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Bathazar Wulf 01-23-2004 04:45 AM

Bathazar's Poetry Corner
 
Welcome to my little section of the SS poetry world. Sit down, have a cup of coffee, and listen to the words as they waft their way through the room. Groovy, daddio.

In my humble (and perhaps misguided) opinion, poetry is emotion in writing. So-- I do hope that you don't judge me too harshly for some of my erm... 'worse poems'.

That said-- enjoy!

- Bathazar Wulf

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Sweet*Strawberry 01-23-2004 04:50 AM

Yay! Poems :) Can't wait to read them!

Bathazar Wulf 01-23-2004 04:55 AM

Okay, I'll start off with a poem I wrote several years ago. It's actually a song that I wrote, but I'm afraid I can't sing it to you through the computer.

Nautica's Maids

Nautica's maids are fair and sleek;
The sea they call their home.
Amid the fish and coral's peak,
Amid the waves and foam.

Their hair is curled, their faces bright,
They swim with shining fins.
They shimmer with amazing light
And so the tale begins.

They dance about in wat'ry pools
And sing enchanting songs.
They swim along with fishes' schools;
That's where the maids belong.

The golden locks upon their heads,
Their eyes so silv'ry bright
Can charm a man to water's beds
To follow their sweet light.

Don't follow maids to beautiful.
Be warned, sea-fairing men,
Though the maids appear so wonderful,
The sea will be your end.

latinspaceangel 01-23-2004 04:58 AM

wow! nice poem! very good rhyme scheme and cool subject. Kudos!!

Bathazar Wulf 01-23-2004 04:58 AM

This one is a bit sad. I think I was depressed when I wrote it. It is also a song. No laughing! :)

Mystic Wind

Your love is like the moon, pale within my head.
Your eyes are dim, like a spark soon to be dead.

Your touch is like the earth, crumbling to sand.
Your voice is soft in my ear like a mystic wind.

But, I will remember you, you will not leave my mind.
I'll capture you in my head and carry you through time.

Sweet*Strawberry 01-23-2004 05:43 AM

Wow!! Great job!! Omgsh, they're so good! Hehe. Keep going!

Bathazar Wulf 01-24-2004 02:14 AM

Here's a "poem" that I wrote in frustration over some dumb people that just wouldn't be quiet! Yeah, this one is one of those goofy ones. Forgive it. Hehe.

Silence, Knave!

Silence, Knave!
Speak not; your words are far too bold.
I shall slap thee hotly if you are not silent!
And it is most triumphantly said.


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