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Old 02-24-2011, 06:21 AM   #176 (permalink)
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Hello Emily. So very sad. Maybe she could find a cure in one of those books Dumbledore gave her long ago. Harry could question Draco as to the kinds of things Lucius had around the house in his secret place when he was growing up. It might give them some kind of idea of what Lucius could come up with. And maybe Narcissa could help them in exchange for protection from Lucius. I mean I imagine he isn't happy with her leaving him. Anyway,sorry for stepping in on your ff. It's just so sad for Emily, and I would be right there helping if I could.
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Hello Emily. So very sad. Maybe she could find a cure in one of those books Dumbledore gave her long ago. Harry could question Draco as to the kinds of things Lucius had around the house in his secret place when he was growing up. It might give them some kind of idea of what Lucius could come up with. And maybe Narcissa could help them in exchange for protection from Lucius. I mean I imagine he isn't happy with her leaving him. Anyway,sorry for stepping in on your ff. It's just so sad for Emily, and I would be right there helping if I could.
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Sowwy I did warn you guys that if I wrote a sequel, you wouldn't like the ending


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Ruthie had a Healer’s appointment coming up for a check up on the baby. All of the plans were made. Ruthie and Scorpius would be escorted by Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, George, Draco, Astoria, and Teddy. It was a massive guard, but they didn’t want to take any chances. They left the house quickly, using Ministry cars.

When they arrived at St. Mungo’s, half of the guard stayed outside to keep watch while the other half went into the cramped room to stay with the targeted couple. Lucius was already ready, being sneaky. He used Polyjuice Potion again, acting as the Healer this time, having killed the one he impersonated. The witch was small, petite, with long brown hair that was pulled up into a simple pony tail. Her bright blue eyes were striking as she looked over Ruthie and the machinery they had set up. Of course, Lucius was making it all up as he went. But when he went in to take some blood from Ruthie, he gripped her arm tightly and Apparated them out of there.

Everything was chaos. Scorpius was yelling, the others shouting. No one knew what was going on before it was too late. “Lucius,” George growled as his fists clenched up.

Ruthie stumbled in the cave, having no idea what was happening. Before she could pull her wand out, she was surrounded by many cloaked figures—Death Eaters. A rope snake around her wrists and ankles as she cried out.

“Why are you doing this?” she demanded. Tears had already started pouring down her cheeks as what she thought was her Healer slowly started forming into her grandfather-in-law. She gasped as she stared around the group. She recognized nobody but her grandfather.

“You have dirtied up my family name; I’m not too happy with you,” Lucius purred as he pointed his wand at her throat. She looked up into his gleaming eyes, her jaw set.

Meanwhile, back with the others, they had left to go back to Muriel’s. They told the others everything. Emily started sitting up, pulling her wand out as she did.

“Emily, you shouldn’t go…” George started saying as he tried to push her back down. She was already panting from the energy it took for her to even stand. Her condition had gotten much worse in the last few hours.

“If you think I’m going to sit here while my daughter is tortured, you are sadly mistaken,” she said with a little effort.

“Emily, you are in no condition to fight. You can hardly stand!” George argued.

“There’s no time for this, George! I know how to find her!” Emily huffed as she started moving toward her dresser. The others were in the hall, some inside their room, watching cautiously.

“H-how?” George stuttered, taken off guard.

“Dumbledore gave me this for my own mission. Ron has one too,” she whispered as she fumbled in her drawer until her hand stretched around her Deluminator.

“You know how it actually works?” Ron asked incredulously from the doorway. Emily nodded patiently.

“He ex-explained it to me in our meetings,” she said as she closed her eyes tightly, fighting the pain. George reached out to touch her sweaty face. She shook him off, opening her eyes.

“A few of us should go and then they can send word to the rest of where to go,” Harry said as he stepped forward. Hermione and Ron mirrored him, so used to going into battle. Emily nodded as she flicked the Deluminator. A small ball of light was released and moved in front of her. She stepped into it, letting it fill her up. She nodded to the others as they all gathered round, holding hands.

