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Hi ! I'm Kerri this is one of my first fan fics so I hope you enjoy it and please post !! All these characters belong to the one and only J.K.Rowling and the HP universe . I'm just borrowing them


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They were all in the same compartment on the train Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny. They were headed for their seventh and final year of Hogwarts. Even though they were all very close there was an unsteady silence. The last time they were all on this train was at the end of the sixth year it was a completely different story, Ron and Hermione were together . Harry was still with Ginny, but Ron and Hermione broke-up due to a giant argument caused by Lavender Brown.
Two months earlier
After being dumped for Hermione, Lavender Brown had an idea. At the last meal in of the year in Hogwarts Lavender went to Cho Chang with a plan.
"Okay so we don't talk that often."
"Lavender, we don't talk at all. What do you want?" Cho had a confused expression. Why was Lavender Brown talking to her?
"Listen, every one knows what I want." Cho still had a confused expression "or should I say who I want. " Lavender raise one of the eyebrows as a grin slowly began to spread across Cho's face. Lavender leaned closer,"And I know how I can get him back but i need your help . Meet me in the library when your done."Lavender walked out of the great hall, smiling to herself.
In the library the girls put their plan into action. they sent an owl to Hermione saying :
I saw your boyfriend snogging his ex in the passage to Gryffindor Tower last night before dinner.

One sentence did it all. The owl arrived after Hermione arrived home. Hermione immediately picked up the phone and called Ron (she had recently taught Ron how to use a phone) and after having a huge argument they decide they would just be friends. The tension rolled off Ron and Hermione every time they were in the same room as each other but both wanted to be close to each other because neither one was over the other but they would never admit it.
So as they sat in the train headed to Hogwarts the compartment was in silence with Ginny and Harry huddled close together occasionally whispering to each other and Ron and Hermione sitting as far from each other as possible.
When they finished eating at the welcome feast and Professor Dumbledore had said his speech they were about to leave when he strolled up to them.
"Mr Weasley and Miss Granger , can I have a word with both of you?" They both followed him out of the Great hall and up the stairs to a door niether of them had ever paid attention to before."This " Dumbledore pointed to the door " is your new accommodation. Congratulations! your are now head boy and girl well done!"
"Thank you, sir. " Hermione replied as Ron just stood there looking bewildered. " The password is 'Flipper' your names are on your doors and you are only allowed company until 10:30 pm. Good night."
They entered there new common room and closed the door.The just stood there in silence until Ron broke the ice.
"Wow. so this is uncomfortable." he said with a slight smile on his face. Hermione laughed.
"I've missed that ." Ron sighed.
"Missed what ?" Hermione asked confused.
"Your laugh." Hermione felt the blood rush to her cheeks. They just stood there looking at each other. Hermione was using all the power she had not to run over and kiss Ron. She missed being with him so much. She could feel the tears starting to gather in her eyes. She ripped her eyes away from his and walked over to the door with her name on in and went inside. Ron watched her as she walked away. He didn't like the look she had on her face. So he followed her. He stopped when he reached her door. He was about to knock when heard a sob coming from inside.


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What's in the envelope?! What's in the envelope?! What's in the envelope?! What's in the envelope?! What's in the envelope?! What's in the envelope?! What's in the envelope?! What's in the envelope?! What's in the envelope?!
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Great post Kerri, poor Ginny

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Romania? What?
Why have you given me plane tickets?” I asked as I surveyed the tickets in my hand.
Oh come on Harry!” Hayley exclaimed. “Think about it. Who lives in Romania and is connected to Ginny.” She said looking at me as if I was stupid. Well I certainly felt stupid. And then it clicked.
Charlie?” Hayley and Neville nodded. “They sent her to Charlie’s?
Yep and we bought you tickets to got and get her or stay with her or whatever.” Neville told me.
Oh and you better leave soon because your flight is at nine and its five and you have to be there like, three hours before and by the time you get to the airport you’ll run out of time. So we will have to leave you to it.” Neville said and he took Hayley’s hand.
Good luck. And Ginny will e waiting for you at the airport.” Hayley said and they disapperated.


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I jumped as the wheels of the plane hit the ground. It was official. I hated planes. It was my first time on one and it was not enjoyable even though I had first class seats, it was horrible, now my glad the Dursley’s never took me on any of their holidays.
Once I had gotten off the plane I walked straight through to the exit since I only had a carry on. When I got near the door I saw the most beautiful sight. Ginny was standing there smiling at me. She was wearing a pair of jeans and pink tight fitting top which showed off her little baby bump. She was around four months now and she looked absolutely radiant. She ran over to me and threw herself into my arms and we stood just inside of the exit door hugging and kissing. We were interrupted ten minutes later by someone clearing there throat behind us. We broke apart and turned to see Charlie standing there smiling at us.
Um… well I’m going to head home. You guys just catch up when your … When your ready.” He said laughing and he walked away.
I missed you so much.” I told her. My arms were still rapped around her waist and hers were around my neck. She just laughed at me.
I was only gone for like a week.” She said smiling brightly at me.
It was still too long.” I said. “You look so strange wearing a tight top.
Well we have no one to hide from now.” She told me. She removed her arms from around my neck and grabbed my hand.
Let’s go.” She said and we returned to Charlie’s where we were content away from Voldemort and his death eaters.

