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10-23-2008, 02:33 AM
| | | When My Dream Became Reality - Sa16+ Hey guys here's my first attempt at a story. I actually wrote it back in 2002, but I didn't have the courage to post it until now. If I get positive responses back it won't take me long to post since it is finished...well unless I decide to change the ending a little bit.
Here's the first chapter, let me know what you think please. Even if you don't want to comment on the story, please let me know that you're reading this. As soon as someone posts saying anything I'll post a new chapter.
~Tori ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Chapter 1: The Best Woman For The Job Chapter 2: The Analyticum Potion Chapter 3: Imperius Chapter 4: Gossip Chapter 5: Butterflies Chapter 6: A New Arrival Chapter 7: The Nocturnal Adventures Of A Gryffindor Girl Chapter 8: Hagrid's Houseguest Chapter 9: Losing Control Chapter 10: The Aftermath Chapter 11: Experimenting Chapter 12: Solving The Puzzle Chapter 13: Strategy For Seduction Chapter 14: Werewolf In The Middle Chapter 15: Over The Edge Chapter 16: Great Minds Think Alike Chapter 17: Preparing For Battle Chapter 18: And Nothing Else Matters Chapter 19: Love's Sacrifice Chapter 20: Outwitting The Devil Chapter 21: Heroes Chapter 22: Fame And Glory Chapter 23: A Powerful Ingredient Chapter 24: The Joys Of Folklore Chapter 25: A New Challenge Chapter 26: Pin-Up Chapter 27: The Interview Chapter 28: Justice! Chapter 29: Heading For A Fall Chapter 30: Where Did We Go Wrong Chapter 31: Picking Up The Pieces Chapter 32: Encounter At Midnight Chapter 33: Matchmakers Chapter 34: Miracles Happen Chapter 35: The Wrath Of The Death Eater Chapter 35: The Wrath Of The Death Eater Continued Chapter 36: The Maltese Connection Chapter 37: Meet The Family Chapter 38: For Eternity Chapter 38: For Eternity Continued Chapter 39: The Banquet Chapter 39: The Banquet Continued Chapter 40: Girl Talk Chapter 41: The Confrontation Chapter 42: The Wedding Chapter 43: Interrupted Chapter 44: Epilogue ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Character List Tori Bloom: A tall, strawberry brown haired, hazel eyed, feisty 7th year Gryffindor. Tori is best friends with the golden trio and Shannon Richards. Shannon Richards: A petite, ash blonde haired, brown eyed, 6th/7th year Gryffindor. She just so happens to be best friends with Tori, Harry, Ron and Hermione. Harry Potter: Harry has all the same characteristics as J.K. has envisioned him to have; he is also one of Tori’s best friends and Shannon’s crush. Ron Weasley: The same as his character in the book, he is also one of Tori and Shannon’s best friends; he treats them like they were his sisters. Hermione Granger: The same bushy haired, scholarly student as J.K. portrays her as; she is also best friends with Harry, Ron, Tori and Shannon. Severus Snape: The same dark and mysterious character that J.K. Rowling has created, but does he have a soft side? Draco Malfoy: Begins as J.K. Rowling created him, but with a possible twist. Bill Weasley: A very talented Auror. Hagrid, Headmaster Dumbledore, Professor McGonagall, Professor Flitwick,Alastor Moody, Molly, Fred, and George Weasley: Just as J.K. Rowling depicts them in the books. Including Fred and George running their joke shop.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Chapter 1: The Best Woman for the Job The Gryffindor colors decorated the Great Hall. Their House had – yet again – won the house cup this year. Amidst the festivities of another year ending, Tori Bloom sat rather quietly at the end of the table. Next to her, Hermione, Ron and Harry were making the most of their last meal at Hogwarts, as their seven years of education had finally come to an end. She envied her classmates. They all knew precisely what they were going to do after today: Hermione would go on to study at the University, Ron would go work with his father at the Ministry and Harry would go straight to Alastor Moody to begin his Auror training. Even Neville had found a way to make use of his talent: he was to become a healer. Only the brightest student in decades did not know what tomorrow would bring. She didn’t even know what she would like to do with her life. The only thing she could come up with was that she wanted to remain studying for the rest of her life.