And then they Apparated, landing right outside of a small cave. The cave was very familiar to Harry, having come here once before with Dumbledore. Emily stumbled, panting hard and George caught her while Hermione sent a Patronus back to the others. Scorpius, Ron, and Harry were already moving to the mouth of the cave. George supported Emily as they moved forward, Hermione right behind them. And then they stopped in deadly silence. Ruthie was tied up and gagged, blood coming from her abdomen and neck. Her eyes went round as she saw them all. Lucius was standing up against the side of the cave, his wand in his hand lazily.

“Well, well, well, how nice of you to join us, Potter,” Lucius said quietly as he pushed off from the wall. Scorpius moved toward Ruthie but Lucius held his wand up and Ruthie whimpered.

“Why are you doing this?” Scorpius shouted at him.

“Because of the decisions you made,” Lucius retorted. “So, you’re my grandson. You’re a disgrace,” Lucius growled. Scorpius tensed, his wand arm twitching. Lucius’ eyes raked over them all, falling on Emily with a twisted smile. George stiffened as Emily straightened up, no longer using George as her crutch.

“Well, I am surprised to see you here,” he said, motioning toward Emily. “I thought you might be a little too—ah—ill to come,” he whispered.

“Did you do this to her?” George snarled. Emily clutched his arm tightly, warning him.

“You’re the one who wasn’t paying attention at Rosmerta’s,” Lucius said in a teasing tone.

George was shaking in anger and Emily was suddenly shaking in pain. She was having a hard time standing and knew it was only seconds before she would collapse.

“It’s a handy little curse, that one,” Lucius murmured, watching her. George was now holding her up but she was slipping towards the floor.

“See, it’s supposed to work slowly, very slowly, only showing some signs of an illness. Unless she’s near the person that cursed her, and then it quickens until it becomes too much and she dies. Nifty, isn’t it?” Lucius whispered. George stared down in horror as Emily was slowly dying.

“We have to get you out of here!” George whispered. “Can you Disapparate?”

“Actually none of you can Disapparate…”
Lucius murmured. “I used a little spell.”

Emily was shaking more and more violently and nobody could do anything but watch. Lucius seemed to get bored, so he started firing curses at the trio and Scorpius, the other Death Eaters backing him up. Scorpius was somehow able to get Ruthie free from her restraints and they were all fighting.

“Georgie, I’m cold,” Emily whimpered, shaking madly. George’s tears ran down his face as he tried to hold Emily as gently as he could.

“Shhh, it’s okay. Hang in, Ems. Don’t you dare give up on me! Help is coming!” George said frantically. He glanced around and noticed the Death Eaters zoning in on the others.

“Go, George,” Emily whispered.

“No, I can’t leave you,” he whispered, shaking his head back and forth so hard that Emily thought it might snap off from the rest of his body.

“You have to. You have to…save the kids,” she whispered as the numbness started taking over her arms and legs. “Please, for me,” she whispered.

George stared at her, wide eyed. He bent down and kissed her silky, cold lips with urgency. “I love you, oh so very much,” he whispered as he laid her gently on the cold, stone ground of the cave.

“Don’t worry; Fred will keep me company,” she murmured.

A hint of a smirk outlined his face as he caressed her cheek. “Where you go, I go,” he reminded her. And then he flat out ran over to the kids, who were fighting pretty well. Emily’s eyes slid closed as he walked away from her, never to open again.

Scorpius kept trying to place himself in front of Ruthie, but she wasn’t having it. They shot spell after spell at the Death Eaters. George faintly noticed that Draco and Astoria had arrived on the scene, helping Teddy and the others. George watched in slow motion as Lucius pointed his wand at Ruthie, starting to say the Killing Curse. George ran in front of Ruthie, knocking her out of the way.

Everyone in the room watched as George smiled slightly, able to raise his wand once, pointing it at Lucius. A green spark shot from his wand and Lucius fell to the ground.

“See you soon,” George whispered as he fell to the ground, too, lifeless as the green light surrounded him, suddenly turning to pitch black.


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No! Not Emily and George! How could you!

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At least she's with Remus and Sirius, and Fred...

