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jk fan's poems! - Sa9+ Hello and welcome to my poems. At first I never wrote HP poems but since I was introduced to The Sphinx's Sofa I started writing HP poems. Here is one of them (Harry's Pov): The wind is light and gentle as i breathe the fresh air in, I look at all the children playing, like they have no fear in the world, I wish i was like them, But i have to many worries to behold, The Dark Lord has rised again, And he'll do anything to kill me, Just like he killed my parents, Who stood strong and fearless, I will have to face hime someday, And be the hero that I am, I'll take his life from him, Like he did to my family and freinds, I'll say "Avada Kedavra", Then he'll fall and be no more, And from that day on, I'll be the greatest wizard ever known! I hope you like it :) |
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What do you mean no replies? o_0. I see a reply right here. :P Your poetry is very good Hibbah. I like it. I like Harry's thinking too. :upside: Maxie |
:lol: yaay. hiiii. thanks im glad you like them. ill post another one on Saturday. :D |
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um ggeeee....sure a godd one:) |
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i promis ill post one tommorow |
Hibbah, you're writing poems? That's awesome! :D It's a really good poem. I really loved it, but I suggest you add some more rhyme to it, and I can help you with that if you need. Just PM me if you do! Can't wait for you next poem. *glomps* ♥♥♥ |
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heres another poem. this is the first HP poem i have ever written: tell me what you think |
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It's a very nice poem, Hibbah! Update more when you can. ♥ |
Hibbah!!!! I like them all!!! its great that you're writing now :glomp: ill be checking here! :shifty: :loved: |
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it turns out i forgot two line in the poem so i have to edit it. |
Lovely new poem Hibbah. I love it. It's really great. *loves* Post again soon. :upside: And Snape is a ghoul. LOL. :lol: Maxie |
:lol: yeah he is. ill post on Thursday, my last day of school. and ill probably right a poem about how Harry feels when the Hogwarts term is over |
I'll be waiting. :upside: Meanwhile I have to go update my fic: Faraway Stars. See you when you have another poem up love. *huggles* Maxie |
I'm really bored so i decided to post another poem(H/G): i hope you like it :) |
Yay. A H/G poem! I love that ship. :D Amazingly written. Shows what she's really thinking of! Can't wait for your next poem. ♥ |
:glomp: thanks. im so glad you liked it. im glad someone posted :P |
ooooooooo Hibbah I love them they're very very good!!!!!!! I can't wait until u post another one!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I especially like the H/g poem!! But they are all excellent!!!!!!! |
:glomp: hi Cheyenne. im glad you like them ill post another one tommorow. it'll be R/HR poem |
It's a great way to hide my feelings, I don't listen to my heart, I'm afraid it'll be broken, Although i try to deny it, I love you dearly, The Dark Lord has rised, And I'm afraid you'll be taken, So for now I'll hold on to you, And cherish the good times we've had, I hope you feel the same, 'cause if ou don't I'll be heart broken *frowns* i didn't like this one too much. it should have rhymed more. tell me what you think. |
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Beautiful, Hibbah. Just beautiful. :D Yes, I like the rhyming! I hope you have some more ships coming. ♥♥♥ |
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