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Old 10-26-2006, 11:38 AM
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Hiya! I'm back, and this time with a Dramione fic!

i think this one could be an actual FF! (I've previously done one shots and drabbles only, i have a few FF's here too!)

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There was something about her. About him. Something had changed her. Over the summer, there was something...different. Or was it just him? He didn't know. However, he could wonder...he could, think about it?

Draco Malfoy ran his perfectly formed fingers through his platinum blonde hair, as a sigh left the pale pink lips that accented the sharp jawline. As his hands ran through the soft hair his pale ice eyes flickered towards the mirror that hung in front of him.

His hands dropped with a soft thump on to his lap, his green slytherin robes creasing with the extra pressure upon the elite fabric. He was back at Hogwarts for his seventh year. Although many had said it was a stupid thing to do, there was...something...getting at him, somehthing had urged him to come back.

He had had to put up with the humiliation of the scowls and desperate flees in the opposite direction whenever he had dared to show his face in the corridors. The professors treated him with looks of distaste, with complete restrained anger. Any privelage that Draco might have enjoyed as a seventh year had been stripped from him. He was allowed no communication. Nothing.

This was what you got for being pureblood royalty.

Only, there was something that told him it could be alright...just...something. Admittedly, knowing, on gut instinct that something was to be alright wasn't the best thing to act upon, but it was all that kept the youngest Malfoy going.

At this moment in time, being a Malfoy, was not the best thing to boast about.

The mirror on the wall shone with the light of torches, beneath him was the soft rugged olive green carpet, the autumn green drapes of his four poster hung gracefully behind him. He rose, quietly, slowly, and looked at himself in the mirror.

Once more, he brushed back the platinum fringe, and traced a small fresh cut upon his forehead.

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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I haven't be on here in forever so i got to read soooooooooooo much!!!!!!! It was fantastic!!!!!! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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"Miss Granger, please, i do insisit you tell us everything, and now!" McGonagall exclaimed sitting down in her chair once more and sighing deeply. Scandal in the school was never good, and in her first few months of being Headmistress, she could do with out it.

Draco swiftly scooped Hermione up in his arms and took her over to the chair, sitting down in it, and resting her in his lap. She opened her mouth to speak, and the story flooded out...

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I am so sorry. I am having the worst writers block. I've been having it for ages. Although, i am coming very close to the end of this fic so...

I will give you a lovely long update soon though. I honestly do promise.
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Ah, that's okay!! Don't worry about writer's block, everyone gets it =)

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What book? Are you trying to get it published but they wont let you? Is it something like that? Or are you just doing it for fun? Or is it that you have too much free time? lol
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Cool, book you're aiming to be published or just for fun? (I have MANY books I was aiming to be published but they never worked out... and there's this other one but I have a feeling I should restart it cause I wrote the first 6 chapters a year ago and they sound kinda corny cause I know more... intellectual-sounding words that'd work and comments that could be beter and ya...)

But hopefully you'll snap out of your writer's block soon! We wanna hear the rest!
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PERTY PLEASE POST THE FIRST PARAGRAPH, WITH A SUGAR ON TOP AND LOTS OF CARAMEL AND MELTED CHOCOLATE AND MARSHMALLOWS AND SUCH? Oh, and gummy bears, lots and lots of gummy bears =)

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My past is dark. Dark enough to scare you. Bad enough to stop you from sleeping at night. Horrific enough to stop you from loving your family. I’ve never loved mine. I’ve seen things I shouldn’t have. Things you wouldn’t understand. Ever. I’ve seen more things in my fifteen years than you will see in your entire lives. It makes you think. Forces you to see how precious we are. How breakable. Forces you to realise things you don’t want to realise. Then if you fight it, it fights back, harder than you want, draws blood, makes you vomit, and you can’t scream, so don’t bother trying. I’ve seen things that take your innocence away in seconds. Trust me. It’s not pleasant. Childhood innocence is sweet, so valuable. Mine was stolen. Believe me. I will get my revenge.
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^^ my gosh! that is too good! if it ever gets published i am sssoooooooo buying a copy. is it a romance? if so, then thats like me, but my story is more along the movie lines. this like in a total script form.

where's the ff? lol PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
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*sighs* Well because i love you so Adrienne...

