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KatielovesHP · 01-27-2010, 10:43 PM

Hey this is the first part of my first story. None of these characters are mine- they belong to J.K. Rowling. However, I made up a few, and the plot is mine.

''Will you marry me?'' He asked. I couldn't believe it. He, Teddy Lupin, had asked me, Victoire Weasley, to marry him.
His glistening eyes bored into mine while I just stood looking at him. I must have looked like a right fool, just standing there when he had just popped the 'big question'.
''Yes, of course.'' I had just realised at that moment what I had said, I had said yes. All I remember thinking was that I was an engaged woman. Wow! We were now engaged! He is my fiancé!
The next thing I know I am being kissed passionately by the most amazing man in my life. My fiancé to be exact. After a long embrace and a little more kissing he, as any wizard, conjured up a black box. I must have had a strange look of shock on my face because Teddy waved his hand in my face and was smiling. He opened the box and all I could think of was fainting. It was looking at me, pulling me towards it. It was a platinum band with a petite diamond set in the middle. It was beautiful, sparkly and most importantly mine.
Teddy took hold of my left hand and slid the ring onto that all important finger. Now that I think about it that hand has been through loads. When I was eight Mum dropped a vase on it due to a dodgy Hover Charm, Granny Weasley had to fix it with that wonderful book of hers. Michael Pott had crushed it in third year at the Hogwarts Quidditch final. I was Gryffindor Chaser, he a Slytherin beater who wasn’t the best at steering. Now that hand had an engagement ring on it.
Teddy had a great look of achievement on his face. No wonder, he had just succeeded in proposing to me. After taking a stroll along the beach we went to Shell Cottage. My parents would have had to have found out at some point. When I knocked on the door instead of walking in as usual I finally remembered that we would have to find a house somewhere. This was no longer my house to stay in. It felt very strange.
Dad was still for all the Secret Keeper malarkey so we always had to answer a question before being let in. He still had some fight in him! Mum told me that ever since he was bitten he has always been very protective. She told me that when Uncle Fred died he became the strong man in the family. Everybody still looks up to him, even Uncle Harry! We answered the question of ‘when is your mother’s birthday?’ and I replied ‘26th May’ meaning we were able to come in. Dad is not allowed to ask the question of ‘which werewolf bit me just before the Battle of Hogwarts?’ if Teddy is there. The first time he asked us that Teddy just went off in one. He thought that dad was trying to criticise him.
Mum had grown to like Celestina Warbeck and her music due to Granny’s persuasion. When we walked in she was listening to the wireless and a Cauldron Full of Hot, Strong Love. She was humming along when I walked over to her armchair. Without speaking I raised my left hand and sat it on top of hers. She took a huge breath and just looked at me............

Well? How is it? Give me ideas that make sense please. I know what is going to happen in the next two or so but I need some more plans. Leave your comments please!

xx

KatielovesHP · 07-07-2010, 02:44 PM

It was eleven o’clock in the morning when I woke up to an empty room. There was a note on Rob’s pillow next to me.

Hey honey. I had a great time last night, thanks. I hope you enjoyed it too. I will be back from training about three this afternoon then we could go out to dinner or something later. Sound good? Anyway, sorry you will have to occupy yourself today. Go shopping; here are some Euros, that is Swedish money in the muggle world. Treat yourself.
Rob xxxx

I had enjoyed last night and dinner sounded great but I just had a weird feeling about today. It wasn’t necessarily good or bad, just strange. Maybe I would go mad with the shopping or something, I don’t know but something was going to happen today.

I dressed and headed out of the hotel, the manager had said that the main street was just around the corner so I headed right onto thee busy cobbled street. There were many old shops like a post office and a sweetie shop but I saw a beautiful clothes shop just up the hill so I headed for that. The window display was just lovely but that wasn’t what caught my eye. There was a beautiful dress hanging up on a hanger near the back. It was a bright green colour with a beautiful yellow belt in the middle. It was the kind of dress that
I could wear to a picnic, just during summer or at dinner. It was multipurpose and absolutely stunning. I had to have it but it was 50 Euros which meant it was around 39 pounds in English muggle money which I knew was a lot in Galleons but I had to have it, I loved it.

