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Old 06-29-2009, 02:58 PM
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Made by: Jess, of S.O.S. [Jessica's Request Thread]


Hey,my name is Xavier and I'm new to SS..and new to writing HP poems. All of the harry potter stuff belongs to J.K Rowling.
I would like to thank Jess and Spork! because I am doing this for them..
Read Jess's 4 fanFictions called Love is in the Air, Mission Pureblood, Desperate, and Wizard POV's :read!: its REALLY GOOD!
And also read my friend Spork! stories.. Go check out The W Questions! I know you will love it! And all three stories go under the romance section..so check it out!
If you have any comments you wish to tell me about my poem dont hesitate to tell me because we are all friends here
So I hope you like my poems... here is the first one..........

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I Open At The Close
Walking through the neverendless dark forest...
thinking about all the fallen warriors that died fighting for me..in what seemed like a neverending..
bloody battle at Hogwarts....
They sacrificed their own lives....
just for me..
at the very end..
surrender into the grasp of my worst enemies...
and to take my own life away..
Step by Step..
I'm getting near..
The cold wind blowing in the air...
....while the dementors were swiftly gliding right pass by me.. putting terror into anyone not on Lord Voldemort's side...
as giants went to pick up thier dead brothers..
while some are getting ready to go into battle...
I remember the images inside Hogwarts...
Shattered glass..
Broken walls...
Bloodstains upon the grounds..
While the dead lay in rows in The Great Hall..
The teachers were worried that the end of Hogwarts was to come..
For their protective charms didn't hold Voldemort's army for very long..
They fought brave,and true..
just like the statues of knights that would die for their school..
But it wont hold the enemy for long...
Suddenly Death Eaters came into view...
dueling what seems to be every D.A member I taught during my 5th year..
There was Luna swaying back and forth..
For the killing curse missed her only by a few inches.
She held out her wand..
and bellowed some words that sent a Death Eater knocking to the ground..
No mercy should be shown tonight..
Luna killed the Death Eater...
And left the rotten body and left to fight some more..
Dean and Seamus each dueling thier own Death Eater...
While Neville was planting some angry mandrakes up against the wall...
for if any Death Eater passes along..
they are going to get a very loud yell coming from the wall..
and knock them fainted on the ground..
I remembered the battle was on the full moon..
I hear howling sounds coming from the Hogwart's Courtyard..
Then the werewolves pushed the entrance door..
and pounced on some of the members of the order..
Then the most terrifying site I have seen..
Greyback and Lupin clawing and biting into each others red flesh..
As I saw my loyal friends dueling themselves three Death Eaters at a time..
Then a thought came to me..
Ron.......
Hermione.....
They have been here for me..
Till this...
My very end...,
The vision of the battle was hours ago..
And if I dont turn myself in...,
the battle will go on..
I grow nearer and nearer..
I will miss my friends..
I open at the close,
............................I'm almost there.......
I worry about dying,but what will happen to the innocent people that fought for their lives trying to protect me?
Will they all die like Sirius, my parents, Cedric, or Dobby...?
For they all protected me..
As I worry for them..
I'm coming to my end..
And then a teardrop fell to the ground I just couldnt help it..
The memories of my friends will be so close to my heart...
Then....,
ghostly figures began to appear on both sides of me..
My parents,Sirius,and Lupin were there..
Lupin..?
I couldnt believe it...he was dead..
Greyback will pay for that..,
and I asked the most childish question to him..
"Does it hurt,.....to die?"
But it wasnt him that anwsered it was my loving godfather that said"It is very quick and painless.."
I missed him..
I missed all of them..
I knew they werent alive because nobody can rise from the dead..
I wanted them to be alive..
the pain of knowing they had a whole life ahead of them was eating me alive.......
I looked up to the sky.. trying to hide my tears..then sighed..
"Will you stay with me?"
My mom looked at me with tears in her eyes..
and said..
"To the very end.."
The leaves were pushing against my feet..
nearer and nearer im walking to my end..
I will miss Hogwarts..it was the closest thing of me calling it my "Home."
I glanced at the school..
The stars around it were shining bright..
like that same night Dumbledore died..
I will miss that place when.....I'm gone..
I turned my head back walking toward to my death..
and came to a complete hault and I took my leave..
Voldemort shall be mortal again when he takes my own life away..
He raised his wand and said,"Avada Kedavra"
And through my circle glasses the light in my eyes simply went away.........
"I Open At The Close..."
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Hoped you liked it!
If you hadnt noticed my poem idea was from the Deathly Hallows where Harry walks through the forest to find Voldemort so he could kill him.. which makes Voldemort mortal again..
Please review..
And I wish I could be nominated in the golden goblins FanFiction Awards.. but Im too late..
Well have a nice day....
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Old 08-15-2009, 03:02 AM   #101 (permalink)
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Old 08-15-2009, 01:18 PM   #102 (permalink)


