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04-18-2010, 05:33 PM
| | | Love You, Too - Sa16+ Hi, My name is Sophie, or Soph if you like. This is my first ever Fan Fic and I'm so nervous to see what you think. I don't own anything in the Harry Potter world but a HUGE thanks to JK Rowling who does and does such a good job at brining the characters to life through all her fab Harry Potter books.
So here's whats happening. Sirius has just died and Harry is returning to the burrow before school starts back. Only difference is that I've made Harry and Ginny go out with each other in the last few weeks of school like just after Sirius death and that Dumbeldore has already told Harry of his task he will have set for him when he returns to Hogwarts, oh yeah, and Bill and Fleure's wedding is THIS summer instead of it being the following year. So this story follows Harry and Ginny over the next few years at Hogwarts and we follow the story as they rekindle their relationship so this is a Harry/Ginny Fan Fic p.s. Thanks to Kerri and Katie who introduced my to the site.
So here goes... Chapter 1
It was all set. Harry was to arrive at the burrow tonight.
I don't know how I feel about this. On one hand, it will be safe for him here untill we all leave to go back to Hogwarts where he will complete Dumbeldore's task but on the other it's difficult for me to be around him. After we broke up my whole world came crashing down. My life is black hole without him and as much as I want to see him, it will leave me heartbroken if something bad happens at this dangerous time in the wizarding community.
You see, after the fight at the mnistry, Dumbeldore told Harry that there was only one way to destroy Voldemort, that is destroying the Horouxes he has made. So Harry this year at Hogwarts is to attempt to defeat the Voldemort-again. So that is why Harry and I are no longer, because of Voldemort.
I remember how sick I felt when he left me, apparently in order to "protect" me. I don't need protecting! I need him. He is the only thing that could hurt me and he did. Hermionie tells me it out of love, yeah well, love sucks in my opinion. I'm sure he didn't intentionly mean to hurt me, but he did. It only makes it worse when he talks to me just like when we were friends. I can't stand the politness of the tone of his voice. I would just gaze into those emerald eyes whie listening to his tenor voice. It inflicted pain upon me but I felt close to him, because I knew he was right there with me. Mum was so worried at first. She told me it was for the best "Things like this happen for a reason, Dear," she would say "Your lucky Harry cares so much about you." I would turn away and cringe at the sound of his name. We haven't seen each other in so long, well about two weeks but thats a long time for us to be apart.
Harry arrived just after 7pm accompanied by order member Kingsley Shacklebolt. Mum pulled him into a tight hug saying how wonderful it was to see him. He shook my dads hand then looked at me. I looked back with an expresionless face showing no sign of emotion. I could feel tears welling up in my eyes. I looked down at the floor and I felt myself being pulled toward him in a weak but friendly hug. I inhaled deeply. I was home. Back in Harry's arms. The famous Harry smell incircled me but he let go too soon. Everyone watched carefully to see how I would react. I looked up avoiding everyones stairy eyes, shrugged, smiled weakly then continued to the sitting room.
"Dinner!" Mum shouted. I put my book down and made my way to the dinner table. Harry went for the same seat as me. I tryed to show no sign of emotion but failed when I breathed out heavily and shook my head. Why me? Why does he have to make this unbearably painful than it already is? I turned to go to the furthest away seat. "Gin," he pulled out the chair and gestured with his hand for me to sit. It saddend me when he called me Gin. Only called me that. "Thank you." I replied, in an emotionless tone and obediently I sat down and ate my dinner in silence. Chapter 2
Later that Night...
Kingsley left the Burrow as soon as Hary was settled in. Hermionie had arrived shortly after dinner. Her arrival seemed to lighten up a rather moody Ron. I don't understand why Harry and Hermionie put up with his sulky attitude
I was in the spare room with Hermionie. She was unpacking a few nessesities for her short visit. "So," she said "...How've you been, Ginny? You didn't put much in the letters"
"I won't lie to you, Hermionie, I've been better," I said in a flat tone and I shrugged as I stared up at the celling trying to hold back tears. I knew where the conversation was going.
"Oh Ginny," Hermionie stopped what she was doing and came over and sat down beside me. She wrapped her long boney arms around my shoulders and I broke into tears. "It's so hard to face him," I sobbed "I can't look at him and when I do, I feel like I've been punched in the stomach. It hurts to be in the same room as him. He said it's for the best. How is this better than when we were together. I don't know about him, but this is know good for me Hermionie. If only he knew. I mean,I..I..I"
"Ginny," she smoothed down my hair "you have no idea how much this hurts Harry. Your his everything. Your all he talks about, when Rons not there obviously, but this is why he's doing this, for you. He has to defeat Voldemort and this is the only way he can. It will be tough for both of you, but once this is over you both can get on with your lives, without Voldemorts annual interuptions. Harry loves you Ginny. Trust me."