When I tried it on I needed it. I didn’t just want it anymore, I needed it. Within five minutes it was in a shopping bag being carried up the main street by myself. I couldn’t wait to wear it.

I was too busy thinking about my purchase that I wasn’t paying attention to the surroundings. When my bubble popped and I was in reality again someone was shouting my name.

‘Vic!!! Vic!!!’ It was distant but coming closer.

Then a bright blue head came running towards me and pulled me into the side street.

‘I knew you were here, I just knew it. There were rumours but I wasn’t sure.

How are you?’

The man stopped talking and just looked at me. He was waiting for me to answer, just to say something. I did recognise him but not enough to really know him.

‘Who are you?’ I asked him.

This came as a shock to him, he kind of stumbled around and just stared at me like he was appalled with me.

‘It’s me. Teddy. Your husband, the father of your daughters, your long lost love.’

‘I must be crazy, no you must be crazy that’s it. I don’t know a Teddy. I’m not married, my daughters have a Dad. Are you stalking me, how do you know about them?’

‘I’m not a stalker, I’m Teddy Remus Lupin. Son of Nymphadora Tonks and Remus Lupin.’

‘Is this some sort of a sick joke to you? My parents were close friends with the Lupins and they died during the battle, how dare you? You have to be a stalker because one of my daughter’s names is Tonks, her middle name infact. Stay away from me.’

‘I can tell you both your daughters full names because they are my daughters. Evie Fleur and Violet Tonks Lupin. They even have my last name.’

‘No they don’t. I don’t know you, you are just a pervert off the streets of Sweden.’

‘What are their last names then? Don’t call me a pervert, you married me.’

‘Evie Fleur Weasley and Violet Tonks Weasley.’

‘What colour is their hair?’

‘It changes, they are not advanced but they are metamorphagus’.’

‘Like this?’

His hair changed colour one after the other, blue-orange-pink-blue.

‘My favourite on you is green.’

He smiled and his hair went green. ‘So you do know me?’

‘Ted?’ I touched his cheek as tears were brought to his eyes.

He leaned forward and kissed my cheek, it felt strange. This was the weird
thing that was going to happen today. It felt like the whole world was watching when I kissed my husband on the lips but I didn’t care.

Suddenly my stomach felt like a portkey had just taken me away but it was actually my insides clenching together with anger. I was kissing the man that had left me. I hated him, he was horrible. He broke my heart.

And with that thought in mind I pulled away and slapped him on the cheek.

TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK. DON'T HATE ME AND PLEASE GET THE VOTING DONE!!!!!!!

If someone can tell me how to send a link to the dress that she bought it would be great (Emily I mean you!!!)

Then I will edit and show you the dress!!!It is to an acquired taste, you have to really like it to like it. It's from Gwen Stefani's line L.A.M.B I like it so oh well. And so does Vic

Morag · 07-07-2010, 03:01 PM

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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP

When I tried it on I needed it. I didn’t just want it anymore, I needed it. Within five minutes it was in a shopping bag being carried up the main street by myself. I couldn’t wait to wear it.

I've seen the dress! Its lovely. I love the colour. But green is my favourite colour but. Its lovely

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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP

‘Vic!!! Vic!!!’ It was distant but coming closer.

OHMYGOSH! OHMYGOSH! OHMYGOSH!

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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP

‘It’s me. Teddy. Your husband, the father of your daughters, your long lost love.’

Ahhhhhhh. ITS TEDDY! I'M SO HAPPY. YOU BROUGHT HIM BACK. I LOVE YOU KATIE. TEAM TEDDY!!!

‘

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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP

Suddenly my stomach felt like a portkey had just taken me away but it was actually my insides clenching together with anger. I was kissing the man that had left me. I hated him, he was horrible. He broke my heart.

Well excuse me Vic, but firstly, he didn't intentionally leave you
secondly, he's the love of your life and husband
and thirdly, you've not seen him for like ever so give him a big hag and kiss and tell Rob to go Bye Byes. Katie I still love you dear

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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP

And with that thought in mind I pulled away and slapped him on the cheek.