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^WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT IS A LONG COMMENT..........
I will enter The Sorting Hat Contest It seems Fun....
And Im Not The Poems Master....
Thats Sir Spots....
Man He was sooo Good......
Ill Post mre soon...
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Yes, you should enter the Sorting Hat Contest! Duh!

lol Sir Spots was good, but he hasn't posted in FOREVAH! *kicks pup*
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Old 08-15-2009, 01:32 PM   #103 (permalink)
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Sir Spots was good, but he hasn't posted in FOREVAH! *kicks pup*
My ShirShpots.<3 I miss him SO much, he'll always be SS's Resident Poem for me. Talked to him a couple of days ago. He says he might write more HP poetry for SS. :ballcap:

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oh my goodness... that was so.. DEEP. and touching. i love your poems, they dig deep. your style is very creative. can't wait for more poems. i loved the line from That Night At The Astronomy Tower:
She wouldnt have a chance to say..
that she loved him..
Day in..
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and Snape and Lily was really touching.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

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oh my goodness... that was so.. DEEP. and touching. i love your poems, they dig deep. your style is very creative. can't wait for more poems. i loved the line from That Night At The Astronomy Tower:
She wouldnt have a chance to say..
that she loved him..
Day in..
And day out..


and Snape and Lily was really touching.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

three cheers for xavier!
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Thank you...
Thank you my Luff....
And dont worry I will...
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BUT WOWZEE WOW WOW WOW
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mOREEEEE Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
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Its alright..
And Thank you...
Thank you soo very much...
Ok will do...
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Good luck. ^^


My ShirShpots.<3 I miss him SO much, he'll always be SS's Resident Poem for me. Talked to him a couple of days ago. He says he might write more HP poetry for SS. :ballcap:

Anyway.... Back to this thread.

Nice, new poems. Can't wait for more!

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I know!!!!!!!!!
I loved SirSpots...
I looked up to him...
He was My idol...
Thats The Only reason Im here writing Hp Poems...
Its all because Of him..<3
And Thank you..
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Yes, you should enter the Sorting Hat Contest! Duh!

lol Sir Spots was good, but he hasn't posted in FOREVAH! *kicks pup*
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I entered But I know Im not going to win...
I only Had 30 mins...to think Of a Poem
and Post it Because It was SOOOOOOOO
LATE AND I WANTED TO GO TO BED...
Because I was In a Parade
For Tae-Kwon-Do..
And Also there was a festival and i wanted to hang out with my friends....
I know I want him to post poems!!!!!!!!!!
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Why thank you kind sir! lol!!!
Yeahh!!! Can't wait for more posts from Xavierluffehh!!!
Jess
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Lol!!!!!!!!!!
And Dont worry a new one is on the way.......
-Xavier-
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Hey guys
here is A short Poem...
Its not one Of those Long ones....
But here you go.....
#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#
Looking out

