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Old 08-19-2006, 03:44 AM
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“No-o-o-o!” Everything faded to black.

Hermione couldn’t believe this was happening, not to her anyway. Why had she let her guard down? She had been utterly stupid. They had came from everywhere. She had been talking to Harry when the Death Eaters had descended upon them all. She had been trapped by McNabb and Goyle when she saw that Draco had been captured and was now kneeling in execution style on the ground in front of Lucius. She knew what was about to happen and she would not let the man that she loved die at the hands of that evil git. Loved? Where had that come from? She would have to deal with that realization later. She needed to get to Draco and fast!

“Luna, Ginny!” she screamed, “I need help!”

Luna and Ginny rounded the corner with wands raised.

“Expelliarmus,” they both shouted and the Death Eaters were removed of their wands.

“Thanks,” she called over her shoulder as she ran to help Draco.

The closer she got the more she could hear Lucius screaming about how Draco was a disappointment to him and Voldemort.

“How could you do this to me in front of the Dark Lord? I did not think I had raised a gutless little snit. I also have been told that you are in love with that filthy little mudblood. You sicken me. This is not easy for me and I would have had things turn out differently, but you left me no choice.” Lucius sneered.

“It is you who sickens me, Father. I realized a long time ago, Lucius, that I did not want to be like you. So, I went to Dumbledore and told him every thing that I knew. And as far as Hermione is considered, yes I love her and you would do well to keep her name from your lips. It does not need to be dirtied by the likes of you,” Draco spat defiantly.

“Your mother shall miss you,” Lucius’s voice trembled as he said those last words and began to lift his wand to finish the chore that Voldemort had set aside for him.

“Ava….” Lucius started.

“No-o-o-o!” Hermione yelled as she jumped in front of Draco and took the blast that was intended for him.

She was dead. What in Merlin’s name had she been thinking! She should have just used expelliarmus, but n—o, she had to go and jump in front of the darn thing. How incredibly stupid, especially after she had heard Lucius say that Draco had loved her and he had admitted it.

Draco loved her. The same Draco, who had called her mudblood many times over and found any way possible to make her and her friends life a living hell.

The truth that she loved him too was more than she could bear. It was then that she realized she would never again get to see those silver-blue eyes looking at her longingly or the flash of a smile as he tried to hide it from her with a smirk. All those little things made sense now. She had taken them to mean his disdain for her, but he was covering so his friends wouldn’t know the only real dirty little secret that Draco had. He loved Hermione Granger.

They would have ridden him to no end she thought, but now they need never know. She wondered what it would have been like to be held in his tight embrace and have him whispering words of love for only her to hear. She would never get to taste his lips or feel the sweet surrender when she would have finally given herself to him. She had taken everything she could have had and thrown it away because she didn’t think. Now Draco would love and marry someone else.

I am glad I won’t be there to see it, she thought.

“Granger.” She heard a whisper.

Who is whispering my name? She thought.

“Granger!” This time it was a yell.

As if the building that she had been standing by had fallen on her, an immense pain filled her head. It seemed the feeling was coming back into her body and she could now smell the acrid stench of burned flesh and she felt as if someone were holding her tight and whispering her name over and over. It also seemed to be raining. As she opened her eyes, there he stood. He was the one holding her and wasn’t letting anyone get near. She could hear him saying something over and over. As her head began to clear she could make out what he was saying.

“Oh lord Granger; please don’t leave me in this place. I would gladly take your place instead of being left here alone. Why did you have to do this to us?” he continued to cry.

“Malfoy, you need to let us have her body. We need to go, before any more come along,” Harry pleaded.

“Thanks for the support, but I think I can manage for myself Harry,” Hermione grunted.

Draco’s grip relaxed long enough to look into her face to make sure he wasn’t dreaming and then pulled her even tighter.

Hermione laughed, “Draco dear, they might not have finished me off, but if you don’t let me go I may suffocate.”

“Sorry I didn’t real….Did you just call me dear?” he questioned.

“We’ll talk about it later, right now we need to get out of here and back to the village. Can you give me a hand up please?” She asked, holding her hand out to Draco. He helped ease her up from off the ground.

On the way back to the village the others noticed that Hermione and Draco weren’t insulting each other as much and gave them questioning looks. Once they arrived at the village they met up with Fred and George, who eyed Malfoy suspiciously.

“What’s that git doing here?” Fred asked.

“We ran across him right before his execution and Hermione thought she’d save his sorry hide,” pouted Ron. Ginny and Luna covered their knowing grins.

“We‘ve already secured the village might as well head on to the Burrow,” George said.

“Come on Malfoy we’ll find you a place to sleep and get you some food. Then we want some answers,” stated Harry.

Hermione also had a few questions that she wanted answered, but for now there was no time.
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It has been wonderful recieving all the nice comments but I am afraid it has to end. I feel there is more to tell, so I may continue later with a sequel. So thanks again and enjoy the story.






Two years later, Hermione and Draco were celebrating their one year wedding anniversary. Everyone was there. There was food and dancing. It was wonderful until there was an emergency flare sent up over the village.

“Everyone inside, men into the kitchen,” Lupin ordered.