Just the thought of having to leave Hogwarts! It had been a safe haven for years, especially now, when it was very likely the final battle with Voldemort would only be a heartbeat away. His power had continuously increased over the last years he had begun to ‘free the wizarding world from the tainted muggle blood’. As a result, the entire Creevey family had been wiped out in a Death Eater raid on their house during the Christmas break, as to make sure that the children were there as well. The left open spaces at the Gryffindor table were an all too sad reminder of their absence. But it wasn’t just Gryffindor that had suffered. Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw had dealt with their own losses and even…
Her gaze went to the Slytherin table. Only half of the students that had begun their school year in September were sitting at their House table. She shivered when she thought of the events leading up to the exit of so many students. During this last school year, Voldemort had finally found a way to get to Harry. Or at least, that’s what he had thought. The Dark Lord had lured Harry to his lair, pretending he had revived Lily Potter to become his bride and mother to his heir. Before anyone could point out to Harry that this would be very unlikely, he had enraged in an outburst to go rescuing his mother. Poor Harry! Still, so much longing for his family, that only the tiniest bit of hope would blind him of the obvious. He had almost paid with his sanity to learn that some things just weren’t meant to be.
Fortunately, their much-despised Potion Master had been present at the time. Before Voldemort could make Harry undergo a Dementor’s Kiss, Professor Snape had jumped on top of Harry and apparated with him to Hogsmeade. By doing so, he had completely blown his cover of being a spy for Dumbledore, after finally regaining Voldemort’s trust last summer. As a result, the other Death Eaters found it no longer useful to hide and the Head of Slytherin became their enemy number 2 (after Harry that was). By revealing their true colors, sides were taken once and for all, and the children of the Death Eater-families had left Hogwarts. They hadn’t seen Malfoy, Crabbe, Goyle, Parkinson and other Slytherin scum since.
Although it was a relief to have everything out in the open, it was all too clear that it had affected Dumbledore in a severe way. He had always hoped that he could rescue the children of the Death Eaters from their parents’ ways, but it seemed like all efforts had been in vain. Dumbledore had addressed the other Houses on the situation and asked them not to take things out on the Slytherins that remained. Apparently not all of them were as bad as the likes of Malfoy. After all, even a few Ravenclaws left to join their family at Voldemort’s side and thinking about Peter Pettigrew…he had been Gryffindor!
She suddenly realized she had wandered off and was about to lose herself in a very un-festive melancholy contemplation. Just then, Harry stood up and went to the head table. He started a conversation with Professor Snape and it looked like they were shooting glances at her while doing so. What on earth could they be talking about? After all, although Snape had rescued Harry from a fate worse than death, he would always be their least favorite teacher.
Oh well, deciding that she would at least have some pleasant memories of her last night at Hogwarts, she took another piece of chocolate cake and turned to Ron.
“So, are you planning on a holiday or will you start immediately at the Ministry?” she asked him.
“Well, given the situation with Voldemort, I don’t think it would be proper to go off on a holiday, do you?”
“Right, of course, how could I be so insensitive? No one will probably take a holiday for ages I guess.”
“Yeah…Tori, what’s the matter? You look like you’re about to burst into tears? How is that possible with exam results like yours?” Ron rolled his eyes.
She finally managed a little smile.
“OK. No matter how terrible things will get, we will always have our school results to hang onto” she chuckled.
“Right on!” Ron winked. He knew Tori was preoccupied with her future. Well, everyone was these days, especially since it wasn’t sure that they would HAVE a future.
Now! That really was some gloomy thinking. He saw Harry returning from the head table, with Dumbledore by his side. They were heading for Tori. Ron sort of knew what was going on and he smiled, knowing that his friend’s most pressing troubles would soon be over with.
