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Chapter 1


A noise in the living room jarred a young man awake. He sat up quickly and looked over to his wife who was sleeping soundlessly next to him. She had had a long day. He didn’t blame her for being so tired. Not wanting to disturb her, Benny Edwards climbed out of the queen-sized bed and tiptoed out of the room.

It was dark in his parent’s hallway, but what did he expect? Everybody had to be asleep still. Yes he still lived at home and yes he had a wife. But after being away from his family for five years, it was nice to be seeing them everyday in the morning. Mona, his wife, didn’t mind staying in the house with his parents and his younger siblings; minus Samantha, who had moved to Greece shortly after graduation.

It was the year 2071, March to be exact. It was chilly outside, but Benny was still found wearing shorts and bare foot. The cool wooden floor hit against his feet as he made his way toward the living room. That is where he had heard the sound.

As he got into the room, he realized he couldn’t see anything because it was so dark. But he still heard the sound. It was a gentle tapping. This wasn’t the sound that had woken him, it was a bigger sound and he was surprised nobody else had woken up. Making his way over to a lamp, he quietly switched it on and what he found made him take a step back.

“Sammy?” he said slowly, confused. She looked a mess. Her hair was thrown up in an untidy ponytail and it looked like the clothes she was wearing she had been wearing for days. She was sitting on the floor, leaning against the wall, rocking back and forward, every once in awhile hitting her head against the wall; making the gentle tapping sound. Her eyes were red and she was biting her lip so hard it was turning a dark pink. She looked like she was about to have a nervous breakdown.

When his sister didn’t say anything, Benny walked over to her and slowly eased himself on the ground next to her. They didn’t say anything to each other, and Benny didn’t tell her to stop hitting her head, even though it was putting him on edge for many different reasons. For one, it was surely going to wake somebody up and waking anybody up didn’t seem like a good idea at the moment. Two, the scar on his head made him jumpy when people hit their head. But he didn’t say anything to her. He’s known Samantha long enough not to say anything to her when she was upset. Best to keep quiet until she cooled off.

“I-” She started to say and whimpered next to him.

Benny looked over at her and placed his hand on her leg. “Sammy. Are you ok?” he asked softy.

She looked over at him and Benny caught the sorrow in her chocolate brown eyes. It frightened him, but he kept his cool. Something happened to make her like this and he didn’t like it one bit.

Samantha sniffed and with a trembling lip, uttered, “Milo’s gone.”

Milo was a Greek boy she had met one summer while she was staying with their grandparents. Benny didn’t know much about him. Nobody did. All Benny knew was he lived with his grandparents before he came of age. When Sammy described him a couple of years ago, she had said he was smart, charming, and had the cutest smile. One thing Benny did know was, when Samantha moved out of the house to go live with their grandparents, it was also to be closer with Milo.

“What do you mean gone?” Benny asked in a calm tone. Many questions started shooting through his head, but the main one was, Milo left Samantha and she was heartbroken about it.

“He…They…He’s gone.” Samantha said, beginning to rock harder.

Being so intuitive, Benny caught the main word in that chopped up sentence. “They? Who are they Sammy?”

Samantha looked away from him then and stood up. Benny watched her from the ground and more questions began floating in his head. Who was “They?” What did they have to do with Milo?

“I…they are Milo’s parents.” Samantha answered, her back to him.

Benny stood up and blinked a few times. “Milo’s parents? I thought they were dead.”

She turned around to face him and looked up into his eyes, ready to tell her story. “I thought so too.”


Ok so this is about my current character in the future. The story is going to alternate between Benny (her older brother) and Sammy (my character). Just so you know. Sammy's point of view is always in the past (until later in the story ) and Benny is the future.

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“Time to go. Both of you make your way toward Evania’s cottage. I’ll stop by when I know its safe.” Matt said, his tone serious, but his eyes were full of relief.

“No. We can’t go there. We need to get back to Benjamin’s house! My brother-”

“Shh, Its ok. We will go there instead.” Milo said. Matt frowned but didn’t argue.

“Thank you Matt. I’m sorry I thought you were the bad guy.” Sam said with a shy smile.

He laughed and said, “Yeah and I’m sorry for thinking you were the bad guy, for making my brother fall in love with you.” She chuckled and Matt winked at her.

“Matthaios, I don’t even know what to say.” Milo said, his eyes wanting to say so much but couldn’t place them into words.