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Hermionie and I contiued talking and laughing. I was winding her up about how Ron liked her and we both burst out laughing.We were interupted with a knock on my room door. We both coposed ourselves before I opened it.
It was Ron. We both started laughing again. He looked at us with a puzzled expression. "Um... Mum sent me up. She's made tea and said you've to come down for some before bed." He bounded back down the staris
"Put on a brave face for Harry." Hermionie said with a smile. I nodded in agreement before pulling a jumper on over my pyjama top and slipping on my slippers before heading downstairs. Chapter 3- Part 1
I woke with the sun glaring through the blinds. I rolled over onto my side. My alarm clock blinked 7:30am. I gazed around my bedroom. "Good morning Ginny." Hermionie said. "Morning" I replied only half awake . I sat up and looked round the room "Are you comming down to help?" Hermionie was already up and dressed. She sat at my dressing table brushing her hair.
"With..." I asked dazed and confused
"It's Harry's birthday and your mums having a special birthday brunch. Plus there's last minuet plans for Bill and Fleur's Wedding. Fleur's Parents and sister arrive tomorrow." Yuck. Can't say I think much of Gabrielle. She should know that Harry will never be her's and that he only has eye's for me.
"Oh yeah. Do me a favour. There's a gift bag in my cupboard. It's for Harry. Can you take it down to the kitchen with you. I'll be down in five" Hermionie left the room and I climbed out of bed, stretched and put on a navey top, tights and navey and white skirt. I walked out of my room and across the hall to the bathroom. I tied my hair back and washed my face with hot water. Then I brushed my teeth and rinsed with cool minty mouthwash. I now felt quite awake. I joined my mum, dad and Hermionie in the kitchen. Mum, once again had outdone herself. She must have made enough to feed fifty, but then again we've got Ron to feed!
Harry came sleepily down stairs followed by Ron. "Happy Birthday Harry!" Hermionie handed him a small bag. "It's for when we leave," she told him as he unwraped it. "I find that writing all my thought and feelings down in a diary helps plus that is possible the most interesting book I've ever read"
"Thank you Hermionie. I love it" The diary was beautiful. It had a leather cover and the book was about magical creatures. It looked very interesting. I'm sure Harry will enjoy reading it.
"Happy Birthday Mate." Ron said while handing him a rather small peculiar box. It was well wrapped in shiny red paper with a golden bow, which made me think who wrapped it because it obviously wasn't Ron. Harry opened it carefully. "I couldn't think what to get you so it's the broom polish PLUS and I O U." but that was just an act. I knew fine well what Ron had got Harry. A book called 'Fail Safe Ways to Charm Witches.' and I only knew that because I was with himwhen he bought it. He was obviously embarrased about what Mum and Hermionie would think of him getting him a gift like that.
"Thanks Ron. You shouldn't have" Harry said laughing.
"No bother ,Mate" I just glared at Ron and Herionie rolled her eyes. I was about to had Harry his birthday gift when Ron but in and said "Aw, Mum what's for breakfast? I'm famished!"
"Yeah, cauz you look starved, Ron!" I glared at him. He gets in the way of everything!
"Geez, Ginny. What's with the attitude? What's the problem?"
"Your face, Ron. You git!" I stormed out the door and into the garden. This was too much. He is so insensitive sometimes!
"Ronald!" Hermioie tutted
"What did I do. It's not my fault she's in a bloody bad mood! Time of the month or what!" I heard him mutter.
"RONALD!" I heard her scream "Ginny's right. You are an insensitive git!"
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10-12-2010, 02:21 PM
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Loving this post! I skim-read it becasue I have already read it but it was fabulous!
Dress two for Gin!!!!
And for Hermione's dress, wasn't it purple. Oh well!!  The original red one that took forever to load is quite Christmas-ay. Right??
Anyways, great post!!  Can't wait for more!!
Emily, it is payback  I know Sophie
PS.....Can't wait for Friday!!!!
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I vote for the first dress.. But they are both really pretty.
I stared at Luna's dress for at least a minute in awe.. LUNA YOU PICK AMAZING DRESSES! More like Soph, but still
Looooooooooooooooooooooove the update! Was beautiful Soph!
