Sirius Black's Second Chance - Sa9+
 

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Introduction:

I'd like to start off by introducing myself. My name is Lissydove (Lissy to my close friends) and this is my third fan-fic. Currently, I have a fic called One Ravenclaw's Pursuit of Love, Friendship and a Little Attention in the Romance section and Operation Matchmaker! in the comedy section here at SS Grimmauld Place. You may be asking, isn't that enough? "Why, Lissy, are you moved to start another thread?" Answer: "I can't help myself!" I've had this idea for awhile and lately it has been taking up my creative thoughts. So I feel the need to put it in writing.

Those who know me realize that I am a Marauders fan and the topic here will not surprise them. What I hope is that I have written a story on the subject of Sirius, post OOTP and post veil in a way that you all haven't seen before (though it won't be evident in the first post), *shrugs* I know I haven't. I hope that the seasoned fan-fic readers and Sirius lovers out there will enjoy this as well as all casual readers. As my loyal readers know, I rarely take the traditional point of view in my writing. ;)


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Dedication: This fic is hereby dedicated to four lovely ladies whom I love very much. They each know individually how much they mean to me, but I wanted to let them know how much they are appreciated:

Tina (XoxXtinaxox09)

Katy (aiangel327)

Ally (ally221289)

LadyV (Aingil an Spéir)

You all keep me going, as do all of my cherished readers! You are the best! Thank you for being here for me! :glomp: I'm very lucky to have you.


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Sirius Black’s Second Chance


The Other Side of the Veil


Sirius Black’s head was pounding. He felt as though he had been hit with something hard, repeatedly. Perhaps he’d just had one too many firewhiskeys. That wouldn’t be a first. Unfortunately, he felt like he should be remembering something. What? He raised his arm to cover his face. Something was blinding him, which did nothing for the state of his headache. He groaned and rolled over. It was at this point that he realized two things: one, that he was lying down and two, that he was getting wet. He sat up in surprise “What the…?” Then the rest came back to him: leaving Grimmauld Place, the Department of Mysteries, Harry… Harry! What happened to Harry? Sirius sprang to his feet, wand in hand. He braved the bright light and opened his eyes. And found himself… alone… outside.

Overhead, the sky was clear and sunny. It was a pleasant summer day by all observations, but how did he get here? Sirius could see the indentation in the grass where he had been lying and the early morning dew that had begun seeping through his clothing. There were, of course no signs of the struggle he had left behind… How long ago? There was no way to tell for sure. But it had been night time when he last knew what was going on. The last thing he could remember was his cousin. Bellatrix had hit him with something… The pain behind his eyes told him it was something powerful and that he was lucky to have survived. Now he was outside and apparently far away from the action. His eyes raked the landscape and could only see grass and rolling rocky hills that went on for miles. Nearby, at the top of one of such hills was an archway. A thin veil or curtain hung from it, fluttering in the breeze. Sirius recognized it instantly; he had just seen one in the Department of Mysteries. It must be a gateway of some kind, which meant he should be able to go back. He ran up the hill to the arch, but he needn’t have bothered. Just as he reached the stone archway, the veil fluttered one last time and disappeared. Recklessly, he tried to walk through the stone structure, only to come out the other side on the same rocky hill. The gateway, or whatever it was, had closed.

“Harry! No!” he shouted in anguish, not worrying who might hear. It was painfully evident that he was nowhere near any towns or dwellings. He reached out and placed his hands on the cold unforgiving stone and knew that he wasn’t going to get it to work again; he had no idea what kind magic enchanted it. He rested his face on his hands and tried to think. Well, he had no idea where he was for one thing, though his instincts told him that he was still in Great Britain, probably north, judging from the landscape. He would guess Scotland. He needed to find a town of some kind where he could discreetly contact the Order. He could try to apparate a few times until he got his bearing. It was dangerous for a wizard to apparate over long distances when he did not know where he was, but he'd have to try it. It was as good of a plan as any.

Sirius sighed and moved away from the arch and… went nowhere. He tried to disapparate again, with no result. Again. What was going on? He growled in frustration. Well, if he had to travel on foot, he would be faster on four legs then on two. This way, he could also approach any towns unnoticed. He attempted to adopt his animagus form of a great black dog. Unfortunately, once again, nothing happened. He looked at his hands in astonishment, they were still hands and not paws and he was clearly still standing on two legs! He couldn’t believe it! Was he bereft of all magical ability for some reason? What could this mean? He was slowly beginning to feel frantic. As a test, he raised his wand and tried a simple spell:

“Wingardium Leviosa!” The stone he had been pointing at floated into the air obediently. Angrily he tossed it away and tried some different spells, and they too had the desired result. In frustration, he aimed a stunner at the ground and sent a large clump of dirt and dust into the air. Satisfied with that, he aimed a few more stunners out of sheer ire. Clearly he could do magic, but why couldn’t he disapparate or use his animagus form? Or do anything that would get him out of this ruddy place and closer to Harry?

He vented his anger to the sky once more, but knew it wasn’t getting him anywhere. He would have to walk, for now. He wasn’t worried about his ability to make his way in the wilderness, he had traveled and foraged for himself while on the run from the Ministry. He had just never been quite this pressed for time. Anything could be happening to Harry at this moment and Sirius was powerless to help him. He gritted his teeth and made a decision. He turned south and started to walk, with only his thoughts for company. How could he have failed his Godson so badly?

He traveled all day, the landscape not changing much. Nor was there any sign of human habitation, wizard or muggle. He would have to take a break. There was no help for it. It would do Harry no good if he pushed himself to exhaustion and not be able to go on. Nearby, there was a stream that he had recently begun to follow. He knelt down by it’s edge and splashed cool water onto his face. Perhaps after a drink and something to eat, he could continue to travel into the night. He leaned over and cupped his hands to get more water. The stream was a very slow moving one at this time of year and reflected his face like a mirror. What he saw caused him to recoil in fear and shout out in surprise…


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Some response posts (so I know you're out there!) will get you some more! :evil:

omg. that was briliant! :D

Quote time!
 

Hey!

Yay, I found it. I love it Lissy! Brilliant idea.

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Perhaps he’d just had one too many firewhiskeys

:lol: -pets Sirius- I would be high on firewhiskey if i was in his position...
Grrrr... Bellatrix :hairpull:

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In frustration, he aimed a stunner at the ground and sent a large clump of dirt and dust into the air.

Let all your anger out Sirius.
If only he knew...

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What he saw caused him to recoil in fear and shout out in surprise…

Muahahha. I know what it is! :shifty:


All I can say is... PAMS!

Allyx

NO!!!!!!!!!IT’S NOT ENUF!!!!! Oh and might I add to ne new readers, THEY’RE ALL AWESOME! Well… really… their Writer is awesome!!!!! Lol… Um…. I just hope you don’t get too carried away Lizzy. Some times this stuff get stressful… HECK, who am I kidding, That’s a lie… More is always BETTA!
WOOT! I luv ya…Usually the first fic I read of someones is always my favorite but I think you’ll break the tradition (That’s a good thing) It’s just I absolutely LOVE Sirius fics. I can’t get enuff of him! He’s actually my favorite character. So, you know how sad I was when IT happened. AND HE IS NOT DEAD! So, everyone who thinks so…Think Again.
*Shnuggles and kiggles Sirius to death* Yet.…. He’s still not dead! Lol!
WOOT! I can’t wait to start! WOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, curiosity killed the cat (Not Sirius…lol) so I’ll start.
My POOR BRAVE SIRY (my nickname for him)!!!! He’s never alone. Wherever, Sirius is….my heart is right behind him! Lol, That sound so cheesy, but who cares!
One word….EVIL B* (Okay… I know it’s two but the last one was bleeped…I need to be good to mods, My warnings are beyond crazy and they’re threatening to suspend me instead of give detention! BOOO-HOOO)
At least you put him in a safe place….But Where is it? *tilts head to do thinking* Where? Where does the veil lead? Well…. Can’t wait to find out! But…. This is giving me a head ache. I want MORE!!!!
*Pets Siry* Don’t worry Hun, You’ll get there eventually… Right Lizzy? *Hopes she’ll like Lizzy’s ending* Heck who am I kidding. I know I will after all it’s one of ur writing. I literally don’t know. I mean I usually have a good enough guess. But maybe since this is a bit more personal for me (Considering it’s including Siry) That I don’t know. I just hope…Well…. I seem so attached…*Gets in her goofy mood And pokkles Siry* Ur brave, GET OVER IT! Lol… muahahaha! That’s k… That’s another way to show love! HE’S NOT DEAD! Lol, sry but well it’s my opinion and I strongly believe it. Did they find a body? NO Did they know what the veil was all about? No Did they find out how he got sucked into it? NO. Were there many clues by JKR that gave ppl ideas he wasn’t dead. YES (The part w/ Luna)
So, there you have it! What else you need? I just know this is one of JKR’s evil plans to fool you all…But I’m not fooled! And um… what exactly to you mean by canon (I’ve been wondering that a while) Do ya mean in logic? Well… whatever, but I’m one of the people who don’t accept his disappearance too. I don’t think I ever will!

Okay, well I guess I got to the end! And… I’m dying for more! I absolutely love Sirius fics but every time I get sucked into one it goes the wrong way (The way I don’t like… explaining Sirius is weak and that eventually he’ll die out) So I just stop reading automatically. But I've promised myself that I’ll stay w/ this one. After all it’s one of your masterpieces and I’LL LOVE IT NEWAY! *Crosses her fingers and hopes*
*Huggles and kiggles Lizzy for the new read* Ty for pming me about it! I’ll come in ASAP!
Luv Always,
Ur dedicated Sirius fan,
Tina

In for a reply post!
 

Good morning everyone! I am so excited to see replies from you all! I'm really pleased with where this fic is going and I hope that you all will be too.

PBLOVER - my first response! :)

Thank you so very much! I really hope I can get you to come back!



Ally! Hey Everyone - she comes to all my fics!!

Thank you so much for sampling my newest endeavor! I'm really crazy to be doing it, but I really couldn't ignore this idea!

Me too! Poor guy was alone too much before...

Agreed!

Sometimes ya just gotta vent!!

;) But don't tell! Ever hear of the spolier police? LoL!! And I will ... soon!



Sierra - My dear stalking sister and lover of all things Ottery!!!

Thank you so much my sis!! I always love to see you visit!! One day I promise to do a proper Draco ficlet for you. (Yes, he will be conscious!)


Tina!!!!! My favorite Riddle Master!!! (btw: I really liked mine)
I was hoping you'd come!! Thank you soooooo much!!!

LoL!!! You are so sweet! Thank you :blush: More can be better, a bit stressful like you said too. I'll just have to take all three fics a little slower. This one has a lot of my attention at present however...

Thank you again! I hope that I am getting better with time. As I practice my writing skills, which were quite rusty at the begining of 'One Ravenclaw's', I hope to work my way into a story idea of my own that can be published one day.

I just love Sirius too. OMG. I am a very public and vocal Marauders lover and a Remus fan in particular, but in my heart Mr. Black is a very close, almost equal second. I just don't mention it much because I have felt as you do. That he is not dead, and I've been shot down many times when I say so. I have a real hard time accepting it, so I'm with ya Tina!

That was just too cute!

:gasp: Suspend my Tina? Why?

Oh, I hope so too! Don't forget, I love the man!

*sly* What do you hope? I really hope to surprise you and that you will like what's to come next...

I'm with ya sweetie! :yes: I've made these arguments too.

When we say that, we are referring to the 5 (soon to be 6) published books, the two HP school books and any question that JKR has confirmed an answer to in interviews. See the HP Lexicon website for a ton of good stuff. Unfortunately, all of the above sources state that Sirius is dead. Including JKR herself. I still want to think she's playing with us. *shrugs* She promised an explanation for Sirius' fate in the next books, so we'll see. We can imagine in the meantime though - right?

I don't like those kind of Sirius fics either and that may be a spolier enough for now.

Lots of hugs and love for Tina!

Now the teaser!!
 

Teasing you all a bit here! :evil: The next post is written and ready to go! Stuff to be revealed and think about! Some major hints as to where this is going as well!! :shifty: The first post was 1 3/4 pages in Microsoft Word. The next is 6, which is possibly one of my longest posts ever. So why am I going on like this? Because I'm bad and I'd like to see at least one more response before I post later!!



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-subscribes to thread-:worm:

Can I post to get update? :D

I promise I wont tell :tongue::flowers:

My dear Ally, of course! For you, anything!!

And for those who read my entry in Writers Week - the one about the Common Witch or Wizard, you'll see that I actually refer to my own ficlet here!


This post is for my friend Ally!


Emergency Transportation


Tentatively he leaned close to the water again. He raised one hand to his face. The reflection did the same. He rubbed his eyes and looked again. The face of a handsome young man, perhaps around age sixteen blinked back at him. Sirius was in total disbelief. He hadn’t seen this face in 20 years, yet he recognized it instantly. It was his own. But, gone were the lines of stress that he had accumulated over the years of hardship. His skin, which had become pale over months of being indoors was now flushed with the glow of youth and he no longer had that thin look he had acquired in prison and running from the Ministry. His features, which had become hollowed and haunted looking in Azkaban, had softened. His grey eyes, once dulled with unhappiness, now sparked with the mischief of better days. This was the way he was long ago, before the rise of Voldemort, before that dreadful night when Lily and James…

“Harry!” he said aloud. He had momentarily forgotten his godson, transfixed by the image in the water as he was. What did this mean for Harry? Sirius could only surmise that the veil in the stone archway had something to do with time. Was Harry at this moment fighting for his life, or had he not yet been born? Had he, Sirius, gone back in time to his youth? “James! He could see James again!” Sirius thought with joy. This time he could warn him. Have a chance to do things over and put things right. Maybe the war would never have to happen. He could at least see to it that his godson wasn’t left an orphan…

But he knew that terrible things could happen when one played with time. He had learned long ago in school about magical devices called time turners and how they should not be used lightly. He would need to be careful. If, as he was beginning to believe, he had gone back to his teen-age years, he would need to be careful not to encounter anyone who knew him. Not until he could get his bearings anyway. A wild thought occurred to him that he might even encounter himself! Or was he simply returned to his old body? This line of thought was beginning to bring back his headache. He needed to get help. Who to contact? That answer was simple. Dumbledore. Dumbledore would believe him. That was where he could start. Thus decided, Sirius was beginning to feel better. Glancing once more into the stream, he could see the old familiar smirk that he was known for reflecting back at him. He stood up and brushed the dirt from his robes. This he could get used to again.

The next task at hand was to figure out how to reach the Headmaster. There was still the problem of not knowing where he was and not having transportation. Sirius wracked his mind and remembered that there was a bus for just such needs. The Knight Bus, for the stranded witch or wizard. “This situation should qualify,” he thought wryly. He would have hesitated to use it before, since his face was well known on wanted posters, but he had never used it as a youth (preferring other modes of transportation ;)) and even in the future, no-one should recognize him like this.

“Well, here goes nothing,” Sirius thought as he raised his wand arm.

Suddenly a violently purple triple-decker bus was bumping its way over the rocky landscape towards him. Sirius laughed with happiness and waved it over. The bus stopped in front of him and opened it’s door.

An older heavy-set man stood in the doorway, a pipe clenched in his teeth, smoke wreathed his head in a cloud. “Welcome to the Knight Bus, for the stranded witch or wizard,” the man said, sounding bored. “The name’s Oscar and I’ll be your conductor today, Ernie there is your driver,” he gestured to a very old man up front and continued. “And no, Stan is not here. He took a temp job over at the Ministry. Has a girlfriend who wants him to make more money.”