I see great mountains....
Beyond the Black lake............
So Beautiful...
But yet...
I never seemed to noticed It Before......
What A shame...
For I have been Missing Out on...
Mostly Everything.....
For I been caught...
Trapped...
In things...
That always Bubbled in my mind....
I see Harmless...
Unloved creatures....
They are not as much different from me...
I see them...
It makes me wonder...
Why I have hated all the Creatures in the world...
mostly all my life...
For I only incountered Werwolves....
And Some Dementors....
Ive seen a new side Of life...
And Of The world...
Then I see....
Strands of hair on her face...
Her Beautiful Smile...
It doesnt mean I havent thought
About her...
About us...
She is Different....
I am different...
Im a person...
She is A person....
I think Im In love with Her....
Her name is Ginny Weasley....
But Ive been so blinded from my life...
Ive been trying to save many others...
But Im done...
I have succeeded..
So Now Im finally...
Looking out....
#*#*#*#*#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#**##*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*
I hoped You liked It...
This Poem Is deticated to all of you...
My Readers...
I love you...
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#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#
Looking out

Then I see....
Strands of hair on her face...
Her Beautiful Smile...
It doesnt mean I havent thought
About her...
About us...
She is Different....
I am different...
Im a person...
She is A person....
I think Im In love with Her....
Her name is Ginny Weasley....
But Ive been so blinded from my life...
Ive been trying to save many others...
But Im done...
I have succeeded..
So Now Im finally...
Looking out....

Awwww how cutee!!!
This part was my favorite!


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I hoped You liked It...
This Poem Is dedicated to all of you...
My Readers...
I love you...
-Xavier-
Xavier I didn't like it one bit......

Photos!: NO WAY!!
I luffed it!!!!!! =DD


Awww I luff you too my Xavierluffehh!!!

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I loved it Xavier...
Very sweet!
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Aw! That was so cute! I loved it so much! That last part was so cute! I couldn't help but get a bit emotional! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
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[QUOTE=##Hermione&Draco##;8507301
But Im done...
I have succeeded..
So Now Im finally...
Looking out....
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XAVIER!!!! I ACTUALLY LOVE YOUR POEMS!! THEY ARE DEEP !!!

you finish reading and its like "woah!!!"


NEVER STOP WRITING!!! YOUR AMAZING AND DESERVE SOMETHING SHINEY!! MAYBE EVEN A KNITEHOOD!!

WOW!
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i just read nine tears again and i cried

i am actually crying!!
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Aww....
Dont cry...
**I go over There and Give you a Hug...**
Im going to Post Soon..
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Ya...
The Problem Is Idk what To write About..
Hahahaha
But I will Post For sure...
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errrmmm...
write about me!!!
lol
OHH I KNOW!
if you havnt done it already....
you could do about dumbledores family and when his sister died?
like what dumbledore saw when he drank the potion??
just an idea if you havnt done it already
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Ooo.........
Very Intresting.....
I will take that Into Consideration...............
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XAVIER!
im waitingggg.........

no pressure but...

