Now this was ott.
Scarlett had written the letter in a formal style,a personal style,and every way the professor ORDERED her to.Would she never be rescued from the detentions?
she started scratching:
"The Members and Staff of Slytherin,
Hogwarts School for Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Respected Professors/my schoolmates,
I am aware of the inconvenience I have made by walking into the Astronomy tower that is temporarily inhabited by the students of Slytherin.I am extermely sorry for what I have done.The reasons for walking into the room was extremely personal,which I am sure would not be a good reason enough to people who haven't experienced it.I apologise for my actions and regret that I ever walked into an area which was previously accessible to us!
I have possibly disrupted the privacy of the students of slytherin.
WITH MY HUMBLEST APOLOGIES,
-Scarlett Nicole Taylor,
third year Ravenclaw."

Forrester read over the note, "NO!" He yelled, "NO ONE cares about your petty little reasons, or your need for attention. This Letter is NOT about YOU. It is about the INCONVENIENCE YOU PLACED on the members of Slytherin House. THAT is what you are apologizing for. You are NOT to attempt to make anyone feel sorry or pity you. Try it again, or are you unable to do a proper apology?"

She started over again:
"The Students of Slytherin,
Hogwarts School for Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Friends,
I am extremely sorry for the inconvinience I have created by walking into the Slytherin Girls side of the Astronomy tower.
I apologise for having done so.I am so sorry that I disrupted your privacy.it was extremely foolish of me.I should never ever have done what I have done,but I would be very gr8ful if you would forgive me.I am really sorry for the inconvinience I have created and that I have interfered with your priacy.
I ask you all to forgive me for what I have done.
--Scarlett Nicole Taylor,
third year Ravenclaw."

Forrester read it over....and sighed, "I do not know what "priacy" is, and "grateful" is spelled with letters, not numbers. Once more, and fix "inconvenience" as well. After that, we'll see where you end up."

Ok professor!
"The Students of Slytherin,
Hogwarts School for Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Friends,
I am extremely sorry for the inconvinience I have created by walking into the Slytherin Girls side of the Astronomy tower.
I apologise for having done so.I am so sorry that I disrupted your privacy.it was extremely foolish of me.I should never ever have done what I have done,but I would be very grateful if you would forgive me.I am really sorry for the inconvenience I have created and that I have interfered with your privacy.
I ask you all to forgive me for what I have done.
--Scarlett Nicole Taylor,
third year Ravenclaw."
Scarlett told "Sorry professor,those were some unseen mistakes.".She handed the parchment to prof,just hoping that he would be satisfied this time.

Forrester read over the note and nodded. "About time. You may leave" he told her as he stood up and also left the room.

ooc: as with Victoria, be patient, you will be released, but it could take a while.

"Oh,thank you professor!",Scarlett was relieved!