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| | Packaged Sweets A dazzling showcase of fully wrapped-up stories, these sweet treats are polished and ready for your reading pleasure! | 
12-22-2003, 12:12 AM
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Here's one, I'll post more when I get some replies. Shadows
In my world
I
Am trapped inside
My own mind
Let me out,
Please
I cannot stay like
This forever
Down I shall
Plummet
Into
The depths
Of despair
Spiralling downward
Out of control
That is me,
Myself
But who
Am I?
I know
Nothing
Yet
I know everything
I need to run,to
Escape
But I
Cannot
I am a
Prisoner of my
Own mind. |
12-22-2003, 12:14 AM
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| | Banned Chizpurfle
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: in the twilight zone doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Posts: 10,259
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hey Amber! luv the poems read min please
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12-22-2003, 12:19 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: B.C., Canada
Posts: 2,477
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I will, Lyssa. Here's two more White rose
Grace,
Beauty
Completely and utterly
Pure
It is
Stunning,yet
Nieve
Still,
The rose shall
Change.
^Lyssa adores that one Release me
From my
Prison cell...
Me
It's so confusing...
How do I
Escape
When I
Am the one
Trapping myself
In? |
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12-22-2003, 12:23 AM
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| *lurks* Puffskein
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: UK (In an Embassy for Lovely)
Posts: 1,290
| These are great poems! |
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12-22-2003, 12:39 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: B.C., Canada
Posts: 2,477
| Take away
The hurt
Take away
The pain
Leave me here
To become insane. |
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12-30-2003, 01:27 PM
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| | Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: garden state
Posts: 4,892
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You have a lot of talent please write some more! :flowersmile:
__________________ every me & every you |
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12-31-2003, 11:29 PM
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| | Fire Slug
Join Date: Jul 2003
Posts: 163
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Can't believe I haven't read these before now, they're excellent! I like your style, never had much talent with it myself, but it makes for some some really moving stuff. Good job! :flowersmile:
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01-01-2004, 05:29 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: B.C., Canada
Posts: 2,477
| I shall die
Upon a paintbrush
My throat red
Red like blood
Red with paint
I shall tumble
Onto the ground
Fallen from my paintbrush.
That doesn't make sense, but I still like it. :ermsmile:
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01-10-2004, 07:27 AM
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| | Banned Chizpurfle
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: in the twilight zone doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Posts: 10,259
| Quote: Originally posted by ~Parvati Patil~@Dec 21 2003, 05:59 PM I will, Lyssa. Here's two more White rose
Grace,
Beauty
Completely and utterly
Pure
It is
Stunning,yet
Nieve
Still,
The rose shall
Change.
^Lyssa adores that one Release me
From my
Prison cell...
Me
It's so confusing...
How do I
Escape
When I
Am the one
Trapping myself
In? Hey I like it! And I'm gonna read it to my creative writing club lol
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01-10-2004, 07:33 AM
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| | Snidget
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: California
Posts: 2,766
Hogwarts RPG Name: William Ashlan McCollam Graduated |
These are really good.I have some really good ones.If you want to hear them just reply to this or pm me and if its ok post them here.
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01-10-2004, 10:00 AM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In my head way too much!
Posts: 381
| i love the last one. the rest of them are really nice, too. keep up the good work! :flowersmile:
__________________ My fanart Love, torn at the seams... |
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01-11-2004, 10:34 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: B.C., Canada
Posts: 2,477
| Breathe
Live again
Be reborn
From the ashes
And... I know your face
But I don't know your name
Why do you think you know me?
You only know my face
And... A cold wind
Blows across my heart
I
Am shattered into a million
Bits of glass..
Glass roses. |
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01-13-2004, 02:34 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: B.C., Canada
Posts: 2,477
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o.O I remember
What happened
Even
Though I don't want to
The way
You were so cruel
Shall stick
Into my mind forever
All this poetry is an expression of what's going on in my head...
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01-14-2004, 03:36 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: B.C., Canada
Posts: 2,477
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o.O what is going on in my head? Rush
Up to the mountain
Plunge
Into the sea
Race
Along the fields
And sleep
On a bed of roses
Rush to yourself
A rush of you
Rush. |
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01-14-2004, 05:56 AM
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| | Ramora
Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Sydney, Australia
Posts: 5,033
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These are really good! Keep going!
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01-15-2004, 05:59 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: B.C., Canada
Posts: 2,477
| You touch me
But I don't feel
You hurt me
But I don't cry.
I've gone numb,
Numb to the pain
I've gone numb,
Numb to the hurt.
You scream
But I don't hear
You hit
But I don't hurt...
I've
Gone
Numb. |
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01-16-2004, 04:50 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: B.C., Canada
Posts: 2,477
| Scream
Until your throat
Bleeds.
Run
Until your ankles
Break.
Laugh
Until your cheeks get
Sore.
Live
Before the time
Ends. |
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