sitemap
Visit The Official WB Shop!

Latest Site News

Latest Harry Potter News

Preparation for Soccer Aid - Click to view in gallery.Browse Search View

Latest FanFics

Latest Forum Posts

Latest Games

Hogwarts RPG

Members

Members in Chat:
BertieBot, Gildebot_LockHart

If this is your first visit, be sure to check out the FAQ by clicking the link above. You may have to register before you can post: click the register link above to proceed. To start viewing messages, select the forum that you want to visit from the selection below.

  Register Rules and FAQ Search
Go Back   SnitchSeeker.com > Forums > Diagon Alley > Gringotts Wizarding Bank (FanWorks) > Script Crypt (Poetry Vault) > Ye Olde Home for the Olde Poem
Reload this Page One Moment
Ye Olde Home for the Olde Poem Finished poetry threads come here to rest and be remembered.

Vote for SS!

 
 
Thread Tools
Old 08-21-2003, 11:11 PM   #1 (permalink)
Gryffindor
 
Join Date: Apr 2003
Posts: 148
Default
Water washes to the shore,
the "I love you's" in the sand wash away,
everything in life dissapears.
I think it was all too much to pay--
For a moment, just a moment with you
Taking step by step and day by day,
loving only one and giving it all away.
But when I stop to think, I'd go through it all over again--
For a moment, just a moment with you

Please tell me what you think!!
ildar is offline  
Old 08-21-2003, 11:29 PM   #2 (permalink)
Members
Ramora
 
noseinabook's Avatar
 
Location: Muggle world :(
Join Date: Mar 2003
Posts: 393
Default
Nice! :up: I like the idea of a lost love shown with the "I love you" washed away in the sand.
noseinabook is offline  
Old 08-22-2003, 12:59 AM   #3 (permalink)
BonnieWright603
 
Posts: n/a
Default
I like it!
 
Old 08-22-2003, 09:39 PM   #4 (permalink)
Gryffindor
 
Join Date: Apr 2003
Posts: 148
Default
Thanks ya'll!
ildar is offline  
Old 07-30-2005, 12:58 PM   #5 (permalink)
Gryffindor
Carebear Stare!
Dugbog
 
LilFox06's Avatar
 
Location: HISH ~ the SS RP Revolution!
Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 187
Send a message via AIM to LilFox06 Send a message via MSN to LilFox06 Send a message via Yahoo to LilFox06
Default
i like it

lost love sux, you conveyed it nicely
LilFox06 is offline  
Old 08-21-2005, 12:05 PM   #6 (permalink)
Gryffindor
Bicorn
 
dagger's Avatar
 
Location: In the cinema where the priemere is held! lol
Join Date: Mar 2004
Posts: 1,810
Default
its nice.. good rhyming too..
dagger is offline  
 

« Jay'z Poems | ~What Do You THink?~ »

Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are Off


All times are GMT. The time now is 07:02 AM.
Contact Us - SnitchSeeker.com - Archive - Top

This Harry Potter fans website is not endorsed by Hogwarts, Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling, Warner Bros, Dan Radcliffe, Emma Watson, Rupert Grint, Quidditch, Wizards, Muggles, Video Games, X-Box, Half-Blood Princes, Orders of the Phoenix, Goblets of Fire, Philosophers Stones, Chambers of Secret, DVD's or any other official Harry Potter source.

All content is copyright ©2002 - 2006, SnitchSeeker.com unless stated otherwise.

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.6.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
LinkBacks Enabled by vBSEO 3.0.1 © 2007, Crawlability, Inc.
Site designed by Richard Harris Design

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 161 162 163 164 165 166 167 168 169 170 171 172 173 174 175 176 177 178