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Old 11-15-2007, 05:31 AM   #176 (permalink)
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I totally love this chapter! Just like a real, romance movie. This is awesome! Oh, and happy early birthday, Shirel! It really hurts a lot to just say this and not do anything to one of my favorite writers...
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Thanks!! Aren't Hermione and Draco such a sweet couple? I stalk Draco in me sleep sometimes...Shh!

I will Post really soon! It takes me a while till I figure out what to write next... That's why, if you're wondering, It takes me such a long time sometimes. To me, if you're not sure what to write or keep delaying it than it means you're not going along with the plot as you planned and you're not having fun writing it.... You have to enjoy writing a ff or theres no point of it if you feel you writing it because you feel you have to or you promised too...
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Old 11-18-2007, 03:57 AM   #180 (permalink)
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I've been gone for a few days and I just read ur latest chapter
*continue with my spaz attack*(omg omg omg!!)
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I dont know what else I can say, IT IS JUST THAT GOOD!
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It is soooo~~~~ good!!!!
I dont know what else I can say, IT IS JUST THAT GOOD!
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anyways, thanks soo much for reading! I am blushing red with your compliments!!
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Now about you little problem... hmmm.... *thinks how to solve it* I will start typing the post and try sooooo soooo, reallly, really hard to post it tomorow! If not.. you could like take your wand- point it at me- say- Avada kedavara!-I die...! But that makes it a bigger problem cause then you will never get a post!

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Hey there!!!!! Thanks soooo sooo, sooo, soooo, sooo, wait I'm not done yet! soooo, soooo,soooo,osooo,soooo,soooos,oo much!!!! Wow, I never realized how many spelling mistakes I have! *goes back to first grade* "AHHHH! But I already know the alphabet Miss Teacherpants!!!" *no I don't*
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Post when you can, cuz this FF of yours is SO addicting!

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Thanks sooo much! But you didn't need to tell me that cause I already know that! I mean I get A's in every test!!!! *no I don't! shhh!*
Am I really that adicting? *hits Shirel with a frying pot* "That's what Lisa just told you! You prat!!!"
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hahahahahaha I understand how you feel about the spelling mistakes, I'm also a horrid speller!! Take your time don't worry bout a thing!!
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Hey you guys! I'm only on for a min. I am really sorry I didn't post on wen. If you would know how busy I was last week, you'd freak out too!
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Yay!!!!!
Thats ok I'll wait
But just so u know im going crazy when u dont post.
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Old 11-25-2007, 09:07 PM   #190 (permalink)
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Jeij, catch you! Now Ive translated all the chapters up to this. It's all on you now, honey ;P Write more, I can´t wait!
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Thanks soo much for all the sweet and funny comments they give me so much support in this story. I don't know where this story would have been with out you guys! I don't have time to reply now since I am only on to post this chapter but I would like to welcome a new reader: Dark_Emeralds, welcome to my story! I hope you enjoy it!!


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“Hermione, I didn’t choose to be a Death Eater,” he said and walked towards her. “You know how my family is…” he raised his hand and wiped some tears off her face with his thumbs, the rest of his fingers pressed against her cheeks. Just the feel of his fingers made her calm down. Instantly, the moment his fingers touched her face, she flinched but let him rub them.

“Than why does it have to be this way?” she cried.

“It doesn’t,” he whispered, his lips brushing hers.
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At Potions class the next morning Hermione found herself sitting next to Draco Malfoy. She hadn’t seen him in the common room in the morning and she didn’t see him at breakfast. When she came in for potions she saw Draco sitting not at his usual seat at the front of the classroom but, at the back of the classroom where she usually sat next to Harryand Ron. He motioned for her to sit with him and during that whole lesson, neither spoke. Just occasionally, they made eye contact. When Harry and Ron came in and saw them sitting together, Harry gave her a questioning look and raised his eyebrows and Ron quickly looked away as if nothing happened but he looked insulted.

During the whole lesson, Hermione made sure that her skin didn’t touch Draco’s. When they worked on there assigned potion, Hermione moved her chair slightly so that she was working at the end of the desk. After all they weren’t yet a couple and she wasn’t sure she wanted to have a relationship with a Death Eater. She couldn’t let her heart fall in love and then break. Draco noticed this and reached out to take her hand but she pulled away and placed her hand under the table. Draco took his hand back in confusion and decided to wait until there free class which was right after potions.

When the class ended, Snape telling them to right an essay about a health potion, Hermione gathered her stuff and walked out of the dungeons before Draco had even left his seat. She looked back and saw Harry and Ron running to catch up with her.

“Hermione, wait!” Harry called.

Hermione stopped and waited for them. She smiled as if nothing had happened but she couldn’t fool them. Ron looked red and furious.

“What was he” - he pointed at the passing Draco- “Doing in our seats?” Hermione’s smile vanished at once and turned into an angry sneer.

“Did you see name tags engraved on those seats, Ron?” she asked and when Ron didn’t reply she said, “I’m sorry, did I miss the new rule that says ‘permanent seats’?” Ron looked very insulted and angry as his face and ears turned even redder. Harry stood there unsure of whose side he should be on.

“I think you missed the part that Harry and I are your friends!” he said and grabbed Harry by the hand. “Let’s go, we’ve got better friends than her!” and with that he left, pulling Harry behind him, leaving a shocked Hermione behind.

No, Hermione didn’t cry. Instead, she ran right up to hers and Draco’s common room and did what was right. She knocked on his door and waited impatiently for him to open. He opened the door wearing only his boxers and a white tea shirt.

“May I help you?” he asked grinning.

“Draco, we need to talk,” she said.