Sirius was non-plussed by this speech. He didn’t know who Stan was nor did he care whether he had a girlfriend or needed a part time job. He attempted to board the bus, but was stopped.

“11 sickles first, laddie,” Oscar held out one meaty hand.

Sirius stuck his hands in his pockets, knowing full well that they were empty. Grabbing money wasn’t exactly his first order of business before leaving Grimmauld Place earlier. “Erm.. well, you see, I haven’t got any money,” Sirius flashed the man his most winning smile.

“No money, no ride!” Oscar made to re-enter the bus.

“Wait! I have a rich uncle, he’ll pay you when we get there!” Sirius called.

“Ha!” the man laughed in his gravelly voice. “I’ve heard that one before!”

Sirius was getting concerned. “Well there must be some kind of clause for situations like this! Clearly I’m stranded! There must be an exception,” he reasoned.

Oscar studied Sirius through his haze of smoke. He took in the landscape around them, it was obvious that they were in the middle of nowhere. “Alright”, he grumbled, “get in. Don’t tell anyone though. If everyone knew we had a clause like that, then every lost wizard would want to ride for free.”

Sirius promised not to tell and eagerly stepped onto the bus.

“You’ll want to avoid Madam Marsh there,” the conductor warned as Sirius looked for a seat. “She doesn’t travel well.”

Sirius noticed a rather green looking witch seated nearby and made sure not to sit near her. It wasn’t very difficult as there were several comfortable armchairs scattered about the cabin.

Oscar took his seat up front, “so where are you going, boy?”

Sirius almost forgot to answer the man, it had been so long since someone called him that. He had been thinking about this, though. He had no idea if Dumbledore spent his summer holiday at Hogwarts, so Hogsmeade may not be a practical destination. Going to James’s house or his own could be a problem too, so “The Leaky Cauldron,” he decided aloud.

“You hear that?” Oscar addressed the old driver. “Let’s go Ernie.”

The bus suddenly pitched forward and Sirius could understand the state of his fellow passenger as they sped forward. Oscar, for his part, leaned back in his chair, crossed his arms over his chest, and pulled his hat over his eyes, puffing silently on his pipe.

Sirius sat back and just tried to hold on as the chairs glided to and fro, knocking into each other like bumper cars throughout the bus. Madam Marsh slid by looking even greener.

Suddenly, Oscar lifted his hat and fixed Sirius with a penetrating stare, taking in his disheveled appearance, “so what were you doing out there all by yourself, laddie?” he asked somewhat suspiciously.

“Oh, uhm, crashed my broom, actually.” Sirius lied quickly. “Splintered it, no use trying to fix it.”

“Your parents know your flying so far?” the conductor shifted his pipe to the other side of his mouth.

“Well, I...” Sirius started.

“Humph!” the older man grunted. “Kids! Should be beaten more often. That’ll keep you in line,” he pulled his hat back over his eyes and said no more for the rest of the trip.


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See, this is so long, I will need two posts...

Hee hee :)

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This post is for my friend Ally!

Yay. I've never had one dedicated to me before, i feel honoured ^_^

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flushed with the glow of youth

aw, i love this line.

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Has a girlfriend who wants him to make more money.”

lol

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You’ll want to avoid Madam Marsh there

Good ol' Madame Marsh.


I await the next post!

And now the rest...
 

Hospitality at the Inn


Not soon enough, the bus finally arrived in London and came to a stop in front of an old brownstone building. “The Leaky Cauldron!” Oscar called and Sirius was more then grateful to exit the vehicle. He promised once more as he got out not to tell anyone about his free ride, then the bus sped away.

Sirius sighed and straightened his shoulders, he looked like heck, but there was nothing he could do about that. He just hoped that he wouldn’t see anyone he knew, though it was doubtful. His money situation wasn’t helping him either. He would just have to talk his way through. He smirked to himself, this could be fun.

The inside of the pub was dark and smoky. Various witches and wizards were seated at tables, eating and drinking, none that Sirius recognized, and no one gave him a second glance. He approached the landlord, a bald toothless man he heard someone call Tom.

“Excuse me,” Sirius said to man. “My uncle reserved a room here for me. He paid in advance. Under the name…” Sirius thought quickly about things he knew about Dumbledore and settled for something he read on the professor’s Famous Wizard card, “…Brian Wulfric.” (two of Dumbledore’s middle names)

Tom consulted his log. “Nope, I’ve got nothing under that name, kid. You sure you’re in the right place?”

Sirius widened his eyes in surprise. “That can’t be! I know I’m in the right place. My Uncle Albus said to check in here. Look again!”

“No mistake, boy, I don’t have you on here,” the landlord sounded irritated.

“My Uncle – Albus Dumbledore – wouldn’t lie,” Sirius continued the ruse, “he said to wait for him here and I will! If you’ll just let me send him an owl, I’m sure he’ll clear this up.”

The man’s expression of annoyance quickly turned wary, “Dumbledore, eh? Great man, great wizard. You’re really related to him?”

Sirius flashed the man a winning smile, “he’s my great, great, great – “

“Alright, enough. Don’t need to recite the family tree, gives me a headache. I’ll let you have a room and you can send an owl. If it doesn’t come back with payment by tonight, you’re out.” Tom took out a key and a roll of parchment and a quill for Sirius to use. “I’m only doing this because it’s Albus,” he reminded the young man.

“Brilliant!” Sirius grinned and sat down at a table to write his note to Dumbledore. He couldn’t sign his real name, of course, but he hoped that the use of Dumbledore’s own names would catch the man’s attention. That, and the fact that the professor had seen enough of Sirius’s test papers and homework (not to mention detention assignments) over the years to recognize his handwriting.

Sirius handed the parchment back to the proprietor who attached it to the leg of an owl. “Room 11,” the man told him, “and don’t go anywhere ‘til we get a response.”

“Sure thing!” Sirius said and headed upstairs. Room 11 sported a large four poster bead, a fireplace and a window that let in the mid day sunshine. Outside, he could hear people going about their day on Diagon Alley. On the wall was a mirror, Sirius couldn’t help going to look into it. It had been a long time since that reflection greeted him! He combed out the snarls in his long black hair with his fingers and admired the effect. He couldn’t wait to get cleaned up, but he figured that it wasn’t wise to ask anything else of Tom until Dumbledore got back to him.

“Vanity is a sin,” the mirror reminded Sirius as the boy preened for a few minutes longer.

“Who asked you?” Sirius asked, but turned away from the mirror. He was in a good mood, and itching to get out. He decided to use a little restraint, (it probably wasn’t wise to risk getting into trouble already) and not leave the room, though the sounds and smells coming from the open window were maddening. James or Remus could be out there right now! Sirius craned in head out the window but could see no one he knew. If he saw Peter though…

There was a knock at the door. A woman came in carrying a tray of food, “compliments of the manager,” she said.

“Well that’s just neighborly of him. Thank you,” Sirius drawled.

The woman blushed and smiled at him, unconsciously straightening her hair, “Well, erm, if you need anything else…?” she asked almost hopefully.

“Not just now, thanks,” Sirius’s eyes sparkled, he was enjoying this.

“Right then, see you…” the lady backed out of the door.

Sirius attacked his lunch in earnest, he was starved. He really hoped that Dumbledore understood his message. He had no idea how he was going to pay for this.

After eating, Sirius had nothing much else to do. It was all he could stand to be trapped in yet another room he couldn’t leave and he spent some time pacing the floor before flopping down on the bed to try and get some sleep. He must have succeeded because he was surprised from his dreams by an owl pecking at his hand. He took the letter from it’s leg and the bird flew back out the window. He read:


“I’ve already paid the manager.
Stay in your room. Speak to no one. I’ll be there in two hours time.”
D


So Dumbledore obviously understood his letter, or was at least interested to find out who this Brian Wulfric was. “Another two hours, though,” he thought as if he had never waited longer. He sighed and flopped back on the bed…

He was startled into wakefulness once again, this time by a tall wizard with long white hair and beard apparating into the room.

“Dumbledore!” Sirius said by way of greeting. The Headmaster looked the same as ever, and Sirius wasn’t sure if he was ever more grateful to see the man’s crooked nosed visage.

Dumbledore peered at Sirius quizzically, if the professor was surprised at who he was seeing, he hid it quickly. “No time to lose, we must leave here,” he said.

“But wait, I fell through the veil and…” Sirius started.

“Not right now,” Dumbledore interrupted. “We’ll go back to Hogwarts, we can speak freely there.” The older wizard reached into a pouch and pulled out some floo powder. He lit the fireplace and gestured for Sirius to go first.

“Hogwarts, Headmaster”s Office!” he said.


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No new posts here for a couple of days now. Are you guys on to me yet? :shifty:

I need to work on Operation Matchmaker which is just crying for attention! TTFN!!

Thanks Lissy.

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Sirius flashed the man a winning smile, “he’s my great, great, great – “

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Are you guys on to me yet? :shifty:

Hmmm... :shifty: Are you waiting for the HBP to come out...? Or is this me being totally random and wrong?


PAMS!

Reply for my friend... Hey it's my thread, I can spam all I want!!!
 

Hey Ally :hello:

Really? Well you deserve a lot more! :yes: You got the super duper extra long post this time though!

Me too actually. I'm a bit soft on the man :loved: so I enjoy describing him, i.e.: he's looked in the mirror so much already! He was a bit vain anyway!

Oh yes!

You are not wrong! But the answer to that is yes and no. When HBP arrives, I will very likely add details from it and refer to it. What I meant for all those who don't know a secret (but you do!), are they on to me about what is going on with Sirius? :shifty:

Oh yeah! lol :dunce:

Cant wait for the next post!

OMG LIZZY! *Stares shocked* Lol, see I’ve been coming on lately but I usually check my fav fics first. Lol, as much as I love Robert, I went straight away to One Ravenclaws Pursuit… Sadly I had seen you hadn’t posted. Well, I checked my other fics and then remembered this one, My stupid self thought if she hadn’t updated for the other she might’ve not updated this either and I didn’t feel like taking my cp on a roller coaster ride looking for it, b/c I hadn’t saved it to my Fav list. Well, I hadn’t thought about going to my game and just looks at ur siggie. Anyways, moving on, I finally found the fic like a whole day later and here ya are w/ so many replies! I’m like…NOOOOOO. But then I thought I could just stay in today and read the update and ur replies! So, here I am! *Runs real quick to save at the top of her favorite list*
Okay, let’s get started….WOOOHOOO!
Lol, I told ya nothing can keep me away! And ur soooooo welcome!
Lol, They found out that I’ve been planning and giving others ideas on how to get detention. I want my detention; I THINK I’ve already explained why. So, they say if I go through w/ any plan of mine, that they’ll suspend me even if it’s minor. They actually said they’d give me detention w/o me doing something but well I want mine earned. I sound like the biggest dork, but well… whatever, I guess you don’t understand where I’m coming from. But, don’t get a bad impression of me or what not.
LMAO….EVIL….MUAHAHAHA! Lol, I actually enjoy teasers…It’s the cliffie’s I hate! DIE CLIFFIE DIE!*Flees before Lizzy gets any ideas* OMG!!! *Looks at Siry flirty* I’m liking this fic A LOT MORE! Lol, A young Siry! I see you were right LIzzy! I definently will love this fic more!!! MUHAHAHAH! *Steals Siry for herself* How descriptive, but you could’ve used hot too! Lol, I am such a tease! Sry,
MUHAHAHAHHAHA! This will work out just perfect! Mischief….I wonder…. I might actually get some new good ideas from this new Siry! Okay, now I need to stop, I think I’ll be replying to every two words…
*Flees to help at the cry for Help* Lol, sorry, I most times imagine myself in fics…(Well, I was once…in the CC but that doesn’t count) *Pets Siry’s head and then exits the fic*
*Imagines Siry on his motorbike* Oh, how lovely! A striking MAN LIKE HIM NEEDS TO TRAVEL IN STYLE! LOL!
YAH YA BETTA HAVE!!! *Puts her bat and helmet away* lol, I never liked the Knight Bus anyway…
*Sniffs Disappointed* Lol, but…uh…my..house is…uh…always opened. Then remembers her annoying brothers…LEAKY CALDRON IT IS! *Pokkles herself for ever doubting Siry! LOL…
HOW DARE HE! *GETS OUT HER BAT AND THROWS IT AT HIS BOTTOM* Now who’s gonna stay in line! Yah… That’s what ya get. So shut up and don’t say another word! LOL! I knew that bat would come in handy!

MUHAHAHHA! More goof-ball-ness!
*Scrolls up unblinking* I never knew that. But oh how I love the name Brian. *Thinks of BSB*
YA GO SIRY! *Gets in a cheerleaders outfit and cheers Siry* Go siry go Siry! He’s our man, if he can’t do it no one can!
But…. I GUESS lying helps too! LOL! *CLAPS AND CLAPS* A natural I tell you! I guess…it just comes easy for us… But hey that’s a white lie, So it’s not as bad. And if ya still doubt him, *Crosses her fingers for Siry* There ya go, he was only kidding! LOL..
HE’S MINE! So back off u little *****! I’m not even joking. But hey, it’s not his fault the ladies like him! I’d do the exact same if I was her. In fact I wish we could trade places for that sec. Lol, OMg… I’m getting too carried away! I wonder…But how could he know? Then again, he is Dumbledore. Just do ur thing D (I’ve never ever heard him referred as to that…CUTE!)
I NEED MORE! YA CAN’T STOP THERE! LOL, Will ya can. Wanna know why? Ur the Awesome writer who got the idea! So, take ur sweet time grl, But don’t take too long ! And ya go to ur fics. I’m just dying to read more of Robbert’s fic!

*LOOKS SUSPICIOUSLY!* Not on to you, but I don’t think I want to know. JUST PAMS!!!!!

Hey Lissy, just dropping to say heelo. I havent got time to read it all now (you're a bad influence on me, it's nearly 2 am here... ;))
Anyways, what I've read so far it's great! I just love Sirius - you can imagine my horror when, well, you know, anyways, I'll be back later,
Love ya,
LadyV.

Lissy!
I'm all caught up, and all confused...
I have several ideas floating around about whats going on, but I'm not sure...
anyways,
PAMS!
Love ya,
LadyV.

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I was in the middle of my reply to you all just now, when I hit something that made it all go away! Arrrgghh!!! Anyway, as I was saying!

I'm so sorry about my slowness lately, been mucho busy!!! But after some replies, we will have some more Sirius!!!

Ally!!!! Who may be in France by now!! :bye:

I'm so sorry about the delays, but there will be posts here when you get back!!!



Tina! My Riddle Pal!!! (you have me stumped just now!):

You make me smile! I'm sorry about the random nature of my posting! I've just been going to where inspiration strikes! I'm sure you understand how Sirius can do that to a person!

I don't get a bad impression at all!! You are too cute!! So naughty too! So funny, you want your detention, but it has to be earned. A truly noble Hufflepuff you are!! Or should you be a crafty Slytherin?

LoL!!! Can't promise a lack of cliffies, I think they are fun!!! LoL!!!

*winks* Told you!! Young Siry... :yes: With a twist!!

Yes, hot is true, not as poetic sounding though... LoL!!!

You are just way too cute!!

Meh, it's useful though!

The ladies love him, what can I say?

Good question!! Read on!!

There will be more in both fics soon!! I love how Ravenclaw's has become the Robert fic and not the Jenna one anymore!! LoL!!!

Sure you do!! And I will....


Sierra, my stalking Sis!!!
No problem, take your time and *poof* Your wish is my command!!


LadyV, so very happy to have you here!!!