“Miss Bloom, could you follow me to my office for a moment, please?” Dumbledore smiled gently.
“Oh, sure Professor.” Puzzled, she followed the older wizard to his study and found herself alone with him. She was unsure of what was going to come. Surely she wouldn’t be in any trouble? Not on her last day!
“Child, I do think I know just about everything concerning the future careers of my graduates. Except…” a little pause and a slight twinkle in his eye, “except for your plans, of course.”
It had sounded like a question and Tori did not know the answer to this one. Finally caught!
“Well…em…sir, I …em…well I don’t quite know what I want to do.” There was some despair in her voice.
“Now, now, no need to panic just yet, Miss Bloom! After all, your options are so numerous, it’s most understanding you have some difficulties in reaching a decision.”
She gave him a pensive look. Just what was going on in the Headmaster’s head? As if anyone would ever know that one!
“I won’t tease you much longer, my child. I have a proposition for you. Please hear me out until I have explained everything.”
She nodded, getting curious to hear what he had to say.
“You know of course that Professor Snape had succeeded in infiltrating the close circle around Voldemort. Regaining his trust made it possible for him to observe him closely. He found out something rather peculiar. No, Miss Bloom, what I am about to tell you, is only known to myself, Professor Snape, Alastor Moody and Harry, so I trust you will keep this a secret.”
After waiting for her to nod, he continued:
“It seems our Dark Lord has a little problem in maintaining his magical powers. Professor Snape has remarked that whenever Voldemort used his power, he drank a potion afterwards, as to replenish it. Unfortunately, he was not trusted enough to brew this potion. But, luckily for us, he has succeeded in capturing a sample of it. Besides his teaching and his work for the Ministry, Professor Snape will devote his time on finding out what the ingredients of this potion are and will attempt to brew an antidote so that Voldemort can be weakened. It is then up to our Aurors to defeat him. As this is a very complex task – we are not dealing with a simple headache potion – he will need some assistance. We had been thinking of you.”
Tori swallowed. This was pretty amazing. A lot to take in at once, but she could already feel the adrenaline running through her veins, just thinking about the research and experiments. Most of all, she could stay at Hogwarts! Even having to work near Snape was worth it.
“Oh, Professor Dumbledore!! I’d love to! I cannot believe you thought of me!” she smiled widely and her delight was reflected on her face.
“He did not Miss Bloom…I did.” A dark and silky voice came from behind her.
She was startled and looked at the door. Professor Severus Snape had entered the room just to overhear the end of the conversation. She forced herself to look up into his black eyes and tried not to let the growing feeling of uneasiness get the better of her. Okay, she had to work with him, but WITH him was not the same as being his student. So she should not let herself be intimidated by him. After all, if he had chosen her for the job, he had just given her the best compliment she had ever received from a teacher!
“I’m flattered sir, that you should think of a Gryffindor to assist you in such a delicate matter,” she had spoken before she could stop herself. She noticed a slight sadness in his eyes, no doubt thinking about his House in shambles, before the usual coldness came back.
“As you are well aware of the fact that you are second in your class this year, it should not have been a surprise to you, Miss Bloom.” A Snape-like sneer as usual.
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That was so cute!
I'm sorry it took me a while to catch up on reading. Padfoot = lack of computer. I haven't even had time to write on my story. =/
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WELLL. I just read your story, and i must say i LOVED it!! It was Ah-maz-ing.  Well...i guess im here at the end...so there might not be much of a piont to me being here...but i AM here...so HI *wave* well...PAMS!!!!
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| I will always welcome new readers. I'm not sure how soon I will be able to post again. I'm in the middle of packing, my hubby and I just got a new place, and we get to move in this weekend. If all goes well, I will try to get a post in, if not this week, then early next week.