My past is dark. Dark enough to scare you. Bad enough to stop you from sleeping at night. Horrific enough to stop you from loving your family. I’ve never loved mine. I’ve seen things I shouldn’t have. Things you wouldn’t understand. Ever. I’ve seen more things in my fifteen years than you will see in your entire lives. It makes you think. Forces you to see how precious we are. How breakable. Forces you to realise things you don’t want to realise. Then if you fight it, it fights back, harder than you want, draws blood, makes you vomit, and you can’t scream, so don’t bother trying. I’ve seen things that take your innocence away in seconds. Trust me. It’s not pleasant. Childhood innocence is sweet, so valuable. Mine was stolen. Believe me. I will get my revenge.

You can comment on that if you want. (Good or bad would be welcomed)

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IMI! That was sooo good! you have to get that published and out on the bookshelves of Barnes & Noble! I will SO buy it. && its perfect because you have the perfect name to see on a book cover. you really do. well keep up the good work on your novel && the fic!!!

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Oh my gosh, Imi! That's so good!! I'm most certainly buying it when it's published! (No if's about it, it's getting published, even if I have to take out that ONE moron who's going to be a poop about it...)

Does it have a title? (Only if you want to tell...)

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"Pansy and Draco had just split up and we would spend hours in the library, just...sitting together studying and talking in my case. Then...well, i started to fall for him." Hermione said, leaning on to Draco as he smoothed her hair back lovingly.
"I can remember Pansy hating me, i mean, really loathing me after that happened and then her attacking me in the library. My head hurt so much after that and all she'd done was pull my hair. It seemed so strange, i was so ill from just a hair pull..." She wrinkled her nose up as she thought, nothing really explaining it.

Everyone else in the room was silent, they were listening carefully.

"I remember not much from the hospital wing actually, but Madam Pomfrey giving me a potion everyonce in a while. It was only the first ones that tasted right though..." She mused, trailing off once more. "The goblets looked different too once i'd finished them."

Draco looked at her stunned and Madam Pomfrey looked at the Goblet she'd taken with her.
"It tallys up." She said quietly but McGonagall over heard and nodded to herself everything slowly making sense to her.

"I can also remember a letter i think...but i don't know what it says..." She continued, a low throbbing in her head.

"Like this?" Harry said, showing her the letter that Draco had been sent. She read it, her eyes widening and Draco tensed, fear pulsating through him.

"You're going to kill me?" Hermione breathed, getting off his lap and backing off, her hazel eyes wide.

"no!" Draco gasped, getting up and heading towards her.
"How do i know thats true?" She asked incredulously.
"Because i love you!" He told her, honesty dripping through his words in such a plain way she stared at him a light smile on her face. "I'd choose death for you, i don't want you to die...i love you." He told her, tears beginning to smart in his own grey eyes.

"I love you too." She answered, and they were lost in a loving desperate kiss.
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^^ my gosh! that is too good! if it ever gets published i am sssoooooooo buying a copy. is it a romance? if so, then thats like me, but my story is more along the movie lines. this like in a total script form.

where's the ff? lol PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
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IMI! That was sooo good! you have to get that published and out on the bookshelves of Barnes & Noble! I will SO buy it. && its perfect because you have the perfect name to see on a book cover. you really do. well keep up the good work on your novel && the fic!!!

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Oh my gosh, Imi! That's so good!! I'm most certainly buying it when it's published! (No if's about it, it's getting published, even if I have to take out that ONE moron who's going to be a poop about it...)

Does it have a title? (Only if you want to tell...)

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He he he! Thanks Adrienne! It does have a title!

Crimson Revenge - Book one of the Blood Life Trilogy.

Sounds dumb but meh!
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I *heart* the post, it was very good!! I'm so glad Draco loves her...that could screw things up a bit if he didn't.

I don't think the title for your book is dumb at all!! Sounds quite good to me...oh, and Imogen is a really, really pretty name....

Ever heard of Imogen Heap? If not, she's a musician, and you should listen to her song, "Goodnight and Go."

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That was a grat post! He loves her!!!!! That is sooooooooo sssssswwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeetttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!! (sweet with out the extras ) PAMS!
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