“You can say thank you King Matthaios. Savior of mankind.” Matt said mischievously.

Milo rolled his eyes and said, “I’m not calling you King Matthaios.”

“I believe you just did.” Matt laughed, making Milo smile. “Now go. Before I decide to hex you.”

Milo pulled Matt into a tight hug and the brothers stood embracing for several minutes. It was so beautiful to see, that Sam felt like she was intruding on something. When they let go, Matt kissed Milo on the forehead and apparated.

He then turned back to her and held out his hand. Sam walked over and took it. “Take us where ever you want now.” He said peacefully. Sam nodded and spun on the spot, concentrating on Benjamin’s living room.

When she opened her eyes again, she found that they were standing in a familiar room. The light was on in the kitchen, and was making the empty living room dim with light. She held on tightly to Milo’s hand as she heard sharp movement in the kitchen. The sound of a chair moving quickly against the floor, told Sam they knew they were here. She watched as three men came filing into the living room. Benjamin turned on a light and Sam was momentarily blind. When her eyes adjusted to the light, they rested on her older brother. She watched as three emotions crossed his face in under a minute. First confusion, then relief, that quickly turned to anger.

“Sam are you alright?” he said, his voice under control for the moment.

“Yeah we-”

“Why didn’t you come back here after you apparated?” Benny asked, cutting her off.

“Milo needed to talk to me.” But this was not the answer Benny wanted to hear. His chocolate brown eyes almost turned black as he turned his gaze to Milo.

“So this is your fault?” Benny rounded on him.

“Benny its ok. I’m fine.” Sam said, trying to calm him down.

“How did I know that Samantha? For all I knew you were dead in a ditch somewhere.” He said angrily. Sam had never seen Benny so livid. It took her by surprise.

“I’m sorry for worrying you. This is all my fault. Please don’t get mad at her.” Milo spoke up.

Benny’s eyes darkened. She did not like the look at all. Letting go of Milo’s hand, she walked over to Benny and wrapped her arms around him. “I’m ok Benny. You don’t need to worry anymore. It’s over.”

He didn’t respond to her hug at first, but then he began to melt. He hugged her back and said hoarsely, “You don’t know how scared I was. I thought you were gone.”

“I could never leave you Ben.” She said into his chest. She could feel his frantic heartbeat begin to slow against her cheek. He squeezed her then let go.

Turning to Benjamin and Axel, he bowed his head in thanks. “I owe you two my life.”

“Don’t mention it.” Axel replied with a warm smile.

“Keep your life, I already have Axel’s life for saving him from Javier’s diapers.” Benjamin chuckled. Axel rolled his eyes and punched Benjamin lightly in the arm.

Sam smiled at the two and turned back to Benny. “Can we go home now?”

Benny smiled back at her and said, “Yes. Unless you’re thinking of somewhere else.”

“No, I’m thinking of the same home as you.” Sam chortled. She then walked back over to Milo and reached for his hand. He quickly took it, a nervous look playing on his face.

“Whats wrong?” Sam asked, momentarily confused.

“Well, this is going to be the first time I meet your parents. What do I say?” Milo said. Benjamin laughed out loud at this and Benny let a smirk fall onto his face.

“I bet Silvia gets a kick out of this Greek story.” Benjamin said. Axel elbowed him in the ribs and they both went silent.

“She doesn’t needs to know all the details, but she is going to wonder what he is doing there, Sammy.” Benny said.

“Well, I think its time to introduce mum to my boyfriend.” Sam said, over exaggerating a frightened look.

“Now that is a scary thought. Sammy with a boyfriend.” Benny teased.

“Imagine what mum is going to say.” Sam chuckled.

“Alright you two are starting to freak me out.” Milo said, an apprehensive look falling on his face.

”We just went up against a group of Death Eaters, but Mum freaks him out.” Sam said rolling her eyes.

“He should be afraid, Sammy. Very afraid.” Benny said, a twinkle playing in his eyes.

“Thanks now I am.” Milo said, his honey colored eyes growing anxious. The all laughed and Sam pulled Milo into a hug.

“Don’t worry I’ll protect you.” She whispered into his ear.

“I thought I was supposed to protect you.” Milo said with a soft chuckle.

“It’s my turn to protect you tonight.” Sam said. He smiled at her and softly kissed her on the lips.


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Okay, I'm a new reader. And I have to say, though I only made it to chappie 22, this is the best fanfiction I've read in a while. Kudos to you!

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