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Old 03-30-2011, 03:17 PM   #276 (permalink)
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What a horrible father! Christelle has a better presence than to visit her parents for money! Grrr those types of people frustrate me!

Great post Ems Her mum doesn't seem like the worst eprson ever but she semms very nervous.

Is Randy a special person? An ex perhaps? A collegaue of her dads??

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Ooo... Nice!
I think Janet has probably missed her daughter and now wants her back. But I also think John is a bit of a bad character!
I havn't warmed to him. Oh and is Randy anyone in particular or just a randomer?
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“I think I might just stay for dinner after all,” Randy stated as he continued smirking at Christelle. Charlie shifted uncomfortably for a moment, knowing there was something wrong with his wife.

“Mother, Father, this is my husband, Charlie, his brother Bill, and their parents, Molly and Arthur Weasley,” Christelle stated, waving to the owners of the names in the process.

“I don’t really care,” John stated as he sat beside his wife. Christelle’s eyes flickered dangerously to the man as Janet cleared her throat.

“Be nice, dear, they’re our guests,” Janet reminded him as she sent a glance pointedly to Randy and then back to her husband. John nodded stiffly and Janet turned her attention back to her daughter and son-in-law.

“How long have you been married?” she asked kindly and Christelle narrowed her eyes at the woman. Something was off about her…

Maybe she has changed.

“Five years,” Charlie answered automatically with a soft smile.

Janet’s eyebrows shot up as she smiled warmly at the couple. “Any kids?”

Christelle narrowed her eyes as she answered. “One, her name is Abigail.” She had made sure the others knew not to tell about the triplets; she didn’t want them to know a lot about her and her family. And even more now that Randy was there.

“That’s nice,” Janet said quietly.

“You have a lovely home,” Molly said with a smile and Janet nodded while John looked at her disapprovingly.

“You’ll stay for dinner?” Janet asked hopefully. Christelle chewed on her bottom lip as she glanced at the others. Molly nodded reassuringly as Charlie smiled. Arthur seemed in his own little world as he looked around at all of the Muggle devices and Bill seemed impassive.

“Sure, if it’s no trouble,” she replied quietly.

“I’ll let the cook know to add six more to the menu,” Janet said as she walked away from the room.

“It would have been nice to have some notice. Maybe a call or something?” John said in irritation.

“It wasn’t planned; we just happened to be in the neighborhood and stopped by,” Christelle lied.

“I hope you were planning on visiting me, Christy,” Randy said with a wink. Charlie went rigid beside her as Christelle flinched.

“I wasn’t planning on it,” Christelle whispered as she deliberately stared at the carpet. She never wanted to see that man again. Not after what he did to her all of those years.

“You didn’t want to give an old man a visit? Take a trip down memory lane?” he asked as his eyes wandered up and down her body. Charlie pulled her closer into his side as he wrapped an arm around her shoulder. He didn’t like the vibe he was getting from this guy at all.

“No,” Christelle said shortly… “You know, I just remembered that we had already made plans tonight for dinner, but maybe some other time. Let me go let Mother know we won’t be staying. Be right back,” Christelle declared as she swept from the room and made her way to the kitchen. She could feel two sets of eyes on her; one of the man she loved and the other of the man she loathed.

“So sorry, Mother, but I just remembered that we had plans tonight, so we won’t be able to stay,” Christelle said nervously. She wished Charlie was with her right now, so she wouldn’t be alone.

“Oh, you’re not staying?” Janet asked with a frown. Christelle shook her head silently and Janet glanced around quickly before walking up to her daughter and giving her an unexpected hug.

“Help me,” she whispered urgently.

Christelle’s breathing quickened as she pulled away.

“What do you mean?” Christelle whispered back.

“He won’t let me leave. He won’t let me do anything anymore,” Janet whispered urgently as she glanced around. “I’m so sorry for everything we put you through. I didn’t have a choice in the matter,” she said quietly.

Christelle’s gaze hardened at those words. “You had every choice,” she said harshly before she spun around and stomped through the house.