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Loving this post! I skim-read it becasue I have already read it but it was fabulous! I know you have, its cause your my BETA READER!  cause my spelling is atrocious - wait did I get that right? Quote:
Dress two for Gin!!!! OK but dress one is winning Quote:
And for Hermione's dress, wasn't it purple. Oh well!!  The original red one that took forever to load is quite Christmas-ay. Right??
 maybe it was and I've uploaded the wrong one, It does look Christmas-ay doesn't it! I'll change it nearer the time of the actual ball :S Quote:
Emily, it is payback  I know Sophie Emily, it is not!!! Don't listen to her...ok maybe a wee totesy bit BUT I like your style so copied it. I like how you keep readers waiting! Quote:
PS.....Can't wait for Friday!!!! SAME!!!! I'm actually buzzing. It's all I've talked about all day. I'm terrible at the run up to sleepovers! Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy I vote for the first dress.. But they are both really pretty.  Dress one is winning. I love that one t! Quote:
I stared at Luna's dress for at least a minute in awe.. LUNA YOU PICK AMAZING DRESSES! More like Soph, but still Its a Luna sort-of frock though, don't ya think... Quote:
Looooooooooooooooooooooove the update! Was beautiful Soph!
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Brillient chapter
Oooh Hermione how mean of you!
LOL!
PAMS!!
Eviee <33
And i think Ginny dress number two
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Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3
And i think Ginny dress number two  Yippee
Somebody agrees with me
Thanks Evie
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Haha, your most welcome Katie
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Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 Brillient chapter
Oooh Hermione how mean of you! Thanks Eviee Quote:
And i think Ginny dress number two I think its a tie now between the two dresses Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Yippee 
Somebody agrees with me 
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10-13-2010, 06:43 PM
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Your welcome
Tie's arnt good *shakeshead*
Haha. Awww
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10-14-2010, 06:34 AM
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Hello Sophie. before I get in to telling you how great you writing is and how much I love your story, I must first address this: Quote:
I would like to dedicate this post to Connie, a fantastic writer who has finished writing a superb fan fic! You did a fantastic job and I'm really going to miss it. Thanks for sharing it with us!
I am honored that you was such a loyal reader. It was a great joy for me to write that, and it was a greater joy reading your comments. You, Emily, and Katie always made me want to post every Thursday. It was a joy. And your dedication of this post to me humbles me. Thank you. Quote:
"Well Harry, you have a think about what you want to do then let me know later. I'll see you tonight" I told him, then set out for class and the long day ahead.
Sophie, this was very mature of Ginny! I was so happy not to see her throw a fit. I'm sure this will make it easy for Harry to see that he can't live in fear for Ginny. If he did he would take away everything she could enjoy about life. Quote:
By Saturday, Hermione and I still were not speaking. She hadn't said anything to me and I had nothing to say to her
I do hope they get this sorted out. Ginny needs to tell Hermione she heard what she said. And Hermione needs to find out why Ginny is angry with her. Even if Ron told her, she needs to explain what she was going on about. I'd like to know myself.  Hermione was WAY wrong to say what she did. Quote:
Hermione and Cho!!!! You have got to be kidding! "Have they always been friends?" Luna asked as I stared at the pair with my mouth hung open.
 I wonder if maybe Hermione was counting on this to rattle her cage. It isn't very nice though is it. Quote:
"Look sunshine," I told the third year as I handed him his broom "I don't need to date the captain to get on the team. But between you and me, I'm just as good as him, if not better."
That was just way cool! Quote:
Ok so I had like five minutes and I feel I'm losing touch
 Sophie! I hope you're not serious. I think you're doing wonderfully brilliant! I love your story. You always present it perfect, you tell the story with careful consideration to your characters and you make us want to read your next post always, because you write with maturity.
Umm let's see. My vote on the dress is the first one. I think it is beautiful. The color is gorgious, and the design, although a little mature for my liking, is still tasteful. Luna's dress is breathtaking and I love it so much! And Hermione's dress is lovely also. I liked the first one you picked out. I think it's beautiful, although I'd like it even more without all the flower clutter on the top. But still, it is beautiful even with it. You have very good taste.
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Originally Posted by Connie your dedication of this post to me humbles me. Thank you. You deserve it ! I'm really going to miss Heads of Tails! Quote:
Sophie, this was very mature of Ginny! I was so happy not to see her throw a fit. I'm sure this will make it easy for Harry to see that he can't live in fear for Ginny.