Any Why did you do that Vic??? TELL HIM YOU LOVE HIM FOR GOODNESS SAKE!!!

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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP

TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK.

I loved it Katie. PAMS. Yes very soon!!!

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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP

DON'T HATE ME

Don't worry. We all love you

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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP

PLEASE GET THE VOTING DONE!!!!!!!

EVERYBODY VOTE 1! DON'T ASK JUST DO IT!

KatielovesHP · 07-07-2010, 03:11 PM

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Originally Posted by Morag

I've seen the dress! Its lovely. I love the colour. But green is my favourite colour but. Its lovely

I like it too. It's definitely an acquired taste

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OHMYGOSH! OHMYGOSH! OHMYGOSH!

OHMYGOSH yourself!!!!

:rolfl:

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Ahhhhhhh. ITS TEDDY! I'M SO HAPPY. YOU BROUGHT HIM BACK. I LOVE YOU KATIE. TEAM TEDDY!!!

Well done Sophie!! It's Teddy!!!

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Well excuse me Vic, but firstly, he didn't intentionally leave you
secondly, he's the love of your life and husband
and thirdly, you've not seen him for like ever so give him a big hag and kiss and tell Rob to go Bye Byes. Katie I still love you dear

How do you know that Rob isn't going to get bye byes?

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Any Why did you do that Vic??? TELL HIM YOU LOVE HIM FOR GOODNESS SAKE!!!

She does love him, next post we will get that. Maybe

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Don't worry. We all love you

ILY2

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EVERYBODY VOTE 1! DON'T ASK JUST DO IT!

Normally it's best to do what Sophie says.

I've learned that!!

Emileyn · 07-07-2010, 03:22 PM

I'm here, I'm here! Okay, so when you reply or edit posts for that matter, do you see the little circular thing at the top with a linkish looking thing? It's right under the smiley face or right beside the "A" where you can change font color and if you put your cursor over it, it says insert link... You have to copy the address to your dress and then click on the insert link button and paste it there. And then it will be in you story and it will have part of it highlighted, that's where you can put whatever you want your link titled like Vic's dress or something... And wa-la! Tell me if you need further explanation!

Now, to the comments!

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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP

I hope you enjoyed it too.

Ugh, she didn't actually.

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I will be back from training about three this afternoon then we could go out to dinner or something later. Sound good?

Nope, sounds pretty awful actually. I've changed my mind, I still don't like Rob.

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It wasn’t necessarily good or bad, just strange.

It's going to be good! Trust me, I've read on!

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Then a bright blue head came running towards me and pulled me into the side street.

WHAT!!!?? YOU LIED TO US!!! EEEEEEPPPPP!!!!

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‘It’s me. Teddy. Your husband, the father of your daughters, your long lost love.’

Once again, WHAT!!?? EEEEEPPPPP!!! YAY!!!!! HE's BACK! *does the happy dance*

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‘I must be crazy, no you must be crazy that’s it. I don’t know a Teddy. I’m not married, my daughters have a Dad. Are you stalking me, how do you know about them?’

WHAT is she saying? Did Rob brainwash her?? *smites Rob* She's going mental. Just shut up and kiss him!

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‘Is this some sort of a sick joke to you? My parents were close friends with the Lupins and they died during the battle, how dare you? You have to be a stalker because one of my daughter’s names is Tonks, her middle name infact. Stay away from me.’

WHAT!?! No, don't stay away! Will she PLEASE start talking sense!

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‘No they don’t. I don’t know you, you are just a pervert off the streets of Sweden.’

Yes, they do! And yes, you do! And no, he's not!

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‘What are their last names then? Don’t call me a pervert, you married me.’

Awe, I love Teddy's response. hehe, had to put that in there.

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‘My favourite on you is green.’

Is she finally talking sense now? Much better, Vic *nods in approval*

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He leaned forward and kissed my cheek, it felt strange. This was the weird thing that was going to happen today. It felt like the whole world was watching when I kissed my husband on the lips but I didn’t care.

EEEEEPPPPP!!! Yay! I

it and I

Teddy

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Suddenly my stomach felt like a portkey had just taken me away but it was actually my insides clenching together with anger. I was kissing the man that had left me. I hated him, he was horrible. He broke my heart.

