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'Maybe she could be.. misunderstood. Like.. I dunno.. not evil at all really?' Ella began chewing her lip. Merh. This was harder than she first thought it was gonna be!-.- |
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Buuut back to reality show Snow White--"Right, the dwarves... where do they come in?..."He turned to Lexi and nodded slowly "Stage hands? yeah could be... or maybe an entourage?" he shifted in his seat and continued "Yeah lets say when the Queen was the leading beauty in that town and they were her entourage-- her PAs... " why is this starting to sound familiar ".... they did her errands, arranged stuff for her, drove her around, took care of wardrobe, hair, make-up.... and when she kept winning and thought that nobody would dare go against her she fired the ugly looking ones-- the ones that worked hardest for her-- and reduced them to doing menial jobs around town and at the pageants while the Queen took better looking people as her groupies" "Then when Snow White-- a new girl, moves into town, those lowly people who was fired by the Queen joined Snow White and they became her entourage. And they must really be doing something special because after that Snow White kept winning title after title and the Queen couldnt figure out why. And thats when the Queen started hiring thugs to get rid of Snow White." |
SPOILER!!: lots of quotes "Okay," Isobel said. "So they can be dwarves then. And I don't see why they can't be miners." She listened as everyone spoke. "That would work," she said to Oakey. "Then if they lived in New York they wouldn't have to be miners, but construction workers, like you said. They could be college students who are roomates, and that's why they're living together." |
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Oooh. Okay... Lexi listened and jotted things down as Salander spoke. He sounded as though he had some experience in this. "The the Prince... perhaps he was a talent agent. The Queen wanted him to give her her shot at fame and fortune, but she couldn't compare to Snow White, the NEW girl in town. He took one look at her and her handy little entourage and that was it... he was sold, hook, line, and sinker. She was the star," she said with a giggle as she turned her nose up in a very haughty manner. Really. It made sense. "But, what started as a talent search for the Prince became something more. He started representing Snow White with his agency, but as he spent more time around her he began to see how lovely she was on the inside as well. It didn't take long before he started to fall in love with her. The Queen wasn't pleased because she wanted to BE in Snow's place. So... she sent a thug to take her out. Only he failed... only seriously injured her, maimed if you will..." she trailed off and looked to Sal to BRING IT ON HOME. Hehe. |
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'Yes.. I agree. I mean about the Witch.. how we're meant to be taking the magic out of stuff. And she clearly was magic. Hm.. or we could just make her have a mental illness? I mean.. it's a bit weird just wanting to killsomebody 'cause they're prettier than you!' She shrugged and continued writing down all their ideas. |
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Okay right back to the reality show featuring "Hey yeah brilliant! The Prince Talent Agency..." he laughed, because he knew those agents can act like they're king of a bloody country. "So Mr Prince hears about the story about this small town beauty with some really talented group of friends and goes to check it out. He sees her and her entorage and realized this would make a good reality show so he offers them a contract. And Ms Queen didnt like it so she got her bodyguards-- The Huntsmen-- to keep Snow White from signing the contract and ran her off the road. She survives but ends up at the Intensive Care Unit. " "Mr Prince hears about the accident and gets to speak with one of the dwarves-- who was with Snow White but wasnt as badly injured as she was. Thats how he found out about the foul play so he goes up against Ms Queen's thugs and a showdown ensues-- The Huntsmen versus Mr Prince and the Entourage. Car chases, bullets flying, stuff blowing up all over the place..." Salander waved his hands about, getting carried away with the story "... and after this intense smackdown, Mr Prince finally defeats the Huntsmen Leader, while the Entourage has gathered enough evidence to pin Ms Queen with the murder plot on Snow White. And yeah, good guys win!" Grin. He pauses a while then adds "But getting the bad guys isnt making Mr Prince happy at all-- he felt that he lost his True Love with all the fighting, so he visits her at the ICU, where she still hasnt woken up since the accident." Salander takes Lexi's hand, caressing it with his thumb "He feels so guilty about what happened to her, that he felt that he brought trouble to her door and confesses how much he was so sorry for ruining her peaceful life and how much he truly loves her. Then he gives her a parting kiss.... and thats it." he shrugged as he squeezes Lexi's hand. He glances up into her eyes, wondering if she's ok with how that ends. |
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Then he REALLY got into that story... Whoa. She needed popcorn or a sammich or something. Really. She watched him with a little smirk on her face as he got SO melodramatic with the telling. Hehe. Then the ending... "Well that won't do!" she exclaimed. "He just goes in and kisses her and that's the end? No ruddy way. She wakes up. She has to wake up when he comes to kiss her. it's like... she KNOWS it's him. And his kiss is what gives her the drive to push through," she says as she gives his hand a little squeeze. Looking at him with a smug little smile on her lips she leans over and pokes the end of his nose and says, "And then they lived happily ever after." Winking at him she erupted into giggles. |
