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12-18-2006, 11:44 PM
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Hello there, and welcome to LiJaF-LWfaDE [the abbreviation is almost as long as the title itself], my third Fan Fiction on SnitchSeeker. Constructive criticism is appreciated, but please don’t flame me. Also, if you have a problem with one of my readers, please PM them about it. Don’t yell at them on my thread.
I like to have a really friendly thread, so chatting about the fic is okay, but I don’t want spam. :] This became a problem in my last FF, so I'm I'm implementing a rule I'd like y'all to please be super kind and follow. Feel absolutely free to leave a comment after I post, but if you have anything extra you'd like to add, please edit your post, PM me, or leave me a UN. I don't want the mods to have to come and clean out my FF thread again.
Most of all - please have fun! I love writing for active readers who leave me great things to reply to. You're my inspiration to write, so be my guest and get a little goofy!
Normally, I leave a summary of the story ... but I figured that the title explains itself pretty well. So without further ado ... Love is Just a Four-Letter Word for a Death Eater.
To some people, love is something taken for granted. It is pushed aside when it becomes inconvenient, yet, when desired, people expect to receive it, no questions asked. After all, love is supposed to be unconditional. But to people like me … love is a hindrance. It is not needed, it is not accepted, and it is not wanted. For a Death Eater, love is just a four-letter word.
“Did you see his face?” Malfoy sneers as we walk into our Common Room. “I thought the kid was going to puke all over himself!”
I watch him as he imitates the boy, puffing out his cheeks and crossing his eyes. I can’t help but to laugh stupidly. It’s my job.
“I’m bored,” Crabbe sighs just moments after Draco stops his game of charades. Draco looks at him angrily. He doesn’t like it when it is basically implied that he is boring. I don’t say anything. Sometimes I think Malfoy is more stupid than Crabbe.
“What’re you looking at?” Malfoy glares at me, looking for somewhere to vent his newfound anger.
“Nothing,” I hastily reply. “I think I’ll go to bed, now. I don’t feel well.”
Malfoy laughs, and Crabbe joins in, though I’m sure he doesn’t understand what is funny. I look at the two and finally ask, “What?”
“We know what you’re up to,” Malfoy says first. Crabbe doesn’t talk much.
“What?” I ask again, more innocently this time.
Draco shakes his head. “You’re pathetic. You’re writing to her again, aren’t you?”
“Who?” I question, wishing that my appearance of stupidity would finally be convincing when I need it.
“That girl – the one we met – well, you know when. On our way to work. What’s her name? Janie? What a boring name.”
I don’t say anything. He already knows what‘s going through my head; I’m sure of it.
“You need to move on, Goyle. It’s not good for business to be tied down at such an early age. She wouldn’t understand you and the things that you do.”
I nod my head, agreeing. He’s probably right, but I don’t like to think of it. I manage to get away though, and I sit down to write a note anyway. Dear Janie,
I got your last letter. Draco doesn’t like you sending them. You know how he is. I hope I can see you soon. Meet me in the Entrance Hall tomorrow at our usual time. Write me back quickly, okay?
- Goyle
P.S. I don’t know if I’ve ever told you, but I really like your first name.
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12-21-2006, 03:52 AM
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yay!! it's awesome. I love the idea of doing it from goyle's perspective- very original!!
great job!
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Goyle did something right! cool! PAMS! Catlin!
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12-21-2006, 12:12 PM
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OMG, it's in Goyle's POV. Original. This is a really great start! I love it! Thanks for the PM or I wouldn't have found it so easily! PAMS!
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12-21-2006, 09:38 PM
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Yahhh!  Great start! Love it so far<3
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12-21-2006, 10:49 PM
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Very nice start, I like the introduction paragraph in teh first post  .
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12-22-2006, 12:39 AM
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This is awesome! I love it being from Goyle's percpective. You don't get that often and I think it is amazing!  PAMS PAMS PAMS | |
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12-22-2006, 12:50 AM
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12-22-2006, 01:08 AM
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12-22-2006, 01:09 AM
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When all of the classes are finally out, I head to the Great Hall for dinner with Malfoy and Crabbe. We reach the open doors and I suddenly exclaim, “Oh! I left my cauldron cakes in Professor Snape’s dungeon. I’ll be back soon.”
Malfoy rolls his eyes. “Goyle, you big fat prune, we’re fixing to eat.”
I shrug. “But I want them now.”
“Fine, go, but don’t be gone for too long. I need to talk to you about our next ... job.”
I nod, and they walk of. I head over to the dungeons and then duck underneath the stairs. All is dark, and I wait. There is a slight tug at my sleeve and I turn. My eyes are starting to adjust to the overwhelming blackness and I see a small outline. “Janie?”
She wraps her arms around me and I can’t help but to feel right.
“How are you?” she whispers, and before she can say anything else, I kiss her.
I pull back, and shock was etched all through my face. I’m sure it was on hers, too. It was our first kiss, and I didn’t mean to do it.
“I’m sorry,” I say. “I .. it was an accident.”
I hear sarcasm come into her voice. “What, did you trip and accidentally fall on my lips?”
I open my mouth to speak again, but before I even notice, she kisses me. It is short, but I like it, so I hug her again.
I can tell she’s smiling, and she talks again after a couple of moments. “Did you have anything particular you needed to talk to me about, Greg?”
She knows that Draco dislikes her, but I want to tell her about how awful he’s been lately. She will get bothered by it, though, so I keep my mouth closed. I also want to tell her about our potential job we have coming, but she knows nothing about my life outside of Hogwarts. She can’t.
Finally, I shake my head ‘no.’ “I just wanted to see you.”
“Tomorrow we’ll have been together two months,” she points out. “And still no one knows, except Crabbe and Malfoy.”
I think she’s hinting at wanting to tell people. To get off the subject, I say, “I have a surprise for you.”
“Really? What?”
“I’ll give it to you tomorrow, all right?” I ask.
“Fine,” she sighs jokingly.
We know we both need to go to dinner, so I leave first. I pull a pack of cauldron cakes out of my robes and go to sit at the Slytherin table.
Fifteen minutes later, Janie walks in. Malfoy watches her as she sits at the Ravenclaw table. He turns to me. “I don’t want to hear about it. Tomorrow, we need to leave after lunch. He needs us.”
I protest. “I can’t! Tomorrow is-”
“Tomorrow is when we’re leaving,” Draco finishes my sentence. “So what ever you have planned, I don’t care. This is more important.”
The bench suddenly feels uncomfortable. I stand up. “I’m going to the common room. I’ll see you guys later.”
I hope that Janie will see me leave and follow. I made it to our house without any tugs on my sleeve, though, so I go to my dorm and open my bag. I scribble down a note for Janie, send it out with Crabbe’s owl, and lay down to think about her some.
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33
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Poor Goyle 
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Wow! This is great Cat!!!
Goyle... interesting... But I love it!!! Keep it up!
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Aww... poor Goyle... i feel sorry for him
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Aw, poor Goyle
Where're they going tho? 
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Aww, poor Goyle! I love it! PAMS!
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Hey Cat!
I finally read your FF!
I'm loving it! Goyle's point of view? WOW! I never knew a story about him could be so so cool !
Okay, post soon please! PAMS!
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ah! Girl! I love this, it's the best, i love your writing! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Goyle's with a Ravenclaw girl? 
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I will [hopefully] be posting tonight! It all depends on whether or not I finish the stuff I have going on at the MoMFC ... Days of Potter ... Yeah.
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Wow its just the beginning and already it sounds amazing!!! I love how its from Goyles PoV, that is very original and exciting sounding. PAMS!
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