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Confessions of a Death Eater


Ever wonder how Bellatrix Lestrange got to be such a wicked witch? What does she have to say about her most infamous crimes? And most importantly... does she regret anything? She left a letter behind that tells all...


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Thanks for reading! This is my third set of fanfiction. The world of Harry Potter belongs to the amazing J.K. Rowling, of course, not me. The picture above is my favorite shot of Bellatrix! If you look closely, you'll notice that I named some characters after Harry Potter actors For more info on that, you can go here: Character Names

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Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
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To Whom It May Concern:

If you’re reading this, that means I’m now deceased. My name was Bellatrix Lestrange. I hardly think you need clarification of who I am, though, since my list of crimes is so long. I lived and breathed to torture and kill others in the Dark Lord’s name. But that’s just one side of me. Was I always this evil? It’s story time, boys and girls!

Like every other young witch or wizard, I had to be home-schooled until I was eleven years old. Mum and Dad would always tell me that pure magical blood runs in our family. Not just any family, but the noble house of Black. To make them proud, I needed to marry a pure-blood wizard. The same went for my younger sisters, Andromeda and Narcissa.

When I was little, I asked Dad why this had to be so, and he simply said, “Because no Muggle man can handle a witch. Only a select handful of us in the world were gifted with magic. The rest of the world is useless. Look at the Muggle-borns. I’m positive that they steal their powers from someone else.”

I stared at him in childish disbelief. Not knowing any better, I replied, “I’ve been around Muggles and Muggle-borns before, and they don’t seem bad at all. How can you say that, Dad?”

“Bellatrix Electra Black, don’t you dare try to challenge what I say!” he yelled. “So help me, if you keep taking this path, we’ll never speak to you again. Am I clear?”

It was the angriest I’d ever seen him. I don’t know about you, but whenever my father raised his voice, I listened. From that time on, I convinced myself that what he said was true. Fathers are never wrong, right?

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Continuing the Black tradition, I wound up in Slytherin house during my days at Hogwarts. Lucius Malfoy became one of my few friends. He had long blond hair and a pale face that dared to say, I’m better than you and I know it. Of course, he reserved that look for the students outside of Slytherin. You had to be at least a half-blood to be sorted into our house, just like you would today.

After our first Defense Against the Dark Arts lesson, we walked out of the classroom together. “What did you think of Professor Deryn?”

“I think she taught us a load of rubbish,” Lucius drawled. “As if we have to learn to protect ourselves from dark magic. My parents promised to actually teach me some dark magic, and it sounds far more exciting.”

“My parents know a little bit of dark magic, too,” I admitted. “I guess it would be fun just to ask them about it.” I stood in thought for a moment. What kind of forbidden things could I learn? And ooh… the power…unlimited. It was so tempting.

Crowds were gathering in our hallway, and a Hufflepuff boy brushed past Lucius, knocking books out of his hands. Lucius hurried to pick them up off the floor. His cheeks were bright red.

“Oh, I’m so sorry, Malfoy!” the boy exclaimed. I recognized him from Charms class: Alan Carter. A Muggle-born.

“You watch where you’re going, Mudblood,” Lucius answered venomously.

My eyes widened. He didn’t just say that word. I wanted to say something, because I still couldn’t understand what made Muggle-borns unworthy. But to make Lucius happy, I warned Carter.

“You should consider yourself lucky that we’re not allowed to use magic in the halls, or he’d challenge you to a duel.” Besides, we were too young to know many spells. I tried my best menacing look, and Carter ran away.
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I’ve been thinking constantly about Draco. Dear, dear Draco. My nephew is every bit like his father: blond, pale-faced, wanting nothing more than to see the end of Muggle-born witches and wizards. As a member of the Death Eaters, he’s been doing some nasty things. Lately, though, I can see a change in him. For example, this past July, I saw how much he cringed when the Dark Lord killed Charity Burbage right in front of us at our meeting table, after which the snake ate her... Draco had never done or seen anything so horrible in his seventeen years of life.

The other day at Malfoy Manor, he asked, “Aunt Bella? Can I speak to you in private?” There was a real tone of concern in his words.

I was willing to help the boy, since he was the future of our family, and I knew it was my job to lead him in the right direction.

