Awesome! NEW READER! Hehe, love your poems!

CHILLS!!! very nice!

im glad u liked it
heres anew poem
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everyone says they understand
how can they possibly know what i feel
why would they feel utterly alone
they did'nt see voldemort
with his snakelike face
and red eyes and a voice that seemed to make you just feel paralyzed
they dint see death take cedrics life
no they'll never understand anything
especially voldemort and they way he can just whisper to death and command it as if it was frightened of him
no they will never ever understand
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hoped you liked it

very good... keep it up

awesome heres a new poem
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i never thought i'd feel this much fear
this much sadness
and this much loss of hope.
i've never thought of how i would i feel if i were to die
but standing in front of the death puppetier himself
makes me wish that i had thought about death
then maybe it wouldnt be as frightening
i watch voldemort raise his wand and wait for death to snatch my life away
i wait for something that is painless create the most pain in others
i wait fir a green flash and for peace in my life.
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tell mme what you think

I like it, it's a little dark, but that's ok.

was it dark? oops sorry anyway hres a poem im writing it out of the top of my head soo
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I feel chills as i walk in
and watch transparent figure float among me
its the begininning of October
the perfect time for a deathday party
as dark and eerie the entire thing was
with its ghost dancing
and terrible music
the mood of the party was cheerful
Nearly Headless Nick was and talking to everyone
greeting them with a smile
"Its amazing how someone can always see the brighter side of death even when its not there",
I think as the ghost float up above me.
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hope u liked it this poem was inspired by nick's deathparty in cos (im rereading it)and i wanted to post a new poem so this is what to mind

It's adorable LOL

Excellent. I love reading poems about "other" things that happened than the main story. I try to write the same way, it's interesting and refreshing!
Keep it up!

hahaha really glad you liked it it was one of my fav parts in the book
heres another
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She moaned and complained
and i watched her
it really was'nt a mystery why she was called Moaning Myrtle
She floated abve me and was gliding in the air
with such grace and poise
but she opened her ghostly mouth and it was nothing but noise
with one last complaint and whine she gracefully fell in to the toilet
with a soft plop.
and at this point i wasn't sure whether to be frightened by her being a ghost
or to laugh because she lives in a toilet.
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i felt like writing about myrtle so there you go
and heres another poem that talks about sirius talking to harry through the flames
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i hear the wood pop and crack
and watch sirius' head float in the flames
i ask and ask questions
and he continued to speak
then with a final pop he vanished
leaving nothing behind him nothing but ashes and small surviving flame
he said so much but answered so little
it was as though the weight on my shoulders just got heavier
and my spine was about to crack.
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hope u likes it tell me wat u think please

Hee hee! I love Myrtle.

That was awesome about Myrtle!!!! it is pretty funny that she lives in a toilet

Love you
Jenna

glad u liked them ima wrking on another one so bear with me alittle

Ah! I've missed so much! I lurve them! The one about Mrytle is hilarius. I would laugh because she lives in a toilet Keep on writing!

hahahhheres anew poem
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my breath was slow
my heart was pounding so hard i heard it in my ears
i heard the baskilisic slither closer
and closer
i pressed my back harder against the cold metal behind me
i saw the grand snake come up in front of me
its edgy skin and red bloody eyes
i was too afraid to breath
the vicious snake put his face inches away from mine
it began to stick its large tongue out about to touch my sweaty cheek
i grabbed a slippery rock beside me and tossed it away
and watch the monster follow the echo

I liked that a lot!

hahaha yaa heres anew 1
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we pulled up towrd the burrow
i looked at the house with facination
there ghouls and chicken everywhere
the house was topsy turvy
it lookedlike it was about to tip over
it was so imperfect
but thats what made it wonderful
i felt joy all over my body
and i felt a special warmth in my stomach
and i for once i felt welcomed
for once in my life i actually felt at home

Very nice. You know, I realize I make spelling errors a lot, but take a look at your stuff, it's too good for you to let a mispelling in there.

oh yea sorry about that i'll try not to do that anymore

It is really good!

sorry i havent posted in a long time but myinternet was cut soo... but i got it back so here are is a new poem
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I'm drowning
i can feel the water filling in my throat
but i cannot feel pain
i look around me searching for any kind if help
but all i see is the murky water
i knew that if i entered the triwizard tournment there was a slight chance i might die
i just never thought it would actually happen
my eyes began to flutter
and i can hear my heart beat slowing down
And i feel a tugging on my arm
i slowly turn my head and see harry pulling me to the surface
i try and smile but i havent got the strength to do so
we reach the surface and i begin to swallow the air around me

Ooo a triwizard poem! AWESOME!!!

glad you liked here's a new one it's not as dark as my other ones i just reread them right now and they are kind of dark but anyway here it is enjoy
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I'm twirling
Laughing
Dancing
I smile at my dance partner as we begin to slow our steps
I'm breathless and we decide to stop and rest for a moment
But only for a moment
i rush to a sit down while Viktor gets us drinks
I look down at my liliac dress
And think about the past few moments we had together
i giggle at the thought
i look up to see his handsome face
he holds out his hand
i greedly grab it as we rush back to the dance floor
i never want this ball to end
i never to lose this feeling of happiness