You are so sweet to come read and catch up so quickly! Thank you so much!! I hope that you are confused in a good way, it means you caught some discrepencies between what Sirius is thinking and what I'm hinting at...


All will be revealed, next:

An Assignment is Given


Sirius arrived in the Headmaster’s office a bit less gracefully then the Headmaster himself, but Dumbledore had a way of making everything look easy. Sirius dusted himself off and looked around. This office was always a sight to behold, the pictures of former Headmasters dozing in their frames, the various magical items of curiosity, shelves upon shelves of books, and on his perch Fawkes, the phoenix. It was all familiar, as Sirius had spent a little more time then he should have here when he went to school.

“Come, sit,” Dumbledore was saying, pulling up a chair near his desk, “have a drink, I think you’ll need one. I know I do,” he continued, taking a seat at the desk himself.

Sirius took the offered seat while trying to decide where to start.

“Why don’t you start from the beginning,” the professor seemed to read his mind. Dumbledore poured himself a healthy glass of firewhiskey. To Sirius he offered some butterbeer, “it wouldn’t be right to offer whiskey to a minor,” the man winked.

Sirius took a sip of his drink, collected his thoughts, and stated, “I’m not the person you think I am.”

Dumbledore raised one eyebrow, “no?” he asked politely. “You aren’t Sirius Black? I certainly didn’t think you were Brian Wulfric, good idea I might add.”

Sirius swallowed his irritation at the Headmaster’s calm demeanor. “Believe it or not, when I last saw you, I was a grown man, twenty years older then now,” He looked for a reaction from the white bearded wizard, but was disappointed. “I fell through a stone archway that I think must have some connection with time.”

“I see,” Dumbledore answered, steepling his fingers under his chin. “What year do you think this is?” the professor’s gaze was penetrating.

Sirius was taken aback by the question. “Well, based on my appearance I’d say I was around sixteen, so… 1976 or thereabouts?” He was suddenly feeling uncertain.

Suddenly there was another glass on the desk, Dumbledore poured some firewhiskey into it and offered it to the young man before him, “I think you should have some of this after all,” he said. “I’m not sure the best way to say this, so I will just get to the point. The year happens to be nineteen hundred and ninety six. Approximately two and a half months after the event you last remember, I’m afraid.”

Sirius didn’t know what to say. He took a large gulp of the offered drink and felt some of the color come back to his face. “Harry?” he asked hoarsely as he began to realize the implications of what Dumbledore was telling him.

“Is safe.” Dumbledore said kindly, “it is you we’ve been most distressed about losing.” The Headmaster then went on to describe the events following Sirius’ disappearance through the veil. “So as you can imagine, I was quite surprised to receive your letter,” he finished.

“So, Harry thinks… I’m dead…” Sirius said numbly.

“Yes,” Dumbledore nodded sadly. “The arch and the veil are very ancient magic. We have little understanding of how it works or even why it exists. We did feel that there are others, as you have confirmed, but we have never known of someone who has gone through and been able to come back. Those who tried were simply believed to be dead. Just as astonishing, in my opinion, is the way it has affected you,” Dumbledore took in the younger man’s youthful appearance. “You seem to have completely reverted to your 16 year old self, magical ability and all.”

Sirius nodded, he understood now why he could not use his animagus form. It was around this age that he had first learned to do it. And a wizard can not apparate until he takes the test at age 17.

Dumbledore went on as if the boy had spoken this aloud. “Which brings us to the question of what we shall do now.”

Sirius was getting suspicious, “what do you mean?” he asked.

“What I mean is that you can’t just go out in the wizarding world as you are. Granted, most people won’t recognize you, but some will. I think it best that the less people who are aware of your return, the better.” Dumbledore paused, “Not even members of the Order should know… Or Harry.”

Sirius opened his mouth to object, he was not going back into hiding and the thought of leaving his godson on his own, believing he was dead was just unthinkable…

A sharp look from the Headmaster cut Sirius’ objection off unspoken. “You are still a wanted man, Sirius. The greater number of people who are aware of your situation, the greater chance there is of you being exposed. “The professor continued more softly, “Harry has been through a lot since he lost you. I don’t think it is fair to play with his emotions again so soon.” Dumbledore’s eyes started to twinkle, “However, I do have an assignment for you.”

“Which is…” Sirius wasn’t sure what to expect.

“Well, I should think it would be obvious, a boy of your age needs to be in school. You have a lot of learning left to do.” Dumbledore winked, “and if you could keep certain students from getting into trouble…”

“Isn’t that a bit like the blind leading the blind?” Sirius quipped, but his mind was racing with the possibilities. Go back to Hogwarts? He could keep an eye on Harry first hand… Unconsciously the old grin had returned to the boy’s face. “I accept your assignment,” he said aloud.

“I thought you might,” Dumbledore said wryly. “I’ll be speaking to Professor McGonagall and the other staff who knew you before. You won’t be treated any different from the other students. I do hope you can behave this time,” he warned doubtfully.

“Sure thing,” Sirius grinned and leaned back casually in his chair, firewhiskey in hand, “I’ll keep the students in line for you.”

“Right,” suddenly the firewhiskey disappeared from the boy’s hand and Dumbledore continued, “you may continue the ruse of being my great grand nephew. So try to act a little less like yourself. Harry may not recognize your appearance but he will become suspicious if you don’t try to be more discreet in your mannerisms.”

Sirius was undaunted by this remark or the loss of his drink, “I’m your man, Uncle” he replied, “I won’t give us away.”

The Headmaster chose to ignore this and went on, “You can stay here for the rest of the summer holiday. I’ll arrange for a chaperone to take you to Diagon Alley for your school books later this week. I can’t allow my long lost nephew to wander around on his own.”

“Of course not,” Sirius agreed, he was in too good a mood to be distressed at the thought of being stuck here for a couple of weeks, he was at Hogwarts. He wished he could contact Remus. “Just give me the Gryffindor password and I think I’ll be turning in.” He stretched and yawned. Sirius couldn’t wait to get back to the old common room…

“Sirius, or Brian I should say,” Dumbledore warned, “I couldn’t possibly give the password to an unsorted student. You’ll have to wait and see where the sorting hat places you.”

Sirius looked up at the shelf where said hat resided. “Well then, let’s get it over with! Once a Gryffindor, always a Gryffindor I’m sure.” He rose to retrieve the item.

“I don’t think so,” professor replied, “I told you that you would be treated like any other student and that means being sorted with the rest. Don’t you think it would seem odd if you just showed up in the Gryffindor common room? You can stay in one of the guest suites for now.” Dumbledore noticed the disgruntled expression of his charge at this decision. “It’s only right that you take your chances with everyone else, you’re certainly not worried about that, are you? Once a Gryffindor, always a Gryffindor as you already stated…” the professor’s eyes were sparkling with mischief.

“Yeah, right,” Sirius wasn’t as sure of himself all of a sudden.

“I think it is best that you get some rest now,” Professor Dumbledore started to dismiss his ‘nephew’. “I’ll have you shown to your room…”

“No need, I know where they are. I’ll take the one closest to the kitchens.” Sirius waved the offer away.

“I’m sure,” the Headmaster said wryly.

Suddenly the conversation was interrupted by a loud dramatic yawn coming from one of the paintings on the wall.

“I told you my great grandson wasn’t dead,” the painting of Phineas Nigellus observed, “useless pup can’t even die properly. Going back to school, eh? Maybe this time he can get it right and make Slytherin,” was his parting comment before going back to sleep.

HERE I GO: MUAHAHAHAHA~!
Muahaha… I wonder… It seems that Sirius is looking at things from his older slef’s view… I mean it has to be that way… But I hope to see more of young Sirius’s actions… Okay…. I have to ask something… I know that Dumbledore is acting the same but is he younger too? All you said earlier is he was the same as ever.. Maybe I need to keep reading…
*Shakes her head Confused… but how would that fit…. *Thinks*
Ditto….
He went into the future?!?!!? By how could he look so much younger… [quote]
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!! I was thinking, you’d hit us with some bad news… But that’s great… Harry will be so happy, but what’s happened to Volde? What about the mission? How will this event change? Omg… too many questions.. I feel like my head’s about to pop open….
Oh… I see… OMG.. That’s why he couldn’t transform…But this means that Harry and Sirius could be friends… w/ Ron… AND even go back to school? But, s\don’t they say these things don’t ever work out right? I JUST want to know….what your planning… UGHHHHH! I’ll keep reading…
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO…. WHY DOES D always lock him up….Leave my poor Siry alone.. No matter how powerful or clever you might be. It’s not fair…That’s so bad…And this way he can’t even transform and at leats get some fresh air? But, where does D want to hide him? Plus, Anyways he will get out.. or Harry wil find him w/ the Mauraders Map. SEE… HEHEHE.. D’s only fooling himself… Ohhhh…. This is kewl…I wonder….
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LMAO… Okay this should be real funny! lmao… What a smart remark… And it is true…
YEAH RIGHT!!! LMAO… This is so kewl… I love this fic… Maybe even more than Robert’s (And yeah to me, it is his lol..)
LMAO… NO, Don’t ever change my SIRY… I don’t think I’m liking D in this fic… But, then again, he has his reasons… *HUggles D* Just don’t be too mean to my Siry..
OBViously.. Gryfindor no doubt… RIGHT?!?!!?
* reassures Siry* Don’t worry! Be happy!!
*Gets her bat and hits the painting..* GO TO HELL, You useless. Worthless, whining, little mutt ! DIE!!!!!!!!! *GLARES* And he betta not be in Slytherin.. I hope not!!! I GUESS THAT’s all for now…
THIS update was so good!!! The story’s as good as I ever thought it would be! I love ya for it!!!!
A thankful Siry Reader,
Tina

Hey all, new person here...*wave*
 

This is one of the GREATEST Sirius fics EVER!!! I just love the whole idea of him going thru the veil and becoming 16 again and going back to school and everything else! I can't wait for the next update... PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!

*Wonders if LIz is writing* I was promised a new update...Remember, the stalking still goes...
Tina

Reply post First!!!!
 

Well, first I'll do a quick reply and then it will be on to a post. Well, it is technically half of a post! I could go on and make it twice as long, but I think I'll post what I have (for Tina) and come back with more later!

Hey Tina!!! *huggles*

Did I fool you at first? That was a very good question! But I'm sure you know why now!!

Noooooo.... *grins* No one really knows what the veil does, so why can't it affect people differently? LoL!!!!

Good news - right? But Voldie is still out there... Keep reading!!

;) Let's not worry about what 'they' say!

:whistle:

:lol: I love your enthusiasm! I luv you too!!!


*Siriusette Black* :flowers:

I just love to have you reading! With a name like yours, I need to have you here!!
Thank you sooooooooooooooooooo much!! I really wanted to do something a little different with a Sirius fic and I am so glad that others like the idea!


LoL!!! Ok Tina... Read on...

Ok, this half of a post (as will be the second half) is dedicated to my dearest Tina who is so loyal and anxious for more Siry!!!


A Trip to Diagon Alley


Sirius never thought he would be grateful to be going on an outing to Diagon Alley to buy a bunch of school books, but it’s always amazing how one’s perspective can change. Being back at Hogwarts was great, but with no students and very few members of the staff hanging about, there really wasn’t all that much going on. He noticed ruefully that not even Snivellus was around. The thought of the greasy git enjoying a summer holiday was equally annoying as it was unlikely (Snape probably never enjoyed anything). Nevertheless, the potions master wasn’t here and it irked Sirius for some reason. It also irked him that he was standing here in the Great Hall waiting for an escort to take him to Diagon Alley.

“Are we quite ready to go, Mr. Black?” someone asked behind him.

Sirius knew the voice immediately. He turned and grinned at his former transfiguration professor, “I was born ready, Professor McGonagall,” he teased. “And it really should be Mr. Wulfric now, don’t you think?”

McGonagall waved the comment away as if it were no matter, “yes, yes, I know,” she said peering at him over her glasses. “I can’t believe I’m teaching you a second time.”

“It’s our lucky day,” Sirius grinned. “Besides, you loved having me in class.”

“Right,” she answered primly, “and just for the record, that didn’t work the first time and it won’t work this time either.” McGonagall waved one finger in admonishment, “and I take points even from my own house if it is deserved.”

“If you say so,“ he winked, he loved pushing her buttons. “Besides, it’s possible I won’t be in your house anyway.”

“And where did you get this notion?” the Deputy Headmistress scoffed, leading her student into the staff lounge.

“From Dumbledore,” Sirius stated simply. “I need to be sorted all over again.”

McGonagall’s lips pressed into a thin line, “once a Gryffindor, always a Gryffindor,” she retorted lighting a fire in the fireplace.

“That’s what I said… Hang on – we’re going by floo?” Sirius was disappointed.

“Well, we’re not apparating, are we?” McGonagall countered almost accusingly. “And I won’t go by broom,” she added.

Sirius pictured the straight-laced professor with her bun disheveled and glasses askew from the wind and had to admit she had a point. At the very least, floo powder was a quick form of transportation, if uncomfortable and slightly messy. They were soon exiting from the public floo in Diagon Alley. Sirius brushed the loose soot from his clothes and noticed that McGonagall managed to look as unruffled as ever.

“We’ll have to stop at Gringott’s for some money,” he ventured, realizing suddenly that he had none.

“Of course we do not,” McGonagall countered and handed him a pouch of galleons, “Since you gave Professor Dumbledore privileges to your vault, he has kept it safe. He has already made this withdrawal for you.”

“Well that was mighty considerate of him,” Sirius drawled weighing the bag in his hand and mentally judging the value of it’s contents. He should have plenty of spending money.

“So, I guess I’ll meet you back here…” Sirius was sincerely hoping that he would not have to spend this entire outing with the professor.

McGonagall, for her part, appeared as though this prospect did not appeal to her either. “Two hours, Mr. Wulfric,” she gave him a stern look as he appeared about to protest, “two hours, ”she repeated, “right here. Here’s your list and I expect that you will try not to be too conspicuous.”

Sirius promised his good behavior and darted off into the crowd before McGonagall could change her mind. He hadn’t felt this free in a long time. For the first time in ages, he could walk about in public without fear of recognition. Well, for the most part, he would have to avoid those who knew him as a young man, but that was a vast improvement over his earlier situation. As he passed many of the shops, he saw that photos of himself still hung next to those of the escaped Death Eaters. This bothered him, but there was nothing that could be done about it. There was an obvious increase in security here on Diagon Alley. Sirius could see several wizards he knew to be aurors monitoring the crowd. The atmosphere was not as relaxed as it once was, as many people seemed to be on edge. The streets teemed with Hogwart’s students shopping for the new term. Sirius scanned their faces for a dark haired boy with glasses and a scar, but did not see him.

Sirius consulted his list of supplies and decided to get started. After purchasing his parchment and quills, potions ingredients, and cauldrons (all of which he was having shipped to his attention at Hogwarts, he’d learned a long time ago that it was worth the extra galleons not to have to carry that stuff around), he encountered an interesting shop called “Weasleys’ Wizarding Wheezes”. He grinned to himself, wondering what Molly must think of the place. He had to see this. Inside the shop was crowded with students and every possible sweet, joke or explosive one could imagine. The proprietors were clearly doing a booming business and Sirius couldn’t imagine Molly having an issue with that. Fred and George were mingling with their customers and periodically making recommendations and demonstrations of various items. Sirius figured since he was ‘pretending’ to be a student, he really needed to be prepared with a few joke shop supplies… He selected some of the twins newer (and frankly in some cases more dangerous inventions) and went to check out. He decided it was safest not to have these particular items shipped to him.

The twins showed no signs of recognition beyond noticing a profitable sale when they approached Sirius. “I see you’re a man of distinguished taste,” Fred observed.