I think your right. I think its a whole new experience for Ginny and its helping her mature. Quote:
Ginny needs to tell Hermione she heard what she said. And Hermione needs to find out why Ginny is angry with her. Even if Ron told her, she needs to explain what she was going on about. I'd like to know myself. I'm sure things will sort themselevs out in time. Quote:
That was just way cool!
I thought it was something Ginny might say. : Quote:
You always present it perfect, you tell the story with careful consideration to your characters and you make us want to read your next post always, because you write with maturity.
Thanks Connie Quote:
My vote on the dress is the first one. I think it is beautiful. The color is gorgious, and the design
 FIRST DRESS WINS!
Thank you Connie. There will be a new post soon! I have lots of ideas!
Soph x
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Yay! First dress, I really was torn between the two, but I think Ginny would have totally worn the first, as long as her mum didn't stop her
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Ok so the first dress got the vote....much to Katies disgust (sorry dear ) but they don't come into the story for another few posts...So here we go, and btw its only a wee short post
Post 36
I knew that Harry would pick me for the team. He's such a push over when it comes to the little unimportant things in life. But I still had to try my hardest in order to show everyone else how capable I am. I was trying out for chaser. I didn't enjoy being a seeker as much last year after Harry got banned by Professor Umbridge and I was to take his place. I like being more involved in the game. Harry split the group into two teams and poor Ron was so nervous trying out for keeper, that it only made things worse when Hermione had taken a seat in the stands to watch the trials. I shook my head. I knew what her little game was- she wouldn't rest until everyone else was as miserable and boring as herself. I was glad to see the familiar face of Katie Bell who was also trying out for chaser. We make quite a good team if I do say so myself! Instead of our usual and traditional quidditch attire, she had opted for a much more feminine set of robes that were black and bright pink, with a silvery metallic stripe down the side of each arm and leg. The little third year boy kept on glancing our way occasionally; I couldn't help but laugh. He was a typical little teenage boy who just hated all girls as it seems. I smiled politely only for it to be returned by an icy glare. He was trying out for beater. We really needed someone good now that Fred and George had left school though.
Once the game started, Katie and I worked well to get the quaffle past Cormac, each time we neared the goals. I was getting ready for Katie to pass me the quaffle. I went flying along the right hand side. I spotted the little third year getting ready to swing his bat, making the bludger come straight at me. I thought I'd dodged it but before I knew, I was falling to the ground. I was screaming. I felt like something had ripped a hole right though my body. Then everything went black. I felt myself land with a soft thud on the ground. Then I really passed out.
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"Ginny" I heard a voice; I recognised it as Ron. I could feel people. I could sense them all around me.
"Gin. Can you hear me? It’s going to be ok." It was Harry. I could hear the panic in his voice. He squeezed my hand tightly then brought it to his lips. He kissed my knuckles and began running soothing circles along my fingers.
"We need to get her to the hospital wing Harry."
I then heard a different voice. Hermione. She was panting. "Is she ok?"
"Like you'd care." I heard Harry grunt.
"Harry please. Not now! Is she ok? I tried to slow down her fall."
I felt someone try to pick me up, "Owwwwww!!!" I whimpered and began to cry. I opened my eyes as Harry put me back down quickly.
"Harry, go and get Madam Pomfrey. The rest of you scram."
"Ron I'm not going anywhere! I'm not leaving her."
My eyes opened. My head was thumping. I felt really dizzy and wouldn't have been surprised if I had birds circling my forehead.
"I really wish you two wouldn't fight." Everyone was staring at me. "Bloody hell! I need help." I cried the tears staining my face and my eyes welling up for another round of water works!
"Where did you get hurt?"
"My ribs. Please don't move me. It hurts so much."
"I'll go and get Madam Pomfrey since none of you will!" She run clumsily into the building.
"Ok everyone listen up!" Harry shouted clearly to get everyone’s attention. "You all did very well today. As soon as I've made up my mind I'll post the list of those who made the team inside the common room on the notice board at the door. Please don't go ranting and raving to everyone if you made the team because we don't want the other houses knowing about the fantastic Gryffindor team we'll have lined up." He grinned.
"Umm Harry!" I said frustrated. "I'm glad to know you've got your priorities right." I sobbed. "I can't feel anything below me neck because I'm in so much pain and your talking about quidditch! Bloody QUIDDITCH!"
"Aww Ginny breathe. You don't know what you’re saying. When men talk about quidditch, we can't help ourselves."