“Anything you want, Draco.” He led me into his bedroom and set out two chairs for us to sit on.

“You have to swear that you won’t tell a soul what I’m about to say,” he said cautiously. I took his hand and nodded. It would be unhealthy for him to keep something from me.

Draco sighed like he was about to drop a big bomb on me. “Do you ever wish that you didn’t become a Death Eater? That you could just be free to decide things for yourself instead of having someone else decide it for you? ‘Cause I’ve been feeling that way for a while. I really don’t know what to do about it.”

I stopped to ponder what he said. This, coming from the son of Lucius Malfoy? It couldn’t possibly be! When I saw the pleading stare in Draco’s eyes, I knew he wasn’t kidding. Here before me was a very scared and conflicted young man. What on earth was I going to tell him?

Eventually, I said in a harsh tone, “Draco, you should put that out of your head. If your Mum and Dad got wind of this, they would probably disown you faster than you can say ‘Slytherin’! Do you want to give them a heart attack by questioning their ways?”

“No… But… surely you’ve given it some thought yourself? Doesn’t everybody?”

“No, not everybody does that, and I’ve definitely done no such thing!” I protested adamantly. “Just be a good nephew and don’t mention this to me again.” My reply faintly echoed what my father told me when I was young. It kind of bothered me, to tell you the truth.

Resolved to listen to reason, Draco told me,“Thanks for listening, anyway. I like talking to you more than talking to Mum. You seem better at keeping secrets.”

That comment surprised me. “I do? You’re too kind. Although, I don’t know if that’s something to be proud of…”

He dismissed me from his room, and I went about the day like nothing happened.

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I really liked it! Poor Draco. I never thoght of Balla being a compassionate aunt. Its great tho! Pleez keep on writing!
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Draco, you need to know this tiiiiny detail about that conversation: I lied. I’ve thought about my choices more than I’d care to admit. Before you talked with me, I never used to think I had a choice. Mum and Dad made sure of that, not to mention that mean Muggle woman who called me “freakish”. Now, I see that I always had a choice. What would I have been like if I took Andromeda’s path, away from dark magic and the prejudice we have against Muggles? I’d be unbelievably different, for certain.

You’re probably wondering, does this mean you would take everything back if you could? Well, I suppose that’s exactly what I’m saying. But it’s going to get worse, because the Dark Lord won’t let up on his orders. My niece, Nymphadora Tonks, has fought me before. Next time we duel, I have to end her life. Why? Not only is she in the Order of the Phoenix, but she married a werewolf. Werewolves are much filthier than Muggles and Mudbloods, I assure you. And they’re expecting a child which is due later this month!

I don’t know who’s going to read this, but it’s worth writing all of it down on paper. Andromeda, I hope somehow you can forgive me for everything. You were shunned by your family, your husband was killed recently, and soon, I’ll take your daughter away from you. Will you try to remember me as the kind girl I once was? And while I’m at it, Neville Longbottom, will you accept my deepest apologies? I wish I could undo the damage I did to your parents. It must be terrible to have parents who don’t know who you are. You don’t need to forgive me. I wouldn’t forgive me.

Listen to me, Draco. I ran away from doing the right thing because I was scared out of it. That’s precisely what Lucius and Narcissa are doing to you. It’s far too late for me to go back, but it’s not too late for you. You’ll never understand how much remorse I’ve got locked up inside of me. This deadweight will burden me until my dying day, and it’s nothing short of torture. Save yourself from this feeling. Dare to be like your aunt Andromeda. See why I couldn’t let anybody find this until I was gone? Now you all know the truth. At least this made me feel somewhat less guilty.

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Aww!!!!!!!!! That's so sad! I luv it! This was an amzing fanfiction! She showed remorse. I luv how she apologizes to Neville!
So, is this ff over? If it is, this was one of the better ffs out there, and you deserve a Golden Goblin! If not, keep on writing!
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I really loved reading this! It's kinda hard to believe that Bellatrix had a good side, but you wrote it really well! Great job
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So... being the perfectionist that I am, I made some improvements to the whole fanfic. Nothing major to change the plot, but it just adds more detail to each scene. I think it looks much better now! Hope everybody had a fabulous Christmas, and have a great New Year
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