“Going to Hogwarts by any chance?” George asked.

“As a matter of fact, yes,” Sirius replied.

“What year?” Fred asked while packing up the merchandise.

“You don’t look familiar,” George continued, counting back Sirius’ change.

“Well, I wouldn’t,” Sirius answered casually, “haven’t been there yet. My mum’s a bit cracked you see,” he made a circular motion with his finger to indicate crazy, ”doesn’t believe in school. But I finally won. I’ll be a 6th year” he grinned.

“Brilliant!” Fred handed Sirius his parcels, “you’ll know our brother Ron then.”

“And if you ever are in need of our services…” George started,

“…feel free to send an owl,” Fred gave Sirius a card for the shop. They were clearly hoping for more business.

“Or just bug our brother, he won’t mind,” George laughed.

“I’ll do that,” as Sirius turned to leave, he noticed a pretty girl about his age eying him up on the way out. He winked at her impudently and decided that this was just getting better and better.


:P

Next will be more Diagon Alley!!!

LOL just like those two to notice a prospective costumer.
AAAH!!! Sirius is soooo adorable!


Lissy, you are an exceptional writer. Keep it up!

Yah Lizzy, you’re right! I am loyal! I deserve an update. And I’ve been anxious like crazy for more of my Siry!!!! But you know what, I love you for it verryyyyyyyyy veryyyyyyy much! You know that right? Well, to say it again, I thank god for the dya an awesome writer named Liz came on SS!
Oh my, this is heaven sent! I can’t wait for Snape to die… He is gonna die right? I can’t imagine Siry going to school and acting like good little boy! We hate Snape with a passion *Then remembers she promised to Siry a try for Liz* Okay, okay, I don’t want him to die…He can live…But I hope to see some old steaming action returning!!!
Yah dude! What happened to Driving in style? Lmao, That’s okay Siry, you’re cute anyway liz writes you!
OMG!!! Mcgonagall knows? Heheh, I’m like jumping off my computer chair… So excited.WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE *Giggles then POkkles herself to keep reading*
Something I love when reading, is when the title comes in the story. This isn’t really it, but it ties in with his second chance!
*Stares at Siry* That doesn’t sound like him… My siry aint selfish… After all DD took him in… AWESOMENESS!!!!! Ever since the little extra in One Ravenclaws…about fred and george for Ottery, I love how you write them *Hopes they’ll come in…* Then again…I love all of what you write....
I enjoy how you add on things that are fact from HBP…Just wondering…Um…surely you can’t use the HBP ending (After all DD’s still alive in your fic) How will it really fit in…Just wondering… You know I love trying to read your mind…Too bad, it never works…
Hehehehehe I couldn’t have said it any better! His mom is cracked, psychotic, crazy, loopy, stupid, idiotic…hypnotic FUNKY SKUNK Lmao, sry I’m listening to Ciara…(the funky fresh was changed…hehehe)
*GASP* *Then stares shocked* I don’t like this ending…..*Starts crying…..lmao..just jk* But, who could it be? Liz, this aint no fun for me! *Starts pouting like a baby* Who is this grl that caught his eye? He would surely know the ppl from Harry’s classes. Then again, Hogwarts is a big school…*Remembers Liz’s awesome gift of inventing made-up chracters…* But, I still will hate her…I don’t want to hate any of your characters…
Lizzy, PLS…MAKE THIS Character likable!!!! *Tries to read Liz’s mind harder than before* I don’t know how much you’ve written, but I think we can solve this silly crises. The only I’ll be okay, is if you name the new character Liz or Lizzy. That way luff overtakes hatred I can’t dare hate you right? Good plan? Well… just a theory, don’t know what you’ll make of it!
PLS!!!!!!!!!!!! AND THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!! *Huggles and kiggles her new Stalk-ee! Lmao…like my location?
Love Always,
Tina
P.S. Where have you been Amber? YOUR fic is pretty good! I’ve been reading but I haven’t posted… I’m seeing Mlafoy in a new light…

Congratulations, Lissydove! You're the recipient of my 500th post!
 

Why, Lissy, are you move--oh you answered that already.

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Originally Posted by Lissy Those who know me realize that I am a Marauders fan and the topic here will not surprise them. What I hope is that I have written a story on the subject of Sirius, post OOTP and post veil in a way that you all haven't seen before (though it won't be evident in the first post), *shrugs* I know I haven't. I hope that the seasoned fan-fic readers and Sirius lovers out there will enjoy this as well as all casual readers. As my loyal readers know, I rarely take the traditional point of view in my writing. ;)

Don't think I didn't see that winking smiley!



Hmm...how did he get back?

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Originally Posted by Lissy Nearby, at the top of one of such hills was an archway. A thin veil or curtain hung from it, fluttering in the breeze. Sirius recognized it instantly; he had just seen one in the Department of Mysteries. It must be a gateway of some kind, which meant he should be able to go back. He ran up the hill to the arch, but he needn’t have bothered. Just as he reached the stone archway, the veil fluttered one last time and disappeared. Recklessly, he tried to walk through the stone structure, only to come out the other side on the same rocky hill. The gateway, or whatever it was, had closed.

Nice...an AU fic that explains why it's an AU fic...haha.

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Originally Posted by D-O-V-E He could try to apparate a few times until he got his bearing. It was dangerous for a wizard to apparate over long distances when he did not know where he was, but he'd have to try it. It was as good of a plan as any.

I like that. You didn't just have him Popping around the place. Makes it more realistic.

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Originally Posted by Lise Sirius sighed and moved away from the arch and… went nowhere. He tried to disapparate again, with no result. Again. What was going on? He growled in frustration. Well, if he had to travel on foot, he would be faster on four legs then on two. This way, he could also approach any towns unnoticed. He attempted to adopt his animagus form of a great black dog. Unfortunately, once again, nothing happened. He looked at his hands in astonishment, they were still hands and not paws and he was clearly still standing on two legs! He couldn’t believe it! Was he bereft of all magical ability for some reason? What could this mean? He was slowly beginning to feel frantic. As a test, he raised his wand and tried a simple spell: Clearly he could do magic, but why couldn’t he disapparate or use his animagus form? Or do anything that would get him out of this ruddy place and closer to Harry?

Yes, this is curious. Very curious.

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Originally Posted by The Dove Anything could be happening to Harry at this moment and Sirius was powerless to help him. He gritted his teeth and made a decision. He turned south and started to walk, with only his thoughts for company. How could he have failed his Godson so badly?

You've really captured the essence of canon, Sirius. Not only can he not protect Harry, but he's missing a good fight!

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Originally Posted by I can't think of anything else to make! Nearby, there was a stream that he had recently begun to follow. He knelt down by it’s edge and splashed cool water onto his face. Perhaps after a drink and something to eat, he could continue to travel into the night. He leaned over and cupped his hands to get more water. The stream was a very slow moving one at this time of year and reflected his face like a mirror. What he saw caused him to recoil in fear and shout out in surprise...

What did he see?! I can't read ahead, I'll save that for my next review. 500th post!

Ooh this is quite an original idea. I look forward to seeing how this one turns out.

Stamped =)
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Wow...Lissy! Didn't you just mention that yesterday? ^ Congrats!

Congrats, Lissy!
 

A well deserved award. Congrats, Lissy, and keep up the good work!

WOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOO! *Grabs Dean's, Amber's, and LIssy's ahdn and dances!*PARTYYYY! lMAO, CONGRATS HUN! DO I even need to say how much you deserve this? Or do i need to babble on about the awesomeness of your talents? Or maybe i should go on about how a true writer (u) can only make my Siry alive again! No, the right thing to do would be annoy Rovie to go and check our other fics! lmao!
Congrats!!!!
Tina

Lissy!!!!! Omg omg omg!! Your fanfic is featured! I always knew it would I just never commented because I never had the time. From now on I will comment! Your fanfic rocks! Keep up the great work Lissy and you deserve having your fanfic featured! Great post by the way and I can't wait to see what'll happen next! Well see yah Lissy!

Your friend and LyLas,

Candy

Great Post!!
 

Thankees!

GREAT post! Loved the whole Weasley's Wizard Wheezes segment...PAMS PAMS PAMS!!

OMG! Featured Fic? GASP! Yayness!!!

This is a great story! I can't wait untill you post more!

Hey Lissy!

Loved the post :) Cant wait for the next one! Wahay, youve been stamped!

I just wanted to say that I am something of a literary critic. Not trying to scare you or anything, but I like the fics I read to not only be entertaining, but well written. You do both wonderfully.

One of the amazing characteristics of your story is your ability to write emphatically. We as the readers can tap into Sirius' emotions and feel what he is feeling. It is this skill that many fanfic writers lack and I truly enjoy. Keep up the good work!

Gah Lissy! You have to go away on that note? Who was the girl I wonderr? And won't Harry recognise Sirius from the pensieve? You can rest assured I will be waiting (im)patiently for you to get back and post some more. *taps foot, drums fingers*
Love you Lissy,
Have a great time on holiday!
LadyV.

i lvoe the story in this its so awsome!

Have fun *Remembers the last time she went camping* And, take loads of soft tissue (u could get sick, and using the hard one they provide sux), lotion , hand wipes, face wipes, and last but definitely not least pepper spray! Lol, um… Hope you come back soon!!! WE’LL MISS YOU TOO!!
Love Always,
Tina
*WONDERS AND WONDERS* Wait… Lol… I guess we’ll find out! Soon, I hope!
See, that’s what I’ve been thinking too! But even If he doesn’t recognize him, the Mauraders Map will give him away sooner or later! Let’s just hope Liz has thought of this too! Then again, it is LIzzy! CAN’T WAIT FOR MORE!! PAMS!

Keep writing please, this is an awsome story!

Just a quick reply post!!!
 

A Black Family Reunion


After a quick stop at Florean Fortescue’s for some ice cream (it was still as good as he remembered), Sirius moved on to Madam Malkin’s Robes for all Occasions. He quickly selected several sets of school robes, a set of dress robes and a variety of casual clothes. Thankfully, the shop was not busy and he was first in line to submit (albeit impatiently) to the usual session of pinning and fitting with the store’s proprietor.

“A fine looking man such as yourself should have his robes fitted just right,” the woman chattered around a mouthful of pins as Sirius complained for what felt like the hundredth time that the robes looked just fine as they were. He knew that his two hours of freedom were rapidly running out and he didn’t prefer to spend more time then he had to being stuck like a pin cushion. He hadn’t even had an opportunity to see Harry, who he was sure must be around. This was the most popular day to shop for school…

“And such fine taste you have,” the woman was undaunted, “some of my best fabric.” This thought abruptly caused Madam Malkin to notice the lack of an authority figure accompanying her young customer.

Sirius picked up on the robemaker’s pointed look around the store, “don’t worry, I have the money,” he replied, “are we almost done?” he asked again.

The woman’s face brightened, “just a few finishing touches… There… And there… Done!” she declared, surveying her handiwork. “How many sets do you want?” She indicated the large pile of fabrics that Sirius had piled up.

Sirius looked at his reflection in the mirror, maybe it was all those years of not having anything new, but he had to admit that he liked the woman’s work. “I’ll take them all,” he decided.

Madam Malkin beamed, “you’re going to break some hearts!” she clapped her hands together.

Sirius smiled and attempted to ignore this comment, he knew what it usually lead to. He took out his bag of galleons in an attempt to speed the transaction along…

“The girls are going to love you,” the robemaker gushed, “My niece, Tina, a lovely girl, she goes to Hogwarts too. Fifth year, Hufflepuff, you should look her up.”

Sirius promised politely that he would do so as he stacked the rest of his selections on the counter to be rung up.

As Madam Malkin folded up the boy’s purchases, accepted his name and payment, and promised to have everything sent off to Hogwarts, the bell above the door chimed, announcing that another customer had entered the shop.

“Oh dear!” she exclaimed, “you haven’t selected your house colors!” The woman reached beneath the counter and pulled out a drawer full of ties and house emblems to be affixed to the school robes.

Sirius hesitated with his hand over the red and gold Gryffindor colors. The Slytherin green and silver seemed to mock him sitting there… “No colors just yet,” he sighed with regret, deciding not to risk it. “Special case,” he added by way of explanation. “I’ll send an order along later.”

“Draco darling,” a voice called from across the shop. “Come and have a look dear.”

It was then that Sirius noticed the customers who had entered the store. A good looking young man his own age was standing nearby observing Sirius with interest. If the boy’s pale coloring and aristocratic features did not give away his identity, his intelligent grey eyes would have made him instantly recognizable as they were quite like Sirius’ own grey gaze. An inheritance from a mutual Black family ancestor, those eyes sized Sirius up with the instinctual recognition of another wizard of wealth and class. Sirius could detect no hint that the boy knew who he was as he came over to address him.

“Going to Hogwarts?” Draco asked, though Sirius was sure that the boy already knew the answer. “I’ve never seen you there,” he finished almost accusingly.

“Well, you wouldn’t have, as I’ve never been there yet,” Sirius replied in kind, “private tutoring, you see.”

“Draco…” Narcissa called from across the store.

Draco cast a scowl in his mother’s direction, and then turned back to Sirius, “yeah, I know what you mean. She would have had me study at home too, if she had her way,” the boy gestured toward the back of the store. “I personally would have chosen Durmstrang, but Hogwart’s will do for now.”

Sirius agreed to this statement while doing his best to keep his back toward his cousin. With a quick glance, he spotted her blonde hair coming in their direction to investigate what was holding up her son. Sirius figured that Narcissa would have no reason to suspect that the teenager before her was the same young man who had played pranks on her at Black Family get-togethers so many years ago, and had even less reason to connect him to the escaped prisoner whom she believed dead, but even if Draco did not realize it, the family’s good looks were plainly evident in Sirius’ features and it was best not to risk any awkward questions.

“The name’s Malfoy, by the way,” the blond youth extended his hand for Sirius to shake, "Draco Malfoy, Slytherin House. I expect I’ll see you there.”

“Darling?” Narcissa was almost upon them, “who are you talking to?”

“I’m Brian Wulfric,” Sirius hastily shook Draco’s hand. “See you at school,” he agreed, while thinking the boy should not count on seeing him in the Slytherin Common room, not if Sirius had anything to say about it…

Sirius’ last glance as he made his way out the door was of Narcissa and Madam Malkin converging on the scowling Draco. Sirius felt a brief sympathy for the boy being so clearly overmatched, but all thoughts of his cousin left his mind as he raced out of the shop and headlong into a man passing the store from the opposite direction…


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A legendary LadyV type cliffie... :evillaugh

Question: Why do we always manage to meet Draco in the clothing shop?

:huh:


Answer: Because the boy's got styyyyyylllle!!! :)



Psssttt... Tina, did you catch my little reference for you?

AAHHH!!!!!!! LISSY!!!!!!!! *tackleglomps* An update!!! *prepares fingers to quote*

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A Black Family Reunion

*wonders which members were involved..*

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After a quick stop at Florean Fortescue’s for some ice cream (it was still as good as he remembered), Sirius moved on to Madam Malkin’s Robes for all Occasions. He quickly selected several sets of school robes, a set of dress robes and a variety of casual clothes. Thankfully, the shop was not busy and he was first in line to submit (albeit impatiently) to the usual session of pinning and fitting with the store’s proprietor.

hehe *sees young Sirius being fitted for robes*

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“The girls are going to love you,” the robemaker gushed, “My niece, Tina, a lovely girl, she goes to Hogwarts too. Fifth year, Hufflepuff, you should look her up.”