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Hello Emily. Of course I don't hate you. I still love ya as much as always. The chapter is so very sad. I hope Ruthie and the baby are ok. I'll have to comment later on the rest of the story later. But, as always the chapter was well written. I'll be watching for your next post.
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No! Not Emily and George! How could you!

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At least she's with Remus and Sirius, and Fred...

And Lucius is Dead...

-bursts into tears and runs off, never coming back-
I'm sowwy It's just how the story turned when I was writing it... I didn't necessarily think when I started, "Hey, I'm gonna kill them off!" But, yes, she and George will both be with Remus, Sirius, Fred, James, Lily, Amelia, etc...

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It's quite alright. Umm, she's a made up character from the first story, and this is the sequel to it. Here's the link to the first one: Meet You Under the Moon. And as for getting sick, that was in this post.
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Sitting at the bar in the Three Broomsticks, using a Polyjuice Potion, Lucius noticed a red-haired man ordering a few bottles of Butterbeer and Firewhiskey. He was rambling to Rosmerta about how the tangy Firewhiskey was his wife’s favorite and she had no intentions to share it with anyone else. He laughed carelessly as Lucius discreetly pointed his wand at the bottle and sent a spell into the cold liquid. The man, nor anyone else, noticed anything and Lucius smiled to himself, knowing his master plan was now well on its way. Now was phase two.
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It was bright, maybe too bright for human eyes. George blinked repeatedly as he looked around. He could have sworn he died. It was his intention to die, so he could be with Emily. He looked down at himself and noticed he was wearing clothes he had not put on himself that morning. He was wearing dress robes; it was actually the exact dress robes he had worn to his wedding. His brow furrowed as he wondered how he had gotten into these clothes. And then something white caught his eye. It was more blinding than the sun itself, and very beautiful. His breath caught in his throat as she smiled at him.

Emily was sitting at the stump of a tree, her white wedding gown spread out around her. One of her hands was resting on the bark, over a small etching in the tree. She was eighteen again and more healthy than he had seen her in weeks. She was breathtaking, literally. Her hand slowly moved down the bark, patting the seat next to her. She winked at him and he slowly moved toward her, in a dreamlike fashion.

His smooth face formed into an expression of confusion as he stared at her. She smiled warmly, already knowing his question.

“Yes,” she said simply.

“Yes what?” he whispered, marveling over the beauty of her voice.

“We are dead,” she whispered as she touched the back of his hand softly. He twisted his palm upward and she intertwined their fingers.

“But, where are we?” he whispered.

“In our own Heaven,” she whispered as her other hand caressed the back of his cheek. He looked around himself again and noticed the Black Lake feet away and then it dawned on him that they were under their tree, their initials with the heart around them in between where they were sitting. Emily grinned at him and he slowly returned it.

“I was thinking you’d never wake up,” Emily murmured.

“What do you mean?”

“The cruse…it hit you pretty hard. You blacked out here and I’ve been waiting on you to wake up all night,” she whispered.

“All night?” he repeated. She nodded slowly, watching him.

“The kids? The others! Are they okay? What happened?” George said frantically, his heart suddenly hammering in his chest.

“They’re fine… Scorpius was injured, but healing. Ruthie…” Emily whispered. She heard George gasp and quickly shook her head. “Ruthie lost the baby; she took it pretty hard, but she’s fine now,” Emily whispered. George buried his head in his hands for many minutes, taking it all in.

“What do you mean by she’s fine now?” he asked in confusion.

“Time moves differently here than it does there, slower. Though it’s only been a night here, it’s been weeks there,” Emily said quietly.

“Weeks?” he repeated.

“Yeah, you missed when they heard our will,” Emily whispered.

“How are they?” he asked, referring to all of their kids.

“Amelia and Sirius… They keep on a brave face for the kids, but almost every night, they lose it and cry. I’m glad Kendall and Allison are there for support. At first, Ruthie wouldn’t even get out of bed. The death of us and then losing the baby took quite a toll on her. But Scorpius is helping her… And Remus and Fred… They’re not taking it so great. But at least they understand what’s going on. Emma and Geoffrey still don’t understand it, even though they went to the funeral. They’re still waiting for us to come wake them up in the morning with breakfast ready on the table.” Emily had a tear running down her cheek at the memories of how hard it was to even watch their pain. George wiped it away gently.

