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KatielovesHP · 01-27-2010, 10:43 PM

Hey this is the first part of my first story. None of these characters are mine- they belong to J.K. Rowling. However, I made up a few, and the plot is mine.

''Will you marry me?'' He asked. I couldn't believe it. He, Teddy Lupin, had asked me, Victoire Weasley, to marry him.
His glistening eyes bored into mine while I just stood looking at him. I must have looked like a right fool, just standing there when he had just popped the 'big question'.
''Yes, of course.'' I had just realised at that moment what I had said, I had said yes. All I remember thinking was that I was an engaged woman. Wow! We were now engaged! He is my fiancé!
The next thing I know I am being kissed passionately by the most amazing man in my life. My fiancé to be exact. After a long embrace and a little more kissing he, as any wizard, conjured up a black box. I must have had a strange look of shock on my face because Teddy waved his hand in my face and was smiling. He opened the box and all I could think of was fainting. It was looking at me, pulling me towards it. It was a platinum band with a petite diamond set in the middle. It was beautiful, sparkly and most importantly mine.
Teddy took hold of my left hand and slid the ring onto that all important finger. Now that I think about it that hand has been through loads. When I was eight Mum dropped a vase on it due to a dodgy Hover Charm, Granny Weasley had to fix it with that wonderful book of hers. Michael Pott had crushed it in third year at the Hogwarts Quidditch final. I was Gryffindor Chaser, he a Slytherin beater who wasn’t the best at steering. Now that hand had an engagement ring on it.
Teddy had a great look of achievement on his face. No wonder, he had just succeeded in proposing to me. After taking a stroll along the beach we went to Shell Cottage. My parents would have had to have found out at some point. When I knocked on the door instead of walking in as usual I finally remembered that we would have to find a house somewhere. This was no longer my house to stay in. It felt very strange.
Dad was still for all the Secret Keeper malarkey so we always had to answer a question before being let in. He still had some fight in him! Mum told me that ever since he was bitten he has always been very protective. She told me that when Uncle Fred died he became the strong man in the family. Everybody still looks up to him, even Uncle Harry! We answered the question of ‘when is your mother’s birthday?’ and I replied ‘26th May’ meaning we were able to come in. Dad is not allowed to ask the question of ‘which werewolf bit me just before the Battle of Hogwarts?’ if Teddy is there. The first time he asked us that Teddy just went off in one. He thought that dad was trying to criticise him.
Mum had grown to like Celestina Warbeck and her music due to Granny’s persuasion. When we walked in she was listening to the wireless and a Cauldron Full of Hot, Strong Love. She was humming along when I walked over to her armchair. Without speaking I raised my left hand and sat it on top of hers. She took a huge breath and just looked at me............

Well? How is it? Give me ideas that make sense please. I know what is going to happen in the next two or so but I need some more plans. Leave your comments please!

xx

spinnersend2 · 02-08-2010, 09:25 PM

Keep writing what you wanted, we will enjoy it.

I want more.

KatielovesHP · 02-08-2010, 09:54 PM

Thanks spinnersend2
I will write the Hagrid and Madame Delacour bit!
They might have kids!
Post will be tomorrow
Alot to think about!

Emileyn · 02-09-2010, 10:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KatielovesHP

emilyblack, you ruined it!
I'm not annoyed but its kind of spoiled now!

Whoops! I'm sorry, I didn't meant to... My bad. ):

KatielovesHP · 02-10-2010, 06:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by emilyblack

Whoops! I'm sorry, I didn't meant to... My bad. ):

its absolutely fine.
dont worry
ill just write what i was going to.

KatielovesHP · 02-10-2010, 06:35 PM

Hey, how is everybody.
I know its been a little while.
Sorry!
BTW. If it says Grawp that means Hagrid and Maxime's son. A red asterisk(*) will be at the place that I mention Hagrid's half brother but the rest is their son.
OK?
Here goes.

Harry and Teddy woke up early on the Monday morning. They weren't in time for breakfast so they had to wait. For a few hours they nosied around the house. Hagrid was away into the forest, he had left a note:

Mornin' Guys,
Mornin'. I'm feeding the Unicorns and Hippogriffs at the moment. Be back in time for breakfast. Just thought I should mention that Grawp's first class is Lily's first year class. He will be great though, don't worry. Nothing like his nutter of an uncle *. May he rest in peace. He is a sensible boy, my Grawp. Can you believe that I have a son and daughter to a FRENCH giant. Anyway, I'm rambling on. See you in the Great Hall.
R. Hagrid.

