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A Whole New Love (D/Hr) - Sa13+ Hellywhooo everyone!! My name is Shirel and this is my second fan fic (my first is called A War of Love) and it is going to be about a Draco/Hermione ship that is taking place during there seventh and final year at Hogwarts. Dumbledore is dead and all that, basically up till now it's all like the books. The characters are: Harry, Hermione, Ron, Draco, Ginny, Neville, Luna and possibly more of J.K. Rowling's characters. If I have any spelling mistakes or I write things that don't make sense, please tell me so that I can, with your help, improve my spelling and vocabulary. Disclaimer: Sadly, I do not own any of the characters. They belong to J.K. Rowling, the author of the Harry Potter novels. And now for the first chapter: Chapter 1- The beginning of a new year: "Hey look, there's Malfoy getting kissed goodbye by his mother!" said Ron laughing. "Oh get a grip Ron!" said Hermione, "I don't understand why he even came back." "Let me have a look," said Harry moving passed Ron to stair outside the train's window. "He sure dosen't look to happy. Wait 'till I can break all of his bones and crush them to dirt!" he said angrily. "Don't bother," said Hermione, "You'll just get yourself expelled, anyways he sure doesn't look to happy to be coming back." "Yah, I bet his mom made him come back." said Ron and at that second the compartment door slid open and a very pretty girl with flaming red hair came in with a bright smile on her face. "Guess who I just ran in to?" she said while taking a seat next to Harry. "Who?" they asked. "Neville and Luna kissing!" She said happily, "They're going out!" She giggled. "Wow Gin that's terrific!" exclaimed Hermione, "They had it coming." "Neville and Luna?" Ron just sat there looking dumb, "Out of all people he chose her?" "Ron! What on earth is your problem? Just because you don't have a girlfriend doesn't mean that the whole world has to feel sorry for you!" Ginny snapped. Ron was silent. "I think it's great that Neville and Luna are together. I mean Neville's liked her for ages." said Harry suddenly. "How do you know all this?" Asked Hermione. "Neville told me." Said Harry a little uncomfortably. The train gave a little rattle and slowly started to move away from all the waving parents and siblings and as it started to pick up speed the compartment door slid open for the second time to reveal a tall blond haired boy with a pale face, cold gray eyes and was very much more muscular than the last time they had seen him. "Hello Weasels, Potter and Mudblood! Didn't think you were coming back this year." He sneered. Harry and Ron stood up so fast that Draco took two steps back. "Scared Malfoy?" sneered Harry. "Surprised you even dared to come back this year and with out your fat freinds, Crabbe and Goyle," he added. "I'm surprised your not out their looking for the the Dark Lord, Potter!" he said coldly. "If I didn't feel bad for your poor muscles and good looks, I would have killed you right on the spot!" shot Harry. Malfoy took one last look at him and left slamming the compartment door behind him. Ron high-fived Harry. "Good one mate!" "Thanks!" Harry grinned and then hugged Ginny. |
Oh Shirel, I'm really glad you're starting an another FF! I'm really glad I'm your first reader! Whoop! It's really exciting! Wow, Neville and Luna! AND Harry hugged Ginny! On purpose? C'mon, post more! Mindy |
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Ooops! I forgot to mention that everything up till the 7th book (not including) is the same way except one thing. Harry and Ginny are still together. I hated when he broke up with her, it broke my heart! :cry: I will post more today!^_^ -*~ Shirel ~*- |
Oh, I get it. Yes, I am really happy too! Oohhhh...I can't wait! Mindy |
Great Start so far!!! You are a great writer!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Love ya Jen |
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Another chapter! Hello everyone! I made a little mistake and I want to make it clear. I said in the begininng of my first post that uptil DH it's all like the books but, the only thing that is diffrent is that Harry and Ginny are still going out (I hated when JKR made Harry brake up with Ginny, it was so sad!). Chapter 2: ~ Can you laugh or scream any harder?!? ~ The rest of the journey passed mostly in happy talk and jokes. They were all in very high spirits to be returning to Hogwarts but there was something missing. When the train finally slowed to a stop at Hogsmade station everyone took their trunks and pushed their way through the many students trying to get off as well. "Ginny? Harry? Ron?" Hermione looked around. "Wer ighte hind oo" he managed to say while being smushed beetween people who were forcing there way off (mostly Slytherins)to. Together they managed to get off and find an empty carriage. "Firs' years over here!" Called a familiar voice. "Hey Hagrid!" Harry shouted over all the other shouting. Hagrid turned around smiled widely and waved to them and then turned back to directing the first years towords the black lake where they would be sailing across it to Hogwarts. Harry, Ron, Ginny and Hermione were soon joined by Neville and Luna in their carriage. "Neville! Luna! It's so good to see you! It's so nice that you two are together." Said Hermione and Ginny at the same time. They grinned at each other. Everyone laughed as the carriage was lifted into the air by the thestrals. All during the ride, high over the black lake, they chatted ecxitedly about there summers. All except for Harry who sat near the end side quietly,looking over at the black lake. Hermione noticed this and tried cheering him him up abit by riminding him and telling Neville and Luna about how Harry and Ginny were standing near a lake that wasn't far from the burrow arguing about something and then Ginny was about to slap him but instead she lost balance and fell into the lake while she grabbed him for support and then he fell in with her. "...it was histericle," said Hermione, "Ron and I were watching from a window. We coulden't believe it, they both fell in together and when they came out, they were sopping wet!" Her, Ron, Ginny Luna, Neville and even Harry burst into fits of laughter. Even when the carriage landed at the entrance to the castle they were still laughing as hard as ever and then Neville trriped on a suit of armor as they entered the castle and that made there laghter double times worse that they almost rolled onto the floor with laughter. Not to mention the stares and points from the other students for there funny behavior. When they entered the great hall, the laughter finally came to a stop as Luna went to the Ravenclaw table and Ginny