"MEN! You two are barely responsible children never mind men."
"I know what I can do!" Ron pulled out his wand and pointed it at my body. "Brackium Emendo"
"What are you doing!" I said as my eyes widened. But before Harry or I could stop him I could feel my bones dissolve from beneath my skin and my body became shapeless.
"Ron! What have you done?!" I yelled poking at my body. It had turned into stretchy flab.
"Where on earth did you learn that! That’s what that stupid Lockhart did to me." Harry shouted at him.
"WHAT!" I screamed, remembering what Harry had to go through. "Aw Merlin, My head's spinning. I feel sick." And I passed out for the second time. So...how was it... :S |
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Originally Posted by Morag [COLOR="Magenta"]I knew what her little game was- she wouldn't rest until everyone else was as miserable and boring as herself. Is it bad that I laughed at this? I'm still waiting for her to explain herself to Ginny. Quote:
We really needed someone good now that Fred and George had left school though.
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I spotted the little third year getting ready to swing his bat, making the bludger come straight at me. I thought I'd dodged it but before I knew, I was falling to the ground.
That little git! What did she ever do to him? They're not even trying out for the same position! Quote:
"Like you'd care." I heard Harry grunt.
 Get her! Get her! Quote:
"Umm Harry!" I said frustrated. "I'm glad to know you've got your priorities right." I sobbed. "I can't feel anything below me neck because I'm in so much pain and your talking about quidditch! Bloody QUIDDITCH!"
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Ron pulled out his wand and pointed it at my body. "Brackium Emendo"
"What are you doing!" I said as my eyes widened. But before Harry or I could stop him I could feel my bones dissolve from beneath my skin and my body became shapeless.
"Ron! What have you done?!" I yelled poking at my body. It had turned into stretchy flab.
"Where on earth did you learn that! That’s what that stupid Lockhart did to me." Harry shouted at him.
Is he MENTAL!?! Ron, Ron, Ron, when will you learn?
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awh man Ron is so stupid !!! Great chapter
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Originally Posted by emilyblack Is it bad that I laughed at this? I'm still waiting for her to explain herself to Ginny. No its not bad.  I think its Ginny's stuborn-ness..... We'll get to the explainations so enough Quote:
No one will be as good as them though... So true Quote:
That little git! What did she ever do to him? They're not even trying out for the same position!
 Aw Emily you crack me up! I think he was just getting into the game Quote:  Boys. *Shakes Head*
Tell me about it... *joins in shakin head* Quote:
Is he MENTAL!?! Ron, Ron, Ron, when will you learn?
I think he is! ! Quote:
Fantastic post, Sophie! Please PAMS! Thanks Emily!  I will soon. I've got a few wee ideas so I hope it will be sooner than before, but then again I have exams and everything so I'm trying to peel myself away from SS just for a few weeks! Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) awh man Ron is so stupid !!! Great chapter  Isn't he! Thanks Kerri
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Great post!!!
Hope Ginny is OK!!
K xx
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10-24-2010, 04:53 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Great post!!!
Hope Ginny is OK!!
K xx Thanks Katie  I'm sure she'll be fine. She's got Harry!
Soph x
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10-24-2010, 08:47 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Oooh interesting chapter!
RON! You idiot! How could you do that to your sister!?
Boys *shakes head*
PAMS!
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10-24-2010, 08:56 PM
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Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 Oooh interesting chapter!
RON! You idiot! How could you do that to your sister!? I think he was attempting to help- but like most things, it just turned out the wrong way. Quote:
Boys *shakes head*
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10-25-2010, 01:45 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Sophie. I enjoyed your post so much! Very well written. I hope the little third year is remorseful. And I hope Ginny still makes the team! Harry wouldn't not pick her would he? Quote:
I then heard a different voice. Hermione. She was panting. "Is she ok?"
"Like you'd care." I heard Harry grunt.
"Harry please. Not now! Is she ok? I tried to slow down her fall."
It's a good thing Hermione was there to slow down her fall. I do hope they can clear things up between them. Quote:
I cried the tears staining my face and my eyes welling up for another round of water works!
Sophie, I love the way you express your writing! Quote:
"Aww Ginny breathe. You don't know what you’re saying. When men talk about quidditch, we can't help ourselves."
"MEN! You two are barely responsible children never mind men."
 Loved this so much! And I'm sorry to say Ginny is correct. Quote:
"I know what I can do!" Ron pulled out his wand and pointed it at my body. "Brackium Emendo"
"What are you doing!" I said as my eyes widened. But before Harry or I could stop him I could feel my bones dissolve from beneath my skin and my body became shapeless.