bahahahaha! LMAO! Text Cut: QueenBott Oh, Neptune, stop it! Treyen merely chuckled this time, trying VERY HARD not to pay attention to her words, or his face would've turned red if he did. It was still the fairest shade of pink. So, Neptune, shush. And about Mental Queen... ...the boy nodded, he was agreeing with Neptune, ALL THE WAY, except, "Well, that would explain why the seven little people went after the Queen, no? They wanted revenge on the one that had knocked out their cook," can you imagine Hogwarts without the house-elves? Yeah, his point exactly. He also winked at Miss Bott for stating that he was correct. The grounds NEEDED all those seven maintenance dudes. Text Cut: PrinceFinn Well, look who was adding their two Knuts. And what was he talking about?! The kissing again?! It was all Legend's fault. But it was also safe to say that Treyen Lockhart made absolutely NO COMMENTS on the matter, his eyes were very busy checking out Legend's parchment... ...and what on Earth was he doiiiiing?! Text Cut: ChosenScreenwriter Why was he drawiiiiiing?! "You were supposed to write!" Treyen said, gesturing to his parchment, many times, "And all you have are pictures?" what was THAT about Mr. Screenwriter? "Plus, you need to draw some feet for the maintenance dudes," because that was a important part according to Neptune. And...what? He was smart? PRETTY smart? "Yeah, of course," he was a Lockhart, after all, "You, eh, are good at drawing," not really, but that was the only compliment he could come up with. Okay. Now. Focus! "Maybe the APPLE feel off an apple tree, you know? One that was close to the maintenance dudes' house," where the Quenn had knocked out the Nurse, yes? But why were they still talking about the KISSING part?! Treyen blushed a deeper shade of pink. And sunk in his seat, if it was even possible, before simply stating, "It may have looked like a kiss, but it could've been CPR," you know, the Nurse was unconscious. |
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Then he chuckled at her last addition "Yes! And they live happily ever after. With the Dwarves getting their own movie deal or something." A story about the adventures of half-size heroes finding treasures and fighting battles. Who wouldnt want to see a movie about that? SPOILER!!: story compilation for your Lisa ;) |
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Text Cut: Iris, Connor, Kurumi, Heather "Yeah you're probably right," she smiled and began to think some more ideas. She's said the one about the uhm, costume (fail) and the one about the prince's taking care of Snow White. "Oh, and I'm Zara, by the way." Zara said, realizing that she still hasn't introduced herself, not that the girl was asking, but it was what courtesy had demanded of her. "So, Kurumi what do we have so far?" she smiled and asked her since she was the lion scribe. |
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Am I even making any sense? 'The dwarves could be kids, I think and the poisoned apple maybe was just filled with a strong sleeping pill. That's not uncommon in the non-magical world. The animals, I don't know. Imagination of the author, maybe?' Rhys said, giving K-Lee and Feenella a sheepy smile, praying they understood something, |
SPOILER!!: quotes galore Amy nodded, these were great ideas, though in her opinion it was still sacralidge to try and unfairy the fairy tale. Just, wrong. But she'd put up with it because she liked her group, a mix of olders and firsties. It was nice, a nice mix...Right so we've done dwarves, setting, mirror, why they're there, so what about the apple? Amy tilted her head to the side in thought, what about a sleeping pill like hidden in a bit of fruit? |
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Tipping her index finger against her chin the blonde thought about the story."Ohh the poisened comb",she pointed out,"there was also a belt but i guess it wasnt magical." So what did they have?! The queen,the comb,the apple,the dwarves,the animals and the entchanted mirror.Gooood.Didnt sound too bad. Quote:
"The dwarves could be orphans that build their own life in the forest because they escaped from the orphanage.",the slytherin carried on,"and the apple with the sleeping pill is really a great idea."Mmh.. now what to do with the speaking animals?"It was either the imagination of the author or Snow White's imagination because she searched for someone to help her so badly.She was tired,you imagine things easily when you didnt get enough sleep."Yeeep,unfortunately that was the only explanation the third year could come up with. Quote:
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'Maybe. That's not a bad idea.' Rhys said. He nodded his head, sending a few more locks of his hair coming before his face. Time for a haircut, Rhys pushed his hair back. 'So, we have a delusional step-mother, orphans, sleeping pills and imagination as reasons to unfairy it.' Yup, unfairy. That was the word. 'Is that it?' It can't be all that easy. There must be a catch somewhere. Maybe I missed something. He looked at K-Lee and Fee and smiled. |
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Penny also liked the idea of the sleeping table, but was wondering how she stepmother would do that to fruit without damaging the fruits peel.. "What if the sleeping pill is squashed into powder and baked in a cupcake or something like that?? Text Cut: Snow White |
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Penny almost jumped out of her chair.... "OMG, I've had an idea.... what if the stepmother uses an apple corer, to pull out the core of the apple, put in the sleeping pill and re-insert the core again?..... I mean the pill would dissolve in the juiciness of the apple and the apple would be normal to look at.." |
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Penny thought about that for a moment... "I think if the core is left in the corer when it's removed... then when she's putting the core back in again.. just re-insert the corer, pushing the core down while pulling the corer up - therefore leaving the apple as if it was never touched!" |
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