“We’re leaving. Let’s go,” Christelle announced with her arms crossed over her chest. Charlie frowned as he stared at her furious expression. They all stood, except for John, making their way towards the door. Christelle was the last one out and before she stepped over the threshold, Randy grabbed her wrist, spinning her around to look at him.

“Don’t be a stranger, Christy,” he purred. Christelle stared at him in horror before Charlie forced the man to let go.

“Don’t ever touch me again,” Christelle whispered vehemently. Charlie pushed him back into the house and slammed the door, too angry for words. He didn’t know exactly what was going on, but he knew it wasn’t anything good.

“Chris?” he murmured as he wrapped her in his arms.

“Let’s get to the Apparition point and leave. What was I thinking, wanting to come back here?” she muttered to herself. Charlie and Bill led her away from the property and to the Apparition point, Molly and Arthur following in concern.


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Hello Emily. Awe poor poor Christelle! What a great jerk Randy is and John is just as bad. I wonder about Janet though. While, yes, she did have a choice in the horrid things her daughter had to endure, some people aren't strong enough to take the right choices, even though those choices are bad ones. They tend to think that the child or children are strong, and they'll be ok when they grow up and understand the situation. So sad. great writing Emily. I'll be watching for your nest.
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Randy is a creep!

Things I now know:
You aren't going to give anything away about Randy....*grr* (quite a pathetic growl I know but I had to show my unhappiness)

Great post, I really feel for Janet but Christie could be right. She may have had a choice but you never know what John could have done. He seems like a right weirdo!

I didn't like that Janet was just like 'that's nice' at the mention of Abigail. I would be thrilled if I found out I had a grandaughter but I guess John has her on a leash, a tight one.

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Hello Emily. Awe poor poor Christelle! What a great jerk Randy is and John is just as bad. I wonder about Janet though. While, yes, she did have a choice in the horrid things her daughter had to endure, some people aren't strong enough to take the right choices, even though those choices are bad ones. They tend to think that the child or children are strong, and they'll be ok when they grow up and understand the situation. So sad.
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Ooo..I thought I had commented...
Anyway... There is more to this Randy...I don't like his vibes. I think he was bad to her at one point.
I think if Chris doen't help her mum, then something really bad will happen to her. I think she will love her little granddaughter too!
Plus I hate John! Will we find out more on the inside story with her parents???
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“Mumma! Daddy!” They were greeted by the peeling laughter of their daughter as soon as they walked through the door. She hopped over to them with a bright smile as she grabbed their hands and tugged them towards the sitting room, where George and Angelina were. Angelina was lying on the couch, her hand over stomach as she watched them enter. George was grinning from the floor, cards littering the burgundy carpet.

“How’d it go?” Angelina asked with burning curiosity.

“Not well,” Christelle muttered bluntly. Abigail frowned at her temporarily before Christelle schooled her expressions and sent her daughter a smile.

“Mummy, Uncle George said there’s a fair this weekend!” Abigail said in excitement, basically jumping up and down as she sat on the floor. “And he said there would be a Ferris Wheel and cotton candy! Mummy, can we please go?” she asked with her lip jutting out and her eyes large.

Christelle turned to glare at George as he cringed away from her. He laughed nervously as he tried to exit the room in one piece. Charlie stood in the doorway with his arms crossed, effectively stopping George from running.

“Look, sweetie, right now, I think it best if we don’t go out,” Christelle said as sweetly as she could to Abigail.

“But-!” Abigail started.

“No buts, baby. There will be other fairs, and we can go to one of those. But it’s important right now for us to stay put,” Christelle said with sad eyes as she cupped her daughter’s face. Abigail’s chin quivered as tears built up in her eyes.

“But Uncle George said we could!” she protested as a tear slid down her cheek.

“Well, Uncle George, how about you explain it to her,” Charlie growled at him. George flinched, backing away from his big brother. He sighed as he sat on the ground and Abigail went to sit in his lap, wrapping her arms around his neck.

“Please tell them,” she whispered as tears continued to fall. George wiped at her tears with his thumb before he rubbed her back in a calming motion.

“I’m sorry, sweetie, I can’t do that,” he whispered. She whimpered slightly and he hugged her closer to him. “I wasn’t thinking, sweetie, I am so sorry. But I promise you that when everything is better and there’s another fair, I will take you myself,” George promised.