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| Whenevers good aslong as theres a post lol x xLillyx
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03-08-2009, 04:43 PM
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| Chapter 39 Part 1 Hey guys, I feel really bad for leaving you for so long without a post. Thanks for being so patient. I've finally got thing a bit more under control in my lift. I've just got a lot of unpacking to do. Moving is expensive and tough work. Here's a long awaited post from the story. Sorry it's kinda short. I hope you enjoy anyway.
~Tori ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Chapter 39: The Banquet A portkey had transported them from the patio to the front doorstep of a large villa near the sea. Severus waved his wand to open the front door, scooped Tori up into his arms and carried her inside.
“Welcome to my humble house…our house.” He corrected.
Nothing could have prepared her for what was inside. She found it normal for the palacio to be filled with all kinds of expressive antique furniture and decorations, but to see this in her own house was a bit much for her. Her eyes bugged out when he gave her a tour around the house. Each and every room was decorated in a different style. The library was definitely Victorian; the bathroom Roman, the kitchen Art deco, the living room Medieval and the sitting room looked like a scene from the Arabian Nights. The master bedroom had a large iron bed, covered with black satin sheets. One side of the bedroom had a glass sliding door, looking out on the sea. Just outside the room, on a patio, there was a bubble bath. Severus noticed Tori’s look of longing and he chuckled.
“I thought you might appreciate a little comfort.”
She smiled at him. “Right, this house is so back-to-basics I wouldn’t survive without a bubble bath.”
He looked puzzled. “You don’t like it? It’s too much?”
She hugged him. “It’s perfect. I’ve always dreamt of a house like this. It’s a shame we will only be here for a few months each year.”
“Yes, but as a compensation, we will extend the house with one room every year, the prospect of decorating it can give you something to dream about when we’re at Hogwarts.”
“Mmm, I look forward to it. I guess the room for the baby will be at the top of the list.”
He stiffened. “I didn’t think of that, there are no facilities for a baby here!” he seemed to panic a little.
“Relax Severus, the baby is not due until July, which is 7 months away, so I’m sure we’ll come up with something.”
“Sure, but what was I thinking? A house near the cliffs? I’ll have to put some charms up to prevent our child from wandering off.”
She hadn’t quite thought about that. Come to think of it…the location of the house was quite spectacular, being on top of a cliff, but definitely not suited for children.
However, plans for the future could wait. It was after all their wedding night and Tori was hoping he had other things on his mind; she sure did!
She got out of her dress, opened the sliding doors, stepped into the bubble bath and gave him a seductive smile.
“I think this house needs to be inaugurated. Shall we begin with the bubble bath?”
By the next morning, they had covered all of the rooms and finally fell asleep in the Arabian-style sitting room. They spent two days and nights in heaven, never feeling the need to leave the house. By the time they had to go back, Tori had quite a few wonderful memories of the place and the sheer thought of the bubble bath made her blush.
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| hehe bubble bath lol!
so good and worth the wait lol x xLillyx
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03-09-2009, 07:17 PM
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Bubbly bath? Sounds neat!!!! LoL!!!! I sooo wish I could move out of the place I rent now; it was such a bad choice! Anyway...PAMS!!!!!!
-Angie-
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| Chapter 39 Continued Hey guys, sorry it took so long to post this. I had to write it, plus I'm still writing a bit more. I've gotta wrap up the loose ends. Let me know what you think.
~Tori ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Chapter 39: The Banquet continued As they stepped into the fireplace he tilted his head, looked her over and said:
“Ready to face the real world?”
She groaned. “Ready as I’ll ever be. I hope they don’t fall over themselves congratulating us.”
“No one knows.”
“What?”
“I asked Harry and Ron not to tell anyone. They said they would comply with my wishes.”
“Does this mean that you don’t want anyone to know?”
“I only thought WE should be the one’s to announce our marital status.”
“Oh, fine by me, just let me know when YOU feel the time is right.”
He grinned at her, not letting her irritation get to him; he knew she’d rather stay here, which made him very happy.