What???!!! NOOOOO!!!! Don't you dare, Vic!

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And with that thought in mind I pulled away and slapped him on the cheek.

OOohhhh, I thought I said not to! C'mon! Let him explaim himself first. Maybe he had good reasons or something.... *Looks at Teddy expectantly because he BETTER have a good excuse*

GREAT POST, Katie! I loved it! PLEASE PAMS!!

And let me know if you need more help with the link..

hermione23 · 07-07-2010, 04:54 PM

oh my god, teddy's back?!?! but how?!?! ron & harry said...and...and hermione said...and...oh my god, teddy's back?!?! *faints*

Ron&Hermione(L) · 07-07-2010, 06:31 PM

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TEDDYS BACK !!!!!!! WOOHOOOO

great post

KatielovesHP · 07-07-2010, 06:46 PM

http://www.thefashionpolice.net/imag...reen_dress.jpg

Vic's green dress!!!

Ron&Hermione(L) · 07-07-2010, 06:52 PM

OMG thats beautiful !!!!

Emileyn · 07-07-2010, 06:57 PM

That is such a cute dress! I like it!

KatielovesHP · 07-07-2010, 07:04 PM

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Originally Posted by emilyblack

I'm here, I'm here! Okay, so when you reply or edit posts for that matter, do you see the little circular thing at the top with a linkish looking thing? It's right under the smiley face or right beside the "A" where you can change font color and if you put your cursor over it, it says insert link... You have to copy the address to your dress and then click on the insert link button and paste it there. And then it will be in you story and it will have part of it highlighted, that's where you can put whatever you want your link titled like Vic's dress or something... And wa-la! Tell me if you need further explanation!

Thanks alot. It doesn't look like yours normally do but oh well

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Now, to the comments!

Great comments, I won't reply to all, I will just sum up.

I know Teddy is back, I didn't purposely lie to you, I hope you are happy

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It's going to be good! Trust me, I've read on!

I thought this part was absolutely hilarious!!! You are too funny, ILY...

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*does the happy dance*

I love happy dancing!!! It can vary between diffferent people but mine consists of jumping and twirling and having a good old boogie

KatielovesHP · 07-07-2010, 07:07 PM

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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L)

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TEDDYS BACK !!!!!!! WOOHOOOO

great post

I know Teddy is back, you are so smart!!!

I do hope you didn't wake up the whole of ******* (don't want to say where you live

) with all that screaming.

ILY

KatielovesHP · 07-07-2010, 07:23 PM

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Originally Posted by hermione23

oh my god, teddy's back?!?! but how?!?! ron & harry said...and...and hermione said...and...oh my god, teddy's back?!?! *faints*

Teddy will explain it to you later dear

Yip, you're a bright one too!!!

He's back

KatielovesHP · 07-07-2010, 07:23 PM

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Originally Posted by emilyblack

That is such a cute dress! I like it!

Thankyou Emily

Cassiopia Malfoy · 07-07-2010, 07:31 PM

I VOTESES 1 CAUSE SOPH SAID SOOOO!

TEEEEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDYY! *squeals*

OHMIGOSH!

I've got to find you and hug you!

Ima soooo happy..

I kind of understand why Vic went through that, just to make sure it wasn't a creepy stalker.. Aaaaanyways!

HOW DARE YOU SLAP HIM VIC! Waaa! Ted come here for some huggles!

I love the update 20 times more then.. Then.. ~~Draco Malfoy~~ Ron Weasley! Ooh, that's a lot!

Awesome, I'm glad that Teddy's back!

KatielovesHP · 07-07-2010, 07:39 PM

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Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy

I VOTESES 1 CAUSE SOPH SAID SOOOO!

Good girl!!!!

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I've got to find you and hug you!

How about we both run to the other end of out bedroom and mind hug eachother

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I love the update 20 times more then.. Then.. ~~Draco Malfoy~~ Ron Weasley! Ooh, that's a lot!

Is it hard for you to like things more than Ron??

I know you love Draco !!!

BTW darling. It's time to change your location, you aren't bringing him back anymore

Cassiopia Malfoy · 07-07-2010, 07:59 PM

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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP

Is it hard for you to like things more than Ron??