“Pinky promise?” she whispered hopefully as she held her pinky up in front of him.

“Pinky promise,” he whispered back as he wrapped his pinky around hers and kissed her forehead.

*

“I give her two more minutes,” Charlie whispered in Christelle’s ear as he rubbed her belly and watched Abigail on the floor with her toys.

“No way, her head is doing that bob thing when she’s about to fall asleep where she is. Less than one minute,” Christelle wagered.

“Shall we make this into a bet?” Charlie smirked.

“Gladly. Winner doesn’t have to clean and they get a massage every night for a month,” Christelle said hopefully. She heard Charlie’s chuckled assent. They watched avidly as Abigail’s head continued to bob, her eyes half closed. Christelle had forty more seconds before she lost and she could feel the tension of their bet in her shoulders as she silently begged for Abigail to just fall to the floor, asleep. She didn’t want to clean. And she definitely wanted a massage. She knew she’d need one in the next few months, with triplets on the way. She didn’t even want to imagine how big she was going to become.

“And ten…nine…eight…” Charlie started counting down and Christelle could hear the smile in his voice. But as soon as he got to five, Abigail was down and Charlie sighed in defeat. Christelle turned to grin at him and he pouted.

“You know… We didn’t actually shake on that bet,” Charlie whispered with a grin.

“Oh no, Charles Weasley, you get to clean up after and massage me for the next month,” she said with a huge grin.

Charlie grimaced as he gently pushed her off of him so he could pick up the little girl that was now snoring lightly on the floor. Christelle kissed her cheek when Charlie brought her over to the couch before taking her to her bedroom.

“Now that the little munchkin is asleep, can we talk about what happened?” George asked impatiently from the other couch. Charlie slid back in behind her and started rubbing her shoulders, which made her head loll back against his shoulder.

Christelle glanced at George slightly before her eyes closed to the magnificence of her husband’s hands.

“If we must,” she whispered.


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Silly George, I would have hated to see Abi upset
Haha Charlie! Even without the bet, he would have had to have done that anyway!

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I have to keep this short, cause it's so late and I'd like to comment on Katie's ff also.

I feel very badly for poor little Abigail. George wasn't thinking when he assumed he could take her to the fair. Seems like even if there wasn't evil scary things going on that confined them to the Burrow, he should have talked to Charlie and Christelle first. But, things like that happen all the time. He'll have to do some royal fun for her later, to make up for her disappointment.

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“If we must,” she whispered.

“I really think we must,” Charlie rumbled quietly from behind her.

“What would you like to know?” she murmured hesitantly, though she had a feeling that she already knew his question.

“What happened in the kitchen with Janet?” Molly asked gently.

Christelle let out a shuddering breath and Charlie paused in his kneading to wrap his arms around her waist. She linked their fingers as her teeth dug into her bottom lip sharply.

“You know, I very much enjoy kissing those lips of yours, so let’s not destroy them, ‘kay?” Charlie rumbled as his thumb grazed over her lips, releasing the prisoner in the process.

“She told me to help her,” Christelle muttered.

“What does that mean?” George asked in confusion.

“How am I supposed to know?” Christelle snapped suddenly. “Something about how he doesn’t let her do anything anymore, and that she didn’t have a choice in the matters of what I was put through growing up. It’s a bunch of ********! She had every choice!” Christelle ranted. “I’m going to bed,” she said sourly after a few minutes of silence.

“Oh, no you don’t,” Charlie cooed as his arms tightened around her waist. “We’ll get back to Janet later. I want to know what happened between you and Randy,” Charlie said seriously. Christelle flinched at the name before turning suddenly and burying her head in his chest as tears prickled her eyes. Charlie rubbed soothing circles into her back with one hand while the other caressed her hair.

“Shh, it’s all right; I’m here… Whatever it is, you can tell me,” he murmured soothingly into her ear while he shot his family a ‘help me’ look.

“No, I ca-can’t!” she stuttered. “Please, don’t ask me about…him,” Christelle whimpered.

Charlie stared at his family in shock while he held Christelle tightly. “Tell me what’s going on, baby,” he whispered in her ear soothingly.

