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07-25-2009, 11:33 AM
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Made By: Me 
Hey I’m Jen, the author of this FF. I do not own any of the Harry Potter characters or anything belonging in the Harry Potter universe, JK Rowling does. This is my first go at FF so tell me what you think and leave bundles of comments! The Mirror He walked in haste through the dark corridors, his footsteps echoing off of the high stony walls and dark robes billowing like dark waves crashing at his feet.
He knew he shouldn’t go, knew that he should let well alone from the thing that would undoubtedly cause him unnecessary hurt and pain. So far he had managed to turn at last minute, but tonight was different. And so he carried on walking, wand held aloft to light his path through the castle, as each footfall rang through the dark with increasing need.
He came to the end of a long corridor and stopped. The door to his right was slightly ajar.
Inhaling deeply, Severus Snape took a tentative step over the threshold and lingered, before stepping inside.
It was still there, standing exactly where he knew it would be. The room was dark, with just a beam of silvery moonlight falling though one of the high windows, and scattered across the mirrors surface, causing inscriptions and carvings along its gold frame to become bathed in patches of shadow and light. The Mirror of Erised.
He knew what he would see of course, and he knew that the wound would be just as fresh, just as sore as it had been all those years ago.
Snape waited until he was standing directly in front of the mirror, then, taking a deep breath, he looked into it.
At first all he saw was his own reflexion staring back at him, lank haired and sallow skinned. Yet there was something different in the black eyes. Something sparkling with life.
And then the Mirror-Snape turned, and beckoned to welcome someone else into the frame.
He knew her at once. Emerald eyes glistening and fiery hair falling gracefully over one shoulder. He felt an unpleasant, familiar lump rise in his throat.
Lily Potter walked to the Snape in the mirror. For a minute all they did was gaze at each other. Finally they grasped each others hand, holding them between them as they continued just to gaze, to adore each other in their timeless bliss.
Snape hardly noticed when his wand fell to the floor with a loud clatter, extinguishing the light it gave out. A large tear rolled down his sallow cheek, but he didn’t wipe it away. Never before had Snape felt anything like this pain, this unbearable agony at watching what he’d lost so long ago.
Tears flowing rapidly, he sank to his knee, never taking his eyes off the scene in the mirror. Sobs came in violent torrents, threatened to engulf him, to tear at his throat and fill his lungs. But he didn’t care.
“Lily,” he moaned, “Lily”
He sat there, staring at the lovely woman and his mirror self until a gentle hand on his back made him freeze.
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Originally Posted by HannahLongbottom  Hmmmm, I doubt it! Maybe I can love your Draco and hate cannon Draco??? that works for me i shall hand sew you an "i love drakey-poo" tee-shirt  Quote:
Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron Jenluff!!!!!!
Ahhhh!!!!!!
I actually thought that was happening!!!! eeeep! i wanna be her soo badly in that dream  lol
[QUOTE="Jessluff"LUFFED IT!!
PAMS!!  Jess[/QUOTE]
glad you liked it will pams soonish 
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Ahhh!!! I've missed so much! Sorry Jen! Great chapters! Awaiting more!!!
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Originally Posted by potionsmaster22 Ahhh!!! I've missed so much! Sorry Jen! Great chapters! Awaiting more!!!
*Sammy* naughty sammy  lol joking thats fine
more soon
Jen x
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Jen M'dear!!!
I am sehr sehr sorry!
I keep missing chapters and stuff!
Great chapter, by the way. I was holding my breath the whole time (it's a good thing I read fast!)
Poor Hermy; she dererves someone as schmexi as Draco!
And I have updated Nobody's Perfect (eventually)
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Originally Posted by Amerleigh Jen M'dear!!!
I am sehr sehr sorry!
I keep missing chapters and stuff! Thats alright luffie Quote:
Originally Posted by Amyluff Great chapter, by the way. I was holding my breath the whole time (it's a good thing I read fast!)   buahahaha! yes, it is lol Quote:
Originally Posted by Amyluff Poor Hermy; she dererves someone as schmexi as Draco! Forgett Hermy, i want someone as schmexi as Draco 
yes, she does, bless her. Quote:
Originally Posted by Amyluff And I have updated Nobody's Perfect (eventually)
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Ah! PAMS PAMS And More PAMS I love it please post more very very soon!
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Originally Posted by PotterGirl714 Ah! PAMS PAMS And More PAMS I love it please post more very very soon! sounds like someone likes it lol i will soony
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Originally Posted by firenjen that works for me i shall hand sew you an "i love drakey-poo" tee-shirt You'll need magical powers to get me to wear it though
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Originally Posted by HannahLongbottom You'll need magical powers to get me to wear it though i have powers they call me Lord Jendemort (haha i made myself laugh!)