“Hogwarts, Snape’s room!” He called and they disappeared.
When they got out of the fireplace, they noticed that they were late and rushed to the Great Hall.
Upon their entrance, they were greeted by a round of applause. It looked like, apart from all students, staff and ghosts, nearly half the wizarding world had squeezed into the Hall. Arthur Weasley led them to their places at the Head Table, next to Dumbledore. He was already waiting to award them the Order of Merlin and began his speech.
Tori was a bit nervous, standing in front of such a large audience and she hardly heard the words of praise from the Headmaster. Finally he called out:
“I hereby welcome into the Order of Merlin, First Class: Professor Severus Snape and Professor Tori Bloom!”
Before anyone could burst out in cheers, Severus had signaled that he wanted to say something.
“Actually Albus, I feel I have to correct you. It’s Mr. and Mrs. Snape.”
The entire Hall went silent, not a sound was heard and all but Harry and Ron stared in total astonishment at the couple, while Dumbledore’s eyes twinkled.
Then Severus took Tori in his arms, swept her off her feet and planted a firm kiss on her lips. As she wrapped her arms around his neck and their kiss deepened, all hell broke loose in the Great Hall. The “ooh’s” and “aah’s” from the students could be heard all over the castle and it was the start of a night of unseen celebration.
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| LOL SO GOOD! hehe and he told them all straight away Tori should be proud of her man xLillyx
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| Chapter 40 Part 1 Hey guys sorry it took so long. I still don't have internet up and running at my new place. Here's a bit from the next chapter. I hope you enjoy. Sorry it's so short. I'll hopefully be able to post more soon.
~Tori ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Chapter 40: Girl Talk The rest of the term flew by for everyone. Tori and Severus’s relationship kept improving, with them only getting into a few fights, but always making up. To them it seemed like everything was finally falling into place. Soon enough it was time to put the finishing touches on Draco and Shannon’s wedding plans.
“I can’t believe I’m finally getting married next week.” Shannon told Tori in an extremely excited voice.
“Me neither. I can honestly say that last year during my 7th year, I never would have been able to imagine myself married and pregnant and you on your way down the isle, just one year later. It seems odd, but it has worked for us, so I can’t complain.
“I know, me too. It’s weird how everything worked out for us, despite the bit of drama on the way.”
“It was worth it in the end. If Severus hadn’t gone to the Malfoy’s that day to trade out the potions, I never would have had to create a potion to bring him back to me. That means that Fawkes would have not been able to help us with Severus’ problem, and I wouldn’t be expecting this bundle of joy.” Tori told Shannon as she put her hands on her overly large stomach and grinning like a crazy woman.
“Ooh, the baby kicked. Give me your hand, you have to feel this. I swear, the closer I get to my due date the more active this baby becomes.”
“Holy…how do you even get through the day when they’re this active? Can you even sleep at night?” Shannon squealed as soon as she put her hands on Tori.
“Honestly it depends on the night, most of the time the baby cooperates with my sleep schedule. When the baby becomes too active at night, I’m usually able to catch some sleep during my breaks from classes.”
“I don’t think I’d be able to handle that, but time will tell. I’m sure that Draco will want a child or two, you never know what the future will bring.”
“That’s for sure, who would have guessed we would all end up this way.” Tori said with a smile on her face.
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| aww cute! can't wait for more pams when u can lol xLillyx
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| Chapter 41 Hey guys, sorry it's taken me so long to post. I had a bad case of writers block. Here's the next instalment. I'm actually almost done writing now. Let me know what you think of it.
~Tori ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Chapter 41: The Confrontation Tori awoke later than usual today, having been up most of the night due to the fact that her unborn child decided to treat her stomach like a soccer ball. When she glanced to the other side of the bed she realized that Severus had already gotten up for the day and had left her a note on his pillow.