She shook her head fervently against his chest. “You’ll get mad… Do something stupid,” she said shakily.

“I promise I won’t get mad at you or do something stupid,” Charlie whispered, and she felt his amused smile against her hair.

“Whose version of stupid?” she asked suspiciously.

“Doesn’t matter; tell me what’s going on,” Charlie said impatiently.

“Well, I didn’t lose my virginity to you, like you think,” she said in barely a breath. Charlie went completely rigid as she clung to him. “But I didn’t lose it by choice,” she finished quietly as more tears slid down her cheeks.

Charlie pulled her back from him slightly and cupped her wet cheeks in his hands. “Why didn’t you ever tell me?”

“It’s not a memory I wish to dwell on, much less remember,” she answered quietly.

“Why couldn’t you have a simple life?” he murmured with a hint of a chuckle.

“I’ve been asking myself the same thing since I was little, Charlie,” she laughed.

“He’ll never touch you again,” Charlie said fiercely and Christelle leaned forward to press her lips to his in a grateful kiss.

“Did he ever get charged and go to Muggle prism?” George asked after a minute of silence.

“It’s prison, and no. Nobody would believe me. And the one person that did was silenced. They deemed that I was young and desperate for attention.” Christelle wiped at her eyes quickly, trying to rid herself of the liquid before they left tear tracks down her face.

“Your mum didn’t seem so bad,” Bill observed quietly from his place by the fire. Christelle locked eyes with him as she bristled.

“That woman is not my ‘mum’,” she bit out and Bill arched a brow at her. Out of all of Charlie’s brothers, she was most definitely closest to Bill, and he had no problem whatsoever with her mood swings.

Okay,” he said dramatically. “Janet Jeffries didn’t seem too bad; better?” he asked with a slight smirk.

Christelle threw him a sneer as her stomach grumbled in tune with her frustration with the redhead. Charlie removed himself from the couch quietly, heading to the kitchen, returning a few minutes later with Christelle’s favorite chips. She sent him a dazzling smile as she popped a chip into her mouth.

“I guess we better stock up the cupboards to feed an army,” George remarked with a snicker.

“Don’t mock her about her eating habits; you know what she did to you when she was pregnant with Abigail,” Charlie reminded him as he resumed massaging Christelle’s back. George quieted down quickly, pretending to find something interesting with the carpet while everyone laughed.

“So, anyways, back to the conversation… Did she seem different to you?” Bill asked, looking at Christelle questioningly.

Christelle stared at her lap as she popped another chip into her mouth, chewing slowly to give her time to think. After she finally swallowed, she met Bill’s eyes from across the room.

“Maybe,” she whispered.


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Thanks so much for that bit Emily. It's been years since I had my favorite chips cause they don't sell them in Florida. Oh well, at least Christelle gets to have hers.
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Is she really not her mother, or does she disown her for not being the loving mother that would be responsible to help her when she needed it? (Which was her entire life.)Great chapter Emily. I'll be watching for the next.
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Hey Emily. Thanks so much for that bit Emily. It's been years since I had my favorite chips cause they don't sell them in Florida. Oh well, at least Christelle gets to have hers.
What are your favorite, out of curiosity?
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Ahh, good question. She is Christelle's mother by blood, but Christelle doesn't see her as her 'mum' because of not being the loving mother and what not, as you've stated. To me, 'mum' and 'dad' are loving names to call your parents, while 'mother' and 'father' are a bit less loving and more formal, almost detached of emotion, if that makes sense? Like how Draco would always call Lucius 'father'. I always saw that as his father never really showed him love growing up, while the Weasleys all call Molly 'mum' because she did. So, Christelle sees Janet and John as her mother and father, not mum and dad... Does that make sense?
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I enjoyed this, I knew Randy was a bad guy! I don't think Janet was too bad but it is Christelle's mother and she knows best.
I loved your explanation about the mum/mother and dad/father thing: I feel the same.
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“C’mon, sweetling, time to get up,” Christelle cooed softly to the sleeping strawberry blonde haired child.