I could see Sirius dating a Huffie...[/end sarcasm]

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“Draco darling,” a voice called from across the shop. “Come and have a look dear.

”
0_0 *sqeals like a fangirl* DRACO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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It was then that Sirius noticed the customers who had entered the store. A good looking young man his own age was standing nearby observing Sirius with interest. If the boy’s pale coloring and aristocratic features did not give away his identity, his intelligent grey eyes would have made him instantly recognizable as they were quite like Sirius’ own grey gaze. An inheritance from a mutual Black family ancestor, those eyes sized Sirius up with the instinctual recognition of another wizard of wealth and class. Sirius could detect no hint that the boy knew who he was as he came over to address him.

AAH!!! *loves the way you describe my sex god* lmao

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Draco cast a scowl in his mother’s direction, and then turned back to Sirius, “yeah, I know what you mean. She would have had me study at home too, if she had her way,” the boy gestured toward the back of the store. “I personally would have chosen Durmstrang, but Hogwart’s will do for now.”

Thank GOD you didn't go there! *clings to Draco*

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Sirius agreed to this statement while doing his best to keep his back toward his cousin. With a quick glance, he spotted her blonde hair coming in their direction to investigate what was holding up her son. Sirius figured that Narcissa would have no reason to suspect that the teenager before her was the same young man who had played pranks on her at Black Family get-togethers so many years ago, and had even less reason to connect him to the escaped prisoner whom she believed dead, but even if Draco did not realize it, the family’s good looks were plainly evident in Sirius’ features and it was best not to risk any awkward questions.

Hehe he played pranks on Cissa? SWEET!!! *loves on Sirius*

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Sirius’ last glance as he made his way out the door was of Narcissa and Madam Malkin converging on the scowling Draco. Sirius felt a brief sympathy for the boy being so clearly overmatched, but all thoughts of his cousin left his mind as he raced out of the shop and headlong into a man passing the store from the opposite direction…

YES!!! Feel sympathy for your cousin!! He's HOT!!! *drools*

Nice update sis! Post again soon for me!!!!

:hello: I just wanted to address this question real quick... I will only say that I have that covered... Hehehehehe...

The girl...? ;)

For all the thinkers out there (but don't say anything) ... I have something else in mind... What object does Harry have that could blow this whole ruse apart...? Just think about that... I've got that covered too... :evillaugh You'll see!


I'll be back with more replies and some more fic later! :flower:

Awwwwwwwwwwww! That’s so cute! And same goes to every update of yours! It’s cherished in all our hearts! *Nods on behalf of all*
HE’S SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!! That’s awesome LIZ! It’s gives us so much to hope for in your fic……HEHEH!*Steals Siry for her and her only*
Lol, what a comparison! Poor siry! That reminds me of my mom’s aunt. She fits that description. You didn’t hear from me! Lol! *Flees*
Lol, is that supposed to lead to somewhere….*Thinks* Then again, if Siry’s shopping…then that definitely means it’s the right day to shop!!
How many times do I have to repeat! MY SIRY GOT STYLE!!!!!!
*Looks at Siry through the mirror after his comment! *Shakes her head* No, hun, it’s not because of that! It’s just you have the bode to fit it! HEHE!
*Looks at the lady and then thinks about the remark* Is this what I thin it means? Where is this leading? *Keeps reading half in shock*
Okay, so he caught that remark too! (We so think alike! Lol) But…so that means….*Reads*
LMAO!! *Looks dumbfounded with her mouth wide open* Are you kidding! I’m her neice? So, that means…Okay Okay I’ll shut up and see where you take this! *Huggles her Siry*
*Stares at Draco* He’ll be nice in here right? Well other than his normal torment toward Hp/Ron. That’s okay, just how I’ve accepted to like Snape b/c of you Liz. I’ll do the same for Draco! Even though I've always loved him, the book was….*Remembers mods* Shocking.
WOW! What a description! Seriously, you have awesome writing talents! *Hails her majesty* Lol…*Looks at Dean and hails his majesty too*
So, Draco doesn’t like his mom in the book? Well, I've always thought of Draco to have utmost respect for his parents. Maybe we’ll see a change? I doubt it…but hey anything’s possible!
Lol, Prank eh? No surprise there! Nice addie! Lol, for some reason, I can’t compare Draco’s looks to Siry. They’re like total opposites. Well, at least I think so. I mean, both are cute, just cute in their own ways!
CAN EVERYONE STOP HINTING THAT! Liz loves my Siry too much to torment him in Slytherin! Lol, then again, this is to drive us crazy! Just to tell you, it’s working hun!
Have I said how much I love the name Brian? Seriously, if no one believes me, I've posted it numerous times in threads all over SS! *Ends thinking of BSB*
Awwww, I feel sry for poor Draco too! *Hugs Draco and then huggles her siry* Into a man eh? Who could it be? Okay, I’ll just say who came to my mind while reading. It was either Hagrid or Lupin….Maybe Mr. Weasley? I’m not sure….but that’s what I thought….
We’re at the end? Wait… no…there’s more…
LOL! Yah, I guess he does! But hey, so does my SIRY!!! TO repeat once more!
Lol, yah I sort of did! I don’t know what to think of it though! Lol, it was in the same sentence as Girls loving him! And I do, which you already know! But, I also saw hearts breaking! But, that’s okay. Every story needs a bit of steaming action! You can write me anyway you like! Thanks for including me at all!
Oooops….Lol, once you get through the posts Liz, you’ll see that I’ve already said something. I’m pretty sure that it’s what you’re talking about! And, like I’ve said I knew you had it covered! Hehehe, Lol, see I’ve been getting closer to reading your mind! LOL!

And again, thankees! *HUGGLES AND KIGGLES AND SHNUGGLES AND CUDDLES LIZ TO DEATH* Lol,
Luff Always,
Tina

Actually you did say it! I missed it! Sssssshhhhh... Covered! ;)


Well, it will be :shifty:

Hi! New reader here! I genuinely love your story! It's great!
I can't wait to read more! And I've never seen a plot like this before!
Excellent!

*new reader*
this story is amazing, i wonder if brian wulfric will ever be recognised by anyone
all i say is
PAMs PAMs PAMs

Nice descriptions. I like how you connect his appearance to his experience in Azkaban and how it differs now he's been out of there. Most people would have just said, "His face was regular now he's been out of Azkaban," but you gave a better description. I like it.

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Originally Posted by Lissy A wild thought occurred to him that he might even encounter himself! Or was he simply returned to his old body? This line of thought was beginning to bring back his headache. He needed to get help. Who to contact? That answer was simple. Dumbledore. Dumbledore would believe him. That was where he could start. Thus decided, Sirius was beginning to feel better. Glancing once more into the stream, he could see the old familiar smirk that he was known for reflecting back at him. He stood up and brushed the dirt from his robes. This he could get used to again.

I see he likes his youth, again. I can see Sirius getting used to that.

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Originally Posted by Lise “Well, here goes nothing,” Sirius thought as he raised his wand arm. Suddenly a violently purple triple-decker bus was bumping it's was over the rocky landscape towards him. Sirius laughed with happiness and waved it over. The bus stopped in front of him and opened it's door.

Couple of typos there, nothing big. "Its" instead of "It's" and "way" instead of "was." I wonder how Sirius will take to riding the dreaded, "public transportation!"

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Originally Posted by The Dove An older heavy-set man stood in the doorway, a pipe clenched in his teeth, smoke wreathed his head in a cloud. “Welcome to the Knight Bus, for the stranded witch or wizard,” the man said, sounding bored. “The name’s Oscar and I’ll be your conductor today, Ernie there is your driver,” he gestured to a very old man up front and continued. “And no, Stan is not here. He took a temp job over at the Ministry. Has a girlfriend who wants him to make more money.”

I wonder what Oscar's last name is...:shifty: I love names, and you know that. Stan has a girlfriend? Did he discover the properties of bubotuber pus?

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Originally Posted by Lissy “11 sickles first, laddie,” Oscar held out one meaty hand.

I liked that..."meaty hand." Gives a good picture.

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Originally Posted by Lise Suddenly, Oscar lifted his hat and fixed Sirius with a penetrating stare, taking in his disheveled appearance, “so what were you doing out there all by yourself, laddie?” he asked somewhat suspiciously. “Oh, uhm, crashed my broom, actually.” Sirius lied quickly. “Splintered it, no use trying to fix it.” “Your parents know your flying so far?” the conductor shifted his pipe to the other side of his mouth. “Well, I...” Sirius started.

Sounds a lot like Neville...er Harry.

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“Humph!” the older man grunted. “Kids! Should be beaten more often. That’ll keep you in line,” he pulled his hat back over his eyes and said no more for the rest of the trip.

Interesting character...I like him.

i love your story, keep writing please

*Pops* in for a few replies!

My sister and CIC of the Draco Minions!!!

:glomp: *tackle glomp for you!!!*

Me too... :shifty:

You're bad!

Well this is the clothing shop!!! *grins*

Glad to make you happy. *hugs* I really like writing him, you know. He's fun.

I know, you would've preferred the home tutoring... At your house!

Of course he did! *smiles*

Always! :glomp:


My Dearest Tina!!!!

:glomp: You are just the sweetest!

He is!!! *Stares at my own sig*

Every day is a good day to shop. And yes, it means there are lots of students out there right now... :shifty:

You know it!!!

I told you I would name someone after you! I can't help it, girls admire him! I have to point it out!

:blush: Dean is better!

Well, it's more like - does anyone want their mom fussing over them in a shop where you are talking to one of your classmates and possible future friends? He does not dislike her. It's just embarrassing.

Girls love him, I say again! But I never said that he would go out with any of them! We'll have to see... No heartbreaks for my Tina though, I just wanted you to be less jealous! *hugs*

Loves ya!!! *smooch*

When the replies get long, I get confused! So here are more!

*Mirror of Erised*:flowers:

It is great to meet you and you said my most favorite words ever:
Thank you soooooo much!! I am so glad you haven't seen this before. I never know where I get ideas sometimes!! Except, of course, for the fact that I adore the subjest of this fic. Ooooppsss, Tina just ran away with him!


allucha :flower:

I am very pleased to meet you as well!!! More of my most loved words:
Thank you ! Thank you!! I promise!! And as for being recognized... :shifty: You'll see...


Mubote:glomp:

This is not your first time posting and I just love you for it!
Thank you!!! I promise that I am! I just can't post it all at once! If I do, then I fall behind! And that's not good! I have some more coming real soon though! I'm just pacing myself!


Dean Thomas Author of a most awesome fic, that if you have not read it, you should definitely go visit:

Patrick Thatcher and the Colonist's Compass

I am honored and so pleased to see you here Dean! I admire your work so much that I'm actually a little nervous! I hope I can keep you coming back!

Thank you, and you've pointed out something that was very important to me. I really wanted the description to convey how much he changed and how much he lost being in Azkaban.

Of course he does! He missed out on so much, you know. He had it good back then and he knows it now more then ever.

Thanks! I fixed it! Grrr... Hate typos, never worry about pointing them out! As for the bus, it's convenient for those who have no better way to get around, anyway!

Did you read my ficlet in the HBP contests? I showed Stan at his other job! He got in trouble too... It was really weird considering what happened in HBP. I feel like I predicted something... And Oscar, I don't know actually! I just pictured a big guy with a pipe in his mouth that wasn't a conversaltionalist (Stan would have chatted Sirius' ear off and gave stuff away). Kinda grouchy too, like Oscar!

I know! I'm still fiddling with his personality. He can't be exactly like he was in his youth. Too much has changed. But I do figure he was a bit lost and uncertain at that moment!

Thank you so much! I am so glad! Again you hit on something important to me, that my OC's are likable!!


Alright, that is all for now!!! I will return with a fic post.... Soon!!!

This one is for my dear friend LadyV! I even left a small cliffie in her honor! Read Close Encounters to see what I mean!

Close Encounters of the First Kind



Familiar Faces

The man Sirius ran into went sprawling to the ground, his packages (as he had clearly been shopping for Hogwart’s supplies) scattered all around him. Upon noticing the man’s face, Sirius quickly averted his eyes and turning his head away, mumbled an apology before making a hasty retreat.

It was only when Sirius rounded the corner that he risked another glance at the wizard as he knelt to pick up his things. Sirius’ heart was pounding as he watched his friend, Remus Lupin, move on down the street. He felt extremely guilty that he could not help his old friend. One glance at the man’s tired, careworn face wrenched his heart in sympathy. Sirius could not help but wish for the days when he and James (he could not bring himself to think of the fourth member of their group) could make the time of the full moon more bearable for Remus. The two boys would do anything in their power just to make their friend smile during the period before and after the full moon when the boy was most drained of energy. Judging from Lupin’s weakened appearance; it was just around that time right now. Sirius vowed silently that he would contact his friend as soon as he was free of this masquerade he had to keep up. Remus was now out of sight and Sirius felt it safe to continue on his way. Still, the mischievous side of his personality was strongly tempted to chase Lupin down, tap him on the shoulder and wait for a reaction, but he knew better. “The way he looked, a shock like that would put him into St. Mungo’s,” Sirius thought as he approached the last store on his list, Flourish and Blott’s.

Inside the store, Sirius gave his school book list to one of the shopkeepers along with his pseudonym and money. He was glad not to have to hunt for the books and then be weighed down by them, especially since the moment he walked in he noticed some more familiar faces. One, just visible beyond a stack of books, looked so much like his old friend that it took all of Sirius’ willpower not to call out to him. But his logical mind reasoned, “not James, Harry.” Even then it was a close call keeping silent. Instead, he drew closer to hear what the boy was saying.

Harry was leaning casually against a shelf, laughing and talking to his friend Ron. Nearby, Bill Weasley stood consulting the school book lists with a lovely blonde girl looking on. Hermione was speaking with authority about a book she’d read over the summer to the youngest Weasley, Ginny, who looked rather bored but was politely trying not to show it. Somewhat apart from the group (though clearly with them), Sirius recognized his cousin Tonks’ bright pink hair peeking above a book she was reading.

“Wizard’s Lost Love by Bettina Breakheart”, he read with surprise, “since when did his cousin read that kind of tripe?” Out of the corner of his eye, Sirius spotted Kingsley Shacklebolt walking past the store for a second time in the last few minutes. It was clear that this particular group of students was being closely watched. He wouldn’t be surprised if there were several other Order members nearby, he’d have to be careful.

“Oy, Harry, look, there’s a new issue of Quidditch Quarterly,” Ron said flipping through the magazine.

“We’re only buying what’s on the list, little brother,” Bill called over his shoulder.

Ron scowled at his brother’s back and made to put the magazine on the shelf. He was stopped by Harry who smiled and simply tossed the book into his own cauldron.

“Thanks mate,” Ron grinned back.

“Clearly this year’s Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher know’s his stuff,” Hermione stated brandishing the new required text, “I read this book last year and it’s excellent.”

“Well anyone’s better then Lockhart was,” Ron quipped ignoring the look Hermione sent his way. Though she secretly agreed with him, she rarely spoke badly about a teacher in public, even a bad one.

Harry had no such reservations and laughed openly with Ron as if at a private joke.

Suddenly Tonks let out a startled squeak and Bettina Breakheart was tossed clumsily back onto the shelf.

“I got everything on this list,” Remus approached Bill who ticked off a number of items from his own list.

“Brilliant,” Bill said, “we’re almost done, so we can get back. Mum won’t relax until we get this lot home,” his gesture took in the younger members of the party and the blonde girl beamed up at him.

“So protective you are,” the girl observed in a thick French accent.

“Professor Lupin,” Hermione said, still not giving up on her book, “have you read this?”