went to join her freinds. Harry, Ron, Hermione and Neville took there usual seats at the Gryffindor table and were soon joined by Dean, Seamus, Lavender and Parvati. Minutes later Hagrid came in with the first years and neatly made them form a line infront if the sorting hat that stood on an old wooden stool. The sorting passed in silence except for a loud cheer when a student was sorted into their house. "And last, Luris Patil." Called Proffesor Sprout who was asighned as deputy headmistress since Professor McGonagall was now headmistress of Hogwarts. Luris walked slowly up to the stool and Proffesor sprout placed the old hat on her head which fell over her eyes. "Please be in Gryffindor!" Parvati silently, but loud enough for those near her to hear what she was saying, prayed while the hat was placed on her sissters head, "please be in Gryffindor!" "Ravenclaw!" The hat shouted. "No!" Parvati banged her fists hard on the table as her sisster jumped up and walked towords the Ravenclaw table to sit next to her sisster. Seconds later the empty trais on the tables were filled with all kinds of yummy foods and the students imediatley began piling thier plates. "his is elly oob!" Said Ron through a mouthful of food. "Sorry Ron, didn't quite catch that," Hermione said. Ron swallowd his food and said, "I said this food is really good!" "Oh! Next time don't stuff your mouth, Ron!" She said strictly. They rest of the meal went in loud chatting and gossiping until Professor McGonagall cleared her throat and called for silence. In seconds the babble died down and every face was upon her. "Good evening and welcome first years and welcome back to the rest of you. I would like to say a couple of things before we go to bed. Firstly, before I begin, I would like each of you to take a minute and think about the poor people who should of been here with us tonight. Albus Dumbledore was a great man, he died in the hope that we will continue things as normally as possible. I am sure each and everyone of you has lost either a family member or relative of yours or even a freind or just someone you have heard of that was killed. I want you to think about all those people who have risked there lives for us to live a normal life or were murdered. All those poor inocent people, I would like you to take a minute right now, and think about it." Everyones head was down thinking about the people they knew or heard, some people were crying silently and some of the younger students were even laughing. Hermione thought about all the people she knew of or read in the prophet that were merdured and shed some tears. This war was driving her nuts! "How could Draco Malfoy, supposed-to-be muderer of Professor Dumbledore return here and act like as if he had done nothing rong? What gave him the nerve to come back and face Harry?" She thought angrily. Slowly everyone rose, some comforting their freinds, and then everyone slowly turned to look back at Profesor McGonagall. "Secondly," she cleared her throught and wiped her eyes, "I want to warn you that security has been doubled this year and any dark object will be ditected. And thirdly, most importantly, if you see a freind or classmate, or any one at all acting wierd or not themselves lately, notify either me or a teacher imediatly!" She stared hard around the room finally resting on Harry she spoke, "good night to you all!" The loud clatter of benches and chairs were heard and Harry, Ron and Hemione remained seated. "She was really strict, wasn't she?" Asked Ron. "Well she has to be. You can never be to sure who is imperiused and who is a Death Eater." Said Hermione. "Why did he come back?" Asked Harry suddenly. "I don't know," replied Hemione, "but we'll have to keep a close eye on him." "Yah, knowing him," said Ron, "I bet he's trying to lure Harry into a trap." "Gee thanks Ron!" Said Harry sarcasticly. "No problem," yawned Ron, "I'm going to bed. You two coming?" The three of them got up and walked up to Gryffindor house knowing that there four poster bed was waiting, ready to be slept in. *** That's all for now! More will come soon! -*~ Shirel ~*- |
great story! i like it so far |
Wow!!!!! I love the story!! Please post as soon as possible |
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I love it! I really, really love it! Please post more, I can't wait for more! |
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I'm still laughing from what you said! I don't know why it's funny but I can't stop laughing! I think we should open up a buisness and call it THE MINDY AND SHIREL ENTERTAINMENT SHOW! lol! Wee'd be really good together! -*~ Shirel ~*- |
You are quite welcome, my dear! You are great! Cant wait until you post, I am dying to know how they are going to get together! lol! PAMS Jen! |
Lovin' it so far Shirel. You've got to post more! Pamsoid! x*Daphne*x |
new reader her,love your fan fic. post more soon -helen x |
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lol! Thanks!! I forgot all about my ff. lol! There is a sequel also if you want to read it. It is called "Enemies can be friends: Or More?!" Thanks again! I cant wait untill all of the D and H stuff happen! I am so excited!! Pams when you can!! |
^^ yay! A sequal, I will definitly read it! Ok, I'm really, really sorry for not posting, you could totally kill me, I'm going away for vacation with my family for a couple of days and then I will post! I am leaving in like 30 seconds. Just wanted to let you all know! i'm really sorry! -*~ Shirel ~*- :) |
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I can't believe that you're going on vacation. How are we to survive? Mindy |
It is ok, I hope that you have a good time on your vaca. Everyone needs a break right? lol!! Cant wait until you post again!!! Cant wait to see what happens next! Love ya Jen! |
Hi! You got a new reader and I just gotta say I'm loving it so far. Love, Lena xXx |
