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Old 01-04-2010, 05:35 AM
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Hi ! I'm Kerri this is one of my first fan fics so I hope you enjoy it and please post !! All these characters belong to the one and only J.K.Rowling and the HP universe . I'm just borrowing them


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They were all in the same compartment on the train Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny. They were headed for their seventh and final year of Hogwarts. Even though they were all very close there was an unsteady silence. The last time they were all on this train was at the end of the sixth year it was a completely different story, Ron and Hermione were together . Harry was still with Ginny, but Ron and Hermione broke-up due to a giant argument caused by Lavender Brown.
Two months earlier
After being dumped for Hermione, Lavender Brown had an idea. At the last meal in of the year in Hogwarts Lavender went to Cho Chang with a plan.
"Okay so we don't talk that often."
"Lavender, we don't talk at all. What do you want?" Cho had a confused expression. Why was Lavender Brown talking to her?
"Listen, every one knows what I want." Cho still had a confused expression "or should I say who I want. " Lavender raise one of the eyebrows as a grin slowly began to spread across Cho's face. Lavender leaned closer,"And I know how I can get him back but i need your help . Meet me in the library when your done."Lavender walked out of the great hall, smiling to herself.
In the library the girls put their plan into action. they sent an owl to Hermione saying :
I saw your boyfriend snogging his ex in the passage to Gryffindor Tower last night before dinner.

One sentence did it all. The owl arrived after Hermione arrived home. Hermione immediately picked up the phone and called Ron (she had recently taught Ron how to use a phone) and after having a huge argument they decide they would just be friends. The tension rolled off Ron and Hermione every time they were in the same room as each other but both wanted to be close to each other because neither one was over the other but they would never admit it.
So as they sat in the train headed to Hogwarts the compartment was in silence with Ginny and Harry huddled close together occasionally whispering to each other and Ron and Hermione sitting as far from each other as possible.
When they finished eating at the welcome feast and Professor Dumbledore had said his speech they were about to leave when he strolled up to them.
"Mr Weasley and Miss Granger , can I have a word with both of you?" They both followed him out of the Great hall and up the stairs to a door niether of them had ever paid attention to before."This " Dumbledore pointed to the door " is your new accommodation. Congratulations! your are now head boy and girl well done!"
"Thank you, sir. " Hermione replied as Ron just stood there looking bewildered. " The password is 'Flipper' your names are on your doors and you are only allowed company until 10:30 pm. Good night."
They entered there new common room and closed the door.The just stood there in silence until Ron broke the ice.
"Wow. so this is uncomfortable." he said with a slight smile on his face. Hermione laughed.
"I've missed that ." Ron sighed.
"Missed what ?" Hermione asked confused.
"Your laugh." Hermione felt the blood rush to her cheeks. They just stood there looking at each other. Hermione was using all the power she had not to run over and kiss Ron. She missed being with him so much. She could feel the tears starting to gather in her eyes. She ripped her eyes away from his and walked over to the door with her name on in and went inside. Ron watched her as she walked away. He didn't like the look she had on her face. So he followed her. He stopped when he reached her door. He was about to knock when heard a sob coming from inside.


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Part 3 (Ron and Cho)

Ron and Cho sat in the Three Broomsticks talking about Cho. She had to repher last year of hogwarts because she had failed Potions and wanted to become a Healer.
"I'm so glad I came back though because if i didn't we wouldn't be together." at that point Hermione and Draco walked in and sat within their view.
"We can leave if you want." Cho said.
"why would I want to leave?"
"Isn't it a little wierd?"
"Nah. Why do you want to leave?" he asked raising her eyebrow. Harry had always told him Cho was jelous of Hermione. Why would she be jelous now?
"No, It's fine." At that moment Cho heard her name being shouted rather rudely. She turned to see a red faced Hermione quickly stand up, grab Dracoand run out the door and up the main street. Everyone went back to the business.
"Well ... That was odd."Ron said after a minute.
"Can we leave please?" Cho said as she stood up.
"I thought you din't want to leave. Oh come on its fine. Anyway if you leave you have more chance of bumping into Hermione and I'm sure you don't want that." He said with a smirk because she knew he was right.The pair started to talk about school again and how Cho would have to spend an unneaded year with Snape and how she was goin to ask Dumbledore i she could drop everything because she had already past them.
"COme on lets head back to the castle." Ron said and the both left.




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Chapter 6
Hayley Veldings, to her disgust was going to Hogwart. Why did she have to go back to school when she was in her seventh,and last year ?

She had lived in Scotland up until she was 11 and about to start school. Her mother didn't want her going to Hogwart with Dumbledore as the headmaster so they moved to France and she enrolled in Beuxbatons. She had been a student there up until two weeks ago when she got expelled for shaving someones head while they were sleeping, then hexing the teacher who tried to give her detention. Hayley had issues with controling her anger.

She had a frown on her face as she walked up the pathway to the castle. Her pale complection was due to her long black hair. Her mother had always nagged her about this because Hayley was a metamorphmagus meaning she could change her appearence at will and her mother had always hated her black hair. Hayley on the other thought it went with her personality and what she had been set to do. For she had been set a mission by


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