I know you love Draco !!!

BTW darling. It's time to change your location, you aren't bringing him back anymore

Er, he's my.. One of my favorite male characters!

Ohh yeaaaa...

Connie · 07-08-2010, 07:32 AM

Hello Katie. It's been a while since I commented. It's a big moral issue with me. But, that aside, I've read your posts and kept up with your story. In your PM you asked us to vote, and I said 2, but sense you asked us to put it in here, then I'm asking for a do over sense Sophie is your friend, I trust she knows something we don't.

So her telling us to vote 1 then that's my do over vote. I trust Sophie.

The dress Vic had to have does have appealing qualities. I don't know why, but I do like it. Normally, I don't like those colors, but they work for that dress.

I love it that Ted is back! I hope they can work out things. I'll be watching for your next post.

KatielovesHP · 07-08-2010, 08:41 AM

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Originally Posted by Connie

Hello Katie. It's been a while since I commented. It's a big moral issue with me. But, that aside, I've read your posts and kept up with your story. In your PM you asked us to vote, and I said 2, but sense you asked us to put it in here, then I'm asking for a do over sense Sophie is your friend, I trust she knows something we don't.

So her telling us to vote 1 then that's my do over vote. I trust Sophie.

The dress Vic had to have does have appealing qualities. I don't know why, but I do like it. Normally, I don't like those colors, but they work for that dress.

I love it that Ted is back! I hope they can work out things. I'll be watching for your next post.

I know you had issues with the post before this one and that is why you didn't comment. No worries, sorry if I offended you, I didn't do it on purpose. Please for give me, it was just a part of the story.

Anyway, I know what you mean about the dress. I typed into google images green dress because I just fancied giving her a green one and a Gwen Stefani one came up and I just ignored it but I went back to it when I saw the yellow in it. I liked it but I wouldn't normally.

Thanks, I'll post soon.

I'll do the right link here:

Vic's Green Dress

AlwaysDance · 07-09-2010, 12:33 AM

OMG Teddy is back yay

Victoire are you being a bad girl. Slapping Teddy like that. Poor Teddy somebody needs to go slap Victoire. I now want to go and kill Rob in his sleep and get Teddy and Victoire back together.

Oh and for voting I will vote 1 cuz that's what Sophie says.

Love the dress.

PAMS PAMS PAMS

Teddy better come back

Ron&Hermione(L) · 07-09-2010, 12:46 AM

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Originally Posted by sarahb

Poor Teddy somebody needs to go slap Victoire.

I will

Cassiopia Malfoy · 07-09-2010, 01:30 AM

I'll accompany you

KatielovesHP · 07-09-2010, 11:35 AM

No slapping Victoire. She was hurt now stop it ladies. NO SLAPPING

KatielovesHP · 07-09-2010, 11:37 AM

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Originally Posted by sarahb

OMG Teddy is back yay

Victoire are you being a bad girl. Slapping Teddy like that. Poor Teddy somebody needs to go slap Victoire. I now want to go and kill Rob in his sleep and get Teddy and Victoire back together.

Oh and for voting I will vote 1 cuz that's what Sophie says.

Love the dress.

PAMS PAMS PAMS

Teddy better come back

Good girl for voting for 1, I like the dress too, you can't kill Rob because somebody else might.

hermione23 · 07-09-2010, 07:36 PM

hermione23 turned to victoire and slapped her across the face.(sorry, i know u said no slapping, but i couldn't help it!

) "he's ur husband, u idiot!!" she screamed. she then turned 2 rob and pulled out her wand. "AVADA KEDAVRA!" she yelled at the top of her lungs. rob fell to the floor dead. (feel free 2 thank me!) "take that, u *******!!!!" she shouted at his corpse.(well, what can i say? he really is a *******) "TEAM TEDDY RULES!!!!!!!"

RavenclawFan · 07-09-2010, 09:04 PM

i am so confused
how come she didn't remember him?
and what made her eventually remember him?
and i thought teddy was dead!
im so glad he's back!
yay!!!!!!!!!!!
loved the post
awesome
=]

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