^^LOL Mindy! Hello everyone! I am back with another chapter! Before I gegin I would just like to say I'm really sorry I haven't posted (before I went on vacation) like I said I would. I tried really hard but got stuck with other things. I just want to let you all know that when ever i'm away or when I went on vacation, I miss you all the most!! :) I guess I just can't stay away...! lol Well here it is, the chapter you've all been waiting for! Chapter 3: ~"Who are you and what have you done with Hermione Granger?" ~ The next morning Hermione awoke with a jerk. She was having a very strange dream that Malfoy was Voldemort and she killed him. He didn't even have a wand; he just let her kill him. She pushed the covers back and started searching threw her trunk for her robes. She found them and went to take a shower. "Aww that feels so good, I missed these showers," she thought to herself as the hot water splashed on her body. When she was done she dressed and applied some lip-gloss that Ginny gave her on the Hogwarts Express and suggested her to apply some every morning, and she was right, it suited her perfectly. She came down to the common room and saw Harry and Ron waiting for her at the portrait door. "I'm ready!" She said happily. Ron stared at her. "Are your lips bleeding Hermione?" "No," she said simply, "Shall we?" And she strode out of the common room, Harry and Ron, thou a little confused, right behind her. They sat at their usual place at the Gryffindor table and filled they're plates with all kinds of food. Down the table Professor McGonagall was handing out their schedules for this year. "Good morning," Professor McGonagall said handing out their schedules then moved on up the table. "Great, we have double Potions already on our second day back!" Said Ron angrily. "And we have it first class to," Hermione said and thought while looking at the rest of her schedule. "Let's go we don't want to be late," she said at last. The three of them got up and headed toward the dungeons where the Potions class was. They waited by the classroom door until class would begin, then Snape would unlock the door and let them in. While they waited some Slytherins came, including Draco Malfoy, Pansy Parkinson, Vincent Crabbe and Goyle (what's his first name?) all laughing and Malfoy holding the mornings "Daily Prophet". "Are you that bad of a kisser Potter?" said Malfoy. "What are you talking about Malfoy?" Ron asked. "Have a look yourself, I found it very amusing," He held out the Paper which Harry snatched and held it so Ron and Hermione could read over his shoulder. Hermione gasped after she read the article, "how dare they spy on Harry and Ginny and take a picture?!?" At the bottom of the article was a picture of Harry and Ginny kissing and under the picture, Hermione spotted a small paragraph that said: "Potter and Weasley have been going out for quite a while now, but what they don't know is that Potter is cheating on Weasley and going out with that 'Mudblood' Hermione Granger who is very dangerous that one time she brought a muggle object to school that made me almost choke myself to death, says Draco Malfoy who lives in peace with his parents and who is entering his final year at Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and wizardry." Hermione finished reading and looked up angrily at Malfoy. Harry Ron and Hermione (for the first time in her life, fighting in the corridor) took out they're wands and pointed them at Malfoy who did the same along with Crabbe and Goyle and pointed them straight at Harry, Ron and Hermione. Before Hermione knew what she was doing she screamed at Malfoy, "How dare you call me a Mudblood!" Stupefy! She aimed a curse straight at Malfoy, Who blocked it effortlessly. "You have to do better than that to fight me Mudblood." And all the Slytherins laughed. Harry and Ron made to aim curses at Malfoy but Hermione stopped them, "I need to do this alone," she said. " Are you sure your feeling okay, Hermione?" Ron asked, "Where's Hermione Granger and what have you done with her?" said Ron sarcasticly which made Hermione nervous. "Yes, I'm perfectly fine," Hermione answered, "It's time he learned his lesson once and for all. Expelliarmus!" She shouted. Malfoy wasn't quick enough, his wand flew straight into the air right into Hermione’s outstretched hand. There was a burst of applause and cheers from the Gryffindors. It felt great to have finally beaten Malfoy on her own. Then a voice rang out threw the corridor. She turned around and all the happiness drained out of her at once. Professor McGonagall, looking very strict was standing in the middle of the hall looking straight down at Hermione looking very disappointed. Hermione’s smile was quickly replaced by a worried look as she handed Malfoy back his wand. "Out of all people you, Miss Granger choose to start a fight with your classmate? I am very disappointed in you, I expected a little more from you Miss Granger," said Professor McGonagall. Hermione stared blankly at the floor suppressing her tears. "Professor Alexwinaya was not able to teach today. I was notified several minutes ago and I at least expected you to act your age." Professor McGonagall continued. "Professor I-" started Malfoy. "Excuse me Mr. Malfoy but I believe that you and Miss Granger are unable to control yourselves the way seventh years are supposed to act so you will come with me. The rest of you have the hour off until your next lesson." Everyone headed of to their common room, the Slytherins towards their common room, somewhere deep in the dungeons and the Gryffindoors up the stairs to the tower. They all walked away silently, some whispering to their friends. Professor McGonagall lead the way towards her office while Hermione and Malfoy followed. In her office she seated herself in front of the desk and motioned for Hermione and Malfoy to sit behind the desk, facing her. "I am very upset about this. I would like to put a stop to this. There shall be no more grudges between the Gryffindors and the Slytherins after this year. Your punishment is to share a 'House' together. That means sharing a common room together and just living together. You will share your common room for the rest of the year." Hermione and Malfoy looked up at her as if she was going mad. "Professor that's impossible! A whole year?!?" Malfoy said angrily. Hermione didn't say anything. Somehow she felt she deserved it, she shouldn’t have started a fight with Malfoy in the first place and now she was going to suffer the consequences. "One day you will thank me Mr. Malfoy," Professor McGonagall said. "I will never thank you for putting me with this Mudblood," he gave Hermione a dirty look. "That will do Mr. Malfoy," she said angrily, "I will be seeing both of you two tonight by the Great Hall with your trunks. You may go." ____________ I hope you enjoyed! -*~ Shirel ~*- |
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Your welcome and thanks!!! I loved the post!! Ohhh, it looks like something is going to happen, now that they are sharing a room!! Cant wait for the romance parts!!!! Pams soon!!! Jen P.S Hope you had fun on your vacation!!!! |
ooh! NEW READER! love it! PAMS!! PAMSOID!! XOXO, Tara :malfoy:+:hermy: |
~new reader~ IL ur story its amaznf PAMSPAMSPAMS |
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yey a new post..loved it...pams -helen x |
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New Reader! PAMS Shirel! Katie |
