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Old 07-31-2010, 07:13 PM   #361 (permalink)
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Hello Kerri, I'm sorry I've taken so long in commenting here. I do still love your story, and I love how you present it. I'm so glad Ginny and the baby are safe. And I love the way you had Harry stay calm through the whole thing. He was terribly distressed, but didn't go off the deep end. He is able to look at the big picture, to keep things in perspective. I think this helps him have such good instincts. And one of my favorite lines is this:
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“I’m really sorry Hermione but I can’t tell you, not right now anyway. I’m positive that Ginny wants to tell you herself
I'm sure he couldn't wait to tell Ron and Hermione, well, maybe not Ron givin that he might beat up Harry first. But, anyway he puts what he wants aside for what Ginny wants. You're doing great Kerri, keep up the great posts. And I'll do my best to keep up.
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