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“You’re Snape’s kid?” asked Clementine, disgruntled enough at this new development, not to mention the fact that she was aching with hunger.
Loved the aching with hunger part.
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“That couldn’t have been Severus’s son. It’s impossible. Snape was killed in 1997. His son would be too old for Hogwarts. He can’t have been the only Snape in the world, can he?”
“I don’t know,” said Clementine, stumped. “He did look awfully like him. It doesn’t make sense, but how could he resemble the Snape we’ve heard about so much?”
Yeah, I was thinking along those lines also. Your doing very good with your story. I like how you give your characters personality and drop little bits of information about them. Keep up the good work!