I'm back with another post!!!!!!! Hello everyone! A special welcome to Katie! Thank you for reading my ff!!!! Thank you all for the comments!! ^_^ and now... What you've all been waiting for...! Chapter four: ~you're not alone~ Hermione left Professor McGonagall’s office with a heavy heart. "How stupid of me to start up a fight when it would simply get me into trouble," she thought, "and look where I have landed myself into: a whole year with my worst enemy, Draco Malfoy!" Things couldn’t have been any worse for Hermione, the second she got into Gryffindor common room; almost everybody came up to her and questioned her about what Professor McGonagall said to her and Malfoy. She finally managed to pull everyone off, saying that she didn't feel very good and needed a drink desperately. Thankfully she spotted Harry, Ron and Ginny in the corner of the room. "Hey," she said briskly. "Hermione!" cried Ginny. Harry and Ron turned around. "Are you okay?" Ginny asked, "Here have a seat," Ginny said and moved next to Harry so that Hermione could have her seat. "Thanks," Hermione tried to smile, glad that somebody cared about her rather than just knowing what Professor McGonagall said to her and Malfoy. "So," began Ron, "What happened after McGonagall left with you and Malfoy?" Hermione began telling them the whole story from when they walked into her office until the part with the punishment. "...So she said that we have to share a common room for the rest of the y-year!" Hermione burst into tears. "What!" Harry screamed so loud that made a group of fifth years studying near by yell at him. "How could she, a whole year with Malfoy? Is she mad?" "Yeah, I think she is," Ron said. "You know, you two are not really helping Hermione with this," Ginny said walking over to comfort Hermione. "T-T-Thanks G-Ginny," Hermione said, "I just c-can't believe that I let myself out of c-c-control like that, starting a fight with a S-Slytherin... What was I t-t-thinking?" "It's okay," Ginny said, "Anyone can lose control sometimes, even the smartest students in the school," Hermione blushed as Ginny smiled, "Not everybody’s perfect. I promise you we'll help you face this. Just remember you're not alone, you've still got us," she grinned and squeezed Hermione tightly. "Yeah," said Ron, "if Malfoy ever tries to curse you or he bothers you, He'll have us to deal with, right Harry?" "Uh, right. Come strait to us." Harry said. "Thanks guys, your the best!" she walked over to hug Harry then Ron, which made his ears turn bright red, then Ginny. "You're the best friend I ever had." There was a pause as the two hugged and then when Hermione finally broke away she said, "Well, I guess I should start packing my stuff," she sighed. "Can I give you hand?" Ginny asked. "Thanks Ginny but I think I want some time alone," Hermione replied. "If you're sure," Ginny said, "I will come and check on you in a few hours." "Thanks," Hermione gave Ginny a warm smile, glad that she still had her friends who cared about her. Hermione made her way through the crowded common room towards the girls’ dormitories. She climbed the steps and entered the seventh year’s dorm which she shared with Lavender Brown and Parvati Patil. She walked over to her closet and threw everything out, into her trunk lying in a corner on the floor. She didn't feel like folding everything into neat piles, she just wanted to lie down one last time in her four poster bed and sleep. When she put her last book in her trunk, she looked around to make sure she didn't forget something. When she saw nothing besides an old piece of parchment, she slammed the lid of her trunk and climbed into her four poster bed and let her tears that were waiting to come out pour from her eyes onto her pillow. She cried miserably until she fell asleep. "Hermione you have to wake up, dinner started ten minutes ago," the person rubbed her gently. "W-what?" said Hermione, "I'm up, I’m getting up," she opened her eyes and saw Ginny. "Hi Ginny!" she smiled. "A-are you okay Hermione? Your eyes are all read and puffy. How long have you been crying?" Ginny asked looking worried. Hermione’s' smile quickly vanished from her face as she remembered the nightmare she got herself into. "I'm fine, just a little tired," she faked a yawn but apparently Ginny noticed how worried she looked now and gave her a big hug. "Don't worry, everything’s going to be okay," she assured her. -------------- More will come soon! -*~ Shirel ~*- |
ooh good! PAMS!! PAMSOID!! XOXO, Tara |
Ohhh great Sheril!!! Its getting to the part.....lol Cant wait until you post again!!! Jen! |
YAYA!! a post...what happens next.... And mah names Caity |
Awww....poor 'Mione. But don't worry, sexy Draco is coming to the rescue! PAMS!! Katie |
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Oh man, I missed a lot of chapters! Again! I have got to keep my head fixed on this. Shirel, you're one of the best writers ever! Oh, poor Hermione...that must be horrible. Post more soon! Pweeze! |
COOLIES//....pams -helen x |
lol!! Sorry!! I mis-spelled it!! Sorry again!! Cant wait for the post!!! Jen |
gr8 fanfic! i dont really get the sharing the common room, but i cant wait 2 c how it turns out! |
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Hello everyone! I'm really sorry it took so long. I've been pretty busy this week. Chapter Five: ~ Death But Not Quite~ Hermione took her trunk and she and Ginny set off for the great hall for a good dinner. When they arrived at the entrance to the great hall, Hermione felt butterflies and she wanted to cry. Ginny squeezed her hand and took her trunk from her other hand and placed it behind the suit of armor. Ginny then led Hermione towards the Gryffindor table where they took seats next to Harry and Ron who were already half way through their meal. "Hey!" said Ginny. "Hermione, are you..." Ron started to say. "Are you feeling better?" Harry said to break the awkwardness. "A little," said Hermione dryly. "Bread?" offered Ginny holding Hermione’s plate. "Um..." said Hermione. "Spaghetti?" she tried again. "Thanks Ginny," Hermione said, "but, I’m really not that Hungry." "Hermione, you have to eat, It'll make you feel better," said Ginny. "Okay, okay, I'll have some bread." Ginny picked up two pieces of bread and placed it on Hermione's plate and handed it back to her. Hermione took a bite of the bread and spit it out into her cup. "It tastes like cardboard!" she said loudly, "I can't eat this any-" "-Hermione!" said Ron suddenly, "Nine O’clock -McGonagall!" "Oh My Gosh!" said Hermione jumping to her feet, she almost ran towards the doors and barely heard Ginny call to her "good luck". She raced to the great hall doors where she saw McGonagall and Malfoy waiting for her. "I can't do this," she thought, "I can't do this. Wait, yes I can, I have to!" she forced herself to think positive. "I will do this," she wiped away a tear. I'm sorry