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Packaged Sweets A dazzling showcase of fully wrapped-up stories, these sweet treats are polished and ready for your reading pleasure!

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It was absolutely perfect! You're spelling, grammer, and vocabulary we're on a high level. 6 54.55%
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Old 08-07-2007, 08:55 PM
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Hellywhooo everyone!! My name is Shirel and this is my second fan fic (my first is called A War of Love) and it is going to be about a Draco/Hermione ship that is taking place during there seventh and final year at Hogwarts. Dumbledore is dead and all that, basically up till now it's all like the books.
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Harry, Hermione, Ron, Draco, Ginny, Neville, Luna and possibly more of J.K. Rowling's characters.

If I have any spelling mistakes or I write things that don't make sense, please tell me so that I can, with your help, improve my spelling and vocabulary.

Disclaimer: Sadly, I do not own any of the characters. They belong to J.K. Rowling, the author of the Harry Potter novels.

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Chapter 1- The beginning of a new year:
"Hey look, there's Malfoy getting kissed goodbye by his mother!" said Ron laughing.

"Oh get a grip Ron!" said Hermione, "I don't understand why he even came back."

"Let me have a look," said Harry moving passed Ron to stair outside the train's window. "He sure dosen't look to happy. Wait 'till I can break all of his bones and crush them to dirt!" he said angrily.

"Don't bother," said Hermione, "You'll just get yourself expelled, anyways he sure doesn't look to happy to be coming back."

"Yah, I bet his mom made him come back." said Ron and at that second the compartment door slid open and a very pretty girl with flaming red hair came in with a bright smile on her face.

"Guess who I just ran in to?" she said while taking a seat next to Harry.

"Who?" they asked.

"Neville and Luna kissing!" She said happily, "They're going out!" She giggled.

"Wow Gin that's terrific!" exclaimed Hermione, "They had it coming."

"Neville and Luna?" Ron just sat there looking dumb, "Out of all people he chose her?"

"Ron! What on earth is your problem? Just because you don't have a girlfriend doesn't mean that the whole world has to feel sorry for you!" Ginny snapped. Ron was silent.

"I think it's great that Neville and Luna are together. I mean Neville's liked her for ages." said Harry suddenly.

"How do you know all this?" Asked Hermione.

"Neville told me." Said Harry a little uncomfortably.

The train gave a little rattle and slowly started to move away from all the waving parents and siblings and as it started to pick up speed the compartment door slid open for the second time to reveal a tall blond haired boy with a pale face, cold gray eyes and was very much more muscular than the last time they had seen him.

"Hello Weasels, Potter and Mudblood! Didn't think you were coming back this year." He sneered. Harry and Ron stood up so fast that Draco took two steps back.

"Scared Malfoy?" sneered Harry. "Surprised you even dared to come back this year and with out your fat freinds, Crabbe and Goyle," he added.

"I'm surprised your not out their looking for the the Dark Lord, Potter!" he said coldly.

"If I didn't feel bad for your poor muscles and good looks, I would have killed you right on the spot!" shot Harry. Malfoy took one last look at him and left slamming the compartment door behind him.

Ron high-fived Harry. "Good one mate!"

"Thanks!" Harry grinned and then hugged Ginny.
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This is such a good chapter!
I know u said u just do this 4 fun but I'm gonna say it anyway!
THANKZ 4 POSTING! Yay!!!!!!
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Old 12-03-2007, 06:01 AM   #202 (permalink)
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Hey Jen!!! For a moment, I thought you left me.
It's okay! I'm also kutting short here. I'm not as on as much as I used to!
Yeah, school is such a... well, not fun! like you said,
Oh, my, I also got the chills while writing that chapter. It was so... creepy!

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lol! Of course I wouldnt leave you and this wounderful FF.
I know exacly how you feel. School is so..urgh!!

Anyways love the post. Ohhhh she is leaving? Poor Draco!! That is sooooo sad. I can totally imagine his expression when Hermione was leaving.

Cant wait for the next post!!! Wonder what happens!!

Love ya and PAMS soon!!
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Old 12-03-2007, 07:35 AM   #203 (permalink)
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Such great chapters! I can't wait for more!
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nice job!
Bit confused, but thats ok.
PAMS next chapter!
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Old 12-06-2007, 09:31 AM   #205 (permalink)
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Thanks for all the nice comments! I am working on the next chapter!
Lisa- Can you tell me which parts you were confused so I can try to be better in the future?
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Old 12-07-2007, 09:51 AM   #206 (permalink)

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Awwwe she's just do confused.I wish I could Help Mione.*Hugs Hermione* its okay I understand completely.Great post.PAMS
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PAMS! And soon, didn´t you say, i are working with the new chapter? OMG, i really hope you´ll get it ready soon, i have NOTHING to do now. My life is now soo boring and this is´nt gonna help it to get more interesting or funnier. Damn, i just wish i could have something to translate; just reading fics is not as nice as translating.

My message contains really bad english and guite awful idea overall, but my point is: I am going mad, if i can´t do anything. *sigh*
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Slytherin Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

I'm sorry but I'm going crazy!!!!!!
Cab u please please PLEASE post soon
I really need to read wut happens next
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!
U R such a good writer and u so got me hooked on this story
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Hey ya'll!!! Thanks again for the comments, I love all of you!!
The next post is taken me a while but is almost done. I am not feeling so good right now so I will try to get it up sometime tomorrow. Until then...
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omg i'm in love with your story! and all i can say is PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!

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Why'd Hermione have to leave!! NOOO! that's not fair! *pouts*

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AWESOME chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
is hermione crazy not accepting dracos love????????????????????????
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NEW READER ALERT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Wow!!!! Two new readers! Welcome both of you!!!!!
STELLA- Thanks for reading!
I have bad news guys. I broke my internet yesterday! I don't know what I did to it, but I broke it!! If it is not fixed soon, I will type it on a diffrent computer... I'm really sorry. Blame it on me. I was downloading music from itunes and I think I bent the internet peice... me not a good girl...
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Thats ok its not ur fault
But if u dont post soon I will be very sad
Just remember... my ninjas r watching u!!!
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Now i gotta.. Mrrrh. PLEASE post another chapter SOON! This is so frustrating.

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Awwwww...it wasnt your fault. Those things just get old. Hope that you can get it fixed soon, also hope you can post soon!! Cant wait for you to post!
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OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH she left!!!!!!! I can't believe it!! why???? No, please don't lieave us like this!! hahahaha I love th post
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shireeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeel u r soooooooooooooooo talented i looooooooooooooooove your storiesU ROCK
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Thats okay,Hope you can post more soon.

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Hello again!! I feel so mean to you guys. All my post are on a diffrent computer which, sadley, I broke the internet... But anyways what I came to tell you is, It's getting fixed in three days!!!!!!!!!!!!! You know how happy I am?! I can finally post in like (I think) three days!!!!!!
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O.M.G! this is the best draco-hermione fanfic i've ever read!!
this great!! Love your work girl!!
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Awesome!Can't wait for that update!
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