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Originally Posted by firenjen i have powers they call me Lord Jendemort (haha i made myself laugh!) Surely that should be Lady Jendemort?
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New reader... I loved it! Holy Crap! You can't just leave us hanging! You're an amazing writer by the way... Keep up the fantastic work! PAMS PAMS!!!(:
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wink wink nudge nudge say no more. i dunno hermy may even fall for Hagrid at the end.....you never know..
Haha, somehow I hope not! He's, what, A little younger than Mr. MoldyVoldie?
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Originally Posted by HannahLongbottom Surely that should be Lady Jendemort? Ah, good point. Doesnt have quite the same ring to it tho... i may buy a false beard, then i can be Lord Jendemort Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack New reader... I loved it! Holy Crap! You can't just leave us hanging! You're an amazing writer by the way... Keep up the fantastic work! PAMS PAMS!!!(: EEEP! New reader!! welcome to Echo's
special wave 
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Oh wow i've missed so many chapters and i love every one of them!
They are just getting better and better you need to write more
luvs you x
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Wow Jen! I knew you were a good writer from the RP we made, but this...well wow! It's amazing! So much...depth (hope that dosn't sound sissy lol ) You are an amazing writer! Loved every bit of it!
♥LYSM♥ Your amazing Friend (lol ) Bella xx
Oh and by the way, what does PAMS mean? Im confuzzled!
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Originally Posted by firenjen Ah, good point. Doesnt have quite the same ring to it tho... i may buy a false beard, then i can be Lord Jendemort I hope it doesn't itch, my Lord.
Bella, PAMS = Post Another Message Soon. It means we want the next chapter asap! 
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Bella, PAMS = Post Another Message Soon. It means we want the next chapter asap! Oh ok! Thanks! PAMS PAMS PAMS Jen!!!!! xxxxxxxx
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Originally Posted by Kerryleanne They are just getting better and better Wow, in that case, imagine what it could be like at the end Quote:
Originally Posted by Kerryyyy! you need to write more
luvs you x Im workin on it  Luffs you more Quote:
Originally Posted by ♥♥♥Bella♥♥♥ Wow Jen! I knew you were a good writer from the RP we made, but this...well wow! It's amazing! So much...depth :blushes: tehee *blushes like beetroot* thankyou *bows* lol Quote:
Originally Posted by BellaDarling (hope that dosn't sound sissy lol ) Not at all Quote:
You are an amazing writer! Loved every bit of it!
♥LYSM♥ Your amazing Friend (lol ) Bella xx
Oh and by the way, what does PAMS mean? Im confuzzled! Glad you liked it My amazing chummy Quote:
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Originally Posted by ♥♥♥Bella♥♥♥ Oh ok! Thanks! PAMS PAMS PAMS Jen!!!!! xxxxxxxx New post TODAY. Maybe
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*pets Hermione*
Dramione is love, you know.
Even if it can't always work out.
Buttt I loved the updattte.
So more, please. =D Quote:
Originally Posted by HannahLongbottom Bella, PAMS = Post Another Message Soon. Um, I think it means Post A lot More Soon.
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Originally Posted by MAXXII Dramione is love, you know. Even if it can't always work out. Hmmmmmm...... but can it? Quote:
Originally Posted by MAXIIIII Buttt I loved the updattte.
So more, please. =D Good Luffs ya
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Sorry its VERY short. Thanks for everyones comments, they're BRILL
************************************************** ************************************************** ******************* Appearence
Harry lay in bed, thinking. He still had to find out who gave him the note he found just before Christmas. He pulled it out, and read it, for what seemed like the thousandth time: Quote:
To Harry,
Merry Christmas. I can’t talk to you, so this is my only option. I hope you have a good holiday. I will be thinking of you.
Yours,
x
His mind listed all the people that could be responsible, and one immidiatly jumped out at him. But how could it be...she would have said.
Sighing, he rolled over and fell into a restless sleep.
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Hermione couldn’t get back to sleep. Every time she closed her eyes, images of Draco swam in font of them, as if they had been burned onto her lid. Every breath of air from the open window was his whisper; every night time noise was him.
She got out of bed and pulled a purple jumper over her pyjamas. Pulling her hair back into a loose plait, she walked downstairs to the common room.
It was deserted. Glancing at her watch, she saw why. It was two o’clock. She sat by the fire, but felt fidgety. She couldn’t settle. After trying to sit in several different places, she gave up and headed to the portrait hole. Perhaps she would go to the library; reading always settled her...
But when she looked up into the corridor, she froze. Draco Malfoy was stood beside the portrait hole, leaning against the wall, looking rather tense.
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OH MY GOD!!
how dare you leave it there missy you MUST write more before i die from lack of being able to breath properly
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