“Ah, yes, that is a good one,” the man stated. Even from this distance, Sirius could see the gleam of interest in his friend’s eyes that often happened when presented with a favorite book. “And you don’t need to call me that anymore,” he reminded her.

“It’s only because you’re the best DADA teacher we’ve ever had,” Harry stated matter of fact, and Remus looked pleased despite himself.

“You haven’t any idea who did assign the book by chance…” Ron ventured.

“You know I don’t,” Lupin smiled helplessly.

The group started to move deeper into the store and Sirius made to follow, when suddenly, a strong hand clasped him on the shoulder.


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Oh no you didn't!
 

Lissy - Oh My God! What...Why...You...
Gimme a minute, lost for words...

:glomp: :glomp: :glomp:

*tackle glomps Lissy*
You are way too sweet! Seriously. I'm just too...for words... on with the review...

So thought it was going to be Snape. Don't know why...Lupin was just as good though, more emotional angst. :yes:

I love Lupin. I hate that he suffers so much, I really do, he's one of the most decent wizards there is, and he cares so much for Harry and *lowers voice* other people.

Brilliantly done. He would nearly be sick at the mere thought of him. Stupid rat. :whip:

LoL. He had a hard time with that before, it's going to be even harder now. I love how you just 'get' Sirius. It's all just so...so...him.

*Smiles knowingly and giggles* :shifty:

Uh oh. Oh God, it's Snape, isn't it? I knew it! He'd have to be in there somewhere, and he is going to be teaching him afterall, he would surely recognise the boy who had taunted him for all those years...OH MY GOD! HE's soooooo going to get his own back, always taking away points and giving him detentions! Oh well, at least he can keep Harry company...then again, it could just be Hagrid. Or Dumbledore...
Sorry, I'm babbling. A most excellant cliffhanger Lissy! I'm on the edge of my seat - can't wait for the next post!
Your writing is positively superb, not just the plot line but your structure, composition, eye for detail and characterisation are all fatastic.
(what did you really think I'd let you get away with that littlestunt without getting my own back?)
Love much,
LadyV.

PS: I mean every word. Just in case you thought I was joking...I'm not.

:( *huggles Remus* Poor poor Lupin! Lovely description though!



LOL!!! :lmao:

Wonderful update Lissy!!!

Yays! I'm here! Comments away!
 

Just like an Aunt to do that...my Aunts do! :head: OMGosh!! DRACO!!!!! SQUEE!!*squeals like a fangirl* I LOVE the way you describe him!!*melts* OOOH! Draco! Respect your mama! *thwacks him*

I just saw that! Baha!! That is soooooo true!SQUEE! *huggles Lissy*
Hehe...I luff that!! Though I'm surprised she didn't break something just then...being clumsy and all. :shifty:
W00t! Yeah! You tell him Harry!!


Oh, Lissy dear you MUST post more!! Love ya and your fic! *huggles* ~Ashley

Lol, thankees again! Yah, girls do love him! I’m living proof *Remembers the Huffie sarcasm by a diff reader!* I’ll be ignoring that for now…. *Glares* Kidding…. (As I hope you were)
*Thinks for a really long time and then squints her eyes* I’m jking, You guys are both awesome! NO need to say anymore….
See, when you put it that way…I totally understand! Moms are just so evil!!! From doing that and much more! *Nods from experience then kills the person who inventing grounding*
Lol, yah I sort of knew dating was off limits! After all, wouldn’t it be nasty dating someone who’s like young enough to be your neice/nephew! *Thinks of Lindsey Lohan and Bruce* He’s old enough to be her freakin dad for gods sake. Have some pity. Ewwww…That’s like when they hinted Siry liking Tonks (They’re cousins,, ew!) Getting off topic again….oops, um…anyways, Lol….and I wasn’t that jealous…hehe*Reminds herself this is just a book even though it never works*
Lol, AN UPDATE! It’s so funny B/C I’ve been just going around to all fics I read (At the time… they’re a lot) and saying I’ve been very busy lately. I’m so sorry I haven’t posted in like days….etc… Yet, once I saw your update, I dropped everything, deleted all windows, ignored friends’ ims, got off msn/ aim, and ran to Microsoft to quote! Lol, I’ll get to the other ones…for now….MORE LIZ AND SIRY!!!!
Lol, so it is someone he knows. Who could it be? I’m still keeping with my guesses. Either Hagrid, Lupin or Mr.Weasley. Maybe, it’s also Fudge? I’m not sure…but one of first three….
AWWWWW, Lol, LUPEY! Darn, he didn’t notice him? That time of the month eh? Okay…..that’s a bit weird…What’s up with our Marauder lover? *Looks at Liz* Lol, I guess we’ll have to wait and see. Hey, quick question, Um….Tonks and lupin were you know in you know what….what are your ships for the story? Are you gonna give them up yet? Or are you loving to drive me nuts? That’s okay, I’m getting closer to fully reading your mind! Heheh! Stalkers do that you know! Lol
LMAO! Now that’s the Siry I know! But, I see what you mean. We wouldn’t want to drive another person crazy! I’m already filling that place in mungo’s! LMAO, Pseudonym? Sounds like some sort of snake! Lol, your fic is getting my vocabulary together for going back to school! I’m getting tired of the words, sleepy, food, headache, pool, party, sleepy. Lol, *Takes a mental note that pseudonym means false name*
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Lol, It’s harry, *Wonders what he’d saying* Lol, I was hoping he’d come in!
So, I see you are using a bit of you-know-what. Lol, so I have to ask again, what is one part your leaving out? I’m just wondering, Aww puddies, I’ll just keep wondering and trying to read your mind!
TONKS!!! *Jumps up and down and all around!* Okay, maybe you should know. From all the gals in Hp, Tonks is my ultimate favorite. And it’s not just because she’s related to Siry! I just love her and everything that makes her so unique! (Now you know how happy I was when she fessed to you know who about you know what) You know what’s freaky though, I just wrote a riddle on siry/ tonks relation last night. *Is freaked out* Darn….Didnt mean to hint any answer for any new riddle though!
LMAO!! That completely caught me off guard! I’m like cracking up on the floor right now! Heheh, let me explain. I just gone reading MOTw (Ama) interview. And she said she likes Braveheart b/c it shows his bum! So, I just imagined…. Okay, lmao! Enuff! (*Hold herself back, but cracks up on the floor* Darn, Ama still has her influence on me! You guys probably think I’m totally too silly…. Anyways…moving on….
That reminds me….Who could it be? An Uppie? (Made up character…) Well, whoever it is, it’ll be interesting….compared to you know what….. *Stops hinting you know what…b4 mods start hinting something else* Sorry,
Oh my god…. Um…however I don’t think that’s leading to much. I’m thinking it’s Mcgonagall…. Or JUST someone that wont cause trouble! Lol, then again, you could shock me! Lol, you’re making me like cliffies! Lol, I SERIOUSLY loathed any AT ALL. But, now it’s fun reading your mind!
Oh, we’re at the end…. *Huggles and kiggles as usual*
Luff ya lotz!
Tina

wow that was really good, keep writing

Sorry I haven't been around for a while, (I've been on vacation) but two nice updates are waiting for me! YAY!! *huggles Lissy* :glomp:

Not much to say that hasen't been said about "Black Family Reunion", but it cetainly did hint a LOT, can't wait to see how it all comes out at school!

"Familiar Faces"

Awww, poor Lupin. :cry:

Lol, I love big words. :D

Poor Siry, you'll be able to talk to him all you want at school...RIGHT?? :worried:

Caught that reference/hint-thingy ;)

LOL!:lmao:

Another reference/hint-thingy!

WE LOVE YOU LUPIN!:glomp:

Oh no!! :gasp: Could it be Snape?? I MUST KNOW!!!!! PAMS PAMS PAMS!!

Ok, Lissy, I'm all caught up. I like your portrayal of canon characters; you know, having them IN character. I especially like Phineas Nigellus' little rant about Sirius. Very Good. I'm glad I'm caught up cause now, I can review as they come. Great fic, I'm interested to see where this is going.

Keep writing !
Its so good!

Replies!!!
 

:hello: How are you guys? I thought I'd stop in for a bit of replying!!

My sweet almost the same birthday sister LadyV

*tackle glomps you* :glomp:

I agree! Snape is... *spoiler police edit*

I love Remus :loved:

I'm trying sweetie, I'm trying. But you are exactly right, he had a hard time with distinguishing between Harry and James sometimes, so I'm working on that too. Also I feel his personality can't be the same as he was as a 16 y/o. He also is going to be different from the post Azkaban Sirius as he isn't in such a depressing situation. I'm still feeling out his personality.

:whistle:

From the Queen of the Cliffies!!!! I'm trying to learn from you!!

:blush: You are the sweetest ever! I feel the same about your work!

*tackle glomp* loves on you.


Amber!!!! How are ya sweetie? *tackle glomps*

Remus deserves all the *huggles* he can get!

Thank you! I'll be eyeing up your neck of the woods! *looks your way*


Ashley sweet little Ashley!! *glomps on you*

Tehehehehe! My other Draco lover! Can you tell I love describing him for you ladies?

LoL!! She's embarassing him in front of another kid from school!

Love you too my dearie!!


Tina!!!!! My dear riddling stalker! *double tackle glomp*

We do love him!! Don't forget that my sis who said that is a Slytherin!

You hit the nail on the head my sweet!

I never once thought Siry/Tonks!! Never! Cross my heart, not even while reading... you know. I knew it was *blank* and *blank* Knew it. Wish I could prove it. LadyV knew too!

This'll be an alternate reality year 6, though I won't be able to resist using some HBP stuff once the ban is lifted. BTW: Bill and Fleur were canon in OOTP! Don't recall? Chapter four:

Remembering that!

:whistle: Someone was reading the same book over in my other fic...

*pets* You'll see!

:evil: You sure? *huggles and kisses you* muah!


Mubote X2
Sweet and simple and I love you for coming back! :glomp:


Hey Siriusette - still loving your name!*tackle ninja glomp*

I hope you had a great vacation! Don't you ever worry, you come in when you can, I'm always here! You are always most welcome! :glomp:

I try to put a hint in every post... Tehehehehe!

As much as his house placement will allow. *insert evil grin*

Oh yes we do!!!

You'll soon find out...


Dean!!! My Patrick Thatcher connection! *glomps you whether you want it or not*

Thank you so much! It means a lot to me that you are here. I already told you how I feel about canon characters, so you know those are among some of my favorite words! I hope you will enjoy where this is going!

Well here's a post to get the evil cliffie out of the way. Just for the record - Tina guessed it:


It was McGonagall, “you’re out of time,” she stated “let’s go.” She then led her charge back to the public floo and on to Hogwarts.


I'll be back later with more!!!!


:evillaugh

Thanks for sorting that out, that was cool but wouldnt harry recognise sirius from the pictures moody and hagrid gave him.
PAMs PAMs PAMs

Oh poo-ey. That's all we're getting? two lines? DOH!
lol, only joking. So it was MacGonagall. Didn't guess that, oh well, it makes sense really...
PAMS!
Love ya, (almost birthday sister...;))
LadyV:wizard:

That was just a teaser! :P I'll post the next one in a bit!! :glomp:

Love ya!!
Lissy

Ooohh It's getting really good!!! I can't wait to read more!!! :D

Hey allucha!! New Ravenclaw that you are!!Congrats! ;)

Your Ravenclaw nature shows! You're thinking ahead! I can't say too much about that because it would be a spoiler! Tehehehe! Stay tuned and thank you! :flowers:



brandmunky! A new Griffie!! We love our Gryffindors here too! ;)
Nice to meet you! Thank you so much for stopping in!

Thank you!! I hope I can get you to come back!!

More fic coming right up!! :flowers:

I see you!
*taps foot impatiently*
I'm looking forward to this Lissy!!!!
Love ya,
LadyV.

Pssst, when you're done posting, check out Close Encounters. You'll hate me...

I want to start out by saying that today's shout out goes to my dear sister Si!! The adorable Scheming Southern Angel and CIC of the Draco Minions (don't make her mad!)


The Scroll of Forgetfulness


Sirius spent the next few days watching as the staff arrived from summer holiday and got Hogwarts ready for the students. Some, like Hagrid and Filch, spent all year on the grounds, but most did not. Sirius kept his distance, unsure of who was aware of his presence and who wasn’t. Dumbledore had mentioned telling staff members about him, presumably those who knew him during his first time here, such as McGonagall. It was a really odd perspective seeing the school like this, coming to life. The house elves, normally inconspicuous, darted all over cleaning up and cooking for the feast. Teachers set up their classrooms in anticipation of the students to come. The Heads of Houses readied their House’s common rooms. Professor Flitwick and Professor Sprout could frequently be seen going in and out of the Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff dormitories respectively. Professor McGonagall, drill sergeant-like, oversaw it all, not only the readiness of Gryffindor House and her transfiguration classroom, but instructing the house elves on details for the feast, organizing the set up for the Great Hall, consulting with Hagrid on the arrival of the first years and preparing the roster for the sorting ceremony. Only one Head of House was conspicuously absent from the preparations. The Head of Slytherin House was nowhere to be seen.

Sirius had been wandering the castle restlessly. Now that the school year was upon them, he was anxious to get it going. At the same time, he was having last minute doubts regarding the wisdom of his new assignment. As was his nature, however, he brushed these feelings aside. When had he ever not walked boldly into a challenge? He could handle this. There was, of course, the added benefit of spending time with Harry. So he prowled the castle as he once did, re-acclimating himself with the secret passages and other points of mischief he and his friends had once discovered. He supposed he could be using this time to look at his school books while he waited, but he rarely cracked open a book the first time he was here, why start now? Sirius had that effortless type of intelligence that allowed him to pick up on his lessons without much visible studying, to the chagrin of his teachers and fellow students alike.

He was on his way back to his guest suite to get ready for the Welcome Feast, which was only a few hours away, when he heard voices approaching from just around the corner of the hallway. One he knew instantly, the other he had never heard before. Sirius quickly ducked behind a suit of armor as the speakers entered the corridor.

“I trust you brought the requested item with you?” the first voice, a man, asked.

“I did,” a woman answered.

“One of Dumbledore’s more hair-brained schemes, in my opinion,” Severus Snape sneered.

“I’m afraid I’m not privy to that information,” the woman neither agreed nor disagreed with the statement.

The pair was crossing in front of Sirius’ hiding place. He risked a glance around the suit of armor. He could see Snape in profile, but nothing of the mysterious second person as Snape blocked her from view. Did he just look this way?

“I’m not sure if I’m comfortable with this deception, Severus,” the woman continued softly.

“I don’t see that you have a choice,” Snape answered.

The woman sighed, “he trusts me, it just doesn’t feel right.”

“If you’re having reservations, then you never should have accepted this position,” Snape replied meanly.

The voices faded as Snape and the unfamiliar woman turned the corner at the end of the corridor. Sirius waited several moments until he was sure the pair must have moved on. He ventured out from his hiding spot and was confronted by a scowling Snape.

“Taking to lurking in dark corners now, are we Black?” the potions master drawled.

“No, Snape,” Sirius spat “we’ve already decided that’s your department.”

Snape smiled without mirth. “I see your experience with the veil has returned you to you last known maturity level, how fitting.”

Sirius grinned impudently, “I’m sure you wish you could – No, wait! You were miserable as a student and you’re just as miserable today. Probably better off as you are now, closer to being put out of your misery.”

Snape’s wand was suddenly in his hand. “Don’t tempt me Black, you may be under Dumbledore’s protection, but that doesn’t mean I can’t make your life a living hell. Just remember who has the authority here and who does not.”