Picking up the note she couldn’t help but smile at his handwriting, and began to read it. Good morning beautiful. I didn’t have the heart to wake you. I know you had been up most of the night. I had to leave early to assist Draco with final wedding preparations. Ah…the life of the Best Man, my job is never fully done. I sent your dress over to the Burrow already so you could get ready with Shannon. Goodness knows she will need your assistance. I will see you soon.
I Love You,
Severus
After reading the note Tori got out of bed and prepared for the rest of her morning. She had yet to get a floo call from Shannon so she believed that she couldn’t be too nervous about the wedding that afternoon. After getting ready she grabbed her wand and purse and began her walk out of the castle and down to the apparation point.
Upon apparating to the Burrow, Tori was greeted with a stressed looking Hermione walking out of the back door and into the garden.
“Tori, why did you stop writing to me?”
Tori just stood there, not quite sure what to say to the witch she had spent so much time with while in school together.
Hermione continued when she realized that Tori wasn’t going to respond right away.
“I could have tried to assist you with defeating Voldie-butt and bringing Snape back to you sooner.” Hermione scolded her like she was a child.
“I would have, but at the time I didn’t think about it because of everything that was going on. Plus I thought you would be too busy.” Tori said back, oddly feeling like she had to explain herself to her friend and former classmate.
“I’m never too busy to help out my friends. I would have put my studies on hold, however reluctantly I am to do so. But I would have come here and helped you guys had I known. I had to find out about everything that has happened in one of Ron’s letters. You know how he is when he writes letters. It takes him forever to remember to write down the important things. He waited until his most recent letter to do so, even asking me to come with him to Shannon and Draco’s wedding.” Hermione continued to rant, her face slightly becoming red with her effort. “I didn’t even know that they were getting married until he asked me a week ago. Can you believe it? They’ve been engaged for like eight months and I never knew it. I would have tried to knock some sense into that girl. I mean, seriously, marrying Draco Malfoy. Has he really changed that much?” At her last question, Hermione finally calmed down enough to await a response from a married and very very pregnant Tori.
“Yes, Hermione, he really has changed that much. He came to us for help at the beginning of the year. Once Severus tricked Voldemort into lifting the Accio spell he had on him, he helped us finally win the war. He was there for me while Severus was injured. He helped me get through everything. Plus, he was extremely supportive of my marriage to Severus and our pregnancy. Does an old school grudge really mean that much to you that you can’t put your feelings aside and move on from the past?” Tori looked at her like she had multiple heads on her shoulders. It was hard for her to believe that the woman that graduated head of her class in everything, barely beating Tori herself in grades was going to be that narrow-minded about the situation.
“I still can’t believe that you and Severus got married, let alone are having a child together. I must have missed a whole lot with being at Uni for the past year. I will try to leave my old opinions behind me, I trust you to have a good opinion of these two gentlemen. It’s just hard to believe that they changed so much in the past year, compared to what I experienced for the past seven years.”
“People do change Hermione.”
“I know, it will just take some getting used to I guess.”
“I understand. Oh, look at the time, I have to go inside and finish getting ready for the wedding. I’ll talk to you again at the reception.” Tori said in a hurry as she rushed into the Burrow. It had been so nice of Mrs. Weasley to offer to host the wedding there. They really did consider Shannon to be a part of the family.
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| really good chapie, i like what you did with Hermione, ur right despite being really clever she's really narrow minded lol, its good to see a post no matter how long it takes x xLillyx
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Hogwarts RPG Name: kate tabetha williams Graduated | ok i just found this storie today. finished all. & I LOVE IT!!!!! its the best fanfics i have ever read. but i do have a question how many more chapters are there??? PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!!!
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| Lilly it's so great to see your still reading. I fear that some of the others haven't stuck with it. Oh well.
Welcome to Harrypottercutie101, I'm still trying to finish the rest of the story but it's looking like there's somewhere between 2-5 chapters left. It depends on if my muse strikes me and where she takes me with everything. I'm glad that you've enjoyed what I've written so far.
