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Packaged Sweets A dazzling showcase of fully wrapped-up stories, these sweet treats are polished and ready for your reading pleasure!

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Old 12-21-2003, 07:21 AM   #1 (permalink)
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alrighty 'k this is a place were you can read my poetry it's a bit wierd at time but nothing to dramatic

It's called Different


Look at it they will say.
What a horrible thing!
Is it a human or a freak?
Does it even know how to speak?

Hurtful words will they say,
Calling him names what a shame.
Reluctant to give him aid.
Refuse to say his name.

Knowing he is different.
Confident he was not worth it.
Yet something keeps him thriving;
Like there is a purpose for his strafing.

Look in the mirror.
See past your reflection.
The outward may not show the beauty;
For the reluctant cannot see within.

We must all learn to see the different
And realize it is not a terrible thing.
Would you really want to be all alike?
For without variety this world would be plain.
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Old 12-21-2003, 07:37 AM   #2 (permalink)
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That's beautiful. The message is really pristine, and it gives it a lot of meaning. Keep up the great work!
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Old 12-22-2003, 12:08 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanxs

Has the door closed


Far away from each other
Cruel words are held within
The circle with which we have confined
Our numbers never increase or decline

Are our minds closed to expandition
Has each door closed its mind?
No longer our we open to changes
Struggling for just one glimpse of light

Never thinking the door has closed this far
From the life we use to live and love
The joy that was there
Is never too far beyond us


Not lightly to be taken
Corrupted at the source
Hard to be unbroken
Not easy to be unspoken


Think about friendships
They must last; they must stick
If not they will fall
To their sweet bitter end
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Old 12-25-2003, 12:05 AM   #4 (permalink)
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here's another one

Down Hill

Did you ever feel like something was so right?
Yet the pain still burns within your side.
Within your heart there is a knife
That is twisted deep within your mind.

Strongly hurt, but also moved
For the persistence of him never failed
To amaze me of his wonderful worth
Yet in time his presence will surely disperse

Your days once glamorous as can be
Now despair and gloom fill the air
I’m no less better than before
Even though there is still something to hope for.

I could see the hope within my heart
Yet I feel so far apart
My heart will heal one day I hope
But still my faith is not dwindled.



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Old 12-25-2003, 12:07 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Hey if you like this could you tell me I mean there is no point of putting it up if you guys don't like it.


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Old 01-11-2004, 07:09 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Ok please really just respond if you like them jsut say hi or something nothing big PLEASE


The Lost Heart


I feel o’ so lonely
So tried and depressed
Stress out and disappointed
Can’t I take a rest?


Once I was happy of the joy
Of what tomorrow might bring.
Now frustration fills the air
And cloudeth everything.

Happiness now confusion then,
Sudden changes of endless momentile phases.
I’m never really happy though a brilliant smile shines.
Spellbound under a mask of endless faces
That to them seems a joyful face that never changes.

Laughter fills the air even though
My heart is filled with sadness,
Wishing the nightmare would end
And wake up to find real joy and gladness
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I really like your poems a lot! they're really deep and I like that...
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Thanxs that means alot to me

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these poems are so deep and you really get into writing them. I say Bravo.Please dont stop.
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Old 01-28-2004, 03:32 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Thanxs your great I don't feel wierd now.
Its smaller but it means alot
Just Believe


Trying to work a problem out
Learning to see what’s about
Growing in knowledge from searching the truth
Follow your heart and always be you.


Never change what you might be
Embrace your true identity; live and be free
Dreams are like stories let them unfold
Don’t stand in your wishes for they will grow old.



Success will come easy if you only believe
Work hard and one day it will truly succeed
Never give up it’s worth a good fight
Always remember your future is bright.


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Old 01-28-2004, 07:01 PM   #11 (permalink)
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You have such a wonderful rainbow of emotions in your work. Its nice to see an assortment of different feelings, instead of just sadness, or anger, or angst, whatever, you have a nice variety, keep up the great work!
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Hey thank you so much I have been a little busy. Thanxs again for your support you get flowers :flowersmile: :flowersmile:


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Wow it as been like all sumer ok well here is one that well is not the brightess it really doesn't have a name but here you go



Things can't get worse
When Life isn't anything but words
People don't give a crap
What your lives worth
When your drownig in a puddle of tears
And your just an ant
In this little place called earth
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I LOOOOOOVE your poems!!!!!!!!!!

I think they are much better than mine!!!

I especially like 'Just Believe'
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oh my goodness you guys are so great I am going to try and put up a new one this week. Sorry its been crazy I have finals this week.

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