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Hi ! I'm Kerri this is one of my first fan fics so I hope you enjoy it and please post !! All these characters belong to the one and only J.K.Rowling and the HP universe . I'm just borrowing them


chapter 1

They were all in the same compartment on the train Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny. They were headed for their seventh and final year of Hogwarts. Even though they were all very close there was an unsteady silence. The last time they were all on this train was at the end of the sixth year it was a completely different story, Ron and Hermione were together . Harry was still with Ginny, but Ron and Hermione broke-up due to a giant argument caused by Lavender Brown.
Two months earlier
After being dumped for Hermione, Lavender Brown had an idea. At the last meal in of the year in Hogwarts Lavender went to Cho Chang with a plan.
"Okay so we don't talk that often."
"Lavender, we don't talk at all. What do you want?" Cho had a confused expression. Why was Lavender Brown talking to her?
"Listen, every one knows what I want." Cho still had a confused expression "or should I say who I want. " Lavender raise one of the eyebrows as a grin slowly began to spread across Cho's face. Lavender leaned closer,"And I know how I can get him back but i need your help . Meet me in the library when your done."Lavender walked out of the great hall, smiling to herself.
In the library the girls put their plan into action. they sent an owl to Hermione saying :
I saw your boyfriend snogging his ex in the passage to Gryffindor Tower last night before dinner.

One sentence did it all. The owl arrived after Hermione arrived home. Hermione immediately picked up the phone and called Ron (she had recently taught Ron how to use a phone) and after having a huge argument they decide they would just be friends. The tension rolled off Ron and Hermione every time they were in the same room as each other but both wanted to be close to each other because neither one was over the other but they would never admit it.
So as they sat in the train headed to Hogwarts the compartment was in silence with Ginny and Harry huddled close together occasionally whispering to each other and Ron and Hermione sitting as far from each other as possible.
When they finished eating at the welcome feast and Professor Dumbledore had said his speech they were about to leave when he strolled up to them.
"Mr Weasley and Miss Granger , can I have a word with both of you?" They both followed him out of the Great hall and up the stairs to a door niether of them had ever paid attention to before."This " Dumbledore pointed to the door " is your new accommodation. Congratulations! your are now head boy and girl well done!"
"Thank you, sir. " Hermione replied as Ron just stood there looking bewildered. " The password is 'Flipper' your names are on your doors and you are only allowed company until 10:30 pm. Good night."
They entered there new common room and closed the door.The just stood there in silence until Ron broke the ice.
"Wow. so this is uncomfortable." he said with a slight smile on his face. Hermione laughed.
"I've missed that ." Ron sighed.
"Missed what ?" Hermione asked confused.
"Your laugh." Hermione felt the blood rush to her cheeks. They just stood there looking at each other. Hermione was using all the power she had not to run over and kiss Ron. She missed being with him so much. She could feel the tears starting to gather in her eyes. She ripped her eyes away from his and walked over to the door with her name on in and went inside. Ron watched her as she walked away. He didn't like the look she had on her face. So he followed her. He stopped when he reached her door. He was about to knock when heard a sob coming from inside.


I hope you like it ! Please comment. even if you hated it tell me what i did wrong

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Oh uh...What is Molly saying to Harry, Have fun on Holiday Kerri.
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OMG! What's gonna happen now??? I hope everyone's okay and the weasleys don't kill Harry...btw great post and PAMS!
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Man! Harry's gonna get murdered by his own mother-in-law! She's probably out in the hall screaming her her head off at him right now! Great post, Kerri, great post.
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Hello Kerri, I'm sorry I've taken so long in commenting here. I do still love your story, and I love how you present it. I'm so glad Ginny and the baby are safe. And I love the way you had Harry stay calm through the whole thing. He was terribly distressed, but didn't go off the deep end. He is able to look at the big picture, to keep things in perspective. I think this helps him have such good instincts. And one of my favorite lines is this:
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I'm sure he couldn't wait to tell Ron and Hermione, well, maybe not Ron givin that he might beat up Harry first. But, anyway he puts what he wants aside for what Ginny wants. You're doing great Kerri, keep up the great posts. And I'll do my best to keep up.
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Oh,great post!Really good.And I'm wondering what Mrs.Weasley is telling too.That should be fun.
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ok thi might be confusing but this is 2 weeks later but when i do a real chapter and not a teaser we will be back at the hospital so just bare with me and if you don't get it tell me and I'll will breack it down for you



"She's gone."
"What do you mean she gone?"
"She left. She doesn't want to be involved with you anymore."
"Thats a lie. She wouldn't have married me i she didn't want to be with me anymore."
"Well. Thats not my problem. Now i you don't mind I'd like you to leave." Mrs Weasley said then she slammed the door in Harry's face. What had she ment, Ginny wouldn't leave him would she? Just as he was about to apparate back to Grimmauld place where he was currently staying, he heard the door of the Burrow open behind him.
"Harry, wait!" Hayley and Neville, who had gotten back together after settling their differences.
"We need to talk." Neville said in the most serious voice Harry had ever heard from him. He was carrying a brown envolopein on hand and his wand in the other ready to apparate. Harry nodded and the three of the apparated to Grimmauld Place.




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Hmmm, I don't think Ginny would leave him. I think she's trying to do something to protect him or the baby or something... Whatever's in the brown envelope that Neville has is probably from Ginny...? And Molly needs to be nicer to Harry! And I'm glad Neville and Hayley work things out! I can't wait to get the whole post instead of this teaser! Please PAMS!
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Molly... I warned you and now I must kill you :hack:!
Anyhow... Great post kerri. Molly better calm herself otherwise she'll have me to deal with. I hope harry and ginny get back together soon like contact cause I know ginny hasn't left him. I wonder what's on the envelope. Thatt wad such and evil cliffy you left us on! PAMS really soon cause I need to know what's going to happen.
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OMG JUST BECAUSE I POSTED A TEASER DOESN'T MAKE IT FAIR!!!!

I think I know!! Did we discuss this in registration, Chemistry and probably Maths?

I can't remember!!!

PS....Can't wait for first period on Monday!!!!

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I don't know how I will get up on Monday!!!! I'm so tired!!!
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AAAAAAAAAAAAHHH! I just read everything in 15 min and I LUFF IT! PAMS PLEASE, PLEASE PLEASE, PLEASE! And can you VM me when you post?

I didn't get the teaser though.... BUT WOW! I love your writing! YAY!
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What didn't you understand about the teaser?
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1. mrs. weasley is lying! i can feel it! ginny would NEVER leave him!

2. I HATE TEASERS!!!!
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