Molly, Hermione, Ginny and Luna started making coffee for them all.

“What or who do you think it is, Harry?” Ron asked.

“I don’t know, but we need to go soon.” Harry replied.

Lupin thought for a moment. “Alright, Harry, Ron, Draco, and Neville, will check out the west side. Fred, George, Arthur and myself will check out the east. The rest will split into two groups to search the north and the south. We will meet at the statue in the village square. Everyone understand what they are to do?”

“What about us?” Hermione, Ginny and Luna chimed in.

“Sweetheart,” he said “It won’t take long. Go ahead and open the anniversary presents from everyone and by the time we get back, you won’t even realize we’ve been gone,” Draco said lovingly.

“Only if you open yours before you go,” she said fearfully.

“I won’t be gone for long. I left your present in Ginny’s room in your suitcase. We’ll open them together when I get back,” he kissed her on the forehead as the men went out the door.

Midnight had come and gone with no sign of Draco. It was a long and nervous wait. All she could do was pace the floor. Mrs. Weasley had drifted off to sleep in her rocker while Ginny and Luna waited at the table for the men to return.

A little after four in the morning they could hear someone approaching. Molly was awoken and went to the door. As she opened it Harry and Ron carried someone in and put them on the table. She couldn’t see who it was through all the people. As she drew closer there was no mistaken the platinum blonde hair. She rushed to his side.

“Draco… Can you hear me love? What happened? ” Hermione cried.

With what little strength he had he answered.

“We got to the village to find that is was a trap,” he sneered “Lucius and the rest of the Death Eaters were waiting for us. Father tried to get me to rejoin them and when I denied the Dark Lord and said I was where I belonged, he said that the name Malfoy was wasted on me. The next thing I knew I was on my way back home. Lord how I love the sound of that, home,” he had spoken so softly. He could barely breathe.

“What happened to Lucius?” questioned Hermione

“He won’t bother anyone again. I took care of it for you,” Ron nodded.

Draco held out his hand and she took it in hers. Giving it a squeeze, he began to speak again.

“Hermione, my love, I want you to know that I have always loved you above all others and I’m afraid that I’m not going to be able to stay. I wanted to grow old with you but the fates have chosen a different path for me I’m afraid.”

“My love, please let’s not talk of this. I have to give you your present,” she reached down and whispered into his ear.

“Thank you. You gave me a chance to prove that I could amount to something and I have at least helped make the world a little safer for it.” As he spoke, his breathing became more and more difficult.

“Good bye Hermione,” He took a breath as death shuddered through out his body.

“Good bye, my love,” she said as tears streamed down her face.


The funeral was filled with friends and family that had loved Draco more than he would ever know. It had been lovely.

Everyone had gone back to the Burrow afterwards. Hermione mainly stayed in Ginny’s room reality still not setting in. She opened her suit case to change into something clean to go downstairs. There on top was an envelope and a gift box. Inside the envelope was a letter. It said:

My Dearest Hermione,

I’m not very good at letters so this will be sort of short. I have loved you for a long time. I wouldn’t be the man I am today if not for your love and the chance you gave me to prove myself, not only to myself, but to everyone else as well. I want to thank you. I love you and can’t wait to grow old with you. I can’t wait for us to have children. I want lots. So on that note, I will end this dreadful excuse of a letter.
Always remember that I am with you.
Yours Always,
Draco




Fresh tears began to fall as she opened the gift he had promised to return and open with her. Inside she found a ceramic dogwood flower on a golden chain. A reminder of the day he told her he loved her. There was an inscription said:
So you will always have a piece of me with you

She reached down and rubbed her small but protruding stomach.

“I’ll always have a part of you with me and I’ll thank you everyday of my life.” Hermione whispered as she blew a kiss toward heaven filled with all her love. She finished getting dressed and went down to tell everyone the good news.
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It has to end? IT'S FINISHED? No, please, you're joking. Oh my god. It was so awesome, I loved it. Hope you make a sequel. I can't believe Draco died. Lots of luvv,
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is she pregnant?????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????
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Well this is a short post to let all the viewers of Malfoy's Mudblood know that i am currently working on a sequal. So Keep an eye out. Thanks for the great reviews. Love you all!
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I read the whole thing and it's so awesome! Except HOW COULD DRACO DIE?
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Just a quick update a sequal has been started ...and I will let know here and there the closer it is to viewing.


It has been eleven years since her world fell apart. Can Hermione face her demons to keep the past from repeating itself.


Just a little teaser to wet your whistles.
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NEW READER!!!!!!!! i LOVE THiS FF!!! iT iS AMAZiNGLYAWESOME!!!!!!! PAMS!!!!!!! PAMSOiD!!!!!!!!!!!!!

P.S. THiS FF iS VERY FAMiLiAR ................... iS iT FROM SOMEWHERE ELSE??? LiKE MAYBE UR A WRiTER FOR ANOTHER HP SiTE??? JUST WONDERiNG
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I like the little update for the sequel. It's nice.
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CANT WAiT 4 THE SEQUEL, PLEZ PM ME WHEN U START iT
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So you'll like, give us the link or do we have to find it or sumthin?
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