"Ron! What have you done?!" I yelled poking at my body. It had turned into stretchy flab.
"Where on earth did you learn that! That’s what that stupid Lockhart did to me." Harry shouted at him.
"WHAT!" I screamed, remembering what Harry had to go through. "Aw Merlin, My head's spinning. I feel sick." And I passed out for the second time.
 I think, although I'm not sure really, that this is my favorite part. Ron was probably just trying to relieve Ginnys pain. And now, at least she can be moved without damaging anything. 
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10-25-2010, 02:50 AM
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Ahhiee! Wow.. When I first read about that kid I thought he was evil.. And I stand by that resolution.. HE'S EVIL!
Aww. Ginny, I'll slap all of the trio for you! They are a bunch of stubborn and foolish gits!
Lovely writing, and please, please, PLEASE don't kill off Ginny!!
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10-25-2010, 07:45 PM
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| Wish I Was In Florida! | The Avengers | Music | HP Boxset - my life since Xmas! | Luna Lovegood SOPHIE TOLD ME TO PUT UP THAT SHE HAS READ YOUR COMMENTS, SHE WAS IN CLASS TODAY HER INTERNET AT HOME IS NOT WORKING SHE HAS BEEN TRYING TO GET ON SINCE 6 O'CLOCK (its quarter to nine at night here) AND SHE WILL TRY TO REPLY SOON
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10-25-2010, 08:16 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
OK, thanks Katie. Tell her not to sweat it. We'll wait cause I'm sure it's happened to us before. |
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10-29-2010, 04:41 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Hey Ladies. I'm so sorry about the time it's taken me to reply... It not fair of me, but it couldn't be helped cause my internet died and I had to call in the internet doctor to fix it which was only today. I think I've been ofline for four days, which is a new record cause even when I was on holiday I managed to get internet access! Again Connie, Gabbeh, I'm sorry about the length of time its taken me to get back to you. Quote:
Originally Posted by Connie Hello Sophie. I enjoyed your post so much! Very well written. I hope the little third year is remorseful. You'll see more of him soon. Quote:
And I hope Ginny still makes the team! Harry wouldn't not pick her would he?
Of course he wouldn't.... Quote:
It's a good thing Hermione was there to slow down her fall. I do hope they can clear things up between them.
I think Hermone understands she was in the wrong but I don't think she should just have blanked Ginny either. After all, it was her that said that about Ginny... She's supposed to stick up for her, She's supposed to be her best friend... Quote:
Sophie, I love the way you express your writing!
Aw, Ta Connie Quote:  Loved this so much! And I'm sorry to say Ginny is correct. Oh I knows, I think she was in too much pain to comprehend what she was saying. Quote:
I think, although I'm not sure really, that this is my favorite part. Ron was probably just trying to relieve Ginnys pain. And now, at least she can be moved without damaging anything. His heart was in the right place Quote:
Great post Sophie! I can't wait to read your next. Thanks Connie! Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy Ahhiee! Wow.. When I first read about that kid I thought he was evil.. And I stand by that resolution.. HE'S EVIL! Aww Gabbeh, you crack me up big time Dear Quote:
Aww. Ginny, I'll slap all of the trio for you! They are a bunch of stubborn and foolish gits!
Nicly said Quote:
Lovely writing, and please, please, PLEASE don't kill off Ginny!!
Thank you Gabbeh.. Theres no chance of that happening anytime soon.... Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP SOPHIE TOLD ME TO PUT UP THAT SHE HAS READ YOUR COMMENTS, SHE WAS IN CLASS TODAY HER INTERNET AT HOME IS NOT WORKING SHE HAS BEEN TRYING TO GET ON SINCE 6 O'CLOCK (its quarter to nine at night here) AND SHE WILL TRY TO REPLY SOON Thanks for putting up the message Katie
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11-15-2010, 10:59 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Hey Everyone. I'm sorry I haven't posted in so long. I've been too busy and I've got exams and stuff. TBH, I'm finding SS a really big distraction so what I think I'll do is post sometime this week when I get the chance and then it will be about Christmas before I post again. I'm really sorry about the wait. I have evrthing wrote for a good bit, it's just trying to fit in the studying-Yuck *sticks tongue out at Mr.SQA.  * But I'm really really sorry for how long it has taken me and if I happen to have a sudden dissappearence from the site for a bit, please don't be too surprised.
Much love girls 
Soph x
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