I'm late professor, I forgot what the time was..." she trailed off. I understand," she said in a stern voice, "If your trunk is here, than we should get going." "My trunk is right here, "she said pulling it from behind a suit of armor. "Very good, follow me." She led them towards the moving staircase. Hermione took out her wand and muttered "Wingardium Leviosa" and her trunk Rose in to the air and just hovered their. That way it was easier to go up the stairs. She steeled a sideway glance at Malfoy and saw that he was holding his trunk in one hand as if it were a piece of parchment. "I better check that spell up," she thought while making a note for herself. She looked at his face and saw just anger. Anger and hatred in those cold gray eyes. When McGonagall would leave them he would probably kill her the first chance he got. Fear ran down her spine. Professor McGonagall led them up to the fifth floor and down a long hall way. She stopped in front of a portrait big enough to be a door. The man in the portrait was surrounded by gold and jewels and looked like he was in some kind of tunnel. "This is where you will be staying. The password is 'Jellyfish'," The portrait swung open to reveal a nice little sitting room with a small table and some books. "That room must be where we study," Hermione thought, "Great I even have to do homework with Malfoy!" she thought angrily. "You will each have separate rooms," continued professor McGonagall, "and you will be eating like before, in the great hall with everyone else, any questions?" "Yeah, I've got one," Malfoy said, "When can I move out?" he smirked. "Detention Mr. Malfoy, Tomorrow night at eight," she said angrily. "Good night!" and she left. Hermione went in first, dragging her trunk in with her to go see where she would be sleeping. She was halfway there when she heard the portrait door slam and the guy on it yell. She stopped dead in her tracks but didn't turn around. She couldn’t face those cold gray eyes of his. "It's your entire fault!" he yelled. "Because of you Mudblood, I am in this mess!" He thrust out his wand and pointed it at her. "Exunrube!" he yelled. Hermione yelled and ducked right before it hit her, she barely made it. It flew two inches above her and hit a china vase that exploded into tiny pieces. "What do you think your doing?" she yelled at him her eyes flashing dangerously. "What do you think i'm doing Mudblood?" He yelled back. "Trying to kill me!" she cried, the tears pouring out of her eyes. She grabbed her trunk and ran to her room. She didn't even care or want to look at her new room, she just dropped her trunk and slammed the door and sunk on her bed, crying like she had never done before. ******************** Tell me what you think! Did I explain it better Chuvvy? -*~ Shirel ~*- |
good post! PAMS!! PAMSOID!! XOXO, Tara |
Oh my gosh! This is so good! Pity we have to wait more...c'mon, posties more! I'm beginning to remember...love always start like this, right? ^_^ |
sorry i missed so many chappies. oh well, this is such an awesome story! and ooooh!!!! mcgonacall's a matchmaker... |
Poor Hermione!!!!!!!! Draco isn't exactly the gentleman of the year is it?? Great post!!!!!!!! |
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Ohhh!!! Yeah! They finally are sleeping in the same room, or common room. I cant wait to see what happens next! But Draco needs to be a little nicer. Gosh, he can be such and loser sometimes. Cant wait to see more!! I am excited! lol! Love ya Jen! |
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I agree, he's being soo mean to her, I hate to see her crying like that! I will post soon!!^_^ Love ya!! -*~ Shirel ~*- |
Hehehehe sorry I was so rude not writting my name!! I'm Mari and I adore your story!!! |
Hey!! you weren't rude about forgetting your name, it happens to everyone! hehe! lol ^_^ Thanks so much, Mari, I will post more today! yay!! *does a dance* -*~ Shirel ~*- Oops! Chuvvy forgot to sighn out!!! Sorry, well it's really me -Shirel... |
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hey gr8 post i get it better now cant wait 4 the next post! |
same here. Can't wait for the next post!! PAMS PAMS!! <3 Lilly |
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Danger! Here is posted a very dangerous chapter... lol (kidding) Hey everyone! I'm really sorry it took me such a long time to post this chapter. I have no excuses so the blame is all on me! Well anyway... Here is the next chapter! (Finally! lol hehe) Chapter six: ~ A Malfoy Problem ~ The next morning Hermione woke up early so she could leave the room without being noticed or seen by Malfoy. She rummaged through her messy trunk looking for brand new robes. She decided not to shower when Malfoy was around. Even if he was sleeping it was a risk of being seen somehow, you can never know when it comes to magic, but she made a mental note for herself to check the library for any enchantments to put on a bathroom. When she finally applied some makeup and did her hair into a messy bun, she took her book bag and went to do her homework that she had not done yet in the library. When she had got to the library she pushed the door open but it wouldn’t budge. "It's probably not open yet," she muttered while hitting the door in frustration. It was no use waiting for it to open so she marched down to the Great hall for breakfast. The Great Hall was practically empty except for a couple of students here and there at each table. She took a seat all the way down at the Gryffindor table and grumpily laded her plate with some salad and toast. She gobbled the food down in just a matter of minutes and washed it down with some pumpkin juice. When she drunk the last drop of it, she gathered up her stuff and rushed out of the great hall down to the lake so se could finally do her homework and "not fail this year," as she always says. When she walked through the front doors she smelled the fresh air and was glad for such nice weather. She felt like running towards the lake and feel the wind beating on her. She looked around and made sure no one was outside before lifting her arms into the air and running down the hill over to the lake. She sat against her favorite tree and pulled out her charms book and read the home work. "Write a ten inch essay on how to perform a freezing charm.” She smiled to herself at how simple that was going to be. She pulled out her ink, parchment and quill, and set off to work. When she was done, she opened her Defense against the Dark Arts and when she didn't find anything she realized that they only had charms yesterday since potions were canceled. "I really need to start getting a little more organized, this whole Malfoy thing is ruining my life!" she thought angrily. Sighing, she put all