Sirius leveled his wand at his old foe. He was quite aware of the new disparity between him and Snape in magical ability, but he never backed down from a fight. “Try it! What will you do? Dock house points?” he challenged sarcastically, “for all you know I could end up in your own house, wouldn’t that be funny?”

“I would like nothing better to have you in Slytherin House,” Snape sneered. “As much as I enjoy our little conversations, I have more important things to do. So, the Headmaster asked me to give you this.” The potions master reached in a pocket and brought out a tiny rolled up scroll. Sirius took it warily. “And this,” Snape pulled an envelope addressed to Sirius in Dumbledore’s handwriting, but pulled it away before Sirius could take it. “But, you won’t be needing it,” Snape raised his wand and tapped the envelope. “Incendio,” the bottom of it started to burn.

Sirius started to lunge for the item, but Snape had already tossed it on the floor and swept away, mean laughter in his wake. Sirius was tempted to aim a well deserved jinx at the professor, but it was never his style to attack someone from behind. Besides, he needed to salvage the letter. Luckily, he was able to stop it from being completely destroyed, using a counter spell. He took the items back to his room and started by opening the letter from Dumbledore first. It read:


“You now have in your possession a Scroll of Forgotten Identity, which at some point may become useful to you during your time here. It contains the incantation for a very specific memory charm. It is a spell that has been used in the past by witches and wizards who wished not to be recognized, often the wealthy and famous who wanted to be able to go out in public and not be troubled. It eventually became limited in it’s use by the Ministry due to abuse by wizards with nefarious intent. To use the spell, you must speak the incantation clearly in conversation with the intended target. That person will instantly forget your true identity, being left with a vague sense of déjà vu instead. There are a few things you must remember before using the scroll:

1. As I mentioned, the use of this spell is limited. You will have ten uses only, so use them wisely.

2. The effects of the memory charm are not permanent. Furthermore, the spell will work for a shorter period of time each time it is used on the same person until it no longer has any effect at all.

3. The spell has no effect on those who know you are in possession of it.

(“So that rules out using it on Snape,” Sirius thought wryly.)

4. Most importantly, and I can’t warn you enough…


The rest of the letter was burned away. Sirius muttered a few well chosen oaths about his soon to be Potions professor and unrolled the scroll next. It said:


Read and Memorize:

Alieno!

After a moment these words faded away and were replaced by:


1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
9.
10.


Sirius re-read Dumbledore’s letter with mixed emotions about using the spell. Clearly, the Headmaster felt there was a chance that Sirius may be recognized, most likely by Harry. He had to trust that Dumbledore wouldn’t have him use anything harmful on his godson, because if that were the case, this whole ruse could go hang. “What are the chances that Harry would recognize his new appearance, anyway?” Sirius wondered. After all, the boy had only seen him in a couple of old pictures and a few stolen moments in the pensieve. Surely, the boy’s attention was directed more toward James then himself? Would Harry really make the connection between the new student at school and the youthful appearance of his dead godfather? It seemed a bit of a stretch of the imagination, but anything was possible. Sirius hoped he would not be needing to use the scroll anytime soon. He tucked the letter into his trunk, the scroll he put in his pocket. He would think about what to do if he was recognized later. He had the Welcome Feast to get ready for now.


:claw: :gryff: :sort: :slyth: :huff:

LadyV, you sneak!! I had a lot of font and color changes to do!! LoL!! I'm on my way over!


I won't hate you! It's not possible!
:glomp:
Love ya,
Lissy

Sirius Black as hot. Fact.
 

Oooooooooooooooo Lissy!!!!!!
*puts fingers together in Mr Burnsesque manner*
What a great post, OMG!

That got my attention. Great title.


That would be wierd. I found it odd going into the staff room, I can't imagine what it would like being ther with no other students and all the teachers getting ready etc.

>by the by, I love your description of the hive of activity, everyone bustling to and fro , it kinda makes you want to be there, you know?

:bugeyes:
Red Flag - that cannot be good!!!!

I hate that. People who are brainy without studying I mean, not your writing, I love that. I love how you're creating the essence of his character, I'd so fancy him...

Argh!!!!!!!!! What's going on? Lissy, how much should I be trusting snape here? BEcause, I'm begining to think, after everything that's happened... I don't like this. I'm worried now. Who is she? Must be the new DADA teacher. Has to be.

See, I knew this would happen. Snape is going to make his life so miserable...

If that happens...*LadyV frowns, unsure whteher or not it would be a good thing*

Stupid evil...*mumbles* with their post rule they can go...*mumbles*
 

HATE HIM! That is just mean, I bet there was some really important info in there that he's not going to get and mess up because of it, and Snape knows that!

- the whole scroll thing - amazing, positively brilliant. As for Alenio, latin I'm assuming? Hang on...*LadyV googles alieno* :yes: PERFECT! lol.

That is so cute and so Sirius! All worried about harry and who cares about the consequences! But the fourth thing, see, I knew it would be something important, and of course Sirius isn't going to remember to ask DD about it later and he's going to mess up and it will all be Snape's fault! Grr!


I am so worried about what house he's going to be put in!! But he's a Gryffindor through and through, right? But then if he was in Slytherin it would give him a great vantage point, but then the hat could even put him in Hufflepuff, which would probably be safest because he'd drivce the Ravenclaws mad with his not studying... :dizzy:


LOL, I know, teehee. I'm gonna be ab auror! lol.

We'll see. :shifty:


As always, excellant posts Liss, I can't believe I'm gonna have to wait days for the next one! Make sure and have fun though - maybe you'll even get some writing done!
*super tackle glomps Lissy*
:glomp:
I'll be waiting when you get back.
Love ya,
LadyV.:wizard:

nice story! very cool!

Lol, for once I’m not in a goofy mood before reading your fic. Let’s just hope I don’t get too goofy after. *Has a very important school orientation meeting in the morning* Then again, I should get some sleep…Darn this, it’s addicting… I cannot repeat, CANNOT mess that up….*Squints her eyes and reviews politelylike an educated young lady* YAH RIGHT!
MUAHAHA! Lol, I told you it was Mcgonagall! Then again, I hope that wasn’t just to let me THINK I’m getting closer to reading your mind! Lol, even though it’s working *Winks*, remember my protective guard on these things are never down! Teaser eh? I love your evil side just as much as your normal one LIZ!! We’re allowed to be evil every once in a while! And, that’s not just because I enjoy teasers…
*Huggles and kiggles LIZ and then reads her new SIRY UPDATE!!!!*
Let’s go….
*Thinks* Hmmm, Interesting chapter title…But who will this scroll affect? *Has no idea* Okay, keep going….
This is gonna be cool. Lol, see we’ve never really (At least I haven’t…all the fics I read are so diff than this) seen Hogwarts from the inside before the students arrive. It’s nice how you have it so brilliantly described. It’s just as if JKR wrote it to fit in perfectly with the series.
So this definitely includes Snape. So that’s what this chapters about right? I knew he was going to come in. Either sooner or later, glad it was today. And…I promise…I WILL NOT murder him. (Lol, I think I’m getting tired of huggling him to death, Who knew SIMM could go so tiring) *Crosses fingers on the promise* Sorry, Snape’s just evil, I know he’ll stand in the way of my Siry. And even though I’m wishing DD hasn’t told Snape, I’m like 100% sure he will. It’s all a part of your evil plan to drive me nuts….That’s okay, one day I’ll write a fic about a wonderful person named Liz who was forced to live under a Evil Mastermind named Snape. She eventually will break free, and murder him for her faithful, lovable friend. Guess who that is? *Points to her self proudly* LMAO! JUST JK…Kidding, *Shakes head cracking up then pulls it together and returns to polite shy young girl* I’m kidding myself, when I say that…
I KNEW IT! As much as I hoped and denied it, I knew this post would be about Snape. *Reassures Lizzy she’ll calm down when he comes into the scene* By the way where is he? He’s nosy self is always lurking into other people’s business. Hmph…Seriously, he’s worser than Flich….
Awwww, Poor SIRY! Lol, if I was him, I’d probably have gone crazy. Even more than my usual self. Lol, just the thought would’ve torn me apart! *Huggles her Siry* I know how you feel, I can’t wait to get through my morning! Darn, the slowness of the night….
SIRY HAVING SECOND THOUGHTS? What’s wrong with him? *Pets* I guess some parts of his adolescence are returning…*Reassures Siry he could handle this* After all, you are a Black…Speaking of which…What has happened to all of Siry’s belongings? AKA Grimmauld Place? Hmph… I know you’ll get into this in the meantime Liz. It’s just my brain is about to pop open from all the questions in my mind that are unanswered. The only thing that’s killing is we’re in Siry’s perspective throughout it all. Trust me I love that, it’s just it feels like a drag….I CAN’T WAIT UNTIL THE SORTING CEREMONY!! *Starts crying like a baby* You know I’m not patient…then again I have to be right? *Tina will be patient for Liz*
Looks at the word *POkkles the word* There will be lots of mischief that will left unmanaged before Harry finds out..*DOES A LITTLE VICTORY DANCE* Darn I can’t wait. Do you belive I’m more anxious finding out what happens to the fic than actually starting my new school? Oh, god I’m such a dork… We are so alike. I keep telling my friends (the ones from rpg) That class is just not my thing. I’m smart with or w/o it! Lol, or maybe it’s just I’ve promised the mods I won’t bother them any longer in class. Do you believe I got petrified by a teacher for being in halls when I shouldn’t be (They never give me the darn detentions…UGHHHH) God knows what would happen if I’m in a class with an actual teacher. *Shakes her head in disappointment*
Corner of hallways? He knew instantly? Lol, we all know how that is. No need to try and read your mind. IT’S THAT EVIL SON OF A GUN!!! Sorry, I’ll shut up and read….*Glares* Oh, wait…who’s the other? *Wonders* If Siry hasn’t heard of it before could it be a Uppie of yours? Not sure…But, if they’re with Snape I should pay real close attention. *Glares at Snape but has her mind on the other person*
Hmph….*THINKS* What could it be? *Wonders but has Snape in the corner of her eye*
HOW DARE YOU SAY HIS NAME AFTER….oops…Sry…I wont end that. Wow my heart practically stopped while I was writing that…. Hair brained eh? What is that supposed to mean? Scheme for what really? *Thinks about Siry* It better not be….*Glares at Sneverus*
Okay so, that means I have no right to hate the lady since by that it means she’s not necessarily an ally of Snape. But.. she’ll have a really important role eh? *Nods surely* Yep, why else wouldn’t you give us her name? Okay, I’ll keep going…But I will say I don’t know what to think of her yet which is exactly what you intended when you wrote her w/o a name right?
Okay Okay, so Snape knows Sirius is there. It’s always weird how Snape can feel Harry’s presence even when he’s under the Invisibility Cloak. I guess that’s the same thing with my Siry. Nice comparison btw. I like how you add this little things that make everything fit in so perfect (As in just as if JKR had wrote it)
OK WHY ARE YOU DOING IT THEN? I see she doesn’t like Snape very much. Lol, people who seem to enjoy his dull presence (Even though I have no idea how) don’t call him Severus. Lol… Darn him, he’s so evil. Lizzy, is it just me or are you writing Snape the way I see him? Then again, this could be just a cover to confuse me! Even though I’ll still hate Snape, I’m not letting my personal feelings get in the way. *Shrugs* At least, I hope not….
HE? Who’s he? Wait…I’m thinking DD. *Gets blurred from reading Liz’s mind b/c of personal issues w/ Snape* I’LL MURDER HIM!!! He’s so evil….Okay, I’m lik screaming right now. So much for not letting my feelings get in the middle of reading your mind…
YOU ARE!! Lol, So, you’re playing Devil’s advocate. I know you what you’re trying to do. And it won’t work…
Position eh? Okay, all I can think of from that is DADA. I mean DD only appoints people he trusts ( That’s exactly why he never appointed you know who. Well even after you know what, we all see that was a mistake) And she says he trusts her. I can only assume this much. So, that’s what I think you’re doing. You wont have Snape evil in here(As much as I was hoping) You know he’s always loathed all the DADA teachers b/c he could never get it. So, he’s being mean for that reason.
Or…Maybe I’m babbling…And making a fool of myself for posting this. *Tries reading LIZ’S mind harder than ever* That’s okay, I still can’t find out what really happens and who really is the DADA. And who the poor lady is or what part she plays.

I'm diluted....I've never posted something this long..*THINKS*i'M CRAZY....
 

SCOWLING EH?????/I’ll turn into the wild witch of the west in a second if he even dares to try something.
I don’t think my Siry needs my help. Annoying Snape (And hopefully murdering him…Kidding..) is his department! Lol, *Lets her Siry do what he does best and goes back to what she does* OOOOOOOOOOOH! Lizzy knows how to diss. Lol, I’m loving this liz! Then again you know I am. And might I add…I saw that little part about the out of misery! MUAHAHA! *Hopes Siry’s right*
We’ll see who’s in authority when they’re dead! *THWACKS SEVERUS* Go look at yourself twice, I pity your life….
Laugh my ***** out! Yah right! But, like I’ve said. Liz wont torture you Siry. *Looks at LIZ* I hope not…CAN’T WAIT FOR THE CEREMONY!!
Like what? *WONDERS* I know this little things that you add should be taken more seriously, but my head will hurt again…I’ll let what evil plans Snape has pass me by….
EVIL!!!!!!!!! But, you’re writing Snape just the way I’ve been trying to explain him to you. How can you be so sure he’s not evil after everything he’s done throughout all the years. I mean I don’t even care if he turns out good, I’LL STILL HATE HIM! Sry…I tried thinking of him as….good (I can’t believe I even said it) but well you’re adding to how much hatred I have for him…
Or maybe this is going perfect…Just the way you want me to think of him…He’ll probably turn good in this fic, but there’s no way in hell I can see Siry liking him no matter what he does…Let’s just hope you got all that…
YES!!! THAT MEANS HE CAN USE IT ON THAT EVIL trash…. *Keeps reading happily*
Smart LIZZY! I like all things that are new and not JKR’s. (Mainly b/c of Dean and his world) But I love things that make each story unique.
OKAY OKAY OKAY, I am jaded b/c of my personal feelings. I shoudlve thought that you’d add that in. After all, what would the story be like without my favorite bickering and back-talk? Let’s just hope that someone we all know don’t find out he’s in procession of it. You know what I’ve totally forgot about? Voldemort. I mean this is after OOTP, that means he’s resurrected in his own body which means he’s out there more dangerous than ever! So, where will all that fit in? *Wonders* Then thinks of the new lady….Hmmmmh, I have a theory but I’ll read another update to fully explain….*Considering I’m not sure at all…* I need more clues…
Wow, *Wonders and the rereads* Maybe its not to leave it laying around? What other things are considered with this new spell? Would that be indicating something harmful to the people who are jinxed? Could it be more info on the history of the spell? *Thinks it was very important* What could it be? Could it be just a reminder not to let things get too carried away with Harry? I don’t know, but I think I’ll let that one go too. Darn that SEverus. I cannot wait to see Siry in class with him.. Looking forward to those promised oaths. I CAN’T WAIT!!!
COOL WORD! * Gets goofy and Thinks of Space (And Snape)* Let us kid around, what could the new charm hint? (This next idea is a complete joke) THE EVIL SNAPE IS AN ALIEN IMPERSONATING AN UGLY HUMAN! HE’S OUT THERE TO GET MY SIRY Heheh, Lol, I think I should call now and re-arrange my meeting….Your fics are just too good to let go without goofing off.
Lol, * LOOKS AT LIZ’S SIGGIE AND GASP* Who would forgot your gorgeous smile?!!? But, we don’t get into that….My replies are getting too long! I’m afrid if istart that I’ll never end…*HUggles her Siry*
LMAO! You never know….But I think that you wont have Harry think too much at first about Brain Wulfric. After all, Harry’s emotional and wont want to think too much about Siry before breaking down. He will be suspicious but I don’t think that Harry will do anything or find out anything about Brian (I’ll refer to my Siry as that every once in a while) until his connection with the MM. That, I’m pretty sure of….
*GASP* And you had to leave it at that? Come on, THAT’S SO NOT FAIR….. *Sniffs and then looks at her watch* OOPS, I’ve been writing/reading for almost forty minutes…Darn, I gotta jet, It’s light out…. How fast did time go by?
*HUGGLES AND KIGGLES AND HAILS UNTIL NEXT UPDATE!* I thank you you very very very very very very very very very much for the long update! I hope you have fun in Boston! And I hope you come back with MUCHO updates!
LOVE YA LOTZ…
Tina

What was the name of this chapter again?

