll be able to write tomorrow during the day and then post before I leave to go out.
See y'all tomorrow!
-- Caitlin
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