“I’m sure, with a little time, everything will be fine. They will be fine.” Emily nodded vaguely.

“They’re better today,” she whispered. “Come look.” Emily led him over to the edge of the Black Lake. George stared at it for a moment before it shimmered and then transformed into an image. It was like watching a movie, just blurred at the edges.

Ruthie and Scorpius were helping Teddy and Vic move into Emily’s old childhood home, since it was left to him in her will. Emma and Geoffrey appeared in the doorway, both smiling with kites in their hands.

Now will you take us kite flying?” Geoffrey begged, pouting his lip at Ruthie. She sighed and smiled, tousling his hair.

“Sure, buddy, go get your shoes on and we’ll go,” she smiled. Emma and Geoffrey ran off to find their shoes.

“Do you know what Amelia and Sirius have decided yet?” Teddy murmured as he watched Ruthie.

“Yeah, Amelia and Kendall are moving back into her old room. Sirius and Allison bought the house right across from them. They’re moving in with little Ainslie this weekend,” Ruthie murmured.

“So, they didn’t want to take Uncle Harry, Aunt Ginny, Uncle Ron, and Aunt Hermione up on their offer?” Victoire asked softly. Ruthie was already shaking her head.

“We don’t want to break my family apart. I know that Uncle Harry was going to take Emma and Geoffrey and Uncle Ron was going to take Fred and Remus, but we decided, as a family, that it would be better to keep them all together. It’s for the best,” Ruthie murmured as she fidgeted uncomfortably.

“And you guys?” Teddy whispered.

Ruthie glanced at Scorpius and he nodded. “They need me right now… We’re going to move back into my room and help out with the little ones for a while,” Ruthie said with a sigh.

“Ruth, I’m sure Amelia and Sirius could handle it… Besides, I thought you already had a house picked out?”

“We do, and it will still be there when it’s time,” Scorpius murmured as he moved over to Ruthie’s side, hugging her. Teddy just nodded slightly as the kids bounded back in the room.

“We’re ready!” they announced together. Ruthie chuckled as she took each of their hands. She and Scorpius Apparated them to the beach and they started flying their kites.

“See, everything will be fine,” Emily murmured after a while.

George scooted closer to her, taking her hand in his. It was then that he realized that they really would be together Forever and Always, forever frozen at eighteen.

“What?” she whispered.

Ever so slowly, George moved his hand in her hair, his eyes never moving from hers. He cupped her face in his other hand and she grinned at him. They fell back against the russet earth, tangled together. He started kissing her lips, biting her lower lip. Her hands slid through his hair, no longer showing signs of grey in areas.

After they had settled down, Emily pulled George up off the ground. He pulled her into a hug, his hands exploring her spine.

“Come on,” she whispered as she let go of him, taking his hand in hers. “There’s something I want to show you,” she said with a large grin.

George smiled back. He was up for anything, as long as it was with her. She tugged him over to the path to the school. Their walk seemed dreamlike still, as if it weren’t real. But he was already used to it. They were at the doors of Hogwarts in no time at all, because there really was no time. George faintly noticed that their clothes had changed into something more comfortable. Emily pushed open the door and led George to one of the secret entrances into Hogsmeade. George gasped loudly as he realized who was leaning up against the wall, Marauder’s Map in hand. The teenager glanced up, grinning from ear to ear.

George ran forward, hugging his twin tightly. Fred snickered, but hugged George the same. Emily caught his eye and Fred motioned for her to join them. She went to the side, her arms slinking around their shoulders.

“Just like old times,” she murmured.

“Except that we’re dead,” Fred laughed. Emily and George chuckled along with him.

“Come on, we’re going to be late,” Emily said as she pulled away. “We only came to get you,” she said as she looked at Fred. George looked at her in confusion for a moment before she took both of their hands and led them back outside to the lake.

“Late for what?” George finally asked.

Fred laughed silently beside them. “You’ll see,” Emily murmured as she pecked him on the cheek.

“Are we late for the party?” someone asked in amusement from behind them. George turned around quickly, his eyes raking over the small group of people.