***
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5 months later.


Lily Potter. My beautiful baby girl had finally been brought into the world. She was less than an hour old and she already had Harry and I wrapped around her tiny little fingers. She had Harry’s eye’s and my hair and freckles that covered her tiny button nose.
She looked as peaceful as I put her in her stroller in the airport. We had come home and I was terrified for my daughter’s safety. She was so innocent and yet she was being dragged into a war. And it was her father’s job to end it.



So I kind of jumped a bit but I hope you enjoyed it.
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harry better end this war so lily can grow up peacefully and happily. and just because everyone hates voldemort.
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Why have you given me plane tickets?” I asked as I surveyed the tickets in my hand.
Oh come on Harry!” Hayley exclaimed. “Think about it. Who lives in Romania and is connected to Ginny.” She said looking at me as if I was stupid. Well I certainly felt stupid. And then it clicked.
Wow, is he slow or what! No wonder he and Ron always needed Hermione's help with homework...
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Ginny was standing there smiling at me. She was wearing a pair of jeans and pink tight fitting top which showed off her little baby bump. She was around four months now and she looked absolutely radiant. She ran over to me and threw herself into my arms and we stood just inside of the exit door hugging and kissing.
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Naw! She's seems like the cutest little baby ever!
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Forget about Voldemort! What's Mrs. Weasley going to do? Just kidding, the Death Eaters don't know he's coming home then, do they? Because if they do, they're probably waiting for them! You better not let anything happen the Lily!
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LILY!!
i bet she's cute.
harry better end this war so lily can grow up peacefully and happily. and just because everyone hates voldemort.
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Hehe. I think Ron also had another reason for asking Hermione

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Thanks I hope you don't think i brought her in to quickley.

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Great post, Kerri! Please PAMS!
To be honest so did I so i had to squeeze him in at the end . No they don't. And i could never let anything happen to Lily so you can put your mind at ease nothings going to happen to her
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Hello Kerri. It was so sweet of Neville and Heyley to get him tickets. I'm glad Harry is going to be able to get to be with Ginny where he belongs. I do hope too that they are able to patch things up with Molly and anyone else that was mad at him. Baby Lily sounds precious! And are they going directly to Harry's place? It would serve Molly right if they did, and she had to ask to come over to see her one and only baby grandchild. I shouldn't be that way, because I don't believe in being vendictive, and I do love Molly, it's just she should have kept her nose out of Ginny and Harry's affairs once she found out they were married. (Even though they are way to young to be married. I had to say it.) But I do love your story. I'll be watching for your next post. Oh, and it doesn't bother me if you don't stay with the books. It's your story.
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Loving this, Lily is adorable

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*everyone looks around and asks where*
Haha I love your story!!!
It took me forever to read it, but that just means that it is like the best story ever! I Love it!!
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SO CUTE!!

I wrote my fanfic, when I was listening to Paramore, shes great, now I am just waiting for it to get approved, your story was so good, and I cant wait for more...
I really dont get what PAMS means, so can anyone tell me what it is?
I cant wait for more!!!

Oh and can we just kill molly all ready shes annoying me! Harry and Ginny belong together!!
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Luna_Midnight, I believe PAMS means Post Alot More Soon. PAMS. I think. Could be wrong but that doesn't happen often!
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I spent TWO HOURS reading this! Yes I get distracted very easily
Just want to say...I LOVES ITT <3333
Mione and Draco were sooo cute together!
Hate HATE Cho and Lavender..Ummm Ron's a butthead for likeing them both.
Ms. Weasley can go die for all I care (sorry I'm not usually this mean but..) Gin and Hrry belong together!
Hayley and Neville...
Oh gosh. I couldn't stop smiling when they where in the broom closet
I think Bella should fall in love then Hayley can laugh at her (Just saying)

Anywhooooo PAMS!! PAMS!
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ok, so i started reading your story in january when u first started...then i never finished....now im back and i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh my gosh its so good!!!! PAMSPAMSPAMSPAMSPAMSPAMSPAMS!!!!!!!!!
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Woo I love new readers Thank you some much! Paramore is awesome to help you write To be honest I never intended to make Molly the bad guy but she just kind of turned out that way but think you should hold off on killing her right now

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Thank you for giving my story another chance I'm glad you like it!





