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07-31-2010, 07:13 AM
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Disclaimer: The magical world of witches and wizards, and some characters, belong to the awesome J.K Rowling, the best author ever. Also this story is dedicated to two very awesome people, Sara and Jesse, luff yoou two <3
Haaiii Everyone  Me be Jessica also known as Jess or sometimes Tiger. So This story is basically about Harry finding out about he has a sister named Alice, and when he finds out, it seems everything goes wrong with relationships and everything. Now, shall we begin? YES. Enjoy! <3 Chapter One: The Secrets Out It was a dark night and the only thing you could see in the forest was a girl - she was running and looked as though she was lost. Her name was Alice, Alice Walters. She had beautiful rich red hair, deep green eyes and was dressed in Hogwarts robes that had the Gryffindor crest sewn on them.
Alice stopped. "I’m Coming Harry!” she yelled.
She ran as fast as she could and then she stopped behind a tree. Alice saw Voldemort standing there, pushing Harry against a tree. Hermione and Ron were being held back by two Death Eaters and the rest of the Death Eaters were watching.
“Tell me where your sister is Potter!” Voldemort said.
“I swear, I DON'T have a sister” Harry replied.
“You liar! Very well then, watch your friends die!” Voldemort dropped Harry. He then pulled out his wand and pointed it at Hermione. “Say goodbye, Harry! Avada Ke-“
”STOP! Don’t hurt them please” Alice yelled and she walked out behind the tree. Draco's eyes widened as he heard the words come out of her mouth. He came out from behind his father, but he still could not see her behind all the Death Eaters. Tears came to Alice’s eyes as she said “Please, I’m Harry’s sister. You can have me - just don’t hurt them!”
”Well I cannot promise that I wont hurt them, but I like the idea of harming you,” Voldemort paused. He once again raised his wand. '
I have a sister?’ Harry thought. He knew he had to learn more and to do so, he had to save Alice. He couldn’t help himself. He knew he had to do something, but what? ‘Its a stupid idea but it might work’
“NO - STOP!!” interrupted Draco. He launched himself in front of Alice and all he could see was a bright green light.
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OMG!!! No way no way!!! I cannot believe Alice! She's pure evil!!! I'm shocked!!!!
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Hey Jessica I love your story  PAMS!
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Great Story!
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Originally Posted by Luna_Midnight  Great Story! Thanks  Quote:
Originally Posted by Jesse_Longbottom Hey Jessica I love your story PAMS!
!Jesse! Jesse!!!  <333 Thank yooooou! Quote:
Originally Posted by Morag OMG!!! No way no way!!! I cannot believe Alice! She's pure evil!!! I'm shocked!!!!
PAMS!
Soph x Well, at least thats what we though  Quote:
Originally Posted by LouLou Malfoy Note to self crossed off!
Okay, I just caught myself up on the whole thing, and I must say you are a brilliant writer!
Who was it?? Someone I won't expect...but who?!
I'll be anxiously awaiting more, my friend! Thanks LouLou! You shall see soon  Chapter Six: I'm Back, Miss Me? "Harry?" A girls voice called out, as the fog moved away Harry clearly saw that it was Ginny, he ran up and kissed her on the check, Ron walked up to his sister and gave her a hug, Hermione shook Ginny's hand, Harry then looked past Ginny, hoping he would see Alice behind her.
"Whats wrong?" Asked Ginny looking behind her, as she turned around she saw someone who you would n't like to see at that happy moment, "Drop Your wands" Draco Malfoy yells at them, Ginny dreops her wand and takes Harry's hand.
"What are you doing here Malfoy?" Hermione says, she did not like him any more, "I thought you wanted your friend back" Draco says, he steps out of the way and there was Alice behind him, she stands next to him with her wand, "Alice..." Ron says he walks forward to her, "Step Back!" She says just as her wand touchs Ron's neck.
Hermione steps forward and stares at Alice, "What are you doing?" Hermione says forcing her way she takes Alice's hand and smiles, Atears come to ALice's eyes, she brings her wand back from Ron's neck and punches Draco in the face.
"Thats gotta hurt" Ron smiles, Harry watches Draco run away and gives Alice a hug, Ginny looks confused, "Ok what just happened" Ginny said, "This is my sister" Harry said to Ginny.
Ronald stares at Alice, he walks into the tent and Alice follows, she doesn't know why but then she see's Ron sit down, "Whats the matter?" she asks.
"I feel odd"
"In what way do you feel odd?"