I'll try to post again soon.
~Tori
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06-03-2009, 12:05 AM
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I'm still here! Great chapter but I gotta agree with Lilly, Hermione always was narrow-minded (to tell you the truth I never really liked her until the last book where she got tortured by Bellatrix). Though she does have a point there, it's hard to believe how much Severus changed!!! Anyway please post soon again!!!!! 
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06-03-2009, 10:52 AM
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I'm sorry Tori for only reading this now... I've been ''held up'' all morning... I'm out with my BF... I love it though... I love the letter and Hermione's back! LOL at the Voldie- butt... Can't wait until Draco's wedding... I hope nothing happens!!
Abi... xox
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06-12-2009, 08:20 PM
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Sorry about the missed chapters...but they were great.! Lovedddd it. Tori and Snape are so cute together...it "Awwwwh" worthy.
PAMS!
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07-29-2009, 10:35 AM
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| Chapter 42 Hey, here's the next chapter. Next one should appear tomorrow, if I wake up before the library closes. Please let me know what you think.
~Tori ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Chapter 42: The Wedding The back yard at the Burrow was filled to nearly bursting with guests for the Malfoy-Richards wedding. Shannon didn’t even know some of them, most were family, friends and people they attended school with. While the majority of the guests were there to wish them well, there were a certain number of people there out of sheer curiosity.
The music began to play quietly as the curtain parted in the back and a very pregnant Tori escorted by Severus, followed by Ginny and Harry, then Luna and Ron. All of the bridesmaids looked wonderful in their black halter styled dresses.
The next to enter was the very adorable Victoire Weasley, Bill and Fleur’s daughter, toddling out wearing a long white dress with a red sash swinging a little basket that was filled with red and white rose petals.
The curtain had closed after Victoire had begun her walk down the isle. As she made her way to the front row of seats where her mother was sitting the music changed and the curtain was drawn back again.
Shannon entered the tent escorted by her father Joel. She looked magnificent in her white a-line floor length dress. It had very intricate beading over the bust, the lace capped sleeves and going down the front of the dress. In other words, she looked like a princes walking toward her prince. She couldn’t take her eyes off of Draco, just as he couldn’t seem to look away from her.
In Draco’s opinion, he had never seen anything or anyone as beautiful as she did today, but that could have been a biased opinion. It seemed like Shannon was walking towards him in slow motion, but in all actuality they were so focused on each other that they blocked out everyone else. When Shannon finally got to the end of the isle Draco met her. Her father lifted her veil, gave her a kiss on her cheek and passed her right hand to Draco.
Looking into each other’s eyes they each saw the love they had for each other reflected back at them. Turning towards the alter, they walked up the steps and faced Albus Dumbledore who had been honored when they had asked him if he would marry them.
“Beloved guests we are gathered here today to join the wizard Draco Abraxus Malfoy and witch Shannon Elizabeth Richards in marriage. If there is anyone here who can present a valid reason for them not to be joined, speak now or be forever silent.”
Not a single sound was heard from all of the guests gathered at the wedding. All of them knew that the couple was madly in love with each other; even the few jealous witches in the back that wanted Draco for themselves dared not say anything for fear of being hexed by everyone else in attendance.
“The rings please, Severus.” Albus requested of the best man. “It is with tradition that we ask the gods for their blessings over your rings and your marriage. View these rings as a symbol of your continued love for each other. May it never end and never lessen through the years.”
“Shannon, if you would please.” Albus stated, indicating that she should pick up Draco’s ring and place it on his finger.
“Do you, Draco Malfoy, accept this witch as your wife? Will you love her, honor her, be faithful to her and keep her all the days of your life?” Albus asked.
“I will.” Draco said softly.
“Now Draco, your turn.” With that said, Draco picked up Shannon’s ring and slid it onto her finger.
“Do you, Shannon Richards, accept this wizard as your husband? Will you love him, honor him, be faithful to him and keep him all the days of your life?”