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I don't think it's corny!! I liked it a lot! That was really cute! Exept I kinda reared up at the one part where emily explains how the kids are! And YAY! I was right! He Los the baby! Exept actually it's not a yay situation.. Thanks so much for the links! I am no longer confused!
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YAY! Fred's back!

Ooo! What small group of people?

(I think i have a shrewd suspicion, it's my famous intuition talking again...)

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Hello Emily. You of course gave us another well written chapter. It was sweet and glamorous George getting to be with his Emily. And it's good to see everyone who died in the war. I'm just sad that George gave up his life and obligations to his other children and grandchildren, so he could be with Emily. And it was very sad that Ruthie and Scorpius lost their baby. I'm anxious to see how you end this. I can always hope for George to wake up from some kind of sleep he was in and dreaming all of it. I'll be watching.
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I don't completely agree with you. It's not like if Lucius hadn't killed him, he would have offed himself just to be with her. He ran in front of the killing curse to save his daughter. If he hadn't ran if front of it, Ruthie would have died, I can guarantee you that.
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“Are we late for the party?” someone asked in amusement from behind them. George turned around quickly, his eyes raking over the small group of people.

“Remus?” he asked incredulously. Remus grinned at him as Tonks peered around his shoulder.

“Long time, no see, son,” Remus said as he gave George a hug. Emily grinned as George was passed from Remus to Tonks, Sirius, Amelia, James, and Lily.

Emily pulled him back to her so that she could mold into his side, her body fitting perfectly against his.

“So, we’re dead… But living…up here? How does that work? Do we age? Or stay frozen at the current age? How come we’re back at eighteen? Do we sleep? Where do we sleep if we do? Why Hogwarts? Can we go to other places, like the Joke Shop and home? Can we see others, like Moody? How does this work?” George asked question after question as he glanced around at them all, his eyes falling and staying on Emily.

“All in good time, love,” she whispered in his ear, her teeth lingering on his ear lobe. It was then that he realized he no longer had a hole in the side of his head. He groped the side of his head for a moment before grinning down at her. He kissed Emily’s lips slowly as his fingers dug into her back.

Emily responded with as much passion as him, longing for his touch everywhere. Everyone around them started coughing, Fred sniggering.

“That’s no way to formerly meet your Mother-in-Law, George,” Fred snickered. George immediately stopped, his ears flaming a brilliant red. Emily kissed his cheek, refusing to let go of him quite yet. Her arms stayed around his waist, one going as far as to rest in his back pocket. He looked at the ground, embarrassed. He wasn’t really sure what had come over him; one minute he was trying to wrap his head around everything and the answers he wanted, the next moment she was biting his ear and he wanted her to be biting him everywhere.

Sirius stepped forward, coughing slightly and George looked up reluctantly, but Sirius was just grinning at him. “So, I guess it’s time you meet my wife,” Sirius murmured as a petite woman with hair as red as Emily’s stepped forward and wound her own arms around Sirius. George glanced down at Emily, who was smiling widely at her parents. She was completely happy; happier than he’d seen her in a while.

“Georgie, I’d like you to meet my Mum,” Emily whispered. Amelia winked at her as she came forward and hugged the both of them. Emily had met her the first time she had arrived here and spent as much time as she could trying to talk to her. But even then, she had been distracted by the fact that George wasn’t waking up. And now as she looked around at them all, she couldn’t be happier. Well, she chided herself into saying that if the rest of her family, including her kids, were here, it would be perfect. But, they would join her later, hopefully much later.

“So, can we watch little Fred and Remus?” Remus asked suddenly after Amelia moved back to Sirius’ side.

“What?” George asked.

“You picked last time, Moony!” James piped up, a small Snitch in his hand. “I think we should watch James,” he suggested. Lily rolled her eyes.

“I agree with Remus,” Fred said with a grin. Remus pounded his fist with Fred’s.

“I think we should watch Sirius,” Sirius added.

“I was thinking Lily and Rose,” Lily suggested. Emily rolled her eyes as they all requested to watch those that were named after them.

“I think we should let George decide,” Emily said, raising her eyebrows in a dare to contradict her.