"Well I have never felt this way"
"Let your feelings out, everyone needs to once in awhile, trust me"
Ron smiles at Alice, he thought, let his feelings out? He did exactly that and kissed Alice on the lips, Alice was surprised and then, she was kissing him back.
"Ron are you here?" Hermione walks in and see's them kissing she stares at them angrily.
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Aww Hermione must be gutted cause her and Ron are the cutest
I still don't trust Alice!
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OHMIGOD!!! ILOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH JESS! <333
Ahhh!! I don't trust Alice one bit! Poor 'Mione  I feel badd forr her
But Ginny's there!
PAMS PAMS!
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Oh Ma God.
I feel awful. My name has been slandered. Buhh I forgive you
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Fifth Year | she dreamed of para-para-pardise ♥ ily MY Sara x Sams twinny x Kake/Anastopher/Chalie
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Originally Posted by Morag Aww Hermione must be gutted cause her and Ron are the cutest
I still don't trust Alice!
PAMS!
Soph x You should see her reaction  Thanks Soph! Quote:
Originally Posted by Jesse_Longbottom Great post Jessica Thankies my bestie on SS aka Jesse Quote:
Originally Posted by snapesgrl OHMIGOD!!! ILOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH JESS! <333
Ahhh!! I don't trust Alice one bit! Poor 'Mione I feel badd forr her
But Ginny's there!
PAMS PAMS!
xxSara~ Thankies to my other SS bestie Sara Yes maybe Ginny can make things better Quote:
Originally Posted by city_girl_95 Oh Ma God.
I feel awful. My name has been slandered. Buhh I forgive you
PAMS (whaever it means) I think Pams mean that I will tell you when updated  Thankiea Alice . Chapter Seven Hermione stood there gutted and dropped her bag and walked out of the tent, Ron ran after her took her arm.
"Hermione, where are you going?" Ron says looking her right in the eyes.
"Away from you" She struggles out of his grip and walks off, Ginny see's her out of the corner of her eye and runs up to her and takes her place standing next to Ron.
"Hermione you can-" Everyone ducks as a sooty colored owl swoops down next to Alice, she had made herself out of the tent.
"Whats going on?" She says, the owl sitting on her arm, she takes a tiny folded piece of paper out of the claws and she started to read out loud.
"Dear Hogwarts Student of The Present,
We are gladly letting you know that we are going to have a ball, even in these rough times we want to make everyone happy. We hope to see you there and dressed well.
Signed....
Minerva McGonagle"
"I'm gonna go" Hermione says forgetting was just happened.
"Me too" everyone else said expect Harry standing there quiet.
"Come on" Ginny says pressing her lips on his cheek.
"Okay, but any sign of danger we go" Harry said.
"We better get ready, it is tonight" Alice says running into the tent, followed by the others, they got ready, but dresses or suits on and maybe makeup, they wanted to relax after this, they wanted to remember this night forever......
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| Feeling so fly like a D-Criss| Jess's NOM | GERONIMO | Part Hobbit | Victimised by Moffat
JESS I AM GOING TO KILL YOU
Ron/Hermione SHALL RULE FOREVER
-runs around with signs, protesting against this outrage-
I'm kidding kinda, THIS IS FANTASTIC JESS! I LOVE IT!
PAMS (it means Please Add More Soon  )
Sammy xx
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Woooo! I'm soo looking forward to the ball. I hope things are ok between eveeryone now!
Great Post!
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Originally Posted by PureBlood64 { dedicated to Jesse and Sara aka my SS besties, iLuffers you two } Awhhhh!!!!!! <333 I luffers you too Jess!!
Gah!!!!!!!!! You can't just end your chappie there!! I HATE ALICE!! SHE WILL PAY FOR HURTING 'MIONE!! 
Oh a ball!
I love this storyy!!
PAMS!!
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Ahh! Why did you hurt Mione like that?
Ron and Hermione! Forever! I shall kill Alice! Caue she runined Ronmine and now shes a death eater!
hehe
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Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Hog's Head
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First Year |  would u risk it 4 a chocolate biscuit?
Love this Fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm Lia by the way omw i wont survive all these cliffhangers!  But i like it 
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Hufflepuff Fourth Year | Little Fox | ½ of Lauralie | Ravenclaw...?? *overthinks* | #HouseNATARINA
Love, love, love, love this
I don't feel like I can trust anyone help :o
I don't trust Alice I don't trust Draco I hate Ron  I hate/don't trust everyone
But stillll............
PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm serious, pams
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Fifth Year | she dreamed of para-para-pardise ♥ ily MY Sara x Sams twinny x Kake/Anastopher/Chalie
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Originally Posted by samthehpfreak JESS I AM GOING TO KILL YOU
Ron/Hermione SHALL RULE FOREVER
-runs around with signs, protesting against this outrage-
I'm kidding kinda, THIS IS FANTASTIC JESS! I LOVE IT!
PAMS (it means Please Add More Soon )
Sammy xx *runs away* NOOO! DON'T KILL ME TWINNEH! I hate Romione, nuff said
Thank yooou my Nom <3 Quote:
Originally Posted by Morag Woooo! I'm soo looking forward to the ball. I hope things are ok between eveeryone now!
Great Post!
PAMS!
Soph x Thank yooou Soph Quote:
Originally Posted by snapesgrl Awhhhh!!!!!! <333 I luffers you too Jess!!
Gah!!!!!!!!! You can't just end your chappie there!! I HATE ALICE!! SHE WILL PAY FOR HURTING 'MIONE!!
Oh a ball!
I love this storyy!!
PAMS!!
xxSara hehe. Me luff yooou more though <3 Thank yooou Sara Quote:
Originally Posted by Luna_Midnight Ahh! Why did you hurt Mione like that?
Ron and Hermione! Forever! I shall kill Alice! Caue she runined Ronmine and now shes a death eater!
hehe
PAMS PAMS hehehe. Thank yooou  Quote:
Originally Posted by harry potter freak Love this Fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm Lia by the way omw i wont survive all these cliffhangers! But i like it
PAMS!!!!(x100) Haiii Lia Nice to have another reader, Thank yooou Quote:
Originally Posted by bookwormfairy Thank yooou new reader Hope yoou enjoy this chapter Quote:
Originally Posted by Lunax246 Love, love, love, love this
I don't feel like I can trust anyone help :o
I don't trust Alice I don't trust Draco I hate Ron I hate/don't trust everyone
But stillll............
PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm serious, pams
Nat xx OHH! Yay! New readers, THREE of them I don't trust any of them as well Thank yooou <3 Chapter Eight: The Plan Alice picked up the blush staring into the mirror as she applied it to her cheeks, no one was with her, she was alone in the bath room at the time, until Draco had appeared out of nowhere, he walked up to Alice and span her around so she was facing him, he grabbed her by the neck and pressed his lips up against his, Alice smiled and put her arms around him.
"Hey babe" Draco said moving backwards looking into her eyes.
"Hey Draco, any news from the dark lord?" Alice replied looking back at the mirror still putting make up on.
"He has a new plan, he saw Ron kiss you, and he got a plan from that, here" He paused passing her some lipstick, 'Who ever you kiss with this on will die, at the ball you will kiss Ron, and while everyone is making sure he is alright, thats when the dark lord will appear and kill Harry"
"Sounds... great" Alice said with a fake smile on her face.
"Alice, why are you a death eater? Its just not like you, why are you doing this?" Draco said taking her by the hand.
"Fear, besides, I am me so of course this is like me" Alice said looking out to the window, "Draco I'm..."
"Alice! Lets go, we don't want to be late do we?" Hermione called out knocking on the bathroom door.
"I better go, remember to put the lipstick on, you can tell me later" Draco said giving her cheek a kiss and then he was gone, and just in time.
Alice applied the lipstick quickly with a shaky hand, then yelled out, "Come in Hermione" Alice smiled and added when she saw Hermione, "Lets go"
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X-treme Horcrux Slayer!Nogtail
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Fifth Year | she dreamed of para-para-pardise ♥ ily MY Sara x Sams twinny x Kake/Anastopher/Chalie
PAMS loved this story heaps, but I also hate Alice, she can not kill Ron! NO!
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| SS100 Triumphant Nogtail
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Seventh Year x4
| Feeling so fly like a D-Criss| Jess's NOM | GERONIMO | Part Hobbit | Victimised by Moffat
OMG
NOOOOOOOOO
No offence Jess, but Alice is an inappropriate word according to SS.
Seriously, she's reminding me of people at my school
On another note;
NOT MY BABY RONNIEKINS
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Either way. It's obviously extremely good Jess, and you kinda healed Romione AND DRACO OHMYGOSH. JUST LUFF EVERYWHERE *spreads luff all over thread* KEEP IT UP JESS
PAMS
Luff Sammy xx
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Hufflepuff Fourth Year | Little Fox | ½ of Lauralie | Ravenclaw...?? *overthinks* | #HouseNATARINA
What the heck!!!!!! What sort of freaky lipstick is that???? Wow!! Update nowww pleaasseee *puppy dog eyes*
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new reader and love it but NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
don't kill ron he must live and Alice must be good
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