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Old 04-19-2008, 06:56 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hellos. This is Alandra here again. I really should be updating my first story, since I finally finished my paper. *Thanks Lord* Even though now I have to finish my speech for my Cotillion. *Sigh*

Anywayz, back on topic, I heard this song and had a vision. I'm still thinking about if I want it to be a whole story or not, I'll let you guys decide. This story/one-shot was based on the song Mouth Shut by: The Veronicas off their album, The Secret Life of The Veronicas .

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Mouth Shut

I kept my mouth shut from the start
I guess I left you in the dark
You thought you knew me but you don't
You say you'll love me but you wont
When you find out who I am


Victoria walked out to the pitch where Sirius was standing, she knew he was disappointed. Even though James didn’t blame him and the two best friends had made up after their fight, she knew that he blamed himself.

She wiped her wet hair out of her face as she walked up to him. He was looking down at the scarlet quaffle in his hands, his jet-black hair sticking to his olive skin as the rain poured down on him. It pained her to see him this way, she loved him too much.

I kept my mouth shut for too long
All this time you got me wrong
Now we're in this way too far
I'm about to break your heart
Tear everything we had apart


“You should go back inside, you’ll get sick,” she had heard him whisper to her as she came closer to him.

“Well, I guess we’ll just get sick together,” she said as she smiled at him, pushing his hair out of his face.

“I’m sorry,” Victoria said as they stood there for a little while, “If it wasn’t for me you wouldn’t be distracted and you guys would have won the cup.”

'Cause I'm feeling lost
When I'm in your arms
The reasons are gone
For why I was holding on to you
I tried so hard
To be the one
I don't like who I've become



She looked down brown hair dripping water, as he didn’t answer immediately. She didn’t mean to cause him so much pain and drama. All she wanted was to love him and from him to love her back. But, because of her he had lost the Quidditch Cup, he almost lost his best friend, and worst of all because of her, his life was now over.

Won't keep my mouth shut anymore
I've had my share of closing doors
Now I know I'm not afraid
I know exactly what you'll say
But I'm sorry it's too late


“I should have told you after,” she said as she tried to hug him, tears falling down as he moved away. “I didn’t know it would affect you like this.”

She jumped slightly as he turned on her, gray eyes suddenly angry.

“How could you expect that not to affect me!?” He yelled as she started to back up.

“Sirius, you should calm down,” Victoria suggested as a bit of fear was showing in her eyes.

'Cause I'm feeling lost
When I'm in your arms
The reasons are gone
For why I was holding on to you
I tried so hard
To be the one
I don't like who I've become



“You’ve brought me nothing but trouble,” he said, ignoring her. “I can’t believe I listened to your lies. James told me I was wrong about you, even Bellatrix warned me.”

Victoria narrowed her eyes as she heard that name. “Sirius, I didn’t do this on purpose. It's not only my fault.”

“Of course it isn’t,” he said as he sneered at her, throwing his quaffle to the ground. “I don’t want to see you anymore.”

Yeah yeah, yeah yeah
I kept inside of me for all this time
Yeah yeah, yeah yeah
Thought that I could make it work if I just tried
Yeah yeah, yeah yeah
But I'm sorry to admit that I have lived a lie


Victoria shook her head, the rain flying around as her hair moved in every direction.

“Sirius, I love you!” She yelled at him as he walked away from her. He stopped in his tracks and turned his head to face her.

“Maybe everyone was right, we just weren’t meant to be,” he said as he continued back to the castle, not turning around as Victoria called his name again before she sunk to the ground.

'Cause I'm feeling lost
When I'm in your arms
The reasons are gone
For why I was holding on to you
I tried so hard
To be the one
I don't like who I've become

I kept my mouth shut for too long
Now I know that it was wrong


Victoria let out a sound of frustration as she pulled something from her neck.

“I hate you,” She vowed as she glared at it. “I hate all of you for doing this to me.” She threw it down as she sneered at the castle walking back vengeance in her bright blue eyes.

I wish I told you from the start
That this was never meant to last
We should've never gone this far


Both walked away, love lost with only two things left at the scene. Tears and a tie. Silver and Emerald. From the house of Slytherin.

Won't keep my mouth shut anymore

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