“What are you guys talking about?” George finally asked.

“We can ‘watch over’ anyone… Who do you want to see?” she whispered in his ear, pulling him around so that they were facing each other.

“Ruthie, I want to make sure she’s okay,” he whispered. Emily nodded as the Lake shimmered behind them. Everyone gathered around.

“Oh look, they’re all together,” Remus put in, no doubt his eyes on Remus Jr.

“You said time moves differently here, how will we know the time there?” George whispered into Emily’s hair.

“It’s Christmas,” Emily murmured. “Look, there’s your mum and dad.” George looked to where she pointed and gasped. There were his parents, each with smiles on their faces as the kids opened their Weasley jumpers. George wrapped his arms around Emily’s waist from behind, his chin resting on her shoulder, as they watched their family.

“Is…is Ruthie holding her stomach? Almost as if she were—” Emily murmured.

“Pregnant!” Ruthie squealed at the table. Scorpius wrapped an arm around her shoulder, grinning happily.

Everyone was suddenly shouting their congratulations and moving over to hug the happy couple. They were literally beaming with euphoria as Draco and Astoria hugged them tightly, followed by Narcissa and Molly.

“Your parents would be proud,” Draco murmured in Ruthie’s ear. “I know they’re watching over you.”

“I know,”
Ruthie whispered. She grasped the small necklace around her neck, the heart curling into her skin.

“So, do you two like the new house?” Teddy grinned.

Ruthie blushed slightly, nodding. “Very much,” she said as she stared lovingly at her husband. He winked at her and she blushed darker.

“Alright, everyone, dig in,” Molly announced as she sat down beside Arthur at the end of the table.

“Everything looks delicious,” Ron said as he stuffed some ham into his mouth. Everyone started laughing. Some things never changed.

*

Ruthie stared up at the night sky with a tiny smile on her face. She was leaning against the fence in the backyard of the Burrow, her back to the house. Her smile grew as somebody’s arms wound themselves around her waist, their chin sitting on her shoulder.

“Hey,” Scorpius murmured into her hair as he nuzzled her neck with the tip of his nose.

“Mm,” she replied as she took a deep breath, her eyes not straying from the brightest star, one of the same name as her Grandfather and older brother.

“Whatchya thinking about?” he mumbled as he placed a lingering kiss against the soft skin below her ear. She sighed in content, closing her eyes as she memorized this moment with her husband.

“Mum and Dad,” she whispered. He nodded lightly before brushing her silky black hair off of her shoulder and kissing the newly exposed, pale flesh.

“They’re looking out for us,” he whispered as a fact, rather than opinion.

“I know,” she breathed back.

She returned her gaze back to the stars as her fingers laced with his around her not quite yet protruding belly.

Star light, star bright, the first star I see tonight; I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I wish tonight… I wish that my family stay healthy and happy, and that my parents continue to bless and watch over us.
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Firstly,No, I knew better than to make that a theory. It was only a small hope on my part. Anyway, it's nice to see everyone happy. Your story was well written and you have much to be thankful for. I hope you continue with your writing. Do you have any other plans for a new story? Keep up with the great writing you're doing with your other ff's your writing and co writing.
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Emily, I haven't yet read the last post, but I think you should know that I now hate maths more than ever, cause thats what I've been doing all day eveyday, and making me miss these wonderful posts. I've sat for the last 45 minuets and balled my eyes out You are a wonderful writer. Everything has been so perfect. I'm so sad about Emily and George though. I feel like now It is the end of an era. I'm so happy for Ruthie and Draco. Thanks to you they are a match made in heaven.
Along with maths and my maths teacher, I now add Lucious to my list of people I hate, and I don't just hate people or things. They have to make me really really really mad. So yeah, Lucious mate, soz bt a canny go ye at the mo!
And now I'm going to read your final post... then catch up with 3B...

Ok so now I read the last post. I love the whole heaven thing. Its just like I imagine! I hope that its just like that when I go. You ended it perfectly! I'm so happy with the way everything turned out. Thank you for giving us this story Emily. I hope we can get more stories from you soon! I'm sad too though cause its all done. Do you think you'll have a sequal to the sequal?
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