“Ok, let me just…” he pulled his pants on and through on his robes. Hermione actually liked him in his boxers and tea shirt. It made him look hot. “Let’s go,” he said and followed Hermione to the couches in front of the fire. He sat on a two seat couch and tried to take Hermione’s hand but she sat on an armchair across from him.

“Draco,” she began, “this isn’t going to work out.”

“What do you mean?” he asked, frowning.

“You and me…together,” she said, trying to sound normal.

“Why not? I thought you wanted to be with me!” he said, searching her face for some sign of explanation.

“When did I say I wanted to be with you?” she asked surprised at him.

“Last night. Down by the lake,” he said, raising an eyebrow, trying to refresh her memory.

“I never said such a thing!” she cried.

“Then what were those kisses about?” he asked, jumping up and standing in front of her. Hermione stood up to but he was still a head taller than her.

“Kisses?” she asked, taken aback. “It was one real kiss last time I counted!” she said, thinking of that crazy night in the Jacuzzi.

“Fine then let’s make it two!” he yelled and pulled Hermione into to him and right before there lips met Hermione pushed him away. She didn’t know he could be so controlling sometimes. All she wanted to do was talk about what will happen with there relationship and what he wanted to do was kisses and stuff!

“Draco, stop!” she yelled at him. “All I want to do now is discuss this…” Draco stood up and sat back down looking apologetic.

“Look, I’m sorry. I just got a little carried away,” he said and Hermione thought he got carried away big time! She took a sip from her cup that was on the side table and picked her book off the floor that she forgot the other night.

“Ok,” she said sitting back down and taking a deep breath. After a moment of silence she said, “I want you to know that I like you, Draco, but…” she trailed off, not wanting to say the part about him being a Death Eater.

“But?” he asked, motioning her to continue by waving his right hand.

“I can’t let my heart fall in love and then break,” she said speaking more to herself than to Draco. “What I mean is you are- you are…” she trailed off.

“I’m what?” he asked, looking confused.

“You’re a Death Eater!” she finally said.

“So?” he asked looking a little insulted.

“Draco, you want my best friend dead!” she said, standing up and looking at him full in the face, now. “How can I be with you when you are working for a murderer and someone who doesn’t think I should learn magic? I’m a-a Mud- Mudblood!” she couldn’t believe she said that about herself. She stood there stunned at her own words. Draco just stared at her, unsure of what to say and Hermione got very impatient that he wasn’t saying anything. “Say something!” she said to him and after a few minutes Draco took a step forward towards Hermione and said:

“Hermione, I think- I think… I think I’ve fallen in love with you!” he said looking guilty and Hermione dropped what she was holding. The glass shattered and was everywhere; her book dropped to the floor with a loud bang.


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YAYAYAYYAYAYYAYAYAYYAYYAYYAYAYAYYAYAYYAYAY!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Okay that was awesome x a trillion bazillion.PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!I reaaly wanna seee Hermiones reaction.
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh off course he feel in love with her!!! daaaaaaa hahahahahahahahahah I love it please pst as soon as possible!!
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I am so sorry! I have not been here for like a LONG TIME!! I have been very busy with school. Not fun!

OMG!! I love the posts tat you posted! The one with them in the bathroom gave me the chills. it was very good!!

Cant wait for the next post!
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Of course, of course, ha? But what about Hermione? Does she love him? muhaha! that you will find out in my next chapter! I love keeping you all in suspence!

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I am so sorry! I have not been here for like a LONG TIME!! I have been very busy with school. Not fun!

OMG!! I love the posts tat you posted! The one with them in the bathroom gave me the chills. it was very good!!

Cant wait for the next post!
Love ya
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Hey Jen!!! For a moment, I thought you left me.
It's okay! I'm also kutting short here. I'm not as on as much as I used to!
Yeah, school is such a... well, not fun! like you said,
Oh, my, I also got the chills while writing that chapter. It was so... creepy!

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Chapter 14: ~ Her Biggest Enemy ~

Hermione opened and closed her mouth several times. She did not expect to hear that from anybody and certainly not Draco Malfoy. She looked from the shredded glass on the floor to her book that was lying open at her feet, to Draco. This could not be. It did not compute. Her brain seemed to be working very slowly. She walked passed Draco who tried to take her hand, past the picture of the man on a horse and through the portrait hole. She began to run and run all the way up to the floor where Professor McGonagall’s office was. She didn’t even need to try thinking of a password for the gargoyle because as soon as she got there, she bumped straight into the Headmistress, Professor McGonagall, who was walking down the spiral stair case.

“Miss Granger, please watch where you’re going!” she said sternly but the desperate look on Hermione’s face made her lips thin. “Follow me,” she ordered and they stepped up to her office. She indicated her to sit in front of her desk while she seated her self behind it in a big wooden chair.

“Please tell me what is wrong, Miss Granger,” she asked, while putting some parchment on a shelf at the bottom of her desk.

“I want to return to Gryffindor tower,” Hermione said, almost automatically. She felt as if she was a tape recorder, repeating her own voice. McGonagall’s lips thinned, if possible, more.

“I see,” she said at last. “You may return, just get your trunk and you can go back,” she said, much to Hermione’s surprise. Hermione leapt to her feet and without even bothering to thank her or say goodbye she left down the spiral staircase.

When she returned to the common room, Draco was no where in sight. She grabbed all her books, clothes and other accessories and took one look at the place she had once shared with Draco Malfoy. On her way out she bumped into Draco who just stared at her. He was white as a sheet and didn’t even stop her from leaving. She walked right past him trying hard not to change her mind and hoping she was doing the right thing. After all Draco Malfoy was and is her biggest enemy and she would be fighting him with Harry and Ron at her side when the time came to go search for Horcruxes.

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