need more!!!!!!!! continue continue continue!!!!!!!! please???????? i added more to mine....... so now u have to add more!!!!! please? i need it!!!!!!

cant...go...on...must...have...more!

Fun

There's lots of fun in life if you know how and where to have it.
There's also a lot of pleasures in life,
If you screw up and make the wrong choice forget it.

In my life there was never enough joy and happiness to have fun,
There was so much on my mind it felt like a ton.
I had always felt that I was a slave trapped in the sun,
All I wanted in my life was to have fun.

Hee hee you're too funny Alyonna! I'll try to keep'm coming. Thanks alot again for your continued support! :flowersmile:

oooooh im liking it! it seems a little incomplete if you know what i mean, but its very very very good!

I'll keep that in mind...thanks.

Alone

When I'm alone,
My heart is as still as a stone.

Then I hear the ringing of the phone,
I pick up and hear a tone.
That's the feeling of being alone.

Being alone,
Sitting there like a stone,
Doing absolutely nothing,
Being useless,
Don't mean anything to a soul,
That's the feeling, the feeling of being alone.

ooooh thats a good one, you really hit it! definitely got that feeling out exactly!

Hey everyone! Sorry that i haven't been online lately, major major life crisis....I'll try to keep up with posting poems, but life is throwing me for a loop right now, please try to understand. I will probably write a poem about my experience when this passes. Love to you all, keep checkin up on here to see the latest. :sorcerer:

I will always be there

There is nothing to fear
when the dark side is near
when all hope is lost don't fear
for i will always be near
to guide you
to love you
to hold and comfort you
so when your time is up
wait for me on the other side of the light
:rolleyes:

please don't post your poetry in my poetry thread. Others are aloud to comment about my poetry in here, but not post their own. Thank you.

Darness Will Fall

The light above is dimming away,
The dark you see, is here to stay.

The world in all its sins will die,
When look up, to the dark in our torturous state, time will not fly.

In this end we'll be clinging to the dimming light,
Thinking why God has left us in this terrible flight.

In the end we believe in God, it's so sad,
We waited now until the darkness overcame, he is mad.

For now, he'll let the darkness take us,
If we were willing to believe in him before, he said he would forsake us.

Do not sit there and presume he will save you from the fires of hell,
If you do not pray and in his way rebel.

Trust in the belief that this darkness will fall,
Trust in the fact that this torturous death will come to us all.

Nice Potter many of these poems would surely be published. And as a poet myself I just wanted to say that you have done a vey good job on these. You address problems that most can relate to. Your poems are mostly deep not as lightly writen which shows that much thought went into them. :flowersmile: :flowersmile: with much gladness I give you these flowers.

Rally

lovin it lovin it lovin it! nice job you gotta keep em going! LOL keep it up!

Thank you very much! It's nice to hear the people enjoy reading my poems! And yes, I do put alot of thought into them, the only time I right a new poem is when something happens to me (mentally or physically). So thanks again. :flowersmile: :wub:

Holy cracker, it's been so long since I've been on here that I've almost forgotten how to use all the buttons and such. hee hee :rolleyes:

Oh well, here's a quicky for ya:

Hope is great,
Hope is dear,
Anyone can hope,
Anyone can fear,
As long as you hope,
There will be no fear. :sorcerer:

Hope you like it....just read the latest HP book and OMG...this poem is so dedicated to it. I will continue on writing so keep checkin up on me. :wub: :flowersmile:

The Art of Divination

The art of Divination,
Give those with the gift inclination.

To see the happenings of the world within,
To know what the future holds herein.

The problems of the strange,
Alphabetically they can arrange.

The business of others becomes their's,
Passersby give them weird stares.

To have the light,
To have the gift,
In them their spirit will lift.

Their oras reach upto the sky,
That is, if they have the eye.

ooooh i like it! ive updated my poetry too, so now you have a REASON to view my stuff. lol. i really like that hope one, you really hit it right over the head. nice job! :hack: <----- you and me if i dont see more soon lol! :oreo: :oreo: :oreo: :oreo: :oreo: :oreo: :oreo: <---- have some cookies first though! lol lovin it all!

Well thanks Alyonna, I always try to write about stuff that's real. In fact, most of the time, my writing comes from stuff thats happened in my own life or experiences, that's also why they feel so true. I'll write another poem soon I promise.

Have some flowers: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile:

:sorcerer:

Its good that you write stuff from your own expreiences. some of my poetry just comes to me and it doesnt make sense, but a few weeks later, somethign happens that makes me think oh wow that poem was abotu this. it makes me feel wierd cos then i think i can tell teh future. you know what i mean? well keep up teh good work (and thanx fro teh flowers)