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PureBlood64 · 08-09-2010, 08:50 PM

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Originally Posted by luna_severus_26

Wow, this is cool!! PAMS!!

Thanks

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Originally Posted by Morag

I really love your story! Did Draco die? I love how harry has a sister! It's great!
PAMS!
Soph x

You will have to wait and find out!

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Originally Posted by MissWeasley

A good job so far Jessica!

I do believe, with all you have going on, that you will have a real live soap opera soon! So... Harry has a new sister he knows nothing about... Hermione and Ron are about to be killed... Draco is with the Dark Lord... and dare I say it... Draco loves Alice?

I look forward to you next chapter. Keep it up!
Katie

Yes Draco did love Alice at Hogwarts but now may I say he is not sure as he has always not liked potter (Alice's Brother)

Chapter Two: Draco, Good or Bad?

"Draco? Speak to me!” Alice Said as more and more tears came to her eyes as she looked at Draco’s body

“He’s dead” Hermione Said, even Hermione started to cry

“Alice, I think we need to talk” Harry Said looking at Alice.

Alice could not belive what she had seen, the meanest boy in slytherin, sacrificing himself for a sibling of Harrys ‘This Cant be true, I’m dreaming’ thought Alice “You! You did this how could you!?” Alice said standing pointing at Voldemort

“Its My job” smirked Voldemort “Come Death Eaters, there has been enough deaths for tonight, I shall return Alice”

“Come Narcisses” Said Luciuse, Narcisses was crying the most as he was his son and she thought that she would never have to say goodbye for good, never, but she had to. All the death eaters left with Voldemort, some crying some laughing, Voldemort was one of the many that were laughing, Left there in the Dark Forest was Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley and Alice Potter.

“Uhhh... What Happend?” Draco Said very weakly

“DRACO! You’re alive! But how?” Asked Alice whipping away the tears on her cheak,

Everyones face brightened up as they saw Draco alive. “I don’t know” Draco paused “Alice, are you alright?”

“I’m fine, it’s you that we should be worrying about!” Explained Alice.

Draco Stood up and at the same time so did Alice and once she stood there straight she said “Why did you do that for me?”

”People do crazy things when there in love” Said Draco looking out to the sky

“It wont be long till I do something crazy then” Alice started to blush, she reached out her hand and held Dracos hand tightly

“Step back Alice!” Said Harry Talking His wand out and pointing it at Draco

“What are you doing Harry?” Alice said surprised

“Don’t you remember? He’s a Death Eater, Its probably a trick, thats why he survived!” Said Ron

“Guys, I’m the one who gets called You Know What by him and I trust him why cant you?, you should be happy Harry, he saved your sisters life!” said Hermione

“How do we know if she IS my sister though?” Harry said

“Why Are you going against everyone? Next your gonna say I’m not a Muggle Born!” Hermione Said

“You ARE a Muggle Born Though!” said Harry “Look, I’m just shocked to hear that I have a sister and I would like to know more about this, Alice can I please talk to you”

”Okay, but not here, let’s Go somewhere else” said Alice. Everyone joined hands and they disparted and appeared at once again another forest.

08-09-2010, 08:50 PM	#5 (permalink)
PureBlood64 X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Nogtail Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Johto {GMT +10} Posts: 4,809 Hogwarts RPG Name: Katelyn Hermione Star Fifth Year	Alice - Sa13+ Chapter Two she dreamed of para-para-pardise ♥ ily MY Sara x Sams twinny x Kake/Anastopher/Chalie Quote: Originally Posted by luna_severus_26 Wow, this is cool!! PAMS!! Thanks Quote: Originally Posted by Morag I really love your story! Did Draco die? I love how harry has a sister! It's great! PAMS! Soph x You will have to wait and find out! Quote: Originally Posted by MissWeasley A good job so far Jessica! I do believe, with all you have going on, that you will have a real live soap opera soon! So... Harry has a new sister he knows nothing about... Hermione and Ron are about to be killed... Draco is with the Dark Lord... and dare I say it... Draco loves Alice? I look forward to you next chapter. Keep it up! Katie Yes Draco did love Alice at Hogwarts but now may I say he is not sure as he has always not liked potter (Alice's Brother) Chapter Two: Draco, Good or Bad? "Draco? Speak to me!” Alice Said as more and more tears came to her eyes as she looked at Draco’s body “He’s dead” Hermione Said, even Hermione started to cry “Alice, I think we need to talk” Harry Said looking at Alice. Alice could not belive what she had seen, the meanest boy in slytherin, sacrificing himself for a sibling of Harrys ‘This Cant be true, I’m dreaming’ thought Alice “You! You did this how could you!?” Alice said standing pointing at Voldemort “Its My job” smirked Voldemort “Come Death Eaters, there has been enough deaths for tonight, I shall return Alice” “Come Narcisses” Said Luciuse, Narcisses was crying the most as he was his son and she thought that she would never have to say goodbye for good, never, but she had to. All the death eaters left with Voldemort, some crying some laughing, Voldemort was one of the many that were laughing, Left there in the Dark Forest was Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley and Alice Potter. “Uhhh... What Happend?” Draco Said very weakly “DRACO! You’re alive! But how?” Asked Alice whipping away the tears on her cheak, Everyones face brightened up as they saw Draco alive. “I don’t know” Draco paused “Alice, are you alright?” “I’m fine, it’s you that we should be worrying about!” Explained Alice. Draco Stood up and at the same time so did Alice and once she stood there straight she said “Why did you do that for me?” ”People do crazy things when there in love” Said Draco looking out to the sky “It wont be long till I do something crazy then” Alice started to blush, she reached out her hand and held Dracos hand tightly “Step back Alice!” Said Harry Talking His wand out and pointing it at Draco “What are you doing Harry?” Alice said surprised “Don’t you remember? He’s a Death Eater, Its probably a trick, thats why he survived!” Said Ron “Guys, I’m the one who gets called You Know What by him and I trust him why cant you?, you should be happy Harry, he saved your sisters life!” said Hermione “How do we know if she IS my sister though?” Harry said “Why Are you going against everyone? Next your gonna say I’m not a Muggle Born!” Hermione Said “You ARE a Muggle Born Though!” said Harry “Look, I’m just shocked to hear that I have a sister and I would like to know more about this, Alice can I please talk to you” ”Okay, but not here, let’s Go somewhere else” said Alice. Everyone joined hands and they disparted and appeared at once again another forest. Last edited by PureBlood64; 03-07-2011 at 11:26 PM.