her books neatly back into her bag and headed to her first class; Herbology. She walked across the grounds towards the green houses but stopped suddenly when she heard angry voices. She turned around and ran to where the voices were coming from. It was coming from the dark forest, she quickly ran over and stopped when she recognized the two voices, they were arguing, one was a boys voice and the other was a girls voice who was clearly crying. Now she could hear their voices much clearer. "Draco, you can't!" Parkinson cried. "Then what do you want me to do? It's the only way!" yelled Malfoy. "Please, Draco, you have to listen to me, there's got to be another way!" she pleaded. "Well there isn't! If I don't do it, I will be killed, you heard him didn't you?" but there was no response, Pansy Parkinson just wailed louder. Hermione couldn’t believe what she was hearing. But before she could think about anything to say to them, she realized she was late for Herbology. She quickly ran towards Green house number twelve and opened the door. "You’re late Miss Granger," said professor sprout. "I know...I had something to do... I won't be late again," she said losing confidence. "Well, since it's our first class I will let you off today but I don’t want this to happen again." Hermione nodded and went to stand between Harry and Ron. They each gave her curios looks and she gave them the I-will-explain-later look. The rest of lesson passed pretty fast. Hermione wasn't really concentrating on what Professor Sprout was saying, she was thinking about Malfoy’s and Parkinson's argument. It troubled her, "what was it that Malfoy had to do?" she asked herself, "Last year, his mission was to kill Dumbledore, or, he was threatened, his whole family would be killed...What was it this time?" "Hermione! Are you there?" a voice asked, bringing her out of her thoughts. "Wh- what?" she asked puzzled. “Class is over, you’ve really been day dreaming,” said Ron, “Let’s go, we have a free period now, what do you say we head out and sit by the lake?” “Sure,” said Hermione, glancing nervously at Harry, “let’s go!” So Hermione, Harry and Ron grabbed their book bags and the three headed towards their favorite spot by the lake. “So,” said Harry, “how’d it go last night?” “Don’t ask, It was a nightmare!” said Hermione. “What happened?” asked Ron nervously, his ears slightly red. “Well,” began Hermione, “When McGonagall left, I walked in and he threw something at me. He said it was my entire fault he was stuck with me. And boy, the way he acted, you’d think he was trying to kill me!” “That wouldn’t be a first,” muttered Ron. “But Hermione,” said Harry puzzled, “Why were you late to Herbology this morning?” “You won’t believe who I bumped into on my way to the green house!” and she told them all what she had heard. When she finished, Ron stared at her opened mouth. “I bet You-Know-Who told him to kill Harry for him,” said Ron. “No Ron, You-Know-Who wants to kill Harry himself,” said Hermione. “Ok,” said Harry annoyed, “while you fight over who’s going to kill me I’ll just start on my Herbology homework.” “You’re right,” Hermione quickly said, “I’m sorry Harry.” “Maybe Voldemort want’s Malfoy to help him get into the castle,” tried Harry. “Maybe…” said Hermione, lost in thought. “Hey, I’ve got a great way how to find out what he’s up to,” said Ron. “And what’s that, Ron?” asked Hermione. “You,” he pointed at Hermione, “you have to make Malfoy like you enough to trust you and then somehow, he’ll tell you what he has to do!” said Ron excitedly. Hermione rolled her eyes. “Yeah, that’s a great idea, make him like you. Jinx him or something,” said Harry. “Forget it, I won’t do it!” said Hermione. “Come on,” said Ron. “Find someone else to do it and besides, Malfoy would never fall in love with someone like me!” said Hermione madly. “What if-” said Ron. “Look, just drop it okay?” said Hermione. “We better go, we’ve got Transfiguration in ten minutes,” said Harry, and him, Ron and Hermione got up and walked across the grounds toward the castle for their next class. ------------------------- ------------------------- I hoped you liked! Tell me what you think! ^_^ -*~ Shirel ~*- |
great! PAMS!! PAMSOID!! XOXO, Tara |
ohhhh I love it!!!!!!! What's Draco supposed to do???? I can't wait please post as soon as possible!! |
Oh I love it! I wounder if she is going to go out with the plan and trink Malfoy. And I wounder who Malfoy is supposed to kill. Harry? HERMIONE??? lol!! Cant wait until you post more!! Love ya Jen! |
Great update! I think Hermione would do it, to help her friends, but maybe...perhaps...it works, but in the other way around...? ^_^ |
Nice post Shirel! PAMS! Katie |
great update, i lurve your story. PAMS! -Jenna |
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Okay 1)New reader very faithful 2)I loved it.Harrys sarcasm is funny. 3)Pmas when you can ~*<3*~ Heather |
NEW READER HERE! Your story is going great so far! It's really good. PAMS! ..:Lisa:.. |
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Okay, everyone, I am sooooo sorry for making you guys wait this long! school is TORTURE!! I am writing the chapter now and I will try really really hard to post it today, the latest tomorrow! I hoppe you guys aren't suffering school! LOL! *high fives you and laughs* -*~ Shirel ~*- |
School is torture, I start Senior year tomorrow, and it's going to be tough! So much stuff planned! WHOOO!!! PAMS Shirel, and don't worry about the waits, just post! Katie |
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Am I really close to discovering it??? lol! Urgh! School is torture. Tomorrow I start my first day of college! I am so nervous. Anywayz! Cant wait until the next post but take your time, school comes girst, even though we dont want it to! lol! Love ya Jen! |
ahhhhhh I don't want to wait!!!!!!!!!!! Please post as soon as you can. No stress!! hehehe |
its really good!!!! & dont worry shirel - i really do mean it! PAMS!! (& dont call me the t word or else....) |