There will be 1 more post and the an Epiloge ( can't remember how to spell it ) and then the story will be done :O But on the other hand i have a fairly new story in the high security vault called Watching in silence its alot better than this story I think
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Ok so here it is the last post of my very first fan fiction its took me about a year to do it but i hope that the ending is good enough Oh there will also be a epilouge so its kind of the second last post

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You would think a mother knew every single little thing about her daughter, what makes her happy, what makes her sad, how much sleep she needs, here cry when she's hungry or needs changed or even when she's just lonely and just wants someone to hold her. But now, as I looked down at the lifeless body of the most powerful dark wizard of all time and at the smiling face of my daughter who was only two months old, I knew that she would never stop surprizing me.
"What the bloody hell was that?" of couse Ron would be the one to break the silence. I looked over at him to see him and nearly every one else in the great hall looking at my little girl in my husbands arms.
"Harry? Is... is she ok?" I asked shakily not sure if it was safe to move or not. Harry held her slightly away from his body. He had one hand supporting her head and neck and the other on her bottom and he looked down at her when their eyes met she let out a burst of giggles and flapped her hands in the air. All around me were cheers of joy and the room erupted with noise as people looked for their loved ones while others morned theirs. In the corner of my eye I could see some one levetating Voldemorts body and talking in out of the hall. I didn't care about that, i couldn't, nothing but the last thirty minutes ran throught my head.

Thirty minites ago

"Gin, what were you thinking!?" Harry shouted as we hurried through the corridor.
"I was thinking that I wasn't sitting my a massive house my self while everyone was here at the school defeating Voldemort!" I screamed at him. We had stopped and were facing each other. There was hundreds of bangs and flashed around us, some times the ground would shake. A strange look crossed over Harry's face.
"Ginny? Where do you think the baby is?" He asked me slowly. What did he think I was crazy or something? But thats when i felt it, her, squirming in my arms. No. I had left her a home. I didn't even realise i still had her in my arms until now.
"Oh! ... Oh no! Harry what have i done? I put her in the crib! And then... and then." I couldn't remember. What had i done after that? Everything seemed so blurry. I can't belive I had put my own daughter in so much danger. "I just wanted to be with you so much that..." The tears stopped my ability to speak so Harry pulled me into his arms.
"Shh. There nothing we can do about it now." he said soothing me. "Listen Ginny, you have to go to your family and don't tell them you were with me, pretend you haven't seen me and are looking for me, ok?"
"What? Harry what are you talking about?" I asked a little scared.
"It's a long story but basically everyone thinks I'm dead." Huh?
"What. Oh my gosh you're dead aren't you! You're a ghost."
"Ginny! I am not dead."
"Oh. ok I love you." I said and he smiled.
"I love you too but I have to end this today so I better get going. Give me Lilly." He said as he lifted her from my arms.
"What Harry! It isn't safe for her here."
"Gin, it's fine i have the invisibility cloak. Just go." I leaned forward and kissed him and Lilly on the head before i turned and left. I walked towards the great hall to find a massive battle between most of the order and Hogwarts students. I was shooting curses and winning fights when suddenly everyone stopped. I turned my head to see what everyone was looking at to find voldemort he motioned for everone who followed him to stand at one side of the room and everyone against him to stand and the other side. Just as everyone had went silent I heared a small cry echo through the hall. I glanced down at my watch to see the time and i realised it was time for her feed. If we never fed her on time in the past she would start to cry so much she would scream. Busted! Voldemort whipped around and pointed his wand at an empty space, only i knew it wasn't empty. A few seconds later the cloak was in Voldemorts hands and every one was gasping at the fact that Harry was alive. I turned my head to see Harry standing there holding Lilly one hand on her bottom and the other on her head, her face in the crook of his neck the way she usually was when she was sleeping but she was wide awake and about to start her screaming.
"Well, It looks like I'm getting to kill not only you, but your little brat aswell!" Voldemort saud happily. Monster! I felt someone catch me, Ron, his hands were around my waist, my legs and buckeled from beneath me but no one noticed. They were all just waiting, waiting as my family was about to be killed.
Voldemort slowly raised his wand and pointed it at them. He looked around to see if anyone was watching as he done the thing her had longed for for 17 years but everyones every were one the baby who was glowing? Huh? the was a strange light coming from her and she reached up and put her hand on Harry's face. A light shot through Harry's arm and through his wand, which was raised and pointing at Voldemort. The light shot throught the wand and hut voldemort straight in the heart. If he had one. He was dead. And my daughter had done it? Wierd.

End of flash back

That night i held my daughter and mu husband in my arms and thanked everyone possible that they were still here. Everything would be ok now.

The End

Wow. It feels so awesome to have finished this story! I hope every one enjoyed it. Only the Epilouge now
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OMG I LOVE YOU AND THIS STORY !! I LOVE OUR CONVERSATIONS ABOUT IT IN REGI !! I LOVE ALL THE RELATIONSHIPS IN IT !! AHHHHH!! I'M EXCITED !

Lily is super! She's a very special little Potter It was such a surprise when I read this j/k I Knew!

It's an amazing feeling to finish a story, be proud !!

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