POST!!
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You have a very different style. The ellipses make for a unique poetic rhythm. Keep up the writing and wonderful work. A poetess dedicated to her words are the best kind. =]
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Hehehehehe..
Thank You
Im just wierd Like that..
Im Proud Of it...
Thanks For The Advice..
POETRY BUDDIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hey Guys..
Thank You for supporting My poems...
It means Alot!!!!
<3
Anyways here is Another Poem...
Its Not One Of those War Poems...
So here you go....
Hope you Like it
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Stand By Me
When The Snowy Mountains....
Start Breaking down...
And they slowly begin...
To fall straight Down....................................
When The water slowly evaporates....
And Makes Its way Up....
Until there is No more single Drop
Of water Left On this World..................................
If the Blue Pale sky......
That Stands above us...
Tumbles...
And Fall.....
And its to come Down...
And smash Me....
Or If Hope...
And Mankind....
Begins to Crumble..
And Turn Into Dust....
And Falls Into My Open Palms...
And All the Pressure Is On Me...
Will You stand By Me?
When A tear Begins To Form...
And slowly starts To Fall Down.....
Will You Be The one?
To catch it...
And Never Let It Fall.......
Only to wonder...
Why The Tear Formed...
Came Out Of The White..
Right Out Of My Eyes........
In the First Place...
Will You still Be there to Comfort me....
When Im Down...
Lost...
Done.....
UnLoved...
Not Worth It....
No More......
When I think that you...
My BestFriend....
My Bud..
Dont Care About Me anymore.....
And Hold me....
And Watch me...
Vulnerable...
Weak...
In your arms....
While I start Crying....
Yelling....
For Im done with this world now.....
Will you still Be there to Stand By Me?
When The Green Leaves...
Begin..
To Transform....
Into a Broken Down...
Lifeless yellow.....
And Falls....
When There is No life at all...
Just me and You....
And Will We try to share our Feelings....
And Cry into eachothers Arms....
Because There is Nothing For Us Now....
Will you still Be there...
Right Next To me...
Standing By me?
Whever I may Go...
What If we Get Hurt.....
What if we are in danger.....
What If Im causing it.....
As Long as Your with Me.....
Right Next To me.....
You will Get Hurt....
Break......
You will Bleed Once in a while......
And Your Family
will fall to the Ground...
PowerLess.....
Because Your with Me...
I dont want you to sacrifice so much for me....
am Worthless...
Nothing at All.....
But I still Ask...
Will You still Stand Beside me?
I have no Family...
No one To thank For supporting Me...
When I was A baby....
Because My real Parents Are Dead....
Buried Under The Ground...
Waiting For me..
When My time comes....
But Will you carry Out My Worries....
Try To fix Them....
Will you Listen to Me...
Will you understand My Fears...
And Try to destroy them all...
Together...
Just Me And You...
Be my father....
My mother...
Please Im all Alone.....
Just Hold Me Mate....
Never let me go...
Im in so much pain...
You understand me....
You know what Im going through....
The question
Is still....
Will you stand By me?
What If I turn Bad....
I point my wand at You....
And IF i speak The Words That may Kill you.....
Before It hits you....
Will you try To help Me...
See Whats Wrong.....
Will you trust me...
With Your Weaknesses...
If I Turn Against You...
And use Those Weaknesses Against You...
To kill you...
Bring you to your ....
DownFall....
Will you try to remind me...
The Times We had...
The things That we talked about...
To change me....
So I wont try to Kill You...
Will You Still Stand By Me?
What If Im seconds Of Dying.....
Will You try To stop It...
From Happening....
Will You cry....
Will it feel like a Part Of You died....
Will You hold me...
One Last Time.....
Until I die...
I soon see Green Light...
It hits Me...
I cry..
And I fall
Into a Sleep.....
For I sacrificed Myself...
For you...
And Every wizard Alive....
My Eyes Open...
Im very weary..
I see the World...
Crushing And Burning....
Buildings Begin to fall......
The Light is Going out....
Then Time stops........
Its Just Me And You...
Im laying Down...
You crying..
Holding me....
I move my Dying Face....
I see Danger All around....
My time has Come.....
I will Soon Be gone....
And Then You said,
"Im right here.......
Please Dont go..........
Dont leave me....
Without you mate.......
Please.."
And After I see you....
For My very Last Time.......
I say,"
Ron......
You dont need me...
Its I...
Ialways Needed you....
You protected Me when Danger was Around...
You helped Me with Love...
Mainly Everything....
You Dont need Me to Stand By you....
I needed You to stand By me...
Now here I am...
Dying...
Stand By me Ron...
One Last Time?"
Ron was Holding me....
Tears Fell on me...
I shed A tear..
At Last...
I said,"Let me go.....Its Time...."
And you looked At me....
And said,"No...
Im not going...
Im standing By you....
Forever...
Me and You Harry...
Will Will Never be apart....."
Then One last Feeling Of Love...
Dropped To My Heart...
Before It stopped..
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Hoped You Liked It!!!!
I LOVE YALL!!!!!!!!!!!
-Xavier-

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thats such a pretty poem
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I agree with therealginnyweasly.
It was a pretty poem.
Luffed it!
More Xaiverluffehh!!! <333
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That was really great!
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Xavier. That was so sad! It was pretty but still so sad! The way you ended! I was crying so much - no-one's ever made me cry whilst i was having ice-cream (i was reading little women so i was already crying). You write really well! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more! *sniffles*
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What a long poem! Good though! I liked it!
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