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Sirius spent the next few days watching as the staff arrived from summer holiday and got Hogwarts ready for the students. Some, like Hagrid and Filch, spent all year on the grounds, but most did not. Sirius kept his distance, unsure of who was aware of his presence and who wasn’t. Dumbledore had mentioned telling staff members about him, presumably those who knew him during his first time here, such as McGonagall. It was a really odd perspective seeing the school like this, coming to life. The house elves, normally inconspicuous, darted all over cleaning up and cooking for the feast. Teachers set up their classrooms in anticipation of the students to come. The Heads of Houses readied their House’s common rooms. Professor Flitwick and Professor Sprout could frequently be seen going in and out of the Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff dormitories respectively. Professor McGonagall, drill sergeant-like, oversaw it all, not only the readiness of Gryffindor House and her transfiguration classroom, but instructing the house elves on details for the feast, organizing the set up for the Great Hall, consulting with Hagrid on the arrival of the first years and preparing the roster for the sorting ceremony. Only one Head of House was conspicuously absent from the preparations. The Head of Slytherin House was nowhere to be seen.

I liked this paragraph. You'd never get to see this normally, and it's interesting to see the school preparations. It always seems so made up, already.

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“I trust you brought the requested item with you?” the first voice, a man, asked. “I did,” a woman answered. “One of Dumbledore’s more hair-brained schemes, in my opinion,” Severus Snape sneered. “I’m afraid I’m not privy to that information,” the woman neither agreed nor disagreed with the statement. The pair was crossing in front of Sirius’ hiding place. He risked a glance around the suit of armor. He could see Snape in profile, but nothing of the mysterious second person as Snape blocked her from view. Did he just look this way? “I’m not sure if I’m comfortable with this deception, Severus,” the woman continued softly.

I wonder who this woman is...:D Something. Is. Going. On.

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“Taking to lurking in dark corners now, are we Black?” the potions master drawled. “No, Snape,” Sirius spat “we’ve already decided that’s your department.” Snape smiled without mirth. “I see your experience with the veil has returned you to you last known maturity level, how fitting.” Sirius grinned impudently, “I’m sure you wish you could – No, wait! You were miserable as a student and you’re just as miserable today. Probably better off as you are now, closer to being put out of your misery.” Snape’s wand was suddenly in his hand. “Don’t tempt me Black, you may be under Dumbledore’s protection, but that doesn’t mean I can’t make your life a living hell. Just remember who has the authority here and who does not.” Sirius leveled his wand at his old foe. He was quite aware of the new disparity between him and Snape in magical ability, but he never backed down from a fight. “Try it! What will you do? Dock house points?” he challenged sarcastically, “for all you know I could end up in your own house, wouldn’t that be funny?”

All of that...excellent. I can really imagine them saying that. There again, your canon characterization skills at work.

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Snape pulled an envelope addressed to Sirius in Dumbledore’s handwriting, but pulled it away before Sirius could take it. “But, you won’t be needing it,” Snape raised his wand and tapped the envelope. “Incendio,” the bottom of it started to burn.

That slimy git...

Sounds like something Emeritus needs!

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3. The spell has no effect on those who know you are in possession of it.

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Or does it? :shifty:



Again, that slimy git...

Will he use all ten? When will he use them? Who will he use them on? When will I stop asking questions? Who knows? Will you post more soon?

Bahaha that's right! Make me mad and I sick the minions on you! *points*

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The Scroll of Forgetfulness

I swear you and Ottery come up with some of the best chapter titles!

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Sirius spent the next few days watching as the staff arrived from summer holiday and got Hogwarts ready for the students. Some, like Hagrid and Filch, spent all year on the grounds, but most did not. Sirius kept his distance, unsure of who was aware of his presence and who wasn’t. Dumbledore had mentioned telling staff members about him, presumably those who knew him during his first time here, such as McGonagall. It was a really odd perspective seeing the school like this, coming to life. The house elves, normally inconspicuous, darted all over cleaning up and cooking for the feast. Teachers set up their classrooms in anticipation of the students to come. The Heads of Houses readied their House’s common rooms. Professor Flitwick and Professor Sprout could frequently be seen going in and out of the Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff dormitories respectively. Professor McGonagall, drill sergeant-like, oversaw it all, not only the readiness of Gryffindor House and her transfiguration classroom, but instructing the house elves on details for the feast, organizing the set up for the Great Hall, consulting with Hagrid on the arrival of the first years and preparing the roster for the sorting ceremony. Only one Head of House was conspicuously absent from the preparations. The Head of Slytherin House was nowhere to be seen.

If Snape knows what's good for him, he'll stay away from Sirius.

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Sirius had been wandering the castle restlessly. Now that the school year was upon them, he was anxious to get it going. At the same time, he was having last minute doubts regarding the wisdom of his new assignment. As was his nature, however, he brushed these feelings aside. When had he ever not walked boldly into a challenge? He could handle this. There was, of course, the added benefit of spending time with Harry. So he prowled the castle as he once did, re-acclimating himself with the secret passages and other points of mischief he and his friends had once discovered. He supposed he could be using this time to look at his school books while he waited, but he rarely cracked open a book the first time he was here, why start now? Sirius had that effortless type of intelligence that allowed him to pick up on his lessons without much visible studying, to the chagrin of his teachers and fellow students alike.

OMG. I am the same way! I get high test scores and I NEVER study!

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He was on his way back to his guest suite to get ready for the Welcome Feast, which was only a few hours away, when he heard voices approaching from just around the corner of the hallway. One he knew instantly, the other he had never heard before. Sirius quickly ducked behind a suit of armor as the speakers entered the corridor. “I trust you brought the requested item with you?” the first voice, a man, asked. “I did,” a woman answered. “One of Dumbledore’s more hair-brained schemes, in my opinion,” Severus Snape sneered. “I’m afraid I’m not privy to that information,” the woman neither agreed nor disagreed with the statement. The pair was crossing in front of Sirius’ hiding place. He risked a glance around the suit of armor. He could see Snape in profile, but nothing of the mysterious second person as Snape blocked her from view. Did he just look this way? “I’m not sure if I’m comfortable with this deception, Severus,” the woman continued softly. “I don’t see that you have a choice,” Snape answered. The woman sighed, “he trusts me, it just doesn’t feel right.” “If you’re having reservations, then you never should have accepted this position,” Snape replied meanly.

*coughlosergitcough*
AAH!! STUPID GIT!!! *kills him*



WHY can Sirius EVER get revenge on Snape!? I'd SO look forward to reading it!

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Sirius re-read Dumbledore’s letter with mixed emotions about using the spell. Clearly, the Headmaster felt there was a chance that Sirius may be recognized, most likely by Harry. He had to trust that Dumbledore wouldn’t have him use anything harmful on his godson, because if that were the case, this whole ruse could go hang. “What are the chances that Harry would recognize his new appearance, anyway?” Sirius wondered. After all, the boy had only seen him in a couple of old pictures and a few stolen moments in the pensieve. Surely, the boy’s attention was directed more toward James then himself? Would Harry really make the connection between the new student at school and the youthful appearance of his dead godfather? It seemed a bit of a stretch of the imagination, but anything was possible. Sirius hoped he would not be needing to use the scroll anytime soon. He tucked the letter into his trunk, the scroll he put in his pocket. He would think about what to do if he was recognized later. He had the Welcome Feast to get ready for now.

This should be VERY VERY interesting....



Lissy, I love the story so far! Post again when you can!

*Si*

that was a cool post but i want to know what the special bit that was burned said, mabye something very important?
snape is so mean its unbearable, great post,
PAMs

God's teeth! You are a brilliant writer. Keep up this fanfic; I'm enthralled!

God's teeth, but your a good writer so w/e God's teeth lol

Loving it! Great writing! Post more!

Brilliant posts Lissy! I hope Sirius gets some revenge on Snape. I cant wait for more.

Ally.

Oh, so I have too many smilies? Pt. 1
 

Oooh, great new postness!!

*Tackle ninja glomps you*:glomp:

....grr...I HATE SUSPENSE!!! <_<

Rats. I love run-ins with mortal enimies.

I really like this paragraph, such a cool point of view! ^_^

Perhaps stirring up trouble...?

Same here....START SCHOOL WILL YA?

Of course you can!

Lol, same here. :lol: My parents are always telling me to study, but I never need too!

WHAT item???

Wonder what the scheme is for? *Sneers back at Snape* Git. :mad:

When you're sneaking around it always looks like someone just saw you, Sirius! *sighs and rolls eyes as if talking to tiresome brother*:rolleyes:

What deception doesn't feel right??? *Pokes Snape in the eye - "MEANIE!"* :poke:

*Scowls back* :mad:

SMACK 'EM BACK SIRY! :lol:

Oh, so I have too many smilies? Pt. 2 of post.
 

Nice. Now that is quality insulture (insultness?) :)

You slimy GIT!

A scroll of what?

Ooh, lemme guess, thats the most important thing isn't it?

That's alien in...some language, Latin or something.

I HATE CLIFFIES!! Oh well...

Have a good break and get back on here soon!:hello:

Oh and where'd you get your avvie???? It is so cool!
PAMsie-PAMsie!!

Please post more!!!!

Hi new reader.
I love your story! I miss Sirus!
Keep writing!

Hey, I'm a new reader. I just read all the posts so far, and I think this is a great fanfic!!! The more of Sirius the better for me... and yes he ISN'T DEAD!!! I love it that people want to keep him alive. Keep up the good work. Some very imaginative twists and ideas! Reminds me a bit of my favourite Indian serial (see my siggy and avatar for pics!)...cos even there this cool Sirius-ish guy everyone thought was dead comes back... *sigh* Why do they always make the best characters suffer...???

Anyway... PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!! I need more of this! It is by far the coolest fanfic I've read on SS. I'm reading your other works as soon as I get time!!!!!!!

*Looks at all the new posts* LMAO! *TURNS TO LIZ* Now, don't get too conceited and leave us all hanging like this. I know you're back!!! So, please, Don't bother replying to any of my crazy remarks earlier...JUST PLS POST ANOTHER UPDATE!!!
If you have time for riddles, you definently have time for Siry! So, pweeez, Do it for all the new readers and the new popularity you're having! *Is still sulking w/Lai over the twins*
Luff Always,
Tina *HUggles, kiggles, and hails*

Great Story!
 

Hi Lissy!

I love this story! Such a great concept! I soo can't wait to see what happens!
You are a very good writer!! Great Great story!!

Post more soon!!

Love ya
Princess Thea

:hello: Hey everyone!! I am just so excited to see so many people here! You have no idea... *cries with joy* I'm just stopping in right now for a few replies, then I'll be working on a post, estimated for tonight! I had a long weekend as you may have noticed :dizzy:, so now I'm getting back into the swing of things! These will be quickies so I can go write! *Love you all*

LadyV The Angel of Suspense! *glomps you*

I concur!!! Hehehehehe!

*loves you* *glomp* I read all you said, and you are right to be suspicious... About a number of things! And yes, Alieno is latin:

Great sleuth work LadyV!


Mubote! I see you are a Slytherin now!

*glomps you* Thank you!!! I hope I can keep you coming back!


Tina, My Riddle Queen!! *tackle glomp*

Oh my goodness, I hope your school meeting went well? Please tell me yes!

:dizzy: What am I thinking now? Hehehehehe!! Tina, I read every word of your posts and I must say you asked some excellent questions and you hit upon some great points. You are getting very good!! I'll just rule one out:
Though it really made me smile! *huggles and kisses you* Muah!!!


Dean? Do I know someone named Dean? *glomp*

LoL!!! You are so bad!!

:shifty:

:blush: Thank you!

Excellent questions indeed...


My Sister, CIC of the Minions!!!! *tackleninjaglomp*

Thank you my sis! I think he is better though! I hate making up titles!

I believe it! For me, it depends on the subject.

For you anything! *glomp*


Allucha!! *hugs you*

You know I can't tell! Tehehehehe!!!


Samuel Green! Welcome and great to meet you!!! *hugs*

Thank you soooo much!!

Note - To all you new guys - I'm a pretty glompy huggy kinda person!!


And Mubote just got another:

*glomp*


*Mirror of Erised*, Ravenclaw (love it) *Claw hug*

Later tonight!!!


Allllllly!!!!!!!!!*tackle glomp*

I thought I had lost you!!! Missed you sooooooooooooooooooo much!!!!

I'll write much more for you!!!!!!


*Siriusette Black* Possesor of the coolest name!! *glomps on you*
How are you dear?

*innocent look* Moi? Suspense?

Me too! Rats... :evil:

Yes, it does!

Love that word!

You're just as bad as Dean!

The avvie is a PotterPuffs creation: http://www.livejournal.com/~potterpuffs/


I see *Mirror of Erised* is fishing for another one: *glomp*


Federov4eva -Welcome!!!! I love new readers!! *loves on you*

Thank you!! Thank you!!! I will!!!


BlackFiresong!! Cool name!! Welcome!!! *lots of loves for you too*

I like your thinking!!!

That's really cool!! And the best people always do seem to suffer, I know. Makes us want to protect. *protects Sirius*

Thank you soooooooooooooooo much! Very very flattered!! Take your time, but I know that I always love hearing from you!


Ok, now Tina is fishing... *smothers her with hugs and kisses*

My stalker knows where I am!!! AAAhhhhhh!!!! Sweetie, I can't keep up with you! Just remember some of your replies, you had some good points! *hugs you and Lai* Don't sulk - please? I'm writing as soon as I finish here...


There's another Angel here and she's royalty!! Princess Thea - welcome!!!
So happy to see you!!! *glompage*

Thank you so very much!! I will!!! So excited to see a fellow angel!!! *hugs*


Love you all lots and lots!!! Getting to work now! :whip: Ouch!!!

Love you,
Lissy

-spies on Lissy-

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Allllllly!!!!!!!!!*tackle glomp* I thought I had lost you!!! Missed you sooooooooooooooooooo much!!!!

-licks glomps-
Muahaha you'll never lose me!


Wahay! -evil grin-

It went okay. Lol, alot of craziness, but they seemed to like the creativity I used in teh essays I had to write (LMAO,you have no idea)
Thank you. I know I'm good. Heheh...but w/o someone as awesome as you, there wouldnt be anything good to think about! *Flatters you*
You don't need to keep up with me. REmmeber I'm your stalker It's my job, and duty. Might i add, I LUFF IT! OKAY I HOPE TO HEAR SOON!!!! I'LL BE BACK!
Luff Always,
Tina

Ally, are you invisible or something?

Oh no! It's Tina :whip:

*flees*

^ bwahaha I am indeed. Ill change back to normal in a min after ive had my dinner. Ill pm you when I get back.

-coughontopiccough- PAMS!