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Finally the next chapter!!!!!!!!! Hello everyone!!! I'm really sorry about the late update it's been almost two weeks since I last posted and I am really sorry. Thankyou so much for everyones really nice comments!! It means a lot to me ! ^_^ Jen- Good luck in college!!!!!!!!! With out any more of my babbling I give you chapter 7!!!!! ;) Chapter seven: ~The Cruciatus curse~ After an interesting class of Transfiguration and a great lunch, Hermione returned to her common room with whom she shared with Malfoy. She gave the password and entered through the portrait hole. At the sight of Malfoy sitting on the couch doing homework, made her scowl. “What are you doing here?” she asked coldly. He turned around and an evil smirk twisted upon his lips. “I should be asking the same question mudblood!” he laughed. Hermione stalked off to her room cursing under her breath, making sure to slam the door behind her. She decided he wasn’t going to get in the way anymore; she had to keep up with her homework and with him tolerating her whenever he got the chance, was simply outrageous. She grabbed her Herbology homework and returned to the common room. She sat in a squashy armchair in the corner of the room and started on her homework. Malfoy looked up at her and scowled. “I can’t even do my homework without a mudblood in the same room as me!” Hermione looked up angrily and said, “So leave!” she pointed towards the door, “better for me!” she smirked. Malfoy sneered and took out his wand. Hermione did the same. “Bite me!” she said. “Malfoy laughed. “It will only cost me a flick of my wand for you to be lying dead on the floor!” “Well so what are you waiting for? Kill me!” she said bravely but Malfoy still did nothing so she continued, “I mean you’ve already had your part in the murder of Dumbledore and now you’ve already made a death sentence on someone else, so what will it hurt you to kill yet, another innocent life?” “How dare you!” he yelled at her but Hermione cut him off. “So tell me D-raco,” she said coolly, “Who’s your next innocent victim?” “That’s enough!” he yelled at her, his face turning paler than it already was, he pointed his wand directly at her heart and yelled “Frantigo!” A burst of blue light shot out of his wand directly towards her heart and she ducked just in time as it soared right over her head and hit a glass decoration of a swan which exploded into thousands of pieces. Hermione stood up quickly, her lip and cheek dripping with blood from the glass that had cut into her skin and raised her wand high pointed towards Malfoy, “Expelliarmus!” The red light that was supposed to hit Malfoy was blocked with only a flick of his wand. The next thing she knew, Malfoy yelled “Crucio!” and the jet of red light hit her squarely in the face as she yelled in pain and yet the pain grew stronger as his face was contorted with rage. Hermione screamed louder and louder, begging for him to stop the curse but it just got stronger and she continued to yell. She had never before had been it with the Cruciatus curse before and now she knew how it felt. It was pain beyond anything she could ever imagine. And as she screamed, her voice began to crack and sounded broken –and then it stopped. She lay there panting and gasping for breath, unable to move a limb in her body and seconds later it all went black. She had fainted. Draco looked down at the unconscious figure of Hermione Granger and immediately regretted his actions. He looked around hopefully, somebody would appear and yell at him for being such an idiot but when nothing happened and nobody came, he walked over to Granger and looked to make sure she was still breathing. Her chest was rising and falling heavily, he saw. He sighed a sigh of relief, she was not dead. He looked at her face; it was white as a sheet. Figuring he could not just leave her there, he stowed his wand back inside his robes and stretched his arms under her body. The second his skin came in contact with hers, he felt a shiver run down his spine. He lifted her off the cold floor and was surprised at how light she was or, maybe, he just got stronger over the hard workout he did over the summer. Draco carried Granger all the way to her room and laid her down on her bed. He looked at her for a couple of seconds before thinking that he should probably remove her shoes. Then he pulled the covers over her and looked down at her. What a stupid thing to do, starting a fight with a mudblood when I should be focusing on what I have to do! He thought angrily and left to his room closing Grangers door behind him. Well there you go! I hope this made up for my late post! :) As you all I'm sure noticed, I added a little bit of Draco's point of view. I don't normally do that but I had to in this chapter. You will find out why later... To all of you who are Jewish- Chag sameach! (-hebrew, means Happy holiday, I think.) And Happy New Year!!!! -*~ Shirel ~*- |
Chag sameach to you to.I loved this post.It makes things a whole lot more interesting.Dracos point of veiw is one i love because well its draco.PAMS ~*<3*~ Heather |
good. pams!! pamsoid!! xoxo, Tara |
OMG! draco was mean... poor hermione... PAMS! |
ohhhhhhhhh my!!! draco's mean!!!!!!!!! plain mean!! But will it keep been like that and will Hermone forgive him??? Ohh I cant' wait love it |
Great post!! Stupid Draco though!! He is so mean!! Oh well, something is going to happen soon though. He had a shiver fun down his spine. ohhh! lol Cant wait for the next post! Love ya Jen! |
EEK! I loved it! PAMS!!!! ..:Lisa:.. |
Nice post Shirel! Draco shall indeed regret his terrible attitude towards his one true love! Go Hermione, sock it to him! Katie |
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i LoVe tHe stOry!!! |
i used to LovEd Draco and HermiOne fAnfic. . |
New Reader Here!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this story till now!!!!! but draco helping hermoine??????????? thats weired!!!!!!!!!!! |
i only read the first2 parts but i'm realy enjoying your story |
ohhhhhhhhhh please post as soon as you can!!! |
Hey everyone! Thank you for reading and WELCOME NEW READERS!!! -I will give a more proper welcome once I post which I am working on. I am having a lot of trouble with this chapter but I have finally written it out and now all I need to do is make a few changes!! :) So it should be up any day now!!! ^_^ -*~ Shirel ~*- |
Yeah!! Can't wait Shierl!!! Hope you post soon! Love ya Jen! |
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Please PAMS! I'd like to know what happens next. >_< ..:Lisa:.. |
hey! its aviva i read it, it was sooooooooooooo good!!! stom!!! i didnt read it!!! now it's chuvvy - dont b insulted shirel, did u really expect AVIVA 2 read it??!! anyway, I read it & its gr8!!! hurry up with the next post already! & have fun in school while im here, at home (with aviva), enjoying my vacation!! lol BTW chag sameach 2 u 2! i g2g because aviva is getting annoyed |
Hey guys!!! Awww! Aviva, I'm sooo insulted that you didn't read it!!! Shame on you! hmph! Thanks soo much Twinny, even know you're probably in our room right now doing homework... :lol: You're soo mean!! And I bet I told you that already... Well, I guess we should have fun with our grandparents... -*~ Shirel ~*- |