Abigail groaned incoherently and Christelle frowned. Abigail was usually energetic, albeit sometimes grumpy, in the mornings. But for her to stay in bed this late and basically ignore her mother was not a good sign.

“Are you feeling okay, sweetie?” Christelle asked gently as she sat on the edge of the bed.

Abigail rolled over and peeked up at her mother, before coughing. Christelle felt her forehead, pushing her hair out of her eyes. She was burning up. “I’ll be right back,” Christelle said soothingly before she left the room for the kitchen.

Charlie looked up from his coffee with an arched eyebrow. “Where’s Abi?”

“I think she’s sick. She feels like she has a fever and she has a nasty little cough,” Christelle answered as she went for the Pepper-Up Potion.

“Should we take her to see a Healer?” Charlie asked concernedly.

“I dunno. Maybe we’ll see what Mum says first; she does know more about this than I do…”

“I’ll go find her.” Charlie stood swiftly, leaving the kitchen in search of his mother.

When Christelle returned to Abigail’s room, Molly was checking her over with her wand as Charlie sat on the edge of the bed, holding Abigail’s hand as she coughed again.

“I’m not sure; it could just be a bug,” Molly began. “But we might want to take her to a Healer just in case… Her cough doesn’t sound too good, Chris,” Molly finished with a sad smile.

Christelle and Charlie looked at each other, before they both nodded.

“I’ll call Bill and George; you get her ready to go… Mum, will you tell Dad we’re taking a trip?” Charlie asked. Molly and Charlie left the room in different directions as Christelle went to the small wardrobe on the other side of the room. She pulled out a lime green coat and matching tennis shoes and made her way back to the bed. She helped Abigail sit up and slip her arms through the jacket sleeves and then she laced the shoes up on Abigail’s feet.

“Mummy?” Abigail whispered as she looked up with big doe eyes.

“Yes, love?”

“Am I going to Heaven with Uncle Fred?”


Christelle stared, shocked at the little girl before snapping back to reality. She smoothed Abigail’s messy hair down her back before placing a kiss on her forehead.

“No, love, not for a very long time,” Christelle answered softly. “You’re going to be just fine, you’ll see.”

“Promise I’ll be okay?” Abigail whispered. Christelle held her pinky out without being prompted.

“I pinky promise,” she said with a smile and Abigail wrapped her little finger around Christelle’s and nodded determinedly.

“All set; George, Bill, and Dad are waiting in the living room… How’s my little sphinx?” Charlie inquired softly as he knelt down in front of Abigail and checked her forehead for the umpteenth time.

“I’ll be fine,” she whispered with a glance at her mother. Christelle nodded encouragingly at her as Charlie scooped her up in his arms, holding her close to his chest as she wrapped her arms around his neck and legs around his waist.

“I know, sweets, I know,” Charlie cooed as he nodded for Christelle to follow him to the living room.

“Okay, standard procedure; Dad’s going to Apparate first with George, and then Charlie and Abi will come, and then Chris and I will be the last ones to arrive. We’re Apparating right inside of the Hospital entrance, not outside, savvy?” Bill asked. Everybody nodded as George and Arthur disappeared.

Waiting a couple of minutes, with a last kiss to Christelle, Charlie and Abigail vanished, leaving Bill and Christelle alone.

“Wait, Chris,” Bill said as he put his hand on her arm, effectively stopping her from her Apparition. “Have you thought anymore about your m—er, Janet?”

Christelle’s eyes dropped to the floor as she shuffled her feet.

“Yes, why?”

“I was thinking maybe you should call her or something; see what was up with her message to you,” Bill explained.

“I dunno, I’ll think about it—talk to Charlie about it… They’re waiting,” she mumbled, and before he could stop her, she Apparated with a POP.


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Hey Emily. Ah! My heart just jumps out of my chest when one of my children is sick. Her illness doesn't sound normal. A cough usually comes after a runny nose. And never with a fever until after infection sets in. What is wrong with her? Does Bill have an idea? I mean because he asked her last chapter if Janet seemed any different to her. And then instead of hurrying off to the hospital, he stopped her to mention;
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It just didn't seem like an appropriate time to want to talk about Janet.
Nicely done Emily. I'll be watching for your next chapter.
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