“I will.” She replied.
“With the power given to me by the Ministry of Magic, I now pronounce you husband and wife. You may now kiss the bride, Mr. Richards”
Everyone in attendance began to cheer when Draco and Shannon kissed each other. When their lips broke apart they turned around and faced their friends and family, with their hands held tightly together.
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07-29-2009, 12:15 PM
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| awwwwwwww so cute loved the dress description ! its been sooo long since a post but it was sooo worth the wait ! x xLillyx
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07-30-2009, 12:24 AM
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| | Gnome
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| Thanks Lilly. I'm so glad that you've stuck with me after all this time. Thank you for being so patient. I'm putting together the epilogue right now. I'm using my mother-in-law's computer to get the internet. I'm going to try to head up to the library later to upload the next chapter but it might not be until I get to work tomorrow. TTYL.
~Tori
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08-02-2009, 12:15 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Hailey James Wood Fourth Year | Magnificent Malfoy Weasleyed: By the Twins
CAUGHT UP!!!
and it was adorable. XD
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08-04-2009, 11:53 PM
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| Chapter 43 Hey guys, here's the next chapter. Let me know what you think.
~Tori ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Chapter 43: Interrupted Directly following the wedding all of the guests were greeted by a change of scenery. The tent disappeared as well as the chairs, and alter. In its place appeared a dance floor surrounded by around 30 tables and chairs for the guests to sit in.
Everyone in attendance looked with shock at the amount of food set upon the buffet table that Mrs. Weasley had created with the help of Fleur and Ginny.
Off to the side of the dance floor there was a table set up with large speakers. Behind it was Lee Jordan; he was their lovely DJ and MC for the night.
As the guests finished up their food Lee announced that it was time for Shannon and Draco’s first dance. The song that began playing truly shocked Shannon. It was “Bless the Broken Road” by Rascal Flatts, which was an American muggle band.
“Draco, honey, I didn’t know that you listened to muggle music.” Shannon stated in confusion.
“It never came up in conversation before. What with us fighting for our lives and helping get rid of Moldie-butt.”
“Is there anything else that I would want to know about you that I don’t know yet? My dear husband.”
“I like the sound of that.” Draco told her, getting slightly sidetracked from the main question. “Well, my lovely wife, getting back to your question. There is nothing off the top of my head that I can think of that you don’t already know. You’ll be the first to know if I think of anything though.”
As the song came to a close and a new one began, the couple was joined by the rest of their wedding party. They were informed by Lee that it was tradition for the wedding party to dance the second song together. Tori later informed them that it was an American Muggle tradition.
Halfway through the song Tori stopped moving. She just stood there as a trickle of hot fluid ran down the inside of her legs. Her eyes widened as the first, dull cramp rolled through her belly, tightening her abdomen painfully.
”Severus!” She gasped his name as she stood there clutching her belly while a small puddle began to form around her feet.
“Yes, dear…” He said as he removed his head from her hair and moved back a step from her.
Tori looked down while still grabbing her stomach hoping that Severus would be smart and figure it out for himself so that she would be able to concentrate through the pain of the contractions that she was having.
“What…did you wet yourself?”
“No, stupid! My water broke, I’m in labor, and the baby is coming.” She said. It took a moment for her words to register and then Severus flew into action.
Severus left Tori standing there as he apparated home and grabbed her bag. He was back standing in front of her in less than a minute. He then ran over to the rest of the wedding party and told them what was happening.
“Severus, dear, you must bring her inside and use our floo to get to St. Mungo’s immediately. Don’t worry about anything other than getting our Tori there safe and sound.” Molly told him, having overheard his announcement. That woman sure did know everything when it happened. It was as if she had Fred and George’s extendable ears everywhere making it possible for her to be in the know.
“Thank you Molly.” Severus told her as he began guiding Tori towards the house and the awaiting fireplace. Shortly after they stepped into the hospital waiting room.
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