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OMG!! Guys you wont believe what just happened to me today.... Ok, soo here I am, supposed to be telling you that my teacher took away my notebook that I write this ff in(!!!) (*Throws Shirel out of the window and then spills buckets of water and fruit on her* Blah! so after my shower.... :lol:) Ok, sooo I know you guys are thinking that i'm like the craaaaziest person around but hey guess what!! It's sitting right next to me and it's SAFE!!!!! Ok sooo with my awsome acting talent (you know, a couple of tears here and there and begging), I GOT IT BAAAAAAACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Does the dance* Ok, so I know i'm not making any sense at all but I can't believe that I almost lost my notebook. (which means my LIFE!!) (and for crying out loud Shirel it's ONLY a notebook!!!!!!!) Okay so after that loooooong announcment which was very boooring(:lol:), I will give you the rest of the chapter by tonight or tomorrow!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, if you guys really want to know which class I was writing, well it was math class.... You know, not my best subject... Well The teacher was wrong to take it away from me!! I was just writing and here she comes and takes it away from me and says that if I get it back it will be at my hoomeroom teacher. Isn't that mean, evil and cruel all at the same time?!? Youch! look at the time! I better go!! *flies of the computer* -*~ Shirel ~*- |
lol!! You bad bad girl you! Writing this awsome fan fic in your stupid math class. lol!! Oh well. I am glad that you got it back though, that means we get a post soon!! Can't wait for it!! Love ya Jen! |
Hey guys!!!!!!! Sooo sorry to keep ya all waiting! But after that whole episode with my teacher :lol: I finalllllly have a chappie!!!! Thanks for all the comments! I love you guys!!! Chapter 8: ~ The Ball of Green Smoke~ The next morning Hermione woke up, only to find herself in a very comfortable bed. She stretched and yawned thinking she had slept very well. She sat up and when she did, a piercing pain ran through her head that she fell back down. She rubbed her head and wondered what she could have done that made her head ache. Then it hit her, yesterday’s events with Draco Malfoy! But when she remembered the part when she had gotten hit by the Cruciatus curse, she didn’t remember ever going to her room. It just didn’t make sense. When she looked at her watch she realized that she was already late and so she pushed the matter out of her mind and began getting dressed. She had no time for breakfast so she went with an empty stomach to potions class. She didn’t meet Malfoy on the way nor did he show up in potions. By lunch she was starting to get suspicious. Later that night, while Hermione was doing some homework, the common room door burst open and a muddy and shaky Draco walked in and when he saw Hermione, he hurried to the bathroom. Hermione wandered where he had been and what was he doing outside? Wasn’t he to old to play in the mud? She finished her essay and did some free reading in Hogwarts A History and then went to bed. The next night, Hermione found herself doing homework in the same room as Malfoy. They both sat on opposite sides of the room in silence. Each doing there own work and not bothering each other. Though Hermione found this quite frustrating, she was fed up with the coldness and bitterness in the air and wished that she was with Harry, Ron and Ginny joking around or Ron accidentally slipping on some water and performing a spell that makes half the common room shake and all the portraits go crashing towards the ground. Now she was trying to master the Patronus charm but with no luck. If only Harry were there to fix her mistakes…If only he could help her… While Hermione was trying to do a patronus, she didn’t know that Draco was watching her out of the corner of his eye. He watched her struggle. What stupid mistakes she was making, her hand was directed towards the floor instead of towards the sky and her hand was bent up instead of strait out. How stupid she was, he thought to himself. He watched her helplessly make those tiny and stupid mistakes, getting frustrated by the minute. He needed her to go to bed already so that he could leave without being seen. Before he could stop himself he spoke: “You know, if you just pointed your wand upward and straightened it, you should have no problem doing the spell.” He said it in barely a whisper and when Hermione spun around and looked at him as if thinking maybe she had imagined that he spoke to her. “Excuse me?” she asked, eying him suspiciously. Draco felt himself turn red and immediately regretted his outburst. “I said, if you just pointed your wand like this-” he pointed his wand upward and straightened his hand, “The Partronus will come out…” he finished. Hermione looked at him long and hard deciding she would take his advice only this one time as to avoid detention the next day. “Like this?” she asked stretching out her arm the way he showed her. He nodded. “Expecto Patronum!” she yelled and a patronus in the form of a bunny shot out the end of her wand and hopped around her playfully. After about a minute, it vanished and Hermione looked at Draco for some sign of complement on her work but his head was bowed and he was doing his homework. She sighed, gathering her things and went to bed. Draco watched Hermione leave and when he heard the door close; he quickly got up and exited the common room through the portrait whole. He climbed the moving staircase up to the seventh floor and walked down the hall towards the room of Requirement. He walked back and forth several times and waited until a door appeared in the solid wall. Draco entered the room, shaking all over with fear. The room was so dark that Draco had to feel his way through. “Your late Draco,” said a drawling voice of Lucius Malfoy. “I-I know,” he started barely able to speak, “I had a-a little problem…” “Is it that Mudblood again?” he asked and when he got no reply, he yelled at him. “Didn’t I tell you to just kill her with that potion I gave you?” Draco just stood there feeling ashamed oh himself that he couldn’t find the nerve to kill a Mudblood. Lucius Malfoy sighed, his temper rising by the minute. “I told you to get on with the plan!” he yelled. “You’re worrying about other things when you should be focusing on what you have to do. Don’t you want us to have all the glory? Don’t you want to be the Dark Lords most faithful servant, Draco?” “Um…” Was simply all he could manage. “Think about it, good night Draco.” There was a ball of green smoke in which Lucius Malfoy seemed to have vanished in. What did you think? Luv ya all! -*~ Shirel ~*- |
OMG Draco is ....and then his father is sucha ..... i cant........>>....>>>.II have a lot to say but most if its inapropriate so.Good post.I luffed it. PAMS ~*<3*~ Heather |
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