KatielovesHP · 02-10-2010, 06:36 PM

Sorry i pressed the wrong button.
Well there is a taster.
The start.

Ron&Hermione(L) · 02-10-2010, 06:55 PM

woohoo that was soo good

i love hagrid

:L

Ladybug · 02-10-2010, 07:22 PM

Ohhh good i like

x

KatielovesHP · 02-10-2010, 09:12 PM

Hey.
Is it just me or is being a teenager horrible?
Homework, horrid friends, amazing friends, stress, homework, balancing the best site in the world on top of that!
OMG
WOW
HELP!
Kiddin' life isn't all bad.
Especially when guys are in the picture!
RonHermione(L) knows exactly who I mean!
LOL.
Here goes

The original hut was no longer Hagrid's house. It had been extended beyond belief! The hut was now Grawp's house. Beyond the hut ther ws another bigger house that Rubeus and Maxime stayed in with their daughter Helena. She was in fourth year at Beauxbatons, both of the children had went to Fraance with their mother. Maxime was their at the moment. She was no longer the Headmistress but she helped in the Charms classes. She usually stayed here and helped in the forest but she sometimes had to go to France. There was sheds at the back, one for lessons and the other for tending to the Forest.

Hagrid worked really hard with all the creatures and his lessons had really improved. James had even taken Care of Magical Creatures. Hermione had helped Hagrid out alot. She kept him company when he was lonely after Grawp* died at The Battle of Hogwarts. He found it very difficult after that. Hermione even helped him rebuild the hut. Not all of it had burned but there was alot of damage done. She rebuilt his whole world. She was there that often that Ron found her there one day. That day he proposed to her in the forest. She said yes, of course.
*************

Breakfast in the Great Hall was strange.

Harry's children begged them to sit at the Gryffindor next to them. Except for James of course.

As Harry had walked in to the hall he witnessed James eating one Ravenclaw's face. A girl obviously.

'So this is Christie McLaggen. James if you don't mind, we are about to start eating.' Harry whispered in his son's ear.

'Dad! What are you doing here?! Why are you spying on me?! How do you know her name?!'

'Son, I know everybody's name. I'm an auror, I know everybody. Especially if I go to school with their parents. I'm helping out in Hogsmeade, I told you. A series of burglaries have come to our attention so we are here to investigate. Professor McGonagall welcomed us to eat here for the next few days. So, I would keep that a little more private. The Astronomy tower is quite good for that.' I laughed with Teddy as he nodded in agreement.' Excuse me Christie, I know who your father is but could you tell me the maiden name of your mother?'

'Emmmm.... Chang. Cho Chang. Why?'

'I thought so. Ask her if she remembers our nights in the Astronomy Tower.'
***********

The two men hunted for hours and didn't find anything. They marked the spot that they had finished their search with their wands and went for dinner. As if the kitchen staff knew Harry's wishes, the dessert was treacle tart. The kitchen staff were no longer house elves. This was the work of Ron and Hermione. They were now trained cooks with double the amount of skill of Molly.

Teddy and Harry sat with Lily and the group of friends that she had made. There was Tessa, Ciara and Claire. They were lovely girls. Tessa and Ciara were very friendly and extremely funny. Claire was a little quieter, funny, but quiet. Teddy spoke to her mostly, whenever he said anything, her cheeks went a shade of rose. His goodlooks were obviously making her slightly embaressed. When it was bedtime Harry said goodnight to his nieces, nephews, the Longbottoms and his children. They both walked to the hut and settled into bed.

'We will find it Ted. Do you know that?'

'Of course Harry. I trust you.'

'Good. Have you written Vic a letter yet? She will be so mad if you haven't. Pregnant people get very cranky.'

'Oh, I know.'

*****************
*****************

'Why hasn't he wrote to me yet?!' I was raging. I was with Hermione, Amelie and Ginny in Grimmauld Place.

'They are too busy for letters. Come on, understand the male brain already!' Ginny was giggling as she said this. Her warm eyes made me laugh.

After we laughed for a while about our men, we talked about dresses and flowers. Amelie was left out in the men part of it but she still enjoyed it. After a couple of hours, an owl arrived at the window. It was from the father of my baby and my wonderful fiance.

Hey honey, lovely, what should I call you?
We are fine, just to let you know. I know it isn't exactly when you asked for this note but we have been very busy. Everybody is great! Hagrid, Neville, Minerva. Everybody is excited about the baby!
How are you today? Did you have a nap? Don't faint OK?
I really love you. And our little thing. What gender is it. I hate calling it, it. That sounds weird.
Bye sweetie.
xxxxxx

'I love you too.' I said this aloud without noticing.

'AWWWWW.......' Everybody had cooed at the same time. Embaressing!

'Aunt Gin. Do you have a quill?'

'Sure Vic.'
*************

St. Mungo's wasn't very busy that morning. I had booked in an appointment to find out the sex of the baby. Ted had made me do it by myself, without him. I was to go to work after my appointment, it was early morning so no Magical Mishaps had happened yet.

A Healer came to greet me and led me into, what felt like, my room. I had been there twice already throughout the pregnancy. Once to find out and the second, well, I fainted.

'Hey. So you want to know the sex of your baby?'

'I sure do.'

She went away and got all the necessary equiptment.

After playing about with the machine she sighed.

'This isn't right. Sorry, I have to speak to the Head Healer.'

'Why, what........'

I panicked........

Oh no, I had killed my baby. She couldn't hear a heartbeat. Ted wouldn't marry me anymore. I instantly started to weep. What had I done?

The two women came in talking.

'Really? Let me check.'

I was so scared as she stared at the machine and listened to the stethascope.

'Well Victoire Weasley. I have to tell you something.'

'NOOO..... Why? I killed my baby!'

'No actually you haven't. It's twins.'

DUNDUNDUNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!
Well?
What do you think?

KatielovesHP · 02-10-2010, 09:30 PM

I know its dead long.........................

Ladybug · 02-10-2010, 09:41 PM

Awww twins
Great chapter
Haha James snogging the girl!
Cant wait for more
x

Emileyn · 02-10-2010, 10:31 PM

Awe, cute. I've always wanted twins.... Great posts, loved the bit with Harry, James, and the snogging... can't wait for more. PAMS. (:

RavenclawFan · 02-11-2010, 12:44 AM

twins? awesome!
loved the chapter
the part with harry and james must have been like a major awkward turtle moment
=]

Cassiopia Malfoy · 02-11-2010, 04:49 AM

HAHAHAHA! McLaggen tehee!

TWINS! *gasp* ohmigosh! I'm so happy for them

bonnieginnyfan1 · 02-11-2010, 06:23 AM

No...... Arthur died.

Ron&Hermione(L) · 02-11-2010, 05:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KatielovesHP

Kiddin' life isn't all bad.
Especially when guys are in the picture!
RonHermione(L) knows exactly who I mean!

I sure do

OMG i can't believe it's twins awh and that was soooo funny with Harry and James haha thats one hell of an awkward moment haha !!!!!!
Kerri xx

KatielovesHP · 02-11-2010, 05:28 PM

Thanks everyone
Here in Scotland we have a long weekend
FRIDAY SAYURDAY SUNDAY MONDAY TUESDAY AND WEDNESDAY
So there will be posts for miles!
Are they too long?
Be honest!
Twins I know!!!!! Just thought that I should go for it! haha
James and Harry, priceless!
x
lol
thanks
xxxxxx

AlwaysDance · 02-11-2010, 09:57 PM

New reader and love the story PAMS PAMS PAMS

spinnersend2 · 02-12-2010, 08:00 PM

Keep them coming

Visited Edinburgh when I was working in Dublin, pints of heavy go down easy

harita · 02-13-2010, 07:28 PM

heya wow...so many posts already!!! i was gone for few days and so much to catch up with

...pams...

KatielovesHP · 02-18-2010, 05:19 PM

Hey sorry its been sooooo longggggg
My laptop has been taken off me so another post will be up soon.
OOPSSS
lol
Sorry.
BTW I'm at my nan's that's why I'm on.
You know what, I will post a shortie just now

KatielovesHP · 02-18-2010, 05:27 PM

'Anyone wanting tea? I fancy a cup.' I was in the flat with Ginny and Hermione, planning wedding stuff. We had just been discussing baby names, we had kind of came off the subject.

'I'm OK thanks Vic.'

'I'll have one, do you need any help?' Hermione was quite he lady for her tea. Growing up with muggles she rarely drank pumpkin juice or butterbeer unless she was in Hogwarts. Tea was a very common drink for British Muggles.

'Nope, I'm good.' I walked off into the kitchen trying to listen to the conversation but was unsuccessful. A s I tapped the kettle wit my wand I coul hear hurried whispers but I couldn't make them out. They would tell me when I got back.
**********

'Do you have a strange feeling that she isn't telling us something? I know that we didn't want to know the sex of the baby and she agreed but I still think something is wong.' Ginny whispered.

'Maybe. It can't be important, she would have told us. She probably misses Ted, that is all.' Hermione replied